[General]No preview points set
[Normal]I think it suits the song much better to map the beat more constantly, especially during the first KIAI. Those huge and random breaks because you mainly follow the lyrics are not very fitting imo. You can add a lot more notes to this map as the score and "feeling" is more like an "Easy" right now. Should be OK as long as you won't go over 2m or 4 stars. Put in some more 1/2 notes and map more of what you hear + the constant beat.
00:04:995 / 00:06:066 / 00:07:138 - The volume change for the hitsounds sounds very weird here imo. Stick to ~40-50% for non KIAI and ~60% your KIAI/"Chorus" sections
00:07:674 (7,8,1) - unnecessary jump/anti-jump
00:11:424 (4) - this slider ending would be unsnapped if you change the beat snap divisor. Move the end-point much closer to the actual ending of the slider.
00:12:227 (5,1) - anti-jump
00:26:691 (1,2,3) - messy spacing, disable grid-snap to place this or use grid lvl 4
00:28:834 (1,2,3) - ^
00:33:388 (2) - makes no sense to silence the slider beginning and turning point here oO
01:11:691 (3,4,5) - not in line with previous notes
01:38:745 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - maybe use some sliders here to break up the boring 1/1 circles?
01:42:227 (X) - add a note here? (Maybe turn the three notes into a repeat-slider)
01:46:245 (2) - shorten by 1/2 and add 1x repeat
02:21:602 (1) - start en end on the big white ticks
Some examples of "more notes":
02:07:674 (X) - add note
02:08:209 (X) - ^
02:10:352 (X) - ^
02:15:174 (X) - ^
[Keilara's Razorblade]General things:
- 1/8 snapping is absolutely unnecessary for this song. Don't use it (slider endings that are 1/8 off are "wrong" anyway)
- Avoid confusing and sometimes impossible to read spacings. I think you just overdid the "MOAR SPACING!!!1" mods a bit
The song is only 112 BPM and thus 1/4 streams are possible to tap. Some players however prefer to use two keys even for relatively slow streams like in this song. The random spacing here makes this map actually harder than the "insane" version (and not much fun to play)
I suggest using 1,0x or 1,1x spacing for notefollows and add jump patterns only where they fit the song. Just make sure everything is still very readable.
01:11:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - It's ok to compress this stream but increasing the spacing randomly for (9,10) is just weird
01:11:959 (7) - delete this note as it doesn't fit very well imo, also adjust the compressed spacing to the whole combo as mentioned above:
http://puu.sh/2QkX01:27:093 (2) - 1/8 snapped slider ending doesn't fit in any way here
01:37:138 (5) - ^
01:39:013 (X) - add note
01:43:834 (X) - ^
02:06:334 (1,2) - switch (1) and (2), circle on red tick (where (1) started before), start slider on big white tick (end where (2) was before)
02:19:459 (2,3,4,5) - this is extremely annoying to play if the spacing is so random: the sliders are a lot slower than the "jumps" between them. Just stick to 1,0x spacing for slider-streams.
[i_k' Switchback]Hitsound volume is annoying! Reduce to 60% at least. Better 50%.
Very inconsistent spacing throughout the map. Seems you switched from 0,8x to 0,6x and back to 0,7x/0,8x by accident.
The grid-size you used would be ok for very symmetric patterns but as you use many curves and circle-patterns, you should disable grid-snapping and work with x/y coords, [Ctrl]-snapping and pay attention to your distance-spacings.
The later parts of this map are very decent but the ~first half needs a lot of work.
You didn't follow the rules in my modding queue but I like the song so here is your ~star