General
--Volume seems way too loud imo
--You should start kiai time on a note, not in between them.
--kiai times are different.
--I would highly recommend you map the same things as i_k's switchback. This mapset feels really weird when the diffs end the way they do. I would also advise you to use the same kiai times as i_k's, or at least do not use the weird kiai times used in normal and keilara's
i_k' Switchback
00:37:138 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - I don't know why you used such large spacing here out of the blue. It does not fit and does not make sense imo. Although I seemed to have read it correctly, it doesn't feel correct
00:17:049 (x) - add a note
00:21:602 (1) - start right on top of combo 2 from previous combo?
01:25:352 (1) - remove combo?
01:27:495 (1) - ^
01:28:566 (1) - ^
01:32:316 (1) - start right on top of combo 2 from previous combo?
02:06:602 (5) - new combo
02:06:870 (1) - remove combo
02:21:066 (5,6) - i would move this a little further away from each other
02:28:299 (2) - this note looks weird right under combo 1
02:32:718 (1) - end spinner here
There's nothing that isn't readable, but there's a lot of weird overlaps and spacing changes imo.
keilara's
I find the spacing too small.
00:34:459 (1) - this whole kiai section does really make sense imo. 1) this shouldn't even be a kiai section imo. it's not even epic D: 2)the increase in spacing doesn't make much sense to me either, cuz the intensity of the music actually decreases here, so I wouldn't even increase spacing.
[00:39:013 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - if you keep this spacing change i'm fine with it because the music does get more tense here and it's reaching some sort of climax]
00:48:388 (1) - remove combo
00:57:763 (1) - ^
01:02:049 (1) - ^
01:13:031 (x) - add note?
01:30:709 (1) - same as 00:34:459
Normal
--This difficulty is 3.9 stars. You need a difficulty wiht somehwere around 3 stars or less to be ranked. You either need to make this a lot easier or make another difficulty.
00:40:352 (2,1) - i would space out better.
00:41:424 (2) - Snap to the red tick. Why are you even using purple ticks?
00:54:281 (3,4) - spacing.
01:09:816 (1,1) - spinner is way too short, and the note comes way too soon as well.
01:13:031 (x) - add note?
01:23:477 (4,1) - spacing.
01:27:227 (3,4) - i do not like using these types of spacing in a normal difficulty.
01:33:924 (4) - move somewhere else. It may confuse beginner players imo.
01:37:941 (1) - spinner is too short
I did not comment on a lot of overlaps and spacings, but I would suggest you rethink some of the shapes and spacing. (i only commented on some in normal because I am really strict on spacing on easier diffs and I almost never deviate from the spacing unless the music provokes some sort of change)
Nice map! :3
but stilll does not feel as ready as it could be
--Volume seems way too loud imo
--You should start kiai time on a note, not in between them.
--kiai times are different.
--I would highly recommend you map the same things as i_k's switchback. This mapset feels really weird when the diffs end the way they do. I would also advise you to use the same kiai times as i_k's, or at least do not use the weird kiai times used in normal and keilara's
i_k' Switchback
00:37:138 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - I don't know why you used such large spacing here out of the blue. It does not fit and does not make sense imo. Although I seemed to have read it correctly, it doesn't feel correct
00:17:049 (x) - add a note
00:21:602 (1) - start right on top of combo 2 from previous combo?
01:25:352 (1) - remove combo?
01:27:495 (1) - ^
01:28:566 (1) - ^
01:32:316 (1) - start right on top of combo 2 from previous combo?
02:06:602 (5) - new combo
02:06:870 (1) - remove combo
02:21:066 (5,6) - i would move this a little further away from each other
02:28:299 (2) - this note looks weird right under combo 1
02:32:718 (1) - end spinner here
There's nothing that isn't readable, but there's a lot of weird overlaps and spacing changes imo.
keilara's
I find the spacing too small.
00:34:459 (1) - this whole kiai section does really make sense imo. 1) this shouldn't even be a kiai section imo. it's not even epic D: 2)the increase in spacing doesn't make much sense to me either, cuz the intensity of the music actually decreases here, so I wouldn't even increase spacing.
[00:39:013 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - if you keep this spacing change i'm fine with it because the music does get more tense here and it's reaching some sort of climax]
00:48:388 (1) - remove combo
00:57:763 (1) - ^
01:02:049 (1) - ^
01:13:031 (x) - add note?
01:30:709 (1) - same as 00:34:459
Normal
--This difficulty is 3.9 stars. You need a difficulty wiht somehwere around 3 stars or less to be ranked. You either need to make this a lot easier or make another difficulty.
00:40:352 (2,1) - i would space out better.
00:41:424 (2) - Snap to the red tick. Why are you even using purple ticks?
00:54:281 (3,4) - spacing.
01:09:816 (1,1) - spinner is way too short, and the note comes way too soon as well.
01:13:031 (x) - add note?
01:23:477 (4,1) - spacing.
01:27:227 (3,4) - i do not like using these types of spacing in a normal difficulty.
01:33:924 (4) - move somewhere else. It may confuse beginner players imo.
01:37:941 (1) - spinner is too short
I did not comment on a lot of overlaps and spacings, but I would suggest you rethink some of the shapes and spacing. (i only commented on some in normal because I am really strict on spacing on easier diffs and I almost never deviate from the spacing unless the music provokes some sort of change)
Nice map! :3
but stilll does not feel as ready as it could be