justnobody wrote:

the tag should be marked as:
correct: Ikari_kyon Keilara Dota
wrong: Ikari_kyon, Keilara, Dota

[SugarAddict' Mix]
who is SugarAddict? if he/she is the maker of this diff please add SugarAddict to the tags of all diffs.
why no hitsounds?
and why this circle size?
this remind me some oooooold maps.
those it is fine imo if it you are intentional...
00:34:995 (1,2,3,4) - spacing

[Keilara's Razorblade]
wow lv2 grid snap.
normally lv3 is used...
no wonder so many odd spacing issues....
use lv3 grid snap and kill the spacing please.
any spacing below are not related to grid snap.
00:25:888 (1,1) - no new combo. and spacing here.
00:32:049 (1,1,1) - new combo ONLY at the first note here
00:35:531 (3,4,1,2) - spacing
00:41:959 (1,1) - why new combo? don't say you want claps here...
00:46:513 (1,1) - ^
00:50:799 (1,1) - ^
00:52:674 (2,1) - spacing
01:11:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - remove (10) and make this stream straight imo.
01:38:209 (1) - no new combo

[i_k's Switchback]
the hitsound here is just a mess here.
would probably got a loooong hitsound mod if it's not me...

justnobody wrote:

[Keilara's Razorblade]
wow lv2 grid snap.
normally lv3 is used...
no wonder so many odd spacing issues....
use lv3 grid snap and kill the spacing please.
any spacing below are not related to grid snap.
00:25:888 (1,1) - no new combo. and spacing here.
00:32:049 (1,1,1) - new combo ONLY at the first note here
00:35:531 (3,4,1,2) - spacing
00:41:959 (1,1) - why new combo? don't say you want claps here...
00:46:513 (1,1) - ^
00:50:799 (1,1) - ^
00:52:674 (2,1) - spacing
01:11:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - remove (10) and make this stream straight imo.
01:38:209 (1) - no new combo

MoodyRPG wrote:

[Normal]

-Maybe Circle Size: -1?

[Keilara' Razorblade]

00:44:638 (1) - New combo
00:45:441 (3) - ^
01:00:174 (6) - ^
01:02:049 (1) - ^

[i_k' Switchback!]

Fine

Star~

1. Los nombres de las dificultades pueden ser confusos, pero se asume que el de Keilara es un Hard y el de Ikari_kyon es un Insane. Además... Keilara' Razorblade / i_k' Switchback!... Si mis clases de inglés no me fallan, para indicar posesión se debería escribir así: Keilara's Razorblade / i_k's Switchback!
2. Quita esa coma de los Tags (Ikari_kyon Keilara, Dota), las palabras sólo se separan con espacios.
3. Debes establecer un Preview Point para todas las dificultades (Timing > Set current position as a preview point).
4. Puede que el fondo sea algo NSFW, considera buscar otro.
5. Los kiai time son distintos en el mapset. Sugiero que uses el mismo que en el nivel de Ikari para todas las dificultades.
6. Intenta usar un Beat Snap Divisor de 1/4.
7. TODOS los hitsounds están altísimos. Baja el volumen al menos al 70%.
8. Añade hitsounds a las 2 primeras dificultades.

1. Si no vas a crear uno, borra el archivo .osb de la carpeta y haz Full Submit.

1. Tiene 4,03 estrellas. Para rankear el mapa esta dificultad tiene que tener menos de 3 estrellas (o reduces su nivel, o tienes que crear un Easy). Sugerencia: Reduce el Slider Velocity, 1,50 es demasiado alto (y además es el mismo que en el Hard).
2. Chequea el AIMod, hay 11 errores de espaciado. Recuerda que la distancia entre cada nota tiene que ser acorde con el tempo de la melodía.
3. 00:32:584 (1) - Quita el combo nuevo.
4. 00:32:852 (1) - ^
5. 00:40:352 (5) - Quita las repeticiones del slider.
6. 01:00:174 (1,2,3) - Intenta que no estén debajo del (6) anterior.
7. 01:11:691 (3) - Igual, intenta que el (1) no esté encima.

1. Aumenta el Slider Velocity.
2. Las secciones de Timing 1:06:535 y 1:06:781 no son necesarias.
3. Approach Rate y Circle Size -1.
4. 00:43:566 (1) - Quita el nuevo combo.
5. 00:44:638 (1) - ^
6. 01:10:620 (1) - ^

1. Circle Size y Overall Difficulty +1.
2. No es necesario silenciar tanto el último spin.

Scarlet Sisters wrote:

[i_k'Switchback!]
00:42:495　near？near?
01:34:459 I do not understand Too closer?
02:12:227　new combo? why?


nice map and good song!!
and star~☆ thanks n.n

Deif wrote:

Hola :3
i_k' Switchback!:

1. Circle Size y Overall Difficulty +1. :/
2. No es necesario silenciar tanto el último spin. me gustan los spins silenciosos :/ ademas ahi termina el mapp no?

Los mapas aún están un poco verdes... Te sugiero que juegues con las simetrías y que pulas un poco esos sliders. Aparte de la jugabilidad, se agradece un buen diseño =)

Creo que no está todavía para estrella, lo siento ;___; :(

ikari_kyon wrote:

Deif wrote:

Hola :3

1. No es necesario silenciar tanto el último spin. me gustan los spins silenciosos :/ ademas ahi termina el mapp no?

Deif wrote:

Hola :3


[*]Puede que el fondo sea algo NSFW, considera buscar otro. Si no dijeron nada antes, no creo que digan algo ahora. (Ademas de ser el único que encontré adecuado y con medidas exactas)


[*]Tiene 4,03 estrellas. Para rankear el mapa esta dificultad tiene que tener menos de 3 estrellas (o reduces su nivel, o tienes que crear un Easy). Sinceramente, hay muchas canciones que fueron rankeadas en Hard, así que no veo porqué la mía no... Ej: Hatsune Miku - Packaged

Deif wrote:

Keilara' Razorblade:

1. Aumenta el Slider Velocity. Esto no lo cambié. Me gusta como está .-.
2. Las secciones de Timing 1:06:535 y 1:06:781 no son necesarias. Quitadas
3. Approach Rate y Circle Size -1. Cambiado.
4. 00:43:566 (1) - Quita el nuevo combo. Listo
5. 00:44:638 (1) - ^ Listo
6. 01:10:620 (1) - ^ Listo

Keilara wrote:

Deif wrote:

Keilara' Razorblade:

1. Aumenta el Slider Velocity. Esto no lo cambié. Me gusta como está .-.
2. Las secciones de Timing 1:06:535 y 1:06:781 no son necesarias. Quitadas
3. Approach Rate y Circle Size -1. Cambiado.
4. 00:43:566 (1) - Quita el nuevo combo. Listo
5. 00:44:638 (1) - ^ Listo
6. 01:10:620 (1) - ^ Listo

Updated Difficulty - Changes: Design, fixed some spacing and added Deif mod changes.

ziin wrote:

[razorblade]
this name is ambiguous D:! But I like it .-.
map would be better with a higher slider speed and careful attention to your sliders. More Hitsounds are a must as well. I'm sorry you won't increase the slider speed, since maps are a lot easier to read if they are more spread out. Added more Hitsounds

winber1 wrote:

keilara's

I find the spacing too small. D:!

00:34:459 (1) - this whole kiai section does really make sense imo. 1) this shouldn't even be a kiai section imo. it's not even epic D: 2)the increase in spacing doesn't make much sense to me either, cuz the intensity of the music actually decreases here, so I wouldn't even increase spacing. Removed the spacing increase & Changed Kiai section
[00:39:013 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - if you keep this spacing change i'm fine with it because the music does get more tense here and it's reaching some sort of climax] Changed some notes spacing with this one
00:48:388 (1) - remove combo Removed
00:57:763 (1) - ^ Removed
01:02:049 (1) - ^ Removed
01:13:031 (x) - add note? Added
01:30:709 (1) - same as 00:34:459 Fixed

Kanon wrote:

Normal
Its too boring and easy. So I suggest you change it to easy. Use large circle and AR OA HP drain below 2.

and you need to map a new normal diff by your own.then you can reach the rank standard.

ziin wrote:

I'm a bit disappointed you didn't map the klayton edit; I'm pretty sure that one's free and it's a heck of a lot faster

LesTrucsRose wrote:

00:31:513 (2) - Shorten this slider by 1 tick on 1/4 BSD, then move it forward by 1 tick. Edited
01:03:388 (4) - Move forward by 1 tick on 1/8 BSD. Moved
01:04:191 (5) - Move left by 3 gridspaces, then move up by 2 gridspaces. Remapped
01:37:406 (6) - Can't see if this is a new slider or a repeat. move it. Moved (Remapped)
02:15:709 (1,2,3) - Unrankable sliders. Changed them with rankable ones.
02:19:459 (1) - Move forward by 2 ticks on 1/8 BSD. Moved
02:23:745 (4) - Hidden by the slider. Fixed

Kanon wrote:

Keilara's Razorblade
I assume its a hard diff Yeah it is.
i suggest you use higher distance snap. cus the song only have 115BPM. And add some jumps plz, or its rly no fun to play this diff. Changed distance snap to 1,4 and added jumps. Now it's better.. I think..
this diff stil need lots work on it. It's really so bad? I'm seriously doing my best..

LesTrucsRose wrote:

00:00:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Gradually decrease the hitsound's volume. [Example]
00:04:995 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:16:513 (5) - Move down by 3 gridspaces and to the left by 1.
00:16:781 (6) - Move left by 2 gridspaces.
00:33:388 (2) - Finish hitsound on the last part of the slider.
00:43:031 - You usually want to start/stop Kiai times on a beat. I suggest you start it at 00:51:602 and end it at 01:09:281.
01:10:888 (1,2,3,4) - Move forward by a tick on 1/2 BSD.
01:38:745 (1,2) - These beats are being overlapped.

Finish mapping this difficulty (or cut the mp3), and add more hitsounds.


no problems found. you learn from this man, MercurialSpectre!

ziin wrote:

[switchback]
00:01:379 - add note
00:01:647 (2) - delete
00:02:450 - add
00:14:504 (4) - delete
00:15:575 (2) - ^
00:26:290 (2) - ^
00:29:906 (1,2) - circle slider circle
00:31:379 (3,4) - slider
00:31:781 (5) - http://puu.sh/2on3
00:33:388 (2) - add repeat
00:34:727 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is very confusing
00:44:236 - add
00:44:504 (2) - delete
01:05:397 (2,4) - delete
01:07:674 (3) - delete
02:19:727 (2,4,1) - move 1 blue tick before
I'm tired of telling you what to delete. Hopefully you get how to map to the song and not your own rhythm you made up.
DON'T YOU WANT I DELETE MY GUEST DIFF????????? I just ignore this mod u.u
.

winber1 wrote:

i_k' Switchback

00:37:138 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - I don't know why you used such large spacing here out of the blue. It does not fit and does not make sense imo. Although I seemed to have read it correctly, it doesn't feel correct This is a double spacing part, and because of it is more "difficulty" I used sliders, and I can read it correctly
00:17:049 (x) - add a note yup
00:21:602 (1) - start right on top of combo 2 from previous combo? I dont get it right but I think this could be better
01:25:352 (1) - remove combo? yup
01:27:495 (1) - ^ nup
01:28:566 (1) - ^ yup
01:32:316 (1) - start right on top of combo 2 from previous combo? as explain on 00:21:602 (1)
02:06:602 (5) - new combo nup
02:06:870 (1) - remove combo nup
02:21:066 (5,6) - i would move this a little further away from each other done?
02:28:299 (2) - this note looks weird right under combo 1 and now?
02:32:718 (1) - end spinner here yup

There's nothing that isn't readable, but there's a lot of weird overlaps and spacing changes imo.
What is "imo"? x3 srry my english is very basic and I can't understand some things

Thunderstorm wrote:

[i_k' Switchback]
Whole spacing on this difficulty looks random. Maybe consider to space it properly? Its not random, I have changed the distance snap at some combos
00:17:584 (break) and incoming breaks - This make no sense =\ I'd suggest to put a full-length break here, or map whole that part. I like this, and just following the song
00:37:138 (1 - ) Kinda really random. I'd suggest to space this jump section properly, if you want to keep it. I keep it like that
01:11:156 (2, 3, 4) - Maybe make it kinda like this: 2+3 -> move 3 grid down to place 2 under start of 1 what? xD
01:11:557 (4) - 2 grid down ?
01:11:691 (5) - 2 grid down, 1 grid right ?
01:30:709 (break) and incoming breaks - This make no sense =\ I'd suggest to put a full-length break here, or map whole that part.
Like before explain
That's all
thanks n.n

Kanon wrote:

i_k' Switchback!
It is a nice and fun diff. didn't find any bad.
really? O.O

LesTrucsRose wrote:

no problems found. you learn from this man, MercurialSpectre!
why me? xD Im just a n00b mapper

LesTrucsRose wrote:

00:00:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Gradually decrease the hitsound's volume. [Example]
00:04:995 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^[/color] Done
00:16:513 (5) - Move down by 3 gridspaces and to the left by 1.
00:16:781 (6) - Move left by 2 gridspaces.[/color] Done
00:33:388 (2) - Finish hitsound on the last part of the slider. Done
00:43:031 - You usually want to start/stop Kiai times on a beat. I suggest you start it at 00:51:602 and end it at 01:09:281. I'll don't do that
01:10:888 (1,2,3,4) - Move forward by a tick on 1/2 BSD. ?
01:38:745 (1,2) - These beats are being overlapped. Done

Finish mapping this difficulty (or cut the mp3), and add more hitsounds. Later

-Lennox- wrote:

[Keilara's Razorblade]

Well just one thing i suggest you. Re-map the whloe map with an higher spacing! (press ALT and you see at the right corner the spacing.. put it higher) !

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Creo que esta pidiendo que lo mapees con un distance spacing mas alto lol

ziin wrote:

Keilara, no necesita cambiar si no quiere.

Pienso que sus deslizadores son demasiado lento. (1.50 slider speed con BPM 112 esta muy lento). En general, distance spacing debe ser 1.2x-0.8x, segun el mapa.

Trata slider speed 2.00 y 0.8x a 1.2x spacing. Si se gusta, cambialo, pero ahora esta bien. Solo necesita usar mas simetria en el mapa.

MercurialSpectre wrote:

xDDDD Ponele que tu español es de un traductor, pero no importa. Gracias por esforzarte <3

ziin wrote:

MercurialSpectre wrote:

xDDDD Ponele que tu español es de un traductor, pero no importa. Gracias por esforzarte <3

Es de 5 anos de espanol en la escuela. No es perfecto ahora, y hay unas palabras que no recuerdo y uso un dictionario.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Easy]
I don't think spacing increases like the ones present in the map are that fitting for an easy.

01:34:459 (1) - Cool slider, but uh, I don't know...
02:29:370 (1,2) - Hurr too close ;_;

But very good job.

akrolsmir wrote:

Is that thing in the background a guy or a girl? It has a masculine aura, but the body... That's the reason for this note: 00:29:102 (2) and the lyrics at that point

ziin's Easy (oh hi ziin):
00:17:316 (1) - That's a lot of nodes to get something flat... use a red point instead? Or even better, make it curvy somehow on the end similar to 00:19:459 (2). I like the sharp angle close to the end of that one. I'm mapping to the background (*gasp*) so it follows the curves of the body and the wing. I did add more nodes though, as I wasn't all that picky when I made it.
00:26:959 (1,2,1,1) - Either combo as (1,1,1,1) or (1,2,1,2) for consistency oo, copy/paste error there. fixed
00:34:459 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - o.O increasing distance spacing in an Easy. Oh well, I like it myself. I'm torn because I like it so much, even though I know it's wrong.
00:49:459 (1,2,3,4) - Square feels out of place So something not symmetrical? I was leading up to the spinner.
01:10:888 (3) - Since most other sliders repeat exactly once, try this instead? I want to have a beat on those notes, so I need a long slider.
01:49:727 (3) - Path looks cramped- too close to (2). Same for 01:54:013 (3)
02:28:031 (1,1,2) - ^ And the stacking of (1,2) causes similar things.
I don't follow

They look fine to me. The last one is an anti-jump, sure.

akrolsmir wrote:

Keilara's Razorblade:
Many of the short, curved sliders are not symmetric or are too sharp, fix please. It feels like you didn't put too much effort into those, which is a pity because the designed sliders were very nice. <- This make me very happy ;U;

00:29:236 (3) - Doesn't belong IMO, delete? Deleted
00:30:977 (1,2) - Make one a copy of the other Remapped
00:51:602 (1,2) - Neither is particularly pretty but ^. The sliders at 00:43:566 (2,3) - and 00:47:316 (1,2) - were much neater. Changed
01:11:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Compress the stream? Also 9 stacking w/ 8 felt out of place. Compressed
01:47:316 (1,2) - Try making the second and fourth nodes red for a more distinct shape. Also make one a copy of the other. Remapped
01:51:066 (7,8,9) - Make an equilateral triangle ^
02:19:325 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try using 1/2 the spacing ^
02:27:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Compress again Compressed

akrolsmir wrote:

Modding from queue:
i_k' Switchback:
Placement of notes, sliders seemed very random Maybe thats my style? x3

00:33:924 (3) - Use .5x slider velocity here too. owenrqweiry
01:34:459 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try increasing the spacing by a constant amount. encoiprsu
02:06:870 (1,2,3) - Increase the jump =O

Overall, the styles varied a lot with 3 guest diffs. Some were more organized than others... Anyways, starred. I know our styles are varied, but I think this made more fun

p3n wrote:

[Keilara's Razorblade]
General things:
- 1/8 snapping is absolutely unnecessary for this song. Don't use it (slider endings that are 1/8 off are "wrong" anyway) Changed to 1/6 snapping
- Avoid confusing and sometimes impossible to read spacings. I think you just overdid the "MOAR SPACING!!!1" mods a bit The song is only 112 BPM and thus 1/4 streams are possible to tap. Some players however prefer to use two keys even for relatively slow streams like in this song. The random spacing here makes this map actually harder than the "insane" version (and not much fun to play) Yeah ;_; my bad

I suggest using 1,0x or 1,1x spacing for notefollows and add jump patterns only where they fit the song. Just make sure everything is still very readable. Remapped everything again with 1,0 spacing.

01:11:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - It's ok to compress this stream but increasing the spacing randomly for (9,10) is just weird Fixed
01:11:959 (7) - delete this note as it doesn't fit very well imo, also adjust the compressed spacing to the whole combo as mentioned above: http://puu.sh/2QkX Compressed like in the img and deleted note
01:27:093 (2) - 1/8 snapped slider ending doesn't fit in any way here Fixed
01:37:138 (5) - ^ Fixed
01:39:013 (X) - add note Added
01:43:834 (X) - ^ Added
02:06:334 (1,2) - switch (1) and (2), circle on red tick (where (1) started before), start slider on big white tick (end where (2) was before) Changed
02:19:459 (2,3,4,5) - this is extremely annoying to play if the spacing is so random: the sliders are a lot slower than the "jumps" between them. Just stick to 1,0x spacing for slider-streams. Fixed spacing

Fast Update!

Keilara wrote:

p3n wrote:

[Keilara's Razorblade]
General things:
- 1/8 snapping is absolutely unnecessary for this song. Don't use it (slider endings that are 1/8 off are "wrong" anyway) Changed to 1/6 snapping

p3n wrote:

[General]
No preview points set xD Thnks

[Normal]
I think it suits the song much better to map the beat more constantly, especially during the first KIAI. Those huge and random breaks because you mainly follow the lyrics are not very fitting imo. You can add a lot more notes to this map as the score and "feeling" is more like an "Easy" right now. Should be OK as long as you won't go over 2m or 4 stars. Put in some more 1/2 notes and map more of what you hear + the constant beat.

00:04:995 / 00:06:066 / 00:07:138 - The volume change for the hitsounds sounds very weird here imo. Stick to ~40-50% for non KIAI and ~60% your KIAI/"Chorus" sections I just follow the "Kiai mod"

00:07:674 (7,8,1) - unnecessary jump/anti-jump And your suggestion is?
00:11:424 (4) - this slider ending would be unsnapped if you change the beat snap divisor. Move the end-point much closer to the actual ending of the slider. Done
00:12:227 (5,1) - anti-jump Done
00:26:691 (1,2,3) - messy spacing, disable grid-snap to place this or use grid lvl 4 I don't do that.
00:28:834 (1,2,3) - ^ No.
00:33:388 (2) - makes no sense to silence the slider beginning and turning point here oO I silence this to put a clap at finish of the slider
01:11:691 (3,4,5) - not in line with previous notes Done
01:38:745 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - maybe use some sliders here to break up the boring 1/1 circles? HAHAHAHAHA, It's a normal diff, not a Easy Diff =/
01:42:227 (X) - add a note here? (Maybe turn the three notes into a repeat-slider) I put a Slider... Done
01:46:245 (2) - shorten by 1/2 and add 1x repeat Asdf... D:
02:21:602 (1) - start en end on the big white ticks Done

Some examples of "more notes":
02:07:674 (X) - add note No
02:08:209 (X) - ^ No
02:10:352 (X) - ^ No
02:15:174 (X) - ^ Done


You didn't follow the rules in my modding queue but I like the song so here is your ~star Hahahaha, Sorry u.u Thnks Anyway ^^

p3n wrote:

[i_k' Switchback]
Hitsound volume is annoying! Reduce to 60% at least. Better 50%. now 55% volume
Very inconsistent spacing throughout the map. Seems you switched from 0,8x to 0,6x and back to 0,7x/0,8x by accident. that was not an accident o.O
The grid-size you used would be ok for very symmetric patterns but as you use many curves and circle-patterns, you should disable grid-snapping and work with x/y coords, [Ctrl]-snapping and pay attention to your distance-spacings. sorry, Im not symetrical because of I dont know how

ikari_kyon wrote:

p3n wrote:

[i_k' Switchback]
Hitsound volume is annoying! Reduce to 60% at least. Better 50%. now 55% volume
Very inconsistent spacing throughout the map. Seems you switched from 0,8x to 0,6x and back to 0,7x/0,8x by accident. that was not an accident o.O
The grid-size you used would be ok for very symmetric patterns but as you use many curves and circle-patterns, you should disable grid-snapping and work with x/y coords, [Ctrl]-snapping and pay attention to your distance-spacings. sorry, Im not symetrical because of I dont know how

Ekaru wrote:

You only use 50% of the mp3; there's like 3 minutes of unused mp3 left over.

This needs to be cropped to be rankable - ask in #modHelp or post in General Questions if you don't know how to do so. PM me for a remod after this is fixed, please.

ziin wrote:

02- Switchback.mp3 properties:
Duration: 0:05:02
File size: 4.73 MB

Ekaru wrote:

Switchback:

00:21:602 (1) - I would rather replace this with a pattern like 00:19:459 (1,2) - , but flipped horizontally. It'll play better
00:23:745 (1,2) - Significantly increase the spacing of these two notes for consistency while you're at it
01:32:316 (1) - See 00:21:602 (1)

Razorblade:

01:25:888 (1) - Make this prettier, please
02:09:281 (7) - ^

I thought some of the 1/2 jumps were a bit too big for such an easy Hard, but okay

Normal:

00:07:674 (7,8) - Too tricky for a Normal, IMO. Newer players will think it's a 1/1 from its context. BAM! Combo-break -> ragequit
00:11:424 (4,5) - Space these out; they feel way too close.
00:38:209 (3) - Make this prettier, please
00:57:763 (1,2,3) - This is also a bit too tricky for a Normal. It's also really awkward
01:46:513 (3) - Make this prettier, please
02:29:370 (2) - I would replace the clap on this slider's endpoint with a Finish.

Easy:

00:42:495 (2) - The blue approach circle blends in perfectly with (1), and you can't see the hit circle itself, either. I would delete this and give (1) a finish instead.
02:06:602 (1,2,3,4) - I would move this combo down so (3) isn't overlapped by the HP Bar
02:10:888 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Star

Ekaru wrote:

Easy:
00:42:495 (2) - The blue approach circle blends in perfectly with (1), and you can't see the hit circle itself, either. I would delete this and give (1) a finish instead.

Ekaru wrote:

Switchback:

00:21:602 (1) - I would rather replace this with a pattern like 00:19:459 (1,2) - , but flipped horizontally. It'll play better I keep it, but if someone make a refference to this later Ill change it
00:23:745 (1,2) - Significantly increase the spacing of these two notes for consistency while you're at it antijump? x3
01:32:316 (1) - See 00:21:602 (1) again?

Star thanks

JauiPlaY wrote:

[i_k' Switchback!]
00:26:691(5,1) - do not overlapped well.
no any other technical errors. but the map do not looks well imo. try to think again about your mapping and make it neat a bit more please.
you just must said: "damn noob remake this is ugly", but even Im not gonna remake/change nothing
so.. thanks?

Ekaru wrote:

Normal:

00:07:674 (7,8) - Too tricky for a Normal, IMO. Newer players will think it's a 1/1 from its context. BAM! Combo-break -> ragequit I do what I can xD
00:11:424 (4,5) - Space these out; they feel way too close. No.
00:38:209 (3) - Make this prettier, please What?
00:57:763 (1,2,3) - This is also a bit too tricky for a Normal. Done
01:46:513 (3) - Make this prettier, please I do what I can xD
02:29:370 (2) - I would replace the clap on this slider's endpoint with a Finish. Done

Star

ziin wrote:

Use MP3 Direct cut to cut the song off here 02:30:174 or here 02:34:459
Make sure you crop it right before he starts saying "switchback".

whymeman wrote:

[All]

Set a reasonable preview point for the mapset...

[ziin's Easy]

00:34:459 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - What is this.... WHY are you using jumps and anti-jumps in a Easy difficulty?
01:34:459 (1) - A hold point in the middle of a slider...

Are you trying to make a Normal difficulty or Easy? If you're trying to make it an Easy difficulty, then it would be better to take more time into making it less complex.

[Keilara's Razorblade]

This is the only map using the countdown. It would look better without it really.

whymeman wrote:

[ziin's Easy]

00:34:459 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - What is this.... WHY are you using jumps and anti-jumps in a Easy difficulty? because they're simple to hit. I'll change this when it's time to be bubbled if it's the only thing keeping it from being bubbled.
01:34:459 (1) - A hold point in the middle of a slider... the y velocity doesn't change until the end.

Are you trying to make a Normal difficulty or Easy? A 2 star difficulty.

ziin wrote:

whymeman wrote:

[ziin's Easy]

00:34:459 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - What is this.... WHY are you using jumps and anti-jumps in a Easy difficulty? because they're simple to hit. I'll change this when it's time to be bubbled if it's the only thing keeping it from being bubbled.
01:34:459 (1) - A hold point in the middle of a slider... the y velocity doesn't change until the end.

Are you trying to make a Normal difficulty or Easy? A 2 star difficulty.

I don't get this mod at all. Normally there's a clear indication of what it would take to get a star...

whymeman wrote:

If you're only doing that to get a bubble or star, then this is going in the wrong direction. As I said, why use things like that in a Easy difficulty? It should be more easy to read straightforward without the tricks, jumps, and confusion placements. Don't think only about yourself, think about those starting out in osu.

MercurialSpectre wrote:

Hey hey Guys... Don't Fight for a stupid think like a bubble or star.

ziin wrote:

If nobody ever discussed anything life wouldn't be very interesting.

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

General:
Don't remember to set a preview point
Timing Set current position as preview point
Normal
Queda feo tener un break en medio de un kiai, intenta agregar notas.
Bien pense que iba a decir algo mas pero esta bien el mapa lo mas importante es lo del preview point en todas las dificultades, no te olvides de ponerlo siempre en el mismo lugar en las 4 dificultades, estrella ya te deje, suerte y espero verlo rankeado pronto.

Hika wrote:

hi.
Overall:
Don't forget those preview points even though previous mod posts have mentioned it.


Keilara's Razorblade:
Suggestion: When the slider velocity changes from 1.00 to .50, I suggest you do just 1 tick because it sounds better in my opinion.

i_k' Switchback!:
02:27:763 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Consider organizing this, but if not, /okayface


you don't really have to do all of this, rofl >u< star~

eldnl wrote:

[General]

- La dificultad insane tiene el countdown desactivado, ademas debes agregar a ziin a los tags en esa dificultad.

[ziin]

00:24:816 - This spinner is very short, beginners need more time of reaction, you can delete the previous (2) and extend the spin? should be fine. k, but 2 stays and it's 1333 ms now
00:34:459 - Really strange pattern to be the easier difficulty in the mapset, please do something more readable.It's a dead simple rhythm, clear approach circles. I can't imagine anyone missing this more than once. If spacing were so important, we wouldn't have stacks either.
00:42:495 (1) Please don't stack notes under the slider in easy difficulties, this is really hard to read for beginners, you can extend the slider by 1/2 and it's the same. You're doing nothing during the slider, and the approach circle is bright red on blue.
00:51:602 - Why not extend this spinner to the next white line? doesn't map what I wanted to map
01:20:531 - Short spin again = =' made over 1500
01:38:745 - Start the kiai in the big white tick please. I'm going to let merc fix kiai stuff, that's up to him, but I put it on downbeat
02:29:370 (1,2) These notes are too close to the previous slider, it's a little confuse because looks like this pattern. Please fix it. on second though I'll fix it.

eldnl wrote:

[Normal]

00:08:745 - Sube un poco el volumen de esta parte, para seguir el patron anterior, ademas que no se escuchan casi nada los hitsounds. No. Lo dejaré así, a lo sumo lo modificaré si alguien me dice lo mismo.
00:33:388 (2) Sube el volumen de este slider, el hitsound no se escucha, 30% esta bien. Aunque el cambio no se nota nada considerando el volumen anterior, asi que subirlo estaría bien. Listo
00:34:459 - El cambio de volumen de la parte anterior a esta es enorme, se siente extraño, por favor usa un volumen parecido para todo el mapa. Listo
00:43:031 - Breaks en el kiai time? yo digo no, se supone que es la mejor parte de la cancion... Notas Agregadas
01:06:602 - El clap que pusiste en este spin como que no va, no se escucha bien. Removido
01:38:477 - Porque bajas en volumen en el kiai time? deberia ser al revez. Listo
01:38:745 - Empieza el kiai en la linea blanca grande. Arreglado
02:15:174 (1) Porque esta nota es solo un combo? es mejor que quites el new combo que pusiste en la nota siguiente. Es mejor que quede así como está, ya que es un sonido aislado que no tiene continuación con ninguna de las notas anteriores o posteriores.

02:27:763 - Este slider esta demasiado cerca del spin, muy dificil para una dificultad normal. Movido

Bueno hice el mod para ver como estaba el map, y no esta muy cerca de la burbuja que digamos. Hacemos lo que podemos para que esté cada día más cerca.
Buena suerte ~ Muchas gracias

ziin wrote:

Mercurial, you can do what you want with kiai, I don't care where it goes. I went ahead and fixed it to downbeat in my diff, but you should make my diff the same as normal's kiai.

eldnl wrote:

[I_K]

00:37:138 - Jumps totalmente inesperados, puedes hacer algo que se entienda un poco mas? wqoeprnqwoepriqwoperuqwer
02:21:602 (6) New combo sdfasdfasdrwqer
La verdad podria llenarte de sugerencias y todo, pero seria mucho, te aconsejo que no intentes hacer que el mapa sea confuso ni muy dificil, no es divertido. si puedes llenarme de sugerencias porque no lo haces? y la verdad que no creo que este tan dificil que digamos, y porque no puedo hacer algo dificil? porque no soy pro?

Bueno hice el mod para ver como estaba el map, y no esta muy cerca de la burbuja que digamos, la dificultad insane necesita mas trabajo. q(=w=)p trabajo
Buena suerte ~

ikari_kyon wrote:

q(=w=)p trabajo

Raging Bull wrote:

Easy:
00:04:459 (1,2) - Maybe unstack these? Stacks were on purpose.
00:17:316 (1,2) - Are these sliders made like this intentional? Sorry just not my taste :3 Don't really have to change anything, just wondering. They match the background
00:34:459 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Hmm. Why are these spaced differently? Space it correctly please. because it fits the slider and spacing means nothing on 1/1
01:49:459 (2) - NC? I want the followpoints

Raging Bull wrote:

General:
Countdown disabled in i_k switchback. Disable it since other diff since it's not in use anyways? Every mapper could feel free to make anything with his/her map... Don't you think?


Normal:
00:07:674 (7,8) - Weird overlap. Maybe move 8 to the side instead?
00:45:709 (2) - I think spacing this slider would be better.
02:13:299 (6) - Change this slider into something else? I don't like kick sliders in lower diffs. (short repeating sliders)
02:15:709 (1) - Why NC? Remove it?
02:25:620 (1,1) - Next note appears too fast after a spinner in lower difficulty imo. Maybe do something like this? http://puu.sh/5RWI
Tbh this really reminds me of the first time I started mapping. I advise you to map a lot less square-y. Makes the map more livelier and makes more interesting pattern.

Overall this map is alright, though I prefer if you work on sliders a bit more and note placement, but that's only my opinion.

Raging Bull wrote:

Okay. I understand you not changing anything, but it sounds as though you value MAT/BAT mods more than regular mod. But still I strongly suggest you map a lot less squarey and experiment. It's way more fun than just moving left right up or down.

iMercurial wrote:

I got about 20 mods, and they tell me exactly what you've said to me, and I have changed many times. I prefer a BAT or MAT tell me something definite to obtain the bubble.

Krisom wrote:

00:51:602 (1) - I feel this should end 1/1 later, on the mainbeat. That, or move the break to make it start at 00:53:745 - (after all, on the second chorus you do place a note on the mainbeat: 01:47:316 (1) - )
01:34:459 (1) - Asked around, this slider doesnt seems to be appropiate for an easy due to the sliderpath disappearing with mm sliders. I'm sorry.

Krisom wrote:

iMercurial wrote:

I got about 20 mods, and they tell me exactly what you've said to me, and I have changed many times. I prefer a BAT or MAT tell me something definite to obtain the bubble.

La cosa es que cuando uno obtiene mods no se debe fijar solo en lo rankeable o lo no rankeable. Si no quieres cambiar algo por que ya has cambiado muchas cosas y solo quieres que tu mapa este "listo para la burbuja" no va a pasar. La mayoría de los BATs/MATs también se preocupan de los aspectos estéticos y por la calidad del mapa en general, no solo por el set de reglas en piedra. Si este último fuera el caso, tendríamos un sistema de ranking automatizado.

Habiendo dicho esto, te recomiendo fuertemente que leas los modposts que no has querido cambiar por no ser de MATs/BATs para que así el proximo mod de MAT/BAT sea más corto y rápido. Recuerda que jamás podrás volver a cambiar cosas en un mapa rankeado.

Raging Bull wrote:

Switchback:
00:31:781 (5) - I don't agree with slowdown. Doesn't seem to fit. Can you use 1x here? 1x
00:33:924 (3) - ^ ^
02:26:424 (2) - I think it would be better if you move this note to the right instead of at the bottom. Seems to play better for me. to the right

Overall this map is alright, though I prefer if you work on sliders a bit more and note placement, but that's only my opinion. I will

Krisom wrote:

Switchback!.-
No me parece que el BPM y el spacing sean apropiados para AR8, se siente muy rápido en comparación a la música. cual deberia ser el correcto? 7?
00:31:781 (5) - No te recomiendo hacer slowdowns de x0.50 si no hay ticks para detectarlo. No puedes usar un slowdown distinto como x0.65 para no confundir este slider con uno que dura 1/2? No me parece que haya u patrón que no se pueda cambiar ya he quitado el slowdown
00:33:388 (2,3) - Similar a lo de arriba con (3). Además, cuidado con la reducción en el spacing. arreglado, creo <.<
00:37:138 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Confuso y poco legible. Sobre todo (6,7) ;w;
00:39:013 (1,2) - ^
... hay muchos underlaps y overlaps que no se ven nada bien, y los patrones del kiai están repetidos 3 veces, la tercera vez idéntica a la segundo (sin siquiera una rotación). No te recomiendo que hagas eso a menos que el mapa haya sido mapeado con estructura. Me parece que esta dificultad necesita muchos más mods de los que lleva hasta ahora. jojo perdon por no ser simetrico don krisom, espero que ahora este mejor

Keilara wrote:

Perdon por haberme tardado tanto >o<!! Hice todo!

1. remove 'Dota' from the tags, you may found this song from a Dota video but this song is not for that War3-mod at all :3
2. and map more diffs next time, only a Normal diff by yourself is not so good.

1. ask the owner to disable all the letterbox during breaks on all diffs? there are many short break in your diff, they fit well but the BG just disappeared in seconds lol
2. 00:31:781 (5) - how can players know this would be a slow-down slider? the music pace doesn't change at all here.
3. 00:33:120 (1,2,3) - spacing and the same slow-down issue.
4. 01:12:495 (5,6) - spacing, too close sorry.
5. 02:08:477 (1,2,3,4) - claps on wrong place? they are supposed on redline-notes imo
6. 02:29:638 (1) - replace this with note? and add 1 at 02:29:504 then

1. disable lean-in
2. AR+1 OD+2/3
3. 02:12:495 (5,6) - spacing, when use a slow-down, don't forget to multiple your spacing snap
4. 02:21:066 (1,2,3) - confusing spacing

1. 00:01:245 (T) - unused section

1. 01:34:459 (1) - final part is too confusing for an Easy diff.

Colin Hou wrote:

[Easy]:

1. 01:34:459 (1) - final part is too confusing for an Easy diff.

good luck~

Edit: orz the post up there.