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Mercurial

LesTrucsRose wrote:

00:00:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Gradually decrease the hitsound's volume. [Example]
00:04:995 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

00:16:513 (5) - Move down by 3 gridspaces and to the left by 1.
00:16:781 (6) - Move left by 2 gridspaces.

00:33:388 (2) - Finish hitsound on the last part of the slider.
00:43:031 - You usually want to start/stop Kiai times on a beat. I suggest you start it at 00:51:602 and end it at 01:09:281.
01:10:888 (1,2,3,4) - Move forward by a tick on 1/2 BSD.
01:38:745 (1,2) - These beats are being overlapped.

Finish mapping this difficulty (or cut the mp3), and add more hitsounds.


no problems found. you learn from this man, MercurialSpectre!
I'm Learning now :)


Thnks 4 mod :D
jossieP

ziin wrote:

[switchback]
00:01:379 - add note
00:01:647 (2) - delete
00:02:450 - add
00:14:504 (4) - delete
00:15:575 (2) - ^
00:26:290 (2) - ^
00:29:906 (1,2) - circle slider circle
00:31:379 (3,4) - slider
00:31:781 (5) - http://puu.sh/2on3
00:33:388 (2) - add repeat
00:34:727 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is very confusing
00:44:236 - add
00:44:504 (2) - delete
01:05:397 (2,4) - delete
01:07:674 (3) - delete
02:19:727 (2,4,1) - move 1 blue tick before
I'm tired of telling you what to delete. Hopefully you get how to map to the song and not your own rhythm you made up.
DON'T YOU WANT I DELETE MY GUEST DIFF????????? I just ignore this mod u.u
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winber1 wrote:


i_k' Switchback


00:37:138 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - I don't know why you used such large spacing here out of the blue. It does not fit and does not make sense imo. Although I seemed to have read it correctly, it doesn't feel correct This is a double spacing part, and because of it is more "difficulty" I used sliders, and I can read it correctly
00:17:049 (x) - add a note yup
00:21:602 (1) - start right on top of combo 2 from previous combo? I dont get it right but I think this could be better
01:25:352 (1) - remove combo? yup
01:27:495 (1) - ^ nup
01:28:566 (1) - ^ yup
01:32:316 (1) - start right on top of combo 2 from previous combo? as explain on 00:21:602 (1)
02:06:602 (5) - new combo nup
02:06:870 (1) - remove combo nup
02:21:066 (5,6) - i would move this a little further away from each other done?
02:28:299 (2) - this note looks weird right under combo 1 and now?
02:32:718 (1) - end spinner here yup

There's nothing that isn't readable, but there's a lot of weird overlaps and spacing changes imo.
What is "imo"? x3 srry my english is very basic and I can't understand some things

Thunderstorm wrote:

[i_k' Switchback]
Whole spacing on this difficulty looks random. Maybe consider to space it properly? Its not random, I have changed the distance snap at some combos
00:17:584 (break) and incoming breaks - This make no sense =\ I'd suggest to put a full-length break here, or map whole that part. I like this, and just following the song
00:37:138 (1 - ) Kinda really random. I'd suggest to space this jump section properly, if you want to keep it. I keep it like that
01:11:156 (2, 3, 4) - Maybe make it kinda like this: 2+3 -> move 3 grid down to place 2 under start of 1 what? xD
01:11:557 (4) - 2 grid down ?
01:11:691 (5) - 2 grid down, 1 grid right ?
01:30:709 (break) and incoming breaks - This make no sense =\ I'd suggest to put a full-length break here, or map whole that part.
Like before explain
That's all
thanks n.n

Kanon wrote:

i_k' Switchback!
It is a nice and fun diff. didn't find any bad.
really? O.O

LesTrucsRose wrote:

no problems found. you learn from this man, MercurialSpectre!
why me? xD Im just a n00b mapper
Download: Celldweller - Switchback (MercurialSpectre) [i_k' Switchback!].osu
-Lennox-
Finde dude mog go!


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01:07:138 (1,2,1) - I highly suggest you to remove those sliders. They are pretty hard for the easyiest diff.
01:59:906 (1,1) - The spacing between the spinner ending and the next circle is pretty high. Thats hard to play. So remove the note or shorter the spinner

[Keilara's Razorblade]

Well just one thing i suggest you. Re-map the whloe map with an higher spacing! (press ALT and you see at the right corner the spacing.. put it higher)

[ik' Switchback]

Well it plays really good but the map itself looks pretty ugly D: Try to put more symmetrie in the map. And make it delicious~



If you re-map the Keilara's Razorblade diff call me back and i'll recheck the map.

gl!
Topic Starter
Mercurial

LesTrucsRose wrote:

00:00:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Gradually decrease the hitsound's volume. [Example]
00:04:995 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^[/color] Done
00:16:513 (5) - Move down by 3 gridspaces and to the left by 1.
00:16:781 (6) - Move left by 2 gridspaces.[/color] Done
00:33:388 (2) - Finish hitsound on the last part of the slider. Done
00:43:031 - You usually want to start/stop Kiai times on a beat. I suggest you start it at 00:51:602 and end it at 01:09:281. I'll don't do that
01:10:888 (1,2,3,4) - Move forward by a tick on 1/2 BSD. ?
01:38:745 (1,2) - These beats are being overlapped. Done

Finish mapping this difficulty (or cut the mp3), and add more hitsounds. Later
ziin
blam. (don't kudosu guest difficulties fyi)

Hit sound volumes aren't exactly final, I'll try to match whatever you end up with.

Hopefully nobody will mind spacing errors on such a slow song, but I really liked them.

Download: Celldweller - Switchback (MercurialSpectre) [ziin's Easy].osu
Kei

-Lennox- wrote:

[Keilara's Razorblade]

Well just one thing i suggest you. Re-map the whloe map with an higher spacing! (press ALT and you see at the right corner the spacing.. put it higher) !
More higher? o.o
OzzyOzrock
Creo que esta pidiendo que lo mapees con un distance spacing mas alto lol
Kei

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Creo que esta pidiendo que lo mapees con un distance spacing mas alto lol
Si lo se xD Pero o.o mas? no está bien asi? o.o
Kei
Updated [Keilara's Razorblade] with a little more distance spacing. Now it has 1,7 spacing instead of 1,4.

Download: Celldweller - Switchback (MercurialSpectre) [Keilara's Razorblade].osu
ziin
Keilara, no necesita cambiar si no quiere.

Pienso que sus deslizadores son demasiado lento. (1.50 slider speed con BPM 112 esta muy lento). En general, distance spacing debe ser 1.2x-0.8x, segun el mapa.

Trata slider speed 2.00 y 0.8x a 1.2x spacing. Si se gusta, cambialo, pero ahora esta bien. Solo necesita usar mas simetria en el mapa.
Topic Starter
Mercurial

ziin wrote:

Keilara, no necesita cambiar si no quiere.

Pienso que sus deslizadores son demasiado lento. (1.50 slider speed con BPM 112 esta muy lento). En general, distance spacing debe ser 1.2x-0.8x, segun el mapa.

Trata slider speed 2.00 y 0.8x a 1.2x spacing. Si se gusta, cambialo, pero ahora esta bien. Solo necesita usar mas simetria en el mapa.

xDDDD Ponele que tu español es de un traductor, pero no importa. Gracias por esforzarte <3
ziin

MercurialSpectre wrote:

xDDDD Ponele que tu español es de un traductor, pero no importa. Gracias por esforzarte <3
Es de 5 anos de espanol en la escuela. No es perfecto ahora, y hay unas palabras que no recuerdo y uso un dictionario.
Topic Starter
Mercurial

ziin wrote:

MercurialSpectre wrote:

xDDDD Ponele que tu español es de un traductor, pero no importa. Gracias por esforzarte <3
Es de 5 anos de espanol en la escuela. No es perfecto ahora, y hay unas palabras que no recuerdo y uso un dictionario.
Mi inglés también es una porquería, pero bueno, al menos nos entendemos :D

New Edit 13/06/2011: Please, Re-Download this Beatmap
OzzyOzrock
[Easy]
I don't think spacing increases like the ones present in the map are that fitting for an easy.

01:34:459 (1) - Cool slider, but uh, I don't know...
02:29:370 (1,2) - Hurr too close ;_;

But very good job.
[Normall]
Los hitsounds no suenan muy bien... son muy inconsistentes (lol) y casi nunca siguen un rithmo. La dificultad de ziin es un buen ejemplo.

01:10:620 (1,2,3,4) - Creo que mejor deberias cambiar esta parte a algo que sigue el rithmo...
01:38:745 (1) - esto un grid para abajo =w=

Pero... esta bien ;_;
[Kei]
Lol, talvez si deberias subirle mas al SV y no al distance spacing, porque de todas maneras el distance snap 1.00 se... uh... cumplira con el S.V. lol. Talvez 2.3 o algo aci. Es un hard, verdad?

Asi que arregla eso orz (no se si me gusta mejor que el de antes lol)
[i_k]
Demasiado flojo para chequear esto, pero se me hace estar bien ;_;

Buena suerte =w=
ziin

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Easy]
I don't think spacing increases like the ones present in the map are that fitting for an easy.

01:34:459 (1) - Cool slider, but uh, I don't know...
02:29:370 (1,2) - Hurr too close ;_;

But very good job.
If I get a second vote for the spacing errors you mentioned, I'll fix (first and last ones are on purpose, middle one was kinda unavoidable).
As for the slider, I made some switchbacks. I like it too much, and it's pretty slow, so it's easy to follow.
Topic Starter
Mercurial
In few words... This map have your aprovation :)
akrolsmir
Modding from queue:

General:
Add "ziin" to all tags. Also, what's Dota? (I think of Basshunter's song, but that can't be right...)
Is that thing in the background a guy or a girl? It has a masculine aura, but the body...

ziin's Easy (oh hi ziin):
00:17:316 (1) - That's a lot of nodes to get something flat... use a red point instead? Or even better, make it curvy somehow on the end similar to 00:19:459 (2). I like the sharp angle close to the end of that one.
00:26:959 (1,2,1,1) - Either combo as (1,1,1,1) or (1,2,1,2) for consistency
00:29:102 (2) - Copy of (1) instead? Like the next 2 notes.
00:34:459 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - o.O increasing distance spacing in an Easy. Oh well, I like it myself.
00:49:459 (1,2,3,4) - Square feels out of place
01:10:888 (3) - Since most other sliders repeat exactly once, try this instead?

01:34:459 (1) - Lots of switchbacks :D
01:49:727 (3) - Path looks cramped- too close to (2). Same for 01:54:013 (3)
02:28:031 (1,1,2) - ^ And the stacking of (1,2) causes similar things.

Normal:
00:03:924 (8) - Move 1/2 beat forward, and place another circle 1/2 beat after this? I think it would match "switchback" better.
00:08:209 (7) - ^
00:12:227- Circle? Maybe make a line with (this, 4, 5)
00:28:834 (1,2,3) - Make this a copy of the pattern before, or move (2) so that the pattern flows smooth instead of being cut, like:
00:36:066 (3), 00:38:209 (3) - Pick one and make the other a copy
00:43:031- Kiai burst on a break...?
00:57:763 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't match vocals. Try:

00:59:906 (5) - Length feels weird, try:

01:08:477 (1) - Feels like there ought to be a beat in the center, with a repeat or a shorter slider or sth.
01:10:620 (1,2,3,4) - see 00:57:763 (1,2,3,4)
01:29:102 (2) - Make symmetric
01:30:977 (2) - ^
01:33:120 (3) - ^
02:25:620 (1) - End at 02:27:495
02:27:763 (1,2,1,2) - Try and get these parallel. And I don't like how the last note is hidden, try expanding and continuing the pattern.

Keilara's Razorblade:
Many of the short, curved sliders are not symmetric or are too sharp, fix please. It feels like you didn't put too much effort into those, which is a pity because the designed sliders were very nice.

00:29:236 (3) - Doesn't belong IMO, delete?
00:30:977 (1,2) - Make one a copy of the other
00:51:602 (1,2) - Neither is particularly pretty but ^. The sliders at 00:43:566 (2,3) - and 00:47:316 (1,2) - were much neater.
01:11:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Compress the stream? Also 9 stacking w/ 8 felt out of place.
01:47:316 (1,2) - Try making the second and fourth nodes red for a more distinct shape. Also make one a copy of the other.
01:51:066 (7,8,9) - Make an equilateral triangle
02:19:325 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try using 1/2 the spacing
02:27:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Compress again

i_k' Switchback:
Rename to "i_k's Switchback".
Placement of notes, sliders seemed very random

00:33:924 (3) - Use .5x slider velocity here too.
01:34:459 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try increasing the spacing by a constant amount.
02:06:870 (1,2,3) - Increase the jump

Overall, the styles varied a lot with 3 guest diffs. Some were more organized than others... Anyways, starred.
ziin

akrolsmir wrote:

Is that thing in the background a guy or a girl? It has a masculine aura, but the body... That's the reason for this note: 00:29:102 (2) and the lyrics at that point

ziin's Easy (oh hi ziin):
00:17:316 (1) - That's a lot of nodes to get something flat... use a red point instead? Or even better, make it curvy somehow on the end similar to 00:19:459 (2). I like the sharp angle close to the end of that one. I'm mapping to the background (*gasp*) so it follows the curves of the body and the wing. I did add more nodes though, as I wasn't all that picky when I made it.
00:26:959 (1,2,1,1) - Either combo as (1,1,1,1) or (1,2,1,2) for consistency oo, copy/paste error there. fixed
00:34:459 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - o.O increasing distance spacing in an Easy. Oh well, I like it myself. I'm torn because I like it so much, even though I know it's wrong.
00:49:459 (1,2,3,4) - Square feels out of place So something not symmetrical? I was leading up to the spinner.
01:10:888 (3) - Since most other sliders repeat exactly once, try this instead? I want to have a beat on those notes, so I need a long slider.
01:49:727 (3) - Path looks cramped- too close to (2). Same for 01:54:013 (3)
02:28:031 (1,1,2) - ^ And the stacking of (1,2) causes similar things.
I don't follow

They look fine to me. The last one is an anti-jump, sure.
many thanks, I'm surprised I had anything to fix. I thought I did a really good job on this...

Download: Celldweller - Switchback (MercurialSpectre) [ziin's Easy].osu
Kei

akrolsmir wrote:

Keilara's Razorblade:
Many of the short, curved sliders are not symmetric or are too sharp, fix please. It feels like you didn't put too much effort into those, which is a pity because the designed sliders were very nice. <- This make me very happy ;U;

00:29:236 (3) - Doesn't belong IMO, delete? Deleted
00:30:977 (1,2) - Make one a copy of the other Remapped
00:51:602 (1,2) - Neither is particularly pretty but ^. The sliders at 00:43:566 (2,3) - and 00:47:316 (1,2) - were much neater. Changed
01:11:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Compress the stream? Also 9 stacking w/ 8 felt out of place. Compressed
01:47:316 (1,2) - Try making the second and fourth nodes red for a more distinct shape. Also make one a copy of the other. Remapped
01:51:066 (7,8,9) - Make an equilateral triangle ^
02:19:325 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try using 1/2 the spacing ^
02:27:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Compress again Compressed
I remapped everything again! >_>''
Increased Slider Velocity to 2.40, and reduced spacing to 1.4.
Download: Celldweller - Switchback (MercurialSpectre) [Keilara's Razorblade].osu

Topic Starter
Mercurial
Actualizaré todo el Lunes

I'll update it at Monday :3
jossieP

akrolsmir wrote:

Modding from queue:
i_k' Switchback:
Placement of notes, sliders seemed very random Maybe thats my style? x3

00:33:924 (3) - Use .5x slider velocity here too. owenrqweiry
01:34:459 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try increasing the spacing by a constant amount. encoiprsu
02:06:870 (1,2,3) - Increase the jump =O

Overall, the styles varied a lot with 3 guest diffs. Some were more organized than others... Anyways, starred. I know our styles are varied, but I think this made more fun
Download: Celldweller - Switchback (MercurialSpectre) [i_k' Switchback!].osu
akrolsmir
Forgot to actually star, whoops. Also, don't forget the tags (add ziin) and maybe put an "s" after the apostrophe for i_k's difficulty.
Topic Starter
Mercurial
Updated :D
p3n
[General]
No preview points set

[Normal]
I think it suits the song much better to map the beat more constantly, especially during the first KIAI. Those huge and random breaks because you mainly follow the lyrics are not very fitting imo. You can add a lot more notes to this map as the score and "feeling" is more like an "Easy" right now. Should be OK as long as you won't go over 2m or 4 stars. Put in some more 1/2 notes and map more of what you hear + the constant beat.

00:04:995 / 00:06:066 / 00:07:138 - The volume change for the hitsounds sounds very weird here imo. Stick to ~40-50% for non KIAI and ~60% your KIAI/"Chorus" sections

00:07:674 (7,8,1) - unnecessary jump/anti-jump
00:11:424 (4) - this slider ending would be unsnapped if you change the beat snap divisor. Move the end-point much closer to the actual ending of the slider.
00:12:227 (5,1) - anti-jump
00:26:691 (1,2,3) - messy spacing, disable grid-snap to place this or use grid lvl 4
00:28:834 (1,2,3) - ^
00:33:388 (2) - makes no sense to silence the slider beginning and turning point here oO
01:11:691 (3,4,5) - not in line with previous notes
01:38:745 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - maybe use some sliders here to break up the boring 1/1 circles?
01:42:227 (X) - add a note here? (Maybe turn the three notes into a repeat-slider)
01:46:245 (2) - shorten by 1/2 and add 1x repeat
02:21:602 (1) - start en end on the big white ticks

Some examples of "more notes":
02:07:674 (X) - add note
02:08:209 (X) - ^
02:10:352 (X) - ^
02:15:174 (X) - ^

[Keilara's Razorblade]
General things:
- 1/8 snapping is absolutely unnecessary for this song. Don't use it (slider endings that are 1/8 off are "wrong" anyway)
- Avoid confusing and sometimes impossible to read spacings. I think you just overdid the "MOAR SPACING!!!1" mods a bit ;) The song is only 112 BPM and thus 1/4 streams are possible to tap. Some players however prefer to use two keys even for relatively slow streams like in this song. The random spacing here makes this map actually harder than the "insane" version (and not much fun to play)

I suggest using 1,0x or 1,1x spacing for notefollows and add jump patterns only where they fit the song. Just make sure everything is still very readable.

01:11:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - It's ok to compress this stream but increasing the spacing randomly for (9,10) is just weird
01:11:959 (7) - delete this note as it doesn't fit very well imo, also adjust the compressed spacing to the whole combo as mentioned above: http://puu.sh/2QkX
01:27:093 (2) - 1/8 snapped slider ending doesn't fit in any way here
01:37:138 (5) - ^
01:39:013 (X) - add note
01:43:834 (X) - ^
02:06:334 (1,2) - switch (1) and (2), circle on red tick (where (1) started before), start slider on big white tick (end where (2) was before)
02:19:459 (2,3,4,5) - this is extremely annoying to play if the spacing is so random: the sliders are a lot slower than the "jumps" between them. Just stick to 1,0x spacing for slider-streams.

[i_k' Switchback]
Hitsound volume is annoying! Reduce to 60% at least. Better 50%.
Very inconsistent spacing throughout the map. Seems you switched from 0,8x to 0,6x and back to 0,7x/0,8x by accident.
The grid-size you used would be ok for very symmetric patterns but as you use many curves and circle-patterns, you should disable grid-snapping and work with x/y coords, [Ctrl]-snapping and pay attention to your distance-spacings.

The later parts of this map are very decent but the ~first half needs a lot of work.



You didn't follow the rules in my modding queue but I like the song so here is your ~star
Kei

p3n wrote:

[Keilara's Razorblade]
General things:
- 1/8 snapping is absolutely unnecessary for this song. Don't use it (slider endings that are 1/8 off are "wrong" anyway) Changed to 1/6 snapping
- Avoid confusing and sometimes impossible to read spacings. I think you just overdid the "MOAR SPACING!!!1" mods a bit ;) The song is only 112 BPM and thus 1/4 streams are possible to tap. Some players however prefer to use two keys even for relatively slow streams like in this song. The random spacing here makes this map actually harder than the "insane" version (and not much fun to play) Yeah ;_; my bad

I suggest using 1,0x or 1,1x spacing for notefollows and add jump patterns only where they fit the song. Just make sure everything is still very readable. Remapped everything again with 1,0 spacing.

01:11:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - It's ok to compress this stream but increasing the spacing randomly for (9,10) is just weird Fixed
01:11:959 (7) - delete this note as it doesn't fit very well imo, also adjust the compressed spacing to the whole combo as mentioned above: http://puu.sh/2QkX Compressed like in the img and deleted note
01:27:093 (2) - 1/8 snapped slider ending doesn't fit in any way here Fixed
01:37:138 (5) - ^ Fixed
01:39:013 (X) - add note Added
01:43:834 (X) - ^ Added
02:06:334 (1,2) - switch (1) and (2), circle on red tick (where (1) started before), start slider on big white tick (end where (2) was before) Changed
02:19:459 (2,3,4,5) - this is extremely annoying to play if the spacing is so random: the sliders are a lot slower than the "jumps" between them. Just stick to 1,0x spacing for slider-streams. Fixed spacing
Fast Update! :D

Download: Celldweller - Switchback (MercurialSpectre) [Keilara's Razorblade].osu
p3n

Keilara wrote:

p3n wrote:

[Keilara's Razorblade]
General things:
- 1/8 snapping is absolutely unnecessary for this song. Don't use it (slider endings that are 1/8 off are "wrong" anyway) Changed to 1/6 snapping
Ummm...sry for beeing unclear about this: Use 1/4 snapping! (1/6 and 1/3 is a completely different rhythm pattern and this song is a "normal" 1/4 beat)
Topic Starter
Mercurial

p3n wrote:

[General]
No preview points set xD Thnks

[Normal]
I think it suits the song much better to map the beat more constantly, especially during the first KIAI. Those huge and random breaks because you mainly follow the lyrics are not very fitting imo. You can add a lot more notes to this map as the score and "feeling" is more like an "Easy" right now. Should be OK as long as you won't go over 2m or 4 stars. Put in some more 1/2 notes and map more of what you hear + the constant beat.

00:04:995 / 00:06:066 / 00:07:138 - The volume change for the hitsounds sounds very weird here imo. Stick to ~40-50% for non KIAI and ~60% your KIAI/"Chorus" sections I just follow the "Kiai mod"

00:07:674 (7,8,1) - unnecessary jump/anti-jump And your suggestion is?
00:11:424 (4) - this slider ending would be unsnapped if you change the beat snap divisor. Move the end-point much closer to the actual ending of the slider. Done
00:12:227 (5,1) - anti-jump Done
00:26:691 (1,2,3) - messy spacing, disable grid-snap to place this or use grid lvl 4 I don't do that.
00:28:834 (1,2,3) - ^ No.
00:33:388 (2) - makes no sense to silence the slider beginning and turning point here oO I silence this to put a clap at finish of the slider
01:11:691 (3,4,5) - not in line with previous notes Done
01:38:745 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - maybe use some sliders here to break up the boring 1/1 circles? HAHAHAHAHA, It's a normal diff, not a Easy Diff =/
01:42:227 (X) - add a note here? (Maybe turn the three notes into a repeat-slider) I put a Slider... Done
01:46:245 (2) - shorten by 1/2 and add 1x repeat Asdf... D:
02:21:602 (1) - start en end on the big white ticks Done

Some examples of "more notes":
02:07:674 (X) - add note No
02:08:209 (X) - ^ No
02:10:352 (X) - ^ No
02:15:174 (X) - ^ Done


You didn't follow the rules in my modding queue but I like the song so here is your ~star Hahahaha, Sorry u.u Thnks Anyway ^^
jossieP

p3n wrote:

[i_k' Switchback]
Hitsound volume is annoying! Reduce to 60% at least. Better 50%. now 55% volume
Very inconsistent spacing throughout the map. Seems you switched from 0,8x to 0,6x and back to 0,7x/0,8x by accident. that was not an accident o.O
The grid-size you used would be ok for very symmetric patterns but as you use many curves and circle-patterns, you should disable grid-snapping and work with x/y coords, [Ctrl]-snapping and pay attention to your distance-spacings. sorry, Im not symetrical because of I dont know how
Download: Celldweller - Switchback (MercurialSpectre) [i_k' Switchback!].osu
Topic Starter
Mercurial

ikari_kyon wrote:

p3n wrote:

[i_k' Switchback]
Hitsound volume is annoying! Reduce to 60% at least. Better 50%. now 55% volume
Very inconsistent spacing throughout the map. Seems you switched from 0,8x to 0,6x and back to 0,7x/0,8x by accident. that was not an accident o.O
The grid-size you used would be ok for very symmetric patterns but as you use many curves and circle-patterns, you should disable grid-snapping and work with x/y coords, [Ctrl]-snapping and pay attention to your distance-spacings. sorry, Im not symetrical because of I dont know how
Gracias Kyon :3
Ekaru
You only use 50% of the mp3; there's like 3 minutes of unused mp3 left over.

This needs to be cropped to be rankable - ask in #modHelp or post in General Questions if you don't know how to do so. PM me for a remod after this is fixed, please.
indyinyou
[Normal]

00:25:888 : add fin
00:51:602 : ^
01:30:174 : add note and fin
01:38:745 : fin
01:43:031 : ^
01:47:316 : ^
01:52:138 : ^

they're just suggestions

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Topic Starter
Mercurial

Ekaru wrote:

You only use 50% of the mp3; there's like 3 minutes of unused mp3 left over.

This needs to be cropped to be rankable - ask in #modHelp or post in General Questions if you don't know how to do so. PM me for a remod after this is fixed, please.
Total Time: 2:29
Draining Time: 2:19

:?:
ziin
02- Switchback.mp3 properties:
Duration: 0:05:02
File size: 4.73 MB
Topic Starter
Mercurial

ziin wrote:

02- Switchback.mp3 properties:
Duration: 0:05:02
File size: 4.73 MB
Fix'd
Ekaru
Switchback:

00:21:602 (1) - I would rather replace this with a pattern like 00:19:459 (1,2) - , but flipped horizontally. It'll play better
00:23:745 (1,2) - Significantly increase the spacing of these two notes for consistency while you're at it
01:32:316 (1) - See 00:21:602 (1)

Razorblade:

01:25:888 (1) - Make this prettier, please
02:09:281 (7) - ^

I thought some of the 1/2 jumps were a bit too big for such an easy Hard, but okay

Normal:

00:07:674 (7,8) - Too tricky for a Normal, IMO. Newer players will think it's a 1/1 from its context. BAM! Combo-break -> ragequit
00:11:424 (4,5) - Space these out; they feel way too close.
00:38:209 (3) - Make this prettier, please
00:57:763 (1,2,3) - This is also a bit too tricky for a Normal. It's also really awkward
01:46:513 (3) - Make this prettier, please
02:29:370 (2) - I would replace the clap on this slider's endpoint with a Finish.

Easy:

00:42:495 (2) - The blue approach circle blends in perfectly with (1), and you can't see the hit circle itself, either. I would delete this and give (1) a finish instead.
02:06:602 (1,2,3,4) - I would move this combo down so (3) isn't overlapped by the HP Bar
02:10:888 (1,2,3,4) - ^

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Topic Starter
Mercurial

Ekaru wrote:

Switchback:

00:21:602 (1) - I would rather replace this with a pattern like 00:19:459 (1,2) - , but flipped horizontally. It'll play better
00:23:745 (1,2) - Significantly increase the spacing of these two notes for consistency while you're at it
01:32:316 (1) - See 00:21:602 (1)

Razorblade:

01:25:888 (1) - Make this prettier, please
02:09:281 (7) - ^

I thought some of the 1/2 jumps were a bit too big for such an easy Hard, but okay

Normal:

00:07:674 (7,8) - Too tricky for a Normal, IMO. Newer players will think it's a 1/1 from its context. BAM! Combo-break -> ragequit
00:11:424 (4,5) - Space these out; they feel way too close.
00:38:209 (3) - Make this prettier, please
00:57:763 (1,2,3) - This is also a bit too tricky for a Normal. It's also really awkward
01:46:513 (3) - Make this prettier, please
02:29:370 (2) - I would replace the clap on this slider's endpoint with a Finish.

Easy:

00:42:495 (2) - The blue approach circle blends in perfectly with (1), and you can't see the hit circle itself, either. I would delete this and give (1) a finish instead.
02:06:602 (1,2,3,4) - I would move this combo down so (3) isn't overlapped by the HP Bar
02:10:888 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Star

Thnks, Editing.
mancuso_JM_
star ;)
ziin

Ekaru wrote:

Easy:
00:42:495 (2) - The blue approach circle blends in perfectly with (1), and you can't see the hit circle itself, either. I would delete this and give (1) a finish instead.
lmao. I can see it just fine. Gave it a new combo. Extending it out would just be tedious.
All fixed.

Pretty funny my version is 2 kB bigger than normal.

Download: Celldweller - Switchback (MercurialSpectre) [ziin's Easy].osu
jossieP

Ekaru wrote:

Switchback:

00:21:602 (1) - I would rather replace this with a pattern like 00:19:459 (1,2) - , but flipped horizontally. It'll play better I keep it, but if someone make a refference to this later Ill change it
00:23:745 (1,2) - Significantly increase the spacing of these two notes for consistency while you're at it antijump? x3
01:32:316 (1) - See 00:21:602 (1) again?

Star thanks
JauiPlaY
hihi~ :)
some suggestions:

[General]
add a preview point.
delete the .osb file if you want.
and what a weird ending...i mean, you'd better to find another .mp3 file.

[ziin's Easy]
00:17:316(1,2) - i don't think those sliders need claps.
00:23:209(x) - add a note.
00:24:816(1) - too short for a easy, maybe a slider?
00:38:745(1,2) - maybe unrankable? well i'm not sure about it...but please, find a MAT and ask about it.
01:20:531(1) - too short for a easy, maybe a slider?
01:25:352(2) - remove clap.
01:38:477(T) - set kiai at 01:38:745.
01:49:191(x) - add a note.
01:51:334(x) - ^
01:53:477(x) - ^
01:55:620(x) - ^
01:57:763(x) - ^

[Normal]
hmm, do not set any kiai time at break time please.
00:01:245(T) - useless timing point.
00:04:459(1,2,3) - spacing.
00:11:424(4,5) - ^
01:38:477(T) - set kiai at 01:38:745.

[Keilara's Razorblade]
it's no need to map this song with 1/6 snap.
00:33:120(1,2) - 01:11:156(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - weird rhythm imo.
01:27:138(2) - the slider starts at 01:27:093.
01:37:138(5,6) - do not use 1/8 sliders here please, it's unnecessary.

[i_k' Switchback!]
00:26:691(5,1) - do not overlapped well.
no any other technical errors. but the map do not looks well imo. try to think again about your mapping and make it neat a bit more please.

that's all.
so
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