no fish in first page -10/10000000 score
Putting it in BBcode is too obvious for me not to have tested it, it causes moire. but I can also do it as a complement, if anyone wants.z0z wrote:
i think you should post these pages as .pngs
also did you turn people here into girls?
Thank you, you are helping me a lot!Ymir wrote:
I actually think the Manga looks pretty good, I dont know what people are on about.
Maybe their expectations are too high?
On a separate note, I think you should drop the overuse of honorifics, or change the names to actually match those honorifics.
For example, hearing "Serraionga-chan" is quite awkward and jarring, it just doesnt work.
Maybe a nickname like "Serri-chan"? Personally think it works a lot better (obviously you choose the names, I'm not the greatest at this stuff either, evidently).
You can PM me if it is relevant.Winnyace wrote:
I wanted to ask something, but I will get smacked by the GMTs if I do so.
The process of making it is cool, so unless college is really hard (I'm going to start it next year) and I have very little time, I'll continue the manga as long as I can.Patatitta wrote:
honestly, what I said in a previous thread, don't sweat the details too much, just do it, this is liek the third or fourth time we get a osu manga announced and none of them passed like the third chapter
community/forums/topics/564898?n=1Behrauder wrote:
The process of making it is cool, so unless college is really hard (I'm going to start it next year) and I have very little time, I'll continue the manga as long as I can.Patatitta wrote:
honestly, what I said in a previous thread, don't sweat the details too much, just do it, this is liek the third or fourth time we get a osu manga announced and none of them passed like the third chapter
Also, can you find these mangas? It would be interesting for me if I could see them, and the posts in these threads.
Those are about osu! in general, not OT specificPatatitta wrote:
community/forums/topics/564898?n=1Behrauder wrote:
The process of making it is cool, so unless college is really hard (I'm going to start it next year) and I have very little time, I'll continue the manga as long as I can.Patatitta wrote:
honestly, what I said in a previous thread, don't sweat the details too much, just do it, this is liek the third or fourth time we get a osu manga announced and none of them passed like the third chapter
Also, can you find these mangas? It would be interesting for me if I could see them, and the posts in these threads.
community/forums/topics/1847647?n=1
community/forums/topics/1843133?n=1
me brainstorming my own novel for lore of my entire characters (basically the size of like, 30 bibles) and expecting to write at minimum a chapter a day except not really because im still brainstormingPatatitta wrote:
yeah 8 pages per month is actually a pretty good thing, consider that most mangas do release a chapter a month, yes those chapters are usually a bit longer but they're professionals
Noted, thanks for your contribution!sametdze wrote:
it would be funny if you include a person who has changed their osu name many times, and then have another character call them by one of their former names without realising lol
"hello canadian-baka!"
"who?"
"you!"
"i'm ashton now.."
Behrauder wrote:
⚠ IMPORTANT THINGS, read carefully: ⚠
To see the manga, access it on a computer (not a cell phone), and set the zoom to 100% (it is not 100% by default). You should take these preventive measures to avoid the moire effect.
If you don't know what the moire effect is, it's when there is a strange unwanted pattern due to something to do with pixel overlap or something like that (which makes several manga look strange at some zooms other than 100%), but it is better explained here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Moir%C3%A9_pattern
The manga reading order is from right to left, and top to bottom.
Thanks!Reyalp51 wrote:
now this is the advanced autism i wanted to see
Hmm, I don't think I'll do that, but if more people say they want it to change, maybe I could consider it.Reyalp51 wrote:
my only suggestion would be to try making really intense scenarios instead of slice of life but thats a personal taste of mine.
Actually it wasn't 100% on time...Reyalp51 wrote:
Making what you promised in time is really impressing so congrats dude
;-; Fixed.Reyalp51 wrote:
also disapierd
I can make you cosplay her soon, that's actually a good idea.- Marco - wrote:
man i'm not dressed like her... at least i'm qt :3
?sametdze wrote:
SEHRRRRRRRRRRRRRR GUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHTTTTTTTTTT
AYOOOOOOBehrauder wrote:
I can make you cosplay her soon, that's actually a good idea.- Marco - wrote:
man i'm not dressed like her... at least i'm qt :3
Behrauder wrote:
⚠ IMPORTANT THINGS, read carefully: ⚠
To see the manga, access it on a computer (not a cell phone), and set the zoom to 100% (it is not 100% by default). You should take these preventive measures to avoid the moire effect.
If you don't know what the moire effect is, it's when there is a strange unwanted pattern due to something to do with pixel overlap or something like that (which makes several manga look strange at some zooms other than 100%), but it is better explained here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Moir%C3%A9_pattern
The manga reading order is from right to left, and top to bottom.
I expected to see the plate give an explanation as to why abraker is bald. And he totally should've been a teacher instead.Behrauder wrote:
Besides, did you pay attention to the license plate?
i'm surprised you can listen to music with lyrics while reading, that's not a skill I havereffty_gag wrote:
read this manga while listening to "the low end theory" album kinda fire
BRO HOW DO YOU KNOW I WAS READING LYRICS WHILE LISTENING TO THIS AND ALSO READ THIS MANGA, ARE YOU A STALKER ?????!!!Patatitta wrote:
i'm surprised you can listen to music with lyrics while reading, that's not a skill I havereffty_gag wrote:
read this manga while listening to "the low end theory" album kinda fire
what? no? I think you misunderstood itreffty_gag wrote:
BRO HOW DO YOU KNOW I WAS READING LYRICS WHILE LISTENING TO THIS AND ALSO READ THIS MANGA, ARE YOU A STALKER ?????!!!Patatitta wrote:
i'm surprised you can listen to music with lyrics while reading, that's not a skill I havereffty_gag wrote:
read this manga while listening to "the low end theory" album kinda fire
I thought about doing this after the third chapter. It's quite likely.Kobold84 wrote:
You should switch to 4koma sometimes to regain motivation. It's easy to make, which results in more posts in between normal chapter releases. You also immediately see the results of your work without serious time commitment. Win-win.
oh sorryPatatitta wrote:
what? no? I think you misunderstood itreffty_gag wrote:
BRO HOW DO YOU KNOW I WAS READING LYRICS WHILE LISTENING TO THIS AND ALSO READ THIS MANGA, ARE YOU A STALKER ?????!!!Patatitta wrote:
i'm surprised you can listen to music with lyrics while reading, that's not a skill I havereffty_gag wrote:
read this manga while listening to "the low end theory" album kinda fire
you say you listened to that album while reading
That album has lyrics
I was like "damn impressive you can listen to music with lyrics while reading"
I did not realize you were actively seraching the lyrics on google in the middle of reading the manga chapter
The threat is gone alreadysametdze wrote:
you have nobody to blame but me if this ends up going south
by the time i wake up tomorrow i'm more than sure corne would've deleted everything, so you've got nothing to worry about
I read thread instead of threat, lol.Corne2Plum3 wrote:
The threat is gone alreadysametdze wrote:
you have nobody to blame but me if this ends up going south
by the time i wake up tomorrow i'm more than sure corne would've deleted everything, so you've got nothing to worry about
Behrauder wrote:
Let's try not to derail the thread, please.
It's art.Behrauder wrote:
I read both back to back again today and didn't notice it at all.Behrauder wrote:
I didn't know if my way of making the shadow on the characters' necks was good, so I decided to remove it and get your feedback on what is better.
Interesting, I hadn't thought of that. I guess I'm not very good with these things. The first time I read a manga was about 4 days before I started creating chapter 1, just to get an idea of how to do it. In fact, I only read a few random chapters of about 10 random mangas, lol.Kobold84 wrote:
It's art.Behrauder wrote:
I read both back to back again today and didn't notice it at all.Behrauder wrote:
I didn't know if my way of making the shadow on the characters' necks was good, so I decided to remove it and get your feedback on what is better.
Feedback time:
The chapter itself was all right on the weirdness scale, I didn't get the ending until I read through your explanation, and that's mostly on how fast you transition between scenes and frames. You put in too much information in frames, so there are issues with pacing. You can fit a lot more than simple dialogues within a single frame: some hesitation, reaction and a lot more to have it more presentable and, I guess, personal to the reader?
And you absolutely should use visual space (as shown in my example below) to make the reader read at the exact pace you want him to read to deliver the moment just so it feels more "right". This way conversations flow more naturally.
Well, you do use these and other techniques sometimes, so my advice is to use it more often.
Hire me as an editor to find out more tips and tricks.Behrauder wrote:
Interesting, I hadn't thought of that. I guess I'm not very good with these things. The first time I read a manga was about 4 days before I started creating chapter 1, just to get an idea of how to do it. In fact, I only read a few random chapters of about 10 random mangas, lol.
I will try to implement this.
Yep.Behrauder wrote:
Oh, and the quality is only like that because you had to zoom out to take a screenshot of everything, right?
I also don't know why, but I agree.Aireunaeus wrote:
Idk why but abraker reminds me of osaka
Because it's kind of predictable...- Marco - wrote:
how do you know this is my usual day?
What for? Spare the poor Behrauder, it's been less than two weeks.Corne2Plum3 wrote:
bump
Wasn't it 1 chapter per week at the beginning?Kobold84 wrote:
What for? Spare the poor Behrauder, it's been less than two weeks.Corne2Plum3 wrote:
bump
How would I do that? It's 8 pages per chapter (plus an extra)... I don't do this 24 hours a day (at most, 12 when time is running out, lol).Corne2Plum3 wrote:
Wasn't it 1 chapter per week at the beginning?Kobold84 wrote:
What for? Spare the poor Behrauder, it's been less than two weeks.Corne2Plum3 wrote:
bump
The skull represents something else.Achromalia wrote:
who here would have a skull as a hairpin e.e are you ripping me off
new characters, interested to see how this develops :>
then i haven't a clue what or who it's for,,Behrauder wrote:
The skull represents something else.Achromalia wrote:
who here would have a skull as a hairpin e.e are you ripping me off
new characters, interested to see how this develops :>
Behrauder wrote:
⚠ IMPORTANT THINGS, read carefully: ⚠
To see the manga, access it on a computer (not a cell phone), and set the zoom to 100% (it is not 100% by default). You should take these preventive measures to avoid the moire effect.
If you don't know what the moire effect is, it's when there is a strange unwanted pattern due to something to do with pixel overlap or something like that (which makes several manga look strange at some zooms other than 100%), but it is better explained here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Moir%C3%A9_pattern
The manga reading order is from right to left, and top to bottom.