Since no one said that the screentones are bad, I think I'll keep the style.
And yes, just like on the first page, they are all anime girls.

People should not be afraid to say what they think...
I think I will stop using honorifics, unless it is a "-sama" or something that makes a difference.
Putting it in BBcode is too obvious for me not to have tested it, it causes moire. but I can also do it as a complement, if anyone wants.z0z wrote:
i think you should post these pages as .pngs
also did you turn people here into girls?
And yes, just like on the first page, they are all anime girls.
Thank you, you are helping me a lot!Ymir wrote:
I actually think the Manga looks pretty good, I dont know what people are on about.
Maybe their expectations are too high?
On a separate note, I think you should drop the overuse of honorifics, or change the names to actually match those honorifics.
For example, hearing "Serraionga-chan" is quite awkward and jarring, it just doesnt work.
Maybe a nickname like "Serri-chan"? Personally think it works a lot better (obviously you choose the names, I'm not the greatest at this stuff either, evidently).

People should not be afraid to say what they think...
I think I will stop using honorifics, unless it is a "-sama" or something that makes a difference.