DM FOR MUTUAL wrote:

This isn't really criticism because idk what you're cooking but a few questions to do with writing:

1. What was you're thinking with making samet, Marco and serroinga the main characters? Also do the characters relate to the irl counterparts in any way, because I didn't really get any indication from the first page, just 3 anime girls that share the same name and maybe some design aspects. Granted it's just the first page though

2. Why a storytelling club, does it have something to do with OT? I feel like if you wanted to make a club out of OT, it would be something like a club that is filled with misfits that has absolutely no direction or purpose and they get up to crazy shenanigans all the time. Or is this more like an OT school and this is a club in it?

Really cool thread though, we're entering Valhalla with this one

z0z wrote:

i think you should post these pages as .pngs

also did you turn people here into girls?

Ymir wrote:

I actually think the Manga looks pretty good, I dont know what people are on about.
Maybe their expectations are too high?

On a separate note, I think you should drop the overuse of honorifics, or change the names to actually match those honorifics.

For example, hearing "Serraionga-chan" is quite awkward and jarring, it just doesnt work.
Maybe a nickname like "Serri-chan"? Personally think it works a lot better (obviously you choose the names, I'm not the greatest at this stuff either, evidently).

Winnyace wrote:

I wanted to ask something, but I will get smacked by the GMTs if I do so.

Patatitta wrote:

honestly, what I said in a previous thread, don't sweat the details too much, just do it, this is liek the third or fourth time we get a osu manga announced and none of them passed like the third chapter

Behrauder wrote:

Patatitta wrote:

honestly, what I said in a previous thread, don't sweat the details too much, just do it, this is liek the third or fourth time we get a osu manga announced and none of them passed like the third chapter

The process of making it is cool, so unless college is really hard (I'm going to start it next year) and I have very little time, I'll continue the manga as long as I can.

Also, can you find these mangas? It would be interesting for me if I could see them, and the posts in these threads.

Patatitta wrote:

Behrauder wrote:

Patatitta wrote:

honestly, what I said in a previous thread, don't sweat the details too much, just do it, this is liek the third or fourth time we get a osu manga announced and none of them passed like the third chapter

The process of making it is cool, so unless college is really hard (I'm going to start it next year) and I have very little time, I'll continue the manga as long as I can.

Also, can you find these mangas? It would be interesting for me if I could see them, and the posts in these threads.

community/forums/topics/564898?n=1
community/forums/topics/1847647?n=1
community/forums/topics/1843133?n=1

Patatitta wrote:

yeah 8 pages per month is actually a pretty good thing, consider that most mangas do release a chapter a month, yes those chapters are usually a bit longer but they're professionals

sametdze wrote:

it would be funny if you include a person who has changed their osu name many times, and then have another character call them by one of their former names without realising lol

"hello canadian-baka!"
"who?"
"you!"
"i'm ashton now.."

Behrauder wrote:

⚠ IMPORTANT THINGS, read carefully: ⚠

To see the manga, access it on a computer (not a cell phone), and set the zoom to 100% (it is not 100% by default). You should take these preventive measures to avoid the moire effect.

If you don't know what the moire effect is, it's when there is a strange unwanted pattern due to something to do with pixel overlap or something like that (which makes several manga look strange at some zooms other than 100%), but it is better explained here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Moir%C3%A9_pattern



The manga reading order is from right to left, and top to bottom.

Reyalp51 wrote:

now this is the advanced autism i wanted to see

Reyalp51 wrote:

my only suggestion would be to try making really intense scenarios instead of slice of life but thats a personal taste of mine.

Reyalp51 wrote:

Making what you promised in time is really impressing so congrats dude

Reyalp51 wrote:

also disapierd

- Marco - wrote:

man i'm not dressed like her... at least i'm qt :3

sametdze wrote:

SEHRRRRRRRRRRRRRR GUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHTTTTTTTTTT

Behrauder wrote:

- Marco - wrote:

man i'm not dressed like her... at least i'm qt :3

I can make you cosplay her soon, that's actually a good idea.

1. It would be cool if there was an extra page (right after the cover page) on who those characters are/based on because I had no idea it was actually portraying real people. It would give context to new readers.
2. I'm hoping the comedy later on will have a little more "oompf" to it. The punchline at the end felt a bit awkward to end the chapter there.