[General]
- The vid is quite ero and it should be unrankable.
There are only a few scenes plus it could be considered 16+ only in one point, because the rest are cutted. So it isn't unrankable.
[Astom's Easy]
00:05:016 (3) - 1 Less repeat seems better ( were following voice... so.. )
[Normal]
00:03:673 (1) - a 1/1 repeat slider feel better
Example00:07:255 (1) - One less repeat and add 00:08:598 (2) -
00:10:837 (5,6,7) - Soft Hitsound on those
00:39:493 (2) - Manually Stack or Make Stack Leniency much lower and manually stack 00:40:389 (4,5) - (
example, Press Shift + Ctrl while doing this)
00:43:523 (2) - Blanket for 00:44:643 (3) - Like
this00:47:105 (2) - Same thing here
01:05:911 (6,7) - Place them like
this01:18:673 (5) - Make it an Arch? it seems to flow better
Example01:19:792 (6,7,8) - Move and reshape like [url=http://puu.sh/3zkt]this[/url]?
[eldnL's Hard]
00:09:493 (x) - Add a Note
00:09:717 (x) - Substitute it with a slider (
this seems good )
00:11:285 (1,2,3,4) - Soft Hitsound are better here
00:41:285 (6) - Make it more similiar to a
blanket?
[Insane]
00:27:516 (3) - 2 grid up or down(like 00:25:389 (2,3,4) - )
00:30:314 (4) - Blanket 00:30:091 (3) - ( refer to image of the next suggestion )
00:30:762 (5) - like
this00:35:016 (6) - You're stopping after Vocal end... so delete this note?
00:48:001 (3,4) - don't like the overlap
01:07:926 (6) - Use a different shape like
Blanket? Blanket with correct spacing?01:46:658 (2) - 2 grid down ( or up )
01:47:889 (2) - 2 grid up ( or down )
01:49:008 (2) - 2 grid down ( or up )
01:49:568 (5) - stack under the position 01:49:008 (2) - have now
01:50:799 (3) - 2 grid right ( or left )
01:53:822 (3) - ^
01:55:053 (3) - 2 grid left ( or right )
01:56:173 (2) - 2 grid up ( or down )
01:56:844 (6) - 2 grid down ( or up )
Most were on graphic side, so... i can STAR!