kanpakyin wrote:

[General]

1. Disable "Letterbox during breaks" Done
2. Add these thing to tag: hentai game eroge yuri (Follow the Ranked version) Done
3. Probably try offset :101? (+10),it seems better for me. (btw,please check the mod before you check this). Seem ok to me, will change if more people suggest this
4. Consider a silent slider(sliderslide.wav)?Some places are little bit noisy during gameplay.Done, not sure if it works.

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1. 00:41:285(x)- Probably add a slider here?You might need to consistent the spacing after fixing. Done, may need some adjustment
   <span>
   probably like this?

   [img]<a%20href="http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/114159[/img]
   ">http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/114159[/img][/box]</a></span>
2. 00:45:986(1)- No please,this slider is coverd by (4)- and the skin element.Please don't make this in Normal difficulty. I presume you mean this cover the end of slider 1? I just rotate slider 4 so u can see the end of slider 1, a little bit.
   <span>
   Something you can see it

   [img]<a%20href="http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/114161[/img]
   ">http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/114161[/img][/box]</a></span>
3. 00:57:404(x)- Please remove this break and map something here,you should at lease remove thart break because No point adding break there when the last part has heavier HP rape. Added a spinner like in hard
4. 01:00:091(3.4)- Please unstack these,it's feel bad and ugly during gameplay.Also it may make confused to newbie. Done
5. 01:58:523(3)- Consider remove the clap on this slider?Seems a bit weird and noisy. Done

[Insane] Note: Wasn't done fixing spacing yet.

1. The arrangement is really chaos!Please think twice before arrange next time!
2. 00:14:419(x)- IMO,you should map this break!Insane is for expert,so the expert should have a large stamina to play the whole song without any break!(Since this song/map is not too long). No, I'm keeping breaks consistence across all diffs.
3. 00:25:837(x)- Wait,please.Why you didn't map this part?I think you can stuff some notes and sliders on it.Now is quite empty! Done
4. 00:28:076(1-10)- Why this combo is longer than others?So,please consistent the combo!If I were you,I'll add a new combo at (6)- Done
5. 00:41:620(x),00:41:956(x)- Please add a note on these places to keep the play flow!You may hear some "ta" sound on these please,so please add a note on it and add a whistle on it as well! Done, but no whistle, sound betters imo.
6. 00:42:404(1-12)- Same as 00:28:076!Please consistent the new combo! Done
7. 00:47:105(5)- Confused Spacing!Why you reduced the spacing suddenly?It totally broken the flow,also feel bad and weird during gameplay!Fix it please! Used distant snapping should be fixed
8. 00:48:225(4)- ^ Same! ^
9. 01:02:553(6)- Weird slider,consider change it?However it's depands on you. Done
10. 01:21:135(5.6.7.8)- Really bad during gameplay,at least it doesn't fit a "jump",so you should consistent the spacing here! Done
11. 01:27:628(7)- Add a new combo here to cinsistent the combo length. Done
12. 01:35:911(6)- ^ Same! Done
13. 01:45:538(1~end)- Please add more hitsound please!Player will feel humdrum and boring with few hitsound on few notes or slider!Whistle is a good hitsound,please make good use on it! Done

Shiki wrote:

Hi~ Sorry for the delay ;_;
As requested, I don't mod easy diff.

The title should be Himitsujikake no Apple The ranked version doesn't capitalize apple so no.

[Normal]
00:35:688 (2) - Whistle at its end? Done
00:36:359 (3) - ^ ^
00:40:613 (5) - Whistle here? Done
01:05:016 (4,5) - Stack them perfectly. They are? Checked this in grid 4.
01:47:105 (4) - Add whistle? Done
01:54:269 (4) - ^ ^

[Insane] Note: Wasn't done fixing spacing yet.
There are too many spacing changes, if possible, please rearrange the map with 1.0x spacing and don't jump randomly. k, used 0.8x and 1.0x spacing throughout most of the map.
00:24:941 (1) - Delete the cirlce please. It doesn't fit the music. Done
00:58:299 (3) - New combo here because the spacing changes. Done
00:59:419 (7) - ^ ^
01:04:792 (4) - Remvoe new combo, for consistency. Done
01:17:329 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 2.2x 0.8x 2.0x spacings appear in same combo ;_; Refer to note, fixed
01:22:702 (10,11) - Why do you reduce the spacing suddenly? ^
01:23:598 (1,...,4) - ^? ^
01:26:508 (5,6) - The spacing increases suddenly... ^
01:42:404 (5) - New combo here? Done
The diff needs a large number of changes imo.

When you fix the spacing problems I will shoot a star

spboxer3 wrote:

[Normal]
00:41:285 (7) - why here has X1.5 this Normal I think you doesn't need it! Just something to make it more interesting and it feels better imo
00:49:568 (1,2) - stack? already stacked? and i think it's stacked perfectly
01:05:016 (4,5) - ^ No, keeping consistency with similar combos in this diff. eg. 00:31:658 (1,2,3,4)

[Insane]
00:44:643 (4) - left and up 1 grid(size 3)? Done
01:11:061 - remove finish? K
01:25:837 (4) - stange rhythm? fine to me, but may change if you got some ideas
01:44:195 (1,2,3) - www not pretty triangle...(fix?) Fixed, move (2) one grid right in grid 3

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
- The vid is quite ero and it should be unrankable. Read post I wrote above on this page
- SB, make it disappear gradually instead of suddenly. Intend to let it disappear at the same time as the title, but suggestion followed
- Try to put a spinner after it ends (02:00:091) Need to discuss with Astom & eldnl since it would be weird if only Normal and Insane have a spinner

[Insane]
00:01:434 (4) - +whistle? Done
00:05:016 (3) - whistle at the first tick only Done
00:10:837 (1) - place at (400,120) Done
00:32:105 (3,4) - right 1 grid, (4) whistle Did not specify which size grid, used grid size 4 since 3 feel too much, whistle added
00:34:792 (5) - sounds odd, try to place a single note here, then a 1/2 slider 1 beat after this. Done, rearranged notes to new spacing
00:50:016 (3,4,5) - try to make them in a better way, the spacing can be tweeked a bit in harder diff. Hm, i like how it is now, moved (4,5,6,7) 1 grid left, 1 grid up in grid 3 and adjusted spacing accordingly
00:56:956 (3,4) - left 1 grid Done in grid 4 for same reason as 00:32:105
00:59:419 (1,2) - clap Done
01:07:255 (4,5) - whistle Done
01:26:173 (4) - tweek the direction of slider and extend this by 1/4 beat Done
01:59:867 (6) - I prefer softer sound. Used eldnL's Hard as reference so will change if he changes

placement of claps in the kiai time is pretty good for me, just try to be more consistent in placing whistle. Also in insane the rhythm maybe a bit empty between two phrases, and more creation on the rhythm maybe needed. I'm up for suggestions

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OD+1? ._. Done
00:00:091 (1) - try this code

128,64,91,2,0,B|164:96|164:96|256:96,1,140

that (1,3) completely overlaps. Fixed, i think
01:05:016 (4,5) - stack properly Stack as best as i could (no grid snap manually)
01:22:926 (5) - stack on the slider properly ^
01:59:867 (4) - ._. ~ ??

Normal -> the placement of hitsound is much better than insane ._____. Just one more problem: try to stack things properly, use more precise tools like grid level 4 or off the grid snap to stack or tweek the sliders that objects are stacks on the same pixels. Fixed the things you mentioned in your mod

Insane -> may need more mods especially on hitsounds, some doubts on new combo as well? : / Hmm, don't see any big issues with the new combos. Hitsound is probably uninteresting, but there isn't anything that is distracting either. Accepting suggestions.

1. If you're going to have a hitcircle.png in your map's folder, you got to have a hitcircleoverlay.png and a approachcircle .png.
2. If you have a cursor.png in your map's folder, you got to have a cursortrail.png.
3. Insane has a different preview point than eldnL's Hard, Normal and Astom's Easy.
4. Maybe a lead-in time of 2 seconds is better than 3 seconds.

1. 01:48:896 (2)-Add a finish on the end?

1. Hmm... Maybe decrease both the Overall Difficulty and Approach Rate by one tick?
2. 00:10:389 (x)-Add a note here? Plus, add a clap as well?
3. 00:10:837 (5)-Put a new combo here?
4. 00:28:076 (1)-Add a finish on the end.
5. 00:42:404 (1)-^
6. 00:53:374 (1)-^
7. 00:55:389 (4)-Add a finish on the beginning.
8. 01:00:986 (5)-Add a finish on the beginning. And put a new combo here?
9. 01:09:046 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning.
10. 01:26:732 (6)-^
11. 01:49:344 (9)-Put a new combo here?
12. 01:54:493 (5)-Add a finish?

1. 01:45:314 (x)-It feels like there should be a note here.... and a clap maybe?

1. 00:26:285 (6)-Add a finish on the end?
2. 00:53:598 (2)-^
3. 00:57:180 (4)-Add a finish.
4. 01:16:882 (5)-^
5. 01:31:210 (5)-^
6. 01:52:702 (6)-I think it would be better if you remove the finish from the beginning and add a finish on the end...

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

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00:03:673 (1) - a 1/1 repeat slider feel better Example Done
00:07:255 (1) - One less repeat and add 00:08:598 (2) - Done
00:10:837 (5,6,7) - Soft Hitsound on those Done
00:39:493 (2) - Manually Stack or Make Stack Leniency much lower and manually stack 00:40:389 (4,5) - (example, Press Shift + Ctrl while doing this) Not really sure if i fixed since it already look perfectly stacked to me. Moved a little bit with grid and distant snap turn off.
00:43:523 (2) - Blanket for 00:44:643 (3) - Like this Tried my best to copy your slider, done
00:47:105 (2) - Same thing here ^
01:05:911 (6,7) - Place them like this Done
01:18:673 (5) - Make it an Arch? it seems to flow better Example Again, tried my best to copy your slider
01:19:792 (6,7,8) - Move and reshape like this? k Done

[Insane]
00:27:516 (3) - 2 grid up or down(like 00:25:389 (2,3,4) - ) Done
00:30:314 (4) - Blanket 00:30:091 (3) - ( refer to image of the next suggestion ) Done
00:30:762 (5) - like this ^
00:35:016 (6) - You're stopping after Vocal end... so delete this note? Weird, why was that slider there in the first place, but i'll keep it to keep with the "flow"
00:48:001 (3,4) - don't like the overlap Feels a little weird, but don't have any other ideas.
01:07:926 (6) - Use a different shape like Blanket? Blanket with correct spacing? Done
01:46:658 (2) - 2 grid down ( or up ) Prefer 1 grid. Down
01:47:889 (2) - 2 grid up ( or down ) ^ up
01:49:008 (2) - 2 grid down ( or up ) ^ down
01:49:568 (5) - stack under the position 01:49:008 (2) - have now Done
01:50:799 (3) - 2 grid right ( or left ) ^ right
01:53:822 (3) - ^ ^ Right
01:55:053 (3) - 2 grid left ( or right ) ^ left
01:56:173 (2) - 2 grid up ( or down ) ^ up
01:56:844 (6) - 2 grid down ( or up ) ^ down

Most were on graphic side, so... i can STAR!

Roddie wrote:

General

1. If you're going to have a hitcircle.png in your map's folder, you got to have a hitcircleoverlay.png and a approachcircle .png. Deleted since it was simply a more white hitcircle.png
2. If you have a cursor.png in your map's folder, you got to have a cursortrail.png. Done, add the one from the templateskin
3. Insane has a different preview point than eldnL's Hard, Normal and Astom's Easy. took me a while to find out how to check what the preview point were for the other difficulties. Fixed
4. Maybe a lead-in time of 2 seconds is better than 3 seconds.Done

Normal

1. Hmm... Maybe decrease both the Overall Difficulty and Approach Rate by one tick? Done
2. 00:10:389 (x)-Add a note here? Plus, add a clap as well? Tried it, feels odd so no
3. 00:10:837 (5)-Put a new combo here? Done
4. 00:28:076 (1)-Add a finish on the end. Done
5. 00:42:404 (1)-^ ^
6. 00:53:374 (1)-^ ^
7. 00:55:389 (4)-Add a finish on the beginning. Done
8. 01:00:986 (5)-Add a finish on the beginning. And put a new combo here? Done
9. 01:09:046 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning. Done
10. 01:26:732 (6)-^ ^
11. 01:49:344 (9)-Put a new combo here? would be odd for this to be the only 1 combo
12. 01:54:493 (5)-Add a finish? Done

Insane

1. 00:26:285 (6)-Add a finish on the end? Done
2. 00:53:598 (2)-^ ^
3. 00:57:180 (4)-Add a finish. Done
4. 01:16:882 (5)-^ ^
5. 01:31:210 (5)-^ ^
6. 01:52:702 (6)-I think it would be better if you remove the finish from the beginning and add a finish on the end... Done

Good luck. And here's a star.

Zelos wrote:

Folder:
All good here! k

General:
If the video really is 18+, it probably isn't allowed. Hm, will wait on mat/bat opinion first.
Use the same slider tick rate for all difficulties. The only difficulty with a different tickrate is astom's, when he check his diff, he will probably fix it.

Normal:
00:49:568 (1) - turn on grid snap 4 and move to the right 1 grid point? I've adjusted this slider in grid 4 so that it is perfectly symmetrical.
01:20:464 (2) - this is very very slightly touching the HP bar. Moved down a little bit more.

Insane:
01:59:195 (5,6) - stack the ends just a bit more! Done

Star

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi merchat7

[General]
- I've read the previous post about this but still the video is not good. I appreciate the warning but even the ranked one are barely rankable with the censored effect. This "bare" video will surely be refused by MAT/BAT. Consider add the same censor or just plain remove the vid Hm will wait on MAT/BAT opinion. Going to remove the warning actually since there is only about 5-10 seconds of the video where it may be consider 18+.
- For the last spinner on each diff. Use 50% or lower volume to decrease the sounds of spinnerspin & spinnerbonus. Also the spinner should be extended another 1/8 beat so it end on 02:05:855 cause the beat of the bell sound is in here Done, regarding spinner length. I was advised by Snowy Dream & eldnl to decrease it by 1/8. It was on where you suggested before.

[Astom's Easy]
This diff should be named Normal. Mostly because of the beat after spinners are very soon. Other than that there's nothing bother me I disagree, you can always stop spinning a bit earlier to get ready for the notes and i don't think this should be rename Normal just because of this.

[Normal]
A little tweak and this could easily become a Hard diff
00:00:091 (1) - Add finish at the start Done
00:00:091 (1) - The timing section here is unnecessary cause you can just lower the volume on the offset k removed timing section and lowered the volume on the offset (red timing point).
00:03:673 (1) - Whistle at the start? Done
00:05:464 (4) - Remove the whistle at the start Done
00:41:285 (7) - The only slider that use 1.5x speed, It's too unexpected. I suggest to use normal slider speed. Also try adding a clap at it too. Done, change volume to 45% so that it is like Insane.
00:49:568 (1) - I suggest to remove the anchor point in the middle so the slider will look better Done, adjusted spacing in this section

[Insane]
Quite an easy Insane Perhaps, tried my best to make it hard, since this was the first difficulty i've made. No tweaks at all except fixing all the spacing.
00:28:076 (1) ~ 00:37:479 (3) - Compare to your normal, this part still lack off hitsound. Using the same hitsound pattern as in Normal is ok k, added the same pattern from Normal
00:43:523 (5) ~ 00:48:896 (6) - ^ ^
01:17:329 (1) - Remove NC Done
01:42:628 (2,4) - Add whistle to these? Done
01:45:762 (3) - Finish at the start? Done
01:50:464 (1) - Add whistle Done
01:59:195 (5) - IMO it's play better if you use normal speed kk, done

That's all from me. About the vid if you're not sure about it, you can consult to MAT/BAT, but I'm sure they won't allow it too kk will try to ask them, main reason that i feel the video is ok is because a recently ranked beatmap have a video with some scenes which could be consider 18+ so i thought this should be ok as well.
Good Luck and Star

winber1 wrote:

02:00:091 (1) - if you want to follow that bell-like sound thing in the music, this should end at 02:05:837 (1) - (1/6 tick, just play it back at 25%). you should also silence it tho, or make it really soft. the spinner ends too loudly imo >_>. If not, you could just end it on the red tick too (like eldnl's diff). it doesn't really matter, but it just needs to be consistent. Ty, done. I've changed it to 50% volume and was about to update but noticed a new mod post

Insane

00:09:717 (8) - 1 grid to the right Aligned this with end of slider 3
00:29:531 (x) - add note? just to follow vocals a little more. Feels weird imo, so no.
00:33:113 (x) - ^ ^
01:21:471 (x) - ^ ^
01:22:702 (10) - new combo? Done
01:30:091 (x) - flows better if you add a note here imo. Nah, feel weird to follow instrument and vocal at the same time. Im following the vocal mainly for this part anyway. Will be weird if i start to change now.

Normal

00:02:105 (4) - delete claps (and the clap on the slider as whole) and put a whistle at 00:02:32? k done
00:36:359 (3,1,2,3) - this orientation could be a little confusing for newer players.(i know i would when i really sucked lol >_>. i probably would've tried clicking combo 2 instead of combo 1 and realized what an epic fail that was) hm, i say it's fine, but i'm up for interesting ideas
00:59:419 (1,2) - erm.. center this? Done
01:01:882 (2,3) - replace this with a 1/2 tick repeat slider? so that it follows vocals more Done, lol @ file comment
01:36:359 (5) - decrease length of slider by 1/2 tick ? Nah, it's fine
01:56:508 (9,1) - why the jump? woops 01:57:404 is suppose to be at 01:57:180. Adjusted the new combo and manually moved (10, previously 1) so that it looks better.

Nice map! :3

Star~~

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my que
I love this song and map

[General]
fine

[SB]
if you can make the title come out the same as the video , like the shining stars , it is awesome >w< Sorry, don't know how to do this, if someone wants to do it, feel free

[Normal]
00:28:076 (1) - circle at 00:28:076 and slider from 00:28:299 to 00:28:747 is better imo Done
00:31:658 (1) - ^ ^
00:39:493 (2,3,4,5) - this is really confusing for newbie Don't really know what to change, any suggestion?
00:56:508 (6,7) - slider first then circle is better Done
01:51:359 (3) - to 2 sliders is better , or it is hard to read when it end Nah it's fine, if the person is listening to the rhythm, he can definitely hear 4 beats, and the slider is pointing to the next note.
01:56:060 (8,9,10) - kinda confusing 0.0 Trying 4 ar now so that the note feel less clustered.
01:58:523 (2) - to 2 sliders Same reason as 01:51:359

[Insane]
01:46:770 (3,4) - I suggest this to a slider , or it is kinda confusing kk done, adjusted some stuff so that slider looks better
01:53:934 (4,5) - ^ ^

nice map

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Ohai~ As requested:

[General]
You should fix the spinner-circle.png because it wobbles. Or maybe it's just me. Odd, i just grey scale (turn the spinner black and white) the template skin spinner circle. So idk.
I kinda agree with Sallad about the video. But I guess that's for the MATs and BATs to decide. Still trying to grab a mat in here for opinion

[Normal]
00:28:299 (2) - Add finish to sliders end Done
00:42:404 (1) - ^ ^
00:07:255 (1) - Add a finish to this sliders start Done

[Insane]
Nothing to report. Good.

Overall: Nothing too major (Well except for the spinner, but I think that's just me). Good map.

STAR

JauiPlaY wrote:

hihi~
some suggestions:

[General]
fine. but the comboburst files do not looks well imo...and what's more, i guess they are too large. Best image i could find were 250x300 and that's a little too small so i double the resolution. eldnl also point it out and is trying to get someone to do combo bursts for me. Keep it for now since you can't really notice the quality of the combo burst while playing anyway.

[Normal]
control your combo between 4-7 please. Checked the map, there is one combo that is 8 (seems ok imo) and two combos which were 9 (again seems ok imo). No change
00:57:180(1) - a note here and the spinner starts at 00:57:404? Nah, the space is there to let the player knows a spinner is coming, putting a circle 1 tick before doesn't feel right for me.
01:28:971(3) - finish on the end of this slider. Done

[Insane]
00:29:195(5) - the slider ends on 00:29:531. keeping slider length the same as (4)
00:30:762(5) - do not be overlapped well. Seems fine, i overlap it because someone suggested it.
00:50:688(4) - the slider ends on 00:51:023. Keeping slider length the same as (5)
01:16:098(x) - add a note. Hit circle here doesn't follow anything so no
01:21:135(4) - the slider ends on 01:21:471. No since this 'll be the only slider to end on a blue tick.
01:30:426(x) - add a note. Same reason as 01:16:098
01:37:926(1,2,3,4,5,6) - it's better for me. Done
really awesome 1st map. good luck!
so
star~

poisonchan wrote:

Hello :3 Modding your map as your request, hope it helps.

[?] = Suggestion.
[!] = You NEED to change.
[.] = If possible, change.

[Insane]
00:33:225 (6) - New combo starts here. Done
00:33:673 (1) - Remove new combo. Done
00:48:225 (4) - If possible, don't overlap notes, looks odd ? Don't have any idea on how to change this part, if i put 4 more up, it'll feel weird for the jump and lower will cause spacing issues.
01:31:658 (1) - To make it similar to the previous pattern (01:17:329 (6) ) Remove new combo. (Or insert new combo in the previous pattern) Removed new combo
01:32:329 (3) - New combo starts here. Done
01:35:911 (1) - To make it similar to the previous pattern (01:21:583 (5) ) Remove new combo.(Or insert new combo in the previous pattern) Insert new combo in previous section
01:37:031 (1) - To make it similar to the previous patter (01:22:702 (9) ) Remove new combo. (Or insert new combo in the previous pattern) ^

Pretty nice mapset. :3
Deserves a star.

IceBeam wrote:

Okay then..

Map settings and folder is fine except one thing.

Combobursts..they are a bit wide.Original is 388 pixles wide. According to this it's fine viewtopic.php?f=15&t=51694

[Normal]
00:49:568 (1) - Add a reverse at 00:50:016. Reverse fits the vocal better, but doesn't really fit how to the beat are placed at this place, so no
01:09:717 (3) - I'd suggest to remove this slider with 1/2 sliders placed on red ticks: (01:09:717 - 01:10:165 & 01:10:613 - 01:11:061) They fit the vocal nicely at red tick
01:23:822 (2) - It doesn't fit at all Use these notes instead: 01:23:822,01:24:046,01:24:493,01:24:717. I think, that's a little complicated for a Normal.

[Insane]
00:30:762 (5) - Stack properly? Should be fixed
00:35:911 - Finish? feels out of place
00:41:061 (6,7,8) - Not a big fan of stacked blue ticks.If you don't know the song it's almost impossible to read it perfecly. fits, perfectly with the song through
00:58:299 (1,2,3,4) - These jumps are a bit out of whole map,they're way too unexpected.Reduce them a little? As explain in an earlier mod, spacing between (1) & (2) and (3) & (4) is precisely 2.0x, want to keep it this way.
01:06:583 (3) - Move it 2 grids right to make symmetrical? Done, adjusted spacing for next section accordingly
01:24:270 - Finish. hmm, feels really odd to put a finish at the end of a slider unless it's the last note of a combo
01:25:837 (4) - ^ ^
01:26:732 (6) - ^ Putting a finish here will make it feel like a finish spam
01:46:546 (1) - Kinda hard to read with this spacing,it looks like a 1/2 space,so I failed to read it.Maybe you should change it to reverse-slider or clear up the spacing a bit? Never felt weird to me, may change if more people suggest this
01:46:770 (3) - Extend to next white tick maybe? Playback at 0.25x speed and you'll see the instrument end at the blue tick
01:50:016 - I'd add a note. Feel fine, there isn't anything on the space between, except for 2 beats which are use to keep rhythm. Doesn't fit with the mapi think.
01:53:374 (1,2,3,4,1) - Well,if you followed previous suggestions,change here as well. Read above

Nice mapset,good luck.
Star~