HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Normal]
00:03:673 (1) - a 1/1 repeat slider feel better Example Done
00:07:255 (1) - One less repeat and add 00:08:598 (2) - Done
00:10:837 (5,6,7) - Soft Hitsound on those Done
00:39:493 (2) - Manually Stack or Make Stack Leniency much lower and manually stack 00:40:389 (4,5) - (example, Press Shift + Ctrl while doing this) Not really sure if i fixed since it already look perfectly stacked to me. Moved a little bit with grid and distant snap turn off.
00:43:523 (2) - Blanket for 00:44:643 (3) - Like this Tried my best to copy your slider, done
00:47:105 (2) - Same thing here ^
01:05:911 (6,7) - Place them like this Done
01:18:673 (5) - Make it an Arch? it seems to flow better Example Again, tried my best to copy your slider
01:19:792 (6,7,8) - Move and reshape like this? k Done

[Insane]
00:27:516 (3) - 2 grid up or down(like 00:25:389 (2,3,4) - ) Done
00:30:314 (4) - Blanket 00:30:091 (3) - ( refer to image of the next suggestion ) Done
00:30:762 (5) - like this ^
00:35:016 (6) - You're stopping after Vocal end... so delete this note? Weird, why was that slider there in the first place, but i'll keep it to keep with the "flow"
00:48:001 (3,4) - don't like the overlap Feels a little weird, but don't have any other ideas.
01:07:926 (6) - Use a different shape like Blanket? Blanket with correct spacing? Done
01:46:658 (2) - 2 grid down ( or up ) Prefer 1 grid. Down
01:47:889 (2) - 2 grid up ( or down ) ^ up
01:49:008 (2) - 2 grid down ( or up ) ^ down
01:49:568 (5) - stack under the position 01:49:008 (2) - have now Done
01:50:799 (3) - 2 grid right ( or left ) ^ right
01:53:822 (3) - ^ ^ Right
01:55:053 (3) - 2 grid left ( or right ) ^ left
01:56:173 (2) - 2 grid up ( or down ) ^ up
01:56:844 (6) - 2 grid down ( or up ) ^ down

Most were on graphic side, so... i can STAR!

Roddie wrote:

General

1. If you're going to have a hitcircle.png in your map's folder, you got to have a hitcircleoverlay.png and a approachcircle .png. Deleted since it was simply a more white hitcircle.png
2. If you have a cursor.png in your map's folder, you got to have a cursortrail.png. Done, add the one from the templateskin
3. Insane has a different preview point than eldnL's Hard, Normal and Astom's Easy. took me a while to find out how to check what the preview point were for the other difficulties. Fixed
4. Maybe a lead-in time of 2 seconds is better than 3 seconds.Done

Normal

1. Hmm... Maybe decrease both the Overall Difficulty and Approach Rate by one tick? Done
2. 00:10:389 (x)-Add a note here? Plus, add a clap as well? Tried it, feels odd so no
3. 00:10:837 (5)-Put a new combo here? Done
4. 00:28:076 (1)-Add a finish on the end. Done
5. 00:42:404 (1)-^ ^
6. 00:53:374 (1)-^ ^
7. 00:55:389 (4)-Add a finish on the beginning. Done
8. 01:00:986 (5)-Add a finish on the beginning. And put a new combo here? Done
9. 01:09:046 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning. Done
10. 01:26:732 (6)-^ ^
11. 01:49:344 (9)-Put a new combo here? would be odd for this to be the only 1 combo
12. 01:54:493 (5)-Add a finish? Done

Insane

1. 00:26:285 (6)-Add a finish on the end? Done
2. 00:53:598 (2)-^ ^
3. 00:57:180 (4)-Add a finish. Done
4. 01:16:882 (5)-^ ^
5. 01:31:210 (5)-^ ^
6. 01:52:702 (6)-I think it would be better if you remove the finish from the beginning and add a finish on the end... Done

Good luck. And here's a star.

Zelos wrote:

Folder:
All good here! k

General:
If the video really is 18+, it probably isn't allowed. Hm, will wait on mat/bat opinion first.
Use the same slider tick rate for all difficulties. The only difficulty with a different tickrate is astom's, when he check his diff, he will probably fix it.

Normal:
00:49:568 (1) - turn on grid snap 4 and move to the right 1 grid point? I've adjusted this slider in grid 4 so that it is perfectly symmetrical.
01:20:464 (2) - this is very very slightly touching the HP bar. Moved down a little bit more.

Insane:
01:59:195 (5,6) - stack the ends just a bit more! Done

Star

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi merchat7

[General]
- I've read the previous post about this but still the video is not good. I appreciate the warning but even the ranked one are barely rankable with the censored effect. This "bare" video will surely be refused by MAT/BAT. Consider add the same censor or just plain remove the vid Hm will wait on MAT/BAT opinion. Going to remove the warning actually since there is only about 5-10 seconds of the video where it may be consider 18+.
- For the last spinner on each diff. Use 50% or lower volume to decrease the sounds of spinnerspin & spinnerbonus. Also the spinner should be extended another 1/8 beat so it end on 02:05:855 cause the beat of the bell sound is in here Done, regarding spinner length. I was advised by Snowy Dream & eldnl to decrease it by 1/8. It was on where you suggested before.

[Astom's Easy]
This diff should be named Normal. Mostly because of the beat after spinners are very soon. Other than that there's nothing bother me I disagree, you can always stop spinning a bit earlier to get ready for the notes and i don't think this should be rename Normal just because of this.

[Normal]
A little tweak and this could easily become a Hard diff
00:00:091 (1) - Add finish at the start Done
00:00:091 (1) - The timing section here is unnecessary cause you can just lower the volume on the offset k removed timing section and lowered the volume on the offset (red timing point).
00:03:673 (1) - Whistle at the start? Done
00:05:464 (4) - Remove the whistle at the start Done
00:41:285 (7) - The only slider that use 1.5x speed, It's too unexpected. I suggest to use normal slider speed. Also try adding a clap at it too. Done, change volume to 45% so that it is like Insane.
00:49:568 (1) - I suggest to remove the anchor point in the middle so the slider will look better Done, adjusted spacing in this section

[Insane]
Quite an easy Insane Perhaps, tried my best to make it hard, since this was the first difficulty i've made. No tweaks at all except fixing all the spacing.
00:28:076 (1) ~ 00:37:479 (3) - Compare to your normal, this part still lack off hitsound. Using the same hitsound pattern as in Normal is ok k, added the same pattern from Normal
00:43:523 (5) ~ 00:48:896 (6) - ^ ^
01:17:329 (1) - Remove NC Done
01:42:628 (2,4) - Add whistle to these? Done
01:45:762 (3) - Finish at the start? Done
01:50:464 (1) - Add whistle Done
01:59:195 (5) - IMO it's play better if you use normal speed kk, done

That's all from me. About the vid if you're not sure about it, you can consult to MAT/BAT, but I'm sure they won't allow it too kk will try to ask them, main reason that i feel the video is ok is because a recently ranked beatmap have a video with some scenes which could be consider 18+ so i thought this should be ok as well.
Good Luck and Star

winber1 wrote:

02:00:091 (1) - if you want to follow that bell-like sound thing in the music, this should end at 02:05:837 (1) - (1/6 tick, just play it back at 25%). you should also silence it tho, or make it really soft. the spinner ends too loudly imo >_>. If not, you could just end it on the red tick too (like eldnl's diff). it doesn't really matter, but it just needs to be consistent. Ty, done. I've changed it to 50% volume and was about to update but noticed a new mod post

Insane

00:09:717 (8) - 1 grid to the right Aligned this with end of slider 3
00:29:531 (x) - add note? just to follow vocals a little more. Feels weird imo, so no.
00:33:113 (x) - ^ ^
01:21:471 (x) - ^ ^
01:22:702 (10) - new combo? Done
01:30:091 (x) - flows better if you add a note here imo. Nah, feel weird to follow instrument and vocal at the same time. Im following the vocal mainly for this part anyway. Will be weird if i start to change now.

Normal

00:02:105 (4) - delete claps (and the clap on the slider as whole) and put a whistle at 00:02:32? k done
00:36:359 (3,1,2,3) - this orientation could be a little confusing for newer players.(i know i would when i really sucked lol >_>. i probably would've tried clicking combo 2 instead of combo 1 and realized what an epic fail that was) hm, i say it's fine, but i'm up for interesting ideas
00:59:419 (1,2) - erm.. center this? Done
01:01:882 (2,3) - replace this with a 1/2 tick repeat slider? so that it follows vocals more Done, lol @ file comment
01:36:359 (5) - decrease length of slider by 1/2 tick ? Nah, it's fine
01:56:508 (9,1) - why the jump? woops 01:57:404 is suppose to be at 01:57:180. Adjusted the new combo and manually moved (10, previously 1) so that it looks better.

Nice map! :3

Star~~

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my que
I love this song and map

[General]
fine

[SB]
if you can make the title come out the same as the video , like the shining stars , it is awesome >w< Sorry, don't know how to do this, if someone wants to do it, feel free

[Normal]
00:28:076 (1) - circle at 00:28:076 and slider from 00:28:299 to 00:28:747 is better imo Done
00:31:658 (1) - ^ ^
00:39:493 (2,3,4,5) - this is really confusing for newbie Don't really know what to change, any suggestion?
00:56:508 (6,7) - slider first then circle is better Done
01:51:359 (3) - to 2 sliders is better , or it is hard to read when it end Nah it's fine, if the person is listening to the rhythm, he can definitely hear 4 beats, and the slider is pointing to the next note.
01:56:060 (8,9,10) - kinda confusing 0.0 Trying 4 ar now so that the note feel less clustered.
01:58:523 (2) - to 2 sliders Same reason as 01:51:359

[Insane]
01:46:770 (3,4) - I suggest this to a slider , or it is kinda confusing kk done, adjusted some stuff so that slider looks better
01:53:934 (4,5) - ^ ^

nice map

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Ohai~ As requested:

[General]
You should fix the spinner-circle.png because it wobbles. Or maybe it's just me. Odd, i just grey scale (turn the spinner black and white) the template skin spinner circle. So idk.
I kinda agree with Sallad about the video. But I guess that's for the MATs and BATs to decide. Still trying to grab a mat in here for opinion

[Normal]
00:28:299 (2) - Add finish to sliders end Done
00:42:404 (1) - ^ ^
00:07:255 (1) - Add a finish to this sliders start Done

[Insane]
Nothing to report. Good.

Overall: Nothing too major (Well except for the spinner, but I think that's just me). Good map.

STAR

JauiPlaY wrote:

hihi~
some suggestions:

[General]
fine. but the comboburst files do not looks well imo...and what's more, i guess they are too large. Best image i could find were 250x300 and that's a little too small so i double the resolution. eldnl also point it out and is trying to get someone to do combo bursts for me. Keep it for now since you can't really notice the quality of the combo burst while playing anyway.

[Normal]
control your combo between 4-7 please. Checked the map, there is one combo that is 8 (seems ok imo) and two combos which were 9 (again seems ok imo). No change
00:57:180(1) - a note here and the spinner starts at 00:57:404? Nah, the space is there to let the player knows a spinner is coming, putting a circle 1 tick before doesn't feel right for me.
01:28:971(3) - finish on the end of this slider. Done

[Insane]
00:29:195(5) - the slider ends on 00:29:531. keeping slider length the same as (4)
00:30:762(5) - do not be overlapped well. Seems fine, i overlap it because someone suggested it.
00:50:688(4) - the slider ends on 00:51:023. Keeping slider length the same as (5)
01:16:098(x) - add a note. Hit circle here doesn't follow anything so no
01:21:135(4) - the slider ends on 01:21:471. No since this 'll be the only slider to end on a blue tick.
01:30:426(x) - add a note. Same reason as 01:16:098
01:37:926(1,2,3,4,5,6) - it's better for me. Done
really awesome 1st map. good luck!
so
star~

poisonchan wrote:

Hello :3 Modding your map as your request, hope it helps.

[?] = Suggestion.
[!] = You NEED to change.
[.] = If possible, change.

[Insane]
00:33:225 (6) - New combo starts here. Done
00:33:673 (1) - Remove new combo. Done
00:48:225 (4) - If possible, don't overlap notes, looks odd ? Don't have any idea on how to change this part, if i put 4 more up, it'll feel weird for the jump and lower will cause spacing issues.
01:31:658 (1) - To make it similar to the previous pattern (01:17:329 (6) ) Remove new combo. (Or insert new combo in the previous pattern) Removed new combo
01:32:329 (3) - New combo starts here. Done
01:35:911 (1) - To make it similar to the previous pattern (01:21:583 (5) ) Remove new combo.(Or insert new combo in the previous pattern) Insert new combo in previous section
01:37:031 (1) - To make it similar to the previous patter (01:22:702 (9) ) Remove new combo. (Or insert new combo in the previous pattern) ^

Pretty nice mapset. :3
Deserves a star.

IceBeam wrote:

Okay then..

Map settings and folder is fine except one thing.

Combobursts..they are a bit wide.Original is 388 pixles wide. According to this it's fine viewtopic.php?f=15&t=51694

[Normal]
00:49:568 (1) - Add a reverse at 00:50:016. Reverse fits the vocal better, but doesn't really fit how to the beat are placed at this place, so no
01:09:717 (3) - I'd suggest to remove this slider with 1/2 sliders placed on red ticks: (01:09:717 - 01:10:165 & 01:10:613 - 01:11:061) They fit the vocal nicely at red tick
01:23:822 (2) - It doesn't fit at all Use these notes instead: 01:23:822,01:24:046,01:24:493,01:24:717. I think, that's a little complicated for a Normal.

[Insane]
00:30:762 (5) - Stack properly? Should be fixed
00:35:911 - Finish? feels out of place
00:41:061 (6,7,8) - Not a big fan of stacked blue ticks.If you don't know the song it's almost impossible to read it perfecly. fits, perfectly with the song through
00:58:299 (1,2,3,4) - These jumps are a bit out of whole map,they're way too unexpected.Reduce them a little? As explain in an earlier mod, spacing between (1) & (2) and (3) & (4) is precisely 2.0x, want to keep it this way.
01:06:583 (3) - Move it 2 grids right to make symmetrical? Done, adjusted spacing for next section accordingly
01:24:270 - Finish. hmm, feels really odd to put a finish at the end of a slider unless it's the last note of a combo
01:25:837 (4) - ^ ^
01:26:732 (6) - ^ Putting a finish here will make it feel like a finish spam
01:46:546 (1) - Kinda hard to read with this spacing,it looks like a 1/2 space,so I failed to read it.Maybe you should change it to reverse-slider or clear up the spacing a bit? Never felt weird to me, may change if more people suggest this
01:46:770 (3) - Extend to next white tick maybe? Playback at 0.25x speed and you'll see the instrument end at the blue tick
01:50:016 - I'd add a note. Feel fine, there isn't anything on the space between, except for 2 beats which are use to keep rhythm. Doesn't fit with the mapi think.
01:53:374 (1,2,3,4,1) - Well,if you followed previous suggestions,change here as well. Read above

Nice mapset,good luck.
Star~

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Hello

[General]

Change lead-in to 2.5 Done
Inconsistency Kiai Already check through my diffs, kiai times end where I want them.

[Easy]

00:29:104 (1) - Too little time between the spinner and the next note, which will lead to new players do not have enough time to regain the control of the mouse. You must be separated by more than two of 1/1 beat. Song is quite slow, I think 1 white tick is fine and due to approach rate, you can see this note at 00:27:761 so if you choose to keep spinning, then it's your fault if you miss this note.
03:13:656 (2) - No nedd to surround i think. It's not good-looking If you can suggest me a better placement, I may change it.
04:32:686 (1) - Same with 00:29:104 (1) Same reason.

[normal]

01:05:820 (6) - Don't stack at slider's end, it will affect new players to judge While I normally agree, I'm a bit worry about difficulty jump from Normal to Hard so I'm leaving this as is and I think they fit the song.
02:41:641 (4) - ^ ^
03:55:522 (5) - Do not use the reverse 2 times or more, because the new players do not adapt, so only suggest to use reverse 1 time of sliders ^
04:37:835 (3) - ^ ^
04:45:000 (2) - ^ ^

[Hard]

01:36:492 (4,5,6) - I will read it 1/3 beat Hm, don't really understand what you mean, but I reduce the jump a bit.

THat all

Frostmourne wrote:

Hi

Easy
01:37:835 (1) - ahh something about ctrl+r ?, bad flow here for me and beginner who doesn't know that it can hold the note.Hm I don't really see anything wrong. I think it fits with song perfectly and I don't think there are any kick sliders here, so should be easy to know that all repeating sliders have only one repeat.
02:38:507 (1) - why new combo here D: ? For the chorus, same thing as 01:07:164 (1).
02:46:119 (2) - whistle at head and finish at tail is better , remove finish at head , kinda same as here 03:00:447 (2) - I check Hard, and I did whistle > finish so changed.
03:12:537 (1,2) - don't know you intent or not .. This overlap looks obviously awkward =_='' Intentional, if you have a better idea for placement, tell me. Made blanket a bit better through.
04:02:462 (1) - if you don't mind , curved slider makes good flow better than linear slider. I like to use linear slider to distinguish stuff. Linear slider = follow instrument, curved slider = follow vocal and this part just feel like straight slider fits better.
04:13:656 (3) - kinda noise about this note , only clap at the start and finish at the end ? same here 04:15:672 (2) - Is a mistake actually, only suppose to have finish at the beginning not finish + clap so fixed.
04:43:656 (3) - I think , just move up 1 grid can't destroy distance Hmmm, I don't really see why move up one grid through, can you tell me your reason for doing this?
04:46:567 (1) - am I wrong or not ? this spin is unsnapped -_-?Fixed


Normal
00:51:716 (4) - finish head ? I can hear crash sound here Ok
01:11:641 (2) - same ^ :3 ^
01:37:835 (1,2,3) - I will add clap at the repeat tail of these slider If I were you :O It doesn't sound right, the drum sound in the background is really more "base" sounding, and even if I use the sc1 clap, they don't really fit together for me. Did this in Easy, since Astom actually did the Easy, when I was trying to get this rank for the short version. That's why hitsounding style is different for Easy and why I think doing clap for these sounds fits well there.
02:20:820 (1) - finish both head and tail Done
02:48:582 (4) - new combo here :S ? new stanza I don't really follow stanza for new combo. Current pattern is consistent with what I did for the other two parts.
03:02:910 (4) - ^ ^
03:09:179 (1,2,3) - clap same as 01:37:835 ? Same
03:20:597 (1) - add finish only head (both) I only put at end like in Easy, I don't think it sound good in begin and make the finish at the end lose it emphasis even through it's follow the cymbals in the background. Also change for Hard.
03:22:164 (3) - finish please , more fit Done
03:24:179 (1) - ^ ^
04:46:455 (1) - check this spinner again -_-? Fixed

Hard
02:10:746 (3,4) - too hard jump >.< Reduce a bit
02:14:776 (5) - new combo here , sound changed :O I think it's fine, two short combos just feel really weird for me, I think it's better for them to be in one combo.
02:22:164 (x) - add note here please , it cuts your flow so much It never bother me, maybe more opinion is needed
03:09:402 (2) - clap Same reason as Normal
03:10:297 (2) - clap ^
03:11:194 (2) - clap ^
03:43:656 (4) - stack it completely please I don't understand what you mean, this note is spaced out and not stacked. I fixed 03:42:089 (3) - instead
04:11:865 (2) - ^ Same
04:20:597 (1) - ^ Same, if you're talking about distant snap, made a little better.
04:24:627 (2) - clap Same reason as before
04:25:522 (2) - clap ^
04:26:417 (2) - clap ^
04:46:567 (1) - spinner again Fixed

sorry for late modding Np, pretty good hitsound modding.

Good luck !

Mystica wrote:

here comes my mod.

[Easy]
02:13:656 (1) - think make it a little beauty? Hmm, I can't really see anything wrong with this slider. I moved the red point one grid right, but perhaps a picture or maybe code / what to do to make this slider better?
04:09:851 (1) - a little ugly Adjust until it's fully symmetrical or almost perfectly symmetrical.
04:52:320 why a red line 0.0 No idea, I saw it on D.N. diff and thought it sound better to end the spinner on this red timing point then trying to snap to to 1/8 or 1/6 or 1/4 to try to follow where the bell at the end perfectly.

[Normal]
take care on some grid...Now seems not very well I did map most of it a long time ago, so that may be why. While play testing recently, I didn't notice a massive error so I think it's fine. Ai mod also doesn't mention any spacing error so I think it should be fine because of this as well
clap on soft part not fit well Hm, stilling thinking about it, I was thinking of changing clap pattern to be consistent with Insane, but I realize some parts, I didn't put note on the 2nd & 4th white ticks so it doesn't really work. If there is a big complain on this, I will think about how to make the clap better, but I find this good enough.

[Hard]
lazy to mod..but seems not big problem here

Good map Ty

R a r e wrote:

From my queue
All suggestions~
You can ignore if you don't like it.

Easy

• 00:32:238 (2) - add whistle to start slider then remove finish to start slider I think it make sense enough for a finish to be here. I want to keep Astom hitsounding for this diff.
  01:31:567 (1) - remove clap to start slider ^
  02:08:955 - add note Want to avoid 1/2 rhythm and looking at how map this part, it seem I'm following vocal so I think it's fine not to follow this instrument.
  02:15:223 (3) - add clap to end slider Fixed, thanks for catching.
  02:41:417 (3) - add clap to repeat slider then remove clap and add finish to end slider Done, change also for similar rhythm at previous part.
  02:50:148 (3) - remove whistle to repeat slider Make sense to me for the hi hat in background.
  03:02:910 (1) - remove clap to start slider Same as 01:31:567, also because I can hear drum here, sound weird to me to have no hitsound here to follow it.

Normal

• 00:02:014 (4) - remove whisitle to end slider I think finish sound fine at end.
  00:05:149 (3) - remove whistle then add whistle to next start slider Vocal + the pitch sound of the bell sound (it's higher than the one on the slider) make the whistle on (3) make sense to me. I change the hitsound pattern a bit here so didn't add to next slider, but if I didn't change the hitsound pattern, I would have add whistle to the slider.

Hard

• 00:26:194 (6) - add whistle to repeat slider Done and also add to begin due to hi hat sound at begin.
  00:39:626 (2) - remove finish Play better to me with finish, whistle just seem too soft here. I would normally agree, but for gameplay reason and consistency with the same rhythm in next section.
  00:42:313 (1) - remove whistle Replaced with finish.
  00:43:880 (1) - add whistle? I think it's better to have no hitsound on the kick drum here. Also inconsistent with hitsound in next section and I think for that section, no whistle on the kick drum sound better than with.
  00:46:567 (4) - add whistle to start slider Fixed for consistency with next section.
  00:46:567 (4,1) - I prefer to not stacking here. I keep this for now, unless you have better idea for placement.
  01:43:208 (5,6,7,8) - like this
  
  Don't really want to overmap, I listen to (7) and I can hear that it's follow a tick sound so that's why I think it's fine like this.
  02:55:298 (3) - add finish to end slider I've try this, but I don't really like it, I prefer putting finish on a place you have to hit (begin of sliders / on a hit circle) and if I do put it on the end, I do that with reduced volume so no because of this.
  02:59:552 (3) - add whistle Similar reason to 00:43:880.
  03:41:194 (6) - spacing is too large I don't think 1.8x is too large.
  03:50:149 (3) - ^ If more people complain about this one, I'll definitely change it.
  04:37:835 (1) - remove new combo then 04:38:507 (4) - add new combo I don't really see why, current combo make sense to me with the melody of the instrument.

Good hitsound suggestions, ty

CDFA wrote:

Welp, let's hope this goes ok.

Overall:
Is "apple" supposed to be lowercase? Yep, also there is a ranked map of this and apple is lowercase too.
01:45:671 - When you go to the beginning of the break, you cursor should turn into a <-> thing. Pull the break back to the time listed before~. I don't really like to do this, I prefer break starting immediately. When the break is delayed, I tense my hand because I expect more notes when there aren't anymore and losing a sec of rest for my hand so keeping this due to personal preference.
04:52:320 - You probably don't need the red section here, just end it on a yellow (1/8th) tick~. Unless it's really necessary, keeping this.

Hurd:
00:09:626 (8) - Not moe slider! Made a little better.
01:51:492 (1,2,3) - Remove these~ Intentional because break is 15 sec long which I think is too long so I want to add some notes to play so that the break doesn't feel as long.
04:20:597 (1) - stack this on (5) of the previous combo Fixed

Normal:
00:03:582 (1) - Probably lower the last slidetick Made perfectly symmetrical
01:51:492 (1) - Remove this~ Same as Hard

Easy:
01:51:492 (1) - Remove this~ Same as Hard

Yay

Starry wrote:

Long song is long but here is mod.

[Easy]

01:51:492 (1) - The note put here was intentional? Yep, to make break not feel as long
02:32:686 (2) - Move this up a bit. Kinda off screen. Adjusted it

Wow, Nice that all I find.

[Normal]

00:40:298 (4) - New combo fit here. Hm consistent with Hard, not sure why you didn't mention it for Hard if you want me to do new combo here. I look at Hard and I think pattern for this part look best as one combo. I put this in orange as I'm not sure yet whether I want to do this or not, I agree with it for Normal, but I just want a bit of consistency between diffs.
02:49:253 (6) - ^ Inconsistent with 01:17:910 (4) - for example
00:41:194 (4) - This sound strange. Fine for me, both D.N Angel and Hard follow these sound, but with hit circle / short sliders instead, not nice to do this for Normal due to blue tick.
00:59:328 (1,2) - Stack it. They are already stack? If you're talking about the next ones, I want to pause on the instrument here and continue the flow when the vocal return which is on those two notes.
01:15:895 (1) - Make this an blanket slider. Don't really want a blanket slider here, but adjust slider shape.
04:19:478 (2) - Finish fit better here. Hm, I think finish sound too loud since there is no cymbal in the background, the way vocal sings sort of makes finish fit, but think whistle is fine for it here.
04:33:805 (5) - You miss a finish. Added + to Hard

[Hard]

01:20:149 (2,3) - Can you move this down a bit. K
02:14:776 (5) - Remove the clap here I feel the next clap sound weird without this clap and do not think it sound bad.
02:33:134 (7) - New combo here. I prefer keeping this since all the notes are following accerlated spacing here plus consistency on next combo.
03:25:746 (6) - Finish fits better. Look at 03:25:746 (6,1), I can hear a clear cymbal on (1) while not on (6), so no change because of this.

Your map deserves a ★

Banana wrote:

Hi~Banana here from my queue~

general

you use custom skin of spinner, and it need to be a set of spinner skin like this Don't really like the spinner so removed.

easy

00:53:283 (1) - this repeat slider is curved too much that i think is not suit the music I don't really see a problem with this.

normal

this slider seems to be not curve at all, though it have many ticks Which slider?

hard

02:10:746 (3,4) - this two sliders are towards different direction, giving the impression of "the jump is far", and if you change 02:10:970 (4) to this, it will flows better to me Change in a different way
02:39:179 (3) - you follow the vocal here, and slider ends while the "i" is still there, so i suggest you to extend this slider to the following red tick I want the focus for the end of this slider and begin of next slider 02:39:850 (1) to be on the drums. I think it sound weird not to follow this drum sound.

GL~

Megurine Luka wrote:

/queue

Good, 10 months later and see maybe I can find something new (or maybe not...lol)

Unrankable if in red and bold
Consider if in bold only
Suggested if in normal font

[General]

*You are missing some skins elements:

spinner-clear.png
spinner-spin.png
spinner-osu.png

Add these into your folder. You can put default ones. Remove spinner instead.
*Easy and D.N.Angel has different kiai times with others. D.N.Angel is fine because it's a guest diff. But it's better to keep your diffs' kiai consistency I check where the consistency are and it make sense to me (don't want to end kiai in the middle of a spinner). If mat/bat ask over this, I'll explain to them a bit more clearly, but this is more or less the reason.


[Easy]

01:51:492 (1) - prolong to 01:52:164 The notes on red tick and after belong to a new instrument section so I don't want to put a note to follow it.
02:45:223 (1) - maybe 2 grids down? kinda nazi A grid down.
02:49:253 (2) - hmmm, maybe try this Placing this like I think give more of an accent to this note so I would like to keep it.
02:50:149 (3) - 1 grid up Done
03:02:910 (1) - I think it's too close to the spinner. That's too difficult. Maybe change it into a circle at 03:03:134 The whole map is like this since I just copy the rhythm from the first section. I have reasons why I want to keep this, but a bit lazy as the explanation is long. Simply put, you can see this note why spinning so if you keep on spinning, it's your fault that you miss. I think it's nicer to have a long spinner then to have shorten a spinner just for more "recovery time"
03:12:537 (1,2) - try 1 x=228,y=152 and move 2 to the right place, something like Did something like it
04:07:165 (2) - try x=180, y=140 and move the rest.. I think it's fine like this, I do not see a big difference, I think the blanket look worse actually.
04:26:194 (3) - add clap on end Prefer not putting two hitsound on the same place here.


[Normal]

I don't like the clap sounds on sliders like 00:45:000 (4) hmmm I think they are too loud and noise for me, maybe decrease the volume? I'll consider it, don't have too much time today to look through all atm.
00:12:313 (3) - 1 grid down Done
00:49:477 (1) - del the sliderwhistle sound, hmm and also remember to check all sliderwhistle sound if you didn't add them intentionally.I don't see a difference with and without, but remove since it wasn't intentional.
01:04:253 (3) - ^ and also add NC? I think 8C is kinda long for Normal New combo on (6)
01:25:746 (4) - move down a little bit? Stack on end of previous slider, so keeping, adjust this part a bit.
01:51:492 (1) - add one turn Same reason as Easy.
02:09:402 (4) - decrease the fin sound a little bit? I think it sound fine as is.
04:44:104 (1) - 2 grids up? Done

[Insane]

00:05:373 (4) - try x=40, y=204 Just adjust a bit here.
01:52:164 (4) - add a circle Same reason as Easy.
02:12:761 (1,2,3) - 2 grids left Done

Others are fine for me :3!

Oh I find I still find somethings! Hope these help!

spboxer3 wrote:

:idea: general

• 
  Settings
  (For the setting/general issue.)
  

1. unify all diff's kiai please. Already checked this as several people had mention it and the inconsistency in kiai time make sense for me.

Easy

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  Overlaps
  (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. Yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  

1. 03:12:537 (1,2) - If you can suggest me better placement, I may change

mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 03:13:656 (2) - awkward slider~you can make the layout better~ Listen to bell sound at 03:14:552, that's what I'm trying to represent with this slider shape.
2. 04:07:165 (2,4) - [nazi] you can make it stack~ It's looks like a bit depart off Move a grid down

Normal

• 
  
  mapping
  (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 04:26:641 (5) - parallel it. It's looks like a bit depart off Seem fine to me, just ctrl+H and you should see this

Hard

• 
  
  Overlaps
  (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  

1. 02:02:462 (6,2) - Adjusted

mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 02:02:462 (6,1,2,3,4) - awkward pattern. you can make the layout better. I don't see anything really weird, it's just a diamond shape with a circle in the middle. Please explain if you mean something else
2. 03:42:985 (2,4) - stack it? Fixed

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.

that's all
good luck~ ty

Melophobia wrote:

from my modding queue

[General]
consider adding muted sliderslide, it's really noisy I mute for the part that I think don't fit, but I do not think muting for the whole song is good here.

[Easy]
00:12:537 (1) - change to soft finish like you did on others diff plz Done
00:27:089 (1,1) - kinda soon after spinner Song is quite slow, should be fine, since this was map so long ago and not mapped by me, no consideration was taken for placing rest after a spinner. I also have other reasons why (I do not agree with having a pause after a spinner at all for Easy & Normal), but they are long and I think these two reasons are good enough.
01:31:567 (1) - ^ ^
01:45:671 - break should start here I prefer break starting immediately, I see the reason for doing them, but I get more annoy by the fact that after waiting 1-2 seconds for note to appear, there were no notes to hit, just that the break was delayed so I will not do this for any of my beatmap except for consistency in guest diffs.
01:51:492 (1) - why not make this symmetrical? Made it better, but can't seem to get it perfectly symmetrical without making the curve too big even without grid snap.
01:52:835 - break should start here Same reason as before
01:59:328 (1) - add finish at the end Done with reduced volume
03:27:761 - break should start here Same reason as before

[Normal]
00:02:014 (4) - finish doesnt fit here Listen to the sound on the white tick just after this note and the way vocal sing this make me feel this finish is fine
01:45:671 - break should start here Same as in Easy
01:52:835 - ^ ^
02:00:000 (2) - finish Done with reduced volume
02:20:820 (1) - add finish at the end and remove it from beginning Add at end, didn't remove from begin as I hear cymbal at both place, just make the first finish a bit quieter then the second (10%)
02:30:671 (1,2) - 1grid left K
02:45:000 (1) - try to make this start at 02:45:223 - instead to follow vocal better I'm worry that spinner will be too short so do not want to change this and since there is no hitsound at begin of spinner, shouldn't be a significant problem.
02:51:716 (2) - break should start here Same reason as before

[Hard]
00:05:373 (4,5) - whistle? The sound here sound a bit lower pitch then the others so I don't think a high pitch sound like whistle fit here.
00:27:985 (1,4) - switch these newcombos for change of melody This combo seem fine, vocal start singing here and I think (4) still belong in the same vocal phase. I have kept to new combo patterns like this for all my beatmaps.
00:38:283 (5) - finish doesnt fit here imo Sound fine to me, I can hear a background sound which can justify this finish.
01:04:925 (5,6) - it's better to keep spacing, both plays fine but the current one looks bad imo I don't think it was intentional so fixed.
01:23:955 (3) - add finish at the end I have already consider this, but was against this idea because a finish is a very strong sound so when I put it, it accent a note a lot, it felt weird having the accent on the end of a slider and playing the hit circles afterward so I decide not to do it.
01:45:671 - break should start here Same as Easy
01:52:835 - ^ ^
02:00:000 (4) - add finish at the beginning Yep, done
02:06:716 (1) - remove whistle from the end Hmm, ok, I do not think it sound bad through, but transition to stream seem nicer due to like I mention, accent at end of slider feel weird to me.
02:07:164 - add whistle Sound weird having whistle 1/2 next to each other.
02:14:776 (5) - clap+finish sounds bad, remove clap plz I find the clap after this weird without the clap on here.
02:34:477 (11) - finish doesnt fit here Sound fine, way vocal sing and drum make the finish sound just fine to me. I didn't really use custom hitsound on this beatmap so sometime just use finish instead for sound like this.
02:42:761 (1) - remove finish from the beginning and add it at the end Just add to end, can hear cymbal at both place.
02:55:298 (3) - add finish at the end Same reason as before
03:27:761 - break should start here ^
03:43:656 (4) - 1grid up Fix in earlier mod
03:45:671 (1) - normal sound is better than soft finish~ Hm, ok
03:47:014 (1) - clap? Add to all place where there is clap in the background with reduced volume
04:10:522 (3) - add finish at the end Same reason as before, I may reconsider again with a really reduced volume finish through. But at this point in time, I still do not like finish here.
04:32:238 - Kiai should end here I don't agree, I consider the stream here to be part of the new section and I don't think the slider belong in the kiai.
04:37:388 (4) - add finish instead of whistle Done


i like this song so much, but i dont like this map especially hitsounding I don't agree with hitsound being bad, I think they're quite solid, but can use some modding. I'm more worry about the patterns in Hard. There are quite a lot of patterns which I'm not really happy about, but no one seem to be mention them :S I ain't going to lie through, it took me a long time to finish this because I couldn't think of nice way to map this, but I'm still trying hard to find way to make it better rather than letting it go to graveyard as it was my first beatmap and for all the effort the modders and guest diffs have done for me for my first beatmap.