hi m4m from your q
that's all, gl!!
General
my two cents for your keysound project;
- First, honestly i really recommend you to add more tones for kiai parts. Like 01:23:356 (1,1,1) - , the tone of them are correct ones to vocal there, but it sounds pretty weird since you only added a few sounds, so that means you have more room for doing it especially in kiai and i believe that makes this map more awesome. It doesn't mean any criticism or insult, but just my thoughts on this.
- Second, the pianos don't fit this music imo, to put strings or violas is better idea?
other hs are really nice!
Timeless
- 00:58:111 (8) - to emphasize vocal and finish sounds on 00:58:438 (1) - , how about change this slider like this?
- 01:28:438 (1,2) - they're a bit close to play each other, more distance here like around 400/305 would work well
- 01:48:274 (1,2) - just a suggestion: you can consider the sound of 01:45:652 (1,2,3,4) - as one group, so put 01:48:274 (1) - another place to let players aim back or something is better rather than keep the same distance/ditection
- 03:21:061 (1) - nc error?
- 04:00:979 - you should do this kiai flash from 04:00:733 - to 04:00:815 - cause there's strong vocal
- 04:13:193 (4,5) - this uncompleted stack might occurs misreading as 1/4 rhythm, so do stack completely or put another place
- 04:14:504 (3,4) - same^
that's all, gl!!