thanks!Asahina Momoko wrote:
hi m4m from your qGeneral
my two cents for your keysound project;
- First, honestly i really recommend you to add more tones for kiai parts. Like 01:23:356 (1,1,1) - , the tone of them are correct ones to vocal there, but it sounds pretty weird since you only added a few sounds, so that means you have more room for doing it especially in kiai and i believe that makes this map more awesome. It doesn't mean any criticism or insult, but just my thoughts on this. totally understand your point, but I feel like adding them throughout the kiai makes them way less special than just having them to lead into it, also it already took quite some time (and lots of help from Feerum) to only get the pitch of those 3 notes right xd
- Second, the pianos don't fit this music imo, to put strings or violas is better idea? I will consider that, but I kinda like piano cause it adds nicely to the vocals and brings back the piano from the slower parts
edit: tried viola with same pitch and didn't like that at all :c
other hs are really nice!Timeless
- 00:58:111 (8) - to emphasize vocal and finish sounds on 00:58:438 (1) - , how about change this slider like this?
that works for the finish, but current works beter with vocals since there are no vocals before the downbeat- 01:28:438 (1,2) - they're a bit close to play each other, more distance here like around 400/305 would work well true, probably happened when I fixed some visuals in this part, stacked on 01:30:733 (5) -
- 01:48:274 (1,2) - just a suggestion: you can consider the sound of 01:45:652 (1,2,3,4) - as one group, so put 01:48:274 (1) - another place to let players aim back or something is better rather than keep the same distance/ditection rotated those patterns a bit for different angles. dont want spacing change cause i'd like rto have consistent 2/1 spacing here. mainly for reading and cause the part is so calm
- 03:21:061 (1) - nc error? i have single nc on this for every kiai, mainly cause it doesn'T work with the pattern before/after in most so I'll have it consistent for all of them
- 04:00:979 - you should do this kiai flash from 04:00:733 - to 04:00:815 - cause there's strong vocal loool good catch, that kiai was mistake, probably copied silenced slidertail timingpoint from the kiai. fixed and added kiai flash on the right spot
- 04:13:193 (4,5) - this uncompleted stack might occurs misreading as 1/4 rhythm, so do stack completely or put another place
- 04:14:504 (3,4) - same^ don't think they are a problem and I never use perfect stacks so only once would be weird
that's all, gl!!
edit: did some changes to sb files/new ones so would be good to redownload