1. Love that SB, nice!

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  captin1

1. 00:19:670 (1) - I get a better effect from this spinner if it would end at 00:21:965 - instead of the current place, try it! It's also pretty cool because players have that small gap between the spinner and the first object.
2. 00:27:539 (1,3) - Could you try blanketing it? It doesn't look appealing this way at all, I feel like a nice blanket should fix things here, smoother to play that way~
3. 00:31:309 (4) - Just something minor here, if you would pull the slider more to the right, the transition would be better.
4. 00:36:391 (7,1) - Kind of big spacing although it plays fine, what would improve this though would be to move 1 a bit closer?
5. 00:55:572 (6,7) - This surprised me a lot, I'd CTRL + G 00:55:736 (7) - for more enjoyable movement?
6. 01:56:391 (8) - I like how this slider would look as rotated a bit, then again the transition to the next slider would be messed up but, take a look anyway!
   
   Example

   
7. 02:27:539 (1,2,3,4) - Played really nicely, great job!
8. 05:26:637 (1) - I honestly think adding a whistle to the end of the spinner would fit, might be just me though..
   Delis
   01:19:342 (5,6,7,8,9) - If you want to, you could re-arrange the whole stream like this; It'd give the stream overall a better look and blanketing 01:18:850 (2) - which I find cool.
   
   Example

   
9. 01:21:965 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think giving this more of a circular flow instead of this would play better, don't you think? That way it'd look more appealing too, here's an example!
   
   Example

   
10. 01:25:244 (1) - I find this very awkward to play, the sudden jump wasn't enjoyable at all. I think what would work better here would be to increase the spacing gradually or just make the stream spacing a bit bigger, try both and see what you prefer.
11. 01:27:047 (3,4,5) - Isn't this kind of inconsistent? I glanced at the kiais quickly and didn't see a rhythm similar to this so it'd be nice if you could change it into something else. On the other hand, it plays well but then again a rhythm like this http://puu.sh/aBf7O/b674466086.jpg would play better (for me, at least)
12. 01:45:900 (5) - The music kinda wants a repeat slider or a stream here and that bothered me from the moment I played this, maybe you could mix something up here? If you really prefer to use 1/1 slider, I'd shorten it up by 1/4 so 01:46:228 - this gets played which is really an important beat, try something here >w<
13. 02:38:687 (10) - Wouldn't a NC here be more logical than 02:38:850 (1) - , 10 is a stronger beat and the vocals start here, I don't see a reason why not.
14. 02:43:932 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Awesome pattern, played really nicely!
15. 02:48:850 (2,1) - Spacing is REALLY surprising, is there a way you could move the note a bit more closer to the slider? Or what would probably work is to give 02:48:850 (2) - a NC due to the slowdown, might help players!
16. 03:03:441 (1,3) - Blanket is a bit off, mind fixing that?
17. 04:13:113 (2) - NC again due to the same reason I stated above? More logical here!
18. The parts from 04:13:441 - to 04:18:359 - AND 04:23:769 - to 04:34:096 - were a bit confusing because between those lines, the spacing is literally quite huge when the song is really calm and peaceful, I expected way less spacing. The song is long (almost 6 minutes), you guys don't have ANY breaks so the least you could do is nerfing some of the spacing you have there, I feel like after that it'd be a lot better.

Asphyxia wrote:

captin1 requested a mod, why hello there. I hope you guys know that the map is evil, no breaks D: broke my stamina orz

[General]

1. Love that SB, nice!

[Eternal]

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  captin1

1. 00:19:670 (1) - I get a better effect from this spinner if it would end at 00:21:965 - instead of the current place, try it! It's also pretty cool because players have that small gap between the spinner and the first object.
2. 00:27:539 (1,3) - Could you try blanketing it? It doesn't look appealing this way at all, I feel like a nice blanket should fix things here, smoother to play that way~ tried but ends up messing up too much of the current patterning, so i'll keep as is
3. 00:31:309 (4) - Just something minor here, if you would pull the slider more to the right, the transition would be better.
4. 00:36:391 (7,1) - Kind of big spacing although it plays fine, what would improve this though would be to move 1 a bit closer?
5. 00:55:572 (6,7) - This surprised me a lot, I'd CTRL + G 00:55:736 (7) - for more enjoyable movement? hmm i prefer the current one, since it's a smoother cursor motion
6. 01:56:391 (8) - I like how this slider would look as rotated a bit, then again the transition to the next slider would be messed up but, take a look anyway! yeah i like this as is, looks better from the previous slider imo
7. 02:27:539 (1,2,3,4) - Played really nicely, great job!
8. 05:26:637 (1) - I honestly think adding a whistle to the end of the spinner would fit, might be just me though.. well the end is silenced to make room for that super cute vocal, so can't hear any whistles anyway
   

Sweet collab, call me back~

Asphyxia wrote:

(ノ・ω・)ノ

#1

1. 00:46:391 (3) - Maybe you would prefer a triplet or 5-object stream instead to match the note density of this part better?
2. 02:33:277 (6,2) - The overlapping isn't very appealing and also impairs the visibility of (2) a bit. On my first playthrough, it felt unexpected.
3. 05:20:982 (2,3) - This seems a little excessive and inconsistent with previous rhythms of this section I suppose. Not hearing anything on 05:21:064 and 05:21:228 so maybe just go with something like:
   

1. 01:34:588 (2) - Might have missed a clap on the tail lol.
2. 01:38:359 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Keeping in mind how the music plays, it feels like the jump sizes should be the other way around for this pattern in that 01:39:014 (1,2) should larger than 01:38:359 (1,2,3,4) as those hits in the music are much more impactful.

1. I'm not very knowledgeable about storyboarding, but maybe it would be nice if SB/Delis.png faded with the background at 01:23:932 and 04:20:982 for a nicer effect?

Trust wrote:

We should spectate Delis more often. indeed! cause delis is so moe =w=

[Eternal]
@captin1:

1. 00:46:391 (3) - Maybe you would prefer a triplet or 5-object stream instead to match the note density of this part better? nah i think it's fine
2. 02:33:277 (6,2) - The overlapping isn't very appealing and also impairs the visibility of (2) a bit. On my first playthrough, it felt unexpected. adjusted a bit, hopefully this works
3. 05:20:982 (2,3) - This seems a little excessive and inconsistent with previous rhythms of this section I suppose. Not hearing anything on 05:21:064 and 05:21:228 so maybe just go with something like: i like thisssssssss
   

@yf_bmp:

1. I'm not very knowledgeable about storyboarding, but maybe it would be nice if SB/Delis.png faded with the background at 01:23:932 and 04:20:982 for a nicer effect? YES I DID IT WHEEE

Nice. Not really anything to say as I really enjoy this map. Hopefully this helps~

captin1 wrote:

Trust wrote:

We should spectate Delis more often. indeed! cause delis is so moe =w= .........♂

Trust wrote:

[Eternal]
@Delis:

1. 01:34:588 (2) - Might have missed a clap on the tail lol. orz yes added
2. 01:38:359 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Keeping in mind how the music plays, it feels like the jump sizes should be the other way around for this pattern in that 01:39:014 (1,2) should larger than 01:38:359 (1,2,3,4) as those hits in the music are much more impactful. ~ made more larger jump 01:39:014 (1,2) - and then adjusted 01:39:998 (3,4,1,2) - for straight line

Nice. Not really anything to say as I really enjoy this map. Hopefully this helps~

Delis wrote:

indeed! cause delis is so moe =w= .........♂

Giralda wrote:

Delis wrote:

indeed! cause delis is so moe =w= .........♂

kawaii delishu

1. Enable widescreen support, otherwise it would be pointless to have images of that size (1366x768 even on the SB).
2. Like Lanturn said the title is wrong (I think this too after an exhaustive search with no results about the current title lol). The unicode title is: "感傷の摩天楼" and the romaji "Kanshou no Matenrou", be sure to fix this too and if you want add "sentimental skyscraper" in the tags.

• Delis:

1. 03:28:195 (6,7) - Since these slider/circle belongs to the same combo of 03:27:539 (2) the spacing between (6) & (7) is kinda weird (obvious reasons), so maybe modify the spacing between these beats or add new combo orrrr remove (7) and add one repeat on (6). I personally think the repeat fits better with the track o3o.
2. 03:29:506 (5,6) - Maybe considers Ctrl+Ging these circles because the voice suggesting jump starts in 03:29:506 (5).
3. 04:15:572 (1) - I don't know about you but I expected a jump here, if you agree with me, ctr+ging this slider and move the next circle to the new tail: http://puu.sh/aOhPk/efa6790d55.png
4. 04:30:162 (2) - Here I expected a jump too u_u Maybe: 04:30:162 (2,3) - ctr+ing these circles.
5. 04:37:375 (3) - Add new combo here. If you add be sure to add another here 04:38:687 (3). Here one example: 03:23:932 (1) & 03:25:244 (1).
   
   captin:
6. 03:57:211 (4) - How about Ctrl+Ging this slider? o3o

Kenezz wrote:

Hey!

[General]

1. Enable widescreen support, otherwise it would be pointless to have images of that size (1366x768 even on the SB). I actually discussed this with yf when he first gave the SB, and because of how he shifts the image during some parts, it ends up with some odd overlapping on the side https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1840355 and it's a hassle to fix. plus, he's currently afk for a week to deal with school. I think it's fine to leave it as is
2. Like Lanturn said the title is wrong (I think this too after an exhaustive search with no results about the current title lol). The unicode title is: "感傷の摩天楼" and the romaji "Kanshou no Matenrou", be sure to fix this too and if you want add "sentimental skyscraper" in the tags. yep, done

[Eternal]

• captin:

1. 03:57:211 (4) - How about Ctrl+Ging this slider? o3o sure

Call me back o3o/

Kenezz wrote:

Hey!

[Eternal]

• Delis:

1. 03:28:195 (6,7) - Since these slider/circle belongs to the same combo of 03:27:539 (2) the spacing between (6) & (7) is kinda weird (obvious reasons), so maybe modify the spacing between these beats or add new combo orrrr remove (7) and add one repeat on (6). I personally think the repeat fits better with the track o3o. changed to a reverse slider!
2. 03:29:506 (5,6) - Maybe considers Ctrl+Ging these circles because the voice suggesting jump starts in 03:29:506 (5). ah, I have followed somehow sound of the song, this is why I put whistle for all circles here. also I personally like 03:29:670 (6,1,2) - this almost straight flow, sorry I wanna keep as is ><
3. 04:15:572 (1) - I don't know about you but I expected a jump here, if you agree with me, ctr+ging this slider and move the next circle to the new tail: http://puu.sh/aOhPk/efa6790d55.png the ctrl+g flow was not my type, I made a jump on my own instead.
4. 04:30:162 (2) - Here I expected a jump too u_u Maybe: 04:30:162 (2,3) - ctr+ing these circles. ouch sorry, I really liked this square pattern orz but in my opinion, this pattern fits here so much ;_; also adjusted the spacing of the square a bit.
5. 04:37:375 (3) - Add new combo here. If you add be sure to add another here 04:38:687 (3). Here one example: 03:23:932 (1) & 03:25:244 (1). wow nice, I totally forgot to add lol.

Call me back o3o/