[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

ayy i feel this background is far more fit than you current bg http://puu.sh/qFv79/cbb1b6ec98.jpg we're so happy
what do u think ?

Evening wrote:

Personally felt that Black Another is pretty ok, just going to give some suggestions

What i felt both Anothers didn't do so well is to emphasize different instrumentals in the section here: 00:11:556 (11556|3) - where both vocal cuts and the drum instruments get mixed together. I just didn't feel that much of a difference between the notes while i'm playing even though there are a ton of vocal cuts here and there

Apple & MEGA's Black Another

01:16:096 (76096|3) - One thing that kind of bothers me is that the releases here have no sound to accompany it and I have to release on time, so note like 01:16:583 (76583|3) - have release timings that I have no cues to go for which is quite annoying. Suggesting to have LN releases like these timed, so for example:
{

01:16:583 (76583|3) - The release end here can be shifted 1/2 earlier to a spot where there is a sound and note to give an audio cue for the player to release

01:16:745 (76745|2) - This can be moved to 01:17:556 (77556|0) -

01:19:177 (79177|1) - moved to 01:19:502 (79502|3) -

01:19:826 (79826|1) - to 01:20:150 (80150|0) -

01:19:988 (79988|3) - to 01:20:961 (80961|1) -

01:19:988 (79988|3,80150|0) - Would be great if these were moved 1/2 earlier as there is a 1/1 cue there

01:21:610 (81610|3) - and so on for the rest of the inverse section

} Fixed the LN parts

01:33:286 (93286|0,93367|1,93448|0,93529|1,93610|0,93691|1,93772|0,93853|1,93934|0,94015|1,94096|0,94177|1,94259|0,94340|1,94421|0,94502|1,94583|0,94664|1,94745|0,94826|1,94907|0,94988|1,95069|0,95150|1,95232|0,95313|1,95394|0,95475|1,95556|0,95637|1,95718|0,95799|1,95880|0) - Quite skeptical about this actually, even though i can do it quite easily I'm not too sure about most players at this skill level, think you can sort of cheat the consistency here by removing 01:34:583 (94583|0) - or shifting it to column 4 (even though it plays fine idk about it being too hard) Lol actually I thought that I should balance the notes there since the first transition 01:33:205 (93205|2) - is in right hand so the transition note ahead should be in left hand. Now for another thought of mine. How about 01:34:583 - being a double minijack?

01:37:177 (97177|1) - Not too sure what to comment at kiai actually, it's quite underwhelming but I doubt there is anything you can do to make it harder so (???) At first I thought to spam LNs here but IDK lel

uhhh the harder 2 difficulties for now lol I'm kinda tired

Evening wrote:

Personally felt that Black Another is pretty ok, just going to give some suggestions

What i felt both Anothers didn't do so well is to emphasize different instrumentals in the section here: 00:11:556 (11556|3) - where both vocal cuts and the drum instruments get mixed together. I just didn't feel that much of a difference between the notes while i'm playing even though there are a ton of vocal cuts here and there

Apple & MEGA's Black Another

It is quite apparent that the difficulty level of this map is quite uneven, think you can bump up difficulty for certain sections like

00:13:502 (13502|2,14150|1) - you can map the 1/4 here

00:16:096 (16096|1,16096|0,16177|3,16259|2,16340|1,16421|0,16421|3) - Think you can make this a minijack stream

00:18:691 (18691|1,19340|1) - you can also map the 1/4 here

00:19:664 (19664|0,20313|3) - you can minijack these vocals

00:21:123 (21123|2,21205|1) - Similarly, on column 2

00:23:880 (23880|3,24529|1) - 1/4 here too

00:37:177 (37177|1,37340|0) - Not too sure if the 1/4 in between these notes are skipped on purpose so i'm just pointing out that there is a 1/4 sound in between

00:41:556 (41556|1,41880|2,42205|2) - These feel like they are mapped to the vocals but they are not at the same time, feels quite confusing, you can kind of do this if you're looking at the vocals



00:45:610 (45610|2,45610|3,45691|1,45691|0,45853|3,45853|2,46015|1,46015|0,46096|3,46096|2) - Suggesting to avoid a full {12}{34} oriented rhythm here since your other patterns here seems to be a mix of {12}{34} jumptrills and {13}{24}s

01:16:096 (76096|3) - One thing that kind of bothers me is that the releases here have no sound to accompany it and I have to release on time, so note like 01:16:583 (76583|3) - have release timings that I have no cues to go for which is quite annoying. Suggesting to have LN releases like these timed, so for example:
{

01:16:583 (76583|3) - The release end here can be shifted 1/2 earlier to a spot where there is a sound and note to give an audio cue for the player to release

01:16:745 (76745|2) - This can be moved to 01:17:556 (77556|0) -

01:19:177 (79177|1) - moved to 01:19:502 (79502|3) -

01:19:826 (79826|1) - to 01:20:150 (80150|0) -

01:19:988 (79988|3) - to 01:20:961 (80961|1) -

01:19:988 (79988|3,80150|0) - Would be great if these were moved 1/2 earlier as there is a 1/1 cue there

01:21:610 (81610|3) - and so on for the rest of the inverse section

}

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01:37:177 (97177|1) - Not too sure what to comment at kiai actually, it's quite underwhelming but I doubt there is anything you can do to make it harder so (???)


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Another

00:05:880 (5880|2,6042|3) - Think you can hammer this for the claps

00:10:340 (10340|1,10421|2,10502|1,10583|0,10664|2,10745|3,10826|1,10907|0,10988|1,11069|2,11150|3,11232|2) - Think you can do a running man pattern for this, an example would be:



Usually running man patterns would have a column that anchors and appears every 2 notes

00:29:718 (29718|1,29718|0,29718|2,29880|2,29880|3,30042|1,30042|0,30205|3,30205|2,30367|2,30367|0,30367|1,30529|3,30529|2,30691|1,30691|0,30853|2,31015|0,31056|1) - I don't really like this transition from a 1/2 chord section to a full-fledged 1/4 jumptrill section, felt a bit too sudden. I believe you can add a 1/4 section in between these notes to make the transition smoother 00:29:718 (29718|2,31015|0) -

00:34:421 (34421|0,34583|3) - Make this stair from right to left for PR

00:37:826 (37826|3,37988|2) - Left to right

00:38:313 (38313|0,38637|3) - Right to left

00:40:421 (40421|3,40583|2) - Left to Right


uhhh the harder 2 difficulties for now lol I'm kinda tired

Evening wrote:

Hyper

00:04:907 (4907|1,5069|0,5069|2) - You might want to hammer 1 of these since you hammered 00:02:475 (2475|3,2637|3) - for the double kicks in the music

00:14:150 (14150|3,14150|2,14313|0) - Think you should have a hammer here instead of 00:13:988 (13988|2,14150|2,14150|3) - since i'm guessing that you're hammering for vocals like this 00:19:988 (19988|2,19988|3,20150|2) -

00:27:123 (27123|0,27123|2,27123|3,27286|1) - Might want to hammer once here like you did on the finishes @ 00:28:421 (28421|1,28421|3,28421|0,28583|1) - and 00:29:718 (29718|1,29718|3,29718|0,29880|3) -

00:39:610 (39610|1) - might want to move to 4 for PR

00:40:421 (40421|3,40583|2) - Stair to the right

00:40:907 (40907|0,41232|3) - Stair to the left for PR

01:14:150 (74150|2,74150|0) - Think you're missing a clap here

01:16:421 (76421|3,76583|2) - Make this {3}{4} for PR

01:22:421 (82421|1,82583|3,82745|2,83556|3) - Make this {1}{2}{3}{2}

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OH MAN HITSOUND MODDING
Might sound kinda boring but i'm required to do this so
--

00:06:691 (6691|2) - Not too sure why is this a finish (?)

00:24:529 (24529|1) - Is the extra clap here intended ? Since it looks like you're adding clap every 2/1

00:50:799 (50799|2) - Missing a whistle probably

00:53:069 (53069|1) - Think this works better if you put a whistle rather than a clap

01:27:691 (87691|0,87691|3) - Make one of these a whistle

01:39:772 (99772|0) - Don't think you need a clap here

01:45:610 (105610|1) - ^

01:46:583 (106583|3) - Missed out a clap here i think

All Applied!
Black Another


I forgot to hitsound mod this so here goes

00:19:015 (19015|3) - Missing a whistle

00:30:286 (30286|2,30691|1,30853|2) - Think it'll sound better if you just put claps for all of these

00:43:988 (43988|0) - Missing Finish?

01:07:664 (67664|2) - Missing clap

01:11:799 (71799|0,71880|1,71961|0,72042|3) - Think it'd sound better if you had claps for all of these

01:12:529 (72529|3) - According to 00:31:015 (31015|3,31015|0) - you should have claps for both of these notes, you can have only 1 too, you decide

01:31:988 (91988|0) - Think this should be a finish

01:33:853 (93853|1) - Missing whistle?

01:44:961 (104961|3) - Missing whistle



All Applied!

Another


00:02:150 (2150|1) - Missing clap

00:06:367 (6367|0,6610|3) - Might want to have clap for both of these

00:18:042 (18042|3) - Remove the whistle here, you have another whistle on column 3 already

00:24:691 (24691|2) - Don't think this whistle is intended here

00:51:772 (51772|1,51772|0) - eeeeeh change one of them to clap or whistle, stacking 2 of the same sounds together sound quite weird since it produces an abnormally loud hitsound

01:01:826 (61826|1) - Clap?

01:03:448 (63448|1) - Think it's better to have a whistle here

01:03:772 (63772|0) - Since you should have a clap here

01:11:880 (71880|1) - Missing finish i suppose

01:13:826 (73826|2) - Think it's supposed to be a whistle since you mapped claps to the vocals

01:26:799 (86799|0) - Finish?

01:30:286 (90286|3,90529|0) - Finishes?

01:31:826 (91826|2) - ^



All Applied!
CS' Normal


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HITSOUND MOD TIME

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00:01:178 (1178|0) - You can put a finish here

00:11:556 (11556|3) - eeeh for this section I don't really recommend putting 1/1 kicks since you lack some notes to put a kick on, I think you can leave this whole section without hitsound if you'd like since I think the hitsound kinda makes this section sound weirder lol

00:26:475 (26475|1) - Think this clap isn't needed, put the clap @ 00:26:799 (26799|0) - instead

00:27:123 (27123|3) - Missing Finish?

00:58:583 (58583|3) - Think you're missing a clap

01:03:123 (63123|2) - Think this note is supposed to be soft-hitclap2 (which is a normal clap) instead of a soft-hitclap1 (which is a snare) so just shift the green line here

01:16:421 (76421|0) - Think you can add a finish here

01:21:934 (81934|1,82583|2) - you should remove the whistles here, they sound out of place

01:24:205 (84205|1,84529|2,84853|0,85177|3) - remove these too

01:31:988 (91988|3) - Make this a finish?

FROM 01:37:177 (97177|3) - TO 01:52:745 (112745|3) - (not inclusive of those notes) - I think you can just leave this whole section blank of hitsounds if you'd like, hitsounds here sound really out of place and doesn't really sound consistent at all, just have a constant hitsound that is audible for every note

Critical_Star wrote:

fixed all in evening mod + self mod, thanks~
hitsound fixed by apple

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192,192,116313,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,116637,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,116637,128,4,117610:0:0:0:0:
448,192,117610,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,117691,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,117772,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,117934,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,117934,1,4,0:0:0:0:

• 
  [Hyper]

1. 01:03:324 - unsnapped green lines (?) please snap to 01:03:448 - or 01:03:205 - like other diffs
2. 01:57:691 (117691|1,117772|2) - why there is no hitsound here . . . please add claps like other diff
   
   [Another]
3. 01:57:610 (117610|3,117691|0,117772|3) - add whistle, like on Black Another diff
4. 01:35:556 (95556|1,95637|2,95718|0) - move to 1 4 2 column, it's more balance according to your previous pattern flows
   
   [Black Another]
5. 00:10:583 - how about http://puu.sh/qQ8XR/b99a4ab126.jpg it feels more comfort to hit imo

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Thanks Eve for improving this map ~

Just few things :

• 
  [Hyper]

1. 01:03:324 - unsnapped green lines (?) please snap to 01:03:448 - or 01:03:205 - like other diffs ok
2. 01:57:691 (117691|1,117772|2) - why there is no hitsound here . . . please add claps like other diff oh.. I forget that..
   
   [Another]
3. 01:57:610 (117610|3,117691|0,117772|3) - add whistle, like on Black Another diff added
4. 01:35:556 (95556|1,95637|2,95718|0) - move to 1 4 2 column, it's more balance according to your previous pattern flowsHmm nice
   
   [Black Another]
5. 00:10:583 - how about http://puu.sh/qQ8XR/b99a4ab126.jpg it feels more comfort to hit imo hmm minijacks is little bit hard to play, changed.

[-obee58-] wrote:

wait isn't artist ryu*??

or is "Remixed by P*Light" how it is in IIDX

erlinadewi- wrote:

congratulation ^w^)/

ajeemaniz wrote:

hey there, grats for qualification! and hi meowpaz


i have a small opinion regarding the harder diffs, compared with CS's Normal (imo its the only best diff in this set), 00:11:556 (11556|3) - until 00:31:015 (31015|3) - , 01:37:177 - to 01:52:745 - , and other part of this map in Hyper, Another, and Black Another is very bland.. i also found a quiet serious problem with difficulty curve problem in another & black another

the double-single-double-single-double-single-- (or triple-single-double-single-triple-single-double-single--) pattern only follows kick & snare (every 1/1 white line) and secondary synth (every 1/2 red line), they are everywhere, and they doesn't represent the main synthesizer that should've be emphasized instead, which in my opinion it doesn't fit to the main rhythm, and its visually.. too old fashioned, no hard feeling, but SanadaYukimura got the point in his disqus comment..

I thought you guys actually liked that for being readable AF ._. First when I mapped this, I actually had a thought to layer the "we are so happy~" or the string instru with LN, but yea it didn't worked perfectly yes I'm aware about the current pattern being bland lmao.

all the problem generally because the Kick bass layering..
BGA provides more than kick sound, there's a lot of other instruments..
even the pattern looks different, when you force to keep using kick bass, its only creates a bland pattern.
even the kick sound is loud enough, i see you map the same structure in everywhere. that's the problem.

in short, my suggestion below will points out to remove those kicks & adding couple notes for those synthesizers to improve the layering & variation..

here to solve it, by using CS's Normal as reference, i only gives you a rough idea per each stanza, about what i describe above.. and if you still don't understand just poke me again in game :

[Hyper, Another, & Black Another]
i use hyper diff for time stamp & screenshot, you can use it for other diff, and map it with different note destiny in Another & Black Another while maintaining the layering idea

01:37:177 - to 01:52:745 - here comes another bland part.. listen closely while seeing the highlighted note, you may emphasize these synthesizer at :

big click

01:37:177 (97177|2,97340|0,97502|1,97988|1,98150|2,98475|0,98799|3,98961|2,99286|3,99448|1,99772|3,99934|1,100096|2,100259|3,100583|1,100745|2,100907|0,101069|1,101232|2,101313|1,101394|0,101556|2,102367|3,102529|2,102691|1,103177|1,103340|2,103664|3,103988|1,104150|2,104475|2,104637|1,104961|2,105123|3,105286|1,105448|2,105610|1,105772|3,105934|2,106096|1,106259|3,106502|1,106745|1) -

same idea like i told you before, these notes can use double or 1/2 LN, and remove 1 notes on every double kick between those notes, example at 01:37:177 - http://puu.sh/qQBJo.jpg Before I submit my collab, it is actually an LN wall galore lmao but I think it's too much. Let me know if it's actually a great idea so maybe I can worked on that kind of pattern afterward

[Another & Black Another]
01:15:123 (75123|3) - black another can use 3434 1212 3434 1212 jack, make black another different than another Well, I can do that if there's another chance after this

01:31:988 (91988|0) - sy lmao.. wait.. why don't you map it as jumpstream instead? i mean, with layering those main synth until 01:34:583 (94583|2) - you'll have various pattern than 12 34 12 34, the rest you can use double stream.. example from 01:31:988 - to 01:33:286 - http://puu.sh/qQCIp.jpg

Wut I thought people always complaining about jumpstreams because they be like "Firetruck JSes it's the worst pattern exist". Then I changed that into this because I considered that. You can check my alpha version of this part by clicking here. Anchors because of the "we" samples. If it's more preferrable, I can reverts this part into this again.


that's all i can say, i can see a huge room that you leave it empty for this mapset & this map needs further polishing, mostly on how mapper could expand the idea how to represent the music into their map, because each stanza / phase could have various pattern that follows the various rhythm provided by the music itself.. overall its okay, but not okay enough to be nominated..

and i personally dislike the way you use many same hitsounds in the folder, all soft hitnormal & hitfinish are same, soft hitwhistle 1-2 too.. if you want to utilize soft-hitwhistle 3, and soft hitclap 1 2 3, use a custom name instead and use sample import (take a look at other mapset hitsound).. its easier that way & doesn't take much hitsound files in folder (this is not osu!standard lol) TBH I haven't checked the HSes yet because I'm busy IRL and lazy Ingame lmao

1 more thing, i don't talk about mapping style because its not relevant in this context; i don't force you to change your mapping style, but i would like to see you help yourself to expand your mapping style than double-single-double-single boring pattern :3/

good luck!

ajeemaniz wrote:

hey there, grats for qualification! and hi meowpaz


i have a small opinion regarding the harder diffs, compared with CS's Normal (imo its the only best diff in this set), 00:11:556 (11556|3) - until 00:31:015 (31015|3) - , 01:37:177 - to 01:52:745 - , and other part of this map in Hyper, Another, and Black Another is very bland.. i also found a quiet serious problem with difficulty curve problem in another & black another

the double-single-double-single-double-single-- (or triple-single-double-single-triple-single-double-single--) pattern only follows kick & snare (every 1/1 white line) and secondary synth (every 1/2 red line), they are everywhere, and they doesn't represent the main synthesizer that should've be emphasized instead, which in my opinion it doesn't fit to the main rhythm, and its visually.. too old fashioned, no hard feeling, but SanadaYukimura got the point in his disqus comment..

all the problem generally because the Kick bass layering..
BGA provides more than kick sound, there's a lot of other instruments..
even the pattern looks different, when you force to keep using kick bass, its only creates a bland pattern.
even the kick sound is loud enough, i see you map the same structure in everywhere. that's the problem.

in short, my suggestion below will points out to remove those kicks & adding couple notes for those synthesizers to improve the layering & variation..

here to solve it, by using CS's Normal as reference, i only gives you a rough idea per each stanza, about what i describe above.. and if you still don't understand just poke me again in game :

[Hyper, Another, & Black Another]
i use hyper diff for time stamp & screenshot, you can use it for other diff, and map it with different note destiny in Another & Black Another while maintaining the layering idea

00:11:556 - // remove 00:12:205 (12205|0,12205|2) - 00:13:502 (13502|3,13502|2) - , http://puu.sh/qQzMy.jpg Rearrange, Actually i ignored some kicks for rearrange, then the acid only have one note... But now pattern more focus on acid... Actually idont want two notes because it's seems hard in hyper. So i'll add two notes on another and black another.
00:14:150 - // 00:14:475 (14475|1,14475|2,14799|3,14799|2,15448|0,15448|3,16583|2) - remove, then http://puu.sh/qQzXZ.jpg ^

and the idea above can be applied from 00:11:556 - to 00:31:015 - , you can add small amount of 1/2 LN every 8 bars where there's a synthesizer, too I heard it. Added

00:53:718 (53718|1,53718|3) - 00:54:691 (54691|2,54691|3) - 00:55:015 (55015|1,55015|3) - 00:55:177 (55177|0) - 00:56:313 (56313|0,56313|1) - you can remove these notes to avoid too much polyrhythm layering OK. Rearrange in hyper.

you can apply the idea above from this 00:53:069 - to 01:03:448 -, you can keep 01:03:448 - to 01:13:502 - with those polyrhythm for variation Ok.

01:27:610 (87610|2,87772|1) - remove o.o Removed.

01:37:177 - to 01:52:745 - here comes another bland part.. listen closely while seeing the highlighted note, you may emphasize these synthesizer at :

big click

01:37:177 (97177|2,97340|0,97502|1,97988|1,98150|2,98475|0,98799|3,98961|2,99286|3,99448|1,99772|3,99934|1,100096|2,100259|3,100583|1,100745|2,100907|0,101069|1,101232|2,101313|1,101394|0,101556|2,102367|3,102529|2,102691|1,103177|1,103340|2,103664|3,103988|1,104150|2,104475|2,104637|1,104961|2,105123|3,105286|1,105448|2,105610|1,105772|3,105934|2,106096|1,106259|3,106502|1,106745|1) -

same idea like i told you before, these notes can use double or 1/2 LN, and remove 1 notes on every double kick between those notes, example at 01:37:177 - http://puu.sh/qQBJo.jpg Use ln on hyper, another, but actually i need to wait mega's reply to fix black another. But actually i dont want remove 1 note on every double kick... So i keep that double notes for kick.

[Another & Black Another]
00:29:718 (29718|3) - Black Another using easier pattern compared with Another
Another uses jumpstream and black another is apparently.. easier.. what.. Okay. Added notes for each red line.

00:37:177 (37177|0) - 00:37:502 (37502|2) - remove this in another ok

that's all i can say, i can see a huge room that you leave it empty for this mapset & this map needs further polishing, mostly on how mapper could expand the idea how to represent the music into their map, because each stanza / phase could have various pattern that follows the various rhythm provided by the music itself.. overall its okay, but not okay enough to be nominated..

and i personally dislike the way you use many same hitsounds in the folder, all soft hitnormal & hitfinish are same, soft hitwhistle 1-2 too.. if you want to utilize soft-hitwhistle 3, and soft hitclap 1 2 3, use a custom name instead and use sample import (take a look at other mapset hitsound).. its easier that way & doesn't take much hitsound files in folder (this is not osu!standard lol)

1 more thing, i don't talk about mapping style because its not relevant in this context; i don't force you to change your mapping style, but i would like to see you help yourself to expand your mapping style than double-single-double-single boring pattern :3/

Fixed about hitsound. Deleted unused green-line.
Thanks for mod! :3
good luck!

ajeemaniz wrote:

'_J' man, i think my explanation about the synth in my previous post is not clear enough
https://puu.sh/qYeAT/6f3c57c091.osu
take a look at this, observe the normal-hitwhistle hitsound, that's what i meant about why too much kick and not following the main rhythm

also additionally, some notes can be moved respectively to make it more nifty
[Another]
00:12:042 (12042|2) - add 1 for synth (or acid?), 00:12:205 (12205|3) - remove
00:12:853 (12853|1,12853|2) - 34
00:13:340 (13340|3) - to 1
00:13:664 - add
00:17:069 (17069|1) - 1
00:17:232 (17232|0) - 2
00:17:394 (17394|2) - to 1, 00:17:394 (17394|1) - remove
00:17:556 (17556|3) - add in 2

00:22:421 (22421|1) - add 2 notes o.o Why add 2 notes here?
00:22:583 (22583|1) - remove
00:25:177 (25177|1) - move to 00:25:340 (25340|3) - in same column
00:26:313 (26313|1) - add in 1
00:29:880 (29880|2,30205|0,30529|2,30853|1) - remove each red to make easier than black another
00:41:556 (41556|0,41880|1,42205|1,42529|2) - remove in another, add in black another No. That's in black another is ignored by intentional. Deleted in another too.
00:47:880 (47880|3) - add in 3, 00:48:367 (48367|1) - move to 1, 00:48:529 (48529|0,48691|1) - ctrl + J (switch column)
00:49:502 (49502|1,49664|3) - ctrl + J (switch column)

00:57:934 (57934|3) - remove in another, add in black another
01:03:934 (63934|3) - move to blue line

[Hyper]
00:16:096 (16096|2,16421|2) - remove, its harder than Another and
00:16:096 (16096|3) - make this LN start at 00:16:421 (16421|0) -

regarding the acid, 00:11:556 (11556|3,12205|0,12853|3,13177|0,13502|1) - this become a little bit too inconsistent with the rhythm '_' you may want to review it
(ps: if you remove 00:12:205 (12205|0,12205|2,13177|0) - & 00:13:502 (13502|1,13502|3) - 00:17:394 (17394|3,17394|0) - 00:18:691 (18691|0,18691|2) - you can completely ignore the kick)
00:23:556 (23556|2) - add for the synth & clap..
00:24:205 (24205|1) - ^
00:27:448 (27448|1) - ^

ajeemaniz wrote:

oh well, get some stars >.>

Davin Fortune wrote:

Hello
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CS' Normal

00:08:961 - How about this? hmmm nope, i would prefer to use LN like 00:09:934 (9934|2) - better
00:11:232 (11232|1) - delete this LN, since it should be pause i prefer to make a LN here instead pause
00:12:853 - Better, when i play i do listen nope, when i map i do listen.. these aren't the same pitch sound here

to that unique beat
00:14:150 - This one is more unique! hmm, i am following vocal pitch here and i think my current one is better
00:19:664 (19664|0) - delete this, since in my opinion i want to focus only to the unique ???? what is unique? i am catching the vocal pitch here nicely and i don't think this is an issue to it

sound, not think that note as a connector or making it into a trill
00:24:691 (24691|1,25015|0,25340|3) - make like upper pattern(unique sound :3) uhh i guess nope, if u mean making them into same col i think not since they have different pitch each time
00:34:583 (34583|2) - delete and 00:34:583 - add note at column 3 why? i think LN would fit better instead normal note here
00:39:772 - ^, but column 2 but?, u mean move to col 2? i think not, col 4 is the best for me here
00:50:475 (50475|1,50475|0,50799|2,50799|1,51123|2,51123|3,51448|1,51448|2) - i want to variate them here instead the same col everytime

delete them and just replace it with a LN
01:24:529 (84529|2) - delete
01:37:340 (97340|2) - delete
01:42:367 (102367|2,102529|3) - i think just make it into LN and make it end at the
^ i am sorry but i have to reject all this, i don't wanna use too much LN for this part, i only use LN example like 01:37:664 (97664|3,98313|1) - instead of 1/2 LN here
01:42:691 - , it's kinda weird for me reason?
01:44:961 (104961|2,105123|1) - ^ LN end at 01:45:286 - why is it end there? these are just normal note here
01:53:069 (113069|2,113718|2) - delete why?

Davin Fortune wrote:

Hello
The rest mod going to placed at this post
Column : 1-2-3-4

CS' Normal

00:08:961 - How about this?
00:11:232 (11232|1) - delete this LN, since it should be pause
00:12:853 - Better, when i play i do listen

to that unique beat
00:14:150 - This one is more unique!
00:19:664 (19664|0) - delete this, since in my opinion i want to focus only to the unique

sound, not think that note as a connector or making it into a trill
00:24:691 (24691|1,25015|0,25340|3) - make like upper pattern(unique sound :3)
00:34:583 (34583|2) - delete and 00:34:583 - add note at column 3
00:39:772 - ^, but column 2
00:50:475 (50475|1,50475|0,50799|2,50799|1,51123|2,51123|3,51448|1,51448|2) -

delete them and just replace it with a LN
01:24:529 (84529|2) - delete
01:37:340 (97340|2) - delete
01:42:367 (102367|2,102529|3) - i think just make it into LN and make it end at the

01:42:691 - , it's kinda weird for me
01:44:961 (104961|2,105123|1) - ^ LN end at 01:45:286 -
01:53:069 (113069|2,113718|2) - delete

Hyper

00:03:610 (3610|3) - just change it into LN which end at 00:03:772 - and keep only 2 note

on that line
00:07:664 - not trying to make it 3?
00:10:259 - add a note
00:09:934 - i think both 2 notes aren't really needed, just deleted, or u can keep a note at

there to keep the pattern's consistency
00:16:177 (16177|0,16259|2,16340|1) - make it into trill pattern
00:16:583 (16583|2) - delete
00:23:718 (23718|2,23718|0) - change to one, just like the other
00:26:961 - change to one, the beat isn't clear
00:27:772 - make it 2, look 00:28:583 (28583|1,28745|2,28745|3,28907|1,29069|

0,29069|3,29232|2,29394|3,29394|1) -
00:52:988 (52988|3) - move to 00:52:745 -
01:02:150 - make it 3
01:17:556 - ^
01:19:988 (79988|1) - delete, no 3 voice together there, only two
01:45:448 (105448|1,105448|2,105610|0,105610|1) - change pls, should not be into this

flow : 01:45:772 (105772|1,105772|3,105934|2,105934|0,106096|1,106096|3,106259|

2,106259|3) -

Another

00:22:745 - just 1 note
00:26:799 - 2 note
00:27:286 (27286|3,27286|1,27448|0,27448|3,27610|2,27610|0,27772|3,27772|

1,27934|3,27934|2,28096|0,28096|1,28259|3,28259|1) - why chord stream? , why not

like 00:10:340 (10340|1,10421|3,10502|1,10583|3,10664|0,10745|3,10826|0,10907|

3,10988|1,11069|3,11150|1,11232|3) -
00:28:583 (28583|1,28583|3,28745|1,28745|0,28907|3,28907|2) - weird pattern, feel

unmatch with the sound :/
00:52:421 (52421|3) - delete, the sound actually stops at 00:52:583 - but i think that part

should be a place to pause
01:04:015 (64015|1,64015|3,64096|2,64096|0,64259|3) - try compare it with 01:06:853

(66853|3,67015|2,67015|0,67177|1) -
Start at 01:16:421 - until 01:26:799 - , add a note if you found piano sound and keep the

note like 01:25:826 (85826|2) - and 01:21:610 - (just remind so you won't make any

mistake)
01:30:286 (90286|3,90286|1) - delete, unconsistent with the other
01:40:583 - add , sound there
01:45:123 (105123|1,105123|2) - delete, i think it's better to have a pause
01:50:313 - just one, since only connector between chord
01:53:961 (113961|2) - why have to make 1 note here?

Black Another

00:23:069 (23069|3,23069|1,23232|0,23232|2,23394|3,23394|1) - unconsistent with 00:22:096 (22096|0,22259|3,22259|1,22421|2) -
00:54:934 (54934|2,55015|1,55015|0,55096|3,55259|3,55340|1,55340|2) - why different with the stair before and after this part?

Other are good!

Here a star

-[Apple]- wrote:

Davin Fortune wrote:

Hello
The rest mod going to placed at this post
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Hyper

00:03:610 (3610|3) - just change it into LN which end at 00:03:772 - and keep only 2 note on that line No here. I followed snare and kick.
00:07:664 - not trying to make it 3? It's just Hyper. I don't like put 3 notes on hyper, It's kinda hard for me.
00:10:259 - add a note
00:09:934 - i think both 2 notes aren't really needed, just deleted, or u can keep a note at there to keep the pattern's consistency Actually i followed vocal+kick at 00:09:934 (9934|2) - , 00:10:259 (10259|2) - Followed finish here. So I'm not going to change that
00:16:177 (16177|0,16259|2,16340|1) - make it into trill pattern Actually current is better for me. But rearranged some.
00:16:583 (16583|2) - delete Why delete here? It's a fade-out of vocal.
00:23:718 (23718|2,23718|0) - change to one, just like the other ok
00:26:961 - change to one, the beat isn't clear Alright.
00:27:772 - make it 2, look 00:28:583 (28583|1,28745|2,28745|3,28907|1,29069|0,29069|3,29232|2,29394|3,29394|1) - fixed
00:52:988 (52988|3) - move to 00:52:745 - Why to move that? I think that was a clap sound here.
01:02:150 - make it 3 No, I don't want to 3 here because if too many 3 notes, hyper will be hard :3..
01:17:556 - ^ ^
01:19:988 (79988|1) - delete, no 3 voice together there, only two Listen again. There has a melody here. And i'm not following the vocal.
01:45:448 (105448|1,105448|2,105610|0,105610|1) - change pls, should not be into this ok. Rearranged some.

flow : 01:45:772 (105772|1,105772|3,105934|2,105934|0,106096|1,106096|3,106259|

2,106259|3) -

Another

00:22:745 - just 1 note ok
00:26:799 - 2 note Why two notes here? It's seem not loud.
00:27:286 (27286|3,27286|1,27448|0,27448|3,27610|2,27610|0,27772|3,27772|1,27934|3,27934|2,28096|0,28096|1,28259|3,28259|1) - why chord stream? , why not At 00:27:286 I followed vocal, But that was not following vocal at all. So i didn't change.

like 00:10:340 (10340|1,10421|3,10502|1,10583|3,10664|0,10745|3,10826|0,10907|

3,10988|1,11069|3,11150|1,11232|3) -
00:28:583 (28583|1,28583|3,28745|1,28745|0,28907|3,28907|2) - weird pattern, feel

unmatch with the sound :/ It's was match the sound. Listen again, There has the melody here actually :3
00:52:421 (52421|3) - delete, the sound actually stops at 00:52:583 - but i think that part should be a place to pause No. That was followed the vocal.
01:04:015 (64015|1,64015|3,64096|2,64096|0,64259|3) - try compare it with 01:06:853 (66853|3,67015|2,67015|0,67177|1) - Ehh. Want to make some difference.
Start at 01:16:421 - until 01:26:799 - , add a note if you found piano sound and keep the note like 01:25:826 (85826|2) - and 01:21:610 - (just remind so you won't make any mistake) Actually i followed the hithat after that pattern... So i didn't changed any.
01:30:286 (90286|3,90286|1) - delete, unconsistent with the other deleted
01:40:583 - add , sound there I followed background's ACID. So didnt changed.
01:45:123 (105123|1,105123|2) - delete, i think it's better to have a pause Why delete? I still followed melody here
01:50:313 - just one, since only connector between chord No. It will make more unconsistent.
01:53:961 (113961|2) - why have to make 1 note here? There still have the build-up.

Black Another

00:23:069 (23069|3,23069|1,23232|0,23232|2,23394|3,23394|1) - unconsistent with 00:22:096 (22096|0,22259|3,22259|1,22421|2) - Fixed
00:54:934 (54934|2,55015|1,55015|0,55096|3,55259|3,55340|1,55340|2) - why different with the stair before and after this part? Just want to make some difference.

Other are good!

Here a star

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  [Hyper]

1. 00:30:205 (30205|3) - better to move this into first column to emphasize the vocals more better, since you didn't give enough balance after pressing this one 00:29:718 (29718|3,29880|3) -
2. 00:53:637 (53637|2,53880|2) - they're actually have different sound/pitch, try to re-arrange them into different column too
3. 00:54:610 (54610|0,54772|1) - move to 4 and 1 . . . that would be give better sequence with this pattern 00:54:529 (54529|1,54934|2,55096|2) -
4. 01:02:313 - http://puu.sh/rb6nI/45b549ffcc.jpg
5. 01:11:718 (71718|2) - move to first column, seems you've leaving that blank in long period of time . . . please make it more balance to plays
6. 01:40:907 (100907|0) - why not end the long note at here 01:41:718 - seems the vocal itself is still going on, same as like you did on this part 01:38:313 (98313|0) -
   
   [Another]
7. 00:21:123 - seems this feels so bad for me because you didn't express the instrument flows well . . . my suggestion http://puu.sh/rb6TY/f2de97e65c.jpg
8. 00:24:853 (24853|3,25015|3,25177|3,25340|3) - this pattern are not really works well with vocal imo, try to arrange them like this http://puu.sh/rb72T/28ac310c02.jpg it can be applied start on here 00:25:191 -
9. 00:49:502 (49502|3) - doubled whistle hitsound here . . . delete one sample
10. 01:04:745 (64745|2,64907|2) - they're have different sound/pitch . . . so you can Ctrl G this 01:04:907 (64907|2,64988|1) -
11. 01:10:177 (70177|2,70340|1,70502|2) - re-arrange to 1 3 2 column for more balance
12. 01:12:772 (72772|2) - move to first column, same reason as above ^
13. 01:13:988 (73988|2,73988|3,74150|2,74150|3) - they are really different sound type . . . highly recommended to arrange them with different pattern form too
14. 01:26:799 - try this http://puu.sh/rb7kW/4b743576ea.jpg it's far more fit with current rhythm flows imo
15. 01:28:096 (88096|2,88259|0,88421|3) - to 1 4 3 and 01:28:988 (88988|2) - to 4 . . . same reason as above ^
16. 01:30:205 (90205|0) - if you decide to add a note in here . . . then you should add a note in here too 01:30:367 - to make the flows more perfect to hit, like example http://puu.sh/rb7vY/ccf37a8096.jpg
17. 01:48:529 - you've missing a note for kick + clap sound here . . . please add that (also add clap hitsound too)
18. 01:50:150 (110150|1) - move to 4th column for better balance pattern
    
    [Black Another]
19. 01:02:718 (62718|2,62880|2) - this plays more balance at 2nd column
20. 01:07:664 - seems you've missing a note for clap part here . . . do the same like you did at previous part 01:06:367 (66367|1,66367|3,66367|0,67015|3,67015|2,67015|0) -

Protastic101 wrote:

[CS' Normal]00:36:853 - I think it'd be cool to add an LN here to represent the synth roll and end it at 00:37:502 so then it'd look something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6095055 yea, but i still think it would be better to use less LN here for much neater pattern here
01:14:475 (74475|0,74556|2,74637|1) - Since this is the lowest diff, I think a simpler left -> right roll would be easier to read. So maybe control H to 01:14:556 (74556|2,74637|1) ? hmm, but i want to make a jump feel pattern here , i don't think is really hard to play these

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

seems you remapped some parts too . . .
okay there is nothing wrong if i give you a little mod again then xD

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  [Hyper]

1. 00:30:205 (30205|3) - better to move this into first column to emphasize the vocals more better, since you didn't give enough balance after pressing this one 00:29:718 (29718|3,29880|3) -
2. 00:53:637 (53637|2,53880|2) - they're actually have different sound/pitch, try to re-arrange them into different column too ok. moved that 00:53:637 (53637|2) - to 4.
3. 00:54:610 (54610|0,54772|1) - move to 4 and 1 . . . that would be give better sequence with this pattern 00:54:529 (54529|1,54934|2,55096|2) - Since it's followed pitch here, So i'm not decided to move to 4 and 1, but rearranged some.
4. 01:02:313 - http://puu.sh/rb6nI/45b549ffcc.jpg
5. 01:11:718 (71718|2) - move to first column, seems you've leaving that blank in long period of time . . . please make it more balance to plays Rearranged some here, Seems this suggests is fine for me.
6. 01:40:907 (100907|0) - why not end the long note at here 01:41:718 - seems the vocal itself is still going on, same as like you did on this part 01:38:313 (98313|0) - ok. Moved as you said.
   
   [Another]
7. 00:21:123 - seems this feels so bad for me because you didn't express the instrument flows well . . . my suggestion http://puu.sh/rb6TY/f2de97e65c.jpg ok. But i modified some on what you suggest.
8. 00:24:853 (24853|3,25015|3,25177|3,25340|3) - this pattern are not really works well with vocal imo, try to arrange them like this http://puu.sh/rb72T/28ac310c02.jpg it can be applied start on here 00:25:191 -
9. 00:49:502 (49502|3) - doubled whistle hitsound here . . . delete one sample
10. 01:04:745 (64745|2,64907|2) - they're have different sound/pitch . . . so you can Ctrl G this 01:04:907 (64907|2,64988|1) - Actually i think those are not in same pitch, so i moved one to other col :3
11. 01:10:177 (70177|2,70340|1,70502|2) - re-arrange to 1 3 2 column for more balance
12. 01:12:772 (72772|2) - move to first column, same reason as above ^
13. 01:13:988 (73988|2,73988|3,74150|2,74150|3) - they are really different sound type . . . highly recommended to arrange them with different pattern form too Ok. But for some reason, I don't move 01:15:772 this one since it's in the pattern form.
14. 01:26:799 - try this http://puu.sh/rb7kW/4b743576ea.jpg it's far more fit with current rhythm flows imo
15. 01:28:096 (88096|2,88259|0,88421|3) - to 1 4 3 and 01:28:988 (88988|2) - to 4 . . . same reason as above ^
16. 01:30:205 (90205|0) - if you decide to add a note in here . . . then you should add a note in here too 01:30:367 - to make the flows more perfect to hit, like example http://puu.sh/rb7vY/ccf37a8096.jpg
17. 01:48:529 - you've missing a note for kick + clap sound here . . . please add that (also add clap hitsound too)
18. 01:50:150 (110150|1) - move to 4th column for better balance pattern
    
    [Black Another]
19. 01:02:718 (62718|2,62880|2) - this plays more balance at 2nd column
20. 01:07:664 - seems you've missing a note for clap part here . . . do the same like you did at previous part 01:06:367 (66367|1,66367|3,66367|0,67015|3,67015|2,67015|0) -

Protastic101 wrote:

ayyy, just thought I'd come and give some of my own feedback here while it's dqed for now.

Stuff

[Black Another]00:07:340 (7340|1) - You're missing a clap (softhit-clap) here. The sound is similar to 00:06:691 (6691|1,6691|3)
00:07:988 (7988|0,8637|3) - Claps here too
00:09:286 (9286|2,9286|3) - You have two whistles here, remove one.
00:27:448 (27448|3,27772|3) - Control J, I believe the clap should be at 00:27:448 rather than 00:27:772
00:28:015 (28015|2,28096|1) - Imo, this pattern doesn't look as nice. You might consider making it a left -> right roll like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6094825 But i thought It's fine for me, So no change here.
00:28:177 (28177|2) - If above is accepted, I moved this to 2. ^
00:28:583 (28583|0) - If above accepted, move this to 3. ^
00:29:394 (29394|3,29556|3,29718|3,29880|3,30042|3,30205|3,30367|3,30529|3,30691|3,30853|3,31015|3) - This long stack pls. This is what I came up with to reduce them to 3 notes at max https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6094845 Here's how I got to it:

1. 00:30:691 (30691|1) - 1
2. 00:30:610 (30610|0) - 2
3. 00:30:529 (30529|1) - 3
4. 00:30:529 (30529|3) - 1
5. 00:30:448 (30448|2) - 4
6. 00:30:286 (30286|2) - 4
7. 00:30:367 (30367|3) - 3
8. 00:30:205 (30205|3) - 2
9. 00:30:123 (30123|1) - 4
10. 00:30:042 (30042|3) - 2
11. 00:29:880 (29880|1) - 3
12. 00:29:799 (29799|2) - 2
13. 00:29:718 (29718|1) - 3
14. 00:29:637 (29637|2) - 2
15. 00:29:556 (29556|3) - 1 Ok. All accepted.

00:37:340 (37340|2,37421|1) - I think it'd look nicer as a roll, so control H? Then move 00:37:502 (37502|2) to 2 No change here.
01:02:880 (62880|2,63042|2,63123|1) - I'd consider a control H or something to avoid the 4 note trill at 01:02:880 (62880|2,62961|3,63042|2,63123|3) cause it's kind of uncomfortable imo.

[Another]00:05:880 - Here, you can hear the sound go from right speaker -> left speaker -> centered. So maybe try a pattern like this to represent the shifting sounds https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6094908 But i thought the acid is more soft than clap sound. So I just put the acid with one note.
00:13:664 - I'd really suggest having a note here for the synth like 00:13:988 (13988|0) since it plays awkwardly due to the fact that the player is going to expect a 1/2 note for the sound, but there isn't one. Ok. I just miss that.
00:16:096 (16096|2,16177|3) - I think it'd look a bit nicer and be easier to play if you control J these notes so then you have a right -> left roll with 00:16:177 (16177|3,16259|1,16340|0) Also, if you control J, don't forget to move the whistle back to 00:16:096 Sounds nice for me here.
00:22:421 - Also, add another note, it does feel pretty awkward to suddenly break off the 1/2 beat here. ok
00:24:853 (24853|3,25015|3,25177|3,25340|3) - 4 note stack. I would really consider moving around some of the notes to reduce the stress on the right middle finger. Just jack for vocals. You know that.
00:29:718 - Imo, direction of the burst could be improved here. Try something like this to add direction (basically rolls) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6094930
01:12:691 - I'm kind of sad that you didn't map the 1/4 drum roll here and instead opted for the synth. it's such a nice build up sound but is completely ignored. My recommendation is to either add a 1/4 staircase pattern like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6094944 or add an LN to represent the drum roll like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6094949 No here. Because follow the acid will make this map easier to play. If you follow a drum roll here just will make it more harder.
01:18:367 (78367|3,78691|1) - These are part of the same synth, so I'd consider combining the LNs together and then adding another note at 01:18:691 Actually i agree with you. But I don't want to combining the lns together.
01:19:177 (79177|0) - Move this to 2, honestly with the differing LN lengths of 01:19:015 (79015|0,79177|0,79502|0) , it's pretty uncomfortable to hit.
01:19:502 (79502|1) - If above accepted, move this to 4.
01:40:421 - Please add a note here, it's such an awkward break in the middle of the kiai without a note since the player is expecting a note every 1/1 to keep the beat.

[Hyper]00:06:367 (6367|3,6367|2) and 00:07:340 (7340|3,7340|2,7664|1,7664|3) for example - I think it'd be cool to structure these kicks and doubles the way you structured 00:06:691 (6691|1,6691|2,7015|2,7015|1) since you made those 2 jumps the same chord. So it'd look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6095000 Pay attention to how each double is repeated twice and makes a stack of 4 notes.
00:23:556 - Ahhh, please add a note, these random breaks in the 1/2 beat feel so awkward.
00:29:718 (29718|3,29880|3) and 00:30:205 (30205|3,30367|3,30529|3) - If you're not going to intentionally use jacks, get rid of them because they stress one specific finger more than the others, and don't look as visually appealing. Alternatively, you could try this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6095019 But i use jacks intentionally q.q
01:38:637 - As I said, a filler note is fine here to avoid awkward pauses in the chart like this q.q
01:56:637 (116637|2,116637|3) - I think it'd look nicer to have the LN on the edge, so swap columns here?
01:57:610 (117610|0,117691|1,117772|2) - If you accepted the above, you could then make this a {3-2-3} minitrill which I think would look cool since that's how the song has ended in the upper two diffs. No. that just hyper. If minitrill here will make harder lol.

Gl with qualifying again ^.^ Thanks!

SanadaYukimura wrote:

[Apple & MEGA's Black Another]
01:39:123 (99123|0) - Can someone explain this LN to me? Isn't this supposed to start at 01:39:286 - for the main sound???? No that doesnt supposed to start on 01:39:286, You can listen carefully again that clearity started at 01:39:123 i though
01:47:069 (107069|3) - And this, isnt this should start at 01:46:907 - instead of the current timing Hmm. As I feel, 01:46:907 (106907|1,106988|0) - those two are following the acid and 01:47:069 (107069|3) - is following the main melody. That was correct for me.
01:52:259 (112259|1) - Same problem as I mention That was following the vocal.
Those wrong timing LN only make the player confused while they playing
Good luck

SanadaYukimura wrote:

[Apple & MEGA's Black Another]
01:39:123 (99123|0) - Can someone explain this LN to me? Isn't this supposed to start at 01:39:286 - for the main sound???? Eh? Wait a second. Hear it more closely. Synth is starting at 01:39:123 - Take more time hearing it
01:47:069 (107069|3) - And this, isnt this should start at 01:46:907 - instead of the current timing Well yeah, but I made it starts there so it wouldn't look messed up. Instead, I put 01:46:907 (106907|1,106988|0,107069|3) - to match the lead and extend the 01:47:069 (107069|3) - so it would create a kind of illusion on what you're following. Basically I want to create a pattern that isn't hard to read whilst maintaining the notecount.
01:52:259 (112259|1) - Same problem as I mention Well, assuming that you mean the LN isn't syncing properly... The same reason as the line above. For why I didn't made 01:52:421 - 01:52:583 - LNs like 01:42:042 - it's because I want to create a transition feeling from here to the drumrolls
Those wrong timing LN only make the player confused while they playing
Good luck

-[Apple]- wrote:

SanadaYukimura wrote:

01:52:259 (112259|1) - Same problem as I mention That was following the vocal.
Those wrong timing LN only make the player confused while they playing
Good luck

Even its for the vocal, the current timing still wrong. The "Ah" sound appear at this timing 01:52:096 - alone with the main sound

SanadaYukimura wrote:

[Apple & MEGA's Black Another]
01:39:123 (99123|0) - Can someone explain this LN to me? Isn't this supposed to start at 01:39:286 - for the main sound????
01:47:069 (107069|3) - And this, isnt this should start at 01:46:907 - instead of the current timing
01:52:259 (112259|1) - Same problem as I mention
Those wrong timing LN only make the player confused while they playing
Good luck

Hmm. As I feel, 01:46:907 (106907|1,106988|0) - those two are following the acid and 01:47:069 (107069|3) - is following the main melody. That was correct for me.

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Offset certainly wrong, it should be on 1195 instead Since it just one red line on this song, might could online fix that.

P.s.: the reply below I used new offset

SanadaYukimura wrote:

[Apple & MEGA's Black Another]
01:39:123 (99123|0) - Can someone explain this LN to me? Isn't this supposed to start at 01:39:286 - for the main sound????
01:47:069 (107069|3) - And this, isnt this should start at 01:46:907 - instead of the current timing
01:52:259 (112259|1) - Same problem as I mention
Those wrong timing LN only make the player confused while they playing
Good luck

okay, i will go through this
01:47:086 (107086|3) - certainly wrong, this sound suppose to be on 01:46:924 - , it began on here, i dont know why you left it on here

Hmm. As I feel, 01:46:907 (106907|1,106988|0) - those two are following the acid and 01:47:069 (107069|3) - is following the main melody. That was correct for me.

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Thanks for ruined such a beautiful song.

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Thanks for ruined such a beautiful song.

-[Apple]- wrote:

If you think that I ruined the map. OK. I'll find somebody to Disqualify and wait somebody to remake it soon.

-[Apple]- wrote:

You guys really makes me stressful on the qualify. OK.
Since you all said that I ruined that song, Everyone have the first time to qualify/rank songs, Just feel really sad for what the players or BNs said.
To KK: I was really sad that i ask you for help and then what I've got? You even not check my map and ignored me. Now you say I ruined that map. What can i do for now? I asked you many times for the bn check and before the Fresh chicken's qualify i asked you once more. I'm very disappointed. Everyone isn't best on beginning. So why everyone told me that I ruined that map?
If you think that I ruined the map. OK. I'll find somebody to Disqualify and wait somebody to remake it soon.

Just feel really disappointed...

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Offset certainly wrong, it should be on 1195 instead

P.s.: the reply below I used new offset

SanadaYukimura wrote:

[Apple & MEGA's Black Another]
01:39:123 (99123|0) - Can someone explain this LN to me? Isn't this supposed to start at 01:39:286 - for the main sound????
01:47:069 (107069|3) - And this, isnt this should start at 01:46:907 - instead of the current timing
01:52:259 (112259|1) - Same problem as I mention
Those wrong timing LN only make the player confused while they playing
Good luck

okay, i will go through this
01:47:086 (107086|3) - certainly wrong, this sound suppose to be on 01:46:924 - , it began on here, i dont know why you left it on here I already explain this to SY, tho :/ I intend to create a feeling that you're following the pad but actually you're first following the lead and it continue to the pad sound. Well looks like people dislikes my idea here so I think I should change it.

Hmm. As I feel, 01:46:907 (106907|1,106988|0) - those two are following the acid and 01:47:069 (107069|3) - is following the main melody. That was correct for me.

splitting like that still wrong

01:52:276 (112276|1) - if this for vocal, then it should be on 01:52:316 -
01:52:113 (112113|0,112194|2,112276|1) - but this part different than 01:46:924 (106924|1,107005|0,107086|3) - but both of them is the same (rhythm i would say) Actually 01:52:438 - got the LN shorter because I want to create a transition feeling from the LN parts to the drumroll part.


Little mod: Don't forget to fix offset while checking this mod

[Black Another]
01:20:167 (80167|0) - one you end it on 01:21:303 - else just remove 01:21:627 (81627|0) - (igrone bass) and end on 01:21:627 - ends on 1/2 is honestly weird on this part (reason to let it end on 01:21:303 - because on here have fade in sound, which still reasonable than let it end on 1/2) Wait, I thought I ended it on 01:20:978 ....
01:35:573 (95573|2,95573|3,95654|2,95654|3,95735|0,95735|1,95816|0,95816|1,95897|3,95897|1,95897|0) - again, why igrone just 1/8 sound on here, just remove that jack and add 1/8 here Wow I didn't realized it. Okay, might change it
01:36:708 (96708|3,96708|2,96870|2,96870|3) - again, one note for clap is fine And double for clap is also fine, 01:37:032 - missing clap too It's an echo

01:55:681 (115681|2,115681|3) - why 2 notes here, no reason to put them on here I actually hear a kick there

http://puu.sh/rngty/e8ba93e10e.jpg

Third, Kuo and SY. Ok you both got your point right. You're actually helping. But the way you convey the suggestion are somewhat rude. I know how you talk but looks like Apple is thinking you are attacking him. He is a new mapper. He still need to learn more. Don't attack him. Saying things like "Ruining the song" is inappropriate if you aim it to a new mapper. You should guide him to the right path, not by bullying him. We all experienced the time we start mapping. The struggle of creating a good chart. And we actually arrived at a higher place. And how did you arrive there? By your own muscle? No, by the community support. We have those who support us until we reached this point. So, become the one who supports the new mapper.

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

2016 and all people cares is just user rating

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

2016 and all people cares is just user rating

Frim4503 wrote:

i love dat user rating >.<

this map is remind me when my first map got ranked

-Kamikaze- wrote:

making maps for user rating and number of plays is like making clickbait cancer videos on youtube, they may have big numbers but they are still clickbait cancer

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Offset certainly wrong, it should be on 1195 instead All diff applied that offset

Little mod: Don't forget to fix offset while checking this mod

[Black Another]
00:05:897 (5897|0,5897|3,5897|2) - why on here is 3 notes? only have single clap sound here, but amount of notes are different (don't tell me reason is sound is lower on here 3 notes -> 1 notes) To be honest, It was really a fade-out for me. So i did 3>1 here. Might reconsider it later..
Solution: since there is only have one clap here so only 1 note would help Just thought might have more solutions of it.. Since I still have doubt.
00:09:951 - add a note on 4th for bass Added
00:25:681 - strange that it have 2 notes here while on 00:26:978 - isn't Oh, looks like i missed it ;v
00:31:032 - to 00:31:519 - is fine but 00:31:519 - to 00:32:005 - try to change direction of it, pitch change on here too ok. Rearranged on 00:31:519 - 00:32:005
00:43:843 (43843|2) - remove this, it's no need to add such a note on here for rhythm while you're doing bass cymbal only, if keep it, they will break the feeling
00:46:438 (46438|2) - Removed. Since I focus the drum/baz here and it's really break the feeling.
00:50:492 - suggestion: http://puu.sh/rnbn1/3639908d11.jpg 00:50:492 - to 00:51:140 - make a little warm up, try 1/2 2 notes and 1/4 1 note, with that lets move on 00:51:140 - to 00:51:465 - patterns with 2 notes 1/4, then 00:51:465 - to 00:51:789 - with 1/8 (I can't believe you igrone such a sound like this) Ehh. So idk what are you following with 1/8? Confusion.

Move on: 00:51:789 - http://puu.sh/rnbrh/914a7a79a9.jpg which is simple and enjoyable, help people have a little break after that long streamy Done.
01:08:654 - lost a note here for cymbal just like 01:09:789 (69789|0,69789|3,69789|1,69951|1,69951|3,69951|0) - Yea. There should be triple notes but there have a ln end here. So no change here.
01:13:113 (73113|2,73154|3,73276|2,73316|3,73438|2,73478|3) - like i said before Ehh. Change it to 1/8.

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

[Hyper]
00:12:870 - missed a note for bass
00:16:113 (16113|3) - while this long note sound not present anything, better remove it imo
(even you follow bg sound but it still sound wreird)
00:18:708 (18708|0) - same goes
00:23:573 - suddenly 3 notes, no reason to put 3 notes here
00:25:519 - and suddenly 1 note, add one here for bass
00:30:870 - add a note on here because you did like that on 00:30:546 -
00:31:032 (31032|0) - because it's already hyper diff, which mean you can map 1/4 here, so add some 1/4 than just a normal hold
00:50:492 - how about a clean pattern on here, welcome all advanced players to try with http://puu.sh/rCJAd/e7866a8e94.jpg
00:53:249 (53249|3) - if you argee with that, move to 2nd for balance
00:53:735 - 00:55:032 - 00:56:330 - would be better if you add one note for kick, one kick would be match
and why 00:57:627 (57627|2,57627|3) - is two notes for kick
01:12:627 (72627|2) - no instrument on here, i mean the sound you follow like 01:12:708 (72708|3,72951|2,73113|1,73276|3,73438|2) -
01:16:113 (76113|2,76113|1,76113|3) - 3 notes is overchord to me, better remove one, here just single kick
01:37:032 (97032|3,97194|3,97357|3) - hmm, not really bad but kinda hard dont you think, my suggestion: http://puu.sh/rCJMX/4fd5b3d4f7.jpg (single clap)
01:40:762 (100762|2) - move to 1st for balance
01:42:951 (102951|3) - wrong place, can be count as unrankable issues, move to 01:43:032 -
01:44:330 - missing a note for kick
01:44:978 -
01:46:924 -
01:48:870 -
01:50:167 - pattern suggestion: http://puu.sh/rCK0s/dd239cbd44.jpg (cuz u missing a note on here too)
01:56:654 (116654|3) - same reason as before

[Another]
00:10:600 (10600|3,10762|3) - while this 4th jack is kinda annoying to play i would suggest to move this to 3rd
00:16:194 (16194|2) - wrong placed hs, move this hs to 00:16:113 -
00:22:600 - missing a note for kick, according to 00:25:194 -
00:24:546 - same
00:26:492 -
00:26:816 -
00:16:438 (16438|3) - if you add a hold for beatdrop (vocal) like this, better to remove this note 00:16:600 (16600|1) - for hand feeling
00:13:519 (13519|3) - 00:18:708 (18708|3) - 00:23:897 (23897|3) - 00:26:492 (26492|3) - kind of ridiculous, better remove like as Hyper suggestion, if you want to follow bg sound, better split them into 2 1/1 long notes, or just follow that 1/4 sound directly
00:27:140 - missing a note for cymbal according to 00:28:438 -
00:27:140 - to 00:29:735 - why all 1/2 jacky and double here, no 1/4? it's all 1/4 drum here, better follow 1/4
00:32:330 - to 00:41:411 - you might want to follow pitch like as Black Another
00:47:897 - add a note for cymbal
00:50:492 -
00:51:140 -
00:58:276 -
01:08:330 (68330|2) - where is that beatdrop long note, just like 00:57:951 (57951|1,57951|0) -
01:11:249 - missing a note for cymbal
01:12:384 -
01:18:708 (78708|2,79032|0,79194|2,79519|3) - what are this for?
01:20:167 (80167|1) -

01:20:167 (80167|1,81627|3,81951|3,82276|0) -
01:22:600 (82600|2,82924|0,83249|3,83573|1,83897|3,84222|2) -
01:24:546 (84546|3,84870|1,85194|3,85519|1) - 01:25:843 (85843|2,86167|0,86492|1) - igrone these sound, just focus on main melody, break time
(Black Another just all long notes)

01:30:222 (90222|2,90384|1) - what are these for, you didn't add it on 01:27:708 -
01:32:005 - 01:32:654 - 01:33:303 - 01:33:951 - 01:34:600 - add note for cymbal

01:34:600 - http://puu.sh/rCKAY/0b2437b1bc.jpg big distance, just add some double 1/4 on here, suggestion: http://puu.sh/rCKDg/12bf795fd0.jpg
01:38:492 (98492|3) - suppose to be on 01:38:330 - (snapping conflict: http://puu.sh/rCKEn/01ee3cca5d.jpg)
01:40:276 (100276|3) - http://puu.sh/rCKF5/7f595fbb76.jpg
01:44:330 (104330|0) - wow, why end on here????? http://puu.sh/rCKGg/5206487fb9.jpg
01:48:708 (108708|0) - snapping conflict: http://puu.sh/rCKMb/3c4f91fdff.jpg

01:39:140 - 01:39:789 - 01:40:438 - 01:40:600 - 01:40:762 - 01:42:384 - 01:43:681 - 01:44:330 - 01:48:870 - 01:49:519 - all missing one note, and you know why (kick, instrument,..)

01:56:330 (116330|3) - move to 1st for balance

[Black Another]

2016-10-01 19:55 -[Apple]-: orz i'm here
2016-10-01 19:55 Kuo Kyoka: wait
2016-10-01 19:58 Kuo Kyoka: 00:01:195 - 
2016-10-01 19:58 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/913980 Remixed by P*Light - We're so Happy (P*Light Remix) IIDX ver. [Apple & MEGA's Black Another]]
2016-10-01 19:58 Kuo Kyoka: add a note on 1st for cymbal
2016-10-01 19:58 -[Apple]-: Ehh. Sounds here just a kick
2016-10-01 19:58 -[Apple]-: Add here more like follow the main melody
2016-10-01 19:58 -[Apple]-: So added
2016-10-01 19:59 Kuo Kyoka: 00:05:897 (5897|2,5897|0,5897|3,6059|2,6059|0,6222|1) - just personal, well i would make them have one note here with mini jack, on 1st
2016-10-01 19:59 Kuo Kyoka: free to reject
2016-10-01 19:59 Kuo Kyoka: 00:01:195 - on here clearly have cymbal
2016-10-01 19:59 Kuo Kyoka: feel like fade out sound so you may not notice it
2016-10-01 20:00 Kuo Kyoka: 00:09:951 - wrong on here
2016-10-01 20:01 -[Apple]-: :3???
2016-10-01 20:01 -[Apple]-: add on 00:10:276 ?
2016-10-01 20:02 -[Apple]-: 00:05:897 (5897|2,5897|0,5897|3,6059|2,6059|0,6222|1) - Think there more like a fade-out so i'd like to make them 3>2>1
2016-10-01 20:02 Kuo Kyoka: actually i mean this http://puu.sh/ru1NZ/e3af17eeed.jpg
2016-10-01 20:02 Kuo Kyoka: not that 1234 1234
2016-10-01 20:03 Kuo Kyoka: still single clap sound anyways, kinda annoying with that 3-2-1 but fine
2016-10-01 20:04 -[Apple]-: Ok done on 00:09:951
2016-10-01 20:05 Kuo Kyoka: 00:11:167 (11167|3,11249|3) - would break the feeling from 00:10:276 (10276|0,10357|0,10438|2,10519|2,10600|1,10681|1,10762|3,10843|3) - 
2016-10-01 20:05 Kuo Kyoka: suggestion http://puu.sh/ru1Yk/65ae460b43.jpg
2016-10-01 20:07 -[Apple]-: 00:10:924 (10924|0,11005|2,11086|1,11167|3) - These notes are make a transition from 00:10:276 (10276|0,10357|0,10438|2,10519|2,10600|1,10681|1,10762|3,10843|3) - HERE
2016-10-01 20:08 -[Apple]-: So i know what you mean, add one more minijack here ?
2016-10-01 20:08 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/ru2cn/289ec7b615.jpg similar yet?
2016-10-01 20:10 Kuo Kyoka: add jack on here 00:11:167 - is unreasonable since you added them like 00:10:276 (10276|0,10357|0,10438|2,10519|2,10600|1,10681|1,10762|3,10843|3) - so better move something to 00:10:924 (10924|0,11005|0) - 
2016-10-01 20:11 -[Apple]-: ok. Sounds reasonable, fixed
2016-10-01 20:11 Kuo Kyoka: 00:22:762 - have piano on here
2016-10-01 20:11 Kuo Kyoka: 00:31:032 (31032|3,31032|1,31032|0,31113|2,31113|3,31194|1,31194|0,31276|3,31276|2,31357|0,31357|1,31438|3,31438|2,31519|1,31600|0,31600|3,31681|1,31681|2,31762|0,31762|3,31843|1,31843|2,31924|3,31924|0,32005|1,32005|2) - this is so wrong
2016-10-01 20:11 Kuo Kyoka: it was 1/8 why change to 1/4 here
2016-10-01 20:12 Kuo Kyoka: this is what i mean http://puu.sh/ru2lG/b141e70d9e.jpg
2016-10-01 20:13 -[Apple]-: lel, Might just misunderstanding ur mod
2016-10-01 20:14 Kuo Kyoka: lul
2016-10-01 20:15 Kuo Kyoka: 00:32:330 - 
2016-10-01 20:16 Kuo Kyoka: not thing wrong with this but if you follow pitch it would be better
2016-10-01 20:16 Kuo Kyoka: do you want or not?
2016-10-01 20:17 -[Apple]-: let me see
2016-10-01 20:17 -[Apple]-: Sounds following the pitch will better ...
2016-10-01 20:18 -[Apple]-: But If follow the pitch it will kinda weird
2016-10-01 20:19 Kuo Kyoka: wait
2016-10-01 20:19 Kuo Kyoka: making a pattern
2016-10-01 20:19 -[Apple]-: ok
2016-10-01 20:27 -[Apple]-: Few years later lel
2016-10-01 20:28 Kuo Kyoka: save as new difficult http://puu.sh/ru2WX/92cdc2373a.osu
2016-10-01 20:28 Kuo Kyoka: and refer it
2016-10-01 20:30 Kuo Kyoka: 00:47:735 - should be 1/8 here http://puu.sh/ru336/64759c4086.jpg
2016-10-01 20:32 -[Apple]-: wait what
2016-10-01 20:32 -[Apple]-: wait what
2016-10-01 20:32 -[Apple]-: It's 1/8 now isn't it
2016-10-01 20:33 Kuo Kyoka: this is lastest http://puu.sh/ru39B/338c05cec8.jpg
2016-10-01 20:34 -[Apple]-: sounds I did some self-changes lel
2016-10-01 20:34 Kuo Kyoka: 01:08:654 - add a note for cymbal
2016-10-01 20:35 -[Apple]-: oh crap mega move the offset to 1178 again
2016-10-01 20:35 -[Apple]-: Add a cymbal here might be hard?
2016-10-01 20:35 -[Apple]-: Since will jack with 01:08:718 (68718|1) -
2016-10-01 20:36 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/ru3h4/e9187e3aa9.jpg
2016-10-01 20:36 Kuo Kyoka: 01:12:546 (72546|1,72546|0,72546|3,72627|3,72627|2,72708|1,72708|0,72789|3,72789|2,72870|1,72870|0,72951|3,72951|2,73032|1,73032|0,73113|3,73154|2,73194|1,73235|0,73276|3,73316|2,73357|1,73397|0,73438|3,73478|2,73519|1,73519|0) - eh
2016-10-01 20:37 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/ru3j0/495b18246d.jpg
2016-10-01 20:39 Kuo Kyoka: the rest are fine to me
2016-10-01 20:39 Kuo Kyoka: that mega part is fixed so i dont have anything left to mention
2016-10-01 20:39 Kuo Kyoka: also don't forget to fix preview time
2016-10-01 20:40 -[Apple]-: ok..
2016-10-01 20:40 -[Apple]-: Wait me check again hitsound
2016-10-01 20:40 -[Apple]-: Oh crap i'm using the old version to fix again
2016-10-01 20:40 Kuo Kyoka: eh
2016-10-01 20:40 -[Apple]-: :(.. okay apply to new version will be quickly
2016-10-01 20:41 Kuo Kyoka: haven't mod other diffs yet
2016-10-01 20:41 Kuo Kyoka: maybe tomorrow
2016-10-01 20:42 -[Apple]-: ok
2016-10-01 20:55 -[Apple]-: Done apply mod to new version OFC
2016-10-01 20:55 Kuo Kyoka: okay

00:33:465 (33465|0) - wrong snapping, should be end on 00:33:627 -
00:41:249 - on here http://puu.sh/rCKRt/ca9dda6e42.jpg (missing a note for cymbal)

done

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

recheck


[Hyper]
Missing a note on 00:02:492 - for bass just like 00:03:789 -
00:03:789 (3789|1) - missing whistle, add W
00:13:519 (13519|3) - add W
00:13:519 (13519|3) - missing a note for bass
00:13:519 (13519|3) - 00:13:519 (13519|3) - 00:13:519 (13519|3) - 00:13:519 (13519|3) -
00:23:573 (23573|3) - add clap
00:31:032 - add a note on 4th for cymbal
00:53:005 (53005|3) - move it to 00:53:086 - for cymbal
01:03:303 (63303|2) - remove this, make a small break on here for instrument flow more better, suggestion: http://puu.sh/rKGKT/9b0fa66040.jpg
01:27:708 (87708|0,87951|0) - add W and remove F on 01:27:708 (87708|0) -
01:32:005 (92005|3,92654|3) - add F
01:33:303 (93303|0,93951|1) - add F
01:34:600 (94600|2,95249|0) - add F

accorind to other parts like 01:38:816 - / 01:40:438 -
01:37:519 - missing a note for snare (add clap)
01:38:492 - missing a note for bass
01:39:140 - same
01:39:789 - missing a note for bass
01:40:276 (100276|1) - remove this, according to 01:40:276 (100276|1) -
01:37:681 (97681|2) - extend this to 01:38:005 - according to 01:40:276 (100276|0) -
01:41:086 (101086|0) - sound start on 01:40:924 -
01:41:086 - add a note for bass
01:42:384 -
01:43:681 -
01:51:303 - how about add a hold on here just like other 01:43:519 (103519|0,104330|1) -
01:56:654 (116654|3) - remove W on here and change to F

[Another]
00:01:195 (1195|3,1195|0) - add W and F for each note
00:02:005 (2005|3) - remove one W
00:24:222 (24222|0) - add C
00:26:816 (26816|1) - add C and 00:26:816 (26816|3) - add W
00:29:735 (29735|3) - add F
00:32:330 (32330|2) - move to 1st for balance (sorry my bad)
00:37:519 (37519|2) -
00:40:113 (40113|2) -
00:41:249 (41249|0,41411|1,41411|3,41735|0,41735|3,41735|2,42059|3,42059|0,42059|2,42384|1,42384|3,42384|0) - I think we already talk about this, better fix it for the chords amount: http://puu.sh/rKH8o/5d8d73cea6.jpg
00:49:681 (49681|0) - add W
00:51:140 (51140|3) - add F
01:03:789 (63789|0) - add C
01:21:627 (81627|0) - split it to 2 long notes, like: http://puu.sh/rKHe2/abba42110e.jpg for melody flow
01:25:357 (85357|2,85519|3) - merge them into one, snapping conflict: http://puu.sh/rKHgZ/8673a39d7f.jpg
01:32:005 - to 01:35:897 - this streamy 1/4 it's fine but I think you need to make it more harder, http://puu.sh/rKHjX/2fcb0aa31c.jpg really dbig distance
My suggestion would be add 2 notes on 1/1 snap // I don't want to make it harder, current is fine for me.
and 3 notes for bass + cymbal
01:37:681 (97681|2) - extend till 01:38:005 - http://puu.sh/rKHlO/41bca75701.jpg
01:40:438 (100438|1,100438|2,100600|1,100762|1,100762|2) - I don't quite understand this pattern, really painful to play and not reasonable, why on here have 3 notes (01:40:762 - so here is suggestion: http://puu.sh/rKHr1/a1f313ab75.jpg don't forget to fix hitsound
01:48:059 (108059|2) - same problem with 01:37:681 (97681|2) -

Well, that's all for now

There always have places for improvement

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Again, I think you should check mod more carefully or if you rejected it, please give me a proper reason

[Hyper]
00:12:222 (12222|2) - add whistle
00:13:519 (13519|0) - remove clap
00:16:113 - 00:16:762 - 00:17:411 - 00:18:708 - 00:19:032 - add a note because you added 2 notes for each kick sound
00:54:708 - suddenly missed 2 notes on here, you did add it on 00:56:005 - and 00:53:411 - as an example
01:43:681 - missing a note for kick sound

[Another]
00:24:222 (24222|2,24384|2,24546|2,24708|2,24870|2) - this minijack with 5 notes multiply is kind of unreasonable to do this, I would suggest: http://puu.sh/rZiCD/41beb9d80f.jpg
00:26:492 - add a note for kick sound
01:18:708 (78708|2,79032|0,79194|2,79519|3) - remove this, random normal notes
01:22:600 (82600|2) - move to 1st for balance
01:38:492 - missing a note for kick sound
01:40:276 (100276|2) - why suddenly a note right here? there was nothing on 01:37:681 -

That's all

Protastic101 wrote:

no kudosu

[General]

1. Not a big issue, but I think CS' Normal should be stylized as "CS's Normal" with an s after the apostrophe. Honestly, I don't care, just pointing it out I guess.
2. Your clap.wav sounds pretty low quality tbh, maybe try this one instead http://puu.sh/t6kfg.wav oki

[Hyper]
01:05:330 (65330|2) - Imo, would be easier to hit if this were in 1 cause then you'd make a kind of linear roll with 01:05:330 (65330|2,65411|1,65492|2) -
01:29:005 (89005|3) - Might be easier to hit if this were in 1 so that the chord is complementary to 01:28:762 (88762|0,88762|2,88843|3,88843|1) -

Hitsounds
00:24:222 (24222|3,25519|0) - Add w here to be consistent with the rest of the section (not including transition)
00:53:735 (53735|0) - Add w
01:16:438 (76438|2) - Add F because it's the start of a new section
01:21:627 (81627|2) - Add W
01:26:816 (86816|2) - Add F
01:37:519 (97519|0) - Add W
01:40:276 (100276|1) - Remove W
01:56:167 (116167|1,116492|1) - Remove W

[Another]
00:19:762 (19762|0,19843|1) - I'd consider a control J here so that 00:19:681 (19681|2,19762|0,19843|1) - creates a linear [3][2][1] roll which is easier to read imo Seems current is the 321 pattern. I'm confusion orz
00:37:194 (37194|1,37194|0) - Idk, think it might be easier to play if the LN was in 3 and the short note in 1 like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6938036
01:54:059 (114059|3) - Consider moving this to 1 to avoid the one handed trill on 01:53:816 (113816|2,113897|3,113978|2,114059|3,114140|2) -

Hitsounds
00:24:870 (24870|2) - Add W
01:16:438 (76438|0) - Add F

[Collab Black Another]
00:16:113 (16113|3,16194|3,16276|2,16357|2) - When doing jacks, I'd really recommend against putting them on the same hand consecutively. Try this instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6938066
00:28:032 (28032|2,28113|1,28113|3,28194|2) - Ima just admit now, I really hate this diamond shaped pattern. Might try something like this instead to make it easier to hit https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6938071
01:32:573 (92573|2,92654|3,92735|2,92816|3,92897|2) - Longer trills like this are a bit eh to hit. Maybe try putting the trill onto both hands like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6938085

Hitsounds
00:30:384 (30384|0) - Add W
00:30:708 (30708|3) - ^

Protastic101 wrote:

Not a big issue, but I think CS' Normal should be stylized as "CS's Normal" with an s after the apostrophe. Honestly, I don't care, just pointing it out I guess. my every GD doesn't have 's behind for it so i guess is fine since double S seems odd , but i think i will change my diff name for this one

[CS' Normal]
00:37:194 (37194|0,37194|2,37519|3,37519|1) - Might be easier to hit these on the same hand instead of both like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6937568 rerrange a bit, i wanted to keep LN at col 3 for PR
00:44:005 - to 00:46:600 - Feels very right hand heavy since column 1 isn't used that much. Might consider control H with 00:43:194 (43194|3,43519|0) - and then making 00:45:140 (45140|2,45303|0,45303|1) - [1][23] respectively. yep
01:00:870 (60870|2,61194|1) - Might work to control H this so that 01:00:546 (60546|0,60870|2,61194|1,61519|3) - create a simple left -> right roll with each other. yes
01:14:492 (74492|0,74573|2,74654|1) - Since this is the only place you've used 1/4 in so far in the music, might be better to make it less separated and more connected like this for better readability (highlighted notes have been changed) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6937602 i make it into 1-4-1 here
01:52:438 (112438|1) - I think it'd be easier to coordinate finger movement if you moved this to 4 so that the player won't have to hold an LN and tap on the same hand. ya

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320,192,90059,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,90303,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,90546,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,90708,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,90708,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,90870,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,91032,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,91194,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,91357,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,91438,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,91600,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,91843,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,92005,128,4,94600:0:0:0:0:
320,192,92005,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,92654,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,93303,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,93951,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,94600,128,2,95897:0:0:0:0:
192,192,94600,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,94924,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,95249,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,95573,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,95897,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,95897,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,96708,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,96708,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,97194,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,97194,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,97357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,97519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,97681,128,0,98005:0:0:0:0:
64,192,98005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,98167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,98330,128,0,99140:0:0:0:0:
64,192,99140,128,0,99789:0:0:0:0:
448,192,99789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,99951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,100113,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,100276,128,0,100600:0:0:0:0:
320,192,100600,128,0,100924:0:0:0:0:
448,192,100924,128,0,101735:0:0:0:0:
192,192,101735,128,0,102384:0:0:0:0:
320,192,102384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,102546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,102708,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,102870,128,0,103194:0:0:0:0:
192,192,103194,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,103357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,103519,128,0,104330:0:0:0:0:
448,192,104330,128,0,104978:0:0:0:0:
320,192,104978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,105140,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,105303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,105465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,105627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,105789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,105951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,106113,128,0,106924:0:0:0:0:
448,192,106924,128,0,107573:0:0:0:0:
320,192,107573,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,107573,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,107735,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,107897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,108059,128,0,108384:0:0:0:0:
320,192,108384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,108546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,108708,128,0,109519:0:0:0:0:
192,192,109519,128,0,110167:0:0:0:0:
448,192,110167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,110330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,110492,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,110654,128,0,110978:0:0:0:0:
320,192,110978,128,0,111303:0:0:0:0:
448,192,111303,128,0,112113:0:0:0:0:
64,192,112113,128,0,112762:0:0:0:0:
448,192,112438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,112600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,112762,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,112762,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,113086,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,113735,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,113897,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,114059,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,114059,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,114384,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,114708,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,114708,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,115032,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,115032,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,115357,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,115357,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,115681,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,115843,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,115843,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,116330,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,116330,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,116654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,116654,128,4,117627:0:0:0:0:
192,192,117627,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,117708,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,117789,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,117951,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,117951,1,4,0:0:0:0:

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