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00:08:961 - How about this?
00:11:232 (11232|1) - delete this LN, since it should be pause
00:12:853 - Better, when i play i do listen
to that unique beat
00:14:150 - This one is more unique!
00:19:664 (19664|0) - delete this, since in my opinion i want to focus only to the unique
sound, not think that note as a connector or making it into a trill
00:24:691 (24691|1,25015|0,25340|3) - make like upper pattern(unique sound :3)
00:34:583 (34583|2) - delete and 00:34:583 - add note at column 3
00:39:772 - ^, but column 2
00:50:475 (50475|1,50475|0,50799|2,50799|1,51123|2,51123|3,51448|1,51448|2) -
delete them and just replace it with a LN
01:24:529 (84529|2) - delete
01:37:340 (97340|2) - delete
01:42:367 (102367|2,102529|3) - i think just make it into LN and make it end at the
01:42:691 - , it's kinda weird for me
01:44:961 (104961|2,105123|1) - ^ LN end at 01:45:286 -
01:53:069 (113069|2,113718|2) - delete
00:11:232 (11232|1) - delete this LN, since it should be pause
00:12:853 - Better, when i play i do listen
to that unique beat
00:14:150 - This one is more unique!
00:19:664 (19664|0) - delete this, since in my opinion i want to focus only to the unique
sound, not think that note as a connector or making it into a trill
00:24:691 (24691|1,25015|0,25340|3) - make like upper pattern(unique sound :3)
00:34:583 (34583|2) - delete and 00:34:583 - add note at column 3
00:39:772 - ^, but column 2
00:50:475 (50475|1,50475|0,50799|2,50799|1,51123|2,51123|3,51448|1,51448|2) -
delete them and just replace it with a LN
01:24:529 (84529|2) - delete
01:37:340 (97340|2) - delete
01:42:367 (102367|2,102529|3) - i think just make it into LN and make it end at the
01:42:691 - , it's kinda weird for me
01:44:961 (104961|2,105123|1) - ^ LN end at 01:45:286 -
01:53:069 (113069|2,113718|2) - delete
Hyper
00:03:610 (3610|3) - just change it into LN which end at 00:03:772 - and keep only 2 note
on that line
00:07:664 - not trying to make it 3?
00:10:259 - add a note
00:09:934 - i think both 2 notes aren't really needed, just deleted, or u can keep a note at
there to keep the pattern's consistency
00:16:177 (16177|0,16259|2,16340|1) - make it into trill pattern
00:16:583 (16583|2) - delete
00:23:718 (23718|2,23718|0) - change to one, just like the other
00:26:961 - change to one, the beat isn't clear
00:27:772 - make it 2, look 00:28:583 (28583|1,28745|2,28745|3,28907|1,29069|
0,29069|3,29232|2,29394|3,29394|1) -
00:52:988 (52988|3) - move to 00:52:745 -
01:02:150 - make it 3
01:17:556 - ^
01:19:988 (79988|1) - delete, no 3 voice together there, only two
01:45:448 (105448|1,105448|2,105610|0,105610|1) - change pls, should not be into this
flow : 01:45:772 (105772|1,105772|3,105934|2,105934|0,106096|1,106096|3,106259|
2,106259|3) -
on that line
00:07:664 - not trying to make it 3?
00:10:259 - add a note
00:09:934 - i think both 2 notes aren't really needed, just deleted, or u can keep a note at
there to keep the pattern's consistency
00:16:177 (16177|0,16259|2,16340|1) - make it into trill pattern
00:16:583 (16583|2) - delete
00:23:718 (23718|2,23718|0) - change to one, just like the other
00:26:961 - change to one, the beat isn't clear
00:27:772 - make it 2, look 00:28:583 (28583|1,28745|2,28745|3,28907|1,29069|
0,29069|3,29232|2,29394|3,29394|1) -
00:52:988 (52988|3) - move to 00:52:745 -
01:02:150 - make it 3
01:17:556 - ^
01:19:988 (79988|1) - delete, no 3 voice together there, only two
01:45:448 (105448|1,105448|2,105610|0,105610|1) - change pls, should not be into this
flow : 01:45:772 (105772|1,105772|3,105934|2,105934|0,106096|1,106096|3,106259|
2,106259|3) -
Another
00:22:745 - just 1 note
00:26:799 - 2 note
00:27:286 (27286|3,27286|1,27448|0,27448|3,27610|2,27610|0,27772|3,27772|
1,27934|3,27934|2,28096|0,28096|1,28259|3,28259|1) - why chord stream? , why not
like 00:10:340 (10340|1,10421|3,10502|1,10583|3,10664|0,10745|3,10826|0,10907|
3,10988|1,11069|3,11150|1,11232|3) -
00:28:583 (28583|1,28583|3,28745|1,28745|0,28907|3,28907|2) - weird pattern, feel
unmatch with the sound :/
00:52:421 (52421|3) - delete, the sound actually stops at 00:52:583 - but i think that part
should be a place to pause
01:04:015 (64015|1,64015|3,64096|2,64096|0,64259|3) - try compare it with 01:06:853
(66853|3,67015|2,67015|0,67177|1) -
Start at 01:16:421 - until 01:26:799 - , add a note if you found piano sound and keep the
note like 01:25:826 (85826|2) - and 01:21:610 - (just remind so you won't make any
mistake)
01:30:286 (90286|3,90286|1) - delete, unconsistent with the other
01:40:583 - add , sound there
01:45:123 (105123|1,105123|2) - delete, i think it's better to have a pause
01:50:313 - just one, since only connector between chord
01:53:961 (113961|2) - why have to make 1 note here?
00:26:799 - 2 note
00:27:286 (27286|3,27286|1,27448|0,27448|3,27610|2,27610|0,27772|3,27772|
1,27934|3,27934|2,28096|0,28096|1,28259|3,28259|1) - why chord stream? , why not
like 00:10:340 (10340|1,10421|3,10502|1,10583|3,10664|0,10745|3,10826|0,10907|
3,10988|1,11069|3,11150|1,11232|3) -
00:28:583 (28583|1,28583|3,28745|1,28745|0,28907|3,28907|2) - weird pattern, feel
unmatch with the sound :/
00:52:421 (52421|3) - delete, the sound actually stops at 00:52:583 - but i think that part
should be a place to pause
01:04:015 (64015|1,64015|3,64096|2,64096|0,64259|3) - try compare it with 01:06:853
(66853|3,67015|2,67015|0,67177|1) -
Start at 01:16:421 - until 01:26:799 - , add a note if you found piano sound and keep the
note like 01:25:826 (85826|2) - and 01:21:610 - (just remind so you won't make any
mistake)
01:30:286 (90286|3,90286|1) - delete, unconsistent with the other
01:40:583 - add , sound there
01:45:123 (105123|1,105123|2) - delete, i think it's better to have a pause
01:50:313 - just one, since only connector between chord
01:53:961 (113961|2) - why have to make 1 note here?
Black Another
Here a star00:23:069 (23069|3,23069|1,23232|0,23232|2,23394|3,23394|1) - unconsistent with 00:22:096 (22096|0,22259|3,22259|1,22421|2) -
00:54:934 (54934|2,55015|1,55015|0,55096|3,55259|3,55340|1,55340|2) - why different with the stair before and after this part?
Other are good!
00:54:934 (54934|2,55015|1,55015|0,55096|3,55259|3,55340|1,55340|2) - why different with the stair before and after this part?
Other are good!