Personally felt that Black Another is pretty ok, just going to give some suggestions
What i felt both Anothers didn't do so well is to emphasize different instrumentals in the section here: 00:11:556 (11556|3) - where both vocal cuts and the drum instruments get mixed together. I just didn't feel that much of a difference between the notes while i'm playing even though there are a ton of vocal cuts here and there
Apple & MEGA's Black Another
It is quite apparent that the difficulty level of this map is quite uneven, think you can bump up difficulty for certain sections like
00:13:502 (13502|2,14150|1) - you can map the 1/4 here
00:16:096 (16096|1,16096|0,16177|3,16259|2,16340|1,16421|0,16421|3) - Think you can make this a minijack stream
00:18:691 (18691|1,19340|1) - you can also map the 1/4 here
00:19:664 (19664|0,20313|3) - you can minijack these vocals
00:21:123 (21123|2,21205|1) - Similarly, on column 2
00:23:880 (23880|3,24529|1) - 1/4 here too
00:37:177 (37177|1,37340|0) - Not too sure if the 1/4 in between these notes are skipped on purpose so i'm just pointing out that there is a 1/4 sound in between
00:41:556 (41556|1,41880|2,42205|2) - These feel like they are mapped to the vocals but they are not at the same time, feels quite confusing, you can kind of do this if you're looking at the vocals
00:45:610 (45610|2,45610|3,45691|1,45691|0,45853|3,45853|2,46015|1,46015|0,46096|3,46096|2) - Suggesting to avoid a full {12}{34} oriented rhythm here since your other patterns here seems to be a mix of {12}{34} jumptrills and {13}{24}s
01:16:096 (76096|3) - One thing that kind of bothers me is that the releases here have no sound to accompany it and I have to release on time, so note like 01:16:583 (76583|3) - have release timings that I have no cues to go for which is quite annoying. Suggesting to have LN releases like these timed, so for example:
{
01:16:583 (76583|3) - The release end here can be shifted 1/2 earlier to a spot where there is a sound and note to give an audio cue for the player to release
01:16:745 (76745|2) - This can be moved to 01:17:556 (77556|0) -
01:19:177 (79177|1) - moved to 01:19:502 (79502|3) -
01:19:826 (79826|1) - to 01:20:150 (80150|0) -
01:19:988 (79988|3) - to 01:20:961 (80961|1) -
01:19:988 (79988|3,80150|0) - Would be great if these were moved 1/2 earlier as there is a 1/1 cue there
01:21:610 (81610|3) - and so on for the rest of the inverse section
}
01:33:286 (93286|0,93367|1,93448|0,93529|1,93610|0,93691|1,93772|0,93853|1,93934|0,94015|1,94096|0,94177|1,94259|0,94340|1,94421|0,94502|1,94583|0,94664|1,94745|0,94826|1,94907|0,94988|1,95069|0,95150|1,95232|0,95313|1,95394|0,95475|1,95556|0,95637|1,95718|0,95799|1,95880|0) - Quite skeptical about this actually, even though i can do it quite easily I'm not too sure about most players at this skill level, think you can sort of cheat the consistency here by removing 01:34:583 (94583|0) - or shifting it to column 4 (even though it plays fine idk about it being too hard)
01:37:177 (97177|1) - Not too sure what to comment at kiai actually, it's quite underwhelming but I doubt there is anything you can do to make it harder so (???)
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Another
00:05:880 (5880|2,6042|3) - Think you can hammer this for the claps
00:10:340 (10340|1,10421|2,10502|1,10583|0,10664|2,10745|3,10826|1,10907|0,10988|1,11069|2,11150|3,11232|2) - Think you can do a running man pattern for this, an example would be:
Usually running man patterns would have a column that anchors and appears every 2 notes
00:29:718 (29718|1,29718|0,29718|2,29880|2,29880|3,30042|1,30042|0,30205|3,30205|2,30367|2,30367|0,30367|1,30529|3,30529|2,30691|1,30691|0,30853|2,31015|0,31056|1) - I don't really like this transition from a 1/2 chord section to a full-fledged 1/4 jumptrill section, felt a bit too sudden. I believe you can add a 1/4 section in between these notes to make the transition smoother 00:29:718 (29718|2,31015|0) -
00:34:421 (34421|0,34583|3) - Make this stair from right to left for PR
00:37:826 (37826|3,37988|2) - Left to right
00:38:313 (38313|0,38637|3) - Right to left
00:40:421 (40421|3,40583|2) - Left to Right
01:16:421 (76421|0,76583|1,76745|2,76907|3) - PR is not *that* simple here, would be great if you can like, just make it not a linear stair
01:30:205 (90205|1,90286|2,90286|3) - Not too sure why is this different from 01:27:610 (87610|1,87691|2,87691|3,87772|1,87772|0) -
01:34:583 (94583|0) - You can probably start to ramp up the difficulty here already so something like this would be cool:
uhhh the harder 2 difficulties for now lol I'm kinda tired
What i felt both Anothers didn't do so well is to emphasize different instrumentals in the section here: 00:11:556 (11556|3) - where both vocal cuts and the drum instruments get mixed together. I just didn't feel that much of a difference between the notes while i'm playing even though there are a ton of vocal cuts here and there
Apple & MEGA's Black Another
It is quite apparent that the difficulty level of this map is quite uneven, think you can bump up difficulty for certain sections like
00:13:502 (13502|2,14150|1) - you can map the 1/4 here
00:16:096 (16096|1,16096|0,16177|3,16259|2,16340|1,16421|0,16421|3) - Think you can make this a minijack stream
00:18:691 (18691|1,19340|1) - you can also map the 1/4 here
00:19:664 (19664|0,20313|3) - you can minijack these vocals
00:21:123 (21123|2,21205|1) - Similarly, on column 2
00:23:880 (23880|3,24529|1) - 1/4 here too
00:37:177 (37177|1,37340|0) - Not too sure if the 1/4 in between these notes are skipped on purpose so i'm just pointing out that there is a 1/4 sound in between
00:41:556 (41556|1,41880|2,42205|2) - These feel like they are mapped to the vocals but they are not at the same time, feels quite confusing, you can kind of do this if you're looking at the vocals
00:45:610 (45610|2,45610|3,45691|1,45691|0,45853|3,45853|2,46015|1,46015|0,46096|3,46096|2) - Suggesting to avoid a full {12}{34} oriented rhythm here since your other patterns here seems to be a mix of {12}{34} jumptrills and {13}{24}s
01:16:096 (76096|3) - One thing that kind of bothers me is that the releases here have no sound to accompany it and I have to release on time, so note like 01:16:583 (76583|3) - have release timings that I have no cues to go for which is quite annoying. Suggesting to have LN releases like these timed, so for example:
{
01:16:583 (76583|3) - The release end here can be shifted 1/2 earlier to a spot where there is a sound and note to give an audio cue for the player to release
01:16:745 (76745|2) - This can be moved to 01:17:556 (77556|0) -
01:19:177 (79177|1) - moved to 01:19:502 (79502|3) -
01:19:826 (79826|1) - to 01:20:150 (80150|0) -
01:19:988 (79988|3) - to 01:20:961 (80961|1) -
01:19:988 (79988|3,80150|0) - Would be great if these were moved 1/2 earlier as there is a 1/1 cue there
01:21:610 (81610|3) - and so on for the rest of the inverse section
}
01:33:286 (93286|0,93367|1,93448|0,93529|1,93610|0,93691|1,93772|0,93853|1,93934|0,94015|1,94096|0,94177|1,94259|0,94340|1,94421|0,94502|1,94583|0,94664|1,94745|0,94826|1,94907|0,94988|1,95069|0,95150|1,95232|0,95313|1,95394|0,95475|1,95556|0,95637|1,95718|0,95799|1,95880|0) - Quite skeptical about this actually, even though i can do it quite easily I'm not too sure about most players at this skill level, think you can sort of cheat the consistency here by removing 01:34:583 (94583|0) - or shifting it to column 4 (even though it plays fine idk about it being too hard)
01:37:177 (97177|1) - Not too sure what to comment at kiai actually, it's quite underwhelming but I doubt there is anything you can do to make it harder so (???)
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Another
00:05:880 (5880|2,6042|3) - Think you can hammer this for the claps
00:10:340 (10340|1,10421|2,10502|1,10583|0,10664|2,10745|3,10826|1,10907|0,10988|1,11069|2,11150|3,11232|2) - Think you can do a running man pattern for this, an example would be:
Usually running man patterns would have a column that anchors and appears every 2 notes
00:29:718 (29718|1,29718|0,29718|2,29880|2,29880|3,30042|1,30042|0,30205|3,30205|2,30367|2,30367|0,30367|1,30529|3,30529|2,30691|1,30691|0,30853|2,31015|0,31056|1) - I don't really like this transition from a 1/2 chord section to a full-fledged 1/4 jumptrill section, felt a bit too sudden. I believe you can add a 1/4 section in between these notes to make the transition smoother 00:29:718 (29718|2,31015|0) -
00:34:421 (34421|0,34583|3) - Make this stair from right to left for PR
00:37:826 (37826|3,37988|2) - Left to right
00:38:313 (38313|0,38637|3) - Right to left
00:40:421 (40421|3,40583|2) - Left to Right
01:16:421 (76421|0,76583|1,76745|2,76907|3) - PR is not *that* simple here, would be great if you can like, just make it not a linear stair
01:30:205 (90205|1,90286|2,90286|3) - Not too sure why is this different from 01:27:610 (87610|1,87691|2,87691|3,87772|1,87772|0) -
01:34:583 (94583|0) - You can probably start to ramp up the difficulty here already so something like this would be cool:
uhhh the harder 2 difficulties for now lol I'm kinda tired