[CS' Normal]
perfect meow 'w'
[Hyper]
00:12:870 - missed a note for bass
00:16:113 (16113|3) - while this long note sound not present anything, better remove it imo
(even you follow bg sound but it still sound wreird)
00:18:708 (18708|0) - same goes
00:23:573 - suddenly 3 notes, no reason to put 3 notes here
00:25:519 - and suddenly 1 note, add one here for bass
00:30:870 - add a note on here because you did like that on 00:30:546 -
00:31:032 (31032|0) - because it's already hyper diff, which mean you can map 1/4 here, so add some 1/4 than just a normal hold
00:50:492 - how about a clean pattern on here, welcome all advanced players to try with
http://puu.sh/rCJAd/e7866a8e94.jpg00:53:249 (53249|3) - if you argee with that, move to 2nd for balance
00:53:735 - 00:55:032 - 00:56:330 - would be better if you add one note for kick, one kick would be match
and why 00:57:627 (57627|2,57627|3) - is two notes for kick
01:12:627 (72627|2) - no instrument on here, i mean the sound you follow like 01:12:708 (72708|3,72951|2,73113|1,73276|3,73438|2) -
01:16:113 (76113|2,76113|1,76113|3) - 3 notes is overchord to me, better remove one, here just single kick
01:37:032 (97032|3,97194|3,97357|3) - hmm, not really bad but kinda hard dont you think, my suggestion:
http://puu.sh/rCJMX/4fd5b3d4f7.jpg (single clap)
01:40:762 (100762|2) - move to 1st for balance
01:42:951 (102951|3) - wrong place, can be count as unrankable issues, move to 01:43:032 -
01:44:330 - missing a note for kick
01:44:978 -
01:46:924 -
01:48:870 -
01:50:167 - pattern suggestion:
http://puu.sh/rCK0s/dd239cbd44.jpg (cuz u missing a note on here too)
01:56:654 (116654|3) - same reason as before
[Another]
00:10:600 (10600|3,10762|3) - while this 4th jack is kinda annoying to play i would suggest to move this to 3rd
00:16:194 (16194|2) - wrong placed hs, move this hs to 00:16:113 -
00:22:600 - missing a note for kick, according to 00:25:194 -
00:24:546 - same
00:26:492 -
00:26:816 -
00:16:438 (16438|3) - if you add a hold for beatdrop (vocal) like this, better to remove this note 00:16:600 (16600|1) - for hand feeling
00:13:519 (13519|3) - 00:18:708 (18708|3) - 00:23:897 (23897|3) - 00:26:492 (26492|3) - kind of ridiculous, better remove like as Hyper suggestion, if you want to follow bg sound, better split them into 2 1/1 long notes, or just follow that 1/4 sound directly
00:27:140 - missing a note for cymbal according to 00:28:438 -
00:27:140 - to 00:29:735 - why all 1/2 jacky and double here, no 1/4? it's all 1/4 drum here, better follow 1/4
00:32:330 - to 00:41:411 - you might want to follow pitch like as Black Another
00:47:897 - add a note for cymbal
00:50:492 -
00:51:140 -
00:58:276 -
01:08:330 (68330|2) - where is that beatdrop long note, just like 00:57:951 (57951|1,57951|0) -
01:11:249 - missing a note for cymbal
01:12:384 -
01:18:708 (78708|2,79032|0,79194|2,79519|3) - what are this for?
01:20:167 (80167|1) -
01:20:167 (80167|1,81627|3,81951|3,82276|0) -
01:22:600 (82600|2,82924|0,83249|3,83573|1,83897|3,84222|2) -
01:24:546 (84546|3,84870|1,85194|3,85519|1) - 01:25:843 (85843|2,86167|0,86492|1) - igrone these sound, just focus on main melody, break time
(Black Another just all long notes)
01:30:222 (90222|2,90384|1) - what are these for, you didn't add it on 01:27:708 -
01:32:005 - 01:32:654 - 01:33:303 - 01:33:951 - 01:34:600 - add note for cymbal
01:34:600 -
http://puu.sh/rCKAY/0b2437b1bc.jpg big distance, just add some double 1/4 on here, suggestion:
http://puu.sh/rCKDg/12bf795fd0.jpg01:38:492 (98492|3) - suppose to be on 01:38:330 - (snapping conflict:
http://puu.sh/rCKEn/01ee3cca5d.jpg)
01:40:276 (100276|3) -
http://puu.sh/rCKF5/7f595fbb76.jpg01:44:330 (104330|0) - wow, why end on here?????
http://puu.sh/rCKGg/5206487fb9.jpg01:48:708 (108708|0) - snapping conflict:
http://puu.sh/rCKMb/3c4f91fdff.jpg01:39:140 - 01:39:789 - 01:40:438 - 01:40:600 - 01:40:762 - 01:42:384 - 01:43:681 - 01:44:330 - 01:48:870 - 01:49:519 - all missing one note, and you know why (kick, instrument,..)
01:56:330 (116330|3) - move to 1st for balance
[Black Another]
2016-10-01 19:55 -[Apple]-: orz i'm here
2016-10-01 19:55 Kuo Kyoka: wait
2016-10-01 19:58 Kuo Kyoka: 00:01:195 -
2016-10-01 19:58 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/913980 Remixed by P*Light - We're so Happy (P*Light Remix) IIDX ver. [Apple & MEGA's Black Another]]
2016-10-01 19:58 Kuo Kyoka: add a note on 1st for cymbal
2016-10-01 19:58 -[Apple]-: Ehh. Sounds here just a kick
2016-10-01 19:58 -[Apple]-: Add here more like follow the main melody
2016-10-01 19:58 -[Apple]-: So added
2016-10-01 19:59 Kuo Kyoka: 00:05:897 (5897|2,5897|0,5897|3,6059|2,6059|0,6222|1) - just personal, well i would make them have one note here with mini jack, on 1st
2016-10-01 19:59 Kuo Kyoka: free to reject
2016-10-01 19:59 Kuo Kyoka: 00:01:195 - on here clearly have cymbal
2016-10-01 19:59 Kuo Kyoka: feel like fade out sound so you may not notice it
2016-10-01 20:00 Kuo Kyoka: 00:09:951 - wrong on here
2016-10-01 20:01 -[Apple]-: :3???
2016-10-01 20:01 -[Apple]-: add on 00:10:276 ?
2016-10-01 20:02 -[Apple]-: 00:05:897 (5897|2,5897|0,5897|3,6059|2,6059|0,6222|1) - Think there more like a fade-out so i'd like to make them 3>2>1
2016-10-01 20:02 Kuo Kyoka: actually i mean this http://puu.sh/ru1NZ/e3af17eeed.jpg
2016-10-01 20:02 Kuo Kyoka: not that 1234 1234
2016-10-01 20:03 Kuo Kyoka: still single clap sound anyways, kinda annoying with that 3-2-1 but fine
2016-10-01 20:04 -[Apple]-: Ok done on 00:09:951
2016-10-01 20:05 Kuo Kyoka: 00:11:167 (11167|3,11249|3) - would break the feeling from 00:10:276 (10276|0,10357|0,10438|2,10519|2,10600|1,10681|1,10762|3,10843|3) -
2016-10-01 20:05 Kuo Kyoka: suggestion http://puu.sh/ru1Yk/65ae460b43.jpg
2016-10-01 20:07 -[Apple]-: 00:10:924 (10924|0,11005|2,11086|1,11167|3) - These notes are make a transition from 00:10:276 (10276|0,10357|0,10438|2,10519|2,10600|1,10681|1,10762|3,10843|3) - HERE
2016-10-01 20:08 -[Apple]-: So i know what you mean, add one more minijack here ?
2016-10-01 20:08 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/ru2cn/289ec7b615.jpg similar yet?
2016-10-01 20:10 Kuo Kyoka: add jack on here 00:11:167 - is unreasonable since you added them like 00:10:276 (10276|0,10357|0,10438|2,10519|2,10600|1,10681|1,10762|3,10843|3) - so better move something to 00:10:924 (10924|0,11005|0) -
2016-10-01 20:11 -[Apple]-: ok. Sounds reasonable, fixed
2016-10-01 20:11 Kuo Kyoka: 00:22:762 - have piano on here
2016-10-01 20:11 Kuo Kyoka: 00:31:032 (31032|3,31032|1,31032|0,31113|2,31113|3,31194|1,31194|0,31276|3,31276|2,31357|0,31357|1,31438|3,31438|2,31519|1,31600|0,31600|3,31681|1,31681|2,31762|0,31762|3,31843|1,31843|2,31924|3,31924|0,32005|1,32005|2) - this is so wrong
2016-10-01 20:11 Kuo Kyoka: it was 1/8 why change to 1/4 here
2016-10-01 20:12 Kuo Kyoka: this is what i mean http://puu.sh/ru2lG/b141e70d9e.jpg
2016-10-01 20:13 -[Apple]-: lel, Might just misunderstanding ur mod
2016-10-01 20:14 Kuo Kyoka: lul
2016-10-01 20:15 Kuo Kyoka: 00:32:330 -
2016-10-01 20:16 Kuo Kyoka: not thing wrong with this but if you follow pitch it would be better
2016-10-01 20:16 Kuo Kyoka: do you want or not?
2016-10-01 20:17 -[Apple]-: let me see
2016-10-01 20:17 -[Apple]-: Sounds following the pitch will better ...
2016-10-01 20:18 -[Apple]-: But If follow the pitch it will kinda weird
2016-10-01 20:19 Kuo Kyoka: wait
2016-10-01 20:19 Kuo Kyoka: making a pattern
2016-10-01 20:19 -[Apple]-: ok
2016-10-01 20:27 -[Apple]-: Few years later lel
2016-10-01 20:28 Kuo Kyoka: save as new difficult http://puu.sh/ru2WX/92cdc2373a.osu
2016-10-01 20:28 Kuo Kyoka: and refer it
2016-10-01 20:30 Kuo Kyoka: 00:47:735 - should be 1/8 here http://puu.sh/ru336/64759c4086.jpg
2016-10-01 20:32 -[Apple]-: wait what
2016-10-01 20:32 -[Apple]-: wait what
2016-10-01 20:32 -[Apple]-: It's 1/8 now isn't it
2016-10-01 20:33 Kuo Kyoka: this is lastest http://puu.sh/ru39B/338c05cec8.jpg
2016-10-01 20:34 -[Apple]-: sounds I did some self-changes lel
2016-10-01 20:34 Kuo Kyoka: 01:08:654 - add a note for cymbal
2016-10-01 20:35 -[Apple]-: oh crap mega move the offset to 1178 again
2016-10-01 20:35 -[Apple]-: Add a cymbal here might be hard?
2016-10-01 20:35 -[Apple]-: Since will jack with 01:08:718 (68718|1) -
2016-10-01 20:36 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/ru3h4/e9187e3aa9.jpg
2016-10-01 20:36 Kuo Kyoka: 01:12:546 (72546|1,72546|0,72546|3,72627|3,72627|2,72708|1,72708|0,72789|3,72789|2,72870|1,72870|0,72951|3,72951|2,73032|1,73032|0,73113|3,73154|2,73194|1,73235|0,73276|3,73316|2,73357|1,73397|0,73438|3,73478|2,73519|1,73519|0) - eh
2016-10-01 20:37 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/ru3j0/495b18246d.jpg
2016-10-01 20:39 Kuo Kyoka: the rest are fine to me
2016-10-01 20:39 Kuo Kyoka: that mega part is fixed so i dont have anything left to mention
2016-10-01 20:39 Kuo Kyoka: also don't forget to fix preview time
2016-10-01 20:40 -[Apple]-: ok..
2016-10-01 20:40 -[Apple]-: Wait me check again hitsound
2016-10-01 20:40 -[Apple]-: Oh crap i'm using the old version to fix again
2016-10-01 20:40 Kuo Kyoka: eh
2016-10-01 20:40 -[Apple]-: :(.. okay apply to new version will be quickly
2016-10-01 20:41 Kuo Kyoka: haven't mod other diffs yet
2016-10-01 20:41 Kuo Kyoka: maybe tomorrow
2016-10-01 20:42 -[Apple]-: ok
2016-10-01 20:55 -[Apple]-: Done apply mod to new version OFC
2016-10-01 20:55 Kuo Kyoka: okay
00:33:465 (33465|0) - wrong snapping, should be end on 00:33:627 -
00:41:249 - on here
http://puu.sh/rCKRt/ca9dda6e42.jpg (missing a note for cymbal)
done