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[Apple & MEGA's Black Another]
01:39:123 (99123|0) - Can someone explain this LN to me? Isn't this supposed to start at 01:39:286 - for the main sound????
01:47:069 (107069|3) - And this, isnt this should start at 01:46:907 - instead of the current timing
01:52:259 (112259|1) - Same problem as I mention
Those wrong timing LN only make the player confused while they playing
Good luck
01:39:123 (99123|0) - Can someone explain this LN to me? Isn't this supposed to start at 01:39:286 - for the main sound????
01:47:069 (107069|3) - And this, isnt this should start at 01:46:907 - instead of the current timing
01:52:259 (112259|1) - Same problem as I mention
Those wrong timing LN only make the player confused while they playing
Good luck
Topic Starter
So.. No change.SanadaYukimura wrote:
[Apple & MEGA's Black Another]
01:39:123 (99123|0) - Can someone explain this LN to me? Isn't this supposed to start at 01:39:286 - for the main sound???? No that doesnt supposed to start on 01:39:286, You can listen carefully again that clearity started at 01:39:123 i though
01:47:069 (107069|3) - And this, isnt this should start at 01:46:907 - instead of the current timing Hmm. As I feel, 01:46:907 (106907|1,106988|0) - those two are following the acid and 01:47:069 (107069|3) - is following the main melody. That was correct for me.
01:52:259 (112259|1) - Same problem as I mention That was following the vocal.
Those wrong timing LN only make the player confused while they playing
Good luck
SanadaYukimura wrote:
[Apple & MEGA's Black Another]
01:39:123 (99123|0) - Can someone explain this LN to me? Isn't this supposed to start at 01:39:286 - for the main sound???? Eh? Wait a second. Hear it more closely. Synth is starting at 01:39:123 - Take more time hearing it
01:47:069 (107069|3) - And this, isnt this should start at 01:46:907 - instead of the current timing Well yeah, but I made it starts there so it wouldn't look messed up. Instead, I put 01:46:907 (106907|1,106988|0,107069|3) - to match the lead and extend the 01:47:069 (107069|3) - so it would create a kind of illusion on what you're following. Basically I want to create a pattern that isn't hard to read whilst maintaining the notecount.
01:52:259 (112259|1) - Same problem as I mention Well, assuming that you mean the LN isn't syncing properly... The same reason as the line above. For why I didn't made 01:52:421 - 01:52:583 - LNs like 01:42:042 - it's because I want to create a transition feeling from here to the drumrolls
Those wrong timing LN only make the player confused while they playing
Good luck
Even its for the vocal, the current timing still wrong. The "Ah" sound appear at this timing 01:52:096 - alone with the main sound-[Apple]- wrote:
SanadaYukimura wrote:
01:52:259 (112259|1) - Same problem as I mention That was following the vocal.
Those wrong timing LN only make the player confused while they playing
Good luck
Edit: I like how the mapper trying to answer for the GDer and the explanation are totally different
Topic Starter
Even its for the vocal, the current timing still wrong. The "Ah" sound appear at this timing 01:52:096 - alone with the main soundActually this part is made of mega, Just see what he said on his reply... ORZ
I came here because of this 
hope everything would better soon
hope everything would better soon
gratz on first rank~~
Offset certainly wrong, it should be on 1195 instead
P.s.: the reply below I used new offset
01:47:086 (107086|3) - certainly wrong, this sound suppose to be on 01:46:924 - , it began on here, i dont know why you left it on here
01:52:276 (112276|1) - if this for vocal, then it should be on 01:52:316 -
01:52:113 (112113|0,112194|2,112276|1) - but this part different than 01:46:924 (106924|1,107005|0,107086|3) - but both of them is the same (rhythm i would say)
Little mod: Don't forget to fix offset while checking this mod
[Black Another]
00:05:897 (5897|0,5897|3,5897|2) - why on here is 3 notes? only have single clap sound here, but amount of notes are different (don't tell me reason is sound is lower on here 3 notes -> 1 notes)
Solution: since there is only have one clap here so only 1 note would help
00:09:951 - add a note on 4th for bass
00:25:681 - strange that it have 2 notes here while on 00:26:978 - isn't
00:31:032 - to 00:31:519 - is fine but 00:31:519 - to 00:32:005 - try to change direction of it, pitch change on here too
00:43:843 (43843|2) - remove this, it's no need to add such a note on here for rhythm while you're doing bass cymbal only, if keep it, they will break the feeling
00:46:438 (46438|2) -
00:50:492 - suggestion: http://puu.sh/rnbn1/3639908d11.jpg 00:50:492 - to 00:51:140 - make a little warm up, try 1/2 2 notes and 1/4 1 note, with that lets move on 00:51:140 - to 00:51:465 - patterns with 2 notes 1/4, then 00:51:465 - to 00:51:789 - with 1/8 (I can't believe you igrone such a sound like this)
Move on: 00:51:789 - http://puu.sh/rnbrh/914a7a79a9.jpg which is simple and enjoyable, help people have a little break after that long streamy
01:08:654 - lost a note here for cymbal just like 01:09:789 (69789|0,69789|3,69789|1,69951|1,69951|3,69951|0) -
01:13:113 (73113|2,73154|3,73276|2,73316|3,73438|2,73478|3) - like i said before
01:20:167 (80167|0) - one you end it on 01:21:303 - else just remove 01:21:627 (81627|0) - (igrone bass) and end on 01:21:627 - ends on 1/2 is honestly weird on this part (reason to let it end on 01:21:303 - because on here have fade in sound, which still reasonable than let it end on 1/2)
01:35:573 (95573|2,95573|3,95654|2,95654|3,95735|0,95735|1,95816|0,95816|1,95897|3,95897|1,95897|0) - again, why igrone just 1/8 sound on here, just remove that jack and add 1/8 here
01:36:708 (96708|3,96708|2,96870|2,96870|3) - again, one note for clap is fine, 01:37:032 - missing clap too
01:55:681 (115681|2,115681|3) - why 2 notes here, no reason to put them on here
P.s.: the reply below I used new offset
okay, i will go through thisSanadaYukimura wrote:
[Apple & MEGA's Black Another]
01:39:123 (99123|0) - Can someone explain this LN to me? Isn't this supposed to start at 01:39:286 - for the main sound????
01:47:069 (107069|3) - And this, isnt this should start at 01:46:907 - instead of the current timing
01:52:259 (112259|1) - Same problem as I mention
Those wrong timing LN only make the player confused while they playing
Good luck
01:47:086 (107086|3) - certainly wrong, this sound suppose to be on 01:46:924 - , it began on here, i dont know why you left it on here
Hmm. As I feel, 01:46:907 (106907|1,106988|0) - those two are following the acid and 01:47:069 (107069|3) - is following the main melody. That was correct for me.splitting like that still wrong
01:52:276 (112276|1) - if this for vocal, then it should be on 01:52:316 -
01:52:113 (112113|0,112194|2,112276|1) - but this part different than 01:46:924 (106924|1,107005|0,107086|3) - but both of them is the same (rhythm i would say)
Little mod: Don't forget to fix offset while checking this mod
[Black Another]
00:05:897 (5897|0,5897|3,5897|2) - why on here is 3 notes? only have single clap sound here, but amount of notes are different (don't tell me reason is sound is lower on here 3 notes -> 1 notes)
Solution: since there is only have one clap here so only 1 note would help
00:09:951 - add a note on 4th for bass
00:25:681 - strange that it have 2 notes here while on 00:26:978 - isn't
00:31:032 - to 00:31:519 - is fine but 00:31:519 - to 00:32:005 - try to change direction of it, pitch change on here too
00:43:843 (43843|2) - remove this, it's no need to add such a note on here for rhythm while you're doing bass cymbal only, if keep it, they will break the feeling
00:46:438 (46438|2) -
00:50:492 - suggestion: http://puu.sh/rnbn1/3639908d11.jpg 00:50:492 - to 00:51:140 - make a little warm up, try 1/2 2 notes and 1/4 1 note, with that lets move on 00:51:140 - to 00:51:465 - patterns with 2 notes 1/4, then 00:51:465 - to 00:51:789 - with 1/8 (I can't believe you igrone such a sound like this)
Move on: 00:51:789 - http://puu.sh/rnbrh/914a7a79a9.jpg which is simple and enjoyable, help people have a little break after that long streamy
01:08:654 - lost a note here for cymbal just like 01:09:789 (69789|0,69789|3,69789|1,69951|1,69951|3,69951|0) -
01:13:113 (73113|2,73154|3,73276|2,73316|3,73438|2,73478|3) - like i said before
01:20:167 (80167|0) - one you end it on 01:21:303 - else just remove 01:21:627 (81627|0) - (igrone bass) and end on 01:21:627 - ends on 1/2 is honestly weird on this part (reason to let it end on 01:21:303 - because on here have fade in sound, which still reasonable than let it end on 1/2)
01:35:573 (95573|2,95573|3,95654|2,95654|3,95735|0,95735|1,95816|0,95816|1,95897|3,95897|1,95897|0) - again, why igrone just 1/8 sound on here, just remove that jack and add 1/8 here
01:36:708 (96708|3,96708|2,96870|2,96870|3) - again, one note for clap is fine, 01:37:032 - missing clap too
01:55:681 (115681|2,115681|3) - why 2 notes here, no reason to put them on here
Topic Starter
splitting like that still wrongKuo Kyoka wrote:
Offset certainly wrong, it should be on 1195 instead Since it just one red line on this song, might could online fix that.
P.s.: the reply below I used new offsetokay, i will go through thisSanadaYukimura wrote:
[Apple & MEGA's Black Another]
01:39:123 (99123|0) - Can someone explain this LN to me? Isn't this supposed to start at 01:39:286 - for the main sound????
01:47:069 (107069|3) - And this, isnt this should start at 01:46:907 - instead of the current timing
01:52:259 (112259|1) - Same problem as I mention
Those wrong timing LN only make the player confused while they playing
Good luck
01:47:086 (107086|3) - certainly wrong, this sound suppose to be on 01:46:924 - , it began on here, i dont know why you left it on hereHmm. As I feel, 01:46:907 (106907|1,106988|0) - those two are following the acid and 01:47:069 (107069|3) - is following the main melody. That was correct for me.
01:52:276 (112276|1) - if this for vocal, then it should be on 01:52:316 -
01:52:113 (112113|0,112194|2,112276|1) - but this part different than 01:46:924 (106924|1,107005|0,107086|3) - but both of them is the same
Just let MEGA to explain that.. I'm not really good at lns
Little mod: Don't forget to fix offset while checking this mod
[Black Another]
00:05:897 (5897|0,5897|3,5897|2) - why on here is 3 notes? only have single clap sound here, but amount of notes are different (don't tell me reason is sound is lower on here 3 notes -> 1 notes) In fact, The reason is what you said here. Just want to make a fade-out here so i decided to 3->1 here.
Solution: since there is only have one clap here so only 1 note would help
00:09:951 - add a note on 4th for bass If added here it will more laggy on the stream. Just kinda weird so i intentioanlly ignored that.
00:25:681 - strange that it have 2 notes here while on 00:26:978 - isn't Actually i heard that no acid here so i'm not going to 2 notes here.
00:31:032 - to 00:31:519 - is fine but 00:31:519 - to 00:32:005 - try to change direction of it, pitch change on here too The pitch is higher and higher on both of them. So i won't change the direction of that.
00:43:843 (43843|2) - remove this, it's no need to add such a note on here for rhythm while you're doing bass cymbal only, if keep it, they will break the feeling
00:46:438 (46438|2) - But If You remove that it'll be awkward when you tap the 1/2 pattern. That won't to break that feeling.
00:50:492 - suggestion: http://puu.sh/rnbn1/3639908d11.jpg 00:50:492 - to 00:51:140 - make a little warm up, try 1/2 2 notes and 1/4 1 note, with that lets move on 00:51:140 - to 00:51:465 - patterns with 2 notes 1/4, then 00:51:465 - to 00:51:789 - with 1/8 (I can't believe you igrone such a sound like this) Since this pattern is based on the bass and the crashes. So I didn't do that. I think current is fine for me.
Move on: 00:51:789 - http://puu.sh/rnbrh/914a7a79a9.jpg which is simple and enjoyable, help people have a little break after that long streamy ehh. But i think thats was fine for me because it's in the black another.
01:08:654 - lost a note here for cymbal just like 01:09:789 (69789|0,69789|3,69789|1,69951|1,69951|3,69951|0) - That will make a jack and uncomfortable to play when add a note here.
01:13:113 (73113|2,73154|3,73276|2,73316|3,73438|2,73478|3) - like i said before It's not loud as the crashes, So just two notes enough
My collab part ended at 01:13:826 , Other suggests might need mega to reply
Edited.
I already said apologies here
So on, I don't like the way people recall me this. Thanks!
I already said apologies here
So on, I don't like the way people recall me this. Thanks!
Must feel really bad now that the song is literally ruined by a single map for you. I really wish people would allow us to map songs that have already been mapped before! I could never listen to the song again if that was me, what a freaking shame!Kuo Kyoka wrote:
Thanks for ruined such a beautiful song.
Kuo Kyoka wrote:
Thanks for ruined such a beautiful song.
Topic Starter
You guys really makes me stressful on the qualify. OK.
Since you all said that I ruined that song, Everyone have the first time to qualify/rank songs, Just feel really sad for what the players or BNs said.
To KK: I was really sad that i ask you for help and then what I've got? You even not check my map and ignored me. Now you say I ruined that map. What can i do for now? I asked you many times for the bn check and before the Fresh chicken's qualify i asked you once more. I'm very disappointed. Everyone isn't best on beginning. So why everyone told me that I ruined that map?
If you think that I ruined the map. OK. I'll find somebody to Disqualify and wait somebody to remake it soon.
Just feel really disappointed...
Since you all said that I ruined that song, Everyone have the first time to qualify/rank songs, Just feel really sad for what the players or BNs said.
To KK: I was really sad that i ask you for help and then what I've got? You even not check my map and ignored me. Now you say I ruined that map. What can i do for now? I asked you many times for the bn check and before the Fresh chicken's qualify i asked you once more. I'm very disappointed. Everyone isn't best on beginning. So why everyone told me that I ruined that map?
If you think that I ruined the map. OK. I'll find somebody to Disqualify and wait somebody to remake it soon.
Just feel really disappointed...
You shouldnt, especially if it's your first map. Just because someone's opinion is different doesnt mean that you need to adapt to it. Stick with your map and if dq'able things come up, look at them in an objective manner.-[Apple]- wrote:
If you think that I ruined the map. OK. I'll find somebody to Disqualify and wait somebody to remake it soon.
@KK, I find it pretty sad to see that a BN talks down to a new mapper like that. Youre supposed to help them, not shit on them because someone's map "ruined the song" for you. Thats total bullshit.
And what is this about? http://puu.sh/rngty/e8ba93e10e.jpg "Playing" the song just to downvote really is kind of ridiculous
Sometimes they exaggerates mistakes a lot, just to kill your spirit. No need to feel bad though.-[Apple]- wrote:
You guys really makes me stressful on the qualify. OK.
Since you all said that I ruined that song, Everyone have the first time to qualify/rank songs, Just feel really sad for what the players or BNs said.
To KK: I was really sad that i ask you for help and then what I've got? You even not check my map and ignored me. Now you say I ruined that map. What can i do for now? I asked you many times for the bn check and before the Fresh chicken's qualify i asked you once more. I'm very disappointed. Everyone isn't best on beginning. So why everyone told me that I ruined that map?
If you think that I ruined the map. OK. I'll find somebody to Disqualify and wait somebody to remake it soon.
Just feel really disappointed...
Although being said, that's some really bad argument coming from a BN. A chart have nothing to do with the song's level of preference.
Please do not post anything non-mapset related here, and while talking please try to be as reasonable and calm as you can. Thanks for your understanding and coorperation.
This thread is getting gloomy...Kuo Kyoka wrote:
Offset certainly wrong, it should be on 1195 instead
P.s.: the reply below I used new offsetokay, i will go through thisSanadaYukimura wrote:
[Apple & MEGA's Black Another]
01:39:123 (99123|0) - Can someone explain this LN to me? Isn't this supposed to start at 01:39:286 - for the main sound????
01:47:069 (107069|3) - And this, isnt this should start at 01:46:907 - instead of the current timing
01:52:259 (112259|1) - Same problem as I mention
Those wrong timing LN only make the player confused while they playing
Good luck
01:47:086 (107086|3) - certainly wrong, this sound suppose to be on 01:46:924 - , it began on here, i dont know why you left it on here I already explain this to SY, tho :/ I intend to create a feeling that you're following the pad but actually you're first following the lead and it continue to the pad sound. Well looks like people dislikes my idea here so I think I should change it.Hmm. As I feel, 01:46:907 (106907|1,106988|0) - those two are following the acid and 01:47:069 (107069|3) - is following the main melody. That was correct for me.splitting like that still wrong
01:52:276 (112276|1) - if this for vocal, then it should be on 01:52:316 -
01:52:113 (112113|0,112194|2,112276|1) - but this part different than 01:46:924 (106924|1,107005|0,107086|3) - but both of them is the same (rhythm i would say) Actually 01:52:438 - got the LN shorter because I want to create a transition feeling from the LN parts to the drumroll part.
Little mod: Don't forget to fix offset while checking this mod
[Black Another]
01:20:167 (80167|0) - one you end it on 01:21:303 - else just remove 01:21:627 (81627|0) - (igrone bass) and end on 01:21:627 - ends on 1/2 is honestly weird on this part (reason to let it end on 01:21:303 - because on here have fade in sound, which still reasonable than let it end on 1/2) Wait, I thought I ended it on 01:20:978 ....
01:35:573 (95573|2,95573|3,95654|2,95654|3,95735|0,95735|1,95816|0,95816|1,95897|3,95897|1,95897|0) - again, why igrone just 1/8 sound on here, just remove that jack and add 1/8 here Wow I didn't realized it. Okay, might change it
01:36:708 (96708|3,96708|2,96870|2,96870|3) - again, one note for clap is fine And double for clap is also fine, 01:37:032 - missing clap too It's an echo
01:55:681 (115681|2,115681|3) - why 2 notes here, no reason to put them on here I actually hear a kick there
First thing first, it's also my mistake for creating an idea that only me understands it okay it's also my fault there. And yes, this is the alpha version before the previous qualified version since people's saying that previous pattern is boring. I should've checked it twice or thrice before sending my Alpha since it's pretty experimental.
Second, don't be that sad Appy. This is your first map. Of course you're already a good mapper if you arrived at this point. But there's still much to learn. So keep calm and just listen to other people opinion. Their opinion maybe right and maybe wrong, but those can be a stepping stone for you to become an awesome mapper. Just don't lose hope and keep mapping. Don't let others took you down.
Third, Kuo and SY. Ok you both got your point right. You're actually helping. But the way you convey the suggestion are somewhat rude. I know how you talk but looks like Apple is thinking you are attacking him. He is a new mapper. He still need to learn more. Don't attack him. Saying things like "Ruining the song" is inappropriate if you aim it to a new mapper. You should guide him to the right path, not by bullying him. We all experienced the time we start mapping. The struggle of creating a good chart. And we actually arrived at a higher place. And how did you arrive there? By your own muscle? No, by the community support. We have those who support us until we reached this point. So, become the one who supports the new mapper.
If there's anything that you want to talk, chat me in-game or via Discord. Don't clutter the thread more with unimportant posts. I'm always ready to chat with you Except if I'm sleeping you won't get any reply lmao.
Okay, I will make this clear
At least I replied you, I said "depend"
What is it mean? It's your map's quality, is it better?
You're the one not reply me back and ask Chicken for help
You can say something like hey can you check for me if its better? If yes im happy to check, if no i can do IRC, the time you asked me is on weekend which im so free to online but you just silently ask other BN then its fine i would say.
By other way, I came back and looks at the map, it's still not fine to me, so on I post my opinions, which I believe I CAN help you fix quality.
I respects other's opinions, it's fine of you to reject my mod but some of them, I mean quality is still being bother me a lot, since it's your first qualify map, you should consider what is good what is bad at the first time, not saying your map is bad or something but some parts are really bad to me, like you igrone 1/8 and some conflicts parts make your map unreasonable to stand with
Should take critisms, which help you grow up better than just stand with one spot only if you're still new with mapping
My first maps I does that, even it got DQ
Now people trick me and SY like we're vilians
Why I post that anyway? Because I thought you can realise what type of map you're standing on, with that, you can improve the map better. Guess people cant understand my english anyway.
The one should be disappointed is me.
Other than that, don't say like you know me
And again, I come to help but feel like you don't want it anymore after it gets qualified so good luck
Wish it's still on pending section so you can reconsider it than just let it be there
Peace.
I come to help, some parts are not fine, so I post a mod, If you're map DIDN'T so I never come here, that's the point
I'm not asking you to fix them, but just improving them if you're gonna make it up ahead
What kind of support? Mine is helping other by improving it, new mappers even get high priority, but when they don't want to, so I don't have anything to keep helping them, that's why
and Okay okay, I'm admit i'm wrong, okay? Yeah, blame me, Just not touch this map anymore, I will respects everyone by their own opinion like I always said before
Good luck with this map and other maps
"It's not about your first map got take down, its about how you get up again, that's all the matter"
and if I said something rude to you guys, then i'm sorry i should cure my heat
At least I replied you, I said "depend"
What is it mean? It's your map's quality, is it better?
You're the one not reply me back and ask Chicken for help
You can say something like hey can you check for me if its better? If yes im happy to check, if no i can do IRC, the time you asked me is on weekend which im so free to online but you just silently ask other BN then its fine i would say.
By other way, I came back and looks at the map, it's still not fine to me, so on I post my opinions, which I believe I CAN help you fix quality.
I respects other's opinions, it's fine of you to reject my mod but some of them, I mean quality is still being bother me a lot, since it's your first qualify map, you should consider what is good what is bad at the first time, not saying your map is bad or something but some parts are really bad to me, like you igrone 1/8 and some conflicts parts make your map unreasonable to stand with
Should take critisms, which help you grow up better than just stand with one spot only if you're still new with mapping
My first maps I does that, even it got DQ
Now people trick me and SY like we're vilians
Why I post that anyway? Because I thought you can realise what type of map you're standing on, with that, you can improve the map better. Guess people cant understand my english anyway.
The one should be disappointed is me.
http://puu.sh/rngty/e8ba93e10e.jpggive me another proof that said I downvote this map
Other than that, don't say like you know me
And again, I come to help but feel like you don't want it anymore after it gets qualified so good luck
Wish it's still on pending section so you can reconsider it than just let it be there
Peace.
Third, Kuo and SY. Ok you both got your point right. You're actually helping. But the way you convey the suggestion are somewhat rude. I know how you talk but looks like Apple is thinking you are attacking him. He is a new mapper. He still need to learn more. Don't attack him. Saying things like "Ruining the song" is inappropriate if you aim it to a new mapper. You should guide him to the right path, not by bullying him. We all experienced the time we start mapping. The struggle of creating a good chart. And we actually arrived at a higher place. And how did you arrive there? By your own muscle? No, by the community support. We have those who support us until we reached this point. So, become the one who supports the new mapper.I'm argee. My bad, sorry. Not that I kind of a bully type, to be honest I never bully anyone.
I come to help, some parts are not fine, so I post a mod, If you're map DIDN'T so I never come here, that's the point
I'm not asking you to fix them, but just improving them if you're gonna make it up ahead
What kind of support? Mine is helping other by improving it, new mappers even get high priority, but when they don't want to, so I don't have anything to keep helping them, that's why
and Okay okay, I'm admit i'm wrong, okay? Yeah, blame me, Just not touch this map anymore, I will respects everyone by their own opinion like I always said before
Good luck with this map and other maps
"It's not about your first map got take down, its about how you get up again, that's all the matter"
and if I said something rude to you guys, then i'm sorry i should cure my heat
c'mon guys. apple cheer up, keep mapping, making your own chart. good luck on your qualify section 
!
everyone have each style mapping
!everyone have each style mapping
We're so peppy
Honestly though, Im able to count one and one together. There is no reason for you 1 combo EZ DT NF this without the intention of voting "the runied song" down. That's just really bm.Kuo Kyoka wrote:
http://puu.sh/rngty/e8ba93e10e.jpggive me another proof that said I downvote this map
Other than that, don't say like you know me
Edit for below: No, it's not about the userrating - It's about you being childish about this mapset and that you try to put yourself into the victim's role while knowing that you are not.
2016 and all people cares is just user rating
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I claim ownership on this memeKuo Kyoka wrote:
2016 and all people cares is just user rating
angel ：heros never die !
i love dat user rating >.<
this map is remind me when my first map got ranked
this map is remind me when my first map got ranked
tbh me., blood are nightmaresKuo Kyoka wrote:
2016 and all people cares is just user rating
my first mania got nice numbers but total ratingvote is, "not bad" they think I guess. ik nowadays mania ppl still good, oo mercy intensifies....Frim4503 wrote:
i love dat user rating >.<
this map is remind me when my first map got ranked
making maps for user rating and number of plays is like making clickbait cancer videos on youtube, they may have big numbers but they are still clickbait cancer
damn, this is so true-Kamikaze- wrote:
making maps for user rating and number of plays is like making clickbait cancer videos on youtube, they may have big numbers but they are still clickbait cancer
Disqualified upon request of the mapper. Good luck!
Topic Starter
Reconsidered what KK suggests. Thought most of them were helpful. Just felt sry here.Kuo Kyoka wrote:
Offset certainly wrong, it should be on 1195 instead All diff applied that offset
Little mod: Don't forget to fix offset while checking this mod
[Black Another]
00:05:897 (5897|0,5897|3,5897|2) - why on here is 3 notes? only have single clap sound here, but amount of notes are different (don't tell me reason is sound is lower on here 3 notes -> 1 notes) To be honest, It was really a fade-out for me. So i did 3>1 here. Might reconsider it later..
Solution: since there is only have one clap here so only 1 note would help Just thought might have more solutions of it.. Since I still have doubt.
00:09:951 - add a note on 4th for bass Added
00:25:681 - strange that it have 2 notes here while on 00:26:978 - isn't Oh, looks like i missed it ;v
00:31:032 - to 00:31:519 - is fine but 00:31:519 - to 00:32:005 - try to change direction of it, pitch change on here too ok. Rearranged on 00:31:519 - 00:32:005
00:43:843 (43843|2) - remove this, it's no need to add such a note on here for rhythm while you're doing bass cymbal only, if keep it, they will break the feeling
00:46:438 (46438|2) - Removed. Since I focus the drum/baz here and it's really break the feeling.
00:50:492 - suggestion: http://puu.sh/rnbn1/3639908d11.jpg 00:50:492 - to 00:51:140 - make a little warm up, try 1/2 2 notes and 1/4 1 note, with that lets move on 00:51:140 - to 00:51:465 - patterns with 2 notes 1/4, then 00:51:465 - to 00:51:789 - with 1/8 (I can't believe you igrone such a sound like this) Ehh. So idk what are you following with 1/8? Confusion.
Move on: 00:51:789 - http://puu.sh/rnbrh/914a7a79a9.jpg which is simple and enjoyable, help people have a little break after that long streamy Done.
01:08:654 - lost a note here for cymbal just like 01:09:789 (69789|0,69789|3,69789|1,69951|1,69951|3,69951|0) - Yea. There should be triple notes but there have a ln end here. So no change here.
01:13:113 (73113|2,73154|3,73276|2,73316|3,73438|2,73478|3) - like i said before Ehh. Change it to 1/8.
also thanks for modding!
[CS' Normal]
perfect meow 'w'
[Hyper]
00:12:870 - missed a note for bass
00:16:113 (16113|3) - while this long note sound not present anything, better remove it imo
(even you follow bg sound but it still sound wreird)
00:18:708 (18708|0) - same goes
00:23:573 - suddenly 3 notes, no reason to put 3 notes here
00:25:519 - and suddenly 1 note, add one here for bass
00:30:870 - add a note on here because you did like that on 00:30:546 -
00:31:032 (31032|0) - because it's already hyper diff, which mean you can map 1/4 here, so add some 1/4 than just a normal hold
00:50:492 - how about a clean pattern on here, welcome all advanced players to try with http://puu.sh/rCJAd/e7866a8e94.jpg
00:53:249 (53249|3) - if you argee with that, move to 2nd for balance
00:53:735 - 00:55:032 - 00:56:330 - would be better if you add one note for kick, one kick would be match
and why 00:57:627 (57627|2,57627|3) - is two notes for kick
01:12:627 (72627|2) - no instrument on here, i mean the sound you follow like 01:12:708 (72708|3,72951|2,73113|1,73276|3,73438|2) -
01:16:113 (76113|2,76113|1,76113|3) - 3 notes is overchord to me, better remove one, here just single kick
01:37:032 (97032|3,97194|3,97357|3) - hmm, not really bad but kinda hard dont you think, my suggestion: http://puu.sh/rCJMX/4fd5b3d4f7.jpg (single clap)
01:40:762 (100762|2) - move to 1st for balance
01:42:951 (102951|3) - wrong place, can be count as unrankable issues, move to 01:43:032 -
01:44:330 - missing a note for kick
01:44:978 -
01:46:924 -
01:48:870 -
01:50:167 - pattern suggestion: http://puu.sh/rCK0s/dd239cbd44.jpg (cuz u missing a note on here too)
01:56:654 (116654|3) - same reason as before
[Another]
00:10:600 (10600|3,10762|3) - while this 4th jack is kinda annoying to play i would suggest to move this to 3rd
00:16:194 (16194|2) - wrong placed hs, move this hs to 00:16:113 -
00:22:600 - missing a note for kick, according to 00:25:194 -
00:24:546 - same
00:26:492 -
00:26:816 -
00:16:438 (16438|3) - if you add a hold for beatdrop (vocal) like this, better to remove this note 00:16:600 (16600|1) - for hand feeling
00:13:519 (13519|3) - 00:18:708 (18708|3) - 00:23:897 (23897|3) - 00:26:492 (26492|3) - kind of ridiculous, better remove like as Hyper suggestion, if you want to follow bg sound, better split them into 2 1/1 long notes, or just follow that 1/4 sound directly
00:27:140 - missing a note for cymbal according to 00:28:438 -
00:27:140 - to 00:29:735 - why all 1/2 jacky and double here, no 1/4? it's all 1/4 drum here, better follow 1/4
00:32:330 - to 00:41:411 - you might want to follow pitch like as Black Another
00:47:897 - add a note for cymbal
00:50:492 -
00:51:140 -
00:58:276 -
01:08:330 (68330|2) - where is that beatdrop long note, just like 00:57:951 (57951|1,57951|0) -
01:11:249 - missing a note for cymbal
01:12:384 -
01:18:708 (78708|2,79032|0,79194|2,79519|3) - what are this for?
01:20:167 (80167|1) -
01:20:167 (80167|1,81627|3,81951|3,82276|0) -
01:22:600 (82600|2,82924|0,83249|3,83573|1,83897|3,84222|2) -
01:24:546 (84546|3,84870|1,85194|3,85519|1) - 01:25:843 (85843|2,86167|0,86492|1) - igrone these sound, just focus on main melody, break time
(Black Another just all long notes)
01:30:222 (90222|2,90384|1) - what are these for, you didn't add it on 01:27:708 -
01:32:005 - 01:32:654 - 01:33:303 - 01:33:951 - 01:34:600 - add note for cymbal
01:34:600 - http://puu.sh/rCKAY/0b2437b1bc.jpg big distance, just add some double 1/4 on here, suggestion: http://puu.sh/rCKDg/12bf795fd0.jpg
01:38:492 (98492|3) - suppose to be on 01:38:330 - (snapping conflict: http://puu.sh/rCKEn/01ee3cca5d.jpg)
01:40:276 (100276|3) - http://puu.sh/rCKF5/7f595fbb76.jpg
01:44:330 (104330|0) - wow, why end on here????? http://puu.sh/rCKGg/5206487fb9.jpg
01:48:708 (108708|0) - snapping conflict: http://puu.sh/rCKMb/3c4f91fdff.jpg
01:39:140 - 01:39:789 - 01:40:438 - 01:40:600 - 01:40:762 - 01:42:384 - 01:43:681 - 01:44:330 - 01:48:870 - 01:49:519 - all missing one note, and you know why (kick, instrument,..)
01:56:330 (116330|3) - move to 1st for balance
[Black Another]
00:33:465 (33465|0) - wrong snapping, should be end on 00:33:627 -
00:41:249 - on here http://puu.sh/rCKRt/ca9dda6e42.jpg (missing a note for cymbal)
done
perfect meow 'w'
[Hyper]
00:12:870 - missed a note for bass
00:16:113 (16113|3) - while this long note sound not present anything, better remove it imo
(even you follow bg sound but it still sound wreird)
00:18:708 (18708|0) - same goes
00:23:573 - suddenly 3 notes, no reason to put 3 notes here
00:25:519 - and suddenly 1 note, add one here for bass
00:30:870 - add a note on here because you did like that on 00:30:546 -
00:31:032 (31032|0) - because it's already hyper diff, which mean you can map 1/4 here, so add some 1/4 than just a normal hold
00:50:492 - how about a clean pattern on here, welcome all advanced players to try with http://puu.sh/rCJAd/e7866a8e94.jpg
00:53:249 (53249|3) - if you argee with that, move to 2nd for balance
00:53:735 - 00:55:032 - 00:56:330 - would be better if you add one note for kick, one kick would be match
and why 00:57:627 (57627|2,57627|3) - is two notes for kick
01:12:627 (72627|2) - no instrument on here, i mean the sound you follow like 01:12:708 (72708|3,72951|2,73113|1,73276|3,73438|2) -
01:16:113 (76113|2,76113|1,76113|3) - 3 notes is overchord to me, better remove one, here just single kick
01:37:032 (97032|3,97194|3,97357|3) - hmm, not really bad but kinda hard dont you think, my suggestion: http://puu.sh/rCJMX/4fd5b3d4f7.jpg (single clap)
01:40:762 (100762|2) - move to 1st for balance
01:42:951 (102951|3) - wrong place, can be count as unrankable issues, move to 01:43:032 -
01:44:330 - missing a note for kick
01:44:978 -
01:46:924 -
01:48:870 -
01:50:167 - pattern suggestion: http://puu.sh/rCK0s/dd239cbd44.jpg (cuz u missing a note on here too)
01:56:654 (116654|3) - same reason as before
[Another]
00:10:600 (10600|3,10762|3) - while this 4th jack is kinda annoying to play i would suggest to move this to 3rd
00:16:194 (16194|2) - wrong placed hs, move this hs to 00:16:113 -
00:22:600 - missing a note for kick, according to 00:25:194 -
00:24:546 - same
00:26:492 -
00:26:816 -
00:16:438 (16438|3) - if you add a hold for beatdrop (vocal) like this, better to remove this note 00:16:600 (16600|1) - for hand feeling
00:13:519 (13519|3) - 00:18:708 (18708|3) - 00:23:897 (23897|3) - 00:26:492 (26492|3) - kind of ridiculous, better remove like as Hyper suggestion, if you want to follow bg sound, better split them into 2 1/1 long notes, or just follow that 1/4 sound directly
00:27:140 - missing a note for cymbal according to 00:28:438 -
00:27:140 - to 00:29:735 - why all 1/2 jacky and double here, no 1/4? it's all 1/4 drum here, better follow 1/4
00:32:330 - to 00:41:411 - you might want to follow pitch like as Black Another
00:47:897 - add a note for cymbal
00:50:492 -
00:51:140 -
00:58:276 -
01:08:330 (68330|2) - where is that beatdrop long note, just like 00:57:951 (57951|1,57951|0) -
01:11:249 - missing a note for cymbal
01:12:384 -
01:18:708 (78708|2,79032|0,79194|2,79519|3) - what are this for?
01:20:167 (80167|1) -
01:20:167 (80167|1,81627|3,81951|3,82276|0) -
01:22:600 (82600|2,82924|0,83249|3,83573|1,83897|3,84222|2) -
01:24:546 (84546|3,84870|1,85194|3,85519|1) - 01:25:843 (85843|2,86167|0,86492|1) - igrone these sound, just focus on main melody, break time
(Black Another just all long notes)
01:30:222 (90222|2,90384|1) - what are these for, you didn't add it on 01:27:708 -
01:32:005 - 01:32:654 - 01:33:303 - 01:33:951 - 01:34:600 - add note for cymbal
01:34:600 - http://puu.sh/rCKAY/0b2437b1bc.jpg big distance, just add some double 1/4 on here, suggestion: http://puu.sh/rCKDg/12bf795fd0.jpg
01:38:492 (98492|3) - suppose to be on 01:38:330 - (snapping conflict: http://puu.sh/rCKEn/01ee3cca5d.jpg)
01:40:276 (100276|3) - http://puu.sh/rCKF5/7f595fbb76.jpg
01:44:330 (104330|0) - wow, why end on here????? http://puu.sh/rCKGg/5206487fb9.jpg
01:48:708 (108708|0) - snapping conflict: http://puu.sh/rCKMb/3c4f91fdff.jpg
01:39:140 - 01:39:789 - 01:40:438 - 01:40:600 - 01:40:762 - 01:42:384 - 01:43:681 - 01:44:330 - 01:48:870 - 01:49:519 - all missing one note, and you know why (kick, instrument,..)
01:56:330 (116330|3) - move to 1st for balance
[Black Another]
2016-10-01 19:55 -[Apple]-: orz i'm here
2016-10-01 19:55 Kuo Kyoka: wait
2016-10-01 19:58 Kuo Kyoka: 00:01:195 -
2016-10-01 19:58 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/913980 Remixed by P*Light - We're so Happy (P*Light Remix) IIDX ver. [Apple & MEGA's Black Another]]
2016-10-01 19:58 Kuo Kyoka: add a note on 1st for cymbal
2016-10-01 19:58 -[Apple]-: Ehh. Sounds here just a kick
2016-10-01 19:58 -[Apple]-: Add here more like follow the main melody
2016-10-01 19:58 -[Apple]-: So added
2016-10-01 19:59 Kuo Kyoka: 00:05:897 (5897|2,5897|0,5897|3,6059|2,6059|0,6222|1) - just personal, well i would make them have one note here with mini jack, on 1st
2016-10-01 19:59 Kuo Kyoka: free to reject
2016-10-01 19:59 Kuo Kyoka: 00:01:195 - on here clearly have cymbal
2016-10-01 19:59 Kuo Kyoka: feel like fade out sound so you may not notice it
2016-10-01 20:00 Kuo Kyoka: 00:09:951 - wrong on here
2016-10-01 20:01 -[Apple]-: :3???
2016-10-01 20:01 -[Apple]-: add on 00:10:276 ?
2016-10-01 20:02 -[Apple]-: 00:05:897 (5897|2,5897|0,5897|3,6059|2,6059|0,6222|1) - Think there more like a fade-out so i'd like to make them 3>2>1
2016-10-01 20:02 Kuo Kyoka: actually i mean this http://puu.sh/ru1NZ/e3af17eeed.jpg
2016-10-01 20:02 Kuo Kyoka: not that 1234 1234
2016-10-01 20:03 Kuo Kyoka: still single clap sound anyways, kinda annoying with that 3-2-1 but fine
2016-10-01 20:04 -[Apple]-: Ok done on 00:09:951
2016-10-01 20:05 Kuo Kyoka: 00:11:167 (11167|3,11249|3) - would break the feeling from 00:10:276 (10276|0,10357|0,10438|2,10519|2,10600|1,10681|1,10762|3,10843|3) -
2016-10-01 20:05 Kuo Kyoka: suggestion http://puu.sh/ru1Yk/65ae460b43.jpg
2016-10-01 20:07 -[Apple]-: 00:10:924 (10924|0,11005|2,11086|1,11167|3) - These notes are make a transition from 00:10:276 (10276|0,10357|0,10438|2,10519|2,10600|1,10681|1,10762|3,10843|3) - HERE
2016-10-01 20:08 -[Apple]-: So i know what you mean, add one more minijack here ?
2016-10-01 20:08 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/ru2cn/289ec7b615.jpg similar yet?
2016-10-01 20:10 Kuo Kyoka: add jack on here 00:11:167 - is unreasonable since you added them like 00:10:276 (10276|0,10357|0,10438|2,10519|2,10600|1,10681|1,10762|3,10843|3) - so better move something to 00:10:924 (10924|0,11005|0) -
2016-10-01 20:11 -[Apple]-: ok. Sounds reasonable, fixed
2016-10-01 20:11 Kuo Kyoka: 00:22:762 - have piano on here
2016-10-01 20:11 Kuo Kyoka: 00:31:032 (31032|3,31032|1,31032|0,31113|2,31113|3,31194|1,31194|0,31276|3,31276|2,31357|0,31357|1,31438|3,31438|2,31519|1,31600|0,31600|3,31681|1,31681|2,31762|0,31762|3,31843|1,31843|2,31924|3,31924|0,32005|1,32005|2) - this is so wrong
2016-10-01 20:11 Kuo Kyoka: it was 1/8 why change to 1/4 here
2016-10-01 20:12 Kuo Kyoka: this is what i mean http://puu.sh/ru2lG/b141e70d9e.jpg
2016-10-01 20:13 -[Apple]-: lel, Might just misunderstanding ur mod
2016-10-01 20:14 Kuo Kyoka: lul
2016-10-01 20:15 Kuo Kyoka: 00:32:330 -
2016-10-01 20:16 Kuo Kyoka: not thing wrong with this but if you follow pitch it would be better
2016-10-01 20:16 Kuo Kyoka: do you want or not?
2016-10-01 20:17 -[Apple]-: let me see
2016-10-01 20:17 -[Apple]-: Sounds following the pitch will better ...
2016-10-01 20:18 -[Apple]-: But If follow the pitch it will kinda weird
2016-10-01 20:19 Kuo Kyoka: wait
2016-10-01 20:19 Kuo Kyoka: making a pattern
2016-10-01 20:19 -[Apple]-: ok
2016-10-01 20:27 -[Apple]-: Few years later lel
2016-10-01 20:28 Kuo Kyoka: save as new difficult http://puu.sh/ru2WX/92cdc2373a.osu
2016-10-01 20:28 Kuo Kyoka: and refer it
2016-10-01 20:30 Kuo Kyoka: 00:47:735 - should be 1/8 here http://puu.sh/ru336/64759c4086.jpg
2016-10-01 20:32 -[Apple]-: wait what
2016-10-01 20:32 -[Apple]-: wait what
2016-10-01 20:32 -[Apple]-: It's 1/8 now isn't it
2016-10-01 20:33 Kuo Kyoka: this is lastest http://puu.sh/ru39B/338c05cec8.jpg
2016-10-01 20:34 -[Apple]-: sounds I did some self-changes lel
2016-10-01 20:34 Kuo Kyoka: 01:08:654 - add a note for cymbal
2016-10-01 20:35 -[Apple]-: oh crap mega move the offset to 1178 again
2016-10-01 20:35 -[Apple]-: Add a cymbal here might be hard?
2016-10-01 20:35 -[Apple]-: Since will jack with 01:08:718 (68718|1) -
2016-10-01 20:36 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/ru3h4/e9187e3aa9.jpg
2016-10-01 20:36 Kuo Kyoka: 01:12:546 (72546|1,72546|0,72546|3,72627|3,72627|2,72708|1,72708|0,72789|3,72789|2,72870|1,72870|0,72951|3,72951|2,73032|1,73032|0,73113|3,73154|2,73194|1,73235|0,73276|3,73316|2,73357|1,73397|0,73438|3,73478|2,73519|1,73519|0) - eh
2016-10-01 20:37 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/ru3j0/495b18246d.jpg
2016-10-01 20:39 Kuo Kyoka: the rest are fine to me
2016-10-01 20:39 Kuo Kyoka: that mega part is fixed so i dont have anything left to mention
2016-10-01 20:39 Kuo Kyoka: also don't forget to fix preview time
2016-10-01 20:40 -[Apple]-: ok..
2016-10-01 20:40 -[Apple]-: Wait me check again hitsound
2016-10-01 20:40 -[Apple]-: Oh crap i'm using the old version to fix again
2016-10-01 20:40 Kuo Kyoka: eh
2016-10-01 20:40 -[Apple]-: :(.. okay apply to new version will be quickly
2016-10-01 20:41 Kuo Kyoka: haven't mod other diffs yet
2016-10-01 20:41 Kuo Kyoka: maybe tomorrow
2016-10-01 20:42 -[Apple]-: ok
2016-10-01 20:55 -[Apple]-: Done apply mod to new version OFC
2016-10-01 20:55 Kuo Kyoka: okay
00:33:465 (33465|0) - wrong snapping, should be end on 00:33:627 -
00:41:249 - on here http://puu.sh/rCKRt/ca9dda6e42.jpg (missing a note for cymbal)
done
Topic Starter
All applied.Kuo Kyoka wrote:
[Hyper]
00:12:870 - missed a note for bass
00:16:113 (16113|3) - while this long note sound not present anything, better remove it imo
(even you follow bg sound but it still sound wreird)
00:18:708 (18708|0) - same goes
00:23:573 - suddenly 3 notes, no reason to put 3 notes here
00:25:519 - and suddenly 1 note, add one here for bass
00:30:870 - add a note on here because you did like that on 00:30:546 -
00:31:032 (31032|0) - because it's already hyper diff, which mean you can map 1/4 here, so add some 1/4 than just a normal hold
00:50:492 - how about a clean pattern on here, welcome all advanced players to try with http://puu.sh/rCJAd/e7866a8e94.jpg
00:53:249 (53249|3) - if you argee with that, move to 2nd for balance
00:53:735 - 00:55:032 - 00:56:330 - would be better if you add one note for kick, one kick would be match
and why 00:57:627 (57627|2,57627|3) - is two notes for kick
01:12:627 (72627|2) - no instrument on here, i mean the sound you follow like 01:12:708 (72708|3,72951|2,73113|1,73276|3,73438|2) -
01:16:113 (76113|2,76113|1,76113|3) - 3 notes is overchord to me, better remove one, here just single kick
01:37:032 (97032|3,97194|3,97357|3) - hmm, not really bad but kinda hard dont you think, my suggestion: http://puu.sh/rCJMX/4fd5b3d4f7.jpg (single clap)
01:40:762 (100762|2) - move to 1st for balance
01:42:951 (102951|3) - wrong place, can be count as unrankable issues, move to 01:43:032 -
01:44:330 - missing a note for kick
01:44:978 -
01:46:924 -
01:48:870 -
01:50:167 - pattern suggestion: http://puu.sh/rCK0s/dd239cbd44.jpg (cuz u missing a note on here too)
01:56:654 (116654|3) - same reason as before
[Another]
00:10:600 (10600|3,10762|3) - while this 4th jack is kinda annoying to play i would suggest to move this to 3rd
00:16:194 (16194|2) - wrong placed hs, move this hs to 00:16:113 -
00:22:600 - missing a note for kick, according to 00:25:194 -
00:24:546 - same
00:26:492 -
00:26:816 -
00:16:438 (16438|3) - if you add a hold for beatdrop (vocal) like this, better to remove this note 00:16:600 (16600|1) - for hand feeling
00:13:519 (13519|3) - 00:18:708 (18708|3) - 00:23:897 (23897|3) - 00:26:492 (26492|3) - kind of ridiculous, better remove like as Hyper suggestion, if you want to follow bg sound, better split them into 2 1/1 long notes, or just follow that 1/4 sound directly
00:27:140 - missing a note for cymbal according to 00:28:438 -
00:27:140 - to 00:29:735 - why all 1/2 jacky and double here, no 1/4? it's all 1/4 drum here, better follow 1/4
00:32:330 - to 00:41:411 - you might want to follow pitch like as Black Another
00:47:897 - add a note for cymbal
00:50:492 -
00:51:140 -
00:58:276 -
01:08:330 (68330|2) - where is that beatdrop long note, just like 00:57:951 (57951|1,57951|0) -
01:11:249 - missing a note for cymbal
01:12:384 -
01:18:708 (78708|2,79032|0,79194|2,79519|3) - what are this for?
01:20:167 (80167|1) -
01:20:167 (80167|1,81627|3,81951|3,82276|0) -
01:22:600 (82600|2,82924|0,83249|3,83573|1,83897|3,84222|2) -
01:24:546 (84546|3,84870|1,85194|3,85519|1) - 01:25:843 (85843|2,86167|0,86492|1) - igrone these sound, just focus on main melody, break time
(Black Another just all long notes)
01:30:222 (90222|2,90384|1) - what are these for, you didn't add it on 01:27:708 -
01:32:005 - 01:32:654 - 01:33:303 - 01:33:951 - 01:34:600 - add note for cymbal
01:34:600 - http://puu.sh/rCKAY/0b2437b1bc.jpg big distance, just add some double 1/4 on here, suggestion: http://puu.sh/rCKDg/12bf795fd0.jpg
01:38:492 (98492|3) - suppose to be on 01:38:330 - (snapping conflict: http://puu.sh/rCKEn/01ee3cca5d.jpg)
01:40:276 (100276|3) - http://puu.sh/rCKF5/7f595fbb76.jpg
01:44:330 (104330|0) - wow, why end on here????? http://puu.sh/rCKGg/5206487fb9.jpg
01:48:708 (108708|0) - snapping conflict: http://puu.sh/rCKMb/3c4f91fdff.jpg
01:39:140 - 01:39:789 - 01:40:438 - 01:40:600 - 01:40:762 - 01:42:384 - 01:43:681 - 01:44:330 - 01:48:870 - 01:49:519 - all missing one note, and you know why (kick, instrument,..)
01:56:330 (116330|3) - move to 1st for balance
[Black Another]2016-10-01 19:55 -[Apple]-: orz i'm here
2016-10-01 19:55 Kuo Kyoka: wait
2016-10-01 19:58 Kuo Kyoka: 00:01:195 -
2016-10-01 19:58 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/913980 Remixed by P*Light - We're so Happy (P*Light Remix) IIDX ver. [Apple & MEGA's Black Another]]
2016-10-01 19:58 Kuo Kyoka: add a note on 1st for cymbal
2016-10-01 19:58 -[Apple]-: Ehh. Sounds here just a kick
2016-10-01 19:58 -[Apple]-: Add here more like follow the main melody
2016-10-01 19:58 -[Apple]-: So added
2016-10-01 19:59 Kuo Kyoka: 00:05:897 (5897|2,5897|0,5897|3,6059|2,6059|0,6222|1) - just personal, well i would make them have one note here with mini jack, on 1st
2016-10-01 19:59 Kuo Kyoka: free to reject
2016-10-01 19:59 Kuo Kyoka: 00:01:195 - on here clearly have cymbal
2016-10-01 19:59 Kuo Kyoka: feel like fade out sound so you may not notice it
2016-10-01 20:00 Kuo Kyoka: 00:09:951 - wrong on here
2016-10-01 20:01 -[Apple]-: :3???
2016-10-01 20:01 -[Apple]-: add on 00:10:276 ?
2016-10-01 20:02 -[Apple]-: 00:05:897 (5897|2,5897|0,5897|3,6059|2,6059|0,6222|1) - Think there more like a fade-out so i'd like to make them 3>2>1
2016-10-01 20:02 Kuo Kyoka: actually i mean this http://puu.sh/ru1NZ/e3af17eeed.jpg
2016-10-01 20:02 Kuo Kyoka: not that 1234 1234
2016-10-01 20:03 Kuo Kyoka: still single clap sound anyways, kinda annoying with that 3-2-1 but fine
2016-10-01 20:04 -[Apple]-: Ok done on 00:09:951
2016-10-01 20:05 Kuo Kyoka: 00:11:167 (11167|3,11249|3) - would break the feeling from 00:10:276 (10276|0,10357|0,10438|2,10519|2,10600|1,10681|1,10762|3,10843|3) -
2016-10-01 20:05 Kuo Kyoka: suggestion http://puu.sh/ru1Yk/65ae460b43.jpg
2016-10-01 20:07 -[Apple]-: 00:10:924 (10924|0,11005|2,11086|1,11167|3) - These notes are make a transition from 00:10:276 (10276|0,10357|0,10438|2,10519|2,10600|1,10681|1,10762|3,10843|3) - HERE
2016-10-01 20:08 -[Apple]-: So i know what you mean, add one more minijack here ?
2016-10-01 20:08 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/ru2cn/289ec7b615.jpg similar yet?
2016-10-01 20:10 Kuo Kyoka: add jack on here 00:11:167 - is unreasonable since you added them like 00:10:276 (10276|0,10357|0,10438|2,10519|2,10600|1,10681|1,10762|3,10843|3) - so better move something to 00:10:924 (10924|0,11005|0) -
2016-10-01 20:11 -[Apple]-: ok. Sounds reasonable, fixed
2016-10-01 20:11 Kuo Kyoka: 00:22:762 - have piano on here
2016-10-01 20:11 Kuo Kyoka: 00:31:032 (31032|3,31032|1,31032|0,31113|2,31113|3,31194|1,31194|0,31276|3,31276|2,31357|0,31357|1,31438|3,31438|2,31519|1,31600|0,31600|3,31681|1,31681|2,31762|0,31762|3,31843|1,31843|2,31924|3,31924|0,32005|1,32005|2) - this is so wrong
2016-10-01 20:11 Kuo Kyoka: it was 1/8 why change to 1/4 here
2016-10-01 20:12 Kuo Kyoka: this is what i mean http://puu.sh/ru2lG/b141e70d9e.jpg
2016-10-01 20:13 -[Apple]-: lel, Might just misunderstanding ur mod
2016-10-01 20:14 Kuo Kyoka: lul
2016-10-01 20:15 Kuo Kyoka: 00:32:330 -
2016-10-01 20:16 Kuo Kyoka: not thing wrong with this but if you follow pitch it would be better
2016-10-01 20:16 Kuo Kyoka: do you want or not?
2016-10-01 20:17 -[Apple]-: let me see
2016-10-01 20:17 -[Apple]-: Sounds following the pitch will better ...
2016-10-01 20:18 -[Apple]-: But If follow the pitch it will kinda weird
2016-10-01 20:19 Kuo Kyoka: wait
2016-10-01 20:19 Kuo Kyoka: making a pattern
2016-10-01 20:19 -[Apple]-: ok
2016-10-01 20:27 -[Apple]-: Few years later lel
2016-10-01 20:28 Kuo Kyoka: save as new difficult http://puu.sh/ru2WX/92cdc2373a.osu
2016-10-01 20:28 Kuo Kyoka: and refer it
2016-10-01 20:30 Kuo Kyoka: 00:47:735 - should be 1/8 here http://puu.sh/ru336/64759c4086.jpg
2016-10-01 20:32 -[Apple]-: wait what
2016-10-01 20:32 -[Apple]-: wait what
2016-10-01 20:32 -[Apple]-: It's 1/8 now isn't it
2016-10-01 20:33 Kuo Kyoka: this is lastest http://puu.sh/ru39B/338c05cec8.jpg
2016-10-01 20:34 -[Apple]-: sounds I did some self-changes lel
2016-10-01 20:34 Kuo Kyoka: 01:08:654 - add a note for cymbal
2016-10-01 20:35 -[Apple]-: oh crap mega move the offset to 1178 again
2016-10-01 20:35 -[Apple]-: Add a cymbal here might be hard?
2016-10-01 20:35 -[Apple]-: Since will jack with 01:08:718 (68718|1) -
2016-10-01 20:36 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/ru3h4/e9187e3aa9.jpg
2016-10-01 20:36 Kuo Kyoka: 01:12:546 (72546|1,72546|0,72546|3,72627|3,72627|2,72708|1,72708|0,72789|3,72789|2,72870|1,72870|0,72951|3,72951|2,73032|1,73032|0,73113|3,73154|2,73194|1,73235|0,73276|3,73316|2,73357|1,73397|0,73438|3,73478|2,73519|1,73519|0) - eh
2016-10-01 20:37 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/ru3j0/495b18246d.jpg
2016-10-01 20:39 Kuo Kyoka: the rest are fine to me
2016-10-01 20:39 Kuo Kyoka: that mega part is fixed so i dont have anything left to mention
2016-10-01 20:39 Kuo Kyoka: also don't forget to fix preview time
2016-10-01 20:40 -[Apple]-: ok..
2016-10-01 20:40 -[Apple]-: Wait me check again hitsound
2016-10-01 20:40 -[Apple]-: Oh crap i'm using the old version to fix again
2016-10-01 20:40 Kuo Kyoka: eh
2016-10-01 20:40 -[Apple]-: :(.. okay apply to new version will be quickly
2016-10-01 20:41 Kuo Kyoka: haven't mod other diffs yet
2016-10-01 20:41 Kuo Kyoka: maybe tomorrow
2016-10-01 20:42 -[Apple]-: ok
2016-10-01 20:55 -[Apple]-: Done apply mod to new version OFC
2016-10-01 20:55 Kuo Kyoka: okay
00:33:465 (33465|0) - wrong snapping, should be end on 00:33:627 -
00:41:249 - on here http://puu.sh/rCKRt/ca9dda6e42.jpg (missing a note for cymbal)
done
Thanks for suggests.recheck
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Missing a note on 00:02:492 - for bass just like 00:03:789 -
00:03:789 (3789|1) - missing whistle, add W
00:13:519 (13519|3) - add W
00:13:519 (13519|3) - missing a note for bass
00:13:519 (13519|3) - 00:13:519 (13519|3) - 00:13:519 (13519|3) - 00:13:519 (13519|3) -
00:23:573 (23573|3) - add clap
00:31:032 - add a note on 4th for cymbal
00:53:005 (53005|3) - move it to 00:53:086 - for cymbal
01:03:303 (63303|2) - remove this, make a small break on here for instrument flow more better, suggestion: http://puu.sh/rKGKT/9b0fa66040.jpg
01:27:708 (87708|0,87951|0) - add W and remove F on 01:27:708 (87708|0) -
01:32:005 (92005|3,92654|3) - add F
01:33:303 (93303|0,93951|1) - add F
01:34:600 (94600|2,95249|0) - add F
accorind to other parts like 01:38:816 - / 01:40:438 -
01:37:519 - missing a note for snare (add clap)
01:38:492 - missing a note for bass
01:39:140 - same
01:39:789 - missing a note for bass
01:40:276 (100276|1) - remove this, according to 01:40:276 (100276|1) -
01:37:681 (97681|2) - extend this to 01:38:005 - according to 01:40:276 (100276|0) -
01:41:086 (101086|0) - sound start on 01:40:924 -
01:41:086 - add a note for bass
01:42:384 -
01:43:681 -
01:51:303 - how about add a hold on here just like other 01:43:519 (103519|0,104330|1) -
01:56:654 (116654|3) - remove W on here and change to F
[Another]
00:01:195 (1195|3,1195|0) - add W and F for each note
00:02:005 (2005|3) - remove one W
00:24:222 (24222|0) - add C
00:26:816 (26816|1) - add C and 00:26:816 (26816|3) - add W
00:29:735 (29735|3) - add F
00:32:330 (32330|2) - move to 1st for balance (sorry my bad)
00:37:519 (37519|2) -
00:40:113 (40113|2) -
00:41:249 (41249|0,41411|1,41411|3,41735|0,41735|3,41735|2,42059|3,42059|0,42059|2,42384|1,42384|3,42384|0) - I think we already talk about this, better fix it for the chords amount: http://puu.sh/rKH8o/5d8d73cea6.jpg
00:49:681 (49681|0) - add W
00:51:140 (51140|3) - add F
01:03:789 (63789|0) - add C
01:21:627 (81627|0) - split it to 2 long notes, like: http://puu.sh/rKHe2/abba42110e.jpg for melody flow
01:25:357 (85357|2,85519|3) - merge them into one, snapping conflict: http://puu.sh/rKHgZ/8673a39d7f.jpg
01:32:005 - to 01:35:897 - this streamy 1/4 it's fine but I think you need to make it more harder, http://puu.sh/rKHjX/2fcb0aa31c.jpg really dbig distance
My suggestion would be add 2 notes on 1/1 snap
and 3 notes for bass + cymbal
01:37:681 (97681|2) - extend till 01:38:005 - http://puu.sh/rKHlO/41bca75701.jpg
01:40:438 (100438|1,100438|2,100600|1,100762|1,100762|2) - I don't quite understand this pattern, really painful to play and not reasonable, why on here have 3 notes (01:40:762 - so here is suggestion: http://puu.sh/rKHr1/a1f313ab75.jpg don't forget to fix hitsound
01:48:059 (108059|2) - same problem with 01:37:681 (97681|2) -
Well, that's all for now
There always have places for improvement
[Hyper]
Missing a note on 00:02:492 - for bass just like 00:03:789 -
00:03:789 (3789|1) - missing whistle, add W
00:13:519 (13519|3) - add W
00:13:519 (13519|3) - missing a note for bass
00:13:519 (13519|3) - 00:13:519 (13519|3) - 00:13:519 (13519|3) - 00:13:519 (13519|3) -
00:23:573 (23573|3) - add clap
00:31:032 - add a note on 4th for cymbal
00:53:005 (53005|3) - move it to 00:53:086 - for cymbal
01:03:303 (63303|2) - remove this, make a small break on here for instrument flow more better, suggestion: http://puu.sh/rKGKT/9b0fa66040.jpg
01:27:708 (87708|0,87951|0) - add W and remove F on 01:27:708 (87708|0) -
01:32:005 (92005|3,92654|3) - add F
01:33:303 (93303|0,93951|1) - add F
01:34:600 (94600|2,95249|0) - add F
accorind to other parts like 01:38:816 - / 01:40:438 -
01:37:519 - missing a note for snare (add clap)
01:38:492 - missing a note for bass
01:39:140 - same
01:39:789 - missing a note for bass
01:40:276 (100276|1) - remove this, according to 01:40:276 (100276|1) -
01:37:681 (97681|2) - extend this to 01:38:005 - according to 01:40:276 (100276|0) -
01:41:086 (101086|0) - sound start on 01:40:924 -
01:41:086 - add a note for bass
01:42:384 -
01:43:681 -
01:51:303 - how about add a hold on here just like other 01:43:519 (103519|0,104330|1) -
01:56:654 (116654|3) - remove W on here and change to F
[Another]
00:01:195 (1195|3,1195|0) - add W and F for each note
00:02:005 (2005|3) - remove one W
00:24:222 (24222|0) - add C
00:26:816 (26816|1) - add C and 00:26:816 (26816|3) - add W
00:29:735 (29735|3) - add F
00:32:330 (32330|2) - move to 1st for balance (sorry my bad)
00:37:519 (37519|2) -
00:40:113 (40113|2) -
00:41:249 (41249|0,41411|1,41411|3,41735|0,41735|3,41735|2,42059|3,42059|0,42059|2,42384|1,42384|3,42384|0) - I think we already talk about this, better fix it for the chords amount: http://puu.sh/rKH8o/5d8d73cea6.jpg
00:49:681 (49681|0) - add W
00:51:140 (51140|3) - add F
01:03:789 (63789|0) - add C
01:21:627 (81627|0) - split it to 2 long notes, like: http://puu.sh/rKHe2/abba42110e.jpg for melody flow
01:25:357 (85357|2,85519|3) - merge them into one, snapping conflict: http://puu.sh/rKHgZ/8673a39d7f.jpg
01:32:005 - to 01:35:897 - this streamy 1/4 it's fine but I think you need to make it more harder, http://puu.sh/rKHjX/2fcb0aa31c.jpg really dbig distance
My suggestion would be add 2 notes on 1/1 snap
and 3 notes for bass + cymbal
01:37:681 (97681|2) - extend till 01:38:005 - http://puu.sh/rKHlO/41bca75701.jpg
01:40:438 (100438|1,100438|2,100600|1,100762|1,100762|2) - I don't quite understand this pattern, really painful to play and not reasonable, why on here have 3 notes (01:40:762 - so here is suggestion: http://puu.sh/rKHr1/a1f313ab75.jpg don't forget to fix hitsound
01:48:059 (108059|2) - same problem with 01:37:681 (97681|2) -
Well, that's all for now
There always have places for improvement
Topic Starter
Ok. Thanks for suggests.Kuo Kyoka wrote:
recheck
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Missing a note on 00:02:492 - for bass just like 00:03:789 -
00:03:789 (3789|1) - missing whistle, add W
00:13:519 (13519|3) - add W
00:13:519 (13519|3) - missing a note for bass
00:13:519 (13519|3) - 00:13:519 (13519|3) - 00:13:519 (13519|3) - 00:13:519 (13519|3) -
00:23:573 (23573|3) - add clap
00:31:032 - add a note on 4th for cymbal
00:53:005 (53005|3) - move it to 00:53:086 - for cymbal
01:03:303 (63303|2) - remove this, make a small break on here for instrument flow more better, suggestion: http://puu.sh/rKGKT/9b0fa66040.jpg
01:27:708 (87708|0,87951|0) - add W and remove F on 01:27:708 (87708|0) -
01:32:005 (92005|3,92654|3) - add F
01:33:303 (93303|0,93951|1) - add F
01:34:600 (94600|2,95249|0) - add F
accorind to other parts like 01:38:816 - / 01:40:438 -
01:37:519 - missing a note for snare (add clap)
01:38:492 - missing a note for bass
01:39:140 - same
01:39:789 - missing a note for bass
01:40:276 (100276|1) - remove this, according to 01:40:276 (100276|1) -
01:37:681 (97681|2) - extend this to 01:38:005 - according to 01:40:276 (100276|0) -
01:41:086 (101086|0) - sound start on 01:40:924 -
01:41:086 - add a note for bass
01:42:384 -
01:43:681 -
01:51:303 - how about add a hold on here just like other 01:43:519 (103519|0,104330|1) -
01:56:654 (116654|3) - remove W on here and change to F
[Another]
00:01:195 (1195|3,1195|0) - add W and F for each note
00:02:005 (2005|3) - remove one W
00:24:222 (24222|0) - add C
00:26:816 (26816|1) - add C and 00:26:816 (26816|3) - add W
00:29:735 (29735|3) - add F
00:32:330 (32330|2) - move to 1st for balance (sorry my bad)
00:37:519 (37519|2) -
00:40:113 (40113|2) -
00:41:249 (41249|0,41411|1,41411|3,41735|0,41735|3,41735|2,42059|3,42059|0,42059|2,42384|1,42384|3,42384|0) - I think we already talk about this, better fix it for the chords amount: http://puu.sh/rKH8o/5d8d73cea6.jpg
00:49:681 (49681|0) - add W
00:51:140 (51140|3) - add F
01:03:789 (63789|0) - add C
01:21:627 (81627|0) - split it to 2 long notes, like: http://puu.sh/rKHe2/abba42110e.jpg for melody flow
01:25:357 (85357|2,85519|3) - merge them into one, snapping conflict: http://puu.sh/rKHgZ/8673a39d7f.jpg
01:32:005 - to 01:35:897 - this streamy 1/4 it's fine but I think you need to make it more harder, http://puu.sh/rKHjX/2fcb0aa31c.jpg really dbig distance
My suggestion would be add 2 notes on 1/1 snap // I don't want to make it harder, current is fine for me.
and 3 notes for bass + cymbal
01:37:681 (97681|2) - extend till 01:38:005 - http://puu.sh/rKHlO/41bca75701.jpg
01:40:438 (100438|1,100438|2,100600|1,100762|1,100762|2) - I don't quite understand this pattern, really painful to play and not reasonable, why on here have 3 notes (01:40:762 - so here is suggestion: http://puu.sh/rKHr1/a1f313ab75.jpg don't forget to fix hitsound
01:48:059 (108059|2) - same problem with 01:37:681 (97681|2) -
Well, that's all for now
There always have places for improvement
Again, I think you should check mod more carefully or if you rejected it, please give me a proper reason
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00:12:222 (12222|2) - add whistle
00:13:519 (13519|0) - remove clap
00:16:113 - 00:16:762 - 00:17:411 - 00:18:708 - 00:19:032 - add a note because you added 2 notes for each kick sound
00:54:708 - suddenly missed 2 notes on here, you did add it on 00:56:005 - and 00:53:411 - as an example
01:43:681 - missing a note for kick sound
[Another]
00:24:222 (24222|2,24384|2,24546|2,24708|2,24870|2) - this minijack with 5 notes multiply is kind of unreasonable to do this, I would suggest: http://puu.sh/rZiCD/41beb9d80f.jpg
00:26:492 - add a note for kick sound
01:18:708 (78708|2,79032|0,79194|2,79519|3) - remove this, random normal notes
01:22:600 (82600|2) - move to 1st for balance
01:38:492 - missing a note for kick sound
01:40:276 (100276|2) - why suddenly a note right here? there was nothing on 01:37:681 -
That's all
[Hyper]
00:12:222 (12222|2) - add whistle
00:13:519 (13519|0) - remove clap
00:16:113 - 00:16:762 - 00:17:411 - 00:18:708 - 00:19:032 - add a note because you added 2 notes for each kick sound
00:54:708 - suddenly missed 2 notes on here, you did add it on 00:56:005 - and 00:53:411 - as an example
01:43:681 - missing a note for kick sound
[Another]
00:24:222 (24222|2,24384|2,24546|2,24708|2,24870|2) - this minijack with 5 notes multiply is kind of unreasonable to do this, I would suggest: http://puu.sh/rZiCD/41beb9d80f.jpg
00:26:492 - add a note for kick sound
01:18:708 (78708|2,79032|0,79194|2,79519|3) - remove this, random normal notes
01:22:600 (82600|2) - move to 1st for balance
01:38:492 - missing a note for kick sound
01:40:276 (100276|2) - why suddenly a note right here? there was nothing on 01:37:681 -
That's all