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sorry for my low quality English, I studied English not so hard in school XD
01:38:872 - I think here is more suitable for Preview Point...just an opinion.
[Hard]
00:09:975 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4182412 to perfect blanket.
00:17:254 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4182419 blanket.
00:40:195 (3) - in here, vocal is relatively high, so emphasis using DS would be nice I think.
00:47:254 (3,4) - blanket these two would make more nice shape...I think.
01:14:607 (1,2,3) - I can't know why put more distance between 01:14:607 (1,2) - this... vocal is more higher in 01:14:607 (1,2,3) - here.
01:18:798 (2,3) - also imperfect blanket http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4182445
01:25:085 - you missed one drum beat here I think it's a bit uncomfortable to hear...
01:27:842 (4,5,6) - considering this song, you should use clap in 5, 6 notes. and It would be more nice if you use DS difference to emphasize it.
01:51:666 (1,2,3,4) - curving with same angle would be more nice, now it's not.
[Insane]
00:32:254 (1,2,3,4) - same as Hard diff, you can control DS according to vocal,and I think it will make this map more fun.
00:41:519 (2,3,4,5,6) - I think you intended star shape pattern, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4182540 now it's not.
00:56:739 (5,1) - I think it's a bit uncomfortable to play.
01:24:313 (4,5) - used same whistlesound, equally emphasized in song. but 01:24:313 (4,5) - distance between these two is very close compared to 01:24:092 (3,4) - this. It would be very uncomfortable to play..
01:28:063 (5,6) - same as Hard diff, clap should be here.
Good ☆Luck
sorry for my low quality English, I studied English not so hard in school XD
01:38:872 - I think here is more suitable for Preview Point...just an opinion.
[Hard]
00:09:975 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4182412 to perfect blanket.
00:17:254 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4182419 blanket.
00:40:195 (3) - in here, vocal is relatively high, so emphasis using DS would be nice I think.
00:47:254 (3,4) - blanket these two would make more nice shape...I think.
01:14:607 (1,2,3) - I can't know why put more distance between 01:14:607 (1,2) - this... vocal is more higher in 01:14:607 (1,2,3) - here.
01:18:798 (2,3) - also imperfect blanket http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4182445
01:25:085 - you missed one drum beat here I think it's a bit uncomfortable to hear...
01:27:842 (4,5,6) - considering this song, you should use clap in 5, 6 notes. and It would be more nice if you use DS difference to emphasize it.
01:51:666 (1,2,3,4) - curving with same angle would be more nice, now it's not.
[Insane]
00:32:254 (1,2,3,4) - same as Hard diff, you can control DS according to vocal,and I think it will make this map more fun.
00:41:519 (2,3,4,5,6) - I think you intended star shape pattern, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4182540 now it's not.
00:56:739 (5,1) - I think it's a bit uncomfortable to play.
01:24:313 (4,5) - used same whistlesound, equally emphasized in song. but 01:24:313 (4,5) - distance between these two is very close compared to 01:24:092 (3,4) - this. It would be very uncomfortable to play..
01:28:063 (5,6) - same as Hard diff, clap should be here.
I like this song, really addictive~Strategas wrote:
now I got the word dick stuck in my head. Fuck.
Good ☆Luck