Hi m4m
[Insane]
AR 9 might be too much for such a low bpm song considering you only put OD 7 here
00:00:490 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - all these either go vertical or and the last one goes neither imo make the 00:04:019 (1,2,3,4) - same as the 4th one or the other way around
00:07:548 (1) - until 00:15:931 (4) - lol the whole begining goes in the same direction, you could make it more interesting imo and use more paterns too
00:09:754 (2,3,1) - linear paterns are shit to play when their spacing is different
00:15:931 (4) - I'm guessing your ran out of space here that you decided to stop the patern before. It was rather cool then the slider ruins it do something like 00:25:195 (1,2,3,4) -
00:19:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - if you're using 7 objects here as jumps and wanted to make a star then make a 7 object star and not a 6 one
00:16:372 (1,2) - imo continuing the slider thing before would be good here and then put circles 00:16:813 (3) - from here instead to the vocals like you did here 00:28:725 (1,2,3,4,1) -
00:19:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - rather questionable increase of spacing. I mean the vocal disappears here yet you map this part as if it were more intense than before.
00:27:622 (3,4,5,6) - questionable spacing
00:33:137 (3) - shouldn't this be more emphasized than 00:32:695 (2) - ?
00:40:195 (3) - ^
00:43:725 (3,4) - circles?
00:47:254 (4) - idk in earlier parts you spaced this out more than here
00:49:901 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is kinda too spaced compared to 00:51:666 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:15:489 (3) - this would make more sense to change form of slider than on 01:15:931 (4) - since it was much stronger
01:24:534 (5) - space this out some more it's definetely stronger than 01:24:092 (3) -
01:25:637 (2) - could put this more down to flow better in a circular motion since you based all of your map on it.
Regarding the jumps seemed a little random to me when the song intensity stays the same. Ah the thing I mentioned kinda repeats often so might want to check on some more places if you agree to my points. Rhythm maybe too boring I only see 1/2 stuff here.
[Hard dic]
00:17:254 (3,4) - fix blanket
00:19:460 (4) - feels too curved
00:16:372 (1,1) - why don't you emphasize these in the same way as 00:14:607 (1) - 00:21:666 (1) -
00:21:225 (5,6,1) - also the linear thing I mentioned in insane
00:36:666 (3,3) - imo space these out the same way as in downbeat nvm you don't do that anywhere else so keep it
01:53:431 (1) - space more ? to 2x
that's pretty much it gl!
now I got the word dick stuck in my head. Fuck.