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[General]
[we will wait]
some general suggestion sorry about but you need really much work on this map ;_; gl i give you a star because i love the song <3 gl
[General]
- combo colors are not same :V
- mania diff has not SB Epilepsy warning
- I'm not a SToryBorder but i can give you some suggestion since imo you need some,i'm not discussing the SB quality but just some parts of it:
- Text: personally i don't like the font that you used because i think it soesent fit generally with the BG and the rest of the SB you can use http://www.dafont.com/ for finding some more light formd fornt and not Arial, why don't you try to go for softer colours and give a fade to the words and an outer light wich is easier to do with photoshop,
- suggestion: 00:22:339 - here you have a tranformation wich is really nice but imo you should start to change the colour of the background on 00:21:005 - but on 00:22:339 - wich would be perfect with the loop that you choise for this part
You should ask a SBorder to help you with a mod since imo it really needs one on the SB
[we will wait]
- rise lead-in up to 2000 pls
- I wanted to say something in general to the diff , is not bad but you have some points wich imo forgotten to be mapped tike:
03:01:172 - you can totally listen the sound in background wich you even mapped before so you should do with this one aswell to keep everything consistant and balanced in your diff
03:04:339 (6,7) - here you mapped this kind of sound in a totally different way and not in 1/8
03:06:839 (4,5) - same again here
03:09:672 (5,6) - same
03:15:005 (5) - same
03:17:672 (6,7) - same and so on,try to keep thins kind of sound consistant with the rhythm that you give to it,so you should totally check really good one by one this kind of sounds and change the rhythm to the patterns - 02:48:672 (1) - imo here you should use 1/4 rhythm since it looks a bit overmapped with 1/8
- about the usage of patterns you got really much incostency because somethimes when you have to use 1/8 you use 1/4 or even 1/2 and in some parts wich is generally the rhythm of the song id alive you let it die with slow sliders like in this case 03:21:005 (1,2) -
- the flow in general between the patterns is not really good in some parts for example 00:32:339 (1,2,3,4,1) - here
here is how i see your flow the problem is basicly in the end but you can re-do this pattern in this way to have a nice and smooooty flow: - try to look on some aproved dnb maps for having some jump inspiration because imo you need some more cute one ;_; and imo in the slower part of the map try to not use so many circles :V
some general suggestion sorry about but you need really much work on this map ;_; gl i give you a star because i love the song <3 gl