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[General]
[we will wait]
some general suggestion sorry about but you need really much work on this map ;_; gl i give you a star because i love the song <3 gl dam thx 4 hte star though lmao
[General]
- combo colors are not same :V ???
- mania diff has not SB Epilepsy warning oh shi t woops
- I'm not a SToryBorder but i can give you some suggestion since imo you need some,i'm not discussing the SB quality but just some parts of it TT_TT k:
- Text: personally i don't like the font that you used because i think it soesent fit generally with the BG and the rest of the SB you can use http://www.dafont.com/ for finding some more light formd fornt and not Arial, why don't you try to go for softer colours and give a fade to the words and an outer light wich is easier to do with photoshop, yeh im going to change the font later when I'm not a lazy shit rip
- suggestion: 00:22:339 - here you have a tranformation wich is really nice but imo you should start to change the colour of the background on 00:21:005 - but on 00:22:339 - wich would be perfect with the loop that you choise for this part idk wat ur saying but if u can, pls explain
You should ask a SBorder to help you with a mod since imo it really needs one on the SB i can't find any :VVVVVVVVVV
[we will wait]
- rise lead-in up to 2000 pls dam
- I wanted to say something in general to the diff , is not bad but you have some points wich imo forgotten to be mapped tike:
03:01:172 - you can totally listen the sound in background wich you even mapped before so you should do with this one aswell to keep everything consistant and balanced in your diff dam
03:04:339 (6,7) - here you mapped this kind of sound in a totally different way and not in 1/8 yeh keeping
03:06:839 (4,5) - same again here^
03:09:672 (5,6) - same^
03:15:005 (5) - same ^
03:17:672 (6,7) - same and so on,try to keep thins kind of sound consistant with the rhythm that you give to it,so you should totally check really good one by one this kind of sounds and change the rhythm to the patterns i changed this one but the reason they're 1/8 at the beginning because i wanted it 2 be like that cuz jumpy, the rest are sliders because i don't use the 3 note jump-pattern anymore cuz that's kinda boring to play the same thing over and over again amirite. changed the ones that were long sliders though - 02:48:672 (1) - imo here you should use 1/4 rhythm since it looks a bit overmapped with 1/8 dam
- about the usage of patterns you got really much incostency because somethimes when you have to use 1/8 you use 1/4 or even 1/2 and in some parts wich is generally the rhythm of the song id alive you let it die with slow sliders like in this case 03:21:005 (1,2) - kek get rekt
- the flow in general between the patterns is not really good in some parts for example 00:32:339 (1,2,3,4,1) - here
here is how i see your flow the problem is basicly in the end but you can re-do this pattern in this way to have a nice and smooooty flow:
dam i tried - try to look on some aproved dnb maps for having some jump inspiration because imo you need some more cute one ;_; and imo in the slower part of the map try to not use so many circles :V yeh this is my first map i ever made lmao i did that after TT_TT
some general suggestion sorry about but you need really much work on this map ;_; gl i give you a star because i love the song <3 gl dam thx 4 hte star though lmao
I was sweating throughout ur whole mod, n i still don't understand some of the points, but the ones i could understand were nic thxxthhxtxthxthxhx