holy damn 6 mins kkkkk
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general: Filesize of the mapset exceeds 10MB without video. from ai mod
k 1st of all during the first part i can see a few spacing issues that have caused me to get 100s while sight reading.
00:02:839 (3) - reduce spacing tbh
00:06:005 (8,9,10,11,1) - too close to 00:05:505 (7) . can use NC as well.
00:20:339 (2) dont hide this note? doesnt follow the music
00:18:172 (5) - could use anti flow
00:20:339 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - i suggest you map the louder part of the music.
00:20:172 - why no note here? you decided to map the background part of the music, but this is where it starts
00:35:339 (4,5) - u have 1/2 over lapped notes then you have the same overlapped 1/4 here 00:36:089 (2,3) - , which is really confusing to read
00:36:505 (5,6) - same as ^. you have 1/4 double on the same combo and then you have a stacked triplet: confusing to read
00:39:005 (1) - ugly slider
00:39:839 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - overmapped i feel. just get rid of a few notes that dont correlate with the louder, more prominent sound.
00:43:339 (2) - dont use slider. use a 1/2 double
00:44:339 (1) - k so you decide to overlap this underneath previous slider right after a 6.52x distance snap. not cool. it should be a jump instead since it accents the really loud drum
00:46:339 (1,2) - ugly
00:52:339 (1) - end on blue tick @ 00:52:922 - and make 00:53:117 (2) - start on white tick @ 00:53:005 -
also it's kinda ugly so a bit of aesthetic improvement could be used
00:54:005 (1) - ctrl + g?
00:56:172 (5,6) - bad flow + ugly. you should move it up to perhaps x:324 y:48 so it creates a decent looking shape along with a similar DS as the previous slider.
01:14:672 (2) - to x:244 y:100?
01:15:672 (1,2,3,4) - ugly square and you should probably ctrl + H it and move it to the other side of the grid
01:26:339 (1) - more curve
01:27:339 (3) - ^
01:31:005 (1,2) - too much curve
01:32:339 (2) - shouldnt hide this
01:33:339 (4) - ^
01:14:339 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - honestly for this entire slow part you should lower ds a bit to differentiate from the previous part
02:19:672 (1,1) - reduce jump
02:27:672 (1,2,3) - dont just purely use sliders. theres a vocal part here
02:43:672 (1) - no flow from previous note
02:47:672 (1) - lower jump or start stream from 02:47:339 -
03:00:005 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3) - kinda messy
also i notice u like to take your patterns in the center. consider using rotation etc and use your grid space effectively
03:02:339 (1) - kinda ugly + doesnt flow from previous pattern
03:02:589 (2,3) - overmapped
03:05:839 (7) - do not stack with the return slider
03:06:339 - - you should use a note instead of a slider end for this downbeat lol. it's a large white tick
03:13:172 (2) - nc
03:15:672 (1) - ctrl + g for flow
03:24:505 (7,8,9) - spacing issue. make spacing larger and please make a more eye-pleasing pattern
03:27:005 (2) - ctrl + g
03:27:672 (3) - ctrl + g
03:26:339 (1,2,3) - use blankets. kind of ugly
03:37:839 (6) - ctrl +g
03:47:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - - make this part prettier
03:50:672 (2,3,4) - ^ also bad flow
04:02:172 (6,1) - ^
03:56:005 (2) - increase spacing
04:00:672 (7) - reduce spacing from previous note
04:03:672 (7) - use slider
04:57:172 (1,2,3,4,5) - there should be a stream here
05:07:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - improve aesthetics
05:37:005 (4) - ^
honestly impressed with a few parts of your map.
make this map a bit more prettier aesthetic-wise and it's going to be really good.
flow is sometimes off in certain areas. keep test playing to see anything you dont like or feels weird. look at some good recent maps to help you