From LordRaika's Modding Party
[We Will Wait]
First of, DELETE ALL ******* WHISTLES ON THE SLIDERS. THEY DESTROY MY EARS
Also, why did you use all those completely random slowdowns? They make absolutely no sense
Also, the singed parts are heavily overmapped imo
00:01:006 (1,2) - Improve blanket
00:16:672 (4) - NC
00:24:339 (1) - Why on earth is this a 1/1 slow down? The music still follows 1/2
00:29:672 (1) - ^^
00:37:672 (6) - NC, because of slow down, and it also fits (Slowdown is used before for no reason, as there are only circles)
00:39:005 (1) - Why on earth is this a 1/1 slow down? The music still follows 1/2
00:55:005 (1) - ^^
01:03:672 (1) - This plays bad, due to many reverses, it's kinda boring
01:25:339 (3,1) - Please fix the overlap (Not sure if they appear when playing, but I think they do)
01:39:005 (2) - Move to 130:178 (For perfect symmetry)
01:49:005 (1) - Ctrl G? Feels better for flow
01:55:672 (2) - Move to 449:193
01:56:672 (3) - Move to 429:96
02:01:005 (2) - Move to 168:87
02:12:672 (3) - (Storyboard) Why at the end of this slider is a pink circle? Shouldn't there be a grey circle?
02:19:672 (1,1) - Move to 376:211
02:46:339 (1,1,1,1) - Patterns like this look really ugly, please consider changing it
03:25:672 (6) - Move to 327:252
03:27:005 (2) - Shouldn't it end at the white tick? (for THIS)
03:31:672 - turn off kiai, as it's some kind of break
03:49:672 (7,2) - Ugly overlap, maybe stack (2) with (7)
03:54:339 (1,1,1,1) - Distance is too high between them
04:05:339 (1,1,1) - Why all these NC? Delete all NC
04:48:339 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Looks ugly, with the first 3 stacking, but the others won't
05:02:339 (1,2) - Why does it go this way? IMO, it would be better if (1) goes to the right first, and then goes up, instead of first up and then right (as it is right now)
05:03:005 (2) - Make it end at the white tick (for THIS)
05:09:005 (5,7) - Overlapping really ugly
05:09:005 (5,6,7) - Distance is very high for 1/4, it looks like 1/2
05:24:672 (3) - Move to 280:248
05:34:339 (2,3) - Ugly overlap
05:35:339 (3) - This slider is probably the worst there is. Why? The music doesn't suit any red noded slider (as those are only for scratches, guitars etc.)
Please change the slider completely
05:54:339 (1,2) - For the calm part, it's better to not have a 'jump' (or something that feels like a jump)
06:02:672 (1) - Make it end the the white tick, it ending at a blue one is not good
Good Luck!
[We Will Wait]
First of, DELETE ALL ******* WHISTLES ON THE SLIDERS. THEY DESTROY MY EARS
Also, why did you use all those completely random slowdowns? They make absolutely no sense
Also, the singed parts are heavily overmapped imo
00:01:006 (1,2) - Improve blanket
00:16:672 (4) - NC
00:24:339 (1) - Why on earth is this a 1/1 slow down? The music still follows 1/2
00:29:672 (1) - ^^
00:37:672 (6) - NC, because of slow down, and it also fits (Slowdown is used before for no reason, as there are only circles)
00:39:005 (1) - Why on earth is this a 1/1 slow down? The music still follows 1/2
00:55:005 (1) - ^^
01:03:672 (1) - This plays bad, due to many reverses, it's kinda boring
01:25:339 (3,1) - Please fix the overlap (Not sure if they appear when playing, but I think they do)
01:39:005 (2) - Move to 130:178 (For perfect symmetry)
01:49:005 (1) - Ctrl G? Feels better for flow
01:55:672 (2) - Move to 449:193
01:56:672 (3) - Move to 429:96
02:01:005 (2) - Move to 168:87
02:12:672 (3) - (Storyboard) Why at the end of this slider is a pink circle? Shouldn't there be a grey circle?
02:19:672 (1,1) - Move to 376:211
02:46:339 (1,1,1,1) - Patterns like this look really ugly, please consider changing it
03:25:672 (6) - Move to 327:252
03:27:005 (2) - Shouldn't it end at the white tick? (for THIS)
03:31:672 - turn off kiai, as it's some kind of break
03:49:672 (7,2) - Ugly overlap, maybe stack (2) with (7)
03:54:339 (1,1,1,1) - Distance is too high between them
04:05:339 (1,1,1) - Why all these NC? Delete all NC
04:48:339 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Looks ugly, with the first 3 stacking, but the others won't
05:02:339 (1,2) - Why does it go this way? IMO, it would be better if (1) goes to the right first, and then goes up, instead of first up and then right (as it is right now)
05:03:005 (2) - Make it end at the white tick (for THIS)
05:09:005 (5,7) - Overlapping really ugly
05:09:005 (5,6,7) - Distance is very high for 1/4, it looks like 1/2
05:24:672 (3) - Move to 280:248
05:34:339 (2,3) - Ugly overlap
05:35:339 (3) - This slider is probably the worst there is. Why? The music doesn't suit any red noded slider (as those are only for scratches, guitars etc.)
Please change the slider completely
05:54:339 (1,2) - For the calm part, it's better to not have a 'jump' (or something that feels like a jump)
06:02:672 (1) - Make it end the the white tick, it ending at a blue one is not good
Good Luck!