neonat
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Your inherited lines are not snapped oh yea forgot to do that asdf
We Will Wait
00:16:672 (1,2,3) - the curve here can be better, shift 00:16:755 (2) to somewhere around x: 428 y: 200 or something dam
00:21:505 (2) - can you place the ring such that the slider end is centralized? Right now it looks off and in a sense sloppy:
when i cahnge font k
00:24:339 (10) - NC for sv change
00:27:672 (5) - NC
00:28:505 (9,10) - blanket it better
00:33:672 (4) - NC for sv change
00:36:339 (4) - ^
00:39:005 (6) - ^
00:44:339 (3) - ^
00:45:672 (5) - ^
00:46:672 (1) - remove NC
00:49:672 (7) - NC for sv change
00:55:672 (6) - NC as this section will be different from the previous part with the faster sv of 00:56:172 (9)
00:59:005 (10) - NC for sv change
It just goes on and on, highlight the changes in SV clearly in the song, there is no other way to distinguish it here in the song and it happens all too often for it not to be clearly indicated. Ensure that the player is able to tell properly that there is a change in speed, it's not like you can see a tick here because the change is not as drastic as that
01:36:339 (3,4) - this is very weird get rekt 2014 my mannnnnnnnnn
01:47:672 (1,1) - same thing about the rings, place it with the objects centralised within it same thing about last ring
01:53:005 (1,1) - ^ ^
01:54:339 (1,2) - don't overlap D:
01:58:339 (1,1) - centralise the object within the ring same as b4
01:59:672 (1,2) - don't overlap nu
02:08:339 (2,1) - same thing about the ring same as b4
02:12:672 (3,1) - ^ ^
02:19:672 (1,1) - ^ ^
02:21:005 (1,2) - blanket them to look better dam
02:28:672 (2) - curve it less dam
02:48:339 (1,2,3,4,1) - this shape looks very uneven and doesn't look nice dam
02:51:005 (1) - same thing about the ring same thing as b4
02:54:339 (1,1) - stack them perfectly dam
02:56:672 (1,1) - ^ dam
03:06:839 (4,5) - these shapes don't suit together in a pattern, it looks odd dam i tried
03:12:339 (1,1) - same thing about the rings same as b4 m8
03:17:672 (6,7) - use the same shapes p sure they are the same shapes tho, redid it anyway
03:27:005 (2,3) - to look neater:
dam
03:34:005 (1,1) - same thing about the rings same
03:42:005 (1) - remove NC nahhhhhhhh
03:47:672 (1,2,3) - such overlapping looks very untidy dam
03:50:672 (2,3) - it would be better for flow if they weren't moving in the same direction and having the following slider be behind the previous dam
03:52:672 (1) - remove NC. Be consistent with the patterns, like 03:47:339 (2) nah n wah
04:12:005 (1,2) - make them more symmetrical and matching dam
04:15:005 (2) - curve it less dam i tried
04:28:339 (2,3) - don't overlap dam
04:27:672 (1,2,3,4) - their spacings keep varying and it doesn't make sense for it to be like that when it's one whole phrase of its own dam the overlap problem fixed this i think
04:34:339 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - the curve in the stream can be improved and smoothened
04:37:672 (1,1,2) - their non-stacked look doesn't look great dam
04:55:672 (1,2) - make them more matching and even pattern dam
05:06:839 (4,5) - blanket dam
Overall it is very raw and can be refined a lot dam
Good Luck thx m8
Your inherited lines are not snapped oh yea forgot to do that asdf
We Will Wait
00:16:672 (1,2,3) - the curve here can be better, shift 00:16:755 (2) to somewhere around x: 428 y: 200 or something dam
00:21:505 (2) - can you place the ring such that the slider end is centralized? Right now it looks off and in a sense sloppy:
when i cahnge font k
00:24:339 (10) - NC for sv change
00:27:672 (5) - NC
00:28:505 (9,10) - blanket it better
00:33:672 (4) - NC for sv change
00:36:339 (4) - ^
00:39:005 (6) - ^
00:44:339 (3) - ^
00:45:672 (5) - ^
00:46:672 (1) - remove NC
00:49:672 (7) - NC for sv change
00:55:672 (6) - NC as this section will be different from the previous part with the faster sv of 00:56:172 (9)
00:59:005 (10) - NC for sv change
It just goes on and on, highlight the changes in SV clearly in the song, there is no other way to distinguish it here in the song and it happens all too often for it not to be clearly indicated. Ensure that the player is able to tell properly that there is a change in speed, it's not like you can see a tick here because the change is not as drastic as that
01:36:339 (3,4) - this is very weird get rekt 2014 my mannnnnnnnnn
01:47:672 (1,1) - same thing about the rings, place it with the objects centralised within it same thing about last ring
01:53:005 (1,1) - ^ ^
01:54:339 (1,2) - don't overlap D:
01:58:339 (1,1) - centralise the object within the ring same as b4
01:59:672 (1,2) - don't overlap nu
02:08:339 (2,1) - same thing about the ring same as b4
02:12:672 (3,1) - ^ ^
02:19:672 (1,1) - ^ ^
02:21:005 (1,2) - blanket them to look better dam
02:28:672 (2) - curve it less dam
02:48:339 (1,2,3,4,1) - this shape looks very uneven and doesn't look nice dam
02:51:005 (1) - same thing about the ring same thing as b4
02:54:339 (1,1) - stack them perfectly dam
02:56:672 (1,1) - ^ dam
03:06:839 (4,5) - these shapes don't suit together in a pattern, it looks odd dam i tried
03:12:339 (1,1) - same thing about the rings same as b4 m8
03:17:672 (6,7) - use the same shapes p sure they are the same shapes tho, redid it anyway
03:27:005 (2,3) - to look neater:
dam
03:34:005 (1,1) - same thing about the rings same
03:42:005 (1) - remove NC nahhhhhhhh
03:47:672 (1,2,3) - such overlapping looks very untidy dam
03:50:672 (2,3) - it would be better for flow if they weren't moving in the same direction and having the following slider be behind the previous dam
03:52:672 (1) - remove NC. Be consistent with the patterns, like 03:47:339 (2) nah n wah
04:12:005 (1,2) - make them more symmetrical and matching dam
04:15:005 (2) - curve it less dam i tried
04:28:339 (2,3) - don't overlap dam
04:27:672 (1,2,3,4) - their spacings keep varying and it doesn't make sense for it to be like that when it's one whole phrase of its own dam the overlap problem fixed this i think
04:34:339 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - the curve in the stream can be improved and smoothened
04:37:672 (1,1,2) - their non-stacked look doesn't look great dam
04:55:672 (1,2) - make them more matching and even pattern dam
05:06:839 (4,5) - blanket dam
Overall it is very raw and can be refined a lot dam
Good Luck thx m8
also if you could, can you give me teh co-ordinates for each of teh rings so my life can be easierand then no1 has to wait 50 yrs for the rings to be fixed. If not that's fine 2