Hello! From my queue
General
Insane
00:21:672 (3) - The SB effect it cool but it is not perfectly centered around the circle. It is the same with every time you used this (although this is not very noticeable, minor issue)
00:23:672 (1,2,3,4) - You are using a weird spacing here, I think it would play a lot better when the distances were the exact same with the slider before and the slider after the 4 circles, or it will create an awkward moving
00:33:839 (5) - If you would stack this with the slider return of 00:34:505 (1) - this would flow better moving towards 00:34:005 (6) - . Also, the sliders are not perfectly parallel if this was your intention
00:35:005 (2,3,4,5) - Diamond shape? Honestly they are not hard to make and the shapes you are going with look strange. (like this one which looks a lot better 00:36:505 (5,6,7,1) - )
00:38:339 (1,2) - Why the bass sound on the slider ends as well? I think you should stay consistent with the previous hitsounding
00:40:672 (7) - Move this one to the left for a better flow (but don't let them overlap)
00:43:172 (1) - Why the whistle on the slider head? I don't think it fits because of the very silent sound in the music itself
00:46:339 (1,2) - Same as 00:38:339 (1,2) -
00:51:339 (6) - The stack is very off
00:53:672 (1) - Would create a better movement if it was moved to the right http://puu.sh/e73pl/7ee7a82143.jpg
01:32:339 (2) - Fix stack
02:17:672 (3,4) - Why the overlap? I think you should move 3 a bit because I don't think this looks great
02:47:672 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think the combospam is a bit overkill, why don't you just use 1 combo ?
03:06:839 (4,5) - The slider are offbeat for not reason, consider changing this to make it also a bit more consistent with 03:04:339 (6,7,4,5) -
03:16:339 (3,5) - Stack pl0x
03:26:047 (7) - Why is this one not on the beat?
03:40:672 (1) - I think you should map something different than just a long return slider like that
03:53:005 (1) - You always used a 1/8 return slider for this kind of sound (which is correct), yet you use 1/6 now for no reason.
03:59:005 (3) - Stack
04:45:339 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same about awkward movement. The DS you used there should be the same with the slider as well
05:06:672 (3,5) - Ugly overlap
05:08:255 (2,6) - Some people will be pissed with such a spacing all of a sudden for that rhythm. Consider just overlapping the circle with the other sliders
05:10:339 (1) - >.>
05:12:339 (3) - Ctrl+G for better flow
I think the map itself needs some work, because it can definitely be improved by you with some effort.
Good luck!
General
- The map is still somewhat beginnerish, but I think you know that yourself . I noticed a lot of irregular spacing at places where it shouldn't change, and there wasn't really a great flow. But I see those things a lot with new mappers
- I am surprised that no one noticed this but the BPM is unnecessarily doubled. Nothing in the music would make it 180, but rather 90 (don't forget to double the SV)
- Slidertick rate is a bit overkill in such a calm song, I suggest changing this to 1, or let it stay at 2 if you apply my bpm change.
- The purple combo color (Combo 2) blends a lot with the background. Consider making this one a bit lighter/darker to avoid this.
- If Nerodae mapped the intro (I don't know how much), it's kind of like a collab and you should add him to the tags. I'm not sure if this has to be done, but I would do it.
- Cool storyboard, it fits the song perfectly, the lyrics were displayed in a nice way except for the font imo
Insane
00:21:672 (3) - The SB effect it cool but it is not perfectly centered around the circle. It is the same with every time you used this (although this is not very noticeable, minor issue)
00:23:672 (1,2,3,4) - You are using a weird spacing here, I think it would play a lot better when the distances were the exact same with the slider before and the slider after the 4 circles, or it will create an awkward moving
00:33:839 (5) - If you would stack this with the slider return of 00:34:505 (1) - this would flow better moving towards 00:34:005 (6) - . Also, the sliders are not perfectly parallel if this was your intention
00:35:005 (2,3,4,5) - Diamond shape? Honestly they are not hard to make and the shapes you are going with look strange. (like this one which looks a lot better 00:36:505 (5,6,7,1) - )
00:38:339 (1,2) - Why the bass sound on the slider ends as well? I think you should stay consistent with the previous hitsounding
00:40:672 (7) - Move this one to the left for a better flow (but don't let them overlap)
00:43:172 (1) - Why the whistle on the slider head? I don't think it fits because of the very silent sound in the music itself
00:46:339 (1,2) - Same as 00:38:339 (1,2) -
00:51:339 (6) - The stack is very off
00:53:672 (1) - Would create a better movement if it was moved to the right http://puu.sh/e73pl/7ee7a82143.jpg
01:32:339 (2) - Fix stack
02:17:672 (3,4) - Why the overlap? I think you should move 3 a bit because I don't think this looks great
02:47:672 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think the combospam is a bit overkill, why don't you just use 1 combo ?
03:06:839 (4,5) - The slider are offbeat for not reason, consider changing this to make it also a bit more consistent with 03:04:339 (6,7,4,5) -
03:16:339 (3,5) - Stack pl0x
03:26:047 (7) - Why is this one not on the beat?
03:40:672 (1) - I think you should map something different than just a long return slider like that
03:53:005 (1) - You always used a 1/8 return slider for this kind of sound (which is correct), yet you use 1/6 now for no reason.
03:59:005 (3) - Stack
04:45:339 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same about awkward movement. The DS you used there should be the same with the slider as well
05:06:672 (3,5) - Ugly overlap
05:08:255 (2,6) - Some people will be pissed with such a spacing all of a sudden for that rhythm. Consider just overlapping the circle with the other sliders
05:10:339 (1) - >.>
05:12:339 (3) - Ctrl+G for better flow
I think the map itself needs some work, because it can definitely be improved by you with some effort.
Good luck!