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holy damn 6 mins kkkkk rekt
from m4m ayee
my map>>https://osu.ppy.sh/s/228745 kk
general: Filesize of the mapset exceeds 10MB without video. from ai mod fuk ai
k 1st of all during the first part i can see a few spacing issues that have caused me to get 100s while sight reading. dam
00:02:839 (3) - reduce spacing tbh dam
00:06:005 (8,9,10,11,1) - too close to 00:05:505 (7) . can use NC as well.added nc, didn't make it any farther though
00:20:339 (2) dont hide this note? doesnt follow the music it does doe :c
00:18:172 (5) - could use anti flow keepin
00:20:339 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - i suggest you map the louder part of the music. dam
00:20:172 - why no note here? you decided to map the background part of the music, but this is where it starts dam
00:35:339 (4,5) - u have 1/2 over lapped notes then you have the same overlapped 1/4 here 00:36:089 (2,3) - , which is really confusing to read ehhhhhhhh k I'll change
00:36:505 (5,6) - same as ^. you have 1/4 double on the same combo and then you have a stacked triplet: confusing to read dam
00:39:005 (1) - ugly slider
00:39:839 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - overmapped i feel. just get rid of a few notes that dont correlate with the louder, more prominent sound. they all correlate to the vocal splice and teh snare B^) but i see wat u mean, I'll change it if more people h8
00:43:339 (2) - dont use slider. use a 1/2 double DAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
00:44:339 (1) - k so you decide to overlap this underneath previous slider right after a 6.52x distance snap. not cool. it should be a jump instead since it accents the really loud drum
00:46:339 (1,2) - ugly
00:52:339 (1) - end on blue tick @ 00:52:922 - and make 00:53:117 (2) - start on white tick @ 00:53:005 - dam thanks for this!
also it's kinda ugly so a bit of aesthetic improvement could be used dam
00:54:005 (1) - ctrl + g? nah
00:56:172 (5,6) - bad flow + ugly. you should move it up to perhaps x:324 y:48 so it creates a decent looking shape along with a similar DS as the previous slider. idr if i changed this from previous mods or not but im keeping this
01:14:672 (2) - to x:244 y:100? dam
01:15:672 (1,2,3,4) - ugly square and you should probably ctrl + H it and move it to the other side of the grid omg it's fucking ugly fuc k me half a year ago imcry. changedchanged
01:26:339 (1) - more curve dam
01:27:339 (3) - ^ dam
01:31:005 (1,2) - too much curve dam
01:32:339 (2) - shouldnt hide this dam
01:33:339 (4) - ^ dam
01:14:339 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - honestly for this entire slow part you should lower ds a bit to differentiate from the previous part ehhh if im told again
02:19:672 (1,1) - reduce jump dam
02:27:672 (1,2,3) - dont just purely use sliders. theres a vocal part here dam
02:43:672 (1) - no flow from previous note dam
02:47:672 (1) - lower jump or start stream from 02:47:339 -
03:00:005 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3) - kinda messy dam
also i notice u like to take your patterns in the center. consider using rotation etc and use your grid space effectively oke
03:02:339 (1) - kinda ugly + doesnt flow from previous pattern dam
03:02:589 (2,3) - overmapped neh
03:05:839 (7) - do not stack with the return slider dam
03:06:339 - - you should use a note instead of a slider end for this downbeat lol. it's a large white tick dam i tried
03:13:172 (2) - nc dam
03:15:672 (1) - ctrl + g for flow neh
03:24:505 (7,8,9) - spacing issue. make spacing larger and please make a more eye-pleasing pattern dam i tried
03:27:005 (2) - ctrl + g neh
03:27:672 (3) - ctrl + g ^
03:26:339 (1,2,3) - use blankets. kind of ugly dam
03:37:839 (6) - ctrl +g dam
03:47:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - - make this part prettier dam
03:50:672 (2,3,4) - ^ also bad flow dam
04:02:172 (6,1) - ^ dam
03:56:005 (2) - increase spacing neh
04:00:672 (7) - reduce spacing from previous note dam
04:03:672 (7) - use slider dam
04:57:172 (1,2,3,4,5) - there should be a stream here neh
05:07:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - improve aesthetics idk wat 2 do though lmao
05:37:005 (4) - ^ i did volume things if that counts lmao
honestly impressed with a few parts of your map. wow actually thxtxxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxtxththx
make this map a bit more prettier aesthetic-wise and it's going to be really good.
flow is sometimes off in certain areas. keep test playing to see anything you dont like or feels weird. look at some good recent maps to help you
from m4m ayee
my map>>https://osu.ppy.sh/s/228745 kk
general: Filesize of the mapset exceeds 10MB without video. from ai mod fuk ai
k 1st of all during the first part i can see a few spacing issues that have caused me to get 100s while sight reading. dam
00:02:839 (3) - reduce spacing tbh dam
00:06:005 (8,9,10,11,1) - too close to 00:05:505 (7) . can use NC as well.added nc, didn't make it any farther though
00:20:339 (2) dont hide this note? doesnt follow the music it does doe :c
00:18:172 (5) - could use anti flow keepin
00:20:339 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - i suggest you map the louder part of the music. dam
00:20:172 - why no note here? you decided to map the background part of the music, but this is where it starts dam
00:35:339 (4,5) - u have 1/2 over lapped notes then you have the same overlapped 1/4 here 00:36:089 (2,3) - , which is really confusing to read ehhhhhhhh k I'll change
00:36:505 (5,6) - same as ^. you have 1/4 double on the same combo and then you have a stacked triplet: confusing to read dam
00:39:005 (1) - ugly slider
00:39:839 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - overmapped i feel. just get rid of a few notes that dont correlate with the louder, more prominent sound. they all correlate to the vocal splice and teh snare B^) but i see wat u mean, I'll change it if more people h8
00:43:339 (2) - dont use slider. use a 1/2 double DAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
00:44:339 (1) - k so you decide to overlap this underneath previous slider right after a 6.52x distance snap. not cool. it should be a jump instead since it accents the really loud drum
00:46:339 (1,2) - ugly
00:52:339 (1) - end on blue tick @ 00:52:922 - and make 00:53:117 (2) - start on white tick @ 00:53:005 - dam thanks for this!
also it's kinda ugly so a bit of aesthetic improvement could be used dam
00:54:005 (1) - ctrl + g? nah
00:56:172 (5,6) - bad flow + ugly. you should move it up to perhaps x:324 y:48 so it creates a decent looking shape along with a similar DS as the previous slider. idr if i changed this from previous mods or not but im keeping this
01:14:672 (2) - to x:244 y:100? dam
01:15:672 (1,2,3,4) - ugly square and you should probably ctrl + H it and move it to the other side of the grid omg it's fucking ugly fuc k me half a year ago imcry. changedchanged
01:26:339 (1) - more curve dam
01:27:339 (3) - ^ dam
01:31:005 (1,2) - too much curve dam
01:32:339 (2) - shouldnt hide this dam
01:33:339 (4) - ^ dam
01:14:339 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - honestly for this entire slow part you should lower ds a bit to differentiate from the previous part ehhh if im told again
02:19:672 (1,1) - reduce jump dam
02:27:672 (1,2,3) - dont just purely use sliders. theres a vocal part here dam
02:43:672 (1) - no flow from previous note dam
02:47:672 (1) - lower jump or start stream from 02:47:339 -
03:00:005 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3) - kinda messy dam
also i notice u like to take your patterns in the center. consider using rotation etc and use your grid space effectively oke
03:02:339 (1) - kinda ugly + doesnt flow from previous pattern dam
03:02:589 (2,3) - overmapped neh
03:05:839 (7) - do not stack with the return slider dam
03:06:339 - - you should use a note instead of a slider end for this downbeat lol. it's a large white tick dam i tried
03:13:172 (2) - nc dam
03:15:672 (1) - ctrl + g for flow neh
03:24:505 (7,8,9) - spacing issue. make spacing larger and please make a more eye-pleasing pattern dam i tried
03:27:005 (2) - ctrl + g neh
03:27:672 (3) - ctrl + g ^
03:26:339 (1,2,3) - use blankets. kind of ugly dam
03:37:839 (6) - ctrl +g dam
03:47:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - - make this part prettier dam
03:50:672 (2,3,4) - ^ also bad flow dam
04:02:172 (6,1) - ^ dam
03:56:005 (2) - increase spacing neh
04:00:672 (7) - reduce spacing from previous note dam
04:03:672 (7) - use slider dam
04:57:172 (1,2,3,4,5) - there should be a stream here neh
05:07:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - improve aesthetics idk wat 2 do though lmao
05:37:005 (4) - ^ i did volume things if that counts lmao
honestly impressed with a few parts of your map. wow actually thxtxxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxtxththx
make this map a bit more prettier aesthetic-wise and it's going to be really good.
flow is sometimes off in certain areas. keep test playing to see anything you dont like or feels weird. look at some good recent maps to help you
anythign with no comment has been fixed by previous modz
thx 4 the mod m9