GeneralYour inherited lines are not snapped
oh yea forgot to do that asdfWe Will Wait00:16:672 (1,2,3) - the curve here can be better, shift 00:16:755 (2) to somewhere around x: 428 y: 200 or something
dam00:21:505 (2) - can you place the ring such that the slider end is centralized? Right now it looks off and in a sense sloppy:
when i cahnge font k00:24:339 (10) - NC for sv change
00:27:672 (5) - NC
00:28:505 (9,10) - blanket it better
00:33:672 (4) - NC for sv change
00:36:339 (4) - ^
00:39:005 (6) - ^
00:44:339 (3) - ^
00:45:672 (5) - ^
00:46:672 (1) - remove NC
00:49:672 (7) - NC for sv change
00:55:672 (6) - NC as this section will be different from the previous part with the faster sv of 00:56:172 (9)
00:59:005 (10) - NC for sv change
It just goes on and on, highlight the changes in SV clearly in the song, there is no other way to distinguish it here in the song and it happens all too often for it not to be clearly indicated. Ensure that the player is able to tell properly that there is a change in speed, it's not like you can see a tick here because the change is not as drastic as that
01:36:339 (3,4) - this is very weird
get rekt 2014 my mannnnnnnnnn01:47:672 (1,1) - same thing about the rings, place it with the objects centralised within it
same thing about last ring01:53:005 (1,1) - ^
^01:54:339 (1,2) - don't overlap
D:01:58:339 (1,1) - centralise the object within the ring
same as b401:59:672 (1,2) - don't overlap
nu02:08:339 (2,1) - same thing about the ring
same as b402:12:672 (3,1) - ^
^02:19:672 (1,1) - ^
^02:21:005 (1,2) - blanket them to look better
dam02:28:672 (2) - curve it less
dam02:48:339 (1,2,3,4,1) - this shape looks very uneven and doesn't look nice
dam02:51:005 (1) - same thing about the ring
same thing as b402:54:339 (1,1) - stack them perfectly
dam02:56:672 (1,1) - ^
dam03:06:839 (4,5) - these shapes don't suit together in a pattern, it looks odd
dam i tried03:12:339 (1,1) - same thing about the rings
same as b4 m803:17:672 (6,7) - use the same shapes
p sure they are the same shapes tho, redid it anyway03:27:005 (2,3) - to look neater:
dam03:34:005 (1,1) - same thing about the rings
same03:42:005 (1) - remove NC
nahhhhhhhh03:47:672 (1,2,3) - such overlapping looks very untidy
dam 03:50:672 (2,3) - it would be better for flow if they weren't moving in the same direction and having the following slider be behind the previous
dam03:52:672 (1) - remove NC. Be consistent with the patterns, like 03:47:339 (2)
nah n wah04:12:005 (1,2) - make them more symmetrical and matching
dam04:15:005 (2) - curve it less
dam i tried04:28:339 (2,3) - don't overlap
dam04:27:672 (1,2,3,4) - their spacings keep varying and it doesn't make sense for it to be like that when it's one whole phrase of its own
dam the overlap problem fixed this i think04:34:339 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - the curve in the stream can be improved and smoothened
04:37:672 (1,1,2) - their non-stacked look doesn't look great
dam04:55:672 (1,2) - make them more matching and even pattern
dam05:06:839 (4,5) - blanket
damOverall it is very raw and can be refined a lot
damGood Luck
thx m8