1. Depression (4.51 stars, 643 notes)
2. Difficile (3.05 stars, 508 notes)
3. Facile (1.29 stars, 233 notes)
4. HD - 4Key (2.51 stars, 1311 notes)
5. Muzukashii (2.22 stars, 683 notes)
6. NM - 4Key (1.82 stars, 1001 notes)
7. Normale (1.83 stars, 356 notes)
8. Oni (2.71 stars, 873 notes)

Merci pour les mods!

osu! standard:

1. Genshin
2. Yoges
3. CSLM
4. Kazuya
5. Neil Watts
6. kunkakunkakunkakunka
7. Taeyang
8. Atsuro
9. Dono027
10. Electoz
11. Kalibe
12. TurtleStuffs
13. Shad0w1and
14. Log Off Now
15. cHelli
16. Reditum
17. Milan-
18. Ayyri
19. GabyPichu
20. Plaudible

Taiko:

1. xtrem3x
2. Flying Pan
3. newyams99
4. jossieP
5. Neku okazaki
6. -Tenshi-
7. Jaltzu
8. Underflow
9. Estaryo
10. EdamaMe411
11. nyanmi-1828
12. Aldwych
13. Nwolf
14. Intelli
15. Surono
16. Invective
17. Ayyri
18. [proflie]Kin[/profile]

Catch the beat:

1. lidahapi
2. -Sh1n1-

osu!mania:

1. NlHIL
2. Julie
3. KawaEE
4. -BANGKE-
5. Luthfeh
6. Obilariated
7. Skalim
8. Paradoxq13
9. Feerum
10. Mia_Rose
11. CometicRush
12. ArcherLove
13. Arta
14. juankristal
15. hikikuman
16. FastYoshi
17. Protastic101

Genshin wrote:

Here is my mod

[General]
it starts really suddenly, a 321 countdown would be really appreciated
The countdown is REALLY old style. I don't think anyone ever use that in our days.

[Facile]

00:08:519 (3) - move the end tick of the slider one square up
Not sure what you're trying to get here, but I'm not going to change since it mirrors the slider 00:05:993 (1) .
00:10:414 (5) - one square left (to keep symmetry with the 2 previous notes)
00:36:309 (4) - flip this horizontally (Ctrl+H), it will flow way better with the next note http://puu.sh/kh14X/f403b12f67.jpg
02:19:256 (3,1) - probably this overlap is too much for an easy
The readability should be fine here.
the rest is ok imho

[Moyen]

01:18:941 - add a note here
01:44:519 (1) - fix the shape and the position in order to make it a blanket of 01:44:204 (7) -
Not my intention, but since you insist, I changed it.

nothing else

[Difficile]

od 6
00:04:730 (2) - reduce the volume of the end of this slider (how much is up to you, but at least half of the current value)
Oops! I forgot this one.
01:18:625 (6) - fix this blanket
01:31:888 (5) - same as above
03:02:835 (1) - move the end of the spinner to 03:05:046
03:12:783 (7) - add a note here in the same position of 03:12:151 (5) -
I'll extend this spinner, but this may cause some recovery problem, but due to the BPM, I think it's okay.

[Depression]

00:02:519 (4,5,6,7) - keep an unique direction like the next ones
02:23:993 (3) - move this to x:176 y:344


Done

The map is awesome, congrats and good luck.
yey

Yoges wrote:

Hi, here for M4M. Map

[General]
Reduce HS volume from 00:00:941 - 00:56:519 to 30%?
Increased to 35%.

[Facile]
00:36:309 (4,5) - Curve the 4's End towards the 5 a bit. Move the end point to 332,118

[Moyen]
01:05:362 (5,6,7,1) - Not great flow. It's not very good to look at either
01:15:783 (7,1) - Maybe change that? The 1's snaking into the 7 as you're clicking it. Looks weird.
02:02:046 (5,1) - The player can easily mistake that for a 1/2 instead of a 1/4 because of these notes 02:00:625 (2,3) - previous to it. I'd just do the usual 02:04:414 (4,5,1) - you were doing throughout the map for that 1/4
03:02:835 (1,1) - That slider comes in too early. You want spinners gone clear before anything else even appears on the screen. I'd move the spinner end back to 03:04:098
03:24:940 (7) - 4 repeats aren't allowed in Easies and Normals as far as I'm aware.
03:37:888 (3,4) - Just move the 4 up a little so it's arc lines up with the 3 Like this. It looks much better.

[Difficile]
Looks perfect

[Depression]
I can't find anything...

Comme vous voyez, je suis un modder professionnelle! (If my french teacher taught me correctly)
Si tu es un homme, "professionnelle" ne prendra pas de "le" à la fin. Sinon, c'est au féminin! La structure de phrase est bonne, haha.

sheela901 wrote:

Yoges wrote:

Comme vous voyez, je suis un modder professionnelle! (If my french teacher taught me correctly)
Si tu es un homme, "professionnelle" ne prendra pas de "le" à la fin. Sinon, c'est au féminin! La structure de phrase est bonne, haha.

CSLM wrote:

hi, m4m, sorry for the late No need to apologize.

Unrankeable
Important
Suggestion

General

1. soft-hitwhistle is shorter than 100 ms:
   

   Every .wav file must be at least 100ms long to prevent issues with soundcards. If you want a silent/blank hitsound, then you must use a 0-byte .wav file.
   NOTE: Due to a technical issue having any files that are 0 bytes in size in the beatmap folder will cause files after the (first) 0-byte file to be missing. Please do NOT use any 0-byte files. The one linked above is 44kb in size and won't cause issues.

Are you sure? Because to me, it's 3 seconds.
http://puu.sh/kijHO/1164ae0fa7.png

Facile

1. you should delete some inhinerited points if them doesn't are changing the volume/SV of a circle or slider, examples:
   01:01:098 -
   01:01:414 -
   02:04:256 -
   02:04:572 -
   03:04:414 -
   etc...
   Done.
2. 00:36:309 (4) - why this slider it's in a blue tick? looks and sound very unconsistent for a Easy diff
   Oops! A little mistake here.
3. 01:47:046 (4) - i think better if make this 1/1. There's a lot of density now imo
4. 03:05:362 (1) - flow better in a Easy diff imo if you change the curvature of this slider
   I really like the pattern though, and I don't think it hurts the flow.

Moyen

1. 01:11:519 (8) - move it to x208 y196. How 01:10:414 (5) - it's going to the left, making this triplet curved to the left flows better instead of curved to the right
2. 01:18:941 (4) - why don't move this a grid up for make a triangle with 01:17:677 (2,3) - ?
3. 02:00:625 (2,3,4) - i have and idea: why not move 01:59:046 (2,3,1) - a little bit lower, for 02:00:625 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - move this to the left, and avoid 01:59:677 (1,4) - overlap?
4. 03:20:519 (1) - change the curvature for 03:19:256 (6) - ?[
   I don't want to ruin the pattern./*:m:1337]

Difficile

1. 00:02:519 (3,4) - it's better imo if delete (4) and make another reverse in (3). This pattern it's usual when (3) have 4 reverses (covering a 1/1 space). this it's unusual and unexpected in a hard diff imo (same with the similars).
   The circle emphasize the different beat which is higher than the ones under the repeat slider. It should be better like this.
2. 00:45:783 (4) - make it 1/2. There's the vocal start and piano sound which shouldn't be ignored imo.
3. 00:50:835 (4) - ^
4. 01:08:835 (7,1) - spacing unconsistency. How the spacing rising should be in the louder parts (like in 01:05:362 (1,2,3,4) - ), and you make patterns like this one without that diffence of spacing, this look as a mistake.
5. 01:52:098 (1) - blanket
6. 02:08:519 (4,5,6) - for make the change of DS between 02:09:151 (6,7) - less abrupt, make those spacings longer

Depression

1. 01:00:941 (1,2,1,2) - why this NC spam if in the next patterns you doesn't make this?
2. 01:03:783 (1) - delete NC, looks unnecesary
3. 02:08:519 (1) - ^
4. 02:17:046 (1) - ^ (i won't spam this anymore :3)
5. 03:32:835 (7) - Ctrl - G. The pattern looks better of that way imo

Sorry for the nazi mod (especialy in the [Depression] diff), but the song it's so GOOD and BEAUTIFUL, and the mapping it's so nicely and polished what i couldn't concentrate u.u
I hope what this it's valid of a m4m, here a star :3
Anyway, GL with rank
Woo! I'm glad you like it!
choo choo~

sheela901 wrote:

General

1. soft-hitwhistle is shorter than 100 ms:
   

   Every .wav file must be at least 100ms long to prevent issues with soundcards. If you want a silent/blank hitsound, then you must use a 0-byte .wav file.
   NOTE: Due to a technical issue having any files that are 0 bytes in size in the beatmap folder will cause files after the (first) 0-byte file to be missing. Please do NOT use any 0-byte files. The one linked above is 44kb in size and won't cause issues.

Are you sure? Because to me, it's 3 seconds.
http://puu.sh/kijHO/1164ae0fa7.png

CSLM wrote:

http://puu.sh/kipJ2/a723771914.png that is what appears in the Sieg's modding tool

Kazuya wrote:

Hi. Screenshots only examples! Shapes, patterns is not full perfect!

[I]

00:33:151 (5) - Maybe follow the voice? Start slider here: 00:33:309 - and put circle here: 00:33:151 -
00:48:309 (5) - Same as ^
01:02:046 (2,3) - Maybe make blanket?
Due to the beat on 01:02:204 a greater distance would emphasize that beat.
01:07:256 (3,5) - I don't like similar overlap. I think it's ugly. Use this shape.
01:28:730 (7) - Similar as 00:33:151 (5) -
I wouldn't follow the vocals if the rhythms previously follows the instruments. Sounds weird to me.
01:41:993 (1) - Maybe use this
02:04:098 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Idea! Nice jumps Click More interesting
03:05:993 (3,4,1) - This movement strange to me. Hmm hmm. I think flow is better: Click
03:14:993 (2,3) - Press CTRL+G. Jump better
03:19:888 (1,2,3,4) - Nicer jump: http://puu.sh/kiuEA/7d11dbd833.JPG


[H]

01:05:362 (1) - I think 1/4 sound very low. Use simple 1/2 slider.
01:13:572 (6,7,1,2,3) - Maybe similar? : http://puu.sh/kiv3V/57c6d6a205.JPG
01:47:046 (1,2) - Move bit up. x: 52 y: 132 Flow better.
03:07:572 (7) - CTRL + J. Flow better. http://puu.sh/kivBC/3041fc0273.JPG
--------------------
03:07:888 (1,2,3) - More better layout for me: http://puu.sh/kivMh/44af101d01.JPG
03:09:151 (4,5,6) - and fix DS: http://puu.sh/kivP6/208f050a24.JPG
Result: http://puu.sh/kivTq/de91dcab19.JPG
--------------------

[N]

AR to 5.

01:01:414 (7) - Delete this circle. Difficulty simple, and 1/4 circle is bit hard. I know, song is slow.
01:06:309 (6,7) - Duplet circle is really hard for normal. Use 1/4 slider or all similar parts!
02:09:625 (7) - same as 01:01:414 (7) -
02:19:730 (8) - ^
03:35:677 (1) - http://puu.sh/kiwnw/7b90f7cfc2.JPG Flow.

[E]

00:10:098 (4,5) - Remove circle 4, because it's easy difficulty, and duplet is hard for beginners. Also fix all similar parts and remove some 1/2 circle. Example: 01:01:256 (5) - 00:56:204 (5) -

I'm worried, because much the duplet circle, and it's too hard for beginners. I think change all duplets to simple single 1/1 circle or use circles instead 1/2 slider.
I will put under consideration the 1/4 rhythms. I really want to the kepp 1/4 rhythms. Because the song is slow, I think 1/4 rhythms are allowed, and would fit with Normal. However if someone else thinks the same as you, I'll change.

GL

monstrata wrote:

O my, coeur de pirate! I remember listening to some of their songs in my high school french class. My teacher always played Comme des Enfants for us xD. You can call me if you'd like some help pushing this mapset forward sheela!! This is such a lovely song <3

Neil Watts wrote:

Hello, on request o/

Great french singers are rare these days, nice pick Yes yes

(I'll try to mod it but I have broken my headphones so I'm not gonna mod the hitsound/timing, but I think they're ok)

[Storyboard]
The bg has been removed on the sb, the sprites have the right size, no grammar mistakes on the lyrics and it looks nice when playing.
Nothing to say, great job!

[Facile & Moyen]
Nothing to say, great low diffs.

[Difficile]
- 00:04:414 (2) - The slider end is mapped on nothing here, you should replace it with a circle
- 00:53:362 (5) - Same here
- 01:05:362 (1,2) - This jump is a bit unexpected, fix the distances ?
- 01:41:993 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to improve the flow here by moving the slider points of (2) ?
- 02:41:362 (4,5,6,7) - Similar part with 01:28:098 (4,5,6) - (in the song), but you applied a different hitsounding and added a jump. Please be consistent.
The last kiai almost looks like an Insane diff, but I think it should be ok since the diffspread is consistent.
I'm also with you honestly. But since this is the last chorus in the song, I want to do something a little more intense. This would emphasize the end.

[Depression]
- 00:01:888 (3) - what? it sounds really overmapped here
- 00:11:993 (3,4) - same
Not quite overmapped as they land on sounds.
- 00:17:046 (3) - / 00:22:098 (3) - /etc. - ^, this ruins the calm part imo. Also, you didn't mapped it everywhere like this, so it looks really inconsistent.
- 01:26:046 (7,8,1) - this triplet was quite unexpected when playing, I suggest you to replace it with a slider and a repeat arrow. Also, you didn't repeated it later in the song (before the break) so it's inconsistent
Replace the triplet by a repeat slider, [/color]
For the three points above except for the middle), the snaps are correctly 1/8, but I have to agree that they don't make sense.
- 03:04:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ???? I don't get the meaning of this stream except to boost the star rating. I really find it unfitting to the drum rolls, try to replace it with anything?
Everything has been replaced by a spinner, like the other difficulties.
- 03:53:362 (1,2,3) - One of the normal-hitfinish is on the (3) slider end, try to put the most important beats on circles or slider starts, like you did 03:58:414 (1,2,3) - here and 03:48:309 (1,2,3) - here
To me, this rhythm in the song sounds somehow different. Maybe a little variety with the rhythms would be nice, instead of having it repeated three times in a row.


Bonne map.
Bon courage
Merci!

xtrem3x wrote:

Oni:

01:59:046 - Same indication as 00:56:519- about RULE, but can be discarded .-.

Gabe wrote:

I just gave you my last two kudos.

Well done darling.

Taiko Ranking Criteria wrote:

Finisher notes may be used at the end of a 1/4 or above snapped pattern under the following conditions:
1. The finisher note must have a reasonable sound to be mapped to.
2. The note prior the finisher note must be of the opposite color.
3. The note prior must not overlap with the finisher note by more than 50%.

Use inherited timing points to make the notes gradually slow down into the section to avoid overlapping notes (during slow downs) confusing players. Use Slider Velocity changes in a way that they are readable and not overlapping or too extreme when it's called for.

newyams99 wrote:

Hi from queue~

General

03:25:414 - I think you should just keep the kiai time going for the whole ending part. Remove this inherited point.

03:25:572 - ^ Hmm. I would want to keep the consistency through the whole mapset. Besides, I think starting another kiai time fits very well with the music.


Oni

00:57:467 - Add a hit here and at 00:57:625. The pattern arrangement is inconsistent. Same at 01:02:519, 01:02:677, and other places like that throughout the song. I only added the first and not a note between two 1/4 notes. No beat can be hit in the music, so adding something on that beat seems useless.

Ok, for this diff, I looked through the whole thing, and all my suggestions were pretty similar, so just look at the suggestions made in the first two minutes and try to make changes that are similar in the second half.

This song shows how much my French class work has paid off. I barely understand any of this song x.x Haha.

Good luck on rank~

jossieP wrote:

#ModQueue

[Oni]

1. 00:58:580 - you can have a k here, currently sounds a bit empty due the vocals, and it will support the ddkkkkd from 00:55:580 (147,148,149,150,151,152,153) - it makes a nice pattern here I want to keep the consistency through the map. As you said, the sound is empty, and I mostly follow the instruments, so I won't add something on the tick.
2. 01:01:264 (174) - a d may give a better flow with the changing vocals Okay.
3. 01:26:054 (27,28,29,30,31) - try a kkd k d that way the drums will sound better Done.
4. 01:28:896 (42) - there is no sound on this part, your style was fitting on the song pretty well, I highly suggest to remove this note, it will also emphasize the incoming rhythm change True.
5. 01:58:896 - Try adding a katsu here and making 01:59:054 (124) - a katsu as well, I think that way it follows the vocals better Alright.
6. 03:04:738 (340) - make it a katsu maybe? feels better with the vocals Okay.

solid map, but try to vary some of the notes on the beginning I also notice that. I'll try to, but the sounds are mostly low.

[Muzukashii]Muzukashii diffs are not supossed to have other 1/4 triplets than ddd's, I'm not sure if this applies to low bpm songs, you must check that with other Taiko modders. Any kind of trilplets are acceptable, as long it suits with the music. I'll however speak with another modder for that. I'm still a beginner in Taiko.

1. 02:41:843 - add a don maybe? Alright.

Besides that, it sounds really good. yey

[Side notes]Considerate to remove the inherited timelines from 03:25:264 - and 03:25:580 - in order to make them one big kiai. The kiai time on Taiko diffs must not have short empty parts like this, it is ok if you don't do this on the Standard diffs, Taiko diffs can have different kiai times.
I want you to map a Björk song so bad... Alright, I trust you on this.

arken1015 wrote:

Adding ddk on Muzukashii style is not good idea

jossieP wrote:

Hi again, I just remember a thing that a very experienced Taiko mapper said to me once

arken1015 wrote:

Adding ddk on Muzukashii style is not good idea

Also I checked an authentic diff for refference: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/75183
They only used ddd and kkk for triplets.
Here is a non-authentic diff for refference as well: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/214725
But be sure to double check the low BPM
GL~

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:

Hi
From your request～

General

※I felt that beginnings of music were early. I recommend "500～1000" in AudioLeadIn. Okay.

Facile

01:08:843 (3) - It is a personal opinion. The placement thinks that the upper part is better. I think that a flow smoothens to 01:09:159 (4) - . Would you like to move to x:304 y:53? I like the pattern, but I moved the circle for the flow.

01:13:896 - Would you like to add circle? This is because momentum of the music still continues from 01:07:896 (2,3,4) - and 01:10:422 (5,6,1) - . Good idea. It would also hit the piano.

02:01:896 (3) - It is the suggestion that is reverse to the above. Would you like to move to x:368 y:347? Blop.

02:27:475 (4,5) - It is a trivial matter. Would you like to move 02:28:738 (5) -? (x:238 y:303) A blanket becomes clean. Alright.

Moyen

※I think that I have some variability in DS as "Normal diff". For example, it is 00:55:264 (2,3) - . It is DS1.38 here. However, It is DS1.50 in 00:53:054 (5,1) - . I recommended that I unify it. Fixed.

01:28:106 (2) - I felt a sense of incongruity here. I want you to pick up the 01:28:738 - . I recommended add circle to 01:29:054 - , if necessary. Reduced the length of the slider to add a circle on the upbeat.

03:39:475 (5,6,7,1) - I felt a flow to be oddly. Would you change placement of the 03:40:422 (6,7,1) - ? Sure.

SPOILER

Difficile

00:30:317 (3,4,5) - Do you not make a flow of the curve? I think that a flow from 00:30:001 (2) - is good. Also, The feeling that it saw is beautiful. Instead I rotated the triplet more to the vertical./color]

SPOILER

02:11:054 (4,5,6,7) - It is a trivial matter. However, it that part bothers me. It is a phrase same as 01:07:896 (4,5,6,7) - . Why will the rhythm be different? 03:16:738 (4,5,6,7) - , too. [color=#0000FF]Changed the rhythm for the first, however I didn't change anything to 03:16:738 (4,5,6,7) -. I think this rhythm fits very well, and it makes a little variation.

02:21:159 (4,1) - This is out of position of stack. Okay.

Depression

00:37:264 (3) - It is only 1/8slider of this MAP,,,As for me, the need is not felt. How about this? Oops! Good catch. I'll stick with the simple repeat slider, like 00:27:159 (3) .

SPOILER

02:42:001 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like the flow personally...I recommend ctrl+G to 02:42:317 (3,4) - . Well, I'm no good with circle patterns. Anyway, I switched the circles. It does make a good flow.

I think it to be good MAP overall. yey

GL

Taeyang wrote:

• Facile

1. 00:13:580 (3,4) - blanket you can be better
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:31:264 (1) - remove NC your easy map is 2downbeat NC term map
3. 00:51:475 (1) - remove NC and 00:54:001 (4) - NC
4. 01:04:106 (1) - remove NC
5. 01:07:896 (2,3,4) - how do you like this flow? I like the current pattern and flow, so no changes for this.
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:16:738 (1) - almost offscreen? It is offscreen, so moved the slider upwards.
7. 01:25:580 (4) - NC I think you meant 01:26:843 . I added a NC on that.
8. 01:36:949 (1) - remove NC
9. 02:04:738 (1,2,3) - i recommend this rhythm and 02:05:370 - here slidetail add whistle sound
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 02:17:370 (1) - remove NC
11. 02:30:001 (1,2,3,4) - flow suggest Ouh, I like it.
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 03:23:054 (5) - remove NC and 03:24:317 (6,7) - make slide 03:24:317 (6,7,8) - here rhythm so hard
13. 04:13:580 (1) - slide suggest
    
    SPOILER

    

• Moyen

1. not same DS and not downbeat NC is it fine? 00:03:475 (1,1) -there is 1.1 DS (i think this map almost normal diff) I made a new combo pattern similar to Easy. For the spacing, I got lazy to check everything haha.
2. 00:17:685 (3) - add whistle sound?
3. 00:24:948 (2,3) - DS 1.37
4. 00:26:212 (1,2) - blanket you can be better
5. 00:30:001 (2,3) - DS 1.38
6. 00:46:422 (3,4,5,1,2) - flow suggest
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:48:633 (6,7,8) - this rhythm too hard how you do like this? use reverse slide
   
   SPOILER

   

• Difficile

1. 00:17:685 (3) - add whistle sound
2. 00:19:106 - ^
3. 00:58:264 (5,6) - blanket you can be better
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:21:159 (6,7,8,9) - so hard ;change slide?
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:27:317 (2,3) - avoid overlap
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 03:47:054 (3,4,5) - rhythm suggest 03:47:054 (3,4) - nor stack plz too hard to me I like the current rhythm. It kind of emphasize the drum.
   
   SPOILER

   

sry poor mod here is stars~

1. 00:11:054 (1,2,3) - A bit nazi but this would look better if it was symmetric, just move 2 a bit higher and it also would lead to the slider 3 better. It doesn't hurt the flow so try doing it https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3790171
2. 01:16:738 (1) - This slider is to low, it's partially out of the playing field and it goes a bit out of my screen when playing.
3. 01:44:527 (1) - I think this slider would sound better as a 1/1 slider, normally you overextend some sliders to catch vocals or a beat but there is nothing here so try to stick to the rhythm this way.
4. 01:48:317 (5) - The drum whistle on the head shouldn't be there if i heard well your hitsound pattern. And now that i'm talking about hitsounds, these slow sections could use some soft whistles, it would sound nice if done right
5. 01:57:159 (1) - I know the sliders are really slow and easy, but i think it's better to avoid weird shapes like these on easy (it looks good though )
6. 02:04:738 (1) - This slider should really be 1/1, you're skipping the vocal and the strong beat here 02:05:370 - while 02:05:685 - doesn't have anything important, making it sound weird, and if you change it don't forget the whistle
7. 01:06:633 (1) - ^
8. 03:10:422 (1) - ^ please try it
9. 03:53:370 (3) - Remove the finish from the slider tail, it sounds a bit out of place. Acctually, is that finish on the slider head intentional? It feels like a drum finish would fit better

1. 00:31:264 (4) - Missing hitsounds?
2. 00:36:317 (4) - Extend it here to follow the beat and vocals 00:37:264 -
3. 01:16:738 (1) - Not as low as the easy one but try moving it higher since it's -almost- offscreen
4. 01:18:949 (4) - It would flow better if it was stacked with 01:17:685 (2) - , would make the slider 3 lead to 4 and make it flow more naturally.
5. 01:19:264 (5) - Remove the drum sampleset from the slider end, not the hitsound, just the drum-hitnormal
6. 01:39:475 (1,2) - Blanket aaa
7. 03:02:843 (1) - How about making the spinner start here? 03:02:212 - . The buildup sound thing starts there
8. 03:48:317 (4) - The finishes sound a bit out of place (especially the last one)
9. 03:53:370 (4) - 03:58:422 (1) - ^
10. 04:06:001 (1) - Try normal hitfinish on the slider head

• This hard is really nice!

1. 01:16:264 (6,7,8,1) - Nazi thing but try to make a perfect diamond
2. 01:24:317 (1) - It would play better if you keep following the percussion rhythm, this small break feels weird and breaks the pace.
3. 03:02:843 (1) - Same as Moyen, start on 03:02:212 -
4. 03:19:896 (6,7) - It would flow more naturally if you ctrl+g each one individually, something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3790428 . It also gives more emphazis to 03:20:527 (1) - and it feels good
5. 03:48:317 (1,2,3) - This is too hard to catch, a sudden variation on the rhythm on a calm section will cause a lot of confusion (yeah, i missed there when i playtested). Also, same thig about the finishes, i really think they are unfitting.
6. 03:53:370 (1,2,3) - 03:58:422 (1,2,3) - Yeah ^
7. 04:06:001 (1) - Normal - finish?

1. Ar 9 feels too fast, especially for the slow parts. I think something like 8.5 - 8.8 would feel more fitting. Playtested it on 8.5 and it felt nice.
2. 00:39:870 (2) - Move this to the next blue line, wrongly snapped
3. 02:08:527 (5,6) - Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3790554 It makes the jumps after that more manageable since you have more speed this way. At least for me it worked better
4. 03:02:843 (1) - U know
5. 03:40:738 (1,2,3) - I know you're trying to keep order by stacking but try making this transition flow better, in a more circular manner maybe since ringht now it doesn't flow well
6. 03:48:317 (1,2,3) - This works here thanks to high ar, but change it on Dificile. Oh yeah and the finish thing.
   Beautiful map

Atsuro wrote:

Hi sheela! Hey Atsuro! SO SORRY FOR THE LATE REPLY. School project.

Some stuff on "facile" might be already fixed, i modded it yesterday and saw an update today

[Facile]

1. 00:11:054 (1,2,3) - A bit nazi but this would look better if it was symmetric, just move 2 a bit higher and it also would lead to the slider 3 better. It doesn't hurt the flow so try doing it https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3790171 Alright.
2. 01:16:738 (1) - This slider is to low, it's partially out of the playing field and it goes a bit out of my screen when playing. It seems okay to me: http://puu.sh/kLImj/afd2b3fcb7.jpg
3. 01:44:527 (1) - I think this slider would sound better as a 1/1 slider, normally you overextend some sliders to catch vocals or a beat but there is nothing here so try to stick to the rhythm this way. It does sound better. Applied.
4. 01:48:317 (5) - The drum whistle on the head shouldn't be there if i heard well your hitsound pattern. And now that i'm talking about hitsounds, these slow sections could use some soft whistles, it would sound nice if done right Removed the whistle. For the soft-whistles, I would maybe need a pattern, because I don't know where to place.
5. 01:57:159 (1) - I know the sliders are really slow and easy, but i think it's better to avoid weird shapes like these on easy (it looks good though ) I'll see with a BN. The shape looks pretty good to me.
6. 02:04:738 (1) - This slider should really be 1/1, you're skipping the vocal and the strong beat here 02:05:370 - while 02:05:685 - doesn't have anything important, making it sound weird, and if you change it don't forget the whistle This is already 1/1?
7. 01:06:633 (1) - ^ Changed.
8. 03:10:422 (1) - ^ please try it Okay.
9. 03:53:370 (3) - Remove the finish from the slider tail, it sounds a bit out of place. Acctually, is that finish on the slider head intentional? It feels like a drum finish would fit better Removed the finish from the tail. I kept the finishes on the heads because the soft-finish emphasize the bass drum. That bass is not heard around this section, so I thought that a soft-finish will go well.

[Moyen]

1. 00:31:264 (4) - Missing hitsounds? Whoops. Fixed.
2. 00:36:317 (4) - Extend it here to follow the beat and vocals 00:37:264 - Alrighty.
3. 01:16:738 (1) - Not as low as the easy one but try moving it higher since it's -almost- offscreen This one is on the border of being offscreen. So, fixed.
4. 01:18:949 (4) - It would flow better if it was stacked with 01:17:685 (2) - , would make the slider 3 lead to 4 and make it flow more naturally. Because of the last point, I can't apply this.
5. 01:19:264 (5) - Remove the drum sampleset from the slider end, not the hitsound, just the drum-hitnormal Yes.
6. 01:39:475 (1,2) - Blanket aaa kk.
7. 03:02:843 (1) - How about making the spinner start here? 03:02:212 - . The buildup sound thing starts there There is a little silence-like and the rhythm restarts on 03:02:843 . I also notice that the 1/8 rhythm strarts there, so this would be perfect for the spinner.
8. 03:48:317 (4) - The finishes sound a bit out of place (especially the last one) Only replaced the last finish by a clap. The rest emphasize the bass drum.
9. 03:53:370 (4) - 03:58:422 (1) - ^
10. 04:06:001 (1) - Try normal hitfinish on the slider head Sounds better.

[Dificile]

• This hard is really nice! yuss

1. 01:16:264 (6,7,8,1) - Nazi thing but try to make a perfect diamond eh too lazy.
2. 01:24:317 (1) - It would play better if you keep following the percussion rhythm, this small break feels weird and breaks the pace. Okay.
3. 03:02:843 (1) - Same as Moyen, start on 03:02:212 - Explanation in Moyen.
4. 03:19:896 (6,7) - It would flow more naturally if you ctrl+g each one individually, something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3790428 . It also gives more emphazis to 03:20:527 (1) - and it feels good Alright.
5. 03:48:317 (1,2,3) - This is too hard to catch, a sudden variation on the rhythm on a calm section will cause a lot of confusion (yeah, i missed there when i playtested). Also, same thig about the finishes, i really think they are unfitting. I think it's alright. I intend to follow the bass drum because it sticks out much. Same as for the finishes.
6. 03:53:370 (1,2,3) - 03:58:422 (1,2,3) - Yeah ^ ^
7. 04:06:001 (1) - Normal - finish? Yes.

[Depression]

1. Ar 9 feels too fast, especially for the slow parts. I think something like 8.5 - 8.8 would feel more fitting. Playtested it on 8.5 and it felt nice. Okay.
2. 00:39:870 (2) - Move this to the next blue line, wrongly snapped Woops. Fixed.
3. 02:08:527 (5,6) - Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3790554 It makes the jumps after that more manageable since you have more speed this way. At least for me it worked better Oh, that's pretty cool. Applied.
4. 03:02:843 (1) - U know You know.
5. 03:40:738 (1,2,3) - I know you're trying to keep order by stacking but try making this transition flow better, in a more circular manner maybe since ringht now it doesn't flow well Alright, I'm with you with this.
6. 03:48:317 (1,2,3) - This works here thanks to high ar, but change it on Dificile. Oh yeah and the finish thing. I would keep the rhythm in Difficulte for consistency. No changes were made for this.
   Beautiful map Thank you!

That's all, i hope this mod helps you
Good luck

Neku okazaki wrote:

Hey o/, m4m

[Muzukashii]
00:10:264 - did you forgot to add a note here?, I think it is necessary, you have more 1/4 notes like it on 00:02:527 (5,6,7) - / 00:07:580 (14,15,16) - / 00:12:633 (25,26,27) - / 00:17:685 (36,37,38) - and it looks godd imo
00:15:317 -
00:20:370 -
| Applied the points above.
00:28:422 - This have a piano sound and a vocal sound, I think you can add another k here, making dkkd like 00:32:212 (64,65,66,67) - | Alright.
00:54:475 (109) - I know, it have sound here but you should try other thing, you should add k here 00:54:633 - or move 00:54:475 (109) - to 00:54:633 - | There's no beat I can hear on 00:54:633 so placing a note there seems useless.
00:58:738 - You should add k here
01:08:843 -
| Fixed the two points.
01:00:949 (129,130,131,132,133) - hm, change the last note to d, it can be better
01:06:001 (147,148,149,150,151) -
01:11:054 (165,166,167,168,169) -
01:16:738 (186) -
02:04:738 (306) -
02:14:843 (338) -
03:10:422 (463) -
03:30:633 (526) -
03:40:738 (556) -
| Love it.
01:19:264 (193) - 01:22:422 (203) - Try to do it better, you can add things like kdd on 01:19:580 (194,196) - and 01:20:843 (199,201) -
02:22:422 - 02:24:948 -
02:32:527 - 02:35:054 -
| Changed in my own way.
01:24:001 - I thing here need to have one k | Alright.
01:24:633 (212) - Change this to d and add one more d here 01:24:791 - | Changed and added
01:34:106 - k here can be awesome | Cool.
02:09:791 (322) - I thing D can be better (Dont change to "K" its unrankeable")
02:19:896 (354) -
03:15:475 (479) -
03:35:685 (541) -
| I don't see how kat is "unrankable", but I changed to don because I like it that way.
02:22:106 - Add a note here, can be d
02:32:212 - You should add a note here
02:37:264 -
02:38:843 - This have sound, you should add a note here, dkd can be great
03:27:791 - add k
03:58:106 -
| Added the notes.
04:03:159 - | Maybe not this one. The part got a little softer.

[Oni]
01:50:527 (98) - It sounds diferent, you should change it to k | Yes, since I did that to other similar parts.
02:38:843 - This have sound, you can add d here
03:48:001 -
03:53:054 -
| Applied all.

Really short because the oni its ok, star | lol

-Tenshi- wrote:

Hi o/. Mod en français du coup~ | Haha, lol

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:54:949 (114) - k ici, c'est le même son que là 00:54:001 (112) - | Ouaip.
2. 01:00:949 (132,133,134,135,136) - Je pense que tu devrais changer ces patterns en enlèvant cette note 01:01:422 (135) - ou bien en remplaçant cette note 01:01:580 (136) - par un k. On m'as beaucoup dit qu'il fallait éviter les partterns de plusieurs couleurs ( ddk, kkd par exemple) dans les muzukashii ( même si techniquement c'est pas unrankable du tout) donc sur un stream de 5 notes ça me parrait important. surtout que tu as déja un kkkkk ici 03:19:896 (499,500,501,502,503) - ( Vu le bpm ça passe peut-être, à voir avec un Taiko BN je dirais). Ca marche pour 01:06:001 (150,151,152,153,154) - Et tout les autres ddddk de la diff. | Ok. Je vais converser la note avant la prochaine mesure, mais je vais enlever celui qui est à la deuxième du stream. Ce que tu me suggère sonnait bizarre. Aussi, ces rhythms à la fin des refrains, je les ai gardés parce que je trouvait qu'il met une importance sur la fin, ce qui mène à faire un bon combo.
3. 01:18:317 (193) - d ici, le k m'a pas l'air nécessaire. | Ok.
4. 01:21:475 (205) - d ici, pour les mêmes raisons que j'ai évoqué juste avant. Oui oui.
5. 02:01:896 (300,301,302,303) - 02:06:949 (316,317,318,319) - 02:12:001 (332,333,334,335) - 02:17:054 (348,349,350,351) - Change les en k d d k ( Ou alors si tu décides de les garder, change 02:06:949 (316) - en k vu que c'est le seul different des autres). | Ah, je l'aime bien.
6. 02:24:001 (371) - 02:34:106 (399) - d | Autres changements par moi ont été faits.
7. 03:08:212 (463,464) - ctrl + G car ce bruit ici 03:08:527 (464) - c'est un k partout ailleur ( exemple 03:13:580 (480) - 03:18:633 (496) - ). | Oui, c'est vrai.
8. 03:23:370 (511,512) - Pareil ^. | Okay.
9. 03:27:791 (525,526,527,528) - k d d k. | Ouaip.

[Oni]

1. 01:19:896 (252) - k ici? j'entends 3 "clap" moi. | Je trouve que le son est différent que les deux avant.
2. 01:24:949 (23) - 01:27:475 (36) - Pareil ici ^. | ^
3. 02:24:317 (237) - k ici ? T'en a mis partout sauf ici. ( exemple: 02:21:791 (227) - 02:26:843 (247) - | Ok.

Voilà, j'espère que tout ça t'aidera, très bonne map en tout cas~
Bon courage pour le ranking, voila une star pour Coeur de pirate~

ezek wrote:

Et sheela terre est sombre ♫
Et sheela pluie te noie ♪

Argh! I hate liking a song I don't understand cause I can't sing it x.x
take my star~

The note prior the finisher note must be of the opposite color.

Jaltzu wrote:

Hello!
From my queue.
Sorry for being a bit late. I've been little busy with my own stuff. | No problem!
There's a poll on my queue, so please go vote there. Thanks. | Alright.

Muzu

00:27:948 - Add d?
00:33:001 - ↑ (and change 00:33:159 (71) - to k?)
00:38:054 - ↑
01:01:264 (133) -
01:04:422 (144) - Delete
| I don't want to delete them. It makes the sound weird.
01:08:370 (157) - k and del01:08:527 (158) - ? | If I do that, it will make inconsistency to the rhythm, like 00:58:106 (125,126,127) previously. Besides, the drum doesn't have a higher note than what's following.
01:13:264 (173) - Del | Similar to a point.
01:19:738 - Add k, 01:20:685 (199,200) - Ctrl+G, 01:21:159 (201) - k, 01:21:633 (203) - Move to 01:22:264 and change to k | Lol. I got confused there. This is partially applied. It's mostly because the current follows better the drums.
01:38:527 AND 01:38:685 - Add d
01:53:685 AND 01:53:843 - ↑
01:55:896 - ↑ | There isn't really any beat on this tick except the vocals, but I'm being constant with the drums, so adding a note will "break the rhythm".
01:57:791 (285) - Del
01:58:422 (286) - k | Maybe not here. The sound in music starts on this time and it's a weak beat. If the rhythm commences with a kat, it doesn't go well to be honest. There's also the effects.
02:05:370 (308) - k
02:06:317 (310) - Del | Like in the previous points.
02:10:422 (324) - k
02:16:422 (342) - Del | Same.
02:25:580 (371) - k
02:34:106 (394,395,396) - kkd?
02:41:370 - Add d
02:49:580 (428) - Move to 02:49:896 | I don't want to follow the vocals to be honest, so I'll keep this note to follow the piano instead.
02:50:212 (429) - k | The piano sound got lower, so a don fits better.
02:57:159 (435) - Move to 02:57:475 and change to k | Same reason here. I follow the piano.
03:00:948 - 03:03:475 - Replace with a spinner. | I didn't think for that, but starting the spinner on 03:02:843 sounds better due to the build up.
03:04:422 (446) - k | I added a don at the first tick of the choruses, so I'll avoid inconsistency.
03:22:106 (501) - Del | Similar reasons.
03:36:159 - Add d | It's still about the consistency here. It's similar to 03:30:948 - 03:33:475 - and etc.
03:38:685 - ↑
03:41:212 - ↑
| Same reason.
03:43:580 And 03:43:738 - Add k + 03:43:896 (566) - d
03:44:843 (569) - k | Hmm... It doesn't sound fitting with the music.
03:48:948 - Add d
03:52:422 (589) - k
03:59:054 - Add d. | This time, there's no drums, so maybe not for this.
04:09:791 (632) - Move to 04:10:106 and change to k | I'm not sure what you're trying to follow. There's no literally no beat on the red tick.

Oni

01:03:159 (178) - Del
01:05:370 (188) - k
01:05:685 (189) - ↑
01:13:264 (223) - Del
01:20:527 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Like this:


01:25:580 - Add d
01:26:527 (31) - k
01:32:843 (51,52) - k (or just 01:32:843 (51) - )
01:58:896 (123) - d
02:06:317 (156) - Del
02:16:422 (201) - Del
02:19:738 (217,218) - k
02:30:001 (259) - K | I want to highlight the beat with a big don. A big kat doesn't feel right.
02:30:948 (263) - k
02:33:001 (271) - k
02:39:791 - Add d | There's no drum beat.
02:41:370 - Add d AND change 02:41:527 (304) - to k
02:49:580 (317) - Move to 02:49:896 -, 02:50:054 - Add d, 02:50:212 (318) - k => ddk
02:57:159 (324) - k
02:57:475 - Add k
03:00:001 AND 03:00:159 - Add d
03:00:948 - 03:03:475 - Spinner | I'll keep the rhythm to emphasize the build up.
03:04:580 (339) - d
03:06:948 (350,351,352) - kkd
03:12:633 (376) - d
03:17:212 (397) - k
03:24:475 - Add k
03:29:054 (451) - k?
03:40:580 (504,505) - k
03:41:685 (509) - k?
03:44:685 - Add k
03:46:738 (532) - k
03:51:475 (554,555) - Ctrl+G
03:59:843 (588,589,590,591,592,593,594,595) - This:

04:05:370 (612,613) - Ctrl+G, 04:05:843 (615) - k
04:06:317 AND 04:06:475 AND 04:06:948 - Add k
04:07:580 (619) - Move to 04:07:422
04:10:106 - Add d
| This is like in Muzu.

Really nice song and map. Good luck for rank.

KawaEE wrote:

01:00:949 (60949|3,60949|1,61264|2,61264|1,61580|1,61580|2,61580|0) -
^ is should be same chord amount.
03:09:791 - add a note. same with above in this same part.

1. 00:38:212 (83) - I think it would be fit overall feeling that changing to k.
2. 00:48:001 - Add note to follow drum(?) sound? it is needed for consistency with 00:52:422 imo.
3. 00:58:738 (128,129) - Swap these. it would be fit vocals.
4. 01:07:580 (157) - Remove this for consistency.
5. 01:11:527 (172) - Why is only here 5 stream? i think it would be better feeling that changing to kkd k.
6. 01:16:106 (186,187,188,189,190) - Same as above. it is a bit awkward feeling.
7. 01:18:317 (194,195,196) - Remove 195 and change to d k for matching prev pattern.
8. 01:20:685 (203) - Remove this for making little break.
9. 01:21:317 - Move to 01:21:317. melody is there.
10. 01:42:475 (261) - Change to d for consistency with other similar part.
11. 02:24:001 (374,375) - k? match d k d k d k pattern.
12. 02:30:001 (390) - i think clap is not necessary.
13. 02:31:264 (392,393,394,395) - Sound feels like k d k d.
14. 02:35:685 (405) - k?
15. 03:26:527 (66) - Remove this for consistency?

1. 01:00:317 (165) - k? high pitch.
2. 01:28:106 - Add note to follow drum sound.
3. 03:48:317 (541,542,543,544,545) - 03:58:422 (585,586,587,588,589) - I don't think this 2 streams is fit the music.
4. 03:54:633 - 03:59:685 - 04:04:738 - Start is a bit empty feeling. how about adding note?

Underflow wrote:

Hi, sheela901.

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:38:212 (83) - I think it would be fit overall feeling that changing to k. | Alright.
2. 00:48:001 - Add note to follow drum(?) sound? it is needed for consistency with 00:52:422 imo. | Okay.
3. 00:58:738 (128,129) - Swap these. it would be fit vocals. | Yes.
4. 01:07:580 (157) - Remove this for consistency. | Removed.
5. 01:11:527 (172) - Why is only here 5 stream? i think it would be better feeling that changing to kkd k.
6. 01:16:106 (186,187,188,189,190) - Same as above. it is a bit awkward feeling. | Removed and changed the pattern for the points above.
7. 01:18:317 (194,195,196) - Remove 195 and change to d k for matching prev pattern. | Alright.
8. 01:20:685 (203) - Remove this for making little break. | Cool.
9. 01:21:317 - Move to 01:21:317. melody is there. | You posted the same timestamps, so I don't know what do to.
10. 01:42:475 (261) - Change to d for consistency with other similar part. | Alright.
11. 02:24:001 (374,375) - k? match d k d k d k pattern. | Sure.
12. 02:30:001 (390) - i think clap is not necessary. | Okay.
13. 02:31:264 (392,393,394,395) - Sound feels like k d k d. | True.
14. 02:35:685 (405) - k? | Sure.
15. 03:26:527 (66) - Remove this for consistency? | Yes.

[Oni]

1. 01:00:317 (165) - k? high pitch. | The drum doesn't have a higher pitch in my opinion, so a don would fit best.
2. 01:28:106 - Add note to follow drum sound. | Alright.
3. 03:48:317 (541,542,543,544,545) - 03:58:422 (585,586,587,588,589) - I don't think this 2 streams is fit the music. | Changed the rhythm.
4. 03:54:633 - 03:59:685 - 04:04:738 - Start is a bit empty feeling. how about adding note? | Only for the first one. The others don't have drum beats, so adding notes won't fit to be honest.