1. 00:14:094 (3) - missed a clap?
2. 00:55:990 (1) - eh, you still keep this spinner?

1. 00:01:680 (2,3) - you better use half-beat notes later, not at the very beginning
2. 00:15:301 (2) - to be honest, I don't like when people skip beat(s), especially big white ones. Also, you did it a lot on this diff
3. 00:54:439 (3,4) - uncomfortable for playing
   
   Also, I recommend you to reduce spacing here since it's Normal, make it at least 1.0.

1. 00:28:232 (1) ~ 00:36:335 (9) — I dislike it again, too many notes in a row, in my opinion. Even if it's Hard, you shouldn't spam that much

1. 01:06:508 (6,6) - again? It's too far from next and previous streams. Also, it doesn't seem that you followed my suggestions before

• 
  All I'd say here was already said before me. The only thing I can post is my personal opinion: I don't think that constant streaming fits this music. Yeah, it might be associated w/ piano play or something, but not with streaming.

1. Inconsistency in the slider tick rate. If you're going to use 2 tick rate on your diffs then please use it for every diff that you made. Currently Gold and Platinum have 1 tick rate

1. Increase OD by 1 to make it balanced with the next diff
2. 00:55:990 (1) - The spinner doesn't fit the current place. Xgor have given a good reason and I agree with him. It's better to just remove it
3. 01:32:370 (2) - NC to this note

1. I feel iffy about the difficulty jump from Rust to Bronze. I'll just say it here, let's see if others agree with me or not
2. Increase HP and OD by 1
3. 00:55:990 (1) - Same problem as the above diff

1. 00:55:990 (1) - I'm starting to sound like a parrot here but again the same problem as above
2. 01:31:680 (5) - NC this note

1. 00:38:921 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - At first this plays nice but you're using it way too much and it become too repetitive. Try not to use the same pattern over and over in a short time span as it may quickly become boring. For this pattern I suggest to just use it until 00:41:680 (6) and starting from 00:42:025 you should use a different pattern. Maybe something like 1/4 sliders stream then a circle. Here's an example
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:47:542 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Same problem as above. A stream pattern that were used many time it became repetitive.
3. 00:55:990 (1) - Yup, the spinner
4. 01:17:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Repetitive pattern, but for this one I suggest to use it 4 times until 01:19:611 (6) then change to other pattern (maybe using kick slider stream) on 01:19:783. Of course you can use your own idea but please avoid using the same pattern again
5. 01:24:783 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This one is a very long stream, too long maybe. Try to tone it down a little, maybe stop the stream on 01:28:232 (1) then use 1/1 beat until 01:28:921 then start the stream again from 01:29:266. Oh and try to use different pattern too for the next stream
6. 01:32:370 (2) - NC this

1. Now this is where everything goes wrong. As I said before, there are no rules that forbid using streams but a 5 second stream of 1/4 beat again and again is just silly.There's nothing I can suggest for this diff other than re-map or scrap the diff
2. 00:22:714 (1,2,1,2) - Another tedious pattern. This super fast slider is very sudden you won't know that they are 1/4 beat slider until you miss it

LifestreamEyenine wrote:

Wow, you really shot almost all of your kudosu on this map...

Good luck! Looking forward to seeing this map ranked

eddieee wrote:

hmmm streams... so creative..

Jacob wrote:

Uguu.

Philippines wrote:

i guess this'll be the new record for lowest star rating. XD but thanks everyone!

Blue Dragon wrote:

No need to troll, guys.

Derekku wrote:

Happy belated birthday!

Philippines wrote:

:|, lemme do a little working. :O

1. Where is your SPREAD? EIIIII IS H O R R I B L E.
2. Why was this map ranked even with a spread such as this, or even as a map like this? Will you actually respond to what you guys did, Derek and Mafiamaster?

1. Consider everything below this as an italics tag, or even a bold tag.
2. This diff has an identity crisis between a Hard and an Insane.
3. 00:11:680 (1) - This slider can be composed better.
4. 00:13:059 (1,3) - These two sliders can look better.
5. 00:19:956 (1,2,3,4,5) - Is this a hard, or an insane?
6. 00:23:404 (5,6,1) - This anti-jump doesn't make any sense flow wise.
7. 00:28:577 (2) - Stack on 1
8. 00:28:749 (3,4,5,6) - There's your hard vs insane clause again.
9. 00:29:611 (2) - Stack on 1
10. 00:30:128 (3,4,5,6) - Same as ^
11. ^ nice copy paste
12. 00:31:335 (2) - Stack on 1, you get the point
13. 00:32:370 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ???? is this platinum???
14. 00:35:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - This stream of 5, and the ALL THE ONES ahead of it are bad in terms of flow and the difficulty.

1. Consider everything below this as an italics tag, or even a bold tag.
2. The overall difficulty of this difficulty is RIDICULOUS. These JUMPS are HORRID. H O R R I D.
3. 00:12:714 (13,1) - 136miliseconds for a 2.36x jump? Are you a robot? These streams NEED to be reworked.
4. 00:14:094 (13,1) - ^
5. 00:15:473 (13,1) - ^
6. 00:18:232 (13,14) - This jump is utterly ridiculous. Fix it.
7. 00:19:611 (13,14) - ^
8. 00:20:990 (13,14) - ^
9. 00:22:370 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - I don't know how this was even ranked to begin with?
10. 00:30:128 (6,7,8,9) - ???? ^
11. 00:31:508 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^
12. 00:34:266 (6,7,8,9) - ^
13. 00:35:646 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^
14. 00:37:025 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^
15. 00:38:921 (13,1) - What is this anti-jump? Breaks the flow of the map.
16. 01:02:370 (13,1) - Spacing in this as well.
17. 01:05:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
18. 01:06:852 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
19. 01:12:456 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - (AND ALL OTHER COMBOS LIKE THIS) just NO
20. 01:16:852 (4,1,6,6,6,6,6,6) - Everything with the beat on the top here with the random streams is utterly ridiculous and do not even correspond to flow.

SapphireGhost wrote:

00:37:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - Please don't do this. Oftentimes while attempting to hit the fast-paced (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13), it is very easy to hit too many times and end up missing (1).

Jacob wrote:

Also, please don't stack a stream under another stream when they're 1/1 beats apart. The player might accidentally hit the start of the stream too early. A solution to this would be this.

dkun wrote:

136miliseconds for a 2.36X jump?

SPOILER

Derekku wrote:

dkun: Star rating cannot be used to judge difficulty spread. I feel that this spread is proper and nice; easy/normal/hard/hard+/insane/expert.

As for Platinum itself: I stand behind my decision that this map is rankable, intuitive, and readable.

dkun wrote:

Then you do not know what difficulty spread is.

There is NO way in hell this is an E/N/H/H+/I/EX. Your decision? Look AROUND you. Everyone else clearly doesn't!

SapphireGhost wrote:

I don't know if "too hard" is a good reason to deny rankability on this map.
TJ.Hangneil - Kamui [SHD] and celas - Azul (Remix) are at least as difficult and also ranked.

Gaba wrote:

SapphireGhost wrote:

I don't know if "too hard" is a good reason to deny rankability on this map.
TJ.Hangneil - Kamui [SHD] and celas - Azul (Remix) are at least as difficult and also ranked.

Yes, but they are actually good maps.

No offense to the mapper, but this map is...meh.

Philippines wrote:

I checked dkun's post of course, but i don't agree with any of them except for some post that are quite related with the other mod.

Philippines wrote:

Btw, trying to add a little SB Flashlight effect on kiai time for [Platinum] cause i'm so bored.

• Changelog

1. Circle Size is now maxed in [Bronze], also tried to remove some ugly overlaps.
2. Reduced HP Drain in [Bronze] by 1.
3. Fixed those (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) streams thing that Charles pointed.
4. Did a little nazi on some streams in [Platinum].
   
   On the other hand, okay, no more Storyboard. Submitted ~ Reupdate.

Philippines wrote:

Fixed those (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) streams thing that Charles pointed.

Charles445 wrote:

Here's a picture if you still don't understand what I'm saying

Picture

• Changelog

1. Finally fixed Charles's suggestion on some of the streams except those in the last part cause i believe they're fine now and so does the fix i did for the (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) error. :O
2. Also did a little pattern change on some parts near Charles's suggestion.