Static Noise Bird
[General]
Remove "porter robinson" from tags. dam how did i even
Fix the title to "Divinity (feat. Amy Millan)" dam
Enable Widescreen support. woops forgot to enable it b4 i uploaded it
I don't think fake approach circles (and the other confusing stuff) in storyboards are allowed. they are lol otherwise okaerinasai and eos wouldn't be ranked B)
[The map]
HP Drain +1 dam
00:02:005 (3,4,5) - What's with the spacing here? ddoesn't disrupt my flow so idk
00:18:839 (3,4,1,2) - This would fit better: http://puu.sh/duCa5/b9a09db09e.png dam
00:24:339 (10) - If you really want to slow down, don't slow it down all the way to 0,5x. Small change like 0,8x could be acceptable. Same goes to every other slow-down. this kills the man (i'll do it when i change the font)
00:27:672 (5) - New combo. dam
00:47:005 (1,1) - 1/1 slider should be first, then 1/2 to match the beat. dam i made the 1/1 into 1/2 instead and added a circle
00:50:672 (4) - Remake with normal sliderpoints like http://puu.sh/duC83/3db227b8ba.png dam
00:55:005 (1) - ^ dam
00:57:339 (2,3) - Unnecessary anti-jump. dam
01:15:172 (4) - What is this doing here? Remove. the sawtooth synth tho
01:19:672 (1,2) - Place them away from each other. dam
02:18:005 (4) - Could be more creative with less repeats for no reason. dam i tried
02:26:172 (3,4,5) - why h eh
02:30:339 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Again with the creative mapping, this time with long stacks. Please. dam i tried
03:00:005 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Now this kind of jumping doesn't play or look good at all. dam
03:07:172 (5,1) - Overlaps, move the (1) up-left. dam
03:25:672 (6,1) - ^, just move the (1) way up. dam
03:31:672 (1) - Could have a spinner here. eh maybe if im suggested again
04:10:339 (1,2,3,4) - Fix the design. Should be in the middle of the previous pattern. dam
04:13:339 (3) - Stack to (2)'s end. dam
04:38:339 (1,2) - Stack. dam i thought i fixed this b4
05:15:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern makes absolutely no sense. Re-design. when played it does for me, changed it a little.
05:35:339 (3) - The points don't match the music at all. dam
Remove "porter robinson" from tags. dam how did i even
Fix the title to "Divinity (feat. Amy Millan)" dam
Enable Widescreen support. woops forgot to enable it b4 i uploaded it
I don't think fake approach circles (and the other confusing stuff) in storyboards are allowed. they are lol otherwise okaerinasai and eos wouldn't be ranked B)
[The map]
HP Drain +1 dam
00:02:005 (3,4,5) - What's with the spacing here? ddoesn't disrupt my flow so idk
00:18:839 (3,4,1,2) - This would fit better: http://puu.sh/duCa5/b9a09db09e.png dam
00:24:339 (10) - If you really want to slow down, don't slow it down all the way to 0,5x. Small change like 0,8x could be acceptable. Same goes to every other slow-down. this kills the man (i'll do it when i change the font)
00:27:672 (5) - New combo. dam
00:47:005 (1,1) - 1/1 slider should be first, then 1/2 to match the beat. dam i made the 1/1 into 1/2 instead and added a circle
00:50:672 (4) - Remake with normal sliderpoints like http://puu.sh/duC83/3db227b8ba.png dam
00:55:005 (1) - ^ dam
00:57:339 (2,3) - Unnecessary anti-jump. dam
01:15:172 (4) - What is this doing here? Remove. the sawtooth synth tho
01:19:672 (1,2) - Place them away from each other. dam
02:18:005 (4) - Could be more creative with less repeats for no reason. dam i tried
02:26:172 (3,4,5) - why h eh
02:30:339 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Again with the creative mapping, this time with long stacks. Please. dam i tried
03:00:005 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Now this kind of jumping doesn't play or look good at all. dam
03:07:172 (5,1) - Overlaps, move the (1) up-left. dam
03:25:672 (6,1) - ^, just move the (1) way up. dam
03:31:672 (1) - Could have a spinner here. eh maybe if im suggested again
04:10:339 (1,2,3,4) - Fix the design. Should be in the middle of the previous pattern. dam
04:13:339 (3) - Stack to (2)'s end. dam
04:38:339 (1,2) - Stack. dam i thought i fixed this b4
05:15:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern makes absolutely no sense. Re-design. when played it does for me, changed it a little.
05:35:339 (3) - The points don't match the music at all. dam
hardcore son