Tenshi-nyan wrote:

O hai Weezy. Had to delay this... don't be mad please. *points to avatar, thats my face now just kidding, im not mad ^_^ why would i :U

Hard
00:27:700 (5) - add NC Done

Easy
00:41:200 (1) - too early after the spinner shouldn't be there to start >.<
00:52:128 (3,4) - this might be too hard for an easy. maybe replace (3) with a single note?Don't find it that hard :T plus that single circle feels wrong.
01:05:843 (4,5) - ^ ^

Ah, fine map. To be expected with that many stars. Here, have another.

1. Your spinner-background is 1024x697, it has to be 1023x692

1. 00:28:343 (2) - Extend this slider by 1/2 for keeping the rhythm you have done with 00:29:414 (3) and for follow the vocal.
2. 00:31:771 (1) - Extend this slider by 1/2, the end will fit more to the vocal and it will be in harmony with the next notes.
3. 00:57:057 (1) - This slider doesn't end on somthing clearly hearable, it's not very agreable, So reduce it by 1/2 if you want to fix
4. 01:27:700 (2) - Don't silence this slider, or silence just the end of this slider, but you have to keep something hearable for the beginning, silenced notes are not agreable to play :/

1. 00:57:057 (3) - You have forgot to add a whistle at the end of this slider.
2. 01:07:343 (1) - On the end of this one too

1. 00:33:914 (1) - This slider will sound better 1/2 later because it will be on a more hearable beat.
2. 01:27:700 (3,4) - Same remark for the silenced objects as Ryuji-Easy

1. 01:04:771 (1,2,3) - Try to have the same spacing between these circles (make an equilateral triangle), it will more playable and prettier

KuraiPettan wrote:

Skin

1. Your spinner-background is 1024x697, it has to be 1023x692

KuraiPettan wrote:

Skin

1. Your spinner-background is 1024x697, it has to be 1023x692 *points to ziin's post

Ryuji-Easy

1. 00:28:343 (2) - Extend this slider by 1/2 for keeping the rhythm you have done with 00:29:414 (3) and for follow the vocal.
2. 00:31:771 (1) - Extend this slider by 1/2, the end will fit more to the vocal and it will be in harmony with the next notes.
3. 00:57:057 (1) - This slider doesn't end on somthing clearly hearable, it's not very agreable, So reduce it by 1/2 if you want to fix
4. 01:27:700 (2) - Don't silence this slider, or silence just the end of this slider, but you have to keep something hearable for the beginning, silenced notes are not agreable to play :/ I find nothing wrong but people have been stating this, changed a bit

Ami-Hard

1. 00:33:914 (1) - This slider will sound better 1/2 later because it will be on a more hearable beat. This isn't a slider o_o
2. 01:27:700 (3,4) - Same remark for the silenced objects as Ryuji-Easy Same remark as well

ziin wrote:

such awesome difficulty names. Original and descriptive.

[general]
I really wish you'd make your sliders delicious. Unless of course you think oranges aren't delicious. Making almost vertical or horizontal sliders looks bad usually. If you could rotate them just slightly so they are >15 degrees or so, that would make ugly sliders look better.
I don't think it does much to silence sliderslide, even in this song. Also, not all the difficulties do it.

[skin]
You have to skin in groups. You need an approach circle and a spinner circle.
I think the default ones are probably fine, or you can copy the ones from the other orange map.
I went ahead and made you an orange/yellow slider ball, and redid the hitcircles just a tad to give it a better 3d look. I hope you'll use them.
http://up.ppy.sh/files/orangeskin.zip

[easy]
Here's some examples of the almost vertical/horizontal slider issue:
00:00:486 (1) - bad
00:03:914 (1) - this one's actually great.
00:07:343 (1) - good--It's not perfect, but it's not vertical/horizontal either, so it's hard to tell.
00:14:628 (1) - bad
00:21:486 (1) - good-- it's ~16 degrees.
00:47:200 (2,3) - To help you be lazy, if you use symmetry, you can get away with crappy sliders too. Copy/paste (2), then press ctrl R to reverse it, then ctrl H to do a horizontal flip.

[hard]
00:39:271 (3,4) - big jump. I was expecting it, but it really doesn't fit. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/101664 Not really a fan of that, changed to something else though

KuraiPettan wrote:

Saten's Taiga-Insane

1. 01:04:771 (1,2,3) - Try to have the same spacing between these circles (make an equilateral triangle), it will more playable and prettier

That's all (Taiga <3) Taiga is mine ♪

ziin wrote:

[insane]
00:22:343 (5,6) - I didn't hear much going on in the background here. Do you really need to map it? There's a few places like this where the lyrics cut out.
00:26:200 (1,2) - screen jumps would be better IMO.
00:29:200 (1,2,3) - can you make this circle slider slider?
00:34:664 - add note
00:36:057 (5,6,7) - can you make this circle slider slider?
00:51:057 (3,4,1) - ^
00:58:557 (2,1) - jump
01:00:378 - add note
01:11:414 (2) - rotate this so it's parallel with the previous slider.
01:13:128 (1,2) - circle slider circle

Saten-san wrote:

KuraiPettan wrote:

Net's Kitamura-Normal

1. 00:57:057 (3) - You have forgot to add a whistle at the end of this slider.
2. 01:07:343 (1) - On the end of this one too

lovhin456 wrote:

Net's Normal;
- 00:06:914 >> Remove combo and start new combo on the next note/slider
- 00:19:128 >> Remove new combo ?
- 00:24:486 >> Start the new combo here instead ?
- 00:30:486 >> Add a note ?
- 00:58:771 >> Start the spinner here instead ?
- 01:03:271 >> Add a note ?
- 01:07:343 >> Add finish ?
- 01:16:986 >> Add a note here and on the next red tick too ?

Weezy wrote:

KuraiPettan wrote:

Ami-Hard

1. 00:33:914 (1) - This slider will sound better 1/2 later because it will be on a more hearable beat. This isn't a slider o_o

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi! Random mod ~

General;
- Everything is okk here ~

Skin;
- Elements you're missing and are needed;
* Approach circle
* Spinner-circle, spinner-spin, spinner-clear, spinner-osu
- You could make 1x1 transparent png images for the spinner-osu, spinner-spin and spinner-clear if you're lazy ;3 default ones are fine...

Easy;
- 00:22:771 (1,2) >> Spacing
- 01:13:343 >> Add a repeat ?
- 01:16:771 >> ^
- 01:20:200 >> Make a 90 degrees angle ? nope :T doesn't look right to me
- 01:23:628 >> ^ ^^


Hard;
- 01:14:200 >> Start the spinner here instead ? Plays just fine


* Star ~

KuraiPettan wrote:

Ami-Hard
[list][*]00:33:914 (1) - This slider will sound better 1/2 later because it will be on a more hearable beat.
Uh, I meant circle xD Sorry

NotShinta wrote:

Saten's Something Insane:
00:01:128 (3) - I think this jump's a bit silly and inappropriate to practically start the map off with. not silly :V
00:22:343 (5,6) - These are awkward and not mapped to anything, especially 6. You could also probably pull off a better pattern with just 4. (5) is mapped to the acoustic guitar sound. The (6) is there to go with the flow.

NotShinta wrote:

General:
#modreqs
Tick rate 2 is recommended throughout all difficulties, due to the song being 1/2. done
Why isn't this spinner background orange I feel lied to it's clearly yellow I got it from the old orange map D: changed


Hard:
00:39:271 (3) - I think this would look and play better more like this example.
00:57:057 (1) - Finish on the start of this?
01:03:057 (4) - ^
01:26:843 (1,2,3,4) - Make this symmetrical from the center?


Easy:
00:37:771 (1) - I would add a finish on this. sound better without one
At the ending, that amount of spinners could be difficult for new players. Or not. I'm not sure.

This mod is a silly place

SapphireGhost wrote:

All fruits should be orange
That's all

1. I expected 'orange' hitcircles, Perhaps you can consider to use this?
2. Add: 'spinner-osu' - 'spinner-spin' and 'spinner-clear' to avoid any posible skin mixing, remember that you can use the template ones.
3. Tags: Remove '2' is too generic and short, 'ending' is enough.
4. 01:26:200 - You should end this map here, that last part is not rhythmic enough. Mapping that 'sound' seems ridiculous.
5. Taiko: Seems fine, just a minor suggestion: End that last spinner here: 01:26:200 -

1. This seems more like an "easy" [Normal] IMO. However, the HPDrain and OD are too high for an [Easy] diff like this one, -1 tick for both please. The AR seems high too, but due to the high quantity of objects placed in this diff, reducing it doesn't look too good, it's up to you.
2. 00:19:986 (3,4) - I'm a bit worried about this pattern, I was a bit hard to follow for me at first glance so It might be confusing for rookies. I suggest to remove (4) and then make (3) longer
3. 01:14:200 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Spinners are one of the most difficult objects for rookies so I'm not sure about these patterns (Spinner-object-spinner-object). Try to replace those spinners with long sliders, at least 2 of them.

1. Use Tick Rate: '2' for this diff, like the other ones included in this mapset.
2. 00:58:557 (1) - I can't find a good reason to silence this spinner, it sounds a bit disorienting. Unsilence it please.
3. 01:13:343 (1,2,3,4) - That last circle was not intuitive enough imo. I can come up with 2 solutions: Use 2 sliders instead // Remove (4) and start the next spinner here: 01:13:986 -
4. 01:14:200 (1) - It's not necessary to silence this spinner-end completely, try with 30% + a soft-whistle, sounds way better.
5. 01:23:628 (1) - Try reducing the volume for this spinner gradually, otherwise it sounds a bit odd.

1. Perhaps HPDrain -1?
2. 00:37:986 (2,3,4) - I didn't like the sudden spacing increase, this part is slow so a 'decrease' is way more expected. Try something like this.
3. 00:42:914 (1) - I find this circle not intuitive enough, it kills the flow imo. I sugges to remove it and then make the spinner 1/2 longer.
4. 00:56:843 (4) - Due to the previous hit-bursts, this circle is quite hard to see, I strongly suggest to move it somewhere else.
5. 01:14:093 (1) - This spinner should start 1/4 later right when that "bell" sounds (Same for the next ones)
6. 01:26:843 (1,2,3,4) - I find this spacing confusing and not easy to read, something like this would play better, look cleaner and be easier to read.

1. 00:13:557 (4) - Better place a NC for this slider-speed change.
2. 00:41:628 (1) - Why this slider doesn't use 0.75x? It's the same part of the song. I strongly suggest to use 0.75x for this slider too, otherwise it's quite unexpected.
3. 00:57:057 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ok, I understand that you're using some kind of wide spacing, which until now, is working great. But this spacing doesn't make sense, specifically between (2)&(3), make spacing even or find other way to make it readable, please.
4. 00:58:986 (3,4,5) - Use this NC pattern to make these jumps more friendly for players.
5. 01:00:914 (5,6) - This spacing seems random too, Look how spacing increases and then it suddenly reduces again but the music/rhythm hasn't changed at all. Fix this please.
6. 01:06:271 (6) - Place a NC here to re-mark the slow-down.
7. 01:13:986 (1) - 0.50x doesn't feel good, it kills the flow. 0.75x works better imo, you should use 0.75x those '0.50x' sliders.
8. Overall, I enjoyed this diff, good job.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

MAKE THE FRUITS ALL ORANGES OR IT'S UNRANKABLE

UOHOHOMUAHAHAHAHTEEHEHEE

Gonzvlo wrote:

[*]Add: 'spinner-osu' - 'spinner-spin' and 'spinner-clear' to avoid any posible skin mixing, remember that you can use the template ones.

payuLnw wrote:

I suggest to use this circle from Hatsune Miku - Yellow , It look better than your original circle

It look like orange ~~!

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. I expected 'orange' hitcircles, Perhaps you can consider to use this? Me like added
2. Add: 'spinner-osu' - 'spinner-spin' and 'spinner-clear' to avoid any posible skin mixing, remember that you can use the template ones. Done
3. Tags: Remove '2' is too generic and short, 'ending' is enough. Done
4. 01:26:200 - You should end this map here, that last part is not rhythmic enough. Mapping that 'sound' seems ridiculous. Fine going back to what I originally had there, nothing
5. Taiko: Seems fine, just a minor suggestion: End that last spinner here: 01:26:200 - That's up to Medi :T

[Ryuji-Easy]

1. This seems more like an "easy" [Normal] IMO. However, the HPDrain and OD are too high for an [Easy] diff like this one, -1 tick for both please. The AR seems high too, but due to the high quantity of objects placed in this diff, reducing it doesn't look too good, it's up to you. It's a "hard" [Easy] anyways changed the OD and HP
2. 00:19:986 (3,4) - I'm a bit worried about this pattern, I was a bit hard to follow for me at first glance so It might be confusing for rookies. I suggest to remove (4) and then make (3) longer Done
3. 01:14:200 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Spinners are one of the most difficult objects for rookies so I'm not sure about these patterns (Spinner-object-spinner-object). Try to replace those spinners with long sliders, at least 2 of them. After being like the fifth person to mention this, changed the second and third spinners to sliders

[Net's Kitamura-Normal]

1. Use Tick Rate: '2' for this diff, like the other ones included in this mapset.
2. 00:58:557 (1) - I can't find a good reason to silence this spinner, it sounds a bit disorienting. Unsilence it please.
3. 01:13:343 (1,2,3,4) - That last circle was not intuitive enough imo. I can come up with 2 solutions: Use 2 sliders instead // Remove (4) and start the next spinner here: 01:13:986 -
4. 01:14:200 (1) - It's not necessary to silence this spinner-end completely, try with 30% + a soft-whistle, sounds way better.
5. 01:23:628 (1) - Try reducing the volume for this spinner gradually, otherwise it sounds a bit odd.
   
   Looks like Net made all changes...I think...

[Ami-Hard]

1. Perhaps HPDrain -1? Done
2. 00:37:986 (2,3,4) - I didn't like the sudden spacing increase, this part is slow so a 'decrease' is way more expected. Try something like this. Changed to an attempt of what your suggested.
3. 00:42:914 (1) - I find this circle not intuitive enough, it kills the flow imo. I sugges to remove it and then make the spinner 1/2 longer. Done
4. 00:56:843 (4) - Due to the previous hit-bursts, this circle is quite hard to see, I strongly suggest to move it somewhere else. Done
5. 01:14:093 (1) - This spinner should start 1/4 later right when that "bell" sounds (Same for the next ones) Done
6. 01:26:843 (1,2,3,4) - I find this spacing confusing and not easy to read, something like this would play better, look cleaner and be easier to read. This is irrelevant cuz nothing is there

\o/

winber1 wrote:

Hard

00:10:771 (2,3) - this seems a little close. I'd like it if you'd either move them a little further apart, or add a note at 00:11:414 (I like the latter better fyi) Naw placing one there seems like an empty note to me
00:20:414 (x) - add note? (just to keep the space inbetween notes the same While ruin my pattern D:
01:16:343 (1) - delete note? it just doesn't fit imo. nope fits fine to me :T
01:19:771 (1,1) - ^ ^same as above
01:26:843 (1,2,3,4) - make symmetrical about the y-axis? Decided to go back to what I originally had and delete those notes
01:26:414 (1) - you could even add a note here if you want, but idk if you want a note 1/2 tick after a spinner.^same

Easy

00:20:414 (x) - Perhaps add a note? I just want the rests in between the notes to be the same so it's easier to read lol. then again, maybe you don't want notes to be 1/2 tick away in an easy diff. this whole section has been changed in previous mod.

Nice map! :3

payuLnw wrote:

I suggest to use this circle from Hatsune Miku - Yellow , It look better than your original circle

It look like orange ~~!

ziin wrote:

oh my heart. Don't worry I'll fix the skin later.

Weezy wrote:

Looks like Net made all changes...I think...