Yay, another Toradora map!
Ryuji-Easy:
I think Ryuji should be Ryuuji. Ryuji is when the u has a stress over it otherwise it looks like you double it. Of course, I don't actually know Japenese, this is based on a couple of google searches.
General note- Though sliders such as 00:00:486 (1) - , 00:10:771 (1) - are reasonably (but not perfectly) symmetric, they look too pointed. Try using more nodes than just 3 to get a better arc shape.
00:01:771 (2) - Align with end of (1)?
00:47:200 (2,3) - If they're meant to be identical... they're not.
00:52:128 (3) - Since this is an easy, maybe replace this slider with just a circle on the place it starts?
01:05:843 (4) - ^
net's Kitamura-Normal:
00:27:914 (5) - Move up 1 grid to complete the pattern
01:20:200 (1,2,3,4) - I felt that instead of a just a horizontal flip of 01:16:771 (1,2,3,4) - , this should have been that rotated 180 degrees kinda like to arms of a spiral, similar to the pattern in Easy.
Ami-Hard:
00:18:057 (1,2) - These two ought to be identical
00:21:700 - Place a circle here to cover "n" of "minawa". And to parallel the timing of 00:14:628 (1,2,3) - , 00:18:057 (1,2) - .
00:25:128- ^
00:52:557 (7) - See note about sliders under Easy
00:56:200 (3) - Asymmetrical, move center node down.
01:06:271 (7) - It's good you use many nodes here, but it's still not symmetric
01:07:343 (1,3) - Asymmetrical, move center node down.
Saten's Taiga-Insane:
I think a slider tick rate of 1 or even 2 would be good; it's a bit disconcerting to see long sliders with no ticks in them.
Other than that, I thought the patterns were really well done in this difficulty!
Generally, there were a few problems with slider shapes and symmetry. You might want to refer to this guide for nicer slider shapes. Mostly fine, though, and starred!
Ryuji-Easy:
I think Ryuji should be Ryuuji. Ryuji is when the u has a stress over it otherwise it looks like you double it. Of course, I don't actually know Japenese, this is based on a couple of google searches.
General note- Though sliders such as 00:00:486 (1) - , 00:10:771 (1) - are reasonably (but not perfectly) symmetric, they look too pointed. Try using more nodes than just 3 to get a better arc shape.
00:01:771 (2) - Align with end of (1)?
00:47:200 (2,3) - If they're meant to be identical... they're not.
00:52:128 (3) - Since this is an easy, maybe replace this slider with just a circle on the place it starts?
01:05:843 (4) - ^
net's Kitamura-Normal:
00:27:914 (5) - Move up 1 grid to complete the pattern
01:20:200 (1,2,3,4) - I felt that instead of a just a horizontal flip of 01:16:771 (1,2,3,4) - , this should have been that rotated 180 degrees kinda like to arms of a spiral, similar to the pattern in Easy.
Ami-Hard:
00:18:057 (1,2) - These two ought to be identical
00:21:700 - Place a circle here to cover "n" of "minawa". And to parallel the timing of 00:14:628 (1,2,3) - , 00:18:057 (1,2) - .
00:25:128- ^
00:52:557 (7) - See note about sliders under Easy
00:56:200 (3) - Asymmetrical, move center node down.
01:06:271 (7) - It's good you use many nodes here, but it's still not symmetric
01:07:343 (1,3) - Asymmetrical, move center node down.
Saten's Taiga-Insane:
I think a slider tick rate of 1 or even 2 would be good; it's a bit disconcerting to see long sliders with no ticks in them.
Other than that, I thought the patterns were really well done in this difficulty!
Generally, there were a few problems with slider shapes and symmetry. You might want to refer to this guide for nicer slider shapes. Mostly fine, though, and starred!