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00:04:930 (1) - could improve that blanket slightly XD
00:13:930 (1) - uneven wave slider please fix
00:16:930 (1) - bad blanket
00:18:055 (3,4,5) - 3 isn't perfectly aligned with 4 and 5
00:21:617 (5) - not a perfect triangle
00:25:930 (3) - i feel the sound here is strong enough to nc
00:25:930 (3) - fix the slider end overlap sO you can fix your blanket because right now its uneven XD
00:27:805 (3) - same here i feel its a strong sound for an nc
00:28:930 (5) - same as above
00:31:930 (3) - same as above
00:33:805 (3) - same as above
00:34:930 (5) - same as above
00:38:867 (3) - not a perfect triangle
00:39:805 (3) - pretty loud sound u sure you don't want to nc
00:40:367 (4) - you could make the spacing here a bit more even
00:45:805 (2) - same as earlier, nc this
00:46:930 (4) - same as earlier could nc
00:46:930 (4) - also you could move this a bit to overlap with 00:45:805 (2) - better
00:46:930 (4,1) - could improve the blanket here
00:51:805 (4) - i feel this notes strong enough to nc 00:54:805 (1) - it was strong enough here to nc so why not earlier?
00:57:055 (4) - could polish up the triangle here
00:59:492 (2) - i'm pretty sure this is intentional uneveness, but if it isn't you could straighten it
01:01:367 (2) - same as earlier, i think you can even it a bit
01:05:305 (3) - same as earlier, i feel its a loud enough sound to nc
01:27:805 (1) - you can overlap with 3 a bit better
01:29:492 (2) - personally, i feel the spacing is a bit too big and i would make it 1.5x, if you don't want to change it you could atleast make it a bit more even on the spacing
01:31:930 (1) - same as what i said earlier in the mod, you could make the blanket a bit better
01:34:930 (4) - loud sound, you nced all the rest in the chorus but forgot this one?
01:37:180 (1) - whats the point of these ncs?
01:45:805 (2) - pretty loud sound, i would nc
01:46:930 (4) - would also nc this
01:48:430 (5,1) - why no triple here or a 1/6th repeat slider
01:55:367 (2) - could even up this spacing too
01:58:368 (2) - could even up the spacing here too
02:06:055 (1) - whats the point of the nc here
02:07:367 (2) - same here could even the spacing
02:10:367 (2) - move this down a bit to make it an even triangle
02:10:555 (3) - and then move this over a few pixels too to make sure its perfectly lined up
02:12:805 (1) - same as earlier, why ignore the guitar and not emphasize it atleast in some way
02:14:492 (2) - even it out a bit
02:22:367 (2) - same here too move 02:22:555 (3) - over a bit to make it even
02:23:492 (2) - and here too move it a bit to make it even XD
02:24:617 (5) - and here too
02:25:367 (2) - even this up like
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/986111702:25:555 (3,1) - could improve the blanket here
02:29:305 (3) - nc this like what i said earlier i feel its strong enough
02:30:055 (5) - same here too could nc
02:39:430 (5,1) - could improve the blanket
02:40:930 (1,3) - could improve the blanket
02:53:492 (2) - move it over a bit to make it even
02:59:867 (2) - like it up between the slider a bit better
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/986115803:00:055 (3) - why not rotate this at a bit sharper angle or line up with 4
03:05:305 (3) - forgot nc?
03:05:680 (5) - forgot nc?
03:06:055 (7) - forgot nc?
03:10:367 (2) - even the spacing up
03:10:555 (3) - even though this nc seems a bit pointless, it is a loud enough sound to nc imo
03:11:117 (1,2) - not directly move 1 to the left a bit
03:13:742 (3) - could blanket with 03:12:805 (1) - a bit better
03:14:680 (2) - could make the triangle a bit more even
03:16:367 (2) - could blanket with 03:15:805 (1) - a bit better
03:20:305 (3) - could nc here
03:23:305 (5) - i feel its loud enough for an nc
03:24:805 (1) - make the wiggle look a bit better
03:33:805 (1) - even up wiggle
03:36:617 (6,1) - could make this a triple
03:36:992 (1) - why the whistle?
03:43:930 (3) - as i said earlier i would nc this
03:46:930 (3) - same as above
03:49:930 (3) - same as above
03:50:680 - why not a note or slider or something to emphasize this sound?
03:52:930 (3) - same as earlier i would nc it
03:55:930 (4) - same as above
03:55:367 (2) - why not even this out it looks better imo
03:55:555 (3) - also why not make this into a 1/6 repeat or a triple
03:58:555 (3) - same as above
04:00:430 (4) - why not rotate this a bit so you can make a triangle out of 03:59:680 (2,3) -
04:01:555 (3) - same as earlier, could 1/6 slider or triple
04:03:430 (6) - even it up
04:07:555 (4) - the finish here is loud enough for an nc imo
04:15:992 (2) - could blanket with 04:16:555 (4) - a bit better
04:21:430 (1) - could make the squiggle here a bit better to blanket 04:21:992 (2) - nicer
04:29:867 (2) - blanket with 04:30:430 (1) - a bit better
04:32:305 (2) - i feel the guitars strong enough for an nc
04:33:430 (5) - same as above
04:34:555 (8) - could also nc this if you want, even though i don't think its necessary
04:41:305 (1) - could move this over so its even with 04:41:117 (5) -
04:44:867 (2) - same here, could even it up
04:45:992 (2) - same as above
04:48:992 (2) - blanket with 04:49:180 (3) - a bit better
04:50:305 (1) - uneven wiggle fix pls
05:02:867 (2) - could even up the spacing here
05:05:867 (2) - same here personally, i think it looks better with even spacing
05:08:867 (2) - move this over so it's perpendicular with 05:09:055 (3) -
05:12:992 (2) - even it up
05:13:554 (4) - even it up
05:18:055 (3) - could blanket with 05:18:430 (1) - a bit better
05:24:055 (3) - could make the triangle more even
hopefully it was helpful and not too nitpicky and opinionated, good luck on ranking