Am I the last of the last hope then?
"I have inclination to qualify this, when it gets 2 bubbles"
So there's your goal, get two bubbles from other BNs and call Sonnyc again.
I think I already modded with you for like 5 hours so the bigger issues should have mostly already been fixed.
I won't give you too many alternative solutions. I think it's better for you to find them by yourself.
The drain time is sooooooooooo close to 5 min but it's actually 4:59.658, considering the two breaks inside. You gotta make the last spinner a bit longer.
01:17:643 (2,1) - These two are too close while you're starting a new 'section', and thus you need some emphasis on it. You also have put jumps on every similar sounds.
01:39:757 - This part feels a bit unorganized. 01:42:500 (1,2,3,4) - They look like all similar notes but 1 is pretty much out of place. And only 3 is spinning CCW, while 1-2-4 are CW. Same for 01:45:243 (1,2,3,4) - 01:47:986 (1,2,3,4) - , except in here only 4 is flowing the opposite direction.
01:52:100 (1) - You only have NC here while not on other similar ones.
02:14:043 (1,2,3) - 0.85x 02:15:242 (3,4,1) - 1.00x, feels a bit inconsistent.
02:15:415 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These create really awkward movements. Because the angle is wide while the spacing keeps changing, the flow is twisted rather than moving smoothly.
02:33:243 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Suddenly the spacing is reduced so much while the song is consistent.
03:30:843 - There are two green lines on same spot, delete one of them.
03:50:043 (1,2) - It's really weird to leave only these two combo. Either put NC on 03:50:729 - 03:51:072 - too, or think of something else.
04:32:557 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 01:26:043 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - The combo numbers.
04:40:786 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2) - The way you divided the patterns is very weird. Considering the music, it should be divided on 04:42:157 - 04:43:529 -
04:48:329 (1,2,1) - This is weird too. 04:48:329 (1,2) - This is a same sound as 04:46:957 (3,4,5) - , not 04:49:015 (1) - , but you used symmetry for unrelated sounds.
04:51:757 - This is also a new start of 4 measures, therefore you should use something like http://puu.sh/tIo0J/064297f2e8.jpg to repeat similar patterns properly.
now for the hitsounds,
00:54:157 - You can mute here cuz there is no distinct sound.
01:05:729 - 01:06:072 - 02:44:472 - 02:44:815 - 04:12:243 - 04:12:586 - I don't know why you used drum sampleset instead of just muting them. By the way I can tell you something. While 01:05:729 - 02:44:472 - 04:12:243 - has no sounds, there are sounds on 01:05:986 - 02:44:729 - 04:12:500 -
02:18:157 - I can see why you reduced the volume here but it sounds weird to me, because there are no changes on the map scale. This means you're mapping to a different sound while keeping the same intensity. Then you should use same volume as well.
Okay that's all I would say. We'll see how others think soon.
"I have inclination to qualify this, when it gets 2 bubbles"
So there's your goal, get two bubbles from other BNs and call Sonnyc again.
I think I already modded with you for like 5 hours so the bigger issues should have mostly already been fixed.
I won't give you too many alternative solutions. I think it's better for you to find them by yourself.
The drain time is sooooooooooo close to 5 min but it's actually 4:59.658, considering the two breaks inside. You gotta make the last spinner a bit longer.
01:17:643 (2,1) - These two are too close while you're starting a new 'section', and thus you need some emphasis on it. You also have put jumps on every similar sounds.
01:39:757 - This part feels a bit unorganized. 01:42:500 (1,2,3,4) - They look like all similar notes but 1 is pretty much out of place. And only 3 is spinning CCW, while 1-2-4 are CW. Same for 01:45:243 (1,2,3,4) - 01:47:986 (1,2,3,4) - , except in here only 4 is flowing the opposite direction.
01:52:100 (1) - You only have NC here while not on other similar ones.
02:14:043 (1,2,3) - 0.85x 02:15:242 (3,4,1) - 1.00x, feels a bit inconsistent.
02:15:415 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These create really awkward movements. Because the angle is wide while the spacing keeps changing, the flow is twisted rather than moving smoothly.
02:33:243 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Suddenly the spacing is reduced so much while the song is consistent.
03:30:843 - There are two green lines on same spot, delete one of them.
03:50:043 (1,2) - It's really weird to leave only these two combo. Either put NC on 03:50:729 - 03:51:072 - too, or think of something else.
04:32:557 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 01:26:043 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - The combo numbers.
04:40:786 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2) - The way you divided the patterns is very weird. Considering the music, it should be divided on 04:42:157 - 04:43:529 -
04:48:329 (1,2,1) - This is weird too. 04:48:329 (1,2) - This is a same sound as 04:46:957 (3,4,5) - , not 04:49:015 (1) - , but you used symmetry for unrelated sounds.
04:51:757 - This is also a new start of 4 measures, therefore you should use something like http://puu.sh/tIo0J/064297f2e8.jpg to repeat similar patterns properly.
now for the hitsounds,
00:54:157 - You can mute here cuz there is no distinct sound.
01:05:729 - 01:06:072 - 02:44:472 - 02:44:815 - 04:12:243 - 04:12:586 - I don't know why you used drum sampleset instead of just muting them. By the way I can tell you something. While 01:05:729 - 02:44:472 - 04:12:243 - has no sounds, there are sounds on 01:05:986 - 02:44:729 - 04:12:500 -
02:18:157 - I can see why you reduced the volume here but it sounds weird to me, because there are no changes on the map scale. This means you're mapping to a different sound while keeping the same intensity. Then you should use same volume as well.
Okay that's all I would say. We'll see how others think soon.