Deserves a star. Got a fine quality, based on structures. Not nominating since the diff is quite high for me but the quality wasn't ultimate to overcome that.
Fixed almost everything u mentioned except these I didnt understand.Doyak wrote:
Am I the last of the last hope then?
"I have inclination to qualify this, when it gets 2 bubbles"
So there's your goal, get two bubbles from other BNs and call Sonnyc again.
@ wow okay ;w;
I think I already modded with you for like 5 hours so the bigger issues should have mostly already been fixed.
I won't give you too many alternative solutions. I think it's better for you to find them by yourself.
The drain time is sooooooooooo close to 5 min but it's actually 4:59.658, considering the two breaks inside. You gotta make the last spinner a bit longer.
@ fixed
01:17:643 (2,1) - These two are too close while you're starting a new 'section', and thus you need some emphasis on it. You also have put jumps on every similar sounds.
@ fixed
01:39:757 - This part feels a bit unorganized. 01:42:500 (1,2,3,4) - They look like all similar notes but 1 is pretty much out of place. And only 3 is spinning CCW, while 1-2-4 are CW. Same for 01:45:243 (1,2,3,4) - 01:47:986 (1,2,3,4) - , except in here only 4 is flowing the opposite direction.
@ fixed
01:52:100 (1) - You only have NC here while not on other similar ones.
@ fixed
02:14:043 (1,2,3) - 0.85x 02:15:242 (3,4,1) - 1.00x, feels a bit inconsistent.
@ I know, but its to keep the symmetry
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7198962
I had to put 02:15:329 (4) - inbetween 02:15:242 (3,1) - cuz of that...
02:15:415 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These create really awkward movements. Because the angle is wide while the spacing keeps changing, the flow is twisted rather than moving smoothly.
@ fixed
02:33:243 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Suddenly the spacing is reduced so much while the song is consistent.
@ fixed
03:30:843 - There are two green lines on same spot, delete one of them.
@ fixed
03:50:043 (1,2) - It's really weird to leave only these two combo. Either put NC on 03:50:729 - 03:51:072 - too, or think of something else.
@ fixed
04:32:557 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 01:26:043 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - The combo numbers.
@ fixed
04:40:786 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2) - The way you divided the patterns is very weird. Considering the music, it should be divided on 04:42:157 - 04:43:529 -
@ fixed
04:48:329 (1,2,1) - This is weird too. 04:48:329 (1,2) - This is a same sound as 04:46:957 (3,4,5) - , not 04:49:015 (1) - , but you used symmetry for unrelated sounds.
@ fixed
04:51:757 - This is also a new start of 4 measures, therefore you should use something like http://puu.sh/tIo0J/064297f2e8.jpg to repeat similar patterns properly.
@ fixed but i did it in different way
now for the hitsounds,
00:54:157 - You can mute here cuz there is no distinct sound.
@ fixed
01:05:729 - 01:06:072 - 02:44:472 - 02:44:815 - 04:12:243 - 04:12:586 - I don't know why you used drum sampleset instead of just muting them. By the way I can tell you something. While 01:05:729 - 02:44:472 - 04:12:243 - has no sounds, there are sounds on 01:05:986 - 02:44:729 - 04:12:500 -
@ fixed, also changed sv to red ticks
02:18:157 - I can see why you reduced the volume here but it sounds weird to me, because there are no changes on the map scale. This means you're mapping to a different sound while keeping the same intensity. Then you should use same volume as well.
@ fixed
Okay that's all I would say. We'll see how others think soon.
fixed everythingDoyak wrote:
01:05:472 (1,2) - Whoa that's not what I meant. I mean, there is a sound on 01:05:986 - while not on 01:05:643 - so they're not exactly the same. So what I wanted is something like http://puu.sh/tKTkJ/898b1549e9.jpg while muting the end of (1). Ofc same for the later ones
01:47:643 (6,1) - You could do something about this too because this is the only overlapped 1/4 in this section.
02:15:757 (2,3) - 02:17:129 (2,3) - 02:17:815 (2,3) - these are super awkward to play and ruins all the flow lol, could you try something else than sticking to this little square thing?
10:35 Nao Tomori: oi
10:35 Nao Tomori: lets go
10:36 -himei: oiii
10:36 -himei: yea im rdy
10:37 *Nao Tomori is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1160044 Arzest - Enemy [Gloom]]
10:37 Nao Tomori: 00:22:957 (1) -
10:38 Nao Tomori: how come these things are fullscreen jumps
10:38 -himei: well mainly because of clock wise pattern + its sliders
10:38 -himei: so theres no way u can miss that
10:38 Nao Tomori: they're slow sliders so it's pretty aids to aim imo
10:39 -himei: hmmm well its easy
10:39 -himei: u can try
10:39 Nao Tomori: hm
10:39 Nao Tomori: ok its not that baad
10:40 Nao Tomori: alright then in this case
10:40 Nao Tomori: 00:22:957 -
10:40 Nao Tomori: did you ignore these vocals on purpose?
10:40 Nao Tomori: could be interesting to do some other type of slider if you wanted
10:40 Nao Tomori: 00:25:743 - too
10:40 Nao Tomori: 00:27:200 -
10:40 -himei: hmmm no the main purpose is like
10:41 -himei: to focus on structure rather than the music in this section
10:41 Nao Tomori: o.0
10:41 Nao Tomori: okay
10:41 -himei: well, in whole map too
10:41 Nao Tomori: mk
10:41 -himei: i mean yes there are some oppotunities
10:41 Nao Tomori: 00:34:100 (2) - i think this one is a bit too big
10:41 -himei: to change things but it will ruin the whole picture
10:41 -himei: ok so
10:42 Nao Tomori: though it keeps the pattern you can move them both in horizontally
10:42 -himei: wait wait ill explain
10:42 Nao Tomori: mhm
10:42 -himei: it used to be like this 00:38:043 (1,2) -
10:42 -himei: but after doyak karen and desperate-kun mods i changed it
10:42 -himei: they both like
10:42 -himei: said it shud be like that
10:43 -himei: i dont remember why tho
10:43 Nao Tomori: hmm
10:43 -himei: it was like 4 weeks ago
10:43 Nao Tomori: you mean change to circles from sliders?
10:43 Nao Tomori: cuz i just think jump is too far
10:43 Nao Tomori: sincec there is no slider leniency to use'
10:43 -himei: well
10:43 -himei: well theres no place here to put these
10:44 -himei: only in center
10:44 Nao Tomori: yeah yeah but you can move it closer together right
10:44 -himei: or i make a double on the (1) stack
10:44 -himei: no, cuz 00:35:300 (1,2) - it is stacked with this
10:44 -himei: and it complements the whole section pattern
10:44 Nao Tomori: oh
10:44 Nao Tomori: hm ok
10:44 -himei: if u select it
10:45 -himei: u will see
10:45 Nao Tomori: yea
10:45 Nao Tomori: this is why i hate pattern based xd
10:45 Nao Tomori: too restrictive
10:45 -himei: xd
10:45 Nao Tomori: 00:40:100 (4,5,6) -
10:45 Nao Tomori: this is not lined up i think?
10:45 -himei: hmm
10:45 Nao Tomori: 5 is off
10:45 -himei: 00:40:443 (5) - is the center between 4 and 6
10:46 -himei: i calculated it xd
10:46 Nao Tomori: ya
10:46 Nao Tomori: move it to the right like 2 px
10:46 Nao Tomori: i just tried it lol
10:46 -himei: are u sure
10:46 -himei: ?
10:46 Nao Tomori: very
10:46 -himei: 2 to the left by x?
10:47 -himei: hold on
10:47 Nao Tomori: two to the right
10:47 -himei: done
10:48 Nao Tomori: 00:57:929 (1) - o.0
10:48 Nao Tomori: why is this 1/4 slider
10:48 -himei: wait
10:48 -himei: 00:40:100 (4,6) -
10:48 -himei: x here is 102+256 = 188
10:48 -himei: why u think its 186?
10:48 Nao Tomori: huh
10:49 Nao Tomori: wait
10:49 Nao Tomori: hm
10:49 -himei: (102+256) / 2 = 188
10:49 Nao Tomori: o
10:49 Nao Tomori: wait..
10:49 Nao Tomori: y axis riigth
10:49 Nao Tomori: its off by a pixel
10:49 Nao Tomori: cuz like
10:50 Nao Tomori: 327/2 is not 164
10:50 Nao Tomori: whatever it isnt big deal
10:50 -himei: hmmm
10:50 -himei: wo 1 pixel to the top?
10:50 -himei: so*
10:50 Nao Tomori: down
10:50 Nao Tomori: 1 px down on 6
10:50 -himei: ok
10:51 -himei: 00:40:615 (6) - ?
10:51 Nao Tomori: ya
10:51 -himei: its stacked with others
10:51 -himei: i cant move it xddddddd
10:51 Nao Tomori: holy
10:51 Nao Tomori: ok whatever
10:51 Nao Tomori: 1 px nobody will notice
10:51 -himei: and its mirrored
10:52 Nao Tomori: 00:57:929 (1) -
10:52 Nao Tomori: why is this 1/4 slider
10:52 -himei: well.. idk
10:52 -himei: suggest me something
10:52 -himei: this place is controvertional
10:52 -himei: if u listen closely
10:52 Nao Tomori: actually the 1/4 sounds right
10:52 Nao Tomori: but.
10:52 -himei: theres a sound on blue tick
10:52 Nao Tomori: ok yeah
10:52 Nao Tomori: it's fine
10:53 Nao Tomori: 00:57:929 (1,1,1) -
10:53 Nao Tomori: 01:05:472 (1,1) -
10:53 Nao Tomori: why are these different lol
10:53 Nao Tomori: 01:05:815 (1,2) - looks really ugly
10:53 Nao Tomori: cuz the slider is almost touching circle
10:54 -himei: well.. its another shit place cuz the ... 01:05:472 (1,1) - s-ends and s-starts are mirrored
10:54 -himei: as u can see
10:54 -himei: and also
10:54 Nao Tomori: fk that just make it look nice
10:54 Nao Tomori: it looks way too bad
10:54 -himei: yea
10:54 -himei: hmmm
10:54 -himei: but how
10:55 -himei: hmm
10:55 Nao Tomori: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7244338 looks better imo
10:55 -himei: oh nvm
10:55 -himei: sec
10:55 Nao Tomori: plus consistent with copying idea
10:55 -himei: they are different sounds
10:55 -himei: so doyak forced me to change the shape of second one
10:55 Nao Tomori: ..
10:55 -himei: cuz it has the sound on s-end
10:55 Nao Tomori: ok
10:55 Nao Tomori: i see
10:55 -himei: no wait ill change it
10:55 Nao Tomori: just
10:56 Nao Tomori: make it so there isnt a tiny ass overlap
10:56 -himei: just got to change the following jumps
10:56 Nao Tomori: somehow
10:56 -himei: ya give me a minute
10:57 -himei: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7244370 ?
10:58 Nao Tomori: ya looks better
10:58 Nao Tomori: small curve on 1 would be even better imo
10:58 Nao Tomori: but not big deal
10:58 -himei: wait wat ar was that
10:59 -himei: 9.4?
10:59 -himei: or 9.3
10:59 Nao Tomori: idk
10:59 Nao Tomori: 9.4
10:59 -himei: i forgot xddd
10:59 -himei: ok
10:59 -himei: i changed to 5
10:59 -himei: for screenshot
10:59 Nao Tomori: rip
11:01 -himei: 02:44:215 - ill change this place also
11:02 Nao Tomori: ya
11:02 Nao Tomori: 01:10:272 (3,4,5,6) -
11:02 Nao Tomori: this is only time with square jump pattern?
11:03 Nao Tomori: every other time its that other sharper angle thing
11:03 -himei: no
11:03 Nao Tomori: and that sound seems same
11:03 -himei: theres a copy of that
11:03 Nao Tomori: in that section?
11:03 -himei: 01:15:758 (3,4,5,6) - this also
11:03 Nao Tomori: thats uh
11:03 Nao Tomori: hmm
11:03 -himei: 01:21:243 (3,4,5,6) - and this
11:03 Nao Tomori: ok
11:04 Nao Tomori: np then
11:04 Nao Tomori: oh man
11:04 Nao Tomori: do we need these 1/2 jumps
11:04 Nao Tomori: :<
11:04 -himei: where?
11:04 Nao Tomori: 01:26:816 -
11:04 Nao Tomori: well w/e
11:04 -himei: it uses a formula xd
11:04 Nao Tomori: those are pretty standard
11:05 -himei: every jump is bigger than another for 15*+the angle of previous jump
11:05 -himei: so its like
11:05 Nao Tomori: ya ya
11:05 -himei: sec
11:05 Nao Tomori: no i mean the ncing
11:05 Nao Tomori: not the pattern
11:05 -himei: oh
11:05 -himei: well its w/e for me
11:05 Nao Tomori: seems as if you can do 4 combo until the last one to me imo
11:05 -himei: it can be 1-4
11:06 Nao Tomori: cuz sound is not changing too much imo
11:06 -himei: ok i changed to 1-4
11:06 -himei: and the second place too
11:07 -himei: at the end
11:07 Nao Tomori: 01:26:386 (3,3,3) - so i think these ones
11:07 Nao Tomori: you can do
11:07 Nao Tomori: other ine is fine
11:08 Nao Tomori: 01:47:986 (1) - holy can u make this look better
11:08 -himei: alright
11:08 Nao Tomori: make 6 point up more or smth
11:08 -himei: what lol
11:08 Nao Tomori: it looks ugly
11:08 Nao Tomori: cuz 6 doesnt rly point into it
11:08 -himei: 6 is the copy of previous 3 the same sliders
11:08 Nao Tomori: but then it also kinda does
11:09 -himei: hmmm
11:09 Nao Tomori: thats only time it isnt 1/4 jump tho
11:09 Nao Tomori: reason for that?
11:09 -himei: alright ill do the same as the previous ones
11:09 -himei: 01:45:243 (1,2,3,4) -
11:10 Nao Tomori: makes sense
11:11 -himei: done
11:13 -himei: 04:12:115 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7244532
11:14 Nao Tomori: 03:25:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
11:14 Nao Tomori: hi caren
11:14 Nao Tomori: xdddd
11:14 -himei: lol i didnt copy
11:14 -himei: i designed it myself
11:14 -himei: xdd
11:14 Nao Tomori: mmmhmm
11:15 -himei: i didnt even know
11:15 Nao Tomori: 03:32:729 (3) -
11:15 Nao Tomori: flow wise i think ctrl g on this one and the other one after it would work better
11:15 Nao Tomori: otherwise its kind of weird sharp angle
11:16 -himei: ctrl g?
11:16 -himei: to the left?
11:16 -himei: but the 4 is on the right
11:16 Nao Tomori: so it goes away from 4
11:16 Nao Tomori: yeah
11:16 Nao Tomori: that way the motion is more snappy
11:16 Nao Tomori: same with 7
11:17 -himei: wait but its a kinda
11:17 -himei: unintuitive jump
11:17 -himei: i mean slied always leads the flow right
11:17 -himei: especialy slider kick
11:17 Nao Tomori: hmm
11:17 -himei: cuz i used them only in that way
11:17 Nao Tomori: yeah
11:17 Nao Tomori: alright makes sense
11:17 -himei: in the entire map
11:18 -himei: 03:31:615 (6,3) - but u showed me something
11:18 Nao Tomori: 04:05:815 (1,1) -
11:18 -himei: that shud be fixed ;w;
11:18 -himei: zzzzzz
11:18 Nao Tomori: these things look so fucking ugly
11:18 Nao Tomori: holy
11:18 Nao Tomori: can u move the red point further in
11:19 -himei: http://puu.sh/tPEic/1ab79f6d6f.jpg ?
11:19 Nao Tomori: ya better
11:20 Nao Tomori: 04:12:329 (1) -
11:20 Nao Tomori: did u fix this
11:20 -himei: yes i showed above
11:20 Nao Tomori: ok
11:20 -himei: scroll up
11:21 Nao Tomori: 04:33:243 (1,1,1) - same here
11:21 Nao Tomori: remove nc imo
11:21 Nao Tomori: er
11:21 Nao Tomori: not there
11:21 Nao Tomori: 04:32:900 (1,1,1) -
11:22 Nao Tomori: 04:32:900 (1,1,1) -
11:22 -himei: yo i fixed it
11:22 -himei: as i said like 10 mins ago lol
11:22 -himei: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7244631
11:22 Nao Tomori: aa
11:22 Nao Tomori: ok ok
11:22 Nao Tomori: 04:49:015 (1) -
11:22 Nao Tomori: this ain't straight
11:23 -himei: oh shit
11:23 -himei: fixed
11:23 Nao Tomori: none of them are xd
11:23 Nao Tomori: 04:54:500 (1) -
11:23 Nao Tomori: 04:53:129 (4) - is actually
11:24 Nao Tomori: 04:56:900 (2) -
11:24 -himei: done
11:24 Nao Tomori: think this can be a slider
11:24 Nao Tomori: not repeat cuz no sound
11:24 Nao Tomori: on blue tick
11:24 Nao Tomori: you could make cool effect with 3/4 slider at the end
11:24 -himei: but symmetry...
11:24 -himei: how?
11:25 Nao Tomori: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7244657 just like this imo
11:25 Nao Tomori: and mute that slider end
11:25 -himei: zzz plz now
11:25 -himei: no*
11:25 Nao Tomori: better than ignoring song imo
11:25 -himei: i really like this place, its like the logical ending
11:25 Nao Tomori: repeat is dumb there -_-
11:26 -himei: hm
11:26 -himei: if i remove the sliders at all
11:26 -himei: just 3 circles
11:27 Nao Tomori: well i think the effect of 1/4 jump after aa slider on that sound is best personally
11:27 Nao Tomori: that's my style tho
11:27 Nao Tomori: just make there not a repeat slider on a blue tick where there isnt sound
11:27 -himei: 04:56:643 - theres no sounds too
11:27 -himei: the sound here is voice line
11:27 Nao Tomori: ya
11:27 -himei: which isnt that i was emphasizing
11:28 -himei: so i guess
11:28 Nao Tomori: you did that on other time too
11:28 -himei: just 3 circles then
11:28 Nao Tomori: with the "enemy"
11:28 -himei: hmm
11:28 Nao Tomori: 01:50:043 (1) -
11:28 Nao Tomori: here
11:28 -himei: but that was 1/3
11:28 -himei: yea i remember
11:28 Nao Tomori: still
11:29 Nao Tomori: it has similar purpose so it's followed same way
11:29 -himei: ok give me a sec
11:31 -himei: no fuck that voice line, it forces me to do something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7244727
11:32 -himei: is 3 circles bad there?
11:32 -himei: just on bassess
11:32 Nao Tomori: 3 circles is fine
11:32 Nao Tomori: but i think like
11:32 Nao Tomori: idk i think slider captures that sliding sound so well xd
11:32 -himei: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7244741
11:32 Nao Tomori: ya thats ok
11:32 -himei: well its the end of the map and i was kinda using some decreasing of intensity in patterns
11:32 -himei: in that ending section after jumps
11:33 -himei: so its like degradation
11:33 Nao Tomori: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7244751 i still suggest this rhythm
11:33 Nao Tomori: if u dont want it just update and ill do the thing
11:34 -himei: jump from s-end of the last slider is kinda weird cuz its the last palpable hitobject
11:34 Nao Tomori: hmm
11:34 -himei: well yea ill update now
11:34 Nao Tomori: k
11:34 -himei: it says that
11:34 -himei: it will reset the bubbled status
11:35 -himei: of mymmap
11:35 -himei: is it ok?
11:35 Nao Tomori: huhhh
11:35 Nao Tomori: hm
11:35 -himei: if i update that
11:35 Nao Tomori: wait
11:35 Nao Tomori: ..
11:35 Nao Tomori: lemme ask realy quick..
11:35 Nao Tomori: idk anything about this since
11:35 Nao Tomori: firs ticon
11:35 -himei: ok
11:35 -himei: lmao it like
11:35 -himei: the first sex, its my first map and ur fist icon
11:35 Nao Tomori: yup
11:35 -himei: and we are losing virginity
11:35 -himei: >///<
11:36 -himei: hahs has hsa
11:36 Nao Tomori: xd
Most of the issues were discussed in Nao's irc mod.CanadianBaka wrote:
ok might as well cast my opinions w
[Gloom]
in modern mapping it's not good to just copy paste ctrl + h everything, symmetry should be achieved by reoccurring patterns in the map, not bilateral symmetry. Although the aesthetics in this map are OK because of the fact you focus your map pretty much purely on symmetry it gets rid of a lot of other important concepts of it: Like flow, rhythm, and spacing.
00:01:700 (3) - why such a very noticeable and large spacing gap here? There's nothing to emphasize in the music
@ 00:01:700 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - its a copy of the same sounds. so no, thanks.
00:04:443 (3) - same problem, it occurs again because of your copy + paste technique, if you have one problem chances are it's going to occur again a few seconds later because of the lack of effort put into it
@ ^
00:05:815 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - woah! 6* and it's 5.7x spacing? You just jumped from 2.8x spacing to 5.7x spacing in a matter of seconds, also to top it off it's 1/4 seperated 1.1x apart, your making the player go right across the screen in a matter of seconds
@ ill reconsider this place on the last icon mod
00:22:957 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - these are insane, they are going right across the screen with really low SV? It's quite literally the highest spaced notes you can do, and with such a low SV it makes no sense. I like the idea of it, but it needs a really big nerf
@ it is well made rounded and logical pattern. no, thanks.
00:31:186 (1) - vocals get no emphasize? 00:32:557 (1) - same here? Raise SV for them please
@ all for the structure. so... no, thanks.
00:33:243 (1,2,3) - this honestly looks like a 1/2 pattern, not 1/4
@ no, thanks.
00:35:300 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - again those weird across the whole entire screen dear lord jesus's sliders
@ no, thanks.
00:57:929 (1,2) - really? This spacing is super awkward, make them larger apart and ctrl + g 00:57:929 (1) - this slider
@ no, thanks.
the part whole kiai is a bunch of copy paste, barely any effort put into it all, you literally made one pattern and copy + pasted it through the hole thing changes slight things like spacing.
02:13:957 - missing an obvious beat here
@ @ ill reconsider this place on the last icon mod
i'll stop here buteven in maps that are specifically made to be symmetrical, they are well thought out and well made, well this one... I feel not so much.
such a lack of effort. sorry.
and here's CanadianBaka trying to pop a bubble, when will he grow up.
I already responded to that places in Nao's mod.Doyak wrote:
:thinking:
I'll check these points too later.
Btw -himei, I think you need some better explanation on the points you deny, since it has a reason to be suggested, so you need a better reason to keep it.
-himei wrote:
I already responded to that places in Nao's mod.Doyak wrote:
:thinking:
I'll check these points too later.
Btw -himei, I think you need some better explanation on the points you deny, since it has a reason to be suggested, so you need a better reason to keep it.
So complaining about style, which is mostly focused on structure, isnt the best idea, especially when CannadianBaka doesnt provide any suggestions.
Its a long story behind me and him, so he is doing that "mods" not to keep the map clean, but rather to harass me.
-himei wrote:
Please, read the log on the previous page. Thanks.
HighTec wrote:
CB imo ur mod is kinda against the themes the map is trying to use :/
also are u honestly trying to spice up unneeded drama, i mean like BN can do what ur doing rn (and yes its the BNs job not urs xd)
Do you think every person who came to this thread to comment about the lack of quality in your map has a personal vendetta against you? Please stop acting like you have a victim complex and realize that your map has large room for improvement and is not appropriate for ranking as it is now.-himei wrote:
i guess, thats it, i cant really go against like 3-4 people which are personally against me, even tho i could argue with each of the mentioned
wew-himei wrote:
ibut yea, stjpa, see u on ur next qualification, will be fun XD
Xexxar wrote:
This is a terrible, terrible way to address a post containing some (apparently) valid critiques, and only encourages witchhunting (and probably pointless post-qualify "mods"). I know you may be annoyed by all of this, but you should try to take a step back and avoid replying like this, because if you continue in this way you'll be likely to receive even less help by now: no one would like to have an argument with a closed-minded person who acts like this.-himei wrote:
but yea, stjpa, see u on ur next qualification, will be fun XD
Doyak wrote:
On a side note, I think at least having a symmetry structure is better than putting notes in random places, even if the map could not follow every single sounds of the music properly.
While my fellow partner mentioned already that we do not tollerate such behaviour in our community, I would also like to add that this set is not going anywhere as long as mod posts from people are continued to be responded in this way. You must answer to peoples mod properly by providing actual reasons as in why you deny a suggestion. "no, thanks." Is not a proper answer.-himei wrote:
SPOILERMost of the issues were discussed in Nao's irc mod.CanadianBaka wrote:
ok might as well cast my opinions w
[Gloom]
in modern mapping it's not good to just copy paste ctrl + h everything, symmetry should be achieved by reoccurring patterns in the map, not bilateral symmetry. Although the aesthetics in this map are OK because of the fact you focus your map pretty much purely on symmetry it gets rid of a lot of other important concepts of it: Like flow, rhythm, and spacing.
00:01:700 (3) - why such a very noticeable and large spacing gap here? There's nothing to emphasize in the music
@ 00:01:700 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - its a copy of the same sounds. so no, thanks.
00:04:443 (3) - same problem, it occurs again because of your copy + paste technique, if you have one problem chances are it's going to occur again a few seconds later because of the lack of effort put into it
@ ^
00:05:815 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - woah! 6* and it's 5.7x spacing? You just jumped from 2.8x spacing to 5.7x spacing in a matter of seconds, also to top it off it's 1/4 seperated 1.1x apart, your making the player go right across the screen in a matter of seconds
@ ill reconsider this place on the last icon mod
00:22:957 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - these are insane, they are going right across the screen with really low SV? It's quite literally the highest spaced notes you can do, and with such a low SV it makes no sense. I like the idea of it, but it needs a really big nerf
@ it is well made rounded and logical pattern. no, thanks.
00:31:186 (1) - vocals get no emphasize? 00:32:557 (1) - same here? Raise SV for them please
@ all for the structure. so... no, thanks.
00:33:243 (1,2,3) - this honestly looks like a 1/2 pattern, not 1/4
@ no, thanks.
00:35:300 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - again those weird across the whole entire screen dear lord jesus's sliders
@ no, thanks.
00:57:929 (1,2) - really? This spacing is super awkward, make them larger apart and ctrl + g 00:57:929 (1) - this slider
@ no, thanks.
the part whole kiai is a bunch of copy paste, barely any effort put into it all, you literally made one pattern and copy + pasted it through the hole thing changes slight things like spacing.
02:13:957 - missing an obvious beat here
@ @ ill reconsider this place on the last icon mod
i'll stop here buteven in maps that are specifically made to be symmetrical, they are well thought out and well made, well this one... I feel not so much.
such a lack of effort. sorry.
and here's CanadianBaka trying to pop a bubble, when will he grow up.
thanks for mod! will reconsider some things on the qualification!