Like I promised you
[Gloom]
00:03:072 (1,4) - I'd advise switching NCs, only for the fact that the sound is really different. (6,1) still has the same sound, while (4) is a loud moan
00:03:586 (5,5) - Nazistack says hi
00:08:557 (1,4) - Same as above
00:22:957 (1,5,1,1,1) - I don't get the NC pattern here? First it's 8 beats, then 4 beats, then 2? Please make it all a NC on the 4 beats (the last one cas stay for SV change tho) (Same for the next part)
00:28:615 (2) - I don't hear any sound here... Either remove the finish, or the note itself to emphasize the lower intensity of the song
00:34:100 (2) - There is a really harsh sound here, increase the spacing by a lot
00:34:272 (3) - NC for the new sound (And to be consistent with 00:28:443 (1,2,1) -)
00:57:929 (1,2) - Don't get me wrong, but this plays absolutely awful... Please make it a 1/4 slider
01:17:643 (2,1) - The spacing between these 2 is way too low... The emphasis should be the same as 01:12:157 (2,1) - imo
01:28:872 (1) - I'd suggest you to end this on 01:31:272 to follow the ohhhhhh better
01:39:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I can not agree with you on this whole pattern. The SV is way too hard and it doesn't fit the song at all. The harsh sounds at 20 sec all have 0.2 SV, This is 7.5x faster, despite being much less intense. Please make it like this
It fits the song a lot more then the high SV
Also, all the timing points here are the same, just ditch them
01:53:472 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This reminds me of some HW style... Altough I love HW, this is one of the few patterns I hate from her... It's really unreadable since the movement is the same, but the timing differs constantly (From 1/1 to 1/2 to 1/1). I'd suggest making (2,3,4) slightly different (maybe a stack?) to increase readability
02:23:643 (1) - Why is there a kiai here? I understand it if you would give a fountain to 02:29:129 (1,2) - but having kiai all over the place it just weird, as the song isn't intensive at all imo. 02:34:615 (1) - Would fit much better as kiai
02:36:329 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This is a rTher big overmap. There is no 1/4 in the music, nor does the beat echo like some sort. Please make it like 02:19:529 (1,2,3) -
02:39:415 (5,6,7) - ^^
02:42:843 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'll be really harsh here - This is insanely ugly, albeit it only due to the fact that the overlaps are insane. If you could please increase the spacing a bit more, Scaling everything by 1.1 already works
02:44:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make the NCs consistent with 01:05:472 (1,2,1,2,3,4) -
02:49:357 (6,1) - Blanket?
03:12:672 (8,9,10) - Move 3px to the right for better symmetry
03:30:843 (1) - Start kiai here?
03:31:186 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same overmap issue
03:33:929 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^^
04:07:615 (2) - There is no sound here, remove the note
04:17:472 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - I had a lot of problems with this pattern. Please make (1,3) not be in the same line as (1,2). Something as 01:10:957 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - felt soooo much more confortable to play
04:28:443 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - ^^
04:46:957 (3) - This doesn't follow the rhythm. There is a strong sound at the blue tick, so I'd advice you to remove the reverse, and move it 1.4 later, and add a circle at 04:46:957
04:53:815 (6) - ^^
Okay, so I both like and dislike the map at the same time.
The symmetry is amazing, and I truly love it! It gets rid of the nowadays used patterns, and is something different. However, both aesthetically, hitsoundwise, NCwise and pattern wise & Overmapwise, this map needs more attention
[Gloom]
00:03:072 (1,4) - I'd advise switching NCs, only for the fact that the sound is really different. (6,1) still has the same sound, while (4) is a loud moan
00:03:586 (5,5) - Nazistack says hi
00:08:557 (1,4) - Same as above
00:22:957 (1,5,1,1,1) - I don't get the NC pattern here? First it's 8 beats, then 4 beats, then 2? Please make it all a NC on the 4 beats (the last one cas stay for SV change tho) (Same for the next part)
00:28:615 (2) - I don't hear any sound here... Either remove the finish, or the note itself to emphasize the lower intensity of the song
00:34:100 (2) - There is a really harsh sound here, increase the spacing by a lot
00:34:272 (3) - NC for the new sound (And to be consistent with 00:28:443 (1,2,1) -)
00:57:929 (1,2) - Don't get me wrong, but this plays absolutely awful... Please make it a 1/4 slider
01:17:643 (2,1) - The spacing between these 2 is way too low... The emphasis should be the same as 01:12:157 (2,1) - imo
01:28:872 (1) - I'd suggest you to end this on 01:31:272 to follow the ohhhhhh better
01:39:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I can not agree with you on this whole pattern. The SV is way too hard and it doesn't fit the song at all. The harsh sounds at 20 sec all have 0.2 SV, This is 7.5x faster, despite being much less intense. Please make it like this
It fits the song a lot more then the high SV
Also, all the timing points here are the same, just ditch them
01:53:472 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This reminds me of some HW style... Altough I love HW, this is one of the few patterns I hate from her... It's really unreadable since the movement is the same, but the timing differs constantly (From 1/1 to 1/2 to 1/1). I'd suggest making (2,3,4) slightly different (maybe a stack?) to increase readability
02:23:643 (1) - Why is there a kiai here? I understand it if you would give a fountain to 02:29:129 (1,2) - but having kiai all over the place it just weird, as the song isn't intensive at all imo. 02:34:615 (1) - Would fit much better as kiai
02:36:329 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This is a rTher big overmap. There is no 1/4 in the music, nor does the beat echo like some sort. Please make it like 02:19:529 (1,2,3) -
02:39:415 (5,6,7) - ^^
02:42:843 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'll be really harsh here - This is insanely ugly, albeit it only due to the fact that the overlaps are insane. If you could please increase the spacing a bit more, Scaling everything by 1.1 already works
02:44:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make the NCs consistent with 01:05:472 (1,2,1,2,3,4) -
02:49:357 (6,1) - Blanket?
03:12:672 (8,9,10) - Move 3px to the right for better symmetry
03:30:843 (1) - Start kiai here?
03:31:186 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same overmap issue
03:33:929 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^^
04:07:615 (2) - There is no sound here, remove the note
04:17:472 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - I had a lot of problems with this pattern. Please make (1,3) not be in the same line as (1,2). Something as 01:10:957 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - felt soooo much more confortable to play
04:28:443 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - ^^
04:46:957 (3) - This doesn't follow the rhythm. There is a strong sound at the blue tick, so I'd advice you to remove the reverse, and move it 1.4 later, and add a circle at 04:46:957
04:53:815 (6) - ^^
Okay, so I both like and dislike the map at the same time.
The symmetry is amazing, and I truly love it! It gets rid of the nowadays used patterns, and is something different. However, both aesthetically, hitsoundwise, NCwise and pattern wise & Overmapwise, this map needs more attention
- Aesthetics. While the symmetry is good, there are lots of bad overlaps (03:40:957 (3,7) - 03:41:472 (6,1) - 03:47:129 (7,1) - is a random example) all of which are there due to the symmetry. And I honestly prefer cleanliness over symmetry...
- Hitsounds. Don't ever use the drum sampleset w/o custom samples... That's it... NEXT
- NC. Lots of inconsistencies. Some parts (which seem to be copy pasted) even have different NCs... Also parts as 00:28:443 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3) - feel really weird. A 1 beat combo, a 7 beat combo, a 4 beat combo and then two 2 beat combos. It makes no sense, make it more consistent, so people know what to expect
- Patterns. Some patterns don't work out well. Often, aesthetics come with a loss of playability, which is definitely the case here, like in patterns as 01:53:472 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - (and others as mentioned) Please revise them carefully
- Overmap. Without a doubt the biggest issue in the map. There are many 1/4 which shouldn't be there )like 02:36:329 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - )
The music is 1/2, which can be made really interesting, but you go for 1/4 triplets. There is no sound at all on the blue ticks, so this should eb avoided on all costs. And by far the worst of all is 01:39:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - like I explained thourougly before
And then there a 3 overdone patterns. I removed those, and the SR of the map literally dropped a full *
01:26:043 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - I get that the intensity is increasing, but this is just ridiculous. Full screen jumps at 175 bpm are no joke
03:04:786 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1/8 sliderspams are really hard, esp. at a higher bpm and with such a high spacing. And why does the SV increase on 03:07:186 (5) - ??
04:32:557 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same as the first one