That is sorted then.Akareh wrote:
ティルナノーグ reads, literally, Tír na nÓg, which is a thing in Irish mythology https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tír_na_nÓg (and my diff name is a reference to the story, even!)
I can't submit diacritic marks on the BSS (or at least I always get an error if I try to use them, anyway). That's why the name doesn't have 'em. I can put them in the tags, though, and I've placed the correctly formated Tír na nÓg there, so shouldn't be problems I hope?
Land of youth is a somewhat literal translation of what Tír na nÓg means, but yeah, the japanese actually reads like the irish name.
Here is my mod, as requested.
[niamh]
00:32:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - since there are strong sounds on both white and red ticks here you are missing quite a lot of emphasis. (probably best to put a lot more toned down jumps than in the example xd)
00:51:435 (1,2) - the massive jump distance between these makes the jump feel a bit "floaty". is it possible for you to move these 00:51:254 (8,1) - in a way that the distance between 00:51:435 (1,2) - would be around 2.5x?
00:52:526 (1) - how about having a slight sv increase for this slider ( 00:48:163 (1,1) - to somewhat mirror the effect of these) you could also increase the spacing of these 00:52:890 (2,3,4) - a bit and then have the speed diminish here (like you already do)
01:17:981 (5,6) - might want to try ctrl + g on both of these since there isn't 3 sounds like in the pattern before (unless you just want it to mirror the other pattern)
01:45:981 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the stream jumps in these feel pretty awkward. I'd prefer if you made them flow into each other more naturarly
02:38:617 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - in my opinion something like this would fit the drum better
02:44:890 (4,5,6) - consider the same as 01:17:981 (5,6) - (making it into circular flow)
02:53:617 (4,5,6) - how about slightly increased sv for these three?
02:56:163 (5) - there's a strong sound on both the white and red here too
03:13:254 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - *stream jump explanation* (if you were to use the same pattern I used you could make it blanket the slider)
03:24:890 (6) - minor aesthetic thing here: you could make these 03:24:890 (6,1) - go side by side and then do the same for these 03:25:981 (3,4) - . you already have something similar going on here
03:50:163 (3,4) - blanket is slightly off /me runs
03:58:708 (4,1) - same here ^
04:34:435 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - best to just keep this one withount stream jumps. it's pretty similar to 04:30:345 (5,6,7,8) - but it's a bit more intense (after all, these are not actually in the song but only there to build up emphasis so better keep them a bit more toned up)
04:40:526 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - *stream jump explanation*
00:32:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - since there are strong sounds on both white and red ticks here you are missing quite a lot of emphasis. (probably best to put a lot more toned down jumps than in the example xd)
00:51:435 (1,2) - the massive jump distance between these makes the jump feel a bit "floaty". is it possible for you to move these 00:51:254 (8,1) - in a way that the distance between 00:51:435 (1,2) - would be around 2.5x?
00:52:526 (1) - how about having a slight sv increase for this slider ( 00:48:163 (1,1) - to somewhat mirror the effect of these) you could also increase the spacing of these 00:52:890 (2,3,4) - a bit and then have the speed diminish here (like you already do)
01:17:981 (5,6) - might want to try ctrl + g on both of these since there isn't 3 sounds like in the pattern before (unless you just want it to mirror the other pattern)
01:45:981 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the stream jumps in these feel pretty awkward. I'd prefer if you made them flow into each other more naturarly
02:38:617 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - in my opinion something like this would fit the drum better
02:44:890 (4,5,6) - consider the same as 01:17:981 (5,6) - (making it into circular flow)
02:53:617 (4,5,6) - how about slightly increased sv for these three?
02:56:163 (5) - there's a strong sound on both the white and red here too
03:13:254 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - *stream jump explanation* (if you were to use the same pattern I used you could make it blanket the slider)
03:24:890 (6) - minor aesthetic thing here: you could make these 03:24:890 (6,1) - go side by side and then do the same for these 03:25:981 (3,4) - . you already have something similar going on here
03:50:163 (3,4) - blanket is slightly off /me runs
03:58:708 (4,1) - same here ^
04:34:435 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - best to just keep this one withount stream jumps. it's pretty similar to 04:30:345 (5,6,7,8) - but it's a bit more intense (after all, these are not actually in the song but only there to build up emphasis so better keep them a bit more toned up)
04:40:526 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - *stream jump explanation*
I hope you keep working this to perfection ^w^/
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