00:09:617 (7,1,2,3,4) - aesthetically this doesnt look really pretty to me (also this falls apart of your previous style imo)
I guess? I've been looking at it and trying some things for a good hour and I don't really have a clue what to do with those, I guess I'll wait on some feedback? I think they're fine as is though.00:14:526 (5,6) - make same DS between those like 00:13:981 (3,4)
yep00:25:254 (4,5,1) - DS issue
between 4, 5 and 1? It's just 0'3x and it's due to grid alignment, I can't really fix it but it shouldn't be a problem? Maybe?00:50:345 (1) - how about making this a 1/2 slider to the next red beat and make the stream follow after, it plays really nice and the special sounds gets more emphasized with that slider
I'd like to, but I can't for the love of me find a way to change that into a slider and not make the pattern between 00:50:163 (3,2) look bad. I really like the next pattern, so I can't really move that stream, and I think all the back and forth I'd have to make there to fit a slider wouldn't really be worth it tbh. 00:51:617 (2,3,4) - since there are relatively high jumps before that it would feel more pleasant if you make this like
http://puu.sh/q1Bh4/07dac31b2d.jpg (the flow is just much better in that version imo)
Nope. For one I really like the way that pattern looks and plays, plus 00:52:345 (6) would look really confusing if I change that and I really don't have a good place to get that and not break the jump and flow to 00:52:526 (1)01:01:072 (8,1) - idk this is a very personal suggestion but with some reason it sounds better if you stack those two objects
Nah, it's a really calm part and I couldn't really justify a jump from 01:00:890 (7) here 01:07:072 (6,7,8) - another very personal suggestion: making these in a stream line instead of being stacked fits better to the music right there. I cant really explain why with my noob english but maybe you just give it a try (like its different from 01:09:435 (2,3,4) - . stacking here sounds better....)
I guess?01:11:072 - to 01:12:163 - maybe consider making the hitsound volume not directly at 40% which is represented in the kiai time (here its not the kiai, its like the intro of the kiai). for me it would make sense to make it a little bit quiter before the actual kiai starts, so the jump from 15% to 40% doesnt feel so sudden
sure, 30% seems fine02:38:345 - to 02:39:435 - ^ (before every kiai)
Changed before every kiai except here, since drums don't really sound that high and hitsounds fit better if they're a bit stronger here IMO01:16:163 (1,3) - blanket them maybe and make a cleaner pattern with the other objects around there
Blanketed, pattern seems fine to me, though?01:35:981 (1,1) - i feel like those 2 objects have to be closer since its 1/4 mapped (like 01:44:708 (1,1) - but honestly making this pattern as an overlap would feel better imo)
nah, it's okay02:38:345 (1) - make this slider flow into the stream, feels more pleasant imo
http://puu.sh/q1C5l/01804ec674.jpg sure03:29:617 (3) - make this symmetrcial
should be now04:21:981 (5,6,7) - imagine this 3 objects would be in a same slider, so you can make it flow better (looks also beautiful) ->
http://puu.sh/q1Cv5/b9a35ec070.jpg oooh, nicehmm... just a note here: 04:34:435 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - or 04:40:526 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - and so on... I dont really know but those "stream jumps" feel a bit too much for this difficulty, they just feel really apart from the map.