from my queue sorry I was like 9 days late
L0L?
00:15:981 (2,3,4,5) - I don't think this flow really matches the song or the flow you've already been mapping with. I would recommend something like this:
00:19:617 (7,1) - This jump bothers me I'm not sure why.
00:50:345 (1,1) - NC's are very weird throughout this section, and if you're not going to change it, please tell me why.
01:20:708 (8,1) - This bothers me. First of all, distance is a huge amount, larger than I think would be necessary. Second, again, it's not very consistent with flow. It's a triangle which you really didn't use many of before. (Or at least that I noticed) Try something that feels more snappy than a triangle.
01:45:981 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This is a hard decision tbh. I could say that it's stupid to put stream jumps here since you never indicated to the player the map would be this way, but then again there isn't really much before this part that you could change to show the player so... I don't know. Make your decision, personally I would recommend to remove the stream but tbh it's not too important. (Also this applies to the other streams with jumps in them)
02:09:981 (4) - This slider should really be moving upward if you want to remain consistent with your flow. If you look at the other sliders that are on notes like this, they always go the opposite direction of the previous slider, so you should do that with this one.
02:34:617 () - There is a very slight guitar sound here, not sure if you want to map it or not. If you do, you probably should use a slider that ends on this point.
02:36:890 (6) - I don't think dropoff flow is a good think here.
03:49:072 (4,1) - I don't like this jump at all.
04:26:890 (2) - That's awfully close.
05:22:890 (1) - This possibly could be in a different timing section.
L0L?
00:15:981 (2,3,4,5) - I don't think this flow really matches the song or the flow you've already been mapping with. I would recommend something like this:
00:19:617 (7,1) - This jump bothers me I'm not sure why.
00:50:345 (1,1) - NC's are very weird throughout this section, and if you're not going to change it, please tell me why.
01:20:708 (8,1) - This bothers me. First of all, distance is a huge amount, larger than I think would be necessary. Second, again, it's not very consistent with flow. It's a triangle which you really didn't use many of before. (Or at least that I noticed) Try something that feels more snappy than a triangle.
01:45:981 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This is a hard decision tbh. I could say that it's stupid to put stream jumps here since you never indicated to the player the map would be this way, but then again there isn't really much before this part that you could change to show the player so... I don't know. Make your decision, personally I would recommend to remove the stream but tbh it's not too important. (Also this applies to the other streams with jumps in them)
02:09:981 (4) - This slider should really be moving upward if you want to remain consistent with your flow. If you look at the other sliders that are on notes like this, they always go the opposite direction of the previous slider, so you should do that with this one.
02:34:617 () - There is a very slight guitar sound here, not sure if you want to map it or not. If you do, you probably should use a slider that ends on this point.
02:36:890 (6) - I don't think dropoff flow is a good think here.
03:49:072 (4,1) - I don't like this jump at all.
04:26:890 (2) - That's awfully close.
05:22:890 (1) - This possibly could be in a different timing section.