Thank you And sorry I took so long to answer this.Rapthorn wrote:
GeneralTook me like 3 minutes before i realized it was cirnos theme Cute. Took me like 3 full listens.
- Streamjumps in a 4.5 star map the absolute madman told you I liked to live dangerously when I requested the mod, didn't I? xDDD
- Sadly there's quite a lot of overmapping going on, and not the good kind
- I really like the map and i think you could rank it but the overmapping needs to go
The mod seems a lot harsher than it actually is, its mainly pointing out the streams. I definitely think this could be your first ranked map if you remove the overmapping. Good luck <3
- 00:48:890 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - if you could make this even spacing between the notes so it looks nice and stuff that'd be great fixed, I think?
- 01:18:708 (1,2) - you're undermapping a triple here, and from what i gather the 2 follows the drums since there's no flute, so mapping it would be justified imo. you also map this 01:20:345 (5,6,7) - triple a second later, which makes ignoring the first one questionable. sure, changed on all instances where this repeats
- 01:41:617 (4) - Not sure if i agree with having the sliderend cover such a strong beat. Id rather see the slider be 1/2 and have 4 jumps instead. sure I guess
- 03:08:890 (4) - almost exactly the same lol ^
- Taking a closer look at it you copied a lot 03:08:890 (4,1,2,4,5,6) - between here and 01:42:708 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - for example. Come on dude. You're better than that. Get off your ass and map a new section, its boring but copying just to save time is not cool. The map quality suffers for no good reason. I only copied a pattern, but I guess it was kinda lazy yeah. Remapped that.
- 01:45:981 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - look man i love jumpstreams, and i love that you have the balls to map them in a 4.5 star map, but there's just nothing justifying the jump, the 1/8 piano thing starts at 01:46:526 (3) - , not 01:46:708 (1) - , there's no sound on 01:46:072 (2) - and 01:46:435 (2) - and not an ongoing beat explaining the 9 note stream. Id just remake it into a jump + triple into the 1/8 slider. Sorry. I'm an absolute madman for no longer
- 02:00:163 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Does this combo really need to be 8 notes? you could put an NC at 02:01:072 (4) - or something. fixed
- 02:11:799 (3,4) - I hear a sound for a triple here, but not 02:12:435 (5,6) - here? You could keep the same intensity by just switching them around without making it overmapping. But then again maybe i just cant hear the triple. nope, I fucked up here
- 02:38:617 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Same as my last point about the stream. There's really no way to justify this being the hardest part of the map or a continuous sound for a stream at all and it hurts to say because they're really charming Fixed
- Skipped modding the part that was basically copying
- 03:13:254 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Stream issue again :/ hai hai
- 03:36:163 (1,3) - muh ocd line them up properly ocd'd
- 04:32:890 (1) - This could be moved around and straightend out a bit or so to blanket the 2 better The idea was to blanket with 3, 2 is just there because flow
- 04:34:435 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - you know. and even if you're going to justify it with the violin, it changes tone at 04:34:798 (2) - , not 04:34:708 (1) - , so that needs to be changed either way. I highly reccommend removing the stream for something else though. It doesnt fit the intensity either. Fixed
- 04:40:526 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ---- yep
- 05:07:436 (1,2,3,4,1) - As an example, this stream here is at least somewhat justified because there's a very loud continuous violin sound. the jumpstreams dont have that.
Edit: if you want to discuss the streamjumps i have time for another hour or so, then ill be gone for a while