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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 20 de mayo de 2017 at 22:51:46

Artist: Yonder Voice
Title: Setsugen Tir na nOg off vocal
Source: 東方紅魔郷 ~ the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil.
Tags: LEMiao Himmel tengoku おてんば恋娘 Beloved Tomboyish Girl Tír nÓg Touhou Project 東方Project ZUN comiket 89 c89 ethnic celtic world
BPM: 165
Filesize: 11043kb
Play Time: 05:22
Difficulties Available:
  1. Niamh (4,42 stars, 971 notes)


Download: Yonder Voice - Setsugen Tir na nOg off vocal
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First approved/ranked beatmap.
Thank you to everyone who was involved/helped make this come true.
Enjoy!

Special thanks to GameOverEsp, FusingBlaze8 and DiNaMiiC for playtesting. Also huge thanks to IamKwaN for the metadata check.
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Hiya!, from my queue~

Nice, I'm the first modder :o

I thought earlier today i gave a bigger mod than this, turns out i was wrong :\/

  • 00:10:163 (2,3,4) - Spacing fix here

    00:52:526 (7,8,9,10) - I would NC here

    01:02:890 (5,6,7) - ^, seeing as it would visualize the 3 chords a lot better

    01:07:254 (8) - Triplet you're trying to map before this starts here, just FYI,

    01:15:435 (4,5) - Blanket this

    01:35:981 (1,1) - You'd be better off mapping a triplet here instead of a kickslider

    02:12:890 (8,9,10,11,1) - NC

    02:39:435 (1) - Remove NC here

    02:43:072 (5,1) - Make sure you have these perfectly overlapped, doesn't look good if they aren't

    02:43:072 (5,1) - Same note about the overlapping

    03:11:981 (1) - Triplet here

    03:13:890 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sound more like the song if you put a 1/8 buzz slider there

    03:40:163 (8,9,10,11,1) - NC

    03:48:527 (7,8,9,10,11) - ^

    03:56:890 (10) - ^^^

    04:07:799 (3,1) - Overlap looks ugly

    04:13:981 (3,4) - Overlap this so its perfect

    04:23:072 (8,9,10,11) - Blanket 10 and NC on 9

    04:27:799 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - NCCCCCCCC

    04:32:890 (1,2) - Blanket

    04:37:981 (2) - Ctrl + H, looks better.

    04:43:435 (7) - ENN SEE (new combo)

    04:48:163 (7) - N E W C O M B O - O - O - O - O - O - O - O - O - O

    04:49:617 (10,11) - Around here you can here the buzz piano again, i would map that if i were you

    05:19:799 (4,5,6) - I would space these

    05:22:890 (1) - Kreygasm



Aesthetically, this map looks SWEEET, and the hitsounds are so amazing!!, good luck :D
posted

FoxyGrandpa wrote:

Hiya!, from my queue~

Nice, I'm the first modder :o

I thought earlier today i gave a bigger mod than this, turns out i was wrong :\/

  • 00:10:163 (2,3,4) - Spacing fix here sure

    00:52:526 (7,8,9,10) - I would NC here yep

    01:02:890 (5,6,7) - ^, seeing as it would visualize the 3 chords a lot better yep

    01:07:254 (8) - Triplet you're trying to map before this starts here, just FYI, I'm actually going for the guitar here since I think it's more prominent on the song. I'll maybe extend this stream until 01:07:435 so I cover both things, but I dunno. I'll wait for some more feedback on this.

    01:15:435 (4,5) - Blanket this
    Nope. If I change 4's shape I break the flow from 01:15:072 (3) and if I move 5 the jump to 01:16:163 (1) becomes way too huge. I also don't think I need to blanket that?

    01:35:981 (1,1) - You'd be better off mapping a triplet here instead of a kickslider Why? The jump fits and it adds a nice variety to the map IMO since they're not used anywhere else.

    02:12:890 (8,9,10,11,1) - NC yep

    02:39:435 (1) - Remove NC here sure

    02:43:072 (5,1) - Make sure you have these perfectly overlapped, doesn't look good if they aren't yep

    02:43:072 (5,1) - Same note about the overlapping uh... again?

    03:11:981 (1) - Triplet here Nope, same reasons as above.

    03:13:890 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sound more like the song if you put a 1/8 buzz slider there yep

    03:40:163 (8,9,10,11,1) - NC yep

    03:48:527 (7,8,9,10,11) - ^yep

    03:56:890 (10) - ^^^ NC for just one note? I'll wait for more feedback.

    04:07:799 (3,1) - Overlap looks ugly fixed?

    04:13:981 (3,4) - Overlap this so its perfect those two are fine?

    04:23:072 (8,9,10,11) - Blanket 10 and NC on 9 Nope. If I blanket 10, the jump between 9 an 11 becomes way to uneven.NC I change, however.

    04:27:799 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - NCCCCCCCC yep

    04:32:890 (1,2) - Blanket Jump becomes inconsistent to 3. Also I wanted to blanket with 3, not really 2 here.

    04:37:981 (2) - Ctrl + H, looks better. Plays better as it is IMO

    04:43:435 (7) - ENN SEE (new combo) Y E S

    04:48:163 (7) - N E W C O M B O - O - O - O - O - O - O - O - O - O yep

    04:49:617 (10,11) - Around here you can here the buzz piano again, i would map that if i were you yep

    05:19:799 (4,5,6) - I would space these Nah, plays fine and fits since the song is slowing to fade.

    05:22:890 (1) - Kreygasm Kappa



Aesthetically, this map looks SWEEET, and the hitsounds are so amazing!!, good luck :D
Thanks for your mod :)
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00:09:617 (7) - Tilt this slider downwards slightly and shift 00:10:345 (4) this slider a bit to the right and it should flow much better

Other than that there isn't much to be concerned about (At least from my point of view)
posted

zeka wrote:

00:09:617 (7) - Tilt this slider downwards slightly and shift 00:10:345 (4) this slider a bit to the right and it should flow much better

Other than that there isn't much to be concerned about (At least from my point of view)
Fixed both :D
posted
Hello! NM form queues

NC = New combo
SR = Slider
CR = Cricle


Niamh

00:12:708 (6) - remove CR
00:13:799 (2) - ^
00:15:254 (7) - ^^
01:00:708 (5,6,7) - SR?

01:06:890 (5,6,7,8) -

01:11:072 (1) -

01:35:981 (1) -

01:37:617 (7,8) -

02:33:617 (4) -

02:36:617 (5,8) - remove CR
03:09:618 (6,7) - SR?
03:47:981 (4) - add NC
03:48:527 (1) - remove NC
03:48:708 (5) - add NC
03:48:799 (3) - remove CR
04:00:708 (7) - ^
04:02:890 (6,7,8) -

04:08:526 - add CR
04:08:708 - ^
04:15:254 (7) - remove CR
04:19:617 (5) - ^
04:22:708 (7) -

04:27:889 (2,4,6,8) - remove CR
05:16:072 (4) - ^


Good luck!
posted

MouseEz wrote:

Hello! NM form queues

NC = New combo
SR = Slider
CR = Cricle


Niamh

00:12:708 (6) - remove CR nope, follows violin
00:13:799 (2) - ^ ^
00:15:254 (7) - ^^ Nope, there's even a strong piano sound here plus the violin!
01:00:708 (5,6,7) - SR? theres a triplet on the cimbals there

01:06:890 (5,6,7,8) - mapping to the guitar, since it's more prominent here than the drums IMO

01:11:072 (1) - That's not what the drum does?

01:35:981 (1) - There's a definite note at 01:36:072. At best I could change this into a stream.

01:37:617 (7,8) - Drum goes at both 01:37:799 and 01:38:163

02:33:617 (4) - flows and plays better as a slider IMO

02:36:617 (5,8) - remove CR rhythm there was strange, should be better now. 5 is staying where it is because there is a guitar sound there quite audible.
03:09:618 (6,7) - SR? Jumps fit perfectly there, though
03:47:981 (4) - add NC NC for 3 notes isn't really worth IMO, plus...
03:48:527 (1) - remove NCit's better to start the NC here since this one's in a white tick
03:48:708 (5) - add NC again, not really worth for 2 notes.
03:48:799 (3) - remove CR sure, played a bit with the pattern as well
04:00:708 (7) - ^ ^
04:02:890 (6,7,8) - nope

04:08:526 - add CR Slider, but yes
04:08:708 - ^ ^
04:15:254 (7) - remove CR nope
04:19:617 (5) - ^ yep
04:22:708 (7) - nope

04:27:889 (2,4,6,8) - remove CRyep
05:16:072 (4) - ^ nope, there's a triplet there


Good luck!
Thanks ~ updated
posted
yo from my qe

00:04:526 (4) - nc and fix overlap pls 00:03:435 (2,4) -
00:10:708 (1,2) - Unnecessary NC
00:20:890 (4) - nc
00:40:526 (9) - ^
00:44:526 (8) - ^
01:08:890 (4) - ^
01:56:890 (4) - ^
01:59:072 (4) - ^
02:01:617 (1,2) - remove nc
02:02:345 (3) - nc
03:51:435 (6) - nc
03:54:708 (8) - ^
03:56:890 (10) - ^
03:59:072 (5) - ^
04:02:345 (4) - ^
04:03:435 (9) - ^

Good luck!
posted

SherryCherry wrote:

yo from my qe

00:04:526 (4) - nc and fix overlap pls 00:03:435 (2,4) -
00:10:708 (1,2) - Unnecessary NC
00:20:890 (4) - nc
00:40:526 (9) - ^
00:44:526 (8) - ^
01:08:890 (4) - ^
01:56:890 (4) - ^
01:59:072 (4) - ^
02:01:617 (1,2) - remove nc
02:02:345 (3) - nc
03:51:435 (6) - nc
03:54:708 (8) - ^
03:56:890 (10) - ^
03:59:072 (5) - ^
04:02:345 (4) - ^
04:03:435 (9) - ^

Good luck!
All fixed, thanks! :)
posted
Hey for my modding queue for NM!

00:11:617 (2,3,4) - I'd reverse 2 and 3 and move them to make the path look smooth, this is fine though
00:22:708 (2,4) - not quite perfectly blanketted but it's minor
01:02:890 (1,2,3,1) - move 3 for better rounding
01:29:254 (6,1,2) - ocd sense tell me alignment here
01:30:163 (2,3) - and here
01:45:981 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - why is this not a continuous stream? I don't think it really fits the music as well as a simple stream
02:38:617 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - again
03:13:254 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - again
04:33:981 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
04:40:526 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
04:58:526 (4,5,6,7,8) - fast for insane but I guess it's good for the music

LOVE the map a LOT. Don't mind my picky comments too much, I found little to say :p I don't find the streamjumps were fitting though, but they're well mapped and flow nicely, so you could keep them, reconsider only if more people mention it. I really hope this gets ranked, it's such a fun map :D
posted

lazyboy007 wrote:

Hey for my modding queue for NM!

00:11:617 (2,3,4) - I'd reverse 2 and 3 and move them to make the path look smooth, this is fine though It would look better I guess, but I think the back and forth here fits and is more interesting to play IMO
00:22:708 (2,4) - not quite perfectly blanketted but it's minor There's always that blanket that ends up wrong >.> Should be fine now, I think.
01:02:890 (1,2,3,1) - move 3 for better rounding Did something different here to fix this, since a simple curve wasn't interesting enough for me. I think it also fits quite nicely with the next section and the map as a whole.
01:29:254 (6,1,2) - ocd sense tell me alignment here I... think I don't know what you mean by "alignment" :| I rotated 6 a bit though, I think you meant that?
01:30:163 (2,3) - and here same as ^
01:45:981 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - why is this not a continuous stream? I don't think it really fits the music as well as a simple stream
02:38:617 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - again
03:13:254 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - again
04:33:981 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
04:40:526 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
04:58:526 (4,5,6,7,8) - fast for insane but I guess it's good for the music I may change this for a repeat slider (like the one at 01:46:708) if someone else mentions it. This is repeated from 02:03:981 and follows the bell-like sound in the instrumental :D

LOVE the map a LOT. Don't mind my picky comments too much, I found little to say :p I don't find the streamjumps were fitting though, but they're well mapped and flow nicely, so you could keep them, reconsider only if more people mention it. I really hope this gets ranked, it's such a fun map :D
I used the streamjumps mostly because I thought long streams on all of those sections were kinda boring for me while testplaying. I'm not sure if they fit, and I wouldn't necessarily be against changing them back if need be, but I think they play great as they are and are a fun way to add some difficulty to a kinda easy map :)

Thanks a lot for your mod! And glad that you liked the map so much :)
I also hope to rank this, but so far I haven't had any luck with my mapsets so... :(

Updated!
posted
Yes when I said alignment I did mean rotate a little :)

And well streams in 1/6 are not usual for insane diffs ^^
posted
Hiya! Como te dije, te dejo por aquí un pequeño mod. No hay muchas pegas que poner, es un mapa bastante agradable de jugar; pero he leído por ahí que tienes intención de rankearlo así que te comento (la mayoría son cosas que ya te han dicho).

1º Con respecto al uso de los streams espaciados:
No estoy en contra del uso que les das, de hecho algunos me parecen que pegan mucho más que un stream continuo, pero hay algunos ángulos bastante incómodos que supondrían CB seguro para el 80% de la gente que vaya a jugar este mapa si se rankea, en concreto:

01:45:981 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - este es (para mí) el más incómodo de jugar. Tal vez estaría bien rotar un poco los primeros 4 o reducir el espaciado. Te dejo aquí una alternativa que he probado que me resulta un poco más fácil (solo para hacerte una idea, seguramente puedes hacer algo mejor).

02:38:890 (1,2,3,4) - este forma parte de uno de los streams espaciados que más me gustaron del mapa, pero quizá lo subiría un poco para facilitar la conexión con los streams que le rodean

El resto no los he fallado en el primer intento y los veo adecuados.

2º Con respecto a los streams rápidos como 04:58:526 (4,5,6,7,8) -
Son bastante rápidos para un mapa tan suave y los cambiaría por sliders repetidos, creo que este pattern sería el mayor problema si lo intentas llevar a ranked. Si aun así no quieres cambiarlos, al menos este 02:03:981 (4,5,6,7,8) - lo cambiaría por algo así porque es un poco dificil de leer en esa posición estando montados uno encima del otro. En cuanto a 04:58:526 (4,5,6,7,8) - lo leo bastante mejor.

3º Otras cosas sin mucha importancia

01:35:981 (1) - 01:44:708 (1) - 03:03:254 (1) - 03:11:981 (1) - lo de poner NC en este tipo de slider tiene algún motivo? es curiosidad, más que nada :')

Dicho esto, buen trabajo con este beatmap (el uso que has hecho de los hitsounds es sublime) y espero que lo puedas rankear pronto. Suerte!
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tsugi wrote:

Hiya! Como te dije, te dejo por aquí un pequeño mod. No hay muchas pegas que poner, es un mapa bastante agradable de jugar; pero he leído por ahí que tienes intención de rankearlo así que te comento (la mayoría son cosas que ya te han dicho).

1º Con respecto al uso de los streams espaciados:
No estoy en contra del uso que les das, de hecho algunos me parecen que pegan mucho más que un stream continuo, pero hay algunos ángulos bastante incómodos que supondrían CB seguro para el 80% de la gente que vaya a jugar este mapa si se rankea, en concreto:

01:45:981 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - este es (para mí) el más incómodo de jugar. Tal vez estaría bien rotar un poco los primeros 4 o reducir el espaciado. Te dejo aquí una alternativa que he probado que me resulta un poco más fácil (solo para hacerte una idea, seguramente puedes hacer algo mejor). Lo he intentado arreglar de otra forma, aunque la verdad, no sé si lo he empeorado xDDD Creo que el problema estaba sobre todo en que el salto entre 01:46:254 (4,1) y 01:46:617 (4,1) era algo inconsistente, ahora debería ser un salto más uniforme... espero?

02:38:890 (1,2,3,4) - este forma parte de uno de los streams espaciados que más me gustaron del mapa, pero quizá lo subiría un poco para facilitar la conexión con los streams que le rodean Pues es curioso, porque el stream del medio tenía un DS que no era uniforme. Arreglado y subido un poquito hacia arriba, debería fluir algo mejor.

El resto no los he fallado en el primer intento y los veo adecuados.

2º Con respecto a los streams rápidos como 04:58:526 (4,5,6,7,8) -
Son bastante rápidos para un mapa tan suave y los cambiaría por sliders repetidos, creo que este pattern sería el mayor problema si lo intentas llevar a ranked. Si aun así no quieres cambiarlos, al menos este 02:03:981 (4,5,6,7,8) - lo cambiaría por algo así porque es un poco dificil de leer en esa posición estando montados uno encima del otro. En cuanto a 04:58:526 (4,5,6,7,8) - lo leo bastante mejor.


He cambiado ambos por sliders repetidos, porque, seamos sinceros, ni siquiera yo que lo he mapeado pillaba bien el ritmo a esos streams xDDD El problema de hacer esos sliders es que soy incapaz de hacer que quieden bien en un pattern porque me falta experiencia con ellos. De momento, tho, hay un apaño majete, pero espero que alguien me pueda echar un cable con eso :o

3º Otras cosas sin mucha importancia
01:35:981 (1) - 01:44:708 (1) - 03:03:254 (1) - 03:11:981 (1) - lo de poner NC en este tipo de slider tiene algún motivo? es curiosidad, más que nada :') Los añadí por si acaso el jump, al solo usarse en esas partes y ser algo repentino sin mucha anticipación, no se lograba leer bien por alguna razón. Especialmente, más que nada por los de 01:35:981 (1) y 03:03:254 (1), y luego los otros dos ya más por temas de consistencia de NCs que otra cosa.

Dicho esto, buen trabajo con este beatmap (el uso que has hecho de los hitsounds es sublime) y espero que lo puedas rankear pronto. Suerte!
¡Gracias por el mod!

Curioso que todo el mundo me felicite por los hitsounds cuando es una de las cosas que más problemas me ha dado siempre a la hora de hacer maps (y algo que odio hacer) xDDD
posted
Hi from my Queue

i dont mod insane but i want try at least help with simple things ^.^


Niamh

00:05:254 - i think its better if u make this note clickable something likethis
00:35:072 (1,2) - not really necessary i dont hear any beat that flow with that add a spinner maybe from here 00:35:072 - to 00:36:890 - i think it will fit fine
01:20:526 (7,8) - why big jump here nothing to emphasize maybe shorten the distance but make sure this stayes a jump 01:20:708 (8,1) - to emphasize that strong beat
01:24:163 (4,8) - stack
01:29:254 (6) - cntl-g
01:29:617 (1) - can space this from the presvious slider to emphasize the strong uncoming beat
01:37:617 (7,8,1) - wierd flow 01:37:981 (8) - ctrl-g maybe
01:46:254 (4,1) - this stream jump can be so confusing i think 01:45:981 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - keep them all equal spacing would be better
01:50:708 (5) - ctrl-g its kinda dull flow when all sliders goes in same directions
02:00:345 (2) - this maybe overmapped i dont hear anything there
02:32:890 (3,4) - fix blanket
02:47:072 (4) - nc
03:13:527 (4,1) - same thing about earlier its hard to read i wont mention them anymore04:34:616 (3,1) -
03:21:617 (6) - nc
03:32:163 (2) - x392 y168
04:15:435 (1,4) - stack
05:17:617 (2) - x440 y336
nice song so calm ^.^


Good luck :)
posted

Lilyanna wrote:

Hi from my Queue

i dont mod insane but i want try at least help with simple things ^.^


Niamh

00:05:254 - i think its better if u make this note clickable something likethis I can't really end the slider at 00:05:072 though, there are no sounds there
00:35:072 (1,2) - not really necessary i dont hear any beat that flow with that add a spinner maybe from here 00:35:072 - to 00:36:890 - i think it will fit fine There's a drum sound there, which is what I'm mapping :)
01:20:526 (7,8) - why big jump here nothing to emphasize maybe shorten the distance but make sure this stayes a jump 01:20:708 (8,1) - to emphasize that strong beat I felt a jump fit there, since rhythm kinda "resets" IMO. It's big mostly because of aesthetic reasons, but I'll consider shortening if someone else points this
01:24:163 (4,8) - stack yep
01:29:254 (6) - cntl-g nope, it's a nice pattern
01:29:617 (1) - can space this from the presvious slider to emphasize the strong uncoming beat Song slows down there, though. I don't think a jump would be wise here
01:37:617 (7,8,1) - wierd flow 01:37:981 (8) - ctrl-g maybe Intentional, since that's the jumpy part
01:46:254 (4,1) - this stream jump can be so confusing i think 01:45:981 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - keep them all equal spacing would be better Will consider, not changing now though
01:50:708 (5) - ctrl-g its kinda dull flow when all sliders goes in same directions Intentional, rhythm is calm so flow is also calm. Jump here wouldn't fit, and would also be confusing with 01:51:072 (6,1) right next
02:00:345 (2) - this maybe overmapped i dont hear anything there flute
02:32:890 (3,4) - fix blanket yep
02:47:072 (4) - nc yep
03:13:527 (4,1) - same thing about earlier its hard to read i wont mention them anymore04:34:616 (3,1) - same as before
03:21:617 (6) - nc yep
03:32:163 (2) - x392 y168 sure
04:15:435 (1,4) - stack sure
05:17:617 (2) - x440 y336 fixed, but not at those coordinates
nice song so calm ^.^
Thank you! :)
posted
Hello o/ from #modreqs.I suck at modding so don't blame me :c
Niamh

00:24:163 (1,3,4) - blanket those 3 a bit better
01:08:890 (1) - delete NC?
01:16:163 (1) - ^
01:16:526 (2) - NC
01:47:072 - from here u were using a NC every 2 big white ticks, but then 01:51:435 - here u start using every 1 tick, and then again 01:53:617 (1) - two ticks. I suggest you to be consistent in this section with the NC.
02:21:799 (9,1) - maybe a minijump between those?
02:42:708 (4) - ctrl g for better flow?
04:14:708 (4,5) - ctrl g?
04:25:072 - I don't hear a triplet here in the music, so I suggest you to make 04:24:890 (3) - this a slider and delete 04:25:072 (4,5) - those.
04:31:981 (4,5,6) - same as above, maybe delete this 04:32:072 (5) - single note.
04:36:799 (5) - ^
04:44:890 (4) - I think you shouldn't make this a slider reverse, making these 04:45:254 - 04:45:435 - 04:45:617 - clickable would fit better imo.
04:52:526 (5) - NC
04:53:617 (7,8,9,10) - make this section like 04:52:526 (5,6) - with just 2 sliders, it fits better imo.
05:15:800 (2,3,4,5,6) - make these into some minijumps?

In general the diffs is very good, however in some parts of the non-kiai sections you added some triplets where there's no sound of it in the music, I did not mention all but maybe u should check them. Also there are some inconsistency in the NC sometimes, but not a big issue.

Also, I heard the hitsounds and they sound pretty bad imo, maybe you should check them out because it feels like the claps are a little bit random (i mean not that random but maybe some consistency would be better)

That's all, I hope it helps. Good luck :)
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Heyo!! #makemodreqsgreatagain
Im little new to this still but I give you my suggestions! :D

00:09:617 (7,1,2,3,4) - aesthetically this doesnt look really pretty to me (also this falls apart of your previous style imo)
00:14:526 (5,6) - make same DS between those like 00:13:981 (3,4) -
00:25:254 (4,5,1) - DS issue
00:50:345 (1) - how about making this a 1/2 slider to the next red beat and make the stream follow after, it plays really nice and the special sounds gets more emphasized with that slider
00:51:617 (2,3,4) - since there are relatively high jumps before that it would feel more pleasant if you make this like http://puu.sh/q1Bh4/07dac31b2d.jpg (the flow is just much better in that version imo)
01:01:072 (8,1) - idk this is a very personal suggestion but with some reason it sounds better if you stack those two objects
01:07:072 (6,7,8) - another very personal suggestion: making these in a stream line instead of being stacked fits better to the music right there. I cant really explain why with my noob english but maybe you just give it a try (like its different from 01:09:435 (2,3,4) - . stacking here sounds better....)
01:11:072 - to 01:12:163 - maybe consider making the hitsound volume not directly at 40% which is represented in the kiai time (here its not the kiai, its like the intro of the kiai). for me it would make sense to make it a little bit quiter before the actual kiai starts, so the jump from 15% to 40% doesnt feel so sudden
02:38:345 - to 02:39:435 - ^ (before every kiai)
01:16:163 (1,3) - blanket them maybe and make a cleaner pattern with the other objects around there
01:35:981 (1,1) - i feel like those 2 objects have to be closer since its 1/4 mapped (like 01:44:708 (1,1) - but honestly making this pattern as an overlap would feel better imo)
02:38:345 (1) - make this slider flow into the stream, feels more pleasant imo http://puu.sh/q1C5l/01804ec674.jpg
03:29:617 (3) - make this symmetrcial
04:21:981 (5,6,7) - imagine this 3 objects would be in a same slider, so you can make it flow better (looks also beautiful) -> http://puu.sh/q1Cv5/b9a35ec070.jpg

hmm... just a note here: 04:34:435 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - or 04:40:526 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - and so on... I dont really know but those "stream jumps" feel a bit too much for this difficulty, they just feel really apart from the map.


I like the song, I like the map and you hitsounds are AWESOMEE!! i love it! :D
I hope my mod was a bit useful to you! :b
Good Luck with your map and happy mapping! (:
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iYiyo wrote:

Hello o/ from #modreqs.I suck at modding so don't blame me :c
Niamh

00:24:163 (1,3,4) - blanket those 3 a bit better yep
01:08:890 (1) - delete NC? sure
01:16:163 (1) - ^ yep
01:16:526 (2) - NC yep
01:47:072 - from here u were using a NC every 2 big white ticks, but then 01:51:435 - here u start using every 1 tick, and then again 01:53:617 (1) - two ticks. I suggest you to be consistent in this section with the NC. 01:51:435 (1) and 01:52:526 (1) are there because of the jumps, then I get back to the usual fare
02:21:799 (9,1) - maybe a minijump between those? I think the pattern is fine as it is :)
02:42:708 (4) - ctrl g for better flow? I think the flow is okay as is, plus the flow to 02:43:072 (5) would be really weird
04:14:708 (4,5) - ctrl g? sure
04:25:072 - I don't hear a triplet here in the music, so I suggest you to make 04:24:890 (3) - this a slider and delete 04:25:072 (4,5) - those.
04:31:981 (4,5,6) - same as above, maybe delete this 04:32:072 (5) - single note. Oops?
04:36:799 (5) - ^ ^
04:44:890 (4) - I think you shouldn't make this a slider reverse, making these 04:45:254 - 04:45:435 - 04:45:617 - clickable would fit better imo. Maybe, I like the reverse here, though. I'll wait for some more feedback
04:52:526 (5) - NC yes
04:53:617 (7,8,9,10) - make this section like 04:52:526 (5,6) - with just 2 sliders, it fits better imo. Nah, it's fine
05:15:800 (2,3,4,5,6) - make these into some minijumps? Again, I really like that pattern and the way it sets up 05:16:526 (1)

In general the diffs is very good, however in some parts of the non-kiai sections you added some triplets where there's no sound of it in the music, I did not mention all but maybe u should check them. Also there are some inconsistency in the NC sometimes, but not a big issue.

Also, I heard the hitsounds and they sound pretty bad imo, maybe you should check them out because it feels like the claps are a little bit random (i mean not that random but maybe some consistency would be better) I'm not really that good at hitsounding, and what I hear I hear ok, so I guess I'll have to try and get some help on this :|

That's all, I hope it helps. Good luck :)
It sure helped, thanks! :)

Phyloukz wrote:

Heyo!! #makemodreqsgreatagain
Im little new to this still but I give you my suggestions! :D

00:09:617 (7,1,2,3,4) - aesthetically this doesnt look really pretty to me (also this falls apart of your previous style imo) I guess? I've been looking at it and trying some things for a good hour and I don't really have a clue what to do with those, I guess I'll wait on some feedback? I think they're fine as is though.
00:14:526 (5,6) - make same DS between those like 00:13:981 (3,4) yep
00:25:254 (4,5,1) - DS issue between 4, 5 and 1? It's just 0'3x and it's due to grid alignment, I can't really fix it but it shouldn't be a problem? Maybe?
00:50:345 (1) - how about making this a 1/2 slider to the next red beat and make the stream follow after, it plays really nice and the special sounds gets more emphasized with that slider I'd like to, but I can't for the love of me find a way to change that into a slider and not make the pattern between 00:50:163 (3,2) look bad. I really like the next pattern, so I can't really move that stream, and I think all the back and forth I'd have to make there to fit a slider wouldn't really be worth it tbh.
00:51:617 (2,3,4) - since there are relatively high jumps before that it would feel more pleasant if you make this like http://puu.sh/q1Bh4/07dac31b2d.jpg (the flow is just much better in that version imo) Nope. For one I really like the way that pattern looks and plays, plus 00:52:345 (6) would look really confusing if I change that and I really don't have a good place to get that and not break the jump and flow to 00:52:526 (1)
01:01:072 (8,1) - idk this is a very personal suggestion but with some reason it sounds better if you stack those two objects Nah, it's a really calm part and I couldn't really justify a jump from 01:00:890 (7) here
01:07:072 (6,7,8) - another very personal suggestion: making these in a stream line instead of being stacked fits better to the music right there. I cant really explain why with my noob english but maybe you just give it a try (like its different from 01:09:435 (2,3,4) - . stacking here sounds better....) I guess?
01:11:072 - to 01:12:163 - maybe consider making the hitsound volume not directly at 40% which is represented in the kiai time (here its not the kiai, its like the intro of the kiai). for me it would make sense to make it a little bit quiter before the actual kiai starts, so the jump from 15% to 40% doesnt feel so sudden sure, 30% seems fine
02:38:345 - to 02:39:435 - ^ (before every kiai) Changed before every kiai except here, since drums don't really sound that high and hitsounds fit better if they're a bit stronger here IMO
01:16:163 (1,3) - blanket them maybe and make a cleaner pattern with the other objects around there Blanketed, pattern seems fine to me, though?
01:35:981 (1,1) - i feel like those 2 objects have to be closer since its 1/4 mapped (like 01:44:708 (1,1) - but honestly making this pattern as an overlap would feel better imo) nah, it's okay
02:38:345 (1) - make this slider flow into the stream, feels more pleasant imo http://puu.sh/q1C5l/01804ec674.jpg sure
03:29:617 (3) - make this symmetrcial should be now
04:21:981 (5,6,7) - imagine this 3 objects would be in a same slider, so you can make it flow better (looks also beautiful) -> http://puu.sh/q1Cv5/b9a35ec070.jpg oooh, nice

hmm... just a note here: 04:34:435 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - or 04:40:526 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - and so on... I dont really know but those "stream jumps" feel a bit too much for this difficulty, they just feel really apart from the map.


I like the song, I like the map and you hitsounds are AWESOMEE!! i love it! :D
I hope my mod was a bit useful to you! :b
Good Luck with your map and happy mapping! (:
Thanks! :)
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Hi NM (Fourm req)

Niamh

  1. 00:11:799 (3) - blanket put it to x:236 y:224
  2. 00:32:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - suggest change into circle
  3. 00:39:435 (6) - NC,00:40:526 (1) - NC
  4. 00:43:799 (7) - NC,00:44:526 (1) - NC
  5. 00:56:435 - add a circle
  6. 01:07:254 - try this rhythm https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5641217
  7. 01:19:799 (4) - stack at 01:21:254 (2) - x:291 y:35
  8. 01:25:254 (1,2,3) - not beautiful
  9. 01:46:254 (4,1,4,1) - I can't pass this kind of stream....spacing is too far,plz consider to change(you can use slider instead of 01:46:163 (3,3) - or you can use common's stream)
  10. 01:48:163 (4) - NC
  11. 01:56:345 (2) - optimise
  12. 02:01:254 (5) - NC
  13. 02:05:617 (4) - NC
  14. 02:07:799 (5) - ↑
  15. 02:09:981 (4) - ↑
  16. 02:12:163 (4) - ↑
  17. 02:14:345 (4) - 02:16:526 (4) - 02:18:708 (5) - 02:20:890 (4) - ↑
  18. 02:31:799 (2,3) - blanket and 02:31:799 (2,4) - stack
  19. 02:38:799 (4,1,4,1) - same with 01:46:254 (4,1,4,1) -
  20. 02:39:435 (3) - NC
  21. 02:45:526 - suggest add a circle
  22. 03:13:527 (4,1,4,1) - same with 01:46:254 (4,1,4,1) -
  23. 03:15:435 (4) - NC
  24. 03:20:890 (4) - ↑
  25. 03:21:617 (1) - ↑
  26. 03:24:163 (4) - ↑
  27. 03:26:345 (4) - ↑
  28. 03:28:527 (5) - ↑
  29. 03:28:890 (1) - ↑
  30. 03:29:617 (5) - ↑
  31. 03:32:890 (4) - stack at 03:31:254 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5641330 and then NC it
  32. 03:35:072 (5) - NC
  33. 03:37:254 (4) - ↑
  34. 03:39:436 (4) - 03:41:617 (4) - 03:43:799 (4) - 03:45:981 (6) - 03:52:526 (1) - 03:53:617 (6) - ↑
  35. 04:15:435 (1,4) - stack
  36. 04:21:981 (5) - NC
  37. 04:23:072 (4) - 04:23:617 (1) - NC
  38. 04:25:254 (4) - NC
  39. 04:27:435 (4) - 04:27:799 (1) - ↑
  40. 04:29:617 (3) - ↑
  41. 04:31:799 (3) - ↑
  42. 04:33:981 (3) - 04:34:435 (1) - 04:34:708 (1) - ↑
  43. 04:34:616 (4,5,8,1) - same with 01:46:254 (4,1,4,1) -
  44. 04:36:163 (3) - NC
  45. 04:38:345 (3) - ↑
  46. 04:39:435 (6) - ↑
  47. 04:40:799 (4,1,4,1) - same with 01:46:254 (4,1,4,1) -
  48. 04:42:708 (5) - 04:43:435 (1) - 04:44:890 (5) - NC
  49. 04:47:072 (4) - 04:49:072 (1) - 04:49:254 (6) - NC
  50. 04:55:799 (4) - 04:56:890 (4) - NC
  51. 05:00:163 (4) - 05:02:345 (5) - 05:04:527 (4) - 05:06:709 (4) - 05:08:891 (4) - 05:11:072 (4) - 05:13:254 (5) - NC
  52. 05:20:890 (6) - NC

good luck!
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