Stingy wrote:

I'm sorry...

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you don't need to follow any of these unless you want to...

00:05:927 (3) - Rotate for visibility. No, then the distance would be too small for a clap ;w;
00:05:927 (3,1) - This blanket is a bit funny. actually it's not a blanket, it's just a simple curved slider, no need to blanket because both sliders before have faded away
00:16:962 (3) - Rotate for visibility. kinda say, it's my style, and it's not unrankable or hard to read at all. I tried it with both AR9 and AR10 you know
00:26:272 (2,3,4) - This spacing is emphasized, but even for an emphasis, it's pretty big. reduced the jump owo
00:42:479 - Just wondering... why did you have 9/2 sliders here instead of following the regular rhythm...? There's not even a beat 00:43:858 - here. I don't mind you leaving them, I was just wondering out of curiosity. Oh this part I've just remake them a bit. Let's just say fixed
00:49:721 (2) - Point this to 3. good idea
00:50:755 (1) - I think the bottom part of this 'e' is barely smaller than the rest of the blanket. ahright last fix, no more! I've had a trouble with this slider for like more than 10 times oAo
01:05:410 (4,5) - This spacing... please... It's the only spacing in this section that is like this... Emphasize the rest of these sort of jumps or make this specific jump a LOT smaller than it is now... I fixed this too lol. It's okay now
01:18:341 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is like, the least important thing on this mod, but have you heard of honeycomb jumps? I think you should try them here. It would add to the hype and adrenaline factor a bit more. I definitely don't understand a thing .-.
01:20:410 (1,1,1,2) - I know that you're blanketing 2, but it still looks bad with 01:20:410 (1,1) - these. faded, faded. Not a big deal while playing
01:23:859 (1,1,1) - This spacing is quite odd... you have a kick slider that throws off the entire point of the spacing. {This happens later in the song, but I won't point it out} I don't really get what you're trying to say, but I'll keep it
01:25:066 (2,1) - Blanket. I'll think about it later
01:25:583 (1,2,3,4) - This mod is pretty useless too, but I think you should try rotating these sliders a bit for each time you hit one. It would help it become more visible and might look better. {This happens later in the song, but I won't point it out. Apply if you like this mod.} nahh I thought about it too but no, too complicated
01:34:893 (1,1,1) - Same as 01:23:859 -. same anwer
01:35:927 (1,2) - Parallel? already?
01:36:962 (3,4) - 4 is facing this way, so why not make 3 face that way too? This also makes sense because 1 and 2 match, but 3 and 4 don't. fixed that while rechecking too, but thanks for mention it
01:38:341 (1,4) - Stack. fixed
01:44:548 (4,5,1) - This overlap is just a bit weird, but you can leave it tbh. faded~
01:45:928 (1,1,1) - Same as 01:23:859 -. brbrb same
01:46:790 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Now that I think about it, rotating would make these kick sections look a lot better. ah those kick sliders would never satisfied people~
01:47:997 (1,1) - I think you should blanket the shorter slider with the longer slider to create another jump. hmm. I don't really get it again D:
01:57:824 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2) - YES I LOVE THIS YES YES YES YES sadly, this is the part where I remapped
02:14:031 (4,7) - Stack. no, look closer at the pattern ;w;
02:19:721 (1,3) - Widen this blanket a bit more. It looks funny. fixed
02:24:548 (1,2,5,6) - This is good. 02:24:548 (1,2,5,6) - This is not. 4 and 7 are scooted too far away to look unnoticeable. Stack them. okay now you're pointing out the same timing lol xD but i can understand you, I'd say no change, because it's a weird pattern, not everyone can read it, so I made it for easier pass
02:36:100 (4,7) - Same here ^.
02:36:790 (1,3) - Stack.fixed
02:40:755 (4) - This squiggle looks o3o squished. it looks cute owo
03:12:134 (3) - Scoot this out of tilt more to the left. It clashes with 2's position. fixed
~ { Fast Forward } ~
04:05:583 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I-is this.. a.. tr-triangle...? *sirens blaring* PP MAPPER CONFIRMED PP MAPPER CONFIRMED MAP STOLE RIGHT OUT OF MONSTRATA'S RANKED MAPS for crying out loud, Monstrata everywhere ;w;
04:16:100 (1,3) - Stack. nah, as I explained in those mods before, for easier read when HD

Throughout this ending section, your spacing is quite inconsistent with your timing. To me, it's not much of a deal, but I know to some people, this sort of thing will make or break your map.

Thank you, and I'm sorry. What are you sorry for D: ?

1. 00:19:031 (1) - I don't know if the stop here is necessary, and it can broke the flow of the map, it's up to you to decide if you change it or not.
2. 01:00:583 (1,2,3) - Those three notes are not very well aligned.
3. 01:25:066 (2) - I think you can stack this slider on the beginning of the "1" red slider, because it can still keep the blanket with the next sliders.
4. 02:10:410 (1,1) - This is very nice, but I don't know if it's allowed for ranking D:
5. 02:55:928 (4) - You can try to blanket here with the "2" next slider?
6. 03:40:410 (1,2) - I don't know if those sliders are symmetrical !

Spotty wrote:

Hi! From my modding queue (M4M) ♥

[CUTIE MARATHON]

1. 00:19:031 (1) - I don't know if the stop here is necessary, and it can broke the flow of the map, it's up to you to decide if you change it or not. Gotta admit I can't think of any other way to show the triple drum perfectly besides this ;w; so I might keep it
2. 01:00:583 (1,2,3) - Those three notes are not very well aligned. fixed, nice catch :3
3. 01:25:066 (2) - I think you can stack this slider on the beginning of the "1" red slider, because it can still keep the blanket with the next sliders. about this I've been thinking a lot, so I decided to remapped as well
4. 02:10:410 (1,1) - This is very nice, but I don't know if it's allowed for ranking D: hopefully it is ;w;
5. 02:55:928 (4) - You can try to blanket here with the "2" next slider? nah, but changed a bit
6. 03:40:410 (1,2) - I don't know if those sliders are symmetrical !nice eyes you have there owo

There is the only thing I noticed here, but I'm not very good at doing Extra, so probably my mod will be bad, and if this case, I'm very sorry :c
Hope it at least help you ;w;

Asaiga wrote:

ranked approval when?

• General

1. You need to work on your emphasis. Strong beats are just as highlighted by your maps as anything else, plus the fact that the climax of your jumps are often anti-jumps, completely killing the hype.
2. Make sure that you're being consistent when following instruments. If you map wubs as 1/4 sliders with jumps in one part you cant just map them as two circles in the same place in the next section.

1. 01:21:617 (2,1) - The other sliders in the section follow the wubs, so why do you make this wub a circle only to have a slider directly after which makes the NEXT wub end on a sliderend? Wouldnt it be better to just use 01:21:617 (2) - as a slider and make 01:21:790 (1) - the sliderend of this a circle?
2. 01:25:927 (3) - There's not a wub here but a beat, so why do you use a slider when a circle would fit better with the song? It doesnt really make sense that you map the same rhythm and spacing when the song is different. same thing 01:36:962 (3) - here and in some other places
3. 01:27:134 (2,1) - same as 01:21:617 (2,1) - This happens in a lot of places where the song is similar, take a look at it, because its not representing the song as it should
4. 01:30:066 (5) - This beat is a lot stronger than the others so why does it have the same spacing? could be emphasized better
5. 01:30:583 (1) - Same thing here except the jump is SHORTER than the rest, even though the beat is stronger, not to mention that since its the last jump the player will have a much easier time hitting it, since they're not focusing on the jump after but only on that jump.
6. 01:34:203 (7,1) - I dont understand your obsession with making the last jump of every section an anti-jump when it's the climax of the measure in the song
7. 01:52:134 (5) - Once again, this isnt emphasized more than anything else when its a really strong beat compared to the rest.
8. 02:08:686 (1) - Again, this beat is much stronger than any of the wubs before but you make it really close to the rest, making it really anti-climactic
9. 02:42:134 (4,5) - Why'd you make this kiai much easier than the first one? You chose to map these as sliders with spacing between them there, but here you just stack two circles?

BOUYAAA wrote:

Hi

Just a few comments about your map. My mods are biased towards my vision of mapping so this is mostly gonna be suggestions.
I think the map played well and was actually pretty enjoyable.

I thought there were several places were your use of spacing could be improved to emphasize key beats of the song better. Generally you want to use higher spacing on high impact beats so that they stand out and that their intensity is matched by the map. I'm gonna point a few examples, if you agree then i suggest you go through your map and rearage things as you see fit.

01:12:652 (5,1) - here you decide to stack the downbeat with the previous note which might be a way of emphasizing in itself because the stack, even though it is not very "intense" to play, differentiates with "normal" spacing. This is however inconsistent with the next similar instance of this 01:15:410 (5,1) - which you decided to space. Imo the 2nd one expresses the the intensity of the beat better due to the fact that it has movement to it. I didn't expect that one ;w; thanks for pointing it out

01:18:169 (6,1) - this feels very underwhelming considering you use this huge snare sound for the first time, if anything this jump should be at least higher than it's predecessor 01:17:996 (5,6) - yea my bad, fixed

01:25:755 (2,3) - here too the spacing from nothing to snare is pretty underwhelming compared to the spacing from those two objects 01:25:582 (1,2) - . Something like this http://puu.sh/qJ44D/8e13881d93.jpg seems a bit better to me and would ease up flow a flittle (i'll get to that later) well I don't know because I've referred this kind of pattern in the new ranked map (Nuclear) which has the melody and kick slider part almost same as my map, and I don't see him push the distance up at snare, but I'll find a way to change it if it's really that bad

01:30:410 (7,1) - Here it is particularly apparent as the strong bownbeat (being on red because syncompation blablabla) is almost completely denied importance due to the super tiny spacing you use. 01:52:479 (7,1) - similar issue here. fixed for all 4 parts

02:25:755 (1,2) - i think you are stackign these two objects because of the chord change. However you are ignoring the downbeat on 02:25:928 (2) - which loses all impact with this kind of spacing. fixed, but not yet good looking. I'll remap that part sometimes

I'm gonna stop pointing out stuff here because you probably get it by now.


A few other points would be :

00:53:513 (1,1) - in this slow part, the combination between uncomfortable movement and high spacing seemed a bit too much compared to the rest of the section. It doesn't seem very justified as it's not a very high impact beat I think it's a bit too much too. Fixed

00:59:375 - in this section, you use claps to follow some kind of synth sound, this sound a bit awkward to me as there is a clap rythm in the song. I suggest you follow the clap rythm in the song with this hitsound and follow the synth rythm with another sample well I will just remapped and simply follow the clap. Fixed

03:49:031 (1,2,3,4) - Concerning flow, I have slight issues with these opposing sliders. In practice they are played as circles so the average player playing this diff won't hold on them. If you combine that with the high sv you used this is a 100 trap lol (i'm obviously not referring only to this one part with this). Usually having the slider point inwards instead of outwards plays better. This might just be me being bad at the game though I'm gonna think about that, but till now no one has ever choked at that part yet (except me) so if it's really a problem then I'll probably fix

I don't think there is much more to say as i don't care too much about aesthetics. If you have any questions about what i just said i'm joinable in game

I wish you good luck with the set!

Rapthorn wrote:

• General

1. You need to work on your emphasis. Strong beats are just as highlighted by your maps as anything else, plus the fact that the climax of your jumps are often anti-jumps, completely killing the hype. tbh I just map the jumps as the way I feel the most comfortable, so if you feel uncomfortable at any part please contact me. I still need to learn more
2. Make sure that you're being consistent when following instruments. If you map wubs as 1/4 sliders with jumps in one part you cant just map them as two circles in the same place in the next section. would be great if you could just point out 1 for me because I can't ;w;

rawr

1. 01:21:617 (2,1) - The other sliders in the section follow the wubs, so why do you make this wub a circle only to have a slider directly after which makes the NEXT wub end on a sliderend? Wouldnt it be better to just use 01:21:617 (2) - as a slider and make 01:21:790 (1) - the sliderend of this a circle? I really don't understand what you're trying to say D:
2. 01:25:927 (3) - There's not a wub here but a beat, so why do you use a slider when a circle would fit better with the song? It doesnt really make sense that you map the same rhythm and spacing when the song is different. same thing 01:36:962 (3) - here and in some other places remapped ;a; exhausted
3. 01:27:134 (2,1) - same as 01:21:617 (2,1) - This happens in a lot of places where the song is similar, take a look at it, because its not representing the song as it should again Idk what you're saying but I'm just simply make the snares clickable. If you can please explain some more to me ;a;
4. 01:30:066 (5) - This beat is a lot stronger than the others so why does it have the same spacing? could be emphasized better fixed
5. 01:30:583 (1) - Same thing here except the jump is SHORTER than the rest, even though the beat is stronger, not to mention that since its the last jump the player will have a much easier time hitting it, since they're not focusing on the jump after but only on that jump. remapped this part while replying to Booyaaa's mod
6. 01:34:203 (7,1) - I dont understand your obsession with making the last jump of every section an anti-jump when it's the climax of the measure in the song ah... D: ?
7. 01:52:134 (5) - Once again, this isnt emphasized more than anything else when its a really strong beat compared to the rest. fixed
8. 02:08:686 (1) - Again, this beat is much stronger than any of the wubs before but you make it really close to the rest, making it really anti-climactic fixed
9. 02:42:134 (4,5) - Why'd you make this kiai much easier than the first one? You chose to map these as sliders with spacing between them there, but here you just stack two circles? because I just wanna focus on the drum and snare, but whatever, remapped

These are general notes, take a look at the whole map and apply what you see fit, because most of what i pointed out happens everywhere

Hessu_H wrote:

Here's your tiny NM

This is what happens when i accept high SP maps xd

yo

00:05:927 (3) - Maybe make this 3/4 and a note after that on the white tick? Aha seems like you missed a beat on red tick didn't you?
00:52:996 (4) - is not perfectly aligned with 00:50:755 (1) - do dis fixed
01:02:479 (3) - maybe move this to x:224 y:302 the current position makes a perfect triangle of slider start already. Why do I have to move?
01:21:100 (1,1) - Blanket could be improved fixed
02:15:583 (3,4,5,6,7) - This triangle is not perfectly aligned, move the stack to x:409 y:305 I can't explain things well so i'll use screenshots xd Idk but what i'm looking at right now is just good enough and no need to fix, but I'll consider about it
04:32:824 (3) - Move the last sliderpoint to x : 328 y : 252 so its on the same level with the third sliderpoint lol it's not even an issues but yea fixed as you wish
04:34:203 (1,2) - blanket could be improved a tiny bit fixed
02:09:376 (3) - move this to x:416 y:152 no, why?

Battquif wrote:

I'd like to mod your map, rly !! But it's just Well done dude, it's amazing !

Star !!

Hobbes2 wrote:

Awesome map, good luck~

1. These combo colors seem much more fitting: http://i.imgur.com/aNwZj1W.png

1. 00:05:927 (3,4,5) - This works, but consider this rhythm instead so you have a clickable object on the kick: http://i.imgur.com/TuGG5sz.png
2. 00:25:065 - There is a kick here, and I know you're mapping to the growl thing, but you could end the slider here so it represents the kick as well.
3. 00:35:410 (5) - This circle should be deleted since there is no sound that happens on that tick.
4. 01:06:962 (4,5,1) - Since the flow here is pretty linear, I recommend evening out the spacing to be the same.
5. 01:40:410 (1) - Try to break the flow here to better represent the loud bang.
6. 02:10:410 (6,1) - You should move the first slider a tad to the left to make this more readable, since currently, it covers more than 50% of the second slider.
7. 04:13:514 (4) - Try not to overlap this with the HP bar.

Smoothie World wrote:

[General]

1. These combo colors seem much more fitting: http://i.imgur.com/aNwZj1W.png Combo colours struggle. Fixed (nearly the same)

[GONE WILD]

1. 00:05:927 (3,4,5) - This works, but consider this rhythm instead so you have a clickable object on the kick: http://i.imgur.com/TuGG5sz.png I don't know why you suggest this, but lemme try to apply it, and see how people's react to it since it's not harming at all
2. 00:25:065 - There is a kick here, and I know you're mapping to the growl thing, but you could end the slider here so it represents the kick as well. about this actually the small drum went off on the yellow tick next to the red tick, so making the slider 1/2 is not really a good idea I think, let's just follow the growl and I think it'll be just fine
3. 00:35:410 (5) - This circle should be deleted since there is no sound that happens on that tick. you're right, I just feel empty without it ;w;
4. 01:06:962 (4,5,1) - Since the flow here is pretty linear, I recommend evening out the spacing to be the same. ah...I don't understand D: ?
5. 01:40:410 (1) - Try to break the flow here to better represent the loud bang. hmm, fixed I guess?
6. 02:10:410 (6,1) - You should move the first slider a tad to the left to make this more readable, since currently, it covers more than 50% of the second slider. I received several complains about that before lol. Guess I'll have to fix then
7. 04:13:514 (4) - Try not to overlap this with the HP bar. oh yea didn't noticed

Sorry I couldn't find much. If I were a BN I'd bubble this but rip

Cheesecake wrote:

Good map

O-Moei wrote:

Hi !, 💑Mod for Mod request

✨ = Suggestion (Recommendation. No change, no problem)
💧 = Uuhhh? (Something is wrong around here...)
💥 = Warning !!! (Yu know what tu do xD )

Here we go...

General :
✨Yee , the banner !. If you want to make that up, it should be 420x120 and use [centre] there helpful information I've been looking for. Thanks :3

GONE WILD :
✨00:16:617 (2,5) - Stack ?, or try 00:17:479 (5) - on position x151y238 for neater placement I did that for easier read in HD D: it doesn't look so bad I think

✨00:21:100 (4,5) - Try position x311y356 nevermind I did it straight :3 fixed as you mentioned it

✨01:52:307 (6) - ^ x250y24 nahh

✨01:52:479 (7) - ^ x146y159 (Only if you agreed with up there xD ) nahh lol

✨00:44:548 (3,4) - Have this stack with 00:42:479 (1) - sliderhead nice catch

✨01:09:548 (8) - New SV changes should NC (Same applied : 01:36:272 (1) - ) no actually the NC at the last (1) is already did, because the SV change could be at (1) too

✨01:25:237 (3) - ^ totally forgot to NC after remapped

✨03:32:997 (8) - ^ same inb4

04:41:100 (3) - I never make it like this, I like slider like this x'D lol thanks xD

💧04:39:721 (1,1) - I guess the SV should be 1,1 and 1,5 like you did before ( Like 01:42:479 (1,1) - and 01:20:410 (1,1) - ) 02:16:272 - actually, the Beastmode part there is a bit different. One is the drop, one is after the kiai so I made it 1.2 instead of 1.5

✨05:12:824 - I can hear sound suit to be placed with spinner here until 05:19:720 - spinner for a faded out sound is rediculous at this situation tbh, plus no one wants a spinner after a bunch of crazy objects, so no :3 this was suggested once before but I didn't apply too

Oke !, that's all from me. All the best :3

Gonna pay you a good mod in return thanks~

thai0109 wrote:

farm kudos post

GONE WILD

1. 00:20:065 (1) – sao lại giảm sv ở đây trong khi mấy đoạn khác bình thường để thể hiện cái brrr sound ấy :3
2. 00:22:824 (4,5) – bỏ stack đi ơ nhưng tại sao ;w;
3. 00:24:893 (3,5) – giảm sv? hmmm, cái này có vẻ hợp lý ấy nhưng phải để Yami coi thử có dễ sửa kh đã :<
4. 00:29:203 (3) - ở đây ko có tiếng, có thể ghép 00:29:031 (2,3) – thành 1 slider kay
5. 00:32:996 (2) - ở đây ko có tiếng, nên stack 00:32:824 (1,2) – với nhau done
6. 01:09:203 (5,6,7) – giảm ds sao cho thấp hơn 3 cái 01:08:859 (2,3,4) – Yami chỉ sửa tí thôi, nhưng DS thì Yami sẽ để cân bằng :3
7. 01:12:652 (5) – tiếng to vậy sao stack trước có modders bảo vậy ổn hơn, nên Yami cứ để vậy thôi, với lại nó cũng kh thật sự to đâu
8. 01:15:410 (5) - ^
9. 01:20:410 (1,1) – để chung 1 sv, tiếng nó ko thay đổi nhiều để chung SV còn gì vui :^
10. 01:25:237 (1,1) – dùng chung ds với 01:24:548 (1,1) - ? okay
11. 01:42:479 (1,1) – chung sv as inb4
12. 01:48:341 (1) – với 01:59:375 (1) – sao cái này dùng khác sv ? lỗi kỹ thuật ;w;
13. 02:05:065 (6) – bỏ cái này hoặc thay bằng gì đó đi, ko có tiếng ở đây để đó cho nó có đôi có cặp, tại Yami kh thích để 1/1 spacing lắm
14. 02:27:997 (3) –giảm spacing done
15. 02:32:134 (4) – thay bằng ¼ slider vì ko có tiếng đập rồi 02:32:306 (5) – bằng 1 nốt thật ra là kh có tiếng wub chứ kh phải kh có tiếng đập đâu
16. 02:33:514 (3) – giảm spacing done
17. 02:43:168 (4,5) – như đoạn trên same
18. 02:45:928 (3) – sao giảm ds? hết chỗ lol. Fixed
19. 02:49:203 (6) – không có tiếng ở đây đang jump cơ mà '3'
20. 03:05:582 (1) – chuyển thành ½ slider và ko đổi sv do có tiếng đập ở 03:05:755 fixed, nhưng dùng 2 circles
21. 03:10:410 (3,5) – giảm sv? như đã nói, sẽ suy nghĩ '3'
22. 03:16:617 (1) – như 03:05:582 (1) – fixed
23. 03:32:652 (5,6,7) – giảm ds như đoạn trên do tiếng nhỏ hơn nah, to nhỏ to nhỏ nhìn nó kì lắm, nhưng nếu có ai nhắc thì Yami sẽ ráng sửa
24. 03:40:066 (5) – sao ds ở đây nhỏ hơn 03:39:893 (4) – trong khi tiếng to hơn? fixed
25. 03:43:859 (1,1) – đừng thay đổi sv ~
26. 04:28:514 (6) – ko có tiếng ~
27. 04:39:721 (1,1) – đừng thay đổi sv ~

yay

Plaudible wrote:

Holy progress! 68 SP in 2 weeks, nice

G E N E R A L

1. soft-sliderslide.wav
2. soft-sliderslide2.wav

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1. 01:52:307 (6,7,1) - Could probably balance the spacing here.
2. 02:14:548 (7) - You can move this to x:64 y:336 so it kinda emphasizes the jump to the next object. Could probably do it for 04:37:997 (7) - too.
3. 03:14:203 (1,3,4,5) - too close imo but not a big deal lol
4. 03:55:065 (5,6,7,8) - Align (8) with the rest.
5. 04:28:341 (5) - x:376 y:32 instead so it doesn't overlap with the previous objects (nazi)
6. 04:52:134 (5,1) - Why not just put it at the end of the slider lol.
7. 04:57:996 (1,2,3) - How about something like this? Looks better imo.

Mira-san wrote:

Hi. Short mod cuz I don't think I'd find much tbh lol.

G E N E R A L

You got some unused hitsounds lol. actually I did use them. Try some skins like Yugen's then you'll understand why. shhhhhh sound everytime

1. soft-sliderslide.wav
2. soft-sliderslide2.wav

GONE WILD

1. 01:52:307 (6,7,1) - Could probably balance the spacing here. Idk if it's balance yet (hopefully it did) but if it's not then I'll excuse for it lol
2. 02:14:548 (7) - You can move this to x:64 y:336 so it kinda emphasizes the jump to the next object. Could probably do it for 04:37:997 (7) - too. kinda like the best idea today
3. 03:14:203 (1,3,4,5) - too close imo but not a big deal lol lol
4. 03:55:065 (5,6,7,8) - Align (8) with the rest. oops
5. 04:28:341 (5) - x:376 y:32 instead so it doesn't overlap with the previous objects (nazi) Idk but can you actually see the overlap?
6. 04:52:134 (5,1) - Why not just put it at the end of the slider lol. lol because then it'd be too far. and I can't move (2) due to the blanket.
7. 04:57:996 (1,2,3) - How about something like this? Looks better imo. yea it does but the spacing would be weird and too small.

k i suck at modding
i already said this but nice map kek

Yamicchi wrote:

I summon Star Shooters ~

O-Moei wrote:

Not fair !!! x'D me shot tuu x'D

Keada wrote:

Hi there o/ M4M
Sorry for late mod D: Not very late owo

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  Gone Wild

1. 00:07:996 (1) - make this like It looks a bit jiffy when you stack it D: Nah I think I would go with something that completely stop the flow, to emphasize the 3 drums you know
2. 00:19:031 (1) - same here same answer ;w;
3. 00:27:996 (3,4) - stack with 00:26:617 (4) - , also makes it keep consistent ds and also one more thing 00:28:168 (4) - curve this so it looks like this kinda about the stack, fixed, but not the curving thingy, I want something different because it's a clap
4. 00:30:065 (1) - same as I said above gotta be the same answer owo
5. 01:26:617 (1) - This slider overlapped itself really much, just a suggestion, maybe like this? yea I know but if I made it as you said I'll break the flow with (2)
6. 02:01:962 (7) - stack at the end of 02:00:755 (2) - ? pattern fixed
7. 04:06:617 (1) - doesnt look symmetrical, fix pls D: done~
8. 04:15:927 (7,1) - this flow was kinda weird D: I don't see any weirdness D: ?
9. 04:20:066 (1) - stack end on 04:19:548 (5) - just can't, then I'll break the spacing
10. 04:32:824 (3) - just imo, I didnt like this slider. try something like this? tbh I don't like it too. fixed a bit but idk if it's better yet

Didnt find anymore than that D:
Good Luck! pretty good map so.

1. any official source for metadata? xd
2. Unused hitsounds: soft-sliderslide.wav
3. soft-hitnormal.wav is too short and also has delay lol download the fix from here

1. 00:31:789 (2,3,4,5) - the circular motion is doesn't feel that good imo, maybe move 00:32:479 (5) - to the center of the screen in order to emphasize this beat just a suggestion tho
2. 00:38:686 (2,3) - you might want reduce the distance a bit... mainly because it looks exaggerated compared with stuff like 00:41:445 (2,3) - and 00:44:203 (2,3) -
3. 01:09:893 (9) - missing whistle here?
4. 02:00:410 (1,2) - i was expecting the same shape... not really important tho
5. 02:03:686 (1,2) - i'd swap nc on these two, nothing really happens on 02:03:686 - so the nc is unnecessary imo (same stuff on 02:04:203 (1,3) - )
6. 02:25:755 - i believe that the previous jumpy pattern was following the synth melody... taking that in consideration, wouldn't be better to follow it in the next combo too?
   
   something like

   
7. 02:42:134 (4,5) - looks a bit cramped doesn't it? i think something like this looks better

Kagetsu wrote:

[General]

1. any official source for metadata? xd I don't know lol I don't think there're any except for Soundcloud or directly from Teminite xd
2. Unused hitsounds: soft-sliderslide.wav oh now I realized. Deleted
3. soft-hitnormal.wav is too short and also has delay lol download the fix from here thanks :3

[GONE WILD]

1. 00:31:789 (2,3,4,5) - the circular motion is doesn't feel that good imo, maybe move 00:32:479 (5) - to the center of the screen in order to emphasize this beat just a suggestion tho Fixed, hope this works now
2. 00:38:686 (2,3) - you might want reduce the distance a bit... mainly because it looks exaggerated compared with stuff like 00:41:445 (2,3) - and 00:44:203 (2,3) - got it~
3. 01:09:893 (9) - missing whistle here? also fixed at 03:33:341 - yes
4. 02:00:410 (1,2) - i was expecting the same shape... not really important tho not really affect anything so yea o3o
5. 02:03:686 (1,2) - i'd swap nc on these two, nothing really happens on 02:03:686 - so the nc is unnecessary imo (same stuff on 02:04:203 (1,3) - ) might wanna ask you why do you choose to NC on a regular sound instead of a big drum like the current way? Would make more sense if I keep it like that lol
6. 02:25:755 - i believe that the previous jumpy pattern was following the synth melody... taking that in consideration, wouldn't be better to follow it in the next combo too? Ah this is quite a problem I wanna ask you. 02:25:927 - has quite a big drum, so which way can I do to show the drum clearly and also follow the music correctly?
   
   something like

   
7. 02:42:134 (4,5) - looks a bit cramped doesn't it? i think something like this looks better quite a good suggestion~

i won't bother you more pointing all the stuff again, the music is really repetitive and the map too consistent, so writing "same" is a waste of time. i believe you can use these suggestions to improve all the map, for example the new combo placement on 04:27:134 - , the rhythm around 04:49:203 - etc i'll have a look owo

k

Thank you

Kagetsu wrote:

#1

Left wrote:

lol bubbbble gratzz

but my m4m how :C

Desperate-kun wrote:

We did a short irc-mod. This mapset seems ready to me. Bubbled #2 :3

Shoga wrote:

Gratz #################################################################################

1. 00:14:893 (1) - consider adding a finish hitsound on the sliderhead since theres clearly a loud cymbal sound in the song and since u also have a finish here 03:00:410 - u should add one at 00:14:893 -
2. 00:25:927 - Same goes here , theres a cymbal sound which deserves a finish hitsound
3. 03:00:410 (1) - add whistle on slider head? since theres a kick sound in the song
4. 03:05:928 (1) - finish on the head is really unncesseray .-. the sound in the song isnt loud enough , whistle will work better
5. 05:05:755 (5) - why is there a clap on the head? mistake?

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

oh hi ~ i have some concerns about a few hitsounds ~ so i will just point them out now before the map gets pushed any farther
[GONE WILD]

1. 00:14:893 (1) - consider adding a finish hitsound on the sliderhead since theres clearly a loud cymbal sound in the song and since u also have a finish here 03:00:410 - u should add one at 00:14:893 - done!
2. 00:25:927 - Same goes here , theres a cymbal sound which deserves a finish hitsound okay
3. 03:00:410 (1) - add whistle on slider head? since theres a kick sound in the song I think not this time lol it deserves a finish
4. 03:05:928 (1) - finish on the head is really unncesseray .-. the sound in the song isnt loud enough , whistle will work better actually because the 4 circles inb4 you don't see it's strong as it should be? Plus I finish for every 8 white ticks so I think it should be fine
5. 05:05:755 (5) - why is there a clap on the head? mistake? yes lol

well i guess thats all ~ tell me the reason if my suggestions are wrong

otherwise , a pretty cool map . gl!~
osu! needs more wub wub songs www

Battle wrote:

MrSergio wrote:

holy, only 19 days.
Let me see...

EDIT:

04:46:617 (3) - just personal, but a ctrl+g would make a better flow here imo since this was mentioned before, as you wish :3
04:56:272 (1) - why this one is not similar to 04:56:272 (1) - or 04:56:272 (1) - even if there is a strong beat on the tail? (btw, the problem here is the fact you have a straight jump to the next slider which makes is less strong, unlike 05:07:307 (1) - for example) fixed the pattern but wanna ask for you to check it again owo

Call me~

MrSergio wrote:

hue, I see no other problems.

Gratz on first approval :3~

Oyatsu wrote:

Congratulation to #6 ranked VNese mapper !

Strategas wrote:

oh it got qualified before I could check

well congrats anyway! great map

Strategas wrote:

oh it got qualified before I could check

well congrats anyway! great map