Battquif wrote:

I'd like to mod your map, rly !! But it's just Well done dude, it's amazing !

Star !!

Hobbes2 wrote:

Awesome map, good luck~

1. These combo colors seem much more fitting: http://i.imgur.com/aNwZj1W.png

1. 00:05:927 (3,4,5) - This works, but consider this rhythm instead so you have a clickable object on the kick: http://i.imgur.com/TuGG5sz.png
2. 00:25:065 - There is a kick here, and I know you're mapping to the growl thing, but you could end the slider here so it represents the kick as well.
3. 00:35:410 (5) - This circle should be deleted since there is no sound that happens on that tick.
4. 01:06:962 (4,5,1) - Since the flow here is pretty linear, I recommend evening out the spacing to be the same.
5. 01:40:410 (1) - Try to break the flow here to better represent the loud bang.
6. 02:10:410 (6,1) - You should move the first slider a tad to the left to make this more readable, since currently, it covers more than 50% of the second slider.
7. 04:13:514 (4) - Try not to overlap this with the HP bar.

Smoothie World wrote:

[General]

1. These combo colors seem much more fitting: http://i.imgur.com/aNwZj1W.png Combo colours struggle. Fixed (nearly the same)

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1. 00:05:927 (3,4,5) - This works, but consider this rhythm instead so you have a clickable object on the kick: http://i.imgur.com/TuGG5sz.png I don't know why you suggest this, but lemme try to apply it, and see how people's react to it since it's not harming at all
2. 00:25:065 - There is a kick here, and I know you're mapping to the growl thing, but you could end the slider here so it represents the kick as well. about this actually the small drum went off on the yellow tick next to the red tick, so making the slider 1/2 is not really a good idea I think, let's just follow the growl and I think it'll be just fine
3. 00:35:410 (5) - This circle should be deleted since there is no sound that happens on that tick. you're right, I just feel empty without it ;w;
4. 01:06:962 (4,5,1) - Since the flow here is pretty linear, I recommend evening out the spacing to be the same. ah...I don't understand D: ?
5. 01:40:410 (1) - Try to break the flow here to better represent the loud bang. hmm, fixed I guess?
6. 02:10:410 (6,1) - You should move the first slider a tad to the left to make this more readable, since currently, it covers more than 50% of the second slider. I received several complains about that before lol. Guess I'll have to fix then
7. 04:13:514 (4) - Try not to overlap this with the HP bar. oh yea didn't noticed

Sorry I couldn't find much. If I were a BN I'd bubble this but rip

Cheesecake wrote:

Good map

O-Moei wrote:

Hi !, 💑Mod for Mod request

✨ = Suggestion (Recommendation. No change, no problem)
💧 = Uuhhh? (Something is wrong around here...)
💥 = Warning !!! (Yu know what tu do xD )

Here we go...

General :
✨Yee , the banner !. If you want to make that up, it should be 420x120 and use [centre] there helpful information I've been looking for. Thanks :3

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✨00:16:617 (2,5) - Stack ?, or try 00:17:479 (5) - on position x151y238 for neater placement I did that for easier read in HD D: it doesn't look so bad I think

✨00:21:100 (4,5) - Try position x311y356 nevermind I did it straight :3 fixed as you mentioned it

✨01:52:307 (6) - ^ x250y24 nahh

✨01:52:479 (7) - ^ x146y159 (Only if you agreed with up there xD ) nahh lol

✨00:44:548 (3,4) - Have this stack with 00:42:479 (1) - sliderhead nice catch

✨01:09:548 (8) - New SV changes should NC (Same applied : 01:36:272 (1) - ) no actually the NC at the last (1) is already did, because the SV change could be at (1) too

✨01:25:237 (3) - ^ totally forgot to NC after remapped

✨03:32:997 (8) - ^ same inb4

04:41:100 (3) - I never make it like this, I like slider like this x'D lol thanks xD

💧04:39:721 (1,1) - I guess the SV should be 1,1 and 1,5 like you did before ( Like 01:42:479 (1,1) - and 01:20:410 (1,1) - ) 02:16:272 - actually, the Beastmode part there is a bit different. One is the drop, one is after the kiai so I made it 1.2 instead of 1.5

✨05:12:824 - I can hear sound suit to be placed with spinner here until 05:19:720 - spinner for a faded out sound is rediculous at this situation tbh, plus no one wants a spinner after a bunch of crazy objects, so no :3 this was suggested once before but I didn't apply too

Oke !, that's all from me. All the best :3

Gonna pay you a good mod in return thanks~

thai0109 wrote:

farm kudos post

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1. 00:20:065 (1) – sao lại giảm sv ở đây trong khi mấy đoạn khác bình thường để thể hiện cái brrr sound ấy :3
2. 00:22:824 (4,5) – bỏ stack đi ơ nhưng tại sao ;w;
3. 00:24:893 (3,5) – giảm sv? hmmm, cái này có vẻ hợp lý ấy nhưng phải để Yami coi thử có dễ sửa kh đã :<
4. 00:29:203 (3) - ở đây ko có tiếng, có thể ghép 00:29:031 (2,3) – thành 1 slider kay
5. 00:32:996 (2) - ở đây ko có tiếng, nên stack 00:32:824 (1,2) – với nhau done
6. 01:09:203 (5,6,7) – giảm ds sao cho thấp hơn 3 cái 01:08:859 (2,3,4) – Yami chỉ sửa tí thôi, nhưng DS thì Yami sẽ để cân bằng :3
7. 01:12:652 (5) – tiếng to vậy sao stack trước có modders bảo vậy ổn hơn, nên Yami cứ để vậy thôi, với lại nó cũng kh thật sự to đâu
8. 01:15:410 (5) - ^
9. 01:20:410 (1,1) – để chung 1 sv, tiếng nó ko thay đổi nhiều để chung SV còn gì vui :^
10. 01:25:237 (1,1) – dùng chung ds với 01:24:548 (1,1) - ? okay
11. 01:42:479 (1,1) – chung sv as inb4
12. 01:48:341 (1) – với 01:59:375 (1) – sao cái này dùng khác sv ? lỗi kỹ thuật ;w;
13. 02:05:065 (6) – bỏ cái này hoặc thay bằng gì đó đi, ko có tiếng ở đây để đó cho nó có đôi có cặp, tại Yami kh thích để 1/1 spacing lắm
14. 02:27:997 (3) –giảm spacing done
15. 02:32:134 (4) – thay bằng ¼ slider vì ko có tiếng đập rồi 02:32:306 (5) – bằng 1 nốt thật ra là kh có tiếng wub chứ kh phải kh có tiếng đập đâu
16. 02:33:514 (3) – giảm spacing done
17. 02:43:168 (4,5) – như đoạn trên same
18. 02:45:928 (3) – sao giảm ds? hết chỗ lol. Fixed
19. 02:49:203 (6) – không có tiếng ở đây đang jump cơ mà '3'
20. 03:05:582 (1) – chuyển thành ½ slider và ko đổi sv do có tiếng đập ở 03:05:755 fixed, nhưng dùng 2 circles
21. 03:10:410 (3,5) – giảm sv? như đã nói, sẽ suy nghĩ '3'
22. 03:16:617 (1) – như 03:05:582 (1) – fixed
23. 03:32:652 (5,6,7) – giảm ds như đoạn trên do tiếng nhỏ hơn nah, to nhỏ to nhỏ nhìn nó kì lắm, nhưng nếu có ai nhắc thì Yami sẽ ráng sửa
24. 03:40:066 (5) – sao ds ở đây nhỏ hơn 03:39:893 (4) – trong khi tiếng to hơn? fixed
25. 03:43:859 (1,1) – đừng thay đổi sv ~
26. 04:28:514 (6) – ko có tiếng ~
27. 04:39:721 (1,1) – đừng thay đổi sv ~

yay

Plaudible wrote:

Holy progress! 68 SP in 2 weeks, nice

G E N E R A L

1. soft-sliderslide.wav
2. soft-sliderslide2.wav

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1. 01:52:307 (6,7,1) - Could probably balance the spacing here.
2. 02:14:548 (7) - You can move this to x:64 y:336 so it kinda emphasizes the jump to the next object. Could probably do it for 04:37:997 (7) - too.
3. 03:14:203 (1,3,4,5) - too close imo but not a big deal lol
4. 03:55:065 (5,6,7,8) - Align (8) with the rest.
5. 04:28:341 (5) - x:376 y:32 instead so it doesn't overlap with the previous objects (nazi)
6. 04:52:134 (5,1) - Why not just put it at the end of the slider lol.
7. 04:57:996 (1,2,3) - How about something like this? Looks better imo.

Mira-san wrote:

Hi. Short mod cuz I don't think I'd find much tbh lol.

G E N E R A L

You got some unused hitsounds lol. actually I did use them. Try some skins like Yugen's then you'll understand why. shhhhhh sound everytime

1. soft-sliderslide.wav
2. soft-sliderslide2.wav

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1. 01:52:307 (6,7,1) - Could probably balance the spacing here. Idk if it's balance yet (hopefully it did) but if it's not then I'll excuse for it lol
2. 02:14:548 (7) - You can move this to x:64 y:336 so it kinda emphasizes the jump to the next object. Could probably do it for 04:37:997 (7) - too. kinda like the best idea today
3. 03:14:203 (1,3,4,5) - too close imo but not a big deal lol lol
4. 03:55:065 (5,6,7,8) - Align (8) with the rest. oops
5. 04:28:341 (5) - x:376 y:32 instead so it doesn't overlap with the previous objects (nazi) Idk but can you actually see the overlap?
6. 04:52:134 (5,1) - Why not just put it at the end of the slider lol. lol because then it'd be too far. and I can't move (2) due to the blanket.
7. 04:57:996 (1,2,3) - How about something like this? Looks better imo. yea it does but the spacing would be weird and too small.

k i suck at modding
i already said this but nice map kek

Yamicchi wrote:

I summon Star Shooters ~

O-Moei wrote:

Not fair !!! x'D me shot tuu x'D

Keada wrote:

Hi there o/ M4M
Sorry for late mod D: Not very late owo

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  Gone Wild

1. 00:07:996 (1) - make this like It looks a bit jiffy when you stack it D: Nah I think I would go with something that completely stop the flow, to emphasize the 3 drums you know
2. 00:19:031 (1) - same here same answer ;w;
3. 00:27:996 (3,4) - stack with 00:26:617 (4) - , also makes it keep consistent ds and also one more thing 00:28:168 (4) - curve this so it looks like this kinda about the stack, fixed, but not the curving thingy, I want something different because it's a clap
4. 00:30:065 (1) - same as I said above gotta be the same answer owo
5. 01:26:617 (1) - This slider overlapped itself really much, just a suggestion, maybe like this? yea I know but if I made it as you said I'll break the flow with (2)
6. 02:01:962 (7) - stack at the end of 02:00:755 (2) - ? pattern fixed
7. 04:06:617 (1) - doesnt look symmetrical, fix pls D: done~
8. 04:15:927 (7,1) - this flow was kinda weird D: I don't see any weirdness D: ?
9. 04:20:066 (1) - stack end on 04:19:548 (5) - just can't, then I'll break the spacing
10. 04:32:824 (3) - just imo, I didnt like this slider. try something like this? tbh I don't like it too. fixed a bit but idk if it's better yet

Didnt find anymore than that D:
Good Luck! pretty good map so.

1. any official source for metadata? xd
2. Unused hitsounds: soft-sliderslide.wav
3. soft-hitnormal.wav is too short and also has delay lol download the fix from here

1. 00:31:789 (2,3,4,5) - the circular motion is doesn't feel that good imo, maybe move 00:32:479 (5) - to the center of the screen in order to emphasize this beat just a suggestion tho
2. 00:38:686 (2,3) - you might want reduce the distance a bit... mainly because it looks exaggerated compared with stuff like 00:41:445 (2,3) - and 00:44:203 (2,3) -
3. 01:09:893 (9) - missing whistle here?
4. 02:00:410 (1,2) - i was expecting the same shape... not really important tho
5. 02:03:686 (1,2) - i'd swap nc on these two, nothing really happens on 02:03:686 - so the nc is unnecessary imo (same stuff on 02:04:203 (1,3) - )
6. 02:25:755 - i believe that the previous jumpy pattern was following the synth melody... taking that in consideration, wouldn't be better to follow it in the next combo too?
   
   something like

   
7. 02:42:134 (4,5) - looks a bit cramped doesn't it? i think something like this looks better

Kagetsu wrote:

[General]

1. any official source for metadata? xd I don't know lol I don't think there're any except for Soundcloud or directly from Teminite xd
2. Unused hitsounds: soft-sliderslide.wav oh now I realized. Deleted
3. soft-hitnormal.wav is too short and also has delay lol download the fix from here thanks :3

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1. 00:31:789 (2,3,4,5) - the circular motion is doesn't feel that good imo, maybe move 00:32:479 (5) - to the center of the screen in order to emphasize this beat just a suggestion tho Fixed, hope this works now
2. 00:38:686 (2,3) - you might want reduce the distance a bit... mainly because it looks exaggerated compared with stuff like 00:41:445 (2,3) - and 00:44:203 (2,3) - got it~
3. 01:09:893 (9) - missing whistle here? also fixed at 03:33:341 - yes
4. 02:00:410 (1,2) - i was expecting the same shape... not really important tho not really affect anything so yea o3o
5. 02:03:686 (1,2) - i'd swap nc on these two, nothing really happens on 02:03:686 - so the nc is unnecessary imo (same stuff on 02:04:203 (1,3) - ) might wanna ask you why do you choose to NC on a regular sound instead of a big drum like the current way? Would make more sense if I keep it like that lol
6. 02:25:755 - i believe that the previous jumpy pattern was following the synth melody... taking that in consideration, wouldn't be better to follow it in the next combo too? Ah this is quite a problem I wanna ask you. 02:25:927 - has quite a big drum, so which way can I do to show the drum clearly and also follow the music correctly?
   
   something like

   
7. 02:42:134 (4,5) - looks a bit cramped doesn't it? i think something like this looks better quite a good suggestion~

i won't bother you more pointing all the stuff again, the music is really repetitive and the map too consistent, so writing "same" is a waste of time. i believe you can use these suggestions to improve all the map, for example the new combo placement on 04:27:134 - , the rhythm around 04:49:203 - etc i'll have a look owo

k

Thank you

Kagetsu wrote:

#1

Left wrote:

lol bubbbble gratzz

but my m4m how :C

Desperate-kun wrote:

We did a short irc-mod. This mapset seems ready to me. Bubbled #2 :3

Shoga wrote:

Gratz #################################################################################

1. 00:14:893 (1) - consider adding a finish hitsound on the sliderhead since theres clearly a loud cymbal sound in the song and since u also have a finish here 03:00:410 - u should add one at 00:14:893 -
2. 00:25:927 - Same goes here , theres a cymbal sound which deserves a finish hitsound
3. 03:00:410 (1) - add whistle on slider head? since theres a kick sound in the song
4. 03:05:928 (1) - finish on the head is really unncesseray .-. the sound in the song isnt loud enough , whistle will work better
5. 05:05:755 (5) - why is there a clap on the head? mistake?

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

oh hi ~ i have some concerns about a few hitsounds ~ so i will just point them out now before the map gets pushed any farther
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1. 00:14:893 (1) - consider adding a finish hitsound on the sliderhead since theres clearly a loud cymbal sound in the song and since u also have a finish here 03:00:410 - u should add one at 00:14:893 - done!
2. 00:25:927 - Same goes here , theres a cymbal sound which deserves a finish hitsound okay
3. 03:00:410 (1) - add whistle on slider head? since theres a kick sound in the song I think not this time lol it deserves a finish
4. 03:05:928 (1) - finish on the head is really unncesseray .-. the sound in the song isnt loud enough , whistle will work better actually because the 4 circles inb4 you don't see it's strong as it should be? Plus I finish for every 8 white ticks so I think it should be fine
5. 05:05:755 (5) - why is there a clap on the head? mistake? yes lol

well i guess thats all ~ tell me the reason if my suggestions are wrong

otherwise , a pretty cool map . gl!~
osu! needs more wub wub songs www

Battle wrote:

MrSergio wrote:

holy, only 19 days.
Let me see...

MrSergio wrote:

holy, only 19 days.
Let me see...

EDIT:

04:46:617 (3) - just personal, but a ctrl+g would make a better flow here imo since this was mentioned before, as you wish :3
04:56:272 (1) - why this one is not similar to 04:56:272 (1) - or 04:56:272 (1) - even if there is a strong beat on the tail? (btw, the problem here is the fact you have a straight jump to the next slider which makes is less strong, unlike 05:07:307 (1) - for example) fixed the pattern but wanna ask for you to check it again owo

Call me~

MrSergio wrote:

hue, I see no other problems.

Gratz on first approval :3~

Oyatsu wrote:

Congratulation to #6 ranked VNese mapper !

Strategas wrote:

oh it got qualified before I could check

well congrats anyway! great map

Strategas wrote:

oh it got qualified before I could check

well congrats anyway! great map