From my ~Mod Que~

I guess you can call me Ms Distance Snap Anal Inspector lol. I like exact numbers =)

[Easnya]

1. It's more noticeable in Easy diff (circle size wise); distance between notes keeps changing throughout the map. 0.1 difference is fine I guess, but any more than that, you can see a difference. You go from 88 to 91, just pick one for consistency (especially in Easy's). It also just makes things look neater ^^
2. 00:16:888 (3,4,1) - Either move the tail end in a way where the cursor flows to the 4 naturally or move (4) and re-blanket it with (1).
3. 00:20:269 (3) - this note is noticeably further than all the other notes (90 to 94 atm)
4. 00:41:818 (4) - ^ Same reason (92 to 97)

[Normanya]

1. 01:18:156 (4) - Spacing off by 0.9

[Hard]
This was done well, good job! Though I feel like it's too linear for me (I personally like a few jumps). Just a suggestion: when the song reaches this "lyrical" bit 00:37:593 (2,3) - You can do a little jumps here. Or here - 00:41:818 (4,1) -

1. 00:44:776 (3) - Is this a jump or should this be equal ds? If it's a jump it's looks off compared to your very first one here 00:06:959 (1)
2. 00:53:438 (6,7) - It felt awkward to play here (your judgement)
3. 00:56:396 (3,1) - Too close.
4. 01:12:874 (2) - Too close to the slider (comparing to your other blankets).

[Collab Insanya~]

1. 00:16:888 (1,7) - Is the semi-spaced stream intentional between these two notes?
2. 01:02:100 (1) - I think this one should be equal ds with 01:01:677 (1,2)

[Exnya]

1. 00:32:734 (4,5) - Found this awkward to play. Again, your judgement.
2. 00:41:501 (2,3,4,1) - This can be aesthetically more pleasing.
3. 00:59:776 (4,1) - Same reason as the first point. [This is of course my opinion- I think it's because I'm expecting another jump (if you refer to it's previous notes (1), (2), (3)]

Enjoyable to play overall ^^

Hey Midge! M4M from your queue.
Well, that's it! I have to skip the last difficulty, because this degree isn't "my thing". But, here's a star for a little boost for qualified! Good Luck!

Vertify wrote:

From my ~Mod Que~

I guess you can call me Ms Distance Snap Anal Inspector lol. I like exact numbers =)

[Easnya]

1. It's more noticeable in Easy diff (circle size wise); distance between notes keeps changing throughout the map. 0.1 difference is fine I guess, but any more than that, you can see a difference. You go from 88 to 91, just pick one for consistency (especially in Easy's). It also just makes things look neater ^^
2. 00:16:888 (3,4,1) - Either move the tail end in a way where the cursor flows to the 4 naturally or move (4) and re-blanket it with (1). fine imo
3. 00:20:269 (3) - this note is noticeably further than all the other notes (90 to 94 atm) done?
4. 00:41:818 (4) - ^ Same reason (92 to 97) done

[Normanya]

1. 01:18:156 (4) - Spacing off by 0.9done

[Hard]
This was done well, good job! Though I feel like it's too linear for me (I personally like a few jumps). Just a suggestion: when the song reaches this "lyrical" bit 00:37:593 (2,3) - You can do a little jumps here. Or here - 00:41:818 (4,1) - fine imo, lol

1. 00:44:776 (3) - Is this a jump or should this be equal ds? If it's a jump it's looks off compared to your very first one here 00:06:959 (1) done
2. 00:53:438 (6,7) - It felt awkward to play here (your judgement) it does. but i don't really know what else to do here
3. 00:56:396 (3,1) - Too close. done
4. 01:12:874 (2) - Too close to the slider (comparing to your other blankets). done

[Collab Insanya~]

1. 00:16:888 (1,7) - Is the semi-spaced stream intentional between these two notes? yea :S
2. 01:02:100 (1) - I think this one should be equal ds with 01:01:677 (1,2) done

[Exnya]

1. 00:32:734 (4,5) - Found this awkward to play. Again, your judgement. fine imo
2. 00:41:501 (2,3,4,1) - This can be aesthetically more pleasing. fine
3. 00:59:776 (4,1) - Same reason as the first point. [This is of course my opinion- I think it's because I'm expecting another jump (if you refer to it's previous notes (1), (2), (3)] nah, plays fine imo :S

Enjoyable to play overall ^^

sheela901 wrote:

Hey Midge! M4M from your queue.

General

1. The word "cat" in the tags can be safely removed, since there's the same word in the title.

Easnya~

1. 00:06:748 (1) - Remove the new combo, so it could follow the consistency. eh, it's the beginning, i'll keep this for now
2. 00:08:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You should make the same rhythm as 00:15:198 (1,2,3,4) -, since they're similar, and I thought to would make a consistency to the rhythm. that would be changing too much, sorry :S
3. 00:51:959 - In my opinion, the slider (6)'s tail can't handle the strong beat, and sounded weird. What I would do is to remove the note (5), and move (6) to where (5) was. And if you move 00:52:382 (1,2,3) to the downbeat 00:52:381 -, it would sound more better, because I don't know what the slider was trying to follow. mmm fine imo
4. 00:57:452 (5) - I think the slider is too curved, because it doesn't follow the two notes earlier. I suggest to loosen the curve, so it could make a better flow. done
5. 01:14:353 (5) - The blanket is incompleted. Move the last node to x:330 y:186 to fix the blanket. done

Normanya~

1. I would say that 00:05:057 (1,2,3,4) has a pretty bad flowm since they going to the opposite. What you could is to rotate the slider to 90° clockwise, and move it where it could be. fixed differently, we'll see how that plays out
2. 00:10:973 (3) - I don't feel that the tail isn't fitting for a strong beat. I suggest to reduce the length of the slider by the half of it, then add a 1/1 slider on the downbeat. This would let (3) to end on the beat that will change a little part, and the new slider will restart the beat. fine imo
3. 00:49:001 (1) - Try flipping it vertically, and move it more to the top of the earlier note. It would result a better flow. done, we'll see how it plays out for now, subject to change though :S

Nukednya~'s Hard

1. 00:05:057 (1) - Try copying the shape of 00:05:903 (3) -, and rotate it by -45° with a vertical flip, then move it to x:182 y:170. It would follow better the path, in my opinion. tentative no, i kinda like it like this
2. 00:24:494 (4,5,6) - I find that this pattern and rhythm is for an upper grade than this. I mean, two kick-sliders consecutive and a 1/6 repeat slider might be too hard for this difficulty. This also goes for 00:31:255 (4,5,6) and 00:51:536 (2,3,4) . i've seen hards do a lot harder than these.
3. 00:49:846 (1,2,3,4) - Don't you think that this pattern is too hard, due to the distance? I also find it a little confusing. I would stay on the path, where the kick-sliders are more closer to each other. ^
4. 00:53:015 (2,3,4,5) - This is me, but in my opinion, the stream is "too" long. I would replace the notes for a repeat slider. changed to kick sliders

It feels that the difficulty spread isn't constant. The first part is easier, while the rest of the map is harder. It also feels really hard because of the kick-sliders.

Collab Insanya~

1. 00:20:058 (2) - I feel that when the slider has the head down and the tail up, it would make a cool flow. nah, it's fine
2. 00:58:297 (1) - Hmm... I don't think that this long slider follows anything in the music. The beats that the slider lands on aren't long notes, like 01:27:452 (1) -, so I think it's useless if it doesn't follow anything, and make another rhythm. stays consistent with exnya :S

Well, that's it! I have to skip the last difficulty, because this degree isn't "my thing". But, here's a star for a little boost for qualified! Good Luck!

Thanks for mods o/

Ello,
[General]
Throughout all the difficulties, I found it difficult to correct any errors involving the beginning and end of new combos since it seemed inconsistent as to whether or not new combos start every measure, two beats, or two measures.
[Exnya~]
00:31:255 (1) - This slider ends on the 32nd note before the next measure, which makes the end sound off beat when compared to the rest of the map. Consider ending it on the blue tick before 00:32:100. The other thing is that this slider folds in on itself in a way that you can't quite follow the pattern, which might be considered unrankable. Maybe change it to a more standard curve or something like this? http://puu.sh/cvTZ9/c821163b2a.jpg
00:58:297 (1) - ^
01:24:917 (1) - ^
[Collab Insanya~]
Just in general, I usually see names of people who map certain sections of maps of a collab on a storyboard. Perhaps consider incorporating something like this?
00:31:255 (1) - Try this: http://puu.sh/cvUoD/4329a27b8f.jpg
01:27:452 (1) - Try this: http://puu.sh/cvUCx/2483b139f8.jpg
[Nukednya~'s Hard]
01:10:128 (3) - Try this: http://puu.sh/cvURM/fb293a7b19.jpg
[Normanya~]
Fine.
[Easnya~]
Fine.

Can't wait to have this ranked, good luck!

Halfslashed wrote:

Ello,
[General]
Throughout all the difficulties, I found it difficult to correct any errors involving the beginning and end of new combos since it seemed inconsistent as to whether or not new combos start every measure, two beats, or two measures.
[Exnya~]
00:31:255 (1) - This slider ends on the 32nd note before the next measure, which makes the end sound off beat when compared to the rest of the map. Consider ending it on the blue tick before 00:32:100. The other thing is that this slider folds in on itself in a way that you can't quite follow the pattern, which might be considered unrankable. Maybe change it to a more standard curve or something like this? http://puu.sh/cvTZ9/c821163b2a.jpg
00:58:297 (1) - ^
01:24:917 (1) - ^all of these are fine, sliders like this have been ranked before
[Collab Insanya~]
Just in general, I usually see names of people who map certain sections of maps of a collab on a storyboard. Perhaps consider incorporating something like this? informations is given in the description of the map. it's not long enough to sb, really.
00:31:255 (1) - Try this: http://puu.sh/cvUoD/4329a27b8f.jpg fixed a bit
01:27:452 (1) - Try this: http://puu.sh/cvUCx/2483b139f8.jpg fine
[Nukednya~'s Hard]
01:10:128 (3) - Try this: http://puu.sh/cvURM/fb293a7b19.jpg fine, it blankets the tail of 2
[Normanya~]
Fine.
[Easnya~]
Fine.

Can't wait to have this ranked, good luck!

thanks for mod o/

Hey there!

[KKnya~ EZ]
01:32:945 (92945|0) - might want to shorten the LN by half or remove.
01:32:945 (92945|5) - add a note here, possibly on column 5
01:33:367 (93367|3) - add a note here, possibly on column 3

Alternatively, remove the slider and finish the song at 01:32:522 (92522|3)

[Pewrakonya~ NM]
Good!

[Nukednya~'s Hard]
00:53:438 (5,6,7) - move them closer to each other and (5) closer to (4).

[Collab Insanya~]

00:17:417 (4,5,6) - they gradually become more spaced apart. Intentional?

00:48:790 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - the two stacks have different spacing. Intentional?

Overall enjoyable to play! Keep up the great work

Hi, mod as promised, sorry for late~

[General]

1. Cool song + background

[Easnya~]

1. A general play through of this map was rather nice; however, some overlapping does hinder the quality of the map.
2. 00:10:128 (4,1) - Consider changing the pattern here to either A) Remove the overlap with the previous circle 4 or B) curve the slider 1 away from the circle 4.
3. 00:59:987 - Here two objects (circle 2 and slider 3) are shown. This may be confusing as the novice user may aim towards the closer (newly created) slider first. Consider re-patterning.
4. 01:10:973 (3,2) - As stacking would alter the distance snap here, I suggest that you re-pattern the circles altogether.

[Normanya~]

1. Overall the difficulty is great. I do not recommend triple 1/2 circles but they are considered rankable as per 2014 ranking criteria.
2. 00:32:311 (1) - You could totally blanket this slider's track with the previous slider 1.
   
   
   ~
3. 00:37:593 (5) - I personally feel that this slider needs some "spazazz" or other stylish pattern.
4. 00:54:494 (6,7) - The slider 7's end is too close to the slider 6's track. Consider violating the distance snap to a degree of ~+0.05.

[Nukednya~'s Hard]

1. 1/4-based Hards aren't something you see everyday. It's pretty nice.
2. Just personal preference, but you may want to diversify some of your sliders and add more interesting curves.
3. I personally stack similar objects ( e.g: 01:02:945 (1,2) - ) but this is totally up to you and not required. If you like this concept, be sure to change all other similar patterns for consistency.

Personally, I find the Insane to be mapped in the form of an Extra with lower Distance Snap. Some 1/4 and 1/8 patterns seem a bit too hard for Insane. Consider using more 1/2, 3/4, and even 1/1 sliders instead.

Good luck~

m4m! t/255150
[Easnya]
no issues

[Normanya]
[list]
00:46:043 (2,4) - minor blanketing issue

[Hard]
01:02:100 (3) - blanket is not perfect as it should be here (just change slider shape a little bit)




[Collab Insanya~]


00:34:846 (2) - y168 to y164


[Exnya]
01:00:410 (3,4) - feel like you could rotate it slightly upwards so that the top slider is in line with the bottom slider and that it flows to the next note.

well done

sorry for short mod. either this is mapped too well or i'm just bad

WillTai wrote:

Hey there!

[Nukednya~'s Hard]
00:53:438 (5,6,7) - move them closer to each other and (5) closer to (4). fixed

[Collab Insanya~]

00:17:417 (4,5,6) - they gradually become more spaced apart. Intentional? yea

00:48:790 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - the two stacks have different spacing. Intentional? yea

Overall enjoyable to play! Keep up the great work

not applying mania mods due to the piano

Project Railgun wrote:

Hi, mod as promised, sorry for late~

[General]

1. Cool song + background

[Easnya~]

1. A general play through of this map was rather nice; however, some overlapping does hinder the quality of the map.
2. 00:10:128 (4,1) - Consider changing the pattern here to either A) Remove the overlap with the previous circle 4 or B) curve the slider 1 away from the circle 4. ar leaves enough time so that 4 does not overlap 5 ingame
3. 00:59:987 - Here two objects (circle 2 and slider 3) are shown. This may be confusing as the novice user may aim towards the closer (newly created) slider first. Consider re-patterning. swapped 2 and 3
4. 01:10:973 (3,2) - As stacking would alter the distance snap here, I suggest that you re-pattern the circles altogether. fine imo. there's no visible overlap

[Normanya~]

1. Overall the difficulty is great. I do not recommend triple 1/2 circles but they are considered rankable as per 2014 ranking criteria.
2. 00:32:311 (1) - You could totally blanket this slider's track with the previous slider 1. looks fine to me .-.
   
   
   ~
3. 00:37:593 (5) - I personally feel that this slider needs some "spazazz" or other stylish pattern. fixed with somethign simple :S
4. 00:54:494 (6,7) - The slider 7's end is too close to the slider 6's track. Consider violating the distance snap to a degree of ~+0.05. fixed

[Nukednya~'s Hard]

1. 1/4-based Hards aren't something you see everyday. It's pretty nice.
2. Just personal preference, but you may want to diversify some of your sliders and add more interesting curves.
3. I personally stack similar objects ( e.g: 01:02:945 (1,2) - ) but this is totally up to you and not required. If you like this concept, be sure to change all other similar patterns for consistency. yea, fine imo :S

Personally, I find the Insane to be mapped in the form of an Extra with lower Distance Snap. Some 1/4 and 1/8 patterns seem a bit too hard for Insane. Consider using more 1/2, 3/4, and even 1/1 sliders instead. i agree, and it was kind of what I was going for. we'll see how it holds up

Good luck~

byfar wrote:

m4m! t/255150
[Easnya]
no issues

[Normanya]
[list]
00:46:043 (2,4) - minor blanketing issue fixed

[Hard]
01:02:100 (3) - blanket is not perfect as it should be here (just change slider shape a little bit) fine imo




[Collab Insanya~]


00:34:846 (2) - y168 to y164 wat


[Exnya]
01:00:410 (3,4) - feel like you could rotate it slightly upwards so that the top slider is in line with the bottom slider and that it flows to the next note. fine imo

well done

sorry for short mod. either this is mapped too well or i'm just bad

Thanks for mods o/

When does this map gets ranked?
I've been waiting for a month now.

Mystyk said he'd check it out, so that's mostly what I'm waiting for.

[Nukednya~'s Hard]
00:37:593 (2) - Ctrl + J, G, H and re-place

Hi! Your requested mod from some time ago, sorry for the wait. (Also, I'm a she.)

[Easnya~]

• 
  In general the difficulty looks nice, but my problem is that it's full of 1/1 and there are hardly any 2/1 breaks and this is an easy, and also too much 1/1 is boring so I think you could improve this a bit.

1. 00:30:832 (4) - remove this to put some break between the notes and because this one is kind of soft so it doesn't need to be hit with a hit circle in my opinion
2. 00:34:212 (3,4,5) - instead of 3 hit circles a slider would be better because of the reasons in general about this difficulty and because it would give a bigger emphasis to the big beat at 00:35:480 (1) - http://puu.sh/d1aQs/0f82f71233.jpg
3. 00:44:776 (4,5) - either remove these or make one long slider as suggested above ^ because these notes are very soft and there is too much 1/1, try to vary the rhythm a bit and make it easier, put some breaks between the notes
4. 00:50:691 (3,4,5) - I would use a long slider here as well
5. 00:58:297 (6,2) - please don't stack them, it's confusing - just an example, I think you can do it better with your own ideas - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2267883
6. 01:07:593 (3,4,5) - try to remove this? 01:08:015 (4) - to put some break between the notes or at least make a long slider instad of 3 hit circles, it doesn't feel that nice to click on 01:08:015 (4) - because it's on a soft beat
7. 01:20:269 (3) - same as above

[Normanya~]

1. 00:15:832 (2) - this note feels a bit forced, I would rather remove it
2. 00:23:649 (4) - i would rather add a new combo here because (7) is a bit long and there is a lot of 1/2
3. 00:31:255 (4) - you should move this down a little so that it is not too close to 00:29:565 (2) - it will be easier to read, this should be better - http://puu.sh/d2FoX/6c317a138d.jpg
4. 00:32:945 (2) - same as above ^ try to move this down a bit for easier readability
5. 00:54:494 (6,7) - this one is actualy confusing, it would be better if the sliderend was somewhere else, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272591
6. 00:56:607 (2,3,4,1,2) - same that I mentioned before, try making it easier to read - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272596 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272600
7. 01:23:015 (2) - remove this, this diff has a lot of 1/2s so it's safer to remove a few notes and 01:23:227 (3) - this is a bit louder anyway so by removing (2) it will be emphasized better
8. 01:28:719 (1) - a slider and a hit circle would be a better finish :3 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272610

[Nukednya~'s Hard]

1. 00:17:522 (4,5,6) - this is pretty crowded and (6)'s reverse arrow is a bit hidden, so I would try to rearrange the pattern a bit, just an example of course: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272874
2. 00:19:846 (5,1,2) - why not keep the same distance as always? they are unreasonably close - http://puu.sh/d2Mro/2aaf4d8c93.jpg
3. 00:21:959 (1,5) - maybe you can rotate 00:23:015 (5,1) - a little so that 00:21:959 (1,5) - don't overlap at all - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272889
4. 00:31:677 (6,1,2) - the distance is quite confusing because (6) and (1) is a jump but (1) and (2) is distance snapped correctly, so you should emphasize these changes, try this maybe? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272902
5. 00:43:931 (1,2,3) - why not fix these distant changes? it's not that much work but it will look nicer - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272910
6. 00:58:297 (3,5) - very small thing but this is so disturbing to the eyes, try to put them further a bit to make it nicer

[Collab Insanya~]

1. 00:05:586 - add hit circle? it would fit better to the music
2. 00:10:128 (1,2) - I don't see a reason to use a little bit higher spacing, why not use the same distance? - http://puu.sh/d4ibT/e8fa8072fa.jpg
3. 00:47:522 (2) - I would rather replace this, it was confusing because it's stacked with 00:47:100 (2) -
4. 00:48:050 (1) - instead of a reverse slider why not try 2 hit circle or a slider starting - 00:48:156 - ? it would fit a lot better to the song, it would be easier to read because it wouldn't start on a blue tick
5. 00:48:896 (2) - this feels quite unnecessary tbh I would remove it, there is nothing loud here and it will fit better to the vocals if you remove it
6. 01:12:241 (5) - hidden reverse arrow, please re-arrange the pattern so that the reverse arrow is visible
7. 01:20:269 (2,3) - try not to overlap, it's a little bit confusing and I think it would be nicer to avoid overlap
8. 01:27:452 (1) - please don't use such a shape, it's confusing and should be avoided
   

   Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end.

[Exnya~]

1. 00:29:142 (2,1) - just a personal opinion but I dislike this anti-jump, so you could consider using higher distance here
2. 00:31:255 (1) - I have several problems with this, first of all slidershape, just like I mentioned on Collab Insanya~, it's confusing, moreover it has slower slider velocity (because the previous section used 2,00x) so it might as well be more confusing, 3rd the slider ends on a 1/8 note which doesn't fit, the slider should end here - 00:31:994 -
3. 00:45:621 (1,3) - don't overlap, it's confusing
4. 00:58:297 (1) - I think this SV change doesn't fit here,it would be better if this was normally mapped because there are no weird sounds at this point and also don't end the slider on an 1/8 note because there is nothing loud to be emphasized
5. 01:04:001 (1) - again 1/8 doesn't fit here, please remove the next hit circle and lengthen the slider
6. 01:12:241 (6) - this reverse arrow is too hidden, please try to re-arrange the pate
7. 01:24:917 (1) - 1/8 again, try to avoid it please

Ughh I hope I didn't forget anything, but it's almost 2 am so sorry if I missed something.

Enon wrote:

[Nukednya~'s Hard]
00:37:593 (2) - Ctrl + J, G, H and re-place no, sorry

Mystyk wrote:

Hi! Your requested mod from some time ago, sorry for the wait. (Also, I'm a she.)

[Easnya~]

• 
  In general the difficulty looks nice, but my problem is that it's full of 1/1 and there are hardly any 2/1 breaks and this is an easy, and also too much 1/1 is boring so I think you could improve this a bit. my take on this is that this map is very, very, very repetitive. mapping this, there was no consistent way to add breaks without it feeling out of place.

1. 00:30:832 (4) - remove this to put some break between the notes and because this one is kind of soft so it doesn't need to be hit with a hit circle in my opinion emphasizing the sdvx sound thing
2. 00:34:212 (3,4,5) - instead of 3 hit circles a slider would be better because of the reasons in general about this difficulty and because it would give a bigger emphasis to the big beat at 00:35:480 (1) - http://puu.sh/d1aQs/0f82f71233.jpg done
3. 00:44:776 (4,5) - either remove these or make one long slider as suggested above ^ because these notes are very soft and there is too much 1/1, try to vary the rhythm a bit and make it easier, put some breaks between the notes done
4. 00:50:691 (3,4,5) - I would use a long slider here as well done
5. 00:58:297 (6,2) - please don't stack them, it's confusing - just an example, I think you can do it better with your own ideas - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2267883 fixed with a repeater, stack shows up later though (i like it :S)
6. 01:07:593 (3,4,5) - try to remove this? 01:08:015 (4) - to put some break between the notes or at least make a long slider instad of 3 hit circles, it doesn't feel that nice to click on 01:08:015 (4) - because it's on a soft beat fixed
7. 01:20:269 (3) - same as abovefixed with a slider

[Normanya~]

1. 00:15:832 (2) - this note feels a bit forced, I would rather remove it done
2. 00:23:649 (4) - i would rather add a new combo here because (7) is a bit long and there is a lot of 1/2 done for now, i don't like breaking the nc-every-other-measure thing i had going, though
3. 00:31:255 (4) - you should move this down a little so that it is not too close to 00:29:565 (2) - it will be easier to read, this should be better - http://puu.sh/d2FoX/6c317a138d.jpg done
4. 00:32:945 (2) - same as above ^ try to move this down a bit for easier readability done
5. 00:54:494 (6,7) - this one is actualy confusing, it would be better if the sliderend was somewhere else, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272591 fixed
6. 00:56:607 (2,3,4,1,2) - same that I mentioned before, try making it easier to read - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272596 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272600 done
7. 01:23:015 (2) - remove this, this diff has a lot of 1/2s so it's safer to remove a few notes and 01:23:227 (3) - this is a bit louder anyway so by removing (2) it will be emphasized better done
8. 01:28:719 (1) - a slider and a hit circle would be a better finish :3 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272610 done

[Nukednya~'s Hard]

1. 00:17:522 (4,5,6) - this is pretty crowded and (6)'s reverse arrow is a bit hidden, so I would try to rearrange the pattern a bit, just an example of course: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272874 fixed differently :S
2. 00:19:846 (5,1,2) - why not keep the same distance as always? they are unreasonably close - http://puu.sh/d2Mro/2aaf4d8c93.jpg fixed in above
3. 00:21:959 (1,5) - maybe you can rotate 00:23:015 (5,1) - a little so that 00:21:959 (1,5) - don't overlap at all - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272889 fixed
4. 00:31:677 (6,1,2) - the distance is quite confusing because (6) and (1) is a jump but (1) and (2) is distance snapped correctly, so you should emphasize these changes, try this maybe? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272902 switch to 1 reverse instead of 2
5. 00:43:931 (1,2,3) - why not fix these distant changes? it's not that much work but it will look nicer - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272910 looks fine to me? i tried :S
6. 00:58:297 (3,5) - very small thing but this is so disturbing to the eyes, try to put them further a bit to make it nicer fixed i think

[Collab Insanya~]

1. 00:05:586 - add hit circle? it would fit better to the music fine imo
2. 00:10:128 (1,2) - I don't see a reason to use a little bit higher spacing, why not use the same distance? - http://puu.sh/d4ibT/e8fa8072fa.jpg done
3. 00:47:522 (2) - I would rather replace this, it was confusing because it's stacked with 00:47:100 (2) - fixed differently
4. 00:48:050 (1) - instead of a reverse slider why not try 2 hit circle or a slider starting - 00:48:156 - ? it would fit a lot better to the song, it would be easier to read because it wouldn't start on a blue tick ^
5. 00:48:896 (2) - this feels quite unnecessary tbh I would remove it, there is nothing loud here and it will fit better to the vocals if you remove it i like it, keeping for now
6. 01:12:241 (5) - hidden reverse arrow, please re-arrange the pattern so that the reverse arrow is visible i don't see it ;n; fixed though?
7. 01:20:269 (2,3) - try not to overlap, it's a little bit confusing and I think it would be nicer to avoid overlap fixed
8. 01:27:452 (1) - please don't use such a shape, it's confusing and should be avoided tried to make it a bit more readable
   

   Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end.

[Exnya~]

1. 00:29:142 (2,1) - just a personal opinion but I dislike this anti-jump, so you could consider using higher distance here i'd like to think of is a feature, so i'd like to keep it :S
2. 00:31:255 (1) - I have several problems with this, first of all slidershape, just like I mentioned on Collab Insanya~, it's confusing, moreover it has slower slider velocity (because the previous section used 2,00x) so it might as well be more confusing, 3rd the slider ends on a 1/8 note which doesn't fit, the slider should end here - 00:31:994 - i made it more readable, but i'd like to defend this shape and it's sv. even if the player thinks it's faster and moves their cursor immediately to the end of the slider, their cursor would still be inside of the follow circle. furthermore, there aren't any visible circles after it for a long time, so the player couldn't break combo
3. 00:45:621 (1,3) - don't overlap, it's confusing fixed
4. 00:58:297 (1) - I think this SV change doesn't fit here,it would be better if this was normally mapped because there are no weird sounds at this point and also don't end the slider on an 1/8 note because there is nothing loud to be emphasized yea, fixed
5. 01:04:001 (1) - again 1/8 doesn't fit here, please remove the next hit circle and lengthen the slider the point of this section is to have one circle/slider on one end, and another circle/slider on the other, and flowing circularly. i like it, so im keeping for now
6. 01:12:241 (6) - this reverse arrow is too hidden, please try to re-arrange the pate increased ds
7. 01:24:917 (1) - 1/8 again, try to avoid it pleasefixed

Ughh I hope I didn't forget anything, but it's almost 2 am so sorry if I missed something.

Thanks for mod~

Hi! Can you put 4k maps there, Ty!

One day this map will get ranked...
I also second the 4k Kappa

[Easnya~]

1. 00:34:212 (3) - that look kind of weird and it might give some difficulty to read so try to make it better a bit - http://puu.sh/davDP/ba18262618.jpg - I think this still gives the feeling that you want to achieve while being easier to read
2. 00:50:691 (3) - this shape might be too hard to read again, it's squeezed in the corner of the beatmap and it's confusing >.< maybe you can just try a different pattern, an example - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2293253 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2293255 - of course you don't have to follow this, it's up to you how to change it

[Normanya~]

1. 00:31:255 (4,1,2) - although you said you changed it but it looks the same? xD try to have at least this much space - http://puu.sh/dawMs/ecd5fefd32.jpg - 00:33:367 (3) - if you replace this to x:160 y:220 the distance will be fine and patterns won't break either (00:32:945 (2) - is on x:172 y:328)
2. 01:24:917 (4) - this slider should be changed, it's hard to read :C - example: http://puu.sh/daxx5/b5c8e852f6.jpg
3. 01:29:565 (2) - add finish, since you also added a finish on Easy and it would fit anywayto the song as well

[Nukednya's Hard]

1. 00:18:156 (4) - add clap, it sounds like you missed to add it
2. 00:41:396 (3,4) - these are quite ugly and might as well be confusing to read (because the sliderend and sliderbeginning are too close) so I would rather change them a bit (at least this much http://puu.sh/dc1zC/13562ca24d.jpg)
3. 00:46:888 (5) - same as above about the slidershape
4. 01:10:128 (3) - the sliderbody is confusing because it looks shorter than it actually is, so with a slight change it would be better - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2297377

[Collab Insanya~]

1. 01:12:452 (1) - try to put this more to the left please it's hard to see the beginning of the slider, try not to place it under a stream - http://puu.sh/dcIDG/e209815abf.jpg
2. 01:27:452 (1) - this still looks too confusing
   also

3. 00:58:297 (1) - I think this SV change doesn't fit here,it would be better if this was normally mapped because there are no weird sounds at this point and also don't end the slider on an 1/8 note because there is nothing loud to be emphasized

   you said you fixed this, but the SV change is still there, and tbh there are other places where there is unreasonable slider velocity change, just look at this:
   http://puu.sh/dcNHE/bd0b247d97.png
4. 00:41:396 (1,2) - these notes don't really have a difference in sound but you used a different slider velocity
5. 00:46:466 (1,2,1) - this one is just as troubling
6. 00:46:466 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,1,1) - also this, also has slider velocity change and the flow is also bad (imo) moreover the notes are placed with almost the same distance even though on the timeline they are VERY different and that's not right
7. 00:51:536 (5,1,1) - http://puu.sh/dcNXW/d00f22f2e9.png - the sound at these notes is way too similar to use different slider velocity
8. 00:57:345 (4,1) - unreasonable spacing, why is (1) so far from (4) on the timeline they have equal distance
9. 01:04:424 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - same problem about the slider velocity change
10. 01:11:184 (1,2,3) - unreasonable SV change again
11. 00:24:072 (3,4,1,2,3) - also unreasonable SV changes
12. 00:27:241 (1,2,3) - same here, too many SV changes

[Exnya~]

1. 00:07:170 (2) - this should be a hit circle not a slider, the song only "asks" for a hit circle
2. 00:10:128 (1,2) - why use higher distance? it doesn't make sense
3. 00:10:973 (1,2,3,4) - these jumps are too big, I understand if you want to put jumps but I think reducing them would be better since the music is similar at these parts
4. 00:12:241 (3,4) - why is the spacing different here than 00:12:452 (4,1) - ? it should be the same
5. 00:21:114 (1) - this should end on a blue tick
6. 00:27:029 (1) - 2,00 for SV might be too big and the shape is ugly, we can't tell how long the slider is, and that's very important when you use a slider velocity change, here 00:28:508 (1) - you did it fine because we can at least tell how long the slider is
7. 00:31:255 (1) - this slidershape is unacceptable in my opinion
8. 00:44:565 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think these doesn't ask for a jump
9. 00:45:832 (2,3) - here again unreasonable jump, the music is too soft to have a jump!
10. 00:46:043 (3,4) - and then here again different spacing, you could just use the same that you did here 00:46:255 (4,5) -
11. 00:46:888 (3,1) - this jump looks unfitting because the music is too soft and "nya" ends on 00:46:994 - so just what are you trying to emphasize with that jump?
12. 00:54:917 (5,6,7,1) - those are some very big jumps, and I don't mind you putting jumps in the extra, but make them reasonable, the music is soft here so smaller jumps would be better
13. 00:55:550 (1,2) - this one is also kind of big since you used a slider velocity change too it is surprising imo
14. 01:01:677 (1) - this should end on the blue tick 01:01:994 - it's unreasonable to end this slider on an 1/8 note
15. 00:58:297 (1,2,3,4) - unreasonable SV change
16. 01:04:001 (1,2) - I'm sorry but I can't approve of this either and the slider velocity change is also too high in my opinion, it's really surprising
17. 01:14:565 (1,2) - unreasonable spacing
18. 01:19:212 (1,2,1,2) - also these kind of 1/4 jumps throughout the whole difficulty, they're too big
19. 01:25:339 (1,1,1,1) - too many slider velocity changes
20. 01:27:452 (2) - this slidershape doesn't look nice either moreover people can't even tell that it's going to be a slowdown

I'm really sorry but in it's current state I don't want to bubble your map, but I also don't want to force changes on you, maybe you can find someone else.

Ok, sorry for late reply, I was busy being salty. This map hurts :c

Mystyk wrote:

[Easnya~]

1. 00:34:212 (3) - that look kind of weird and it might give some difficulty to read so try to make it better a bit - http://puu.sh/davDP/ba18262618.jpg - I think this still gives the feeling that you want to achieve while being easier to read done
2. 00:50:691 (3) - this shape might be too hard to read again, it's squeezed in the corner of the beatmap and it's confusing >.< maybe you can just try a different pattern, an example - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2293253 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2293255 - of course you don't have to follow this, it's up to you how to change it fixed differently, we'll see how it holds up

[Normanya~]

1. 00:31:255 (4,1,2) - although you said you changed it but it looks the same? xD try to have at least this much space - http://puu.sh/dawMs/ecd5fefd32.jpg - 00:33:367 (3) - if you replace this to x:160 y:220 the distance will be fine and patterns won't break either (00:32:945 (2) - is on x:172 y:328) whoops mb
2. 01:24:917 (4) - this slider should be changed, it's hard to read :C - example: http://puu.sh/daxx5/b5c8e852f6.jpg done
3. 01:29:565 (2) - add finish, since you also added a finish on Easy and it would fit anywayto the song as well yea, i have to reapply the hs to all the maps

[Nukednya's Hard]

1. 00:18:156 (4) - add clap, it sounds like you missed to add it
2. 00:41:396 (3,4) - these are quite ugly and might as well be confusing to read (because the sliderend and sliderbeginning are too close) so I would rather change them a bit (at least this much http://puu.sh/dc1zC/13562ca24d.jpg) fixed
3. 00:46:888 (5) - same as above about the slidershape fixed
4. 01:10:128 (3) - the sliderbody is confusing because it looks shorter than it actually is, so with a slight change it would be better - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2297377 fixed, but i wanted to keep the curved streams

[Collab Insanya~]

1. 01:12:452 (1) - try to put this more to the left please it's hard to see the beginning of the slider, try not to place it under a stream - http://puu.sh/dcIDG/e209815abf.jpg done
2. 01:27:452 (1) - this still looks too confusing i strongly disagree, sorry :c
   also

3. 00:58:297 (1) - I think this SV change doesn't fit here,it would be better if this was normally mapped because there are no weird sounds at this point and also don't end the slider on an 1/8 note because there is nothing loud to be emphasized

   you said you fixed this, but the SV change is still there, and tbh there are other places where there is unreasonable slider velocity change, just look at this:
   http://puu.sh/dcNHE/bd0b247d97.png changed sv to 1x
4. 00:41:396 (1,2) - these notes don't really have a difference in sound but you used a different slider velocity i disagree, they're meant to emphasize the rise in sound after that low slider
5. 00:46:466 (1,2,1) - this one is just as troubling rises and falls, sorry i want to keep this
6. 00:46:466 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,1,1) - also this, also has slider velocity change and the flow is also bad (imo) moreover the notes are placed with almost the same distance even though on the timeline they are VERY different and that's not right fine imo. flow is intentionally placed so the sliders point in the same direction. however, i might change the triplet and sv if it becomes more of an issue
7. 00:51:536 (5,1,1) - http://puu.sh/dcNXW/d00f22f2e9.png - the sound at these notes is way too similar to use different slider velocity yea fixed
8. 00:57:345 (4,1) - unreasonable spacing, why is (1) so far from (4) on the timeline they have equal distance made a little close so that they're touching, but i wanted sv to change ever 4 (looks cool)
9. 01:04:424 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - same problem about the slider velocity change fine imo
10. 01:11:184 (1,2,3) - unreasonable SV change again mmm keeping for now
11. 00:24:072 (3,4,1,2,3) - also unreasonable SV changes fixed
12. 00:27:241 (1,2,3) - same here, too many SV changes keeping for now

About the sv changes, I want to keep them. I believe they add an extra dimension to the song so that it feels like it's rising and falling, like it does in the sdvx chart. I've changed the ones that I feel are unjustified, but I think that the one's I've left in enhance the song.

[Exnya~]

1. 00:07:170 (2) - this should be a hit circle not a slider, the song only "asks" for a hit circle fine imo
2. 00:10:128 (1,2) - why use higher distance? it doesn't make sense i've had multiple complaints about when i had the tail of 1 touch 2, so i figured leaving a space would signify that 1 is a kick slider
3. 00:10:973 (1,2,3,4) - these jumps are too big, I understand if you want to put jumps but I think reducing them would be better since the music is similar at these parts reduced
4. 00:12:241 (3,4) - why is the spacing different here than 00:12:452 (4,1) - ? it should be the same fixed, made them not touch
5. 00:21:114 (1) - this should end on a blue tick fixed
6. 00:27:029 (1) - 2,00 for SV might be too big and the shape is ugly, we can't tell how long the slider is, and that's very important when you use a slider velocity change, here 00:28:508 (1) - you did it fine because we can at least tell how long the slider is fixed?
7. 00:31:255 (1) - this slidershape is unacceptable in my opinion well i've made my case, so idk what else to say. i reeeaaally want to keep this.
8. 00:44:565 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think these doesn't ask for a jump reduced ds
9. 00:45:832 (2,3) - here again unreasonable jump, the music is too soft to have a jump! ^
10. 00:46:043 (3,4) - and then here again different spacing, you could just use the same that you did here 00:46:255 (4,5) - fixed in above?
11. 00:46:888 (3,1) - this jump looks unfitting because the music is too soft and "nya" ends on 00:46:994 - so just what are you trying to emphasize with that jump? fixed
12. 00:54:917 (5,6,7,1) - those are some very big jumps, and I don't mind you putting jumps in the extra, but make them reasonable, the music is soft here so smaller jumps would be better reduced slightly
13. 00:55:550 (1,2) - this one is also kind of big since you used a slider velocity change too it is surprising imo fine imo
14. 01:01:677 (1) - this should end on the blue tick 01:01:994 - it's unreasonable to end this slider on an 1/8 note fixed
15. 00:58:297 (1,2,3,4) - unreasonable SV change fixed
16. 01:04:001 (1,2) - I'm sorry but I can't approve of this either and the slider velocity change is also too high in my opinion, it's really surprising ok, changed to kick slider, but kept 2x sv.
17. 01:14:565 (1,2) - unreasonable spacing unreasonable? it's a kick slider into a triplet, it's fine imo
18. 01:19:212 (1,2,1,2) - also these kind of 1/4 jumps throughout the whole difficulty, they're too big it's a feature imo
19. 01:25:339 (1,1,1,1) - too many slider velocity changes fine imo ;n;
20. 01:27:452 (2) - this slidershape doesn't look nice either moreover people can't even tell that it's going to be a slowdown nc'd and slanted (i find that makes it look slightly better :S)

I'm really sorry but in it's current state I don't want to bubble your map, but I also don't want to force changes on you, maybe you can find someone else.

Ok, thanks for the mod and consideration, you've been really helpful.

Oh the humanity...

Hey midge, you should try for rank on this map :^)

You're right. I should stop casually getting mods and start trying hardcore :^I

m4m, sorry if I can't help >_<

[Easnya~]
00:35:480 (1) - I suggest this rhythm: http://puu.sh/dFN5K/a6bfedd0fc.jpg
01:01:255 (3) - let it move in a straight line?: http://puu.sh/dFNFP/15d68adc42.jpg
01:07:593 (3) - I feel like this slider bends too hard for an easy.
01:15:621 (6,1,2) - let the notes flow out of the slider like this?: http://puu.sh/dFNXT/fd79dded3b.jpg

[Normanya~]
00:31:255 (4) - I feel like that slider end would look nicer like this but maybe that's just me: http://puu.sh/dFOpn/29a59acfea.jpg
Nice diff.

[Nukednya~'s Hard]
00:29:776 (5,6) - I feel like this sort of pattern is difficult to predict because most of the sliders before had 4 repeats
00:55:339 (3) - Ctrl-G
01:28:297 (2) - Ctrl-G

[Collab Insanya~]
00:09:177 (1,2,3) - put the notes before the slider? triples are more intuitive to play
I like this diff

[Exnya~]
01:02:945 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4) - this part feels kinda cluttered and weird to play
Interesting diff.

cool set, sorry I wasn't able to find much o_o

the eternal struggle.

deetz wrote:

m4m, sorry if I can't help >_<

[Easnya~]
00:35:480 (1) - I suggest this rhythm: http://puu.sh/dFN5K/a6bfedd0fc.jpg can't make 3 into a repeater w/out breaking ds, and 2 emphasizes the drop in sound
01:01:255 (3) - let it move in a straight line?: http://puu.sh/dFNFP/15d68adc42.jpg done
01:07:593 (3) - I feel like this slider bends too hard for an easy. fine imo
01:15:621 (6,1,2) - let the notes flow out of the slider like this?: http://puu.sh/dFNXT/fd79dded3b.jpg that puush is broken :c

[Normanya~]
00:31:255 (4) - I feel like that slider end would look nicer like this but maybe that's just me: http://puu.sh/dFOpn/29a59acfea.jpg i can't see it ;n;
Nice diff.

[Nukednya~'s Hard]
00:29:776 (5,6) - I feel like this sort of pattern is difficult to predict because most of the sliders before had 4 repeats fixed
00:55:339 (3) - Ctrl-G done
01:28:297 (2) - Ctrl-G ctrl+g'd 1 instead

[Collab Insanya~]
00:09:177 (1,2,3) - put the notes before the slider? triples are more intuitive to play keeping for now
I like this diff

[Exnya~]
01:02:945 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4) - this part feels kinda cluttered and weird to play i like it :c
Interesting diff.

cool set, sorry I wasn't able to find much o_o

Thanks for mod o/

I had (and not in the "m2m" way, but in the "I know myself I owe this" way) to mod this after the absolutely astounding IRC mod you gave me on my map. I just had to do something for you, you gave me so much insight into mapping in general that I need to somehow pay this off, even if it's something small. Going to probaly mod a lot of your maps in the near future.

Sorry that I haven't found that much, but the maps are really good. At least in my eyes. But these are not so good. :s


Easnya~

Didn't find anything. o: Seems pretty close-to-perfect for me.


Normalnya~

00:24:283 - Feels like there's a quiet beat missing here, maybe add a note

00:52:593 (1,2,3,4) - 1,2 is mapped, the beat continues as 00:53:015 - might throw off a lot of people.

01:23:227 (2) - This feels half a beat too early. Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/dIFmN/bf7e9dc00a.jpg

01:27:029 (2) - Feels offbeat, maybe this? http://puu.sh/dIFpT/4ef4e2e484.jpg (Just a fast, sloppy attempt of visualizing)


Nukedyna~'s Hard

00:49:001 (1,2,1,2) - The overlap feels extremely unnatural, at least for me.

00:59:987 (4) - If you want to make that part harder, extend that slider one more time...It feels a bit more "snapped" to the music, but the distance snap goes up really high, which means 01:00:621 (5) - has to be reversed...which again ups the distance snap on the next note...so maybe not...but maybe you're evil.

01:05:480 (7,1) - I'd say extend 7 one more time, then move it a bit to the right (still keeping the pattern with 1) - feels more natural to the music IMO


Collab Insanya~

00:10:973 (1) - Skipping an audible sound (blue tick), not sure how to fix without a remap of that part - Possibly a 1/4 slider, and angle the following stream more to the right?


Exnya~

01:04:001 (1,2) - The slider ending on the blue tick feels..weird? Not sure how to say it, the prominent backing sound doesn't disappear...

zkf wrote:

I had (and not in the "m2m" way, but in the "I know myself I owe this" way) to mod this after the absolutely astounding IRC mod you gave me on my map. I just had to do something for you, you gave me so much insight into mapping in general that I need to somehow pay this off, even if it's something small. Going to probaly mod a lot of your maps in the near future.

Sorry that I haven't found that much, but the maps are really good. At least in my eyes. But these are not so good. :s


Easnya~

Didn't find anything. o: Seems pretty close-to-perfect for me.


Normalnya~

00:24:283 - Feels like there's a quiet beat missing here, maybe add a note fine imo

00:52:593 (1,2,3,4) - 1,2 is mapped, the beat continues as 00:53:015 - might throw off a lot of people. 2 triplets

01:23:227 (2) - This feels half a beat too early. Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/dIFmN/bf7e9dc00a.jpg mmm fine imo

01:27:029 (2) - Feels offbeat, maybe this? http://puu.sh/dIFpT/4ef4e2e484.jpg (Just a fast, sloppy attempt of visualizing) nah, don't wanna start 2 on a red tick


Nukedyna~'s Hard

00:49:001 (1,2,1,2) - The overlap feels extremely unnatural, at least for me. looks cool though :c

00:59:987 (4) - If you want to make that part harder, extend that slider one more time...It feels a bit more "snapped" to the music, but the distance snap goes up really high, which means 01:00:621 (5) - has to be reversed...which again ups the distance snap on the next note...so maybe not...but maybe you're evil. mm fixed differently

01:05:480 (7,1) - I'd say extend 7 one more time, then move it a bit to the right (still keeping the pattern with 1) - feels more natural to the music IMO done


Collab Insanya~

00:10:973 (1) - Skipping an audible sound (blue tick), not sure how to fix without a remap of that part - Possibly a 1/4 slider, and angle the following stream more to the right? fine imo


Exnya~

01:04:001 (1,2) - The slider ending on the blue tick feels..weird? Not sure how to say it, the prominent backing sound doesn't disappear... i'd compromised this part a lot, so i'd like to keep it as is

Thanks for mod o/

Extrazer is an unrankable diffname but this stuff is ok?

Timorisu wrote:

Extrazer is an unrankable diffname but this shit is ok?

I couldn't even get my Neormal ranked lol :c

I actually asked some people, and I got mixed replies. The diff names don't matter as much to me, so if it becomes an issue during the ranking, I can easily just change it.

No 4K? Open for GD? :'( :'(

No sorry. I've already got a piano, and I don't wanna pop the bubble.

hi, as request

[Easnya~]

Hitsound:

1. 00:15:198 (1) - in end, if you listen this rhythm, should add finish because the 00:16:888 (3) in have have finish but rhythm is same, I dunno why you didn't add finish in end 00:15:198 (1) if you add this, don't forget other diff's to be consistency

Gameplay

1. 00:06:748 (1) - this should remove new color, you should know this is "easy", the part in 00:05:057 (1,2) is short and is hard to newbies players, remove new color in 00:06:748 (1)
2. 00:23:649 (3) - I do like if this should grid more down, because this slider is like touching HP drain (is not touching HP drain, but is out area so much)
3. 00:50:691 (1) - remove new color, same before in 00:06:748 (1)

[Normanya~]

Hitsound

1. 00:15:198 (1) - in end should add clap, the rhythm still continue and still there... if you do this don't forget other diff's
2. 00:17:311 (3) - ^

Gameplay:

1. 00:06:748 (1) - same on Easnya
2. 00:10:128 (1) - Missing remove new color, to be consistency by you style also this is "normal"
3. 00:23:649 (1) - remove new color
4. 00:22:804 (2,3,1,2,3) - you sure you wanna keep this pattern ? look is bit hard on play for this diff, make more pattern easier ?
5. 01:03:367 (3) - move grid 4 left, just need clean little overlap with 01:00:832 (4) in body
6. 01:28:719 (1,2) - remove new color in (1) and put new color (2) like you did in Easnya~

[Nukednya~'s Hard]

Song Setup:

1. the AR, is better 7 than 7.5 imo

Gameplay:

1. 00:17:522 (1) - remove new color, I dunno why you put this new color...
2. 00:33:790 (6) - Missing put new color
3. 00:41:396 (3,4) - should change shape like this http://puu.sh/eprF3/7179dda2d8.jpg , just the begin and end, border near is ugly for me, just suggestion
4. 00:46:888 (5) - ^ same
5. 00:49:424 (1) - remove new color ? I understand this pattern but remove new color is better just saying (just suggestion)
6. 00:56:607 (1) - ^ same
7. 01:05:903 (1,2,3) - I wanna, that (1) the shape should move grid right to clean with 01:06:748 (3) in end, like this http://puu.sh/eprYR/6e7f0556d4.jpg, you did pattern before like 00:05:903 (3,1,2), 00:11:818 (1,2,3) and many more
8. 01:15:832 (6,1) - just saying this blanket is off
9. 01:22:593 (1,2) - rnc in (1) and nc (2)
10. 01:29:565 (5) - nc like other diff's

[Collab Insanya~]

Song Setup

1. AR you don't wanna change 9 to 8.5 ? really better than 9 with this diff IMO

Gameplay:

1. 00:14:353 (5) - this should nc, change SV...
2. 00:17:205 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why don't make same DS 0.60? I dunno you increassing there part DS
3. 00:38:438 (3,4,1) - 5.00x jump ? no, decreassing ds

This diff I don't feel this level as "insane" I did play I feel is extra, a lot rhythm is very smiliar in Exnyan~, example in 01:01:677 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - this pattern is harder than Extra, not only this pattern, there more pattern harder than extra, lot jump 4.00x and some 5.00x than exnyan~, this need more easier level as "insane.

My big problem, you need descreassing DS <4.00x, if you see some patterns is >4.00x is not accepted for this diff I feel is extra

[Exnyan~]

Gameplay:

1. 00:10:128 (1,2) - why not don't ds 0.60x ? why jump ? I don't feel rhythm is really necessary jump...
2. 00:13:719 (1) - why you didn't remove color this ? I mean this 00:13:508 (1,1) - is jump and you put nc but in 00:10:128 (1,2) - is not nc, why ? the rhythm is same... NC is not sense
3. 00:14:142 (5) - SV change big must bg NC
4. 00:14:565 (1,1,1) - I don't see this really necessary nc... example this part nc and in part 00:17:100 (4,5,6) is not nc...
5. 00:27:029 (1) - this really readable ?
6. 00:32:945 (5) - sv change, must need nc
7. 00:40:339 (7,1) - jump 10.00x ? I accpeted if <6.00x
8. 00:51:536 (5) - not nc ?

I'm sorry this really need more work, somes combo color make no sense and show inconsistency with you style
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Insane and extra really need more work, other diff's is ok
I'm sorry, Need more work insane and extra
Any question if you don't understand my english ask me in game so I can explain better
Good luck

Ok thanks. Currently out, so I'll respond in a week or so.

Pls rank

wow! the real adam jones! i didn't ask you to abuse your popularity as the #1 us player (which in and of itself isn't much at all really) and post on my thread to rank this map in skype just now! whaaaaaaaaaat

[General]
00:24:072 and 01:02:945 : Increase the sample volume to 70% or 80% (recommended , but it's your choice.). I cant hear anything beat sounds in 60%.

ok, i'm gonna keep going

Pereira006 wrote:

hi, as request

[Easnya~]

Hitsound:

1. 00:15:198 (1) - in end, if you listen this rhythm, should add finish because the 00:16:888 (3) in have have finish but rhythm is same, I dunno why you didn't add finish in end 00:15:198 (1) if you add this, don't forget other diff's to be consistency fixed

Gameplay

1. 00:06:748 (1) - this should remove new color, you should know this is "easy", the part in 00:05:057 (1,2) is short and is hard to newbies players, remove new color in 00:06:748 (1) fixed
2. 00:23:649 (3) - I do like if this should grid more down, because this slider is like touching HP drain (is not touching HP drain, but is out area so much) fixed
3. 00:50:691 (1) - remove new color, same before in 00:06:748 (1) fixed

[Normanya~]

Hitsound

1. 00:15:198 (1) - in end should add clap, the rhythm still continue and still there... if you do this don't forget other diff's
2. 00:17:311 (3) - ^ both fixed

Gameplay:

1. 00:06:748 (1) - same on Easnya fixed
2. 00:10:128 (1) - Missing remove new color, to be consistency by you style also this is "normal" fixed
3. 00:23:649 (1) - remove new color fixed
4. 00:22:804 (2,3,1,2,3) - you sure you wanna keep this pattern ? look is bit hard on play for this diff, make more pattern easier ? fixed
5. 01:03:367 (3) - move grid 4 left, just need clean little overlap with 01:00:832 (4) in body fixed
6. 01:28:719 (1,2) - remove new color in (1) and put new color (2) like you did in Easnya~

[Nukednya~'s Hard]

Song Setup:

1. the AR, is better 7 than 7.5 imo keeping as is, since 7 was said to be too little and 8 too much

Gameplay:

1. 00:17:522 (1) - remove new color, I dunno why you put this new color... fixed
2. 00:33:790 (6) - Missing put new color fixed
3. 00:41:396 (3,4) - should change shape like this http://puu.sh/eprF3/7179dda2d8.jpg , just the begin and end, border near is ugly for me, just suggestion i disagree
4. 00:46:888 (5) - ^ same changed
5. 00:49:424 (1) - remove new color ? I understand this pattern but remove new color is better just saying (just suggestion) i'll keep for now
6. 00:56:607 (1) - ^ same fixed
7. 01:05:903 (1,2,3) - I wanna, that (1) the shape should move grid right to clean with 01:06:748 (3) in end, like this http://puu.sh/eprYR/6e7f0556d4.jpg, you did pattern before like 00:05:903 (3,1,2), 00:11:818 (1,2,3) and many more fixed
8. 01:15:832 (6,1) - just saying this blanket is off fixed
9. 01:22:593 (1,2) - rnc in (1) and nc (2) fixed
10. 01:29:565 (5) - nc like other diff's

[Collab Insanya~]

Song Setup

1. AR you don't wanna change 9 to 8.5 ? really better than 9 with this diff IMO i'll try 8.8 with this

Gameplay:

1. 00:14:353 (5) - this should nc, change SV... fixed
2. 00:17:205 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why don't make same DS 0.60? I dunno you increassing there part DS it's cool looking; emphasizes rise in pitch on the nyans
3. 00:38:438 (3,4,1) - 5.00x jump ? no, decreassing ds fixed? iunno

This diff I don't feel this level as "insane" I did play I feel is extra, a lot rhythm is very smiliar in Exnyan~, example in 01:01:677 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - this pattern is harder than Extra, not only this pattern, there more pattern harder than extra, lot jump 4.00x and some 5.00x than exnyan~, this need more easier level as "insane.

My big problem, you need descreassing DS <4.00x, if you see some patterns is >4.00x is not accepted for this diff I feel is extra

i disagree. i quite like it like this, as it's a mini-extra. i want players to feel like they're playing a cool map but keep the ds lower so it's still easier

[Exnyan~]

Gameplay:

1. 00:10:128 (1,2) - why not don't ds 0.60x ? why jump ? I don't feel rhythm is really necessary jump... without the jump, there's no signal that it's a kick slider
2. 00:13:719 (1) - why you didn't remove color this ? I mean this 00:13:508 (1,1) - is jump and you put nc but in 00:10:128 (1,2) - is not nc, why ? the rhythm is same... NC is not sense fixed
3. 00:14:142 (5) - SV change big must bg NC fixed
4. 00:14:565 (1,1,1) - I don't see this really necessary nc... example this part nc and in part 00:17:100 (4,5,6) is not nc... emphasizes liquid-y sound
5. 00:27:029 (1) - this really readable ? i think so, yea
6. 00:32:945 (5) - sv change, must need nc fixed
7. 00:40:339 (7,1) - jump 10.00x ? I accpeted if <6.00x fine imo
8. 00:51:536 (5) - not nc ? fixed

I'm sorry this really need more work, somes combo color make no sense and show inconsistency with you style
[]
Insane and extra really need more work, other diff's is ok
I'm sorry, Need more work insane and extra
Any question if you don't understand my english ask me in game so I can explain better
Good luck

thanks for mod

Hello, you requested a mod from my modding que, so nyan~
Quick Foreword-The majority of my mod deal with slider endpoints not being in/being very close to the end of the slider, which is something that I see a lot of newer mappers do. The thing about sliders that do this is that they are very sloppy and I think go on for slightly longer than they have to. Regardless they cause me much OCD, as I do like perfect sliders. Something that I noticed in a lot of these sliders was that they were in a slider stream of the exact same slider shape and length (00:06:959 (1,2,3,4,5) - in Exnya~ for example), so a quick fix for that would be to just take the first slider in the stream, copy it onto the correct points on the timeline, and whoopee, you have a slider stream with all sliders the same length.

mrturtle99 wrote:

00:25:339 (1) - -slider end point needs to be in the slider

first time i've seen a mod mention this

really impressive actually

it's complete nonsense but still dam

@mrturtle99 - applied some slider endpoint things for easy, mainly because if i'd reset some of them, it would be longer. however, know that it doesn't elongate the slider unless the timeline says so. a lot of mappers leave slider end points outside of the end of the slider, while still keeping a nice looking slider.

take a look at these maps, for instance:
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/541990
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/368845
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/269773

what you isn't entirely true, but i appreciate you taking a look into it.

mrturtle99 wrote:

hard:
00:17:734 (6) - doesn't need to be a curved slider, consider just making it a straight slider with 2 points done

insane:
00:58:297 (1) - not sure if you're trying to make a loop here, but if you are there should only be 5 sliderpoints arranged in a pentagonal shape looks fine so im keeping it
01:29:353 (1) - just a suggestion, but maybe take off the NC here as it feels like it's connected to 01:29:142 (1) -fine imo

extra:
00:26:184 (3,4) - why are the slider endpoints hard endpoints? fixed
01:09:072 (1) - ^, and I also don't feel like there should be a NC here nc'd because sv change
01:29:353 (1) - don't feel like NC is needed here stays consistent with insane

thanks for the mod

Midge wrote:

what you isn't entirely true, but i appreciate you taking a look into it.
thanks for the mod

Meh, is what i get for putting my OCD-ness into a mod

@cobarde

kd because it was helpful, though :c (fixed ds)

holy mother of fuck, this is still pending.

I really want to try to mod this, but every time I try, between the song, and the annoying hitsounding pattern that spams finishes, I just want to punch a baby. not even setting my volume to 5% remedies this.

I think you should redo the hitsounds, only use finishes for when you can clearly hear the cymbal crash in the music, for example, in easy 00:08:438 (1) you can clearly hear it here on the slider's head. instead of finishes for the rest where there is no cymbal crash, you can use soft whistle.

seriously try it, it might make this a little more bearable to listen to

I'd added hitsounds that replace the finishes with a bass kick. Hs should be fine, imo.

yeah that will work too, just pls, for the love of baby jesus, get rid of the finish spam

Nice , i love this

hey man, nice map, maybe you try to rank this?

nah, i don't want to

I'm here to make babies with Midge

Thanks brah

april fools, lmao, this map is never getting ranked.

when rank?

300posts count hype

hapi 1 year anniversary of nayn cat

kudosu pls

this map is going to be the death of me.

Shame I didn't see this a while ago, I'd think of making a ctb diff but I don't want to delay the ranking process even further.

Dear lord, you are the most NC happy mapper I have ever seen. Remember that unless you're mapping a map in which it would be legitimately extremely difficult to survive in if you didn't have multiple short combos, take Eiji Kuinbii for example, NCs all over the place in higher difficulties are not necessary in the slightest. Things like combos of two in your Insane and Extra or your seemingly random sections of single-note combos in the same aforementioned difficulties struck me as confusing rather than something that would improve the map. Another thing your difficulties, especially the Insane, are suffering from is a terrible flow. It's fine to have a map that is consistently full of both jumps and streams and while I understand that this is an SDVX track, how you transitioned from the two felt rigid and was quite frankly unenjoyable at times. This isn't to say that this map isn't rankable, because it definitely is, but as your map is right now you still have a bit of work to do. I personally found myself enjoying some sections a ton and wished the map would be more like those few times when my heart was racing from excitement. Unfortunately, I'm not an experienced enough mapper or modder to tell you how to make the entire map that enjoyable, but I look forward to the day that this map gets ranked as one that I'll add to my favourites.

Don't give up on this map and good luck with getting approved!

General Mod
From 01:27:874 - to 01:29:565 - for your easy and normal, you should put a spinner so the scores will vary.

This was an inside job

i'm sorry. i'm done.

see ya later

darn, and after all that progress

In case you come back someday.

alright, cya later

hey

mithew wrote:

hey

hey mithew ouo

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