hi :3 from queue!

[General]
none.

[Easnya~]
Good map

[Normanya~]

1. 00:32:311 (1) - along to 00:31:255 (4)? looks beautiful
   
   img

   
2. 00:35:903 (2) - use additons Drum on slider head? fit on back sound imo
   if you use this suggestion,put also all diff
3. 01:28:719 (1) - i think this NC is not necessary

[Nukednya~'s Hard]

1. 00:53:015 (2,3,4,5) - this sound up is difficult in Hard Diff imo
   
   try this?

   
2. 01:26:818 (2,3,4,5) - ^
   
   try this?

   
3. 00:49:424 (1) - why put NC?
4. 01:03:790 (3) - remove clap? It does not match with the track imo because back sound is silent

[Collab Insanya~]

1. 00:08:438 (10,1) - swap NC?
2. 00:36:325 (2) - add NC?
3. 01:01:255 (3) - move to x:228,y:270? too close imo

[Exnya~]

1. 00:11:818 (1) - move to x:276,y:210? now is a little bad flow...

good luck

ShiraKai wrote:

hi :3 from queue!

[General]
none.

[Easnya~]
Good map

[Normanya~]

1. 00:32:311 (1) - along to 00:31:255 (4)? looks beautiful done, good idea
   
   img

   
2. 00:35:903 (2) - use additons Drum on slider head? fit on back sound imo nah, fine imo
   if you use this suggestion,put also all diff
3. 01:28:719 (1) - i think this NC is not necessary eh, i like it :S

[Nukednya~'s Hard]

1. 00:53:015 (2,3,4,5) - this sound up is difficult in Hard Diff imo done
   
   try this?

   
2. 01:26:818 (2,3,4,5) - ^ done, but used the above pattern
   
   try this?

   
3. 00:49:424 (1) - why put NC? to make it easier to read :S
4. 01:03:790 (3) - remove clap? It does not match with the track imo because back sound is silent nah, fine imo

[Collab Insanya~]

1. 00:08:438 (10,1) - swap NC? done
2. 00:36:325 (2) - add NC? done
3. 01:01:255 (3) - move to x:228,y:270? too close imo done

[Exnya~]

1. 00:11:818 (1) - move to x:276,y:210? now is a little bad flow... nah, fine imo

good luck

Thanks for mod o/

Yo, as requested.

[General]

1. The colours seem to be too agressive/bright. I would fade them a bit, so, players' eyes will feel more comfortable.

[Easnya~]

1. You should add at least one spinner. As the beatmap gets ranked, there will be a lot of people with the same (perfect) score. In order to make scores vary a bit, you should add at least one spinner.
2. 00:47:311 (3,5) - I'd say that (5) appears too soon after the previous hitobject and may confuse beginners a bit.Why not to use something like this?
   Note: 01:02:522 (1,3) - a very similar thing happens here.
   
   The diff is fine. You could make it a bit more readable/neat, but this is fine since you're quite new to mapping.

[Normanya~]

1. 00:08:438 (1) - as the slider gets overmapped with default HP-Bar, some players may get confused + it looks untidy in general. Mind moving the slider down?
2. 00:29:565 (2) - the slider changes its direction way too suddenly. It looks untidy and may confuse some players. Not the best idea for a Normal diff, if you ask me.
3. 00:35:480 - the downbeat is unstressed. I would rather remove the repeat and place a circle with new combo here.
   
   Pretty nice in terms of rhythm and playability.

[Nukednya~'s Hard]
According to the other diffs' logic, this is supposed to be Nukedboom's Hanrya~ or Hanya~

1. I would consider lowering AR a little bit since your current one seemws to be too high. 7 or 7,5 would work better, I believe.
2. 00:17:734 (6,7,1) - the tail is too close and can be mistakenly hit + it looks quite untidy. You could easily use something like this.
3. 00:29:776 (5) - it might be rather hard to read this slider. Why don't you try to use something like this instead?
4. 00:53:015 (2,3,4,5) - as the diff is already hard enough, you probably should use a slider, instead of a mini-stream. THis will also fr better with the rest of the patterns in this diff.
5. 00:56:607 (4) - as the jumpy pattern kicks in, you should plae a new combo here, so, players will be warned and get some extra HP to pass it easier.
6. 01:05:480 (7,1) - the pattern is confusing as the second reptition is unpredictable and unreadable.Mind rearranging the pattern a bit?
   
   It needs some work on playability and looks rather messy in general. Try to get a few more mods or clean it up?

[Collab Insanya~]
You should let us in some way who mapped the diff and where are their parts.

1. AR 9 feels too intense. Why not to reduce it? It will also make the spread more balanced.
2. 00:10:973 (1,2,3) - minor - the spacing is uneven and it is quite noticeable. Mind fixing this?
3. 00:50:269 (5,6,1) - these jumps are exaggerated and feel out of place. There is a harder diff, and that is why you shouldn't go too insane with this diff. Reduce the DS, please.
   Note: 01:05:058 (1,2,1,2) - same here, also this appluies for a few more patterns.
4. 01:27:452 (1) - according to the rules, every slider should have very celean and readable path. Try to make this one more readable, please. I would insist on fixing this slider.
   
   Might need some more work on spacing and perhaps, some cleaning up wouldn't hurt, either. Some patterns looks untidy, some are just quite hard to read. Just test the diff and see what can be improved!

[Exnya~]

1. Most of the jumps in the diff seem exaggerated and don't work well with the structure of the map. Let's see examples
   
   1. 00:06:959 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the escalation of the jumps suddenly stops and the normal-spaced stream kicks in. Confusing for players and feels unpleasant ehile playing.At least I feel the map this way.
   2. 00:09:705 (8,9,1) - compressed stream changes into x4,5+ DS jump, suddenly totally breaking the balance of the map. Well, yeah, the song is glitchy/tricky, but this seems totally exaggerated to me.
   3. 00:10:973 (1,2,3,4) - those kick-sliders weren't bad, but I feel like the DS is exaggerated, though. Just make DS lower and it should be fine with this patterns.
      
      Based on these examples, you may get more opinions and work with the jumps in this diff.
      Hint: SV changes affect the jumps, too. So, when using jumps, watch out whether they are playable with current SV or not!
   That is pretty much it for now, I really feel like the diff needs some serious work with the jumps.

Overall, you could try to work on it on your own and make some improvements. Sorry, but I feel like you still have some space to improve and you should try to work more on it.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, as requested.

[General]

1. The colours seem to be too agressive/bright. I would fade them a bit, so, players' eyes will feel more comfortable. done

[Easnya~]

1. You should add at least one spinner. As the beatmap gets ranked, there will be a lot of people with the same (perfect) score. In order to make scores vary a bit, you should add at least one spinner. wh, fine imo
2. 00:47:311 (3,5) - I'd say that (5) appears too soon after the previous hitobject and may confuse beginners a bit.Why not to use something like this? tentative no, i think this is fine, but i will change if it becomes an issue
   Note: 01:02:522 (1,3) - a very similar thing happens here.
   
   The diff is fine. You could make it a bit more readable/neat, but this is fine since you're quite new to mapping.

[Normanya~]

1. 00:08:438 (1) - as the slider gets overmapped with default HP-Bar, some players may get confused + it looks untidy in general. Mind moving the slider down? done
2. 00:29:565 (2) - the slider changes its direction way too suddenly. It looks untidy and may confuse some players. Not the best idea for a Normal diff, if you ask me. fixed?
3. 00:35:480 - the downbeat is unstressed. I would rather remove the repeat and place a circle with new combo here. mmm fine imo
   
   Pretty nice in terms of rhythm and playability.

[Nukednya~'s Hard]
According to the other diffs' logic, this is supposed to be Nukedboom's Hanrya~ or Hanya~

1. I would consider lowering AR a little bit since your current one seemws to be too high. 7 or 7,5 would work better, I believe. mmmmmm, 7.5
2. 00:17:734 (6,7,1) - the tail is too close and can be mistakenly hit + it looks quite untidy. You could easily use something like this. moved the triplet down instead
3. 00:29:776 (5) - it might be rather hard to read this slider. Why don't you try to use something like this instead? done
4. 00:53:015 (2,3,4,5) - as the diff is already hard enough, you probably should use a slider, instead of a mini-stream. THis will also fr better with the rest of the patterns in this diff. eh, i disagree. i think quintuplets are ok in hards.
5. 00:56:607 (4) - as the jumpy pattern kicks in, you should plae a new combo here, so, players will be warned and get some extra HP to pass it easier. done
6. 01:05:480 (7,1) - the pattern is confusing as the second reptition is unpredictable and unreadable.Mind rearranging the pattern a bit? done? idk we'll see
   
   It needs some work on playability and looks rather messy in general. Try to get a few more mods or clean it up?

[Collab Insanya~]
You should let us in some way who mapped the diff and where are their parts.
okee

1. AR 9 feels too intense. Why not to reduce it? It will also make the spread more balanced. tentative no, i like it as 9, but i will change if it becomes an issue
2. 00:10:973 (1,2,3) - minor - the spacing is uneven and it is quite noticeable. Mind fixing this? done
3. 00:50:269 (5,6,1) - these jumps are exaggerated and feel out of place. There is a harder diff, and that is why you shouldn't go too insane with this diff. Reduce the DS, please. it was meant to increase in ds per slider. reduced a little.
   Note: 01:05:058 (1,2,1,2) - same here, also this appluies for a few more patterns. reduced a little
4. 01:27:452 (1) - according to the rules, every slider should have very celean and readable path. Try to make this one more readable, please. I would insist on fixing this slider. done?
   
   Might need some more work on spacing and perhaps, some cleaning up wouldn't hurt, either. Some patterns looks untidy, some are just quite hard to read. Just test the diff and see what can be improved!

[Exnya~]

1. Most of the jumps in the diff seem exaggerated and don't work well with the structure of the map. Let's see examples
   
   1. 00:06:959 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the escalation of the jumps suddenly stops and the normal-spaced stream kicks in. Confusing for players and feels unpleasant ehile playing.At least I feel the map this way. fine imo. it builds up into a higher-than-usual ds stream which follows the song quite well imo.
   2. 00:09:705 (8,9,1) - compressed stream changes into x4,5+ DS jump, suddenly totally breaking the balance of the map. Well, yeah, the song is glitchy/tricky, but this seems totally exaggerated to me. reduced ds on the jump
   3. 00:10:973 (1,2,3,4) - those kick-sliders weren't bad, but I feel like the DS is exaggerated, though. Just make DS lower and it should be fine with this patterns. done
      
      Based on these examples, you may get more opinions and work with the jumps in this diff.
      Hint: SV changes affect the jumps, too. So, when using jumps, watch out whether they are playable with current SV or not!
   That is pretty much it for now, I really feel like the diff needs some serious work with the jumps.

Overall, you could try to work on it on your own and make some improvements. Sorry, but I feel like you still have some space to improve and you should try to work more on it.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

Thanks o/

from M4M queue,no bubble round

[Easy]
00:20:269 (3) - a bigger distance here.make it 0.90x
totally ok.but 2 things to point out.donno why you add so many finishs..in fact there isn't so much finish as you add.but not so noisy maybe ok.and you can improve some 1/1 sliders better,but the present is ok as well

[Normal]
00:10:973 (3) - I think no reason to put a 2/1 here
00:17:734 (5) - still.not a good spacing here
00:18:579 (1) - maybe change this for a better one.I also see this shape in further patterns.but it doesn't look well
01:18:579 (5) - why such strange slider..
lol still the finishs...

[Nuked]
00:26:184 (4,5) - why not use 2 straight slider?
00:27:452 (3) - hmmm I don't think it should be a 1/1 slider here.the vocal is not so simple
00:31:677 (6,1) - this may confuse player in a hard diff.I suggest overlapping them
00:40:550 (1,2,3) - this gives me the first impression that it's a 3-beat slider but not a 4-beat slider cuz of your arrangement.try changing another way
00:49:846 (3,4,5) - don't suggest such patterns in hard diff
00:53:438 (6) - forgot clap?
00:56:607 (1,2,3,1) - well..same thing
some parts are not good for a hard diff

[Insane]
00:10:445 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - it's a little hard to read as you make them like a ball lol
00:17:734 (1,1,1,1) - really hard to read hhh
00:21:114 (1) - 1~2 grid down
00:22:804 (3,4,5,6) - sth like this can be more beautiful https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1981772
01:07:487 - a note is needed here imo
01:15:198 (1) - I think slow this sv may be a good idea

[Extra]
00:10:128 (1) - is there any need to speed up here? same as the pattern behind this
00:58:297 (1,1) - not a good design,why note stack them?

the whole mapset gives me a sense of mess..I think you can improve some details

No_Gu wrote:

from M4M queue,no bubble round

[Easy]
00:20:269 (3) - a bigger distance here.make it 0.90x done
totally ok.but 2 things to point out.donno why you add so many finishs..in fact there isn't so much finish as you add.but not so noisy maybe ok.and you can improve some 1/1 sliders better,but the present is ok as well

[Normal]
00:10:973 (3) - I think no reason to put a 2/1 here i disagree, the red node amphasizes the sound well enough
00:17:734 (5) - still.not a good spacing here done?
00:18:579 (1) - maybe change this for a better one.I also see this shape in further patterns.but it doesn't look well done?
01:18:579 (5) - why such strange slider.. fine imo
lol still the finishs...

[Nuked]
00:26:184 (4,5) - why not use 2 straight slider? flows beter imo
00:27:452 (3) - hmmm I don't think it should be a 1/1 slider here.the vocal is not so simple it looks better though, i'll keep for now
00:31:677 (6,1) - this may confuse player in a hard diff.I suggest overlapping them mmmm, removed a repeat, we'll see how that goes :S
00:40:550 (1,2,3) - this gives me the first impression that it's a 3-beat slider but not a 4-beat slider cuz of your arrangement.try changing another way eh, i think it's fine
00:49:846 (3,4,5) - don't suggest such patterns in hard diff fine imo
00:53:438 (6) - forgot clap? done
00:56:607 (1,2,3,1) - well..same thing fine imo
some parts are not good for a hard diff

[Insane]
00:10:445 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - it's a little hard to read as you make them like a ball lol done
00:17:734 (1,1,1,1) - really hard to read hhh ctrl+g'd the repeating slider
00:21:114 (1) - 1~2 grid down looks fine ._.
00:22:804 (3,4,5,6) - sth like this can be more beautiful https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1981772 done
01:07:487 - a note is needed here imo done
01:15:198 (1) - I think slow this sv may be a good idea it's high because the sound is pretty aggressive

[Extra]
00:10:128 (1) - is there any need to speed up here? same as the pattern behind this yes, it's emphasizes the sound
00:58:297 (1,1) - not a good design,why note stack them? the slider before it ends on a yellow tick, so it has to be close

the whole mapset gives me a sense of mess..I think you can improve some details

Thanks o/

Orz
[Exnya~]
00:25:339 (1) - 104,240 shouldnt have a stop bweteen with 00:25:550 (1) -
00:27:663 (1,2,3,1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1985780 better flow for 00:28:508 (1) - 's boost
00:35:903 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1985786 better flow from 2 and fits music more
00:37:593 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1985789 for the vocal smillar to 00:37:170 (1) -
00:55:550 (1) - x2.0,same to00:28:508 (1) -
00:55:973 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - move to 432,320 should not stop bweteen 00:55:762 (2,1) -

[Collab Insanya~]
01:03:790 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1985824 caouse of volume,I thinke there should be a smaller ds bweteen 01:03:578 (2,1) -
01:29:565 (1) - 460,352? feels better to me

[Nukednya~'s Hard]
00:05:903 (3) - blanket could be fixed better
00:23:015 (5) - avoid edge touched with 4
00:48:367 (4) - blanket could be fixed better
01:23:438 (3,4,5) - DS looks not same

[Normanya~]
00:12:663 (2) - blanket could be fixed better
00:13:508 (4) - ^
00:33:790 (4,5) - ^
00:54:494 (6) - ^ avoid edge touched with 7

[Easnya~]
01:05:058 (4) - blanket could be fixed better
01:29:142 (6) - 156,192 better flow

...... Something wrong with OSU! system ... why I post 2 same thing on your page ...

I don't know , I'm sorry for this . anyway , I delete this post for first , so no k plz .

My mod is in page 11 .

Sorry again ~~~~~~ >.< "

Hello , from my queue ~ mio mio mio ~

Fm4a93au04’s standard modding queue

As my rules , I'll mod E / N / H .





That's all . If it no help , then sorry ~ I have try my best .

Good luck to your map ~

ts8zs wrote:

Orz
[Exnya~]
00:25:339 (1) - 104,240 shouldnt have a stop bweteen with 00:25:550 (1) - done, nice idea
00:27:663 (1,2,3,1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1985780 better flow for 00:28:508 (1) - 's boost done
00:35:903 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1985786 better flow from 2 and fits music more eeh fine imo
00:37:593 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1985789 for the vocal smillar to 00:37:170 (1) - nah, it's not :S
00:55:550 (1) - x2.0,same to00:28:508 (1) - i was told to reduce ds on this, tentative no, i'll think about it
00:55:973 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - move to 432,320 should not stop bweteen 00:55:762 (2,1) - done?

[Collab Insanya~]
01:03:790 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1985824 caouse of volume,I thinke there should be a smaller ds bweteen 01:03:578 (2,1) - fixed differently
01:29:565 (1) - 460,352? feels better to me fine imo

[Nukednya~'s Hard]
00:05:903 (3) - blanket could be fixed better done
00:23:015 (5) - avoid edge touched with 4 done
00:48:367 (4) - blanket could be fixed better done
01:23:438 (3,4,5) - DS looks not same 1x ds, it's fine

[Normanya~]
00:12:663 (2) - blanket could be fixed better done
00:13:508 (4) - ^ done
00:33:790 (4,5) - ^ done
00:54:494 (6) - ^ avoid edge touched with 7 it's fine

[Easnya~]
01:05:058 (4) - blanket could be fixed better it's fine
01:29:142 (6) - 156,192 better flow fine

fixed some of fm4a93au04's stuff, but it was mostly hs.

Came from my modding queue!
*Opinion
**Should Fix
***FIX NOW LOL


[Easnya~]
*00:21:536 (6,1) - This is blanketed weirdly....
*01:07:593 (3,4,5) - Not symmetrical.

Notes: I think it's rankable

[Normanya~]
*00:23:649 (4,5,6) - Maybe make this a reverse slider?
*00:52:804 (2,3) - Replace these two with a single reverse slider.

Notes: Same as Easynya

[Nukednya~'s Hard]
*00:13:297 (4) - NC.
*00:13:508 (1) - No NC.
**00:49:846 (1,2,3) - I don't think these sliders are appropriate for a hard.
*01:07:381 (4) - NC.
*01:07:593 (1) - No NC.
**01:14:776 (2) - Add a beat on the red tick after this.
*01:29:565 (1) - No NC

Notes: A bit rougher than the first two diffs but still good

[Collab Insanya~]

*By here my ears are bleeding

*00:17:417 (4,5,6) - Er I don't know if this is intentional, but these three of the stream are a bit out of place.
*00:18:367 (1) - No NC
*00:27:029 (1) - No NC
*00:27:452 (1,1) - No NC DDDDD;
*00:28:931 (1) - No NC
*00:33:367 (1) - No NC
Ugh, by now you get the point; stop NCing on 1 beat....
00:40:550 (3) - Not a mod, just wanted to point out how awesome this is .

Notes: Other than the NC's I see no problems.

[Exnya]
I CANT FIND A PROBLEM IN THIS LOL

[ Setsuna ] wrote:

Came from my modding queue!
*Opinion
**Should Fix
***FIX NOW LOL


[Easnya~]
*00:21:536 (6,1) - This is blanketed weirdly.... fine imo
*01:07:593 (3,4,5) - Not symmetrical. fine .-.

Notes: I think it's rankable

[Normanya~]
*00:23:649 (4,5,6) - Maybe make this a reverse slider? eeehh fine imo
*00:52:804 (2,3) - Replace these two with a single reverse slider. nah

Notes: Same as Easynya

[Nukednya~'s Hard]
*00:13:297 (4) - NC.
*00:13:508 (1) - No NC. NCs meant to be on the white tick, will change if it comes up again though
**00:49:846 (1,2,3) - I don't think these sliders are appropriate for a hard. i think so :S i'll change if it becomes an issue
*01:07:381 (4) - NC.
*01:07:593 (1) - No NC. same
**01:14:776 (2) - Add a beat on the red tick after this. done
*01:29:565 (1) - No NC nah

Notes: A bit rougher than the first two diffs but still good

[Collab Insanya~]

*By here my ears are bleeding

*00:17:417 (4,5,6) - Er I don't know if this is intentional, but these three of the stream are a bit out of place. intentional, ds increases
*00:18:367 (1) - No NC done
*00:27:029 (1) - No NC done
*00:27:452 (1,1) - No NC DDDDD; signifies sv changes
*00:28:931 (1) - No NC ^
*00:33:367 (1) - No NC ^
Ugh, by now you get the point; stop NCing on 1 beat....
00:40:550 (3) - Not a mod, just wanted to point out how awesome this is .

Notes: Other than the NC's I see no problems.

[Exnya]
I CANT FIND A PROBLEM IN THIS LOL

Thanks for the mod o/

Hay~ M4M that I requested : D
Les go



Interesting map~ And here, have a star c:
Hope I helped

Moo-Chan wrote:

Hay~ M4M that I requested : D
Les go

[General]

1. I would highly suggest adding hit sounds but there are :c

[Nukednya~'s Hard]

1. 00:08:649 (2,3) - Blanket is off fixed
2. 00:15:198 (1,2) - Make these the same shape fixed
3. 00:16:043 (3,4) - Blanket is off fixed
4. 00:21:536 (4,1) - ^ (sorry, I'm a blanket nazi) fixed, it's fine lol
5. 00:24:917 (6,1) - ^ fixed
6. 01:11:713 (5) - Maybe move to x:324 y:188? fixed
7. 01:29:353 (4) - NC fixed
8. 01:29:565 (1) - Remove NC fixed, we'll try both :L

[Collab Insanya~]

1. 00:10:973 (1,1,2) - I would make the SV for these higher. It seems too slow for the nya sound eh, fine imo
2. 00:14:565 (6) - Make this into 2 different sliders? ^
3. 00:16:255 (7,1) - Check stack (00:16:888 (1) - x:248 y:276) fixed
4. 00:21:536 (1) - Higher SV? nah, trying to keep them the same size
5. 00:27:874 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make these closer together. Someone might think they're single taps fixed
6. 00:46:677 (2,3) - Check stack (00:47:734 (3,4) - x:170 y:227) fixed
7. 01:29:565 (1) - In my opinion, I would remove NC all are nc'd so it's fine

[Exnya~]

1. 01:21:114 (2) - Maybe instead of making this a single note, you could turn it into a 1/2 slider. It sounds like you're missing a beat here, 01:21:219 i disagree, sorry :S

Interesting map~ And here, have a star c:
Hope I helped

Thanks for the mod o/

Hi, here for m4m! I'm not very experienced with mapping E/N/H yet and it's been ages since I've played them, so those mods probably won't be as great. I'll try still.

[Exnya~]

00:08:860 (3,4) - I don't really like the pause here; I know it's pretty clear in the music here, but there's other places in the music similar to it that are mapped, and I feel this disrupts the flow a bit. The other pauses in the map accent the music quite nicely, it's just this, 00:15:621 (3,4), and 01:09:705 (3,4) that I'm not really a fan of. Try making the slider into a reverse slider or something (obviously the notes will have to be repositioned a bit) and see if you like that maybe?
00:10:128 (1) - The increase in SV here makes the stream following it awkward to play following the slider, try moving it back a bit (http://puu.sh/bD5j7/1cfc4eb74c.png).
00:13:508 (1) - ^
00:16:255 (1) - ^Not exactly the same, but I'd move the note off the slider a bit here as well, I think it's just too close and feels awkward.
00:19:001 (4,5) - Too close imo, I misread it on playthrough and I don't think it looks great either.
00:27:029 (1) - Same as those ones from earlier; this one is perfectly fine to read but I still think it flows better to move the notes farther off after the SV change.
00:38:860 (1,1) - Try increasing the spacing here.
00:50:691 (1,2,3,4,5) - Space these out slightly (as in very slightly, by like 2x 2y or something) and I think the effect you're going for is a lot stronger due to how the game automatically stacks notes.
00:51:959 (7,1) - I think it flows better to have a bit higher spacing here.
01:04:001 (1,2) - Extend the slider and remove the note after it, I know the music there is really strange but even after knowing what it sounds like, this just doesn't play well.

That's all for this diff, I'm impressed how sightreadable it was despite mapping all of the weird effects added to it, nice work!

[Collab Insanya~]

00:13:931 (2,3,4) - Move up a bit?
00:31:255 (1,1) - It's not excessively clear that the second note comes so soon after the first, although moving it any closer is just awkward. Maybe just have the slider go an extra tick and remove the note..?It's not nearly as nice but I do think the note is kinda unexpected. Idk.
00:32:945 (1,1,1) - Not a fan of this note arrangement, what do you think of something like this? http://puu.sh/bD9Iv/d7e172d2a1.png
00:47:522 (2,3,4) - This jump doesn't really make sense to me and is REALLY hard to read, especially coming right after a slider that was overlapped. I really like what you did with the music somewhat repeating and accenting that with overlaps, but I would really change the position of the two stacked notes so the jump is more readable.
00:50:691 (1,2,3,4,5) - Gonna suggest the same thing here that I did on the extra.
01:07:487 (2,3) - This spacing doesn't make much sense and is pretty hard to see.
01:09:283 (1,2,3,1,2,1) - The overlaps here are cool, but having the notes overlapping only makes it harder to read their timing, and when the spacing is so strange just for the sake of overlaps, it creates a situation that doesn't make a whole lot of sense unless you look at it slowly. Specifically, the spacing between these two pairs of notes could really stand to be increased: 01:09:705 (3,1) and 01:10:339 (2,1).

Lovely diff!

[Nukednya~'s Hard]

00:29:353 (2,3,4) - Move this triple left a little so it isn't so close to the slider after it.
00:29:776 (5,6) - Having two repeat sliders with only one repeat after each other like this is awkward to play sometimes, consider 3 1/4 sliders or one long repeat slider like you used earlier.
00:49:846 (1,2,3,4) - Seems like a sudden spike in difficulty o.o Same with the sliders that come later: 00:56:607 (1,2,3) and 00:58:297 (3,4,5) ... maybe I don't know [Hard] difficulties well enough but it seems much harder.
01:23:438 (3,4,5) - Again, this triple is too close to the note after it.

[Normanya~]

00:14:776 (6,1) - The spacing here looks closer to your 1/1 spacing than 1/2.

I don't really know what to say about the easy, I can't really see any mistakes in it and I don't know much about what it's "supposed" to look like. Sorry ;_;

Overall, nice mapset, good luck!!

Hi there, doing an M4M from your queue. Just a quick note to say I can't mod the Insanes very well, so don't expect too much there.

Easnya

Mostly aesthetic stuff here - all my opinion of course.

00:06:748 (3) - Move the starting point to x:96 y:224 and the ending point to x:32 y:192?
00:07:593 (4) - (Only do if you accept the change to (3)) Move to x:176 y:272?
00:08:015 (5) - (^) Move to x:256 y:320?
00:08:438 (1) - (^) Move starting point to x:352 y:320, middle point to x:384 y:288, and end point to x:416 y:224 ?
00:13:508 (3,4,5,6) - Move all of these so (3) is under (2) ?
00:15:198 (1) - (Only do this if you accept the change to (3,4,5,6)) Move to x:40 y:168 ?
00:16:466 (2) - (^) Move to x:232 y:192 ?
00:16:888 (3) - (^) Move to x:288 y:264 ?
00:18:579 (1) - Move to x:336 y:80
00:25:339 (1) - Move the midpoint to x:352 y:240 and the endpoint to x:296 y:208
00:29:565 (2) - Move the midpoint to x:56 y:96 and the endpoint to x:112 y:96
00:41:818 (4) - Move the endpoint to x:16 y:96
00:54:075 - Add circle?
00:57:452 (5) - Move the starting point to x:72 y:248, the midpoint to x:64 y:288 and the endpoint to x:120 y:320
01:00:832 (3) - Move the endpoint to x:328 y:208
01:08:860 (6) - Rotate by -10 and then move to x:328 y:360

Normanya

Love the sliders for the sound effects and whatnot
Just some aesthetic touches from me here.

00:10:973 (3) - Move the endpoint to x:280 y:32
00:24:494 (7) - Rotate by 5 degrees to make the start point and the endpoint line up on the y axis? (eg. y: 204)
00:50:691 (4) - Rotate by -3 degrees and put it on x:108 y:324
00:53:649 (5) - Move the endpoint to x:296, y:276
01:24:917 (5) - Move the start point to x:124 y:196, the second last point to x:264 y:312, and the endpoint to x:288, y:276

Nukednya's Hardnyan or whatever it's called :p

Very nice - looks like a difficulty I'd be struggling to FC with a good acc :p

00:09:494 (4) - Move to x:264 y:188
00:18:579 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure about this pattern... The jump between (2,3) is double that of the jump between (1,2)... Make these jumps more equal?
00:26:607 (5,1) - Rotate (5) 20 degrees and move to x:380 y:196, and move (1) to x:440 y:100
00:35:903 (3,4) - This could just be me, but I don't really like noticeable extended sliders. Maybe change (3) to a 1/2 slider, and add a circle on the blue tick?
00:40:128 (5) - ^
01:13:508 (4) - Move to x:120 y:252
01:13:719 (5) - (Only do if you applied the above change) Move to x:32 y:236
01:15:621 (5) - Move to x:484 y:216

Note - The mods on the next 2 difficulties won't be so great - I can't mod Insanes

Collab Insanya

00:08:438 (1,2,3) - Control+G (2,3)
00:15:198 (1,2,3) - ^
01:10:550 (1,2,3) - Move (2) so the jumps between (1,2) and (2,3) are similar?
01:15:621 (1,2,3) - ^
01:29:142 (1,1,1) - Make a better pattern?

Exnya

Can't really mod this very well... Sorry!
But it's a very nice map. I hope this gets ranked soonish - it deserves it!

Hi~ From Strawberry Mousse Modding Queue.
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why to improve my futur mods.
If you've any question, ask me in-game.


That's all.
Good luck Mukyu~

NM from my queue :3

[Easnya]

[Normanya]
No problem~

[Nukednya's Hard]

[Collab Insanya]

[Exnya]
Skipped, I am not good at mod Extra diff

#12th page hype

#RapAirhorn

pooptartsonas wrote:

Hi, here for m4m! I'm not very experienced with mapping E/N/H yet and it's been ages since I've played them, so those mods probably won't be as great. I'll try still.

[Exnya~]

00:08:860 (3,4) - I don't really like the pause here; I know it's pretty clear in the music here, but there's other places in the music similar to it that are mapped, and I feel this disrupts the flow a bit. The other pauses in the map accent the music quite nicely, it's just this, 00:15:621 (3,4), and 01:09:705 (3,4) that I'm not really a fan of. Try making the slider into a reverse slider or something (obviously the notes will have to be repositioned a bit) and see if you like that maybe? i disagree. it's fine like this
00:10:128 (1) - The increase in SV here makes the stream following it awkward to play following the slider, try moving it back a bit (http://puu.sh/bD5j7/1cfc4eb74c.png). i've gotten a ton of complaints about this, so 'm gonna reduce the sv to 1.5 and move it back a bit
00:13:508 (1) - ^ ^
00:16:255 (1) - ^Not exactly the same, but I'd move the note off the slider a bit here as well, I think it's just too close and feels awkward. ^
00:19:001 (4,5) - Too close imo, I misread it on playthrough and I don't think it looks great either. removed the overlap
00:27:029 (1) - Same as those ones from earlier; this one is perfectly fine to read but I still think it flows better to move the notes farther off after the SV change. tentative no. this part is pretty questionable, so i'll probably change it until something fits
00:38:860 (1,1) - Try increasing the spacing here. i like the antijumps :S
00:50:691 (1,2,3,4,5) - Space these out slightly (as in very slightly, by like 2x 2y or something) and I think the effect you're going for is a lot stronger due to how the game automatically stacks notes. fixed?
00:51:959 (7,1) - I think it flows better to have a bit higher spacing here. eh, fine imo
01:04:001 (1,2) - Extend the slider and remove the note after it, I know the music there is really strange but even after knowing what it sounds like, this just doesn't play well. i've been told to do this before, but i reeeaally want to keep it as is. the purpose of this part is to have the notes circle around, and if that circle isn't there, it's just another slider

That's all for this diff, I'm impressed how sightreadable it was despite mapping all of the weird effects added to it, nice work!

[Collab Insanya~]

00:13:931 (2,3,4) - Move up a bit? done
00:31:255 (1,1) - It's not excessively clear that the second note comes so soon after the first, although moving it any closer is just awkward. Maybe just have the slider go an extra tick and remove the note..?It's not nearly as nice but I do think the note is kinda unexpected. Idk. fine for now, although i did improve the slider shape a little
00:32:945 (1,1,1) - Not a fan of this note arrangement, what do you think of something like this? http://puu.sh/bD9Iv/d7e172d2a1.png i like it, done
00:47:522 (2,3,4) - This jump doesn't really make sense to me and is REALLY hard to read, especially coming right after a slider that was overlapped. I really like what you did with the music somewhat repeating and accenting that with overlaps, but I would really change the position of the two stacked notes so the jump is more readable. turned it into a slider, idk if that fixed it, but we'll try it for now
00:50:691 (1,2,3,4,5) - Gonna suggest the same thing here that I did on the extra. this is fine for now imo
01:07:487 (2,3) - This spacing doesn't make much sense and is pretty hard to see. fixed
01:09:283 (1,2,3,1,2,1) - The overlaps here are cool, but having the notes overlapping only makes it harder to read their timing, and when the spacing is so strange just for the sake of overlaps, it creates a situation that doesn't make a whole lot of sense unless you look at it slowly. Specifically, the spacing between these two pairs of notes could really stand to be increased: 01:09:705 (3,1) and 01:10:339 (2,1). fixed, although the 2nd 1 is fine

Lovely diff!

[Nukednya~'s Hard]

00:29:353 (2,3,4) - Move this triple left a little so it isn't so close to the slider after it.done
00:29:776 (5,6) - Having two repeat sliders with only one repeat after each other like this is awkward to play sometimes, consider 3 1/4 sliders or one long repeat slider like you used earlier. gonna keep this
00:49:846 (1,2,3,4) - Seems like a sudden spike in difficulty o.o Same with the sliders that come later: 00:56:607 (1,2,3) and 00:58:297 (3,4,5) ... maybe I don't know [Hard] difficulties well enough but it seems much harder. idk, i think it's fine, but if it becomes an issue, i'll change it
01:23:438 (3,4,5) - Again, this triple is too close to the note after it. fixed

[Normanya~]

00:14:776 (6,1) - The spacing here looks closer to your 1/1 spacing than 1/2. o sht

I don't really know what to say about the easy, I can't really see any mistakes in it and I don't know much about what it's "supposed" to look like. Sorry ;_;

Overall, nice mapset, good luck!!

jtd1 wrote:

Hi there, doing an M4M from your queue. Just a quick note to say I can't mod the Insanes very well, so don't expect too much there.

Easnya

Mostly aesthetic stuff here - all my opinion of course.

00:06:748 (3) - Move the starting point to x:96 y:224 and the ending point to x:32 y:192? fine imo
00:07:593 (4) - (Only do if you accept the change to (3)) Move to x:176 y:272?
00:08:015 (5) - (^) Move to x:256 y:320?
00:08:438 (1) - (^) Move starting point to x:352 y:320, middle point to x:384 y:288, and end point to x:416 y:224 ?
00:13:508 (3,4,5,6) - Move all of these so (3) is under (2) ? mmm nah
00:15:198 (1) - (Only do this if you accept the change to (3,4,5,6)) Move to x:40 y:168 ?
00:16:466 (2) - (^) Move to x:232 y:192 ? mmm fixed a little
00:16:888 (3) - (^) Move to x:288 y:264 ? nah
00:18:579 (1) - Move to x:336 y:80 nope, don't wanna break ds
00:25:339 (1) - Move the midpoint to x:352 y:240 and the endpoint to x:296 y:208
00:29:565 (2) - Move the midpoint to x:56 y:96 and the endpoint to x:112 y:96
00:41:818 (4) - Move the endpoint to x:16 y:96
00:54:075 - Add circle? done
00:57:452 (5) - Move the starting point to x:72 y:248, the midpoint to x:64 y:288 and the endpoint to x:120 y:320
01:00:832 (3) - Move the endpoint to x:328 y:208
01:08:860 (6) - Rotate by -10 and then move to x:328 y:360

fixed some of the movements, but too lazy to write them down :S

Normanya

Love the sliders for the sound effects and whatnot
Just some aesthetic touches from me here.

00:10:973 (3) - Move the endpoint to x:280 y:32
00:24:494 (7) - Rotate by 5 degrees to make the start point and the endpoint line up on the y axis? (eg. y: 204)
00:50:691 (4) - Rotate by -3 degrees and put it on x:108 y:324
00:53:649 (5) - Move the endpoint to x:296, y:276
01:24:917 (5) - Move the start point to x:124 y:196, the second last point to x:264 y:312, and the endpoint to x:288, y:276

same lol

Nukednya's Hardnyan or whatever it's called :p

Very nice - looks like a difficulty I'd be struggling to FC with a good acc :p

00:09:494 (4) - Move to x:264 y:188 done
00:18:579 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure about this pattern... The jump between (2,3) is double that of the jump between (1,2)... Make these jumps more equal? eee fine imo
00:26:607 (5,1) - Rotate (5) 20 degrees and move to x:380 y:196, and move (1) to x:440 y:100 fine imo
00:35:903 (3,4) - This could just be me, but I don't really like noticeable extended sliders. Maybe change (3) to a 1/2 slider, and add a circle on the blue tick? nah
00:40:128 (5) - ^ yea, changed to 1/2
01:13:508 (4) - Move to x:120 y:252 done
01:13:719 (5) - (Only do if you applied the above change) Move to x:32 y:236 ^
01:15:621 (5) - Move to x:484 y:216 fixed a bit

Note - The mods on the next 2 difficulties won't be so great - I can't mod Insanes

Collab Insanya

00:08:438 (1,2,3) - Control+G (2,3) nah
00:15:198 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:10:550 (1,2,3) - Move (2) so the jumps between (1,2) and (2,3) are similar? mmm fine imo
01:15:621 (1,2,3) - ^ nah
01:29:142 (1,1,1) - Make a better pattern? i like it doh :c

Exnya

Can't really mod this very well... Sorry!
But it's a very nice map. I hope this gets ranked soonish - it deserves it!

Nozhomi wrote:

Hi~ From Strawberry Mousse Modding Queue.
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why to improve my futur mods.
If you've any question, ask me in-game.

- General :

1. Uninherited timing points conflict with Nukednya's Hard. whoops, accidentally slipped that into there .-.

- Exnya~

1. HP7. nope, hp drains pretty fast already
2. 00:10:973 (1,2,3,4) - Try to keep constant spacing here. Music are not enough strong to use a variant DS here. i disagree

- Collab Insanya~

1. 00:10:867 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Use same DS than 00:10:445 (2,3,4,5,6) - for consistency.
2. 00:12:241 (2,3,4) - Use same DS than previous streams (consistency again).
3. 00:15:938 (4,5,6,7) - , 00:16:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - and 00:20:480 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - : Keep constant DS for all this kind of stream ! It makes your map look messy. **
4. 00:27:452 (1,1) - Useless NC imo, and they are not logic with the rest of the map. fixed
5. 00:41:607 (1) - ^ ^
6. 00:48:367 (1) - CTRL+G to keep all your sliders start like they was "inside". they flip, nah
7. 01:06:748 (1,2,1,2,3) - All this part is just unreadable and looks messy. Rework it. done in one of the earlier mods
8. 01:11:396 (1,1) - Remove NC. done
9. 01:29:353 (1) - ^ gonna keep these

- Nukednya's Hard :

1. 00:12:452 (2,3) - Move 00:12:452 (2) - to 40:88 and 00:12:663 (3) - to 56:168 to center it perfectly. wha? looks fine to me
2. 00:34:635 (3,4) - Bad flow here. Maybe try this fixed differently
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:39:283 (3,5) - Little overlap. fixed in an earlier mod
4. 00:50:480 (4,2) - Maybe find a way to stack them ? done
5. 01:05:903 (1,3) - Center it correctly. fixed
6. 01:08:015 (3,4) - You can perfect this blanket. done

- Normanya~ :

1. Check your DS ! It need to keep constant or variation max from 0.05x. Or here you go from 0.7x to 0.9x. Fix this ! ssshhh no one saw anything .-.
2. 00:06:748 (5) - NC ? done
3. 00:53:649 (5) - ^ nah, nc on every other big white tick
4. 01:10:973 (4) - ^ ^

- Easnya~ :

1. 00:05:057 (1,2) - Maybe blanket ? done
2. 00:06:748 (3) - NC done
3. 00:10:128 (4) - ^
4. 00:13:508 (3) - ^
5. 00:20:269 (3) - ^
6. 00:21:536 (6,1) - Improve blanket. fine imo T~T
7. 00:27:029 (3) - NC
8. 00:37:170 (4) - ^
9. 00:54:494 (2) - Would CTRL+G it to improve flow here. can't, it would break ds
10. 01:07:593 (3) - NC
11. 01:21:114 (5,6) - Improve blanket. fine imo

all nc's in the normal and hard are supposed to be on every other big white tick

That's all.
Good luck Mukyu~

Chaoslitz wrote:

NM from my queue :3

[Easnya]

1. 00:35:480 (1) - Move it a bit upper done
2. 00:45:621 (1) - Fix the blanket done
3. 01:14:353 (5) - ^ done

[Normanya]
No problem~

[Nukednya's Hard]

1. 00:35:480 (1) - Move this a bit downward done
2. 00:49:846 (1,2,3) - Equal DS for this three fine imo
3. 00:56:607 (1,2,3) - ^ fine imo

[Collab Insanya]

1. 00:31:255 (1) - Change the shape x.x yea, fixed earlier
2. 00:34:001 (2,3,4) - Equal DS fixed? idk
3. 01:14:565 (1,2,3) - ^ ds is on the diagonal

[Exnya]
Skipped, I am not good at mod Extra diff

Thanks for mods o/
#12thpagehype

the headache is real

[ BJ ] wrote:

the headache is real

IT'S REAL BECAUSE THE ONLY REPLY I GET FROM BATS ARE "it needs more work"

OMG i can create a GD in taiko (?) inner or oni (?)

[_Chichinya_] wrote:

OMG i can create a GD in taiko (?) inner or oni (?)

Sorry, I won't be taking GDs, since I'd have to wait for that mode to get modded, too.

cool stuff

good effort

consider renaming collab to 'nyansane', unless you want to keep the naming pattern with nya being on the end. imo nyansane looks better than 'collab ___', pretty sure ranking criteria requires you to put the creator of the GDs in the map description anyways so people will still know it's a collab.

keep up the good work

don't really feel like touching a hybrid set but i hope these helps

Hello! The m4m ~

General

-The constant use of hitfinish is in my opinion a bit too much - consider changing this to hitwhistle or reduce the amount of hitfinishes

Easnya~

>00:31:255 (5,1,2) - Whats up with the DS here?
>00:49:001 (1,2) - The blanket here could be a tiny bit improved

Really clean

Collab Insanya~

Overall this difficulty has really high amount of NC and while some of them make sense there are quite many which dont make so much sense - pointing some of these out

>00:13:825 - There should be a circle here imo
>00:17:734 (7) - This NC could be removed
>00:28:719 (7) - NC
>00:28:931 (1) - Remove NC
>00:28:931 (1,3) - Not properly stacked
>00:29:353 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This stream isnt properly blanketing the circles
>00:31:255 (1,1) - Why not just put the Later circle under the sliders tail? The distance is really big atm
>00:37:593 (3) - Remove NC
>00:39:072 (3,4) - this overlap is ugly (nazi)
>00:41:818 (3) - Remove NC
>00:47:945 - There should be a circle here for consistancy imo
>01:20:903 (1,2) - This distance is really high, consider lowering it
>01:21:114 (1) - NC
>01:26:818 (3) - Remove NC
>01:29:353 (1,1) - Consider removing these

Normanya~

>00:54:494 (6) - This might be nazi but move the beginning of this slider down 1 grid for better blanket
>01:10:128 (2,4) - Maybe reduce the curve on these just a bit for better visuals
>01:26:184 (1) - I'd reduce the curve here too

Can't see any other problems here, clean diff

Extranya~

>00:10:339 (1) - Remove NC
>00:30:198 (5,1) - Why suddenly overlap these when you have had more spacing until this point?
>00:31:255 (1,1) - I'd put the circle at the tail of the slider for better visuals
>00:58:297 (1,1) - ^
>01:27:452 (1) - NC because of the sv change
>01:28:086 (2) - Remove NC

Nukednya~'s Hard

>00:15:198 (1,2,3) - These finishes dont fit here at all, atleast reduce some of them
>00:31:677 (6) - This slider should have 1 more repeat to follow the music better, it would need to be repositioned if this is done though
>00:57:452 (1,3) - Not properly stacked
>01:20:269 (4,5) - This could easily be blanketed
>01:26:818 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern could easily be blanketed with the earlier slider too
>01:29:353 (4) - Remove NC

Good luck with this mapset !

i saw your post on reddit and understand your situation here. honestly the fastest way to "do more work" is to remap the diff yourself. the structure of you current diff is already defined so modding wouldn't help much with it. and that's why your set still "needs more work" with 70+sp. i guess you already know you're having the problem with spacing and slow sliders in your map. why not remake it and apply the things you learnt from like...the log above?
2 maps which are possible to be the references of your map:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/31419
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/33192
i wanted to help, but bubbling/qualifying your map directly is not considered helping in my eyes.
good luck then.

Oracle wrote:

honestly the fastest way to "do more work" is to remap the diff yourself. the structure of you current diff is already defined so modding wouldn't help much with it. and that's why your set still "needs more work" with 70+sp. i guess you already know you're having the problem with spacing and slow sliders in your map. why not remake it and apply the things you learnt from like...the log above?

I disagree. I think it's refined enough to where remapping that diff would take more time. I do heavily appreciate the help though.

Midge wrote:

Oracle wrote:

honestly the fastest way to "do more work" is to remap the diff yourself. the structure of you current diff is already defined so modding wouldn't help much with it. and that's why your set still "needs more work" with 70+sp. i guess you already know you're having the problem with spacing and slow sliders in your map. why not remake it and apply the things you learnt from like...the log above?

I disagree. I think it's refined enough to where remapping that diff would take more time. I do heavily appreciate the help though.

okay, as you consider it's a waste of time, i'm not spending time as well~
good luck finding someone to help with the set! ^^

From my modding queue~ (hey its that guy from ruddut)

General
Its err.... unique. this mapping style... HanzeR is that you?

Easynya~
Nothing to say :/


Normanya~
00:22:804 (2,3,4,5,6) - I feel like this would be slightly too hard for normal imo
nothing much to here either

Nukednya~'s Hard
00:05:903 (3) - Ctrl-g for better flow
00:49:846 (1,2,3) - Perhaps this is too hard? I dunno :/
00:56:607 (1,2,3) - ^Same goes for this
01:07:593 (1,4) - These shouldn't touch


Collab Insaneya~
00:06:959 (1) - Maybe move the NC from here to 00:06:748 (4) -
00:17:734 (1) - Random NC?
00:17:734 (1) - Also, move these closer together
00:26:818 (6) - Ctrl-g would make better flow
00:38:227 (2,3,4) - Spread these out more
00:37:170 (1,2,1,2,1) - I think its best if these all get moved to the left so the pattern above ^^ gets some more space http://puu.sh/bUE2j/832df4a41c.jpg something like this
00:43:086 (5,6,7) - imo a 1/4 slider that repeated once would be better
00:45:621 (1) - lol what is this ninja circle. move it up a bit for better vision
00:45:832 (2) - Ctrl-g for flow
00:46:466 (1) - ^^ same for this, move it so the start matches with 00:46:255 (4,5) - like http://puu.sh/bUEj7/3d8748958d.jpg
00:46:888 (1) - ^^ same stuff
00:47:734 (3,1) - Something something ctrl-g (separately ofc)
General note, a lot of patterns seem to be confusing/clustered (at least to me D:), consider revising some of them for more clarity.


Exnya~
00:10:128 (1,1) - Connect/move closer maybe?
00:17:311 (5) - Ctrl-g for teh flow
00:58:297 (1,1) - Perhaps separate these so they don't touch :S
I don't think I'm qualified enough to be modding this, especially since its pretty hard :/

ProfessionalBox wrote:

Hello! The m4m ~

General

-The constant use of hitfinish is in my opinion a bit too much - consider changing this to hitwhistle or reduce the amount of hitfinishes yeeaaaaa

Easnya~

>00:31:255 (5,1,2) - Whats up with the DS here? whoops fixed :S
>00:49:001 (1,2) - The blanket here could be a tiny bit improved fixed

Really clean

Collab Insanya~

Overall this difficulty has really high amount of NC and while some of them make sense there are quite many which dont make so much sense - pointing some of these out

>00:13:825 - There should be a circle here imo fixed
>00:17:734 (7) - This NC could be removed meant to signify sv change though :c
>00:28:719 (7) - NC done
>00:28:931 (1) - Remove NCdone
>00:28:931 (1,3) - Not properly stacked wat
>00:29:353 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This stream isnt properly blanketing the circles fixed yea
>00:31:255 (1,1) - Why not just put the Later circle under the sliders tail? The distance is really big atm fixed
>00:37:593 (3) - Remove NC done
>00:39:072 (3,4) - this overlap is ugly (nazi) fixed lol
>00:41:818 (3) - Remove NC done
>00:47:945 - There should be a circle here for consistancy imo nah, fine imo
>01:20:903 (1,2) - This distance is really high, consider lowering it yup, meant to be a jump
>01:21:114 (1) - NC nah
>01:26:818 (3) - Remove NC done
>01:29:353 (1,1) - Consider removing these nope, wanna keep it consistent

Normanya~

>00:54:494 (6) - This might be nazi but move the beginning of this slider down 1 grid for better blanket done
>01:10:128 (2,4) - Maybe reduce the curve on these just a bit for better visuals eh i disagree, i think it looks nice
>01:26:184 (1) - I'd reduce the curve here too done

Can't see any other problems here, clean diff

Extranya~

>00:10:339 (1) - Remove NC done
>00:30:198 (5,1) - Why suddenly overlap these when you have had more spacing until this point? they arent overlapped .-.
>00:31:255 (1,1) - I'd put the circle at the tail of the slider for better visuals yea i should probably do that
>00:58:297 (1,1) - ^ ye
>01:27:452 (1) - NC because of the sv change eh, i think it's conveyed in the circle before it
>01:28:086 (2) - Remove NC nah

Nukednya~'s Hard

>00:15:198 (1,2,3) - These finishes dont fit here at all, atleast reduce some of them i'm gonna redo hs ;n;
>00:31:677 (6) - This slider should have 1 more repeat to follow the music better, it would need to be repositioned if this is done though eeee we'll see how this goes
>00:57:452 (1,3) - Not properly stacked fixed
>01:20:269 (4,5) - This could easily be blanketed fixed
>01:26:818 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern could easily be blanketed with the earlier slider too done
>01:29:353 (4) - Remove NC ee yea done

Good luck with this mapset !

SeNoZinD wrote:

From my modding queue~ (hey its that guy from ruddut) hi .-.

General
Its err.... unique. this mapping style... HanzeR is that you?

Easynya~
Nothing to say :/


Normanya~
00:22:804 (2,3,4,5,6) - I feel like this would be slightly too hard for normal imo nah, fine imo
nothing much to here either

Nukednya~'s Hard
00:05:903 (3) - Ctrl-g for better flow done
00:49:846 (1,2,3) - Perhaps this is too hard? I dunno :/ i'd like to think players know how to do kick sliders :c
00:56:607 (1,2,3) - ^Same goes for this
01:07:593 (1,4) - These shouldn't touch eeehhh they don't touch when playing, i think it's fine


Collab Insaneya~
00:06:959 (1) - Maybe move the NC from here to 00:06:748 (4) - done
00:17:734 (1) - Random NC? eee ok changed since probox asked to change it too
00:17:734 (1) - Also, move these closer together nah, ds increases
00:26:818 (6) - Ctrl-g would make better flow nope, they inverse :S
00:38:227 (2,3,4) - Spread these out more fixed differently :S
00:37:170 (1,2,1,2,1) - I think its best if these all get moved to the left so the pattern above ^^ gets some more space http://puu.sh/bUE2j/832df4a41c.jpg something like this eee fine imo when i fixed it lol
00:43:086 (5,6,7) - imo a 1/4 slider that repeated once would be better nah, i like the triplet :c
00:45:621 (1) - lol what is this ninja circle. move it up a bit for better vision fixed?
00:45:832 (2) - Ctrl-g for flow nah
00:46:466 (1) - ^^ same for this, move it so the start matches with 00:46:255 (4,5) - like http://puu.sh/bUEj7/3d8748958d.jpg
00:46:888 (1) - ^^ same stuff
00:47:734 (3,1) - Something something ctrl-g (separately ofc) same34 ;n;
General note, a lot of patterns seem to be confusing/clustered (at least to me D:), consider revising some of them for more clarity.


Exnya~
00:10:128 (1,1) - Connect/move closer maybe? nah, the space indicates that it's a kick slider
00:17:311 (5) - Ctrl-g for teh flow nah
00:58:297 (1,1) - Perhaps separate these so they don't touch :S changed from probox's mod
I don't think I'm qualified enough to be modding this, especially since its pretty hard :/

Thanks for the mods o/

Hey there, doing a M4M from your queue. Only modding standard since my Mania ability is non-existant.

Easnya~

00:18:579 (1,2) - Fix the flow of these sliders perhaps? Move slider 2 down+right a bit.
00:25:339 (1,2) - Same as above, but rotating might be a better idea to keep the blanket neat.

Normanya~

00:06:748 (1,2) - I think flow can be improved a bit here. Move 2 and 3 further up, and then rotate 00:08:438 (1) .
00:24:494 (7,1) - Flow could be improved by moving circle 1, but keeping this is fine.
00:53:649 (5,6) - Why not have these the same shape?

Nukednya~'s Hard

01:13:931 (6) - Make this blanket with 01:13:086 (3) a bit better.

Collab Insanya~

00:30:410 (1,2,3,4,1) - Could make a more regular star out of this formation.
00:53:966 (1) - Remove the New Combo and put it on 00:54:283 (3) instead, since this is a blue tick.

Exnya~

00:15:410 (2,3,4) - These jumps seem a bit extensive, and I don't believe the music is suitable to suggest such a jump.
00:53:227 (1,2,1) - Same as above.
01:04:001 (1) - The slider speed comes too suddenly in my opinion and can easily throw people off. Maybe have it loop around or repeat instead?

Pretty nice map overall, and quite fun to play. Good luck

Hello. :0

Mania modding..

i think

Pewrakonya~ NM
00:04:670 -> movement 00:04:635

because, other mania difficult also 00:04:635 all place the note. check it.

and i think also 00:04:670 is not cync.

good beat map!

-Mo- wrote:

Hey there, doing a M4M from your queue. Only modding standard since my Mania ability is non-existant.

Easnya~

00:18:579 (1,2) - Fix the flow of these sliders perhaps? Move slider 2 down+right a bit. fine imo
00:25:339 (1,2) - Same as above, but rotating might be a better idea to keep the blanket neat. same

Normanya~

00:06:748 (1,2) - I think flow can be improved a bit here. Move 2 and 3 further up, and then rotate 00:08:438 (1) . eeehh, it's fine. i can't really fix it without breaking ds
00:24:494 (7,1) - Flow could be improved by moving circle 1, but keeping this is fine. mmm, don't wanna break ds
00:53:649 (5,6) - Why not have these the same shape? done

Nukednya~'s Hard

01:13:931 (6) - Make this blanket with 01:13:086 (3) a bit better. done

Collab Insanya~

00:30:410 (1,2,3,4,1) - Could make a more regular star out of this formation. done, good idea
00:53:966 (1) - Remove the New Combo and put it on 00:54:283 (3) instead, since this is a blue tick. nah, i want the nc on the next one because it kinda signifies the sv change in 1

Exnya~

00:15:410 (2,3,4) - These jumps seem a bit extensive, and I don't believe the music is suitable to suggest such a jump. done
00:53:227 (1,2,1) - Same as above. done
01:04:001 (1) - The slider speed comes too suddenly in my opinion and can easily throw people off. Maybe have it loop around or repeat instead? i like it doh :c

Pretty nice map overall, and quite fun to play. Good luck

Thanks T~T

KawaEE wrote:

Hello. :0

Mania modding..

i think

Pewrakonya~ NM
00:04:670 -> movement 00:04:635

because, other mania difficult also 00:04:635 all place the note. check it.

and i think also 00:04:670 is not cync.

good beat map!

sorry, don't wanna apply this since i already have a piano :S

Yes I'm late ^^")7 But at least I came right? hehehehehehehe

Sorry had life :>

Easy

00:06:748 (1) - Bring DS down to 0.9x

00:13:508 (3) - ^

00:40:550 (3) - If you want to stack this perfectly, select 00:38:860 (1,2) and rotate by -4 degrees

00:35:480 (1) - Move up by 2 grid squares so that (4,5,1) makes a perfect triangle

nice job. Would have been better with more flow though

Normal

00:12:241 (1) - Why did you decrease the DS here?

00:20:269 (3) - Bring down to x430 y132

00:25:762 (1,3) - please stack

00:46:043 (2) - second node: x436 y104 third node: x408 y216 This improves blanket and makes the slider bend at a more accurate timing

00:59:353 (1) - Increase DS to 0.9x please

Don't change DS so much for normal

Lalalalalalalalala

Sorry ^^")7

yurunneram wrote:

Yes I'm late ^^")7 But at least I came right? hehehehehehehe

Sorry had life :>

Easy

00:06:748 (1) - Bring DS down to 0.9x done

00:13:508 (3) - ^ done

00:40:550 (3) - If you want to stack this perfectly, select 00:38:860 (1,2) and rotate by -4 degrees done

00:35:480 (1) - Move up by 2 grid squares so that (4,5,1) makes a perfect triangle done

nice job. Would have been better with more flow though

Normal

00:12:241 (1) - Why did you decrease the DS here? done, osu just decides to change ds for no reason

00:20:269 (3) - Bring down to x430 y132 done

00:25:762 (1,3) - please stack done

00:46:043 (2) - second node: x436 y104 third node: x408 y216 This improves blanket and makes the slider bend at a more accurate timing done

00:59:353 (1) - Increase DS to 0.9x please done

Don't change DS so much for normal

Lalalalalalalalala

Sorry ^^")7

thanks for mod

holy tits this thing is still pending?

Maybe i will try to mod this at some point soon even though every fiber of my being tells me not to because of how it sounds.

Setz206 wrote:

holy tits this thing is still pending?

needsmoreworkneedsmoreworkneedsmoreworkneedsmorework

I fucking hate this map.

From my ~Mod Que~

I guess you can call me Ms Distance Snap Anal Inspector lol. I like exact numbers =)

[Easnya]

1. It's more noticeable in Easy diff (circle size wise); distance between notes keeps changing throughout the map. 0.1 difference is fine I guess, but any more than that, you can see a difference. You go from 88 to 91, just pick one for consistency (especially in Easy's). It also just makes things look neater ^^
2. 00:16:888 (3,4,1) - Either move the tail end in a way where the cursor flows to the 4 naturally or move (4) and re-blanket it with (1).
3. 00:20:269 (3) - this note is noticeably further than all the other notes (90 to 94 atm)
4. 00:41:818 (4) - ^ Same reason (92 to 97)

[Normanya]

1. 01:18:156 (4) - Spacing off by 0.9

[Hard]
This was done well, good job! Though I feel like it's too linear for me (I personally like a few jumps). Just a suggestion: when the song reaches this "lyrical" bit 00:37:593 (2,3) - You can do a little jumps here. Or here - 00:41:818 (4,1) -

1. 00:44:776 (3) - Is this a jump or should this be equal ds? If it's a jump it's looks off compared to your very first one here 00:06:959 (1)
2. 00:53:438 (6,7) - It felt awkward to play here (your judgement)
3. 00:56:396 (3,1) - Too close.
4. 01:12:874 (2) - Too close to the slider (comparing to your other blankets).

[Collab Insanya~]

1. 00:16:888 (1,7) - Is the semi-spaced stream intentional between these two notes?
2. 01:02:100 (1) - I think this one should be equal ds with 01:01:677 (1,2)

[Exnya]

1. 00:32:734 (4,5) - Found this awkward to play. Again, your judgement.
2. 00:41:501 (2,3,4,1) - This can be aesthetically more pleasing.
3. 00:59:776 (4,1) - Same reason as the first point. [This is of course my opinion- I think it's because I'm expecting another jump (if you refer to it's previous notes (1), (2), (3)]

Enjoyable to play overall ^^

Hey Midge! M4M from your queue.
Well, that's it! I have to skip the last difficulty, because this degree isn't "my thing". But, here's a star for a little boost for qualified! Good Luck!

Vertify wrote:

From my ~Mod Que~

I guess you can call me Ms Distance Snap Anal Inspector lol. I like exact numbers =)

[Easnya]

1. It's more noticeable in Easy diff (circle size wise); distance between notes keeps changing throughout the map. 0.1 difference is fine I guess, but any more than that, you can see a difference. You go from 88 to 91, just pick one for consistency (especially in Easy's). It also just makes things look neater ^^
2. 00:16:888 (3,4,1) - Either move the tail end in a way where the cursor flows to the 4 naturally or move (4) and re-blanket it with (1). fine imo
3. 00:20:269 (3) - this note is noticeably further than all the other notes (90 to 94 atm) done?
4. 00:41:818 (4) - ^ Same reason (92 to 97) done

[Normanya]

1. 01:18:156 (4) - Spacing off by 0.9done

[Hard]
This was done well, good job! Though I feel like it's too linear for me (I personally like a few jumps). Just a suggestion: when the song reaches this "lyrical" bit 00:37:593 (2,3) - You can do a little jumps here. Or here - 00:41:818 (4,1) - fine imo, lol

1. 00:44:776 (3) - Is this a jump or should this be equal ds? If it's a jump it's looks off compared to your very first one here 00:06:959 (1) done
2. 00:53:438 (6,7) - It felt awkward to play here (your judgement) it does. but i don't really know what else to do here
3. 00:56:396 (3,1) - Too close. done
4. 01:12:874 (2) - Too close to the slider (comparing to your other blankets). done

[Collab Insanya~]

1. 00:16:888 (1,7) - Is the semi-spaced stream intentional between these two notes? yea :S
2. 01:02:100 (1) - I think this one should be equal ds with 01:01:677 (1,2) done

[Exnya]

1. 00:32:734 (4,5) - Found this awkward to play. Again, your judgement. fine imo
2. 00:41:501 (2,3,4,1) - This can be aesthetically more pleasing. fine
3. 00:59:776 (4,1) - Same reason as the first point. [This is of course my opinion- I think it's because I'm expecting another jump (if you refer to it's previous notes (1), (2), (3)] nah, plays fine imo :S

Enjoyable to play overall ^^

sheela901 wrote:

Hey Midge! M4M from your queue.

General

1. The word "cat" in the tags can be safely removed, since there's the same word in the title.

Easnya~

1. 00:06:748 (1) - Remove the new combo, so it could follow the consistency. eh, it's the beginning, i'll keep this for now
2. 00:08:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You should make the same rhythm as 00:15:198 (1,2,3,4) -, since they're similar, and I thought to would make a consistency to the rhythm. that would be changing too much, sorry :S
3. 00:51:959 - In my opinion, the slider (6)'s tail can't handle the strong beat, and sounded weird. What I would do is to remove the note (5), and move (6) to where (5) was. And if you move 00:52:382 (1,2,3) to the downbeat 00:52:381 -, it would sound more better, because I don't know what the slider was trying to follow. mmm fine imo
4. 00:57:452 (5) - I think the slider is too curved, because it doesn't follow the two notes earlier. I suggest to loosen the curve, so it could make a better flow. done
5. 01:14:353 (5) - The blanket is incompleted. Move the last node to x:330 y:186 to fix the blanket. done

Normanya~

1. I would say that 00:05:057 (1,2,3,4) has a pretty bad flowm since they going to the opposite. What you could is to rotate the slider to 90° clockwise, and move it where it could be. fixed differently, we'll see how that plays out
2. 00:10:973 (3) - I don't feel that the tail isn't fitting for a strong beat. I suggest to reduce the length of the slider by the half of it, then add a 1/1 slider on the downbeat. This would let (3) to end on the beat that will change a little part, and the new slider will restart the beat. fine imo
3. 00:49:001 (1) - Try flipping it vertically, and move it more to the top of the earlier note. It would result a better flow. done, we'll see how it plays out for now, subject to change though :S

Nukednya~'s Hard

1. 00:05:057 (1) - Try copying the shape of 00:05:903 (3) -, and rotate it by -45° with a vertical flip, then move it to x:182 y:170. It would follow better the path, in my opinion. tentative no, i kinda like it like this
2. 00:24:494 (4,5,6) - I find that this pattern and rhythm is for an upper grade than this. I mean, two kick-sliders consecutive and a 1/6 repeat slider might be too hard for this difficulty. This also goes for 00:31:255 (4,5,6) and 00:51:536 (2,3,4) . i've seen hards do a lot harder than these.
3. 00:49:846 (1,2,3,4) - Don't you think that this pattern is too hard, due to the distance? I also find it a little confusing. I would stay on the path, where the kick-sliders are more closer to each other. ^
4. 00:53:015 (2,3,4,5) - This is me, but in my opinion, the stream is "too" long. I would replace the notes for a repeat slider. changed to kick sliders

It feels that the difficulty spread isn't constant. The first part is easier, while the rest of the map is harder. It also feels really hard because of the kick-sliders.

Collab Insanya~

1. 00:20:058 (2) - I feel that when the slider has the head down and the tail up, it would make a cool flow. nah, it's fine
2. 00:58:297 (1) - Hmm... I don't think that this long slider follows anything in the music. The beats that the slider lands on aren't long notes, like 01:27:452 (1) -, so I think it's useless if it doesn't follow anything, and make another rhythm. stays consistent with exnya :S

Well, that's it! I have to skip the last difficulty, because this degree isn't "my thing". But, here's a star for a little boost for qualified! Good Luck!

Thanks for mods o/

Ello,
[General]
Throughout all the difficulties, I found it difficult to correct any errors involving the beginning and end of new combos since it seemed inconsistent as to whether or not new combos start every measure, two beats, or two measures.
[Exnya~]
00:31:255 (1) - This slider ends on the 32nd note before the next measure, which makes the end sound off beat when compared to the rest of the map. Consider ending it on the blue tick before 00:32:100. The other thing is that this slider folds in on itself in a way that you can't quite follow the pattern, which might be considered unrankable. Maybe change it to a more standard curve or something like this? http://puu.sh/cvTZ9/c821163b2a.jpg
00:58:297 (1) - ^
01:24:917 (1) - ^
[Collab Insanya~]
Just in general, I usually see names of people who map certain sections of maps of a collab on a storyboard. Perhaps consider incorporating something like this?
00:31:255 (1) - Try this: http://puu.sh/cvUoD/4329a27b8f.jpg
01:27:452 (1) - Try this: http://puu.sh/cvUCx/2483b139f8.jpg
[Nukednya~'s Hard]
01:10:128 (3) - Try this: http://puu.sh/cvURM/fb293a7b19.jpg
[Normanya~]
Fine.
[Easnya~]
Fine.

Can't wait to have this ranked, good luck!

Halfslashed wrote:

Ello,
[General]
Throughout all the difficulties, I found it difficult to correct any errors involving the beginning and end of new combos since it seemed inconsistent as to whether or not new combos start every measure, two beats, or two measures.
[Exnya~]
00:31:255 (1) - This slider ends on the 32nd note before the next measure, which makes the end sound off beat when compared to the rest of the map. Consider ending it on the blue tick before 00:32:100. The other thing is that this slider folds in on itself in a way that you can't quite follow the pattern, which might be considered unrankable. Maybe change it to a more standard curve or something like this? http://puu.sh/cvTZ9/c821163b2a.jpg
00:58:297 (1) - ^
01:24:917 (1) - ^all of these are fine, sliders like this have been ranked before
[Collab Insanya~]
Just in general, I usually see names of people who map certain sections of maps of a collab on a storyboard. Perhaps consider incorporating something like this? informations is given in the description of the map. it's not long enough to sb, really.
00:31:255 (1) - Try this: http://puu.sh/cvUoD/4329a27b8f.jpg fixed a bit
01:27:452 (1) - Try this: http://puu.sh/cvUCx/2483b139f8.jpg fine
[Nukednya~'s Hard]
01:10:128 (3) - Try this: http://puu.sh/cvURM/fb293a7b19.jpg fine, it blankets the tail of 2
[Normanya~]
Fine.
[Easnya~]
Fine.

Can't wait to have this ranked, good luck!

thanks for mod o/

Hey there!

[KKnya~ EZ]
01:32:945 (92945|0) - might want to shorten the LN by half or remove.
01:32:945 (92945|5) - add a note here, possibly on column 5
01:33:367 (93367|3) - add a note here, possibly on column 3

Alternatively, remove the slider and finish the song at 01:32:522 (92522|3)

[Pewrakonya~ NM]
Good!

[Nukednya~'s Hard]
00:53:438 (5,6,7) - move them closer to each other and (5) closer to (4).

[Collab Insanya~]

00:17:417 (4,5,6) - they gradually become more spaced apart. Intentional?

00:48:790 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - the two stacks have different spacing. Intentional?

Overall enjoyable to play! Keep up the great work

Hi, mod as promised, sorry for late~

[General]

1. Cool song + background

[Easnya~]

1. A general play through of this map was rather nice; however, some overlapping does hinder the quality of the map.
2. 00:10:128 (4,1) - Consider changing the pattern here to either A) Remove the overlap with the previous circle 4 or B) curve the slider 1 away from the circle 4.
3. 00:59:987 - Here two objects (circle 2 and slider 3) are shown. This may be confusing as the novice user may aim towards the closer (newly created) slider first. Consider re-patterning.
4. 01:10:973 (3,2) - As stacking would alter the distance snap here, I suggest that you re-pattern the circles altogether.

[Normanya~]

1. Overall the difficulty is great. I do not recommend triple 1/2 circles but they are considered rankable as per 2014 ranking criteria.
2. 00:32:311 (1) - You could totally blanket this slider's track with the previous slider 1.
   
   
   ~
3. 00:37:593 (5) - I personally feel that this slider needs some "spazazz" or other stylish pattern.
4. 00:54:494 (6,7) - The slider 7's end is too close to the slider 6's track. Consider violating the distance snap to a degree of ~+0.05.

[Nukednya~'s Hard]

1. 1/4-based Hards aren't something you see everyday. It's pretty nice.
2. Just personal preference, but you may want to diversify some of your sliders and add more interesting curves.
3. I personally stack similar objects ( e.g: 01:02:945 (1,2) - ) but this is totally up to you and not required. If you like this concept, be sure to change all other similar patterns for consistency.

Personally, I find the Insane to be mapped in the form of an Extra with lower Distance Snap. Some 1/4 and 1/8 patterns seem a bit too hard for Insane. Consider using more 1/2, 3/4, and even 1/1 sliders instead.

Good luck~

m4m! t/255150
[Easnya]
no issues

[Normanya]
[list]
00:46:043 (2,4) - minor blanketing issue

[Hard]
01:02:100 (3) - blanket is not perfect as it should be here (just change slider shape a little bit)




[Collab Insanya~]


00:34:846 (2) - y168 to y164


[Exnya]
01:00:410 (3,4) - feel like you could rotate it slightly upwards so that the top slider is in line with the bottom slider and that it flows to the next note.

well done

sorry for short mod. either this is mapped too well or i'm just bad

WillTai wrote:

Hey there!

[Nukednya~'s Hard]
00:53:438 (5,6,7) - move them closer to each other and (5) closer to (4). fixed

[Collab Insanya~]

00:17:417 (4,5,6) - they gradually become more spaced apart. Intentional? yea

00:48:790 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - the two stacks have different spacing. Intentional? yea

Overall enjoyable to play! Keep up the great work

not applying mania mods due to the piano

Project Railgun wrote:

Hi, mod as promised, sorry for late~

[General]

1. Cool song + background

[Easnya~]

1. A general play through of this map was rather nice; however, some overlapping does hinder the quality of the map.
2. 00:10:128 (4,1) - Consider changing the pattern here to either A) Remove the overlap with the previous circle 4 or B) curve the slider 1 away from the circle 4. ar leaves enough time so that 4 does not overlap 5 ingame
3. 00:59:987 - Here two objects (circle 2 and slider 3) are shown. This may be confusing as the novice user may aim towards the closer (newly created) slider first. Consider re-patterning. swapped 2 and 3
4. 01:10:973 (3,2) - As stacking would alter the distance snap here, I suggest that you re-pattern the circles altogether. fine imo. there's no visible overlap

[Normanya~]

1. Overall the difficulty is great. I do not recommend triple 1/2 circles but they are considered rankable as per 2014 ranking criteria.
2. 00:32:311 (1) - You could totally blanket this slider's track with the previous slider 1. looks fine to me .-.
   
   
   ~
3. 00:37:593 (5) - I personally feel that this slider needs some "spazazz" or other stylish pattern. fixed with somethign simple :S
4. 00:54:494 (6,7) - The slider 7's end is too close to the slider 6's track. Consider violating the distance snap to a degree of ~+0.05. fixed

[Nukednya~'s Hard]

1. 1/4-based Hards aren't something you see everyday. It's pretty nice.
2. Just personal preference, but you may want to diversify some of your sliders and add more interesting curves.
3. I personally stack similar objects ( e.g: 01:02:945 (1,2) - ) but this is totally up to you and not required. If you like this concept, be sure to change all other similar patterns for consistency. yea, fine imo :S

Personally, I find the Insane to be mapped in the form of an Extra with lower Distance Snap. Some 1/4 and 1/8 patterns seem a bit too hard for Insane. Consider using more 1/2, 3/4, and even 1/1 sliders instead. i agree, and it was kind of what I was going for. we'll see how it holds up

Good luck~

byfar wrote:

m4m! t/255150
[Easnya]
no issues

[Normanya]
[list]
00:46:043 (2,4) - minor blanketing issue fixed

[Hard]
01:02:100 (3) - blanket is not perfect as it should be here (just change slider shape a little bit) fine imo




[Collab Insanya~]


00:34:846 (2) - y168 to y164 wat


[Exnya]
01:00:410 (3,4) - feel like you could rotate it slightly upwards so that the top slider is in line with the bottom slider and that it flows to the next note. fine imo

well done

sorry for short mod. either this is mapped too well or i'm just bad

Thanks for mods o/

When does this map gets ranked?
I've been waiting for a month now.

Mystyk said he'd check it out, so that's mostly what I'm waiting for.

[Nukednya~'s Hard]
00:37:593 (2) - Ctrl + J, G, H and re-place

Hi! Your requested mod from some time ago, sorry for the wait. (Also, I'm a she.)

[Easnya~]

• 
  In general the difficulty looks nice, but my problem is that it's full of 1/1 and there are hardly any 2/1 breaks and this is an easy, and also too much 1/1 is boring so I think you could improve this a bit.

1. 00:30:832 (4) - remove this to put some break between the notes and because this one is kind of soft so it doesn't need to be hit with a hit circle in my opinion
2. 00:34:212 (3,4,5) - instead of 3 hit circles a slider would be better because of the reasons in general about this difficulty and because it would give a bigger emphasis to the big beat at 00:35:480 (1) - http://puu.sh/d1aQs/0f82f71233.jpg
3. 00:44:776 (4,5) - either remove these or make one long slider as suggested above ^ because these notes are very soft and there is too much 1/1, try to vary the rhythm a bit and make it easier, put some breaks between the notes
4. 00:50:691 (3,4,5) - I would use a long slider here as well
5. 00:58:297 (6,2) - please don't stack them, it's confusing - just an example, I think you can do it better with your own ideas - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2267883
6. 01:07:593 (3,4,5) - try to remove this? 01:08:015 (4) - to put some break between the notes or at least make a long slider instad of 3 hit circles, it doesn't feel that nice to click on 01:08:015 (4) - because it's on a soft beat
7. 01:20:269 (3) - same as above

[Normanya~]

1. 00:15:832 (2) - this note feels a bit forced, I would rather remove it
2. 00:23:649 (4) - i would rather add a new combo here because (7) is a bit long and there is a lot of 1/2
3. 00:31:255 (4) - you should move this down a little so that it is not too close to 00:29:565 (2) - it will be easier to read, this should be better - http://puu.sh/d2FoX/6c317a138d.jpg
4. 00:32:945 (2) - same as above ^ try to move this down a bit for easier readability
5. 00:54:494 (6,7) - this one is actualy confusing, it would be better if the sliderend was somewhere else, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272591
6. 00:56:607 (2,3,4,1,2) - same that I mentioned before, try making it easier to read - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272596 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272600
7. 01:23:015 (2) - remove this, this diff has a lot of 1/2s so it's safer to remove a few notes and 01:23:227 (3) - this is a bit louder anyway so by removing (2) it will be emphasized better
8. 01:28:719 (1) - a slider and a hit circle would be a better finish :3 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272610

[Nukednya~'s Hard]

1. 00:17:522 (4,5,6) - this is pretty crowded and (6)'s reverse arrow is a bit hidden, so I would try to rearrange the pattern a bit, just an example of course: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272874
2. 00:19:846 (5,1,2) - why not keep the same distance as always? they are unreasonably close - http://puu.sh/d2Mro/2aaf4d8c93.jpg
3. 00:21:959 (1,5) - maybe you can rotate 00:23:015 (5,1) - a little so that 00:21:959 (1,5) - don't overlap at all - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272889
4. 00:31:677 (6,1,2) - the distance is quite confusing because (6) and (1) is a jump but (1) and (2) is distance snapped correctly, so you should emphasize these changes, try this maybe? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272902
5. 00:43:931 (1,2,3) - why not fix these distant changes? it's not that much work but it will look nicer - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272910
6. 00:58:297 (3,5) - very small thing but this is so disturbing to the eyes, try to put them further a bit to make it nicer

[Collab Insanya~]

1. 00:05:586 - add hit circle? it would fit better to the music
2. 00:10:128 (1,2) - I don't see a reason to use a little bit higher spacing, why not use the same distance? - http://puu.sh/d4ibT/e8fa8072fa.jpg
3. 00:47:522 (2) - I would rather replace this, it was confusing because it's stacked with 00:47:100 (2) -
4. 00:48:050 (1) - instead of a reverse slider why not try 2 hit circle or a slider starting - 00:48:156 - ? it would fit a lot better to the song, it would be easier to read because it wouldn't start on a blue tick
5. 00:48:896 (2) - this feels quite unnecessary tbh I would remove it, there is nothing loud here and it will fit better to the vocals if you remove it
6. 01:12:241 (5) - hidden reverse arrow, please re-arrange the pattern so that the reverse arrow is visible
7. 01:20:269 (2,3) - try not to overlap, it's a little bit confusing and I think it would be nicer to avoid overlap
8. 01:27:452 (1) - please don't use such a shape, it's confusing and should be avoided
   

   Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end.

[Exnya~]

1. 00:29:142 (2,1) - just a personal opinion but I dislike this anti-jump, so you could consider using higher distance here
2. 00:31:255 (1) - I have several problems with this, first of all slidershape, just like I mentioned on Collab Insanya~, it's confusing, moreover it has slower slider velocity (because the previous section used 2,00x) so it might as well be more confusing, 3rd the slider ends on a 1/8 note which doesn't fit, the slider should end here - 00:31:994 -
3. 00:45:621 (1,3) - don't overlap, it's confusing
4. 00:58:297 (1) - I think this SV change doesn't fit here,it would be better if this was normally mapped because there are no weird sounds at this point and also don't end the slider on an 1/8 note because there is nothing loud to be emphasized
5. 01:04:001 (1) - again 1/8 doesn't fit here, please remove the next hit circle and lengthen the slider
6. 01:12:241 (6) - this reverse arrow is too hidden, please try to re-arrange the pate
7. 01:24:917 (1) - 1/8 again, try to avoid it please

Ughh I hope I didn't forget anything, but it's almost 2 am so sorry if I missed something.

Enon wrote:

[Nukednya~'s Hard]
00:37:593 (2) - Ctrl + J, G, H and re-place no, sorry

Mystyk wrote:

Hi! Your requested mod from some time ago, sorry for the wait. (Also, I'm a she.)

[Easnya~]

• 
  In general the difficulty looks nice, but my problem is that it's full of 1/1 and there are hardly any 2/1 breaks and this is an easy, and also too much 1/1 is boring so I think you could improve this a bit. my take on this is that this map is very, very, very repetitive. mapping this, there was no consistent way to add breaks without it feeling out of place.

1. 00:30:832 (4) - remove this to put some break between the notes and because this one is kind of soft so it doesn't need to be hit with a hit circle in my opinion emphasizing the sdvx sound thing
2. 00:34:212 (3,4,5) - instead of 3 hit circles a slider would be better because of the reasons in general about this difficulty and because it would give a bigger emphasis to the big beat at 00:35:480 (1) - http://puu.sh/d1aQs/0f82f71233.jpg done
3. 00:44:776 (4,5) - either remove these or make one long slider as suggested above ^ because these notes are very soft and there is too much 1/1, try to vary the rhythm a bit and make it easier, put some breaks between the notes done
4. 00:50:691 (3,4,5) - I would use a long slider here as well done
5. 00:58:297 (6,2) - please don't stack them, it's confusing - just an example, I think you can do it better with your own ideas - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2267883 fixed with a repeater, stack shows up later though (i like it :S)
6. 01:07:593 (3,4,5) - try to remove this? 01:08:015 (4) - to put some break between the notes or at least make a long slider instad of 3 hit circles, it doesn't feel that nice to click on 01:08:015 (4) - because it's on a soft beat fixed
7. 01:20:269 (3) - same as abovefixed with a slider

[Normanya~]

1. 00:15:832 (2) - this note feels a bit forced, I would rather remove it done
2. 00:23:649 (4) - i would rather add a new combo here because (7) is a bit long and there is a lot of 1/2 done for now, i don't like breaking the nc-every-other-measure thing i had going, though
3. 00:31:255 (4) - you should move this down a little so that it is not too close to 00:29:565 (2) - it will be easier to read, this should be better - http://puu.sh/d2FoX/6c317a138d.jpg done
4. 00:32:945 (2) - same as above ^ try to move this down a bit for easier readability done
5. 00:54:494 (6,7) - this one is actualy confusing, it would be better if the sliderend was somewhere else, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272591 fixed
6. 00:56:607 (2,3,4,1,2) - same that I mentioned before, try making it easier to read - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272596 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272600 done
7. 01:23:015 (2) - remove this, this diff has a lot of 1/2s so it's safer to remove a few notes and 01:23:227 (3) - this is a bit louder anyway so by removing (2) it will be emphasized better done
8. 01:28:719 (1) - a slider and a hit circle would be a better finish :3 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272610 done

[Nukednya~'s Hard]

1. 00:17:522 (4,5,6) - this is pretty crowded and (6)'s reverse arrow is a bit hidden, so I would try to rearrange the pattern a bit, just an example of course: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272874 fixed differently :S
2. 00:19:846 (5,1,2) - why not keep the same distance as always? they are unreasonably close - http://puu.sh/d2Mro/2aaf4d8c93.jpg fixed in above
3. 00:21:959 (1,5) - maybe you can rotate 00:23:015 (5,1) - a little so that 00:21:959 (1,5) - don't overlap at all - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272889 fixed
4. 00:31:677 (6,1,2) - the distance is quite confusing because (6) and (1) is a jump but (1) and (2) is distance snapped correctly, so you should emphasize these changes, try this maybe? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272902 switch to 1 reverse instead of 2
5. 00:43:931 (1,2,3) - why not fix these distant changes? it's not that much work but it will look nicer - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2272910 looks fine to me? i tried :S
6. 00:58:297 (3,5) - very small thing but this is so disturbing to the eyes, try to put them further a bit to make it nicer fixed i think

[Collab Insanya~]

1. 00:05:586 - add hit circle? it would fit better to the music fine imo
2. 00:10:128 (1,2) - I don't see a reason to use a little bit higher spacing, why not use the same distance? - http://puu.sh/d4ibT/e8fa8072fa.jpg done
3. 00:47:522 (2) - I would rather replace this, it was confusing because it's stacked with 00:47:100 (2) - fixed differently
4. 00:48:050 (1) - instead of a reverse slider why not try 2 hit circle or a slider starting - 00:48:156 - ? it would fit a lot better to the song, it would be easier to read because it wouldn't start on a blue tick ^
5. 00:48:896 (2) - this feels quite unnecessary tbh I would remove it, there is nothing loud here and it will fit better to the vocals if you remove it i like it, keeping for now
6. 01:12:241 (5) - hidden reverse arrow, please re-arrange the pattern so that the reverse arrow is visible i don't see it ;n; fixed though?
7. 01:20:269 (2,3) - try not to overlap, it's a little bit confusing and I think it would be nicer to avoid overlap fixed
8. 01:27:452 (1) - please don't use such a shape, it's confusing and should be avoided tried to make it a bit more readable
   

   Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end.

[Exnya~]

1. 00:29:142 (2,1) - just a personal opinion but I dislike this anti-jump, so you could consider using higher distance here i'd like to think of is a feature, so i'd like to keep it :S
2. 00:31:255 (1) - I have several problems with this, first of all slidershape, just like I mentioned on Collab Insanya~, it's confusing, moreover it has slower slider velocity (because the previous section used 2,00x) so it might as well be more confusing, 3rd the slider ends on a 1/8 note which doesn't fit, the slider should end here - 00:31:994 - i made it more readable, but i'd like to defend this shape and it's sv. even if the player thinks it's faster and moves their cursor immediately to the end of the slider, their cursor would still be inside of the follow circle. furthermore, there aren't any visible circles after it for a long time, so the player couldn't break combo
3. 00:45:621 (1,3) - don't overlap, it's confusing fixed
4. 00:58:297 (1) - I think this SV change doesn't fit here,it would be better if this was normally mapped because there are no weird sounds at this point and also don't end the slider on an 1/8 note because there is nothing loud to be emphasized yea, fixed
5. 01:04:001 (1) - again 1/8 doesn't fit here, please remove the next hit circle and lengthen the slider the point of this section is to have one circle/slider on one end, and another circle/slider on the other, and flowing circularly. i like it, so im keeping for now
6. 01:12:241 (6) - this reverse arrow is too hidden, please try to re-arrange the pate increased ds
7. 01:24:917 (1) - 1/8 again, try to avoid it pleasefixed

Ughh I hope I didn't forget anything, but it's almost 2 am so sorry if I missed something.

Thanks for mod~

Hi! Can you put 4k maps there, Ty!

One day this map will get ranked...
I also second the 4k Kappa

[Easnya~]

1. 00:34:212 (3) - that look kind of weird and it might give some difficulty to read so try to make it better a bit - http://puu.sh/davDP/ba18262618.jpg - I think this still gives the feeling that you want to achieve while being easier to read
2. 00:50:691 (3) - this shape might be too hard to read again, it's squeezed in the corner of the beatmap and it's confusing >.< maybe you can just try a different pattern, an example - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2293253 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2293255 - of course you don't have to follow this, it's up to you how to change it

[Normanya~]

1. 00:31:255 (4,1,2) - although you said you changed it but it looks the same? xD try to have at least this much space - http://puu.sh/dawMs/ecd5fefd32.jpg - 00:33:367 (3) - if you replace this to x:160 y:220 the distance will be fine and patterns won't break either (00:32:945 (2) - is on x:172 y:328)
2. 01:24:917 (4) - this slider should be changed, it's hard to read :C - example: http://puu.sh/daxx5/b5c8e852f6.jpg
3. 01:29:565 (2) - add finish, since you also added a finish on Easy and it would fit anywayto the song as well

[Nukednya's Hard]

1. 00:18:156 (4) - add clap, it sounds like you missed to add it
2. 00:41:396 (3,4) - these are quite ugly and might as well be confusing to read (because the sliderend and sliderbeginning are too close) so I would rather change them a bit (at least this much http://puu.sh/dc1zC/13562ca24d.jpg)
3. 00:46:888 (5) - same as above about the slidershape
4. 01:10:128 (3) - the sliderbody is confusing because it looks shorter than it actually is, so with a slight change it would be better - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2297377

[Collab Insanya~]

1. 01:12:452 (1) - try to put this more to the left please it's hard to see the beginning of the slider, try not to place it under a stream - http://puu.sh/dcIDG/e209815abf.jpg
2. 01:27:452 (1) - this still looks too confusing
   also

3. 00:58:297 (1) - I think this SV change doesn't fit here,it would be better if this was normally mapped because there are no weird sounds at this point and also don't end the slider on an 1/8 note because there is nothing loud to be emphasized

   you said you fixed this, but the SV change is still there, and tbh there are other places where there is unreasonable slider velocity change, just look at this:
   http://puu.sh/dcNHE/bd0b247d97.png
4. 00:41:396 (1,2) - these notes don't really have a difference in sound but you used a different slider velocity
5. 00:46:466 (1,2,1) - this one is just as troubling
6. 00:46:466 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,1,1) - also this, also has slider velocity change and the flow is also bad (imo) moreover the notes are placed with almost the same distance even though on the timeline they are VERY different and that's not right
7. 00:51:536 (5,1,1) - http://puu.sh/dcNXW/d00f22f2e9.png - the sound at these notes is way too similar to use different slider velocity
8. 00:57:345 (4,1) - unreasonable spacing, why is (1) so far from (4) on the timeline they have equal distance
9. 01:04:424 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - same problem about the slider velocity change
10. 01:11:184 (1,2,3) - unreasonable SV change again
11. 00:24:072 (3,4,1,2,3) - also unreasonable SV changes
12. 00:27:241 (1,2,3) - same here, too many SV changes

[Exnya~]

1. 00:07:170 (2) - this should be a hit circle not a slider, the song only "asks" for a hit circle
2. 00:10:128 (1,2) - why use higher distance? it doesn't make sense
3. 00:10:973 (1,2,3,4) - these jumps are too big, I understand if you want to put jumps but I think reducing them would be better since the music is similar at these parts
4. 00:12:241 (3,4) - why is the spacing different here than 00:12:452 (4,1) - ? it should be the same
5. 00:21:114 (1) - this should end on a blue tick
6. 00:27:029 (1) - 2,00 for SV might be too big and the shape is ugly, we can't tell how long the slider is, and that's very important when you use a slider velocity change, here 00:28:508 (1) - you did it fine because we can at least tell how long the slider is
7. 00:31:255 (1) - this slidershape is unacceptable in my opinion
8. 00:44:565 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think these doesn't ask for a jump
9. 00:45:832 (2,3) - here again unreasonable jump, the music is too soft to have a jump!
10. 00:46:043 (3,4) - and then here again different spacing, you could just use the same that you did here 00:46:255 (4,5) -
11. 00:46:888 (3,1) - this jump looks unfitting because the music is too soft and "nya" ends on 00:46:994 - so just what are you trying to emphasize with that jump?
12. 00:54:917 (5,6,7,1) - those are some very big jumps, and I don't mind you putting jumps in the extra, but make them reasonable, the music is soft here so smaller jumps would be better
13. 00:55:550 (1,2) - this one is also kind of big since you used a slider velocity change too it is surprising imo
14. 01:01:677 (1) - this should end on the blue tick 01:01:994 - it's unreasonable to end this slider on an 1/8 note
15. 00:58:297 (1,2,3,4) - unreasonable SV change
16. 01:04:001 (1,2) - I'm sorry but I can't approve of this either and the slider velocity change is also too high in my opinion, it's really surprising
17. 01:14:565 (1,2) - unreasonable spacing
18. 01:19:212 (1,2,1,2) - also these kind of 1/4 jumps throughout the whole difficulty, they're too big
19. 01:25:339 (1,1,1,1) - too many slider velocity changes
20. 01:27:452 (2) - this slidershape doesn't look nice either moreover people can't even tell that it's going to be a slowdown

I'm really sorry but in it's current state I don't want to bubble your map, but I also don't want to force changes on you, maybe you can find someone else.

Ok, sorry for late reply, I was busy being salty. This map hurts :c

Mystyk wrote:

[Easnya~]

1. 00:34:212 (3) - that look kind of weird and it might give some difficulty to read so try to make it better a bit - http://puu.sh/davDP/ba18262618.jpg - I think this still gives the feeling that you want to achieve while being easier to read done
2. 00:50:691 (3) - this shape might be too hard to read again, it's squeezed in the corner of the beatmap and it's confusing >.< maybe you can just try a different pattern, an example - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2293253 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2293255 - of course you don't have to follow this, it's up to you how to change it fixed differently, we'll see how it holds up

[Normanya~]

1. 00:31:255 (4,1,2) - although you said you changed it but it looks the same? xD try to have at least this much space - http://puu.sh/dawMs/ecd5fefd32.jpg - 00:33:367 (3) - if you replace this to x:160 y:220 the distance will be fine and patterns won't break either (00:32:945 (2) - is on x:172 y:328) whoops mb
2. 01:24:917 (4) - this slider should be changed, it's hard to read :C - example: http://puu.sh/daxx5/b5c8e852f6.jpg done
3. 01:29:565 (2) - add finish, since you also added a finish on Easy and it would fit anywayto the song as well yea, i have to reapply the hs to all the maps

[Nukednya's Hard]

1. 00:18:156 (4) - add clap, it sounds like you missed to add it
2. 00:41:396 (3,4) - these are quite ugly and might as well be confusing to read (because the sliderend and sliderbeginning are too close) so I would rather change them a bit (at least this much http://puu.sh/dc1zC/13562ca24d.jpg) fixed
3. 00:46:888 (5) - same as above about the slidershape fixed
4. 01:10:128 (3) - the sliderbody is confusing because it looks shorter than it actually is, so with a slight change it would be better - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2297377 fixed, but i wanted to keep the curved streams

[Collab Insanya~]

1. 01:12:452 (1) - try to put this more to the left please it's hard to see the beginning of the slider, try not to place it under a stream - http://puu.sh/dcIDG/e209815abf.jpg done
2. 01:27:452 (1) - this still looks too confusing i strongly disagree, sorry :c
   also

3. 00:58:297 (1) - I think this SV change doesn't fit here,it would be better if this was normally mapped because there are no weird sounds at this point and also don't end the slider on an 1/8 note because there is nothing loud to be emphasized

   you said you fixed this, but the SV change is still there, and tbh there are other places where there is unreasonable slider velocity change, just look at this:
   http://puu.sh/dcNHE/bd0b247d97.png changed sv to 1x
4. 00:41:396 (1,2) - these notes don't really have a difference in sound but you used a different slider velocity i disagree, they're meant to emphasize the rise in sound after that low slider
5. 00:46:466 (1,2,1) - this one is just as troubling rises and falls, sorry i want to keep this
6. 00:46:466 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,1,1) - also this, also has slider velocity change and the flow is also bad (imo) moreover the notes are placed with almost the same distance even though on the timeline they are VERY different and that's not right fine imo. flow is intentionally placed so the sliders point in the same direction. however, i might change the triplet and sv if it becomes more of an issue
7. 00:51:536 (5,1,1) - http://puu.sh/dcNXW/d00f22f2e9.png - the sound at these notes is way too similar to use different slider velocity yea fixed
8. 00:57:345 (4,1) - unreasonable spacing, why is (1) so far from (4) on the timeline they have equal distance made a little close so that they're touching, but i wanted sv to change ever 4 (looks cool)
9. 01:04:424 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - same problem about the slider velocity change fine imo
10. 01:11:184 (1,2,3) - unreasonable SV change again mmm keeping for now
11. 00:24:072 (3,4,1,2,3) - also unreasonable SV changes fixed
12. 00:27:241 (1,2,3) - same here, too many SV changes keeping for now

About the sv changes, I want to keep them. I believe they add an extra dimension to the song so that it feels like it's rising and falling, like it does in the sdvx chart. I've changed the ones that I feel are unjustified, but I think that the one's I've left in enhance the song.

[Exnya~]

1. 00:07:170 (2) - this should be a hit circle not a slider, the song only "asks" for a hit circle fine imo
2. 00:10:128 (1,2) - why use higher distance? it doesn't make sense i've had multiple complaints about when i had the tail of 1 touch 2, so i figured leaving a space would signify that 1 is a kick slider
3. 00:10:973 (1,2,3,4) - these jumps are too big, I understand if you want to put jumps but I think reducing them would be better since the music is similar at these parts reduced
4. 00:12:241 (3,4) - why is the spacing different here than 00:12:452 (4,1) - ? it should be the same fixed, made them not touch
5. 00:21:114 (1) - this should end on a blue tick fixed
6. 00:27:029 (1) - 2,00 for SV might be too big and the shape is ugly, we can't tell how long the slider is, and that's very important when you use a slider velocity change, here 00:28:508 (1) - you did it fine because we can at least tell how long the slider is fixed?
7. 00:31:255 (1) - this slidershape is unacceptable in my opinion well i've made my case, so idk what else to say. i reeeaaally want to keep this.
8. 00:44:565 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think these doesn't ask for a jump reduced ds
9. 00:45:832 (2,3) - here again unreasonable jump, the music is too soft to have a jump! ^
10. 00:46:043 (3,4) - and then here again different spacing, you could just use the same that you did here 00:46:255 (4,5) - fixed in above?
11. 00:46:888 (3,1) - this jump looks unfitting because the music is too soft and "nya" ends on 00:46:994 - so just what are you trying to emphasize with that jump? fixed
12. 00:54:917 (5,6,7,1) - those are some very big jumps, and I don't mind you putting jumps in the extra, but make them reasonable, the music is soft here so smaller jumps would be better reduced slightly
13. 00:55:550 (1,2) - this one is also kind of big since you used a slider velocity change too it is surprising imo fine imo
14. 01:01:677 (1) - this should end on the blue tick 01:01:994 - it's unreasonable to end this slider on an 1/8 note fixed
15. 00:58:297 (1,2,3,4) - unreasonable SV change fixed
16. 01:04:001 (1,2) - I'm sorry but I can't approve of this either and the slider velocity change is also too high in my opinion, it's really surprising ok, changed to kick slider, but kept 2x sv.
17. 01:14:565 (1,2) - unreasonable spacing unreasonable? it's a kick slider into a triplet, it's fine imo
18. 01:19:212 (1,2,1,2) - also these kind of 1/4 jumps throughout the whole difficulty, they're too big it's a feature imo
19. 01:25:339 (1,1,1,1) - too many slider velocity changes fine imo ;n;
20. 01:27:452 (2) - this slidershape doesn't look nice either moreover people can't even tell that it's going to be a slowdown nc'd and slanted (i find that makes it look slightly better :S)

I'm really sorry but in it's current state I don't want to bubble your map, but I also don't want to force changes on you, maybe you can find someone else.

Ok, thanks for the mod and consideration, you've been really helpful.

Oh the humanity...

Hey midge, you should try for rank on this map :^)

You're right. I should stop casually getting mods and start trying hardcore :^I

m4m, sorry if I can't help >_<

[Easnya~]
00:35:480 (1) - I suggest this rhythm: http://puu.sh/dFN5K/a6bfedd0fc.jpg
01:01:255 (3) - let it move in a straight line?: http://puu.sh/dFNFP/15d68adc42.jpg
01:07:593 (3) - I feel like this slider bends too hard for an easy.
01:15:621 (6,1,2) - let the notes flow out of the slider like this?: http://puu.sh/dFNXT/fd79dded3b.jpg

[Normanya~]
00:31:255 (4) - I feel like that slider end would look nicer like this but maybe that's just me: http://puu.sh/dFOpn/29a59acfea.jpg
Nice diff.

[Nukednya~'s Hard]
00:29:776 (5,6) - I feel like this sort of pattern is difficult to predict because most of the sliders before had 4 repeats
00:55:339 (3) - Ctrl-G
01:28:297 (2) - Ctrl-G

[Collab Insanya~]
00:09:177 (1,2,3) - put the notes before the slider? triples are more intuitive to play
I like this diff

[Exnya~]
01:02:945 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4) - this part feels kinda cluttered and weird to play
Interesting diff.

cool set, sorry I wasn't able to find much o_o

the eternal struggle.

deetz wrote:

m4m, sorry if I can't help >_<

[Easnya~]
00:35:480 (1) - I suggest this rhythm: http://puu.sh/dFN5K/a6bfedd0fc.jpg can't make 3 into a repeater w/out breaking ds, and 2 emphasizes the drop in sound
01:01:255 (3) - let it move in a straight line?: http://puu.sh/dFNFP/15d68adc42.jpg done
01:07:593 (3) - I feel like this slider bends too hard for an easy. fine imo
01:15:621 (6,1,2) - let the notes flow out of the slider like this?: http://puu.sh/dFNXT/fd79dded3b.jpg that puush is broken :c

[Normanya~]
00:31:255 (4) - I feel like that slider end would look nicer like this but maybe that's just me: http://puu.sh/dFOpn/29a59acfea.jpg i can't see it ;n;
Nice diff.

[Nukednya~'s Hard]
00:29:776 (5,6) - I feel like this sort of pattern is difficult to predict because most of the sliders before had 4 repeats fixed
00:55:339 (3) - Ctrl-G done
01:28:297 (2) - Ctrl-G ctrl+g'd 1 instead

[Collab Insanya~]
00:09:177 (1,2,3) - put the notes before the slider? triples are more intuitive to play keeping for now
I like this diff

[Exnya~]
01:02:945 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4) - this part feels kinda cluttered and weird to play i like it :c
Interesting diff.

cool set, sorry I wasn't able to find much o_o

Thanks for mod o/

I had (and not in the "m2m" way, but in the "I know myself I owe this" way) to mod this after the absolutely astounding IRC mod you gave me on my map. I just had to do something for you, you gave me so much insight into mapping in general that I need to somehow pay this off, even if it's something small. Going to probaly mod a lot of your maps in the near future.

Sorry that I haven't found that much, but the maps are really good. At least in my eyes. But these are not so good. :s


Easnya~

Didn't find anything. o: Seems pretty close-to-perfect for me.


Normalnya~

00:24:283 - Feels like there's a quiet beat missing here, maybe add a note

00:52:593 (1,2,3,4) - 1,2 is mapped, the beat continues as 00:53:015 - might throw off a lot of people.

01:23:227 (2) - This feels half a beat too early. Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/dIFmN/bf7e9dc00a.jpg

01:27:029 (2) - Feels offbeat, maybe this? http://puu.sh/dIFpT/4ef4e2e484.jpg (Just a fast, sloppy attempt of visualizing)


Nukedyna~'s Hard

00:49:001 (1,2,1,2) - The overlap feels extremely unnatural, at least for me.

00:59:987 (4) - If you want to make that part harder, extend that slider one more time...It feels a bit more "snapped" to the music, but the distance snap goes up really high, which means 01:00:621 (5) - has to be reversed...which again ups the distance snap on the next note...so maybe not...but maybe you're evil.

01:05:480 (7,1) - I'd say extend 7 one more time, then move it a bit to the right (still keeping the pattern with 1) - feels more natural to the music IMO


Collab Insanya~

00:10:973 (1) - Skipping an audible sound (blue tick), not sure how to fix without a remap of that part - Possibly a 1/4 slider, and angle the following stream more to the right?


Exnya~

01:04:001 (1,2) - The slider ending on the blue tick feels..weird? Not sure how to say it, the prominent backing sound doesn't disappear...

zkf wrote:

I had (and not in the "m2m" way, but in the "I know myself I owe this" way) to mod this after the absolutely astounding IRC mod you gave me on my map. I just had to do something for you, you gave me so much insight into mapping in general that I need to somehow pay this off, even if it's something small. Going to probaly mod a lot of your maps in the near future.

Sorry that I haven't found that much, but the maps are really good. At least in my eyes. But these are not so good. :s


Easnya~

Didn't find anything. o: Seems pretty close-to-perfect for me.


Normalnya~

00:24:283 - Feels like there's a quiet beat missing here, maybe add a note fine imo

00:52:593 (1,2,3,4) - 1,2 is mapped, the beat continues as 00:53:015 - might throw off a lot of people. 2 triplets

01:23:227 (2) - This feels half a beat too early. Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/dIFmN/bf7e9dc00a.jpg mmm fine imo

01:27:029 (2) - Feels offbeat, maybe this? http://puu.sh/dIFpT/4ef4e2e484.jpg (Just a fast, sloppy attempt of visualizing) nah, don't wanna start 2 on a red tick


Nukedyna~'s Hard

00:49:001 (1,2,1,2) - The overlap feels extremely unnatural, at least for me. looks cool though :c

00:59:987 (4) - If you want to make that part harder, extend that slider one more time...It feels a bit more "snapped" to the music, but the distance snap goes up really high, which means 01:00:621 (5) - has to be reversed...which again ups the distance snap on the next note...so maybe not...but maybe you're evil. mm fixed differently

01:05:480 (7,1) - I'd say extend 7 one more time, then move it a bit to the right (still keeping the pattern with 1) - feels more natural to the music IMO done


Collab Insanya~

00:10:973 (1) - Skipping an audible sound (blue tick), not sure how to fix without a remap of that part - Possibly a 1/4 slider, and angle the following stream more to the right? fine imo


Exnya~

01:04:001 (1,2) - The slider ending on the blue tick feels..weird? Not sure how to say it, the prominent backing sound doesn't disappear... i'd compromised this part a lot, so i'd like to keep it as is

Thanks for mod o/

Extrazer is an unrankable diffname but this stuff is ok?

Timorisu wrote:

Extrazer is an unrankable diffname but this shit is ok?

I couldn't even get my Neormal ranked lol :c

I actually asked some people, and I got mixed replies. The diff names don't matter as much to me, so if it becomes an issue during the ranking, I can easily just change it.

No 4K? Open for GD? :'( :'(

No sorry. I've already got a piano, and I don't wanna pop the bubble.

hi, as request

[Easnya~]

Hitsound:

1. 00:15:198 (1) - in end, if you listen this rhythm, should add finish because the 00:16:888 (3) in have have finish but rhythm is same, I dunno why you didn't add finish in end 00:15:198 (1) if you add this, don't forget other diff's to be consistency

Gameplay

1. 00:06:748 (1) - this should remove new color, you should know this is "easy", the part in 00:05:057 (1,2) is short and is hard to newbies players, remove new color in 00:06:748 (1)
2. 00:23:649 (3) - I do like if this should grid more down, because this slider is like touching HP drain (is not touching HP drain, but is out area so much)
3. 00:50:691 (1) - remove new color, same before in 00:06:748 (1)

[Normanya~]

Hitsound

1. 00:15:198 (1) - in end should add clap, the rhythm still continue and still there... if you do this don't forget other diff's
2. 00:17:311 (3) - ^

Gameplay:

1. 00:06:748 (1) - same on Easnya
2. 00:10:128 (1) - Missing remove new color, to be consistency by you style also this is "normal"
3. 00:23:649 (1) - remove new color
4. 00:22:804 (2,3,1,2,3) - you sure you wanna keep this pattern ? look is bit hard on play for this diff, make more pattern easier ?
5. 01:03:367 (3) - move grid 4 left, just need clean little overlap with 01:00:832 (4) in body
6. 01:28:719 (1,2) - remove new color in (1) and put new color (2) like you did in Easnya~

[Nukednya~'s Hard]

Song Setup:

1. the AR, is better 7 than 7.5 imo

Gameplay:

1. 00:17:522 (1) - remove new color, I dunno why you put this new color...
2. 00:33:790 (6) - Missing put new color
3. 00:41:396 (3,4) - should change shape like this http://puu.sh/eprF3/7179dda2d8.jpg , just the begin and end, border near is ugly for me, just suggestion
4. 00:46:888 (5) - ^ same
5. 00:49:424 (1) - remove new color ? I understand this pattern but remove new color is better just saying (just suggestion)
6. 00:56:607 (1) - ^ same
7. 01:05:903 (1,2,3) - I wanna, that (1) the shape should move grid right to clean with 01:06:748 (3) in end, like this http://puu.sh/eprYR/6e7f0556d4.jpg, you did pattern before like 00:05:903 (3,1,2), 00:11:818 (1,2,3) and many more
8. 01:15:832 (6,1) - just saying this blanket is off
9. 01:22:593 (1,2) - rnc in (1) and nc (2)
10. 01:29:565 (5) - nc like other diff's

[Collab Insanya~]

Song Setup

1. AR you don't wanna change 9 to 8.5 ? really better than 9 with this diff IMO

Gameplay:

1. 00:14:353 (5) - this should nc, change SV...
2. 00:17:205 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why don't make same DS 0.60? I dunno you increassing there part DS
3. 00:38:438 (3,4,1) - 5.00x jump ? no, decreassing ds

This diff I don't feel this level as "insane" I did play I feel is extra, a lot rhythm is very smiliar in Exnyan~, example in 01:01:677 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - this pattern is harder than Extra, not only this pattern, there more pattern harder than extra, lot jump 4.00x and some 5.00x than exnyan~, this need more easier level as "insane.

My big problem, you need descreassing DS <4.00x, if you see some patterns is >4.00x is not accepted for this diff I feel is extra

[Exnyan~]

Gameplay:

1. 00:10:128 (1,2) - why not don't ds 0.60x ? why jump ? I don't feel rhythm is really necessary jump...
2. 00:13:719 (1) - why you didn't remove color this ? I mean this 00:13:508 (1,1) - is jump and you put nc but in 00:10:128 (1,2) - is not nc, why ? the rhythm is same... NC is not sense
3. 00:14:142 (5) - SV change big must bg NC
4. 00:14:565 (1,1,1) - I don't see this really necessary nc... example this part nc and in part 00:17:100 (4,5,6) is not nc...
5. 00:27:029 (1) - this really readable ?
6. 00:32:945 (5) - sv change, must need nc
7. 00:40:339 (7,1) - jump 10.00x ? I accpeted if <6.00x
8. 00:51:536 (5) - not nc ?

I'm sorry this really need more work, somes combo color make no sense and show inconsistency with you style
[]
Insane and extra really need more work, other diff's is ok
I'm sorry, Need more work insane and extra
Any question if you don't understand my english ask me in game so I can explain better
Good luck

Ok thanks. Currently out, so I'll respond in a week or so.

Pls rank

wow! the real adam jones! i didn't ask you to abuse your popularity as the #1 us player (which in and of itself isn't much at all really) and post on my thread to rank this map in skype just now! whaaaaaaaaaat

[General]
00:24:072 and 01:02:945 : Increase the sample volume to 70% or 80% (recommended , but it's your choice.). I cant hear anything beat sounds in 60%.

ok, i'm gonna keep going

Pereira006 wrote:

hi, as request

[Easnya~]

Hitsound:

1. 00:15:198 (1) - in end, if you listen this rhythm, should add finish because the 00:16:888 (3) in have have finish but rhythm is same, I dunno why you didn't add finish in end 00:15:198 (1) if you add this, don't forget other diff's to be consistency fixed

Gameplay

1. 00:06:748 (1) - this should remove new color, you should know this is "easy", the part in 00:05:057 (1,2) is short and is hard to newbies players, remove new color in 00:06:748 (1) fixed
2. 00:23:649 (3) - I do like if this should grid more down, because this slider is like touching HP drain (is not touching HP drain, but is out area so much) fixed
3. 00:50:691 (1) - remove new color, same before in 00:06:748 (1) fixed

[Normanya~]

Hitsound

1. 00:15:198 (1) - in end should add clap, the rhythm still continue and still there... if you do this don't forget other diff's
2. 00:17:311 (3) - ^ both fixed

Gameplay:

1. 00:06:748 (1) - same on Easnya fixed
2. 00:10:128 (1) - Missing remove new color, to be consistency by you style also this is "normal" fixed
3. 00:23:649 (1) - remove new color fixed
4. 00:22:804 (2,3,1,2,3) - you sure you wanna keep this pattern ? look is bit hard on play for this diff, make more pattern easier ? fixed
5. 01:03:367 (3) - move grid 4 left, just need clean little overlap with 01:00:832 (4) in body fixed
6. 01:28:719 (1,2) - remove new color in (1) and put new color (2) like you did in Easnya~

[Nukednya~'s Hard]

Song Setup:

1. the AR, is better 7 than 7.5 imo keeping as is, since 7 was said to be too little and 8 too much

Gameplay:

1. 00:17:522 (1) - remove new color, I dunno why you put this new color... fixed
2. 00:33:790 (6) - Missing put new color fixed
3. 00:41:396 (3,4) - should change shape like this http://puu.sh/eprF3/7179dda2d8.jpg , just the begin and end, border near is ugly for me, just suggestion i disagree
4. 00:46:888 (5) - ^ same changed
5. 00:49:424 (1) - remove new color ? I understand this pattern but remove new color is better just saying (just suggestion) i'll keep for now
6. 00:56:607 (1) - ^ same fixed
7. 01:05:903 (1,2,3) - I wanna, that (1) the shape should move grid right to clean with 01:06:748 (3) in end, like this http://puu.sh/eprYR/6e7f0556d4.jpg, you did pattern before like 00:05:903 (3,1,2), 00:11:818 (1,2,3) and many more fixed
8. 01:15:832 (6,1) - just saying this blanket is off fixed
9. 01:22:593 (1,2) - rnc in (1) and nc (2) fixed
10. 01:29:565 (5) - nc like other diff's

[Collab Insanya~]

Song Setup

1. AR you don't wanna change 9 to 8.5 ? really better than 9 with this diff IMO i'll try 8.8 with this

Gameplay:

1. 00:14:353 (5) - this should nc, change SV... fixed
2. 00:17:205 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why don't make same DS 0.60? I dunno you increassing there part DS it's cool looking; emphasizes rise in pitch on the nyans
3. 00:38:438 (3,4,1) - 5.00x jump ? no, decreassing ds fixed? iunno

This diff I don't feel this level as "insane" I did play I feel is extra, a lot rhythm is very smiliar in Exnyan~, example in 01:01:677 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - this pattern is harder than Extra, not only this pattern, there more pattern harder than extra, lot jump 4.00x and some 5.00x than exnyan~, this need more easier level as "insane.

My big problem, you need descreassing DS <4.00x, if you see some patterns is >4.00x is not accepted for this diff I feel is extra

i disagree. i quite like it like this, as it's a mini-extra. i want players to feel like they're playing a cool map but keep the ds lower so it's still easier

[Exnyan~]

Gameplay:

1. 00:10:128 (1,2) - why not don't ds 0.60x ? why jump ? I don't feel rhythm is really necessary jump... without the jump, there's no signal that it's a kick slider
2. 00:13:719 (1) - why you didn't remove color this ? I mean this 00:13:508 (1,1) - is jump and you put nc but in 00:10:128 (1,2) - is not nc, why ? the rhythm is same... NC is not sense fixed
3. 00:14:142 (5) - SV change big must bg NC fixed
4. 00:14:565 (1,1,1) - I don't see this really necessary nc... example this part nc and in part 00:17:100 (4,5,6) is not nc... emphasizes liquid-y sound
5. 00:27:029 (1) - this really readable ? i think so, yea
6. 00:32:945 (5) - sv change, must need nc fixed
7. 00:40:339 (7,1) - jump 10.00x ? I accpeted if <6.00x fine imo
8. 00:51:536 (5) - not nc ? fixed

I'm sorry this really need more work, somes combo color make no sense and show inconsistency with you style
[]
Insane and extra really need more work, other diff's is ok
I'm sorry, Need more work insane and extra
Any question if you don't understand my english ask me in game so I can explain better
Good luck

thanks for mod

Hello, you requested a mod from my modding que, so nyan~
Quick Foreword-The majority of my mod deal with slider endpoints not being in/being very close to the end of the slider, which is something that I see a lot of newer mappers do. The thing about sliders that do this is that they are very sloppy and I think go on for slightly longer than they have to. Regardless they cause me much OCD, as I do like perfect sliders. Something that I noticed in a lot of these sliders was that they were in a slider stream of the exact same slider shape and length (00:06:959 (1,2,3,4,5) - in Exnya~ for example), so a quick fix for that would be to just take the first slider in the stream, copy it onto the correct points on the timeline, and whoopee, you have a slider stream with all sliders the same length.

mrturtle99 wrote:

00:25:339 (1) - -slider end point needs to be in the slider

first time i've seen a mod mention this

really impressive actually

it's complete nonsense but still dam

@mrturtle99 - applied some slider endpoint things for easy, mainly because if i'd reset some of them, it would be longer. however, know that it doesn't elongate the slider unless the timeline says so. a lot of mappers leave slider end points outside of the end of the slider, while still keeping a nice looking slider.

take a look at these maps, for instance:
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/541990
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/368845
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/269773

what you isn't entirely true, but i appreciate you taking a look into it.

mrturtle99 wrote:

hard:
00:17:734 (6) - doesn't need to be a curved slider, consider just making it a straight slider with 2 points done

insane:
00:58:297 (1) - not sure if you're trying to make a loop here, but if you are there should only be 5 sliderpoints arranged in a pentagonal shape looks fine so im keeping it
01:29:353 (1) - just a suggestion, but maybe take off the NC here as it feels like it's connected to 01:29:142 (1) -fine imo

extra:
00:26:184 (3,4) - why are the slider endpoints hard endpoints? fixed
01:09:072 (1) - ^, and I also don't feel like there should be a NC here nc'd because sv change
01:29:353 (1) - don't feel like NC is needed here stays consistent with insane

thanks for the mod

Midge wrote:

what you isn't entirely true, but i appreciate you taking a look into it.
thanks for the mod

Meh, is what i get for putting my OCD-ness into a mod

@cobarde

kd because it was helpful, though :c (fixed ds)

holy mother of fuck, this is still pending.

I really want to try to mod this, but every time I try, between the song, and the annoying hitsounding pattern that spams finishes, I just want to punch a baby. not even setting my volume to 5% remedies this.

I think you should redo the hitsounds, only use finishes for when you can clearly hear the cymbal crash in the music, for example, in easy 00:08:438 (1) you can clearly hear it here on the slider's head. instead of finishes for the rest where there is no cymbal crash, you can use soft whistle.

seriously try it, it might make this a little more bearable to listen to

I'd added hitsounds that replace the finishes with a bass kick. Hs should be fine, imo.

yeah that will work too, just pls, for the love of baby jesus, get rid of the finish spam

Nice , i love this

hey man, nice map, maybe you try to rank this?

nah, i don't want to

I'm here to make babies with Midge

Thanks brah

april fools, lmao, this map is never getting ranked.

when rank?

300posts count hype