Ok, sorry for late reply, I was busy being salty. This map hurts :c
Ok, thanks for the mod and consideration, you've been really helpful.Mystyk wrote:
[Easnya~][Normanya~]
- 00:34:212 (3) - that look kind of weird and it might give some difficulty to read so try to make it better a bit - http://puu.sh/davDP/ba18262618.jpg - I think this still gives the feeling that you want to achieve while being easier to read done
- 00:50:691 (3) - this shape might be too hard to read again, it's squeezed in the corner of the beatmap and it's confusing >.< maybe you can just try a different pattern, an example - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2293253 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2293255 - of course you don't have to follow this, it's up to you how to change it fixed differently, we'll see how it holds up
[Nukednya's Hard]
- 00:31:255 (4,1,2) - although you said you changed it but it looks the same? xD try to have at least this much space - http://puu.sh/dawMs/ecd5fefd32.jpg - 00:33:367 (3) - if you replace this to x:160 y:220 the distance will be fine and patterns won't break either (00:32:945 (2) - is on x:172 y:328) whoops mb
- 01:24:917 (4) - this slider should be changed, it's hard to read :C - example: http://puu.sh/daxx5/b5c8e852f6.jpg done
- 01:29:565 (2) - add finish, since you also added a finish on Easy and it would fit anywayto the song as well yea, i have to reapply the hs to all the maps
[Collab Insanya~]
- 00:18:156 (4) - add clap, it sounds like you missed to add it
- 00:41:396 (3,4) - these are quite ugly and might as well be confusing to read (because the sliderend and sliderbeginning are too close) so I would rather change them a bit (at least this much http://puu.sh/dc1zC/13562ca24d.jpg) fixed
- 00:46:888 (5) - same as above about the slidershape fixed
- 01:10:128 (3) - the sliderbody is confusing because it looks shorter than it actually is, so with a slight change it would be better - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2297377 fixed, but i wanted to keep the curved streams
About the sv changes, I want to keep them. I believe they add an extra dimension to the song so that it feels like it's rising and falling, like it does in the sdvx chart. I've changed the ones that I feel are unjustified, but I think that the one's I've left in enhance the song.
- 01:12:452 (1) - try to put this more to the left please it's hard to see the beginning of the slider, try not to place it under a stream - http://puu.sh/dcIDG/e209815abf.jpg done
- 01:27:452 (1) - this still looks too confusing i strongly disagree, sorry :c
also 00:58:297 (1) - I think this SV change doesn't fit here,it would be better if this was normally mapped because there are no weird sounds at this point and also don't end the slider on an 1/8 note because there is nothing loud to be emphasizedyou said you fixed this, but the SV change is still there, and tbh there are other places where there is unreasonable slider velocity change, just look at this:
http://puu.sh/dcNHE/bd0b247d97.png changed sv to 1x- 00:41:396 (1,2) - these notes don't really have a difference in sound but you used a different slider velocity i disagree, they're meant to emphasize the rise in sound after that low slider
- 00:46:466 (1,2,1) - this one is just as troubling rises and falls, sorry i want to keep this
- 00:46:466 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,1,1) - also this, also has slider velocity change and the flow is also bad (imo) moreover the notes are placed with almost the same distance even though on the timeline they are VERY different and that's not right fine imo. flow is intentionally placed so the sliders point in the same direction. however, i might change the triplet and sv if it becomes more of an issue
- 00:51:536 (5,1,1) - http://puu.sh/dcNXW/d00f22f2e9.png - the sound at these notes is way too similar to use different slider velocity yea fixed
- 00:57:345 (4,1) - unreasonable spacing, why is (1) so far from (4) on the timeline they have equal distance made a little close so that they're touching, but i wanted sv to change ever 4 (looks cool)
- 01:04:424 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - same problem about the slider velocity change fine imo
- 01:11:184 (1,2,3) - unreasonable SV change again mmm keeping for now
- 00:24:072 (3,4,1,2,3) - also unreasonable SV changes fixed
- 00:27:241 (1,2,3) - same here, too many SV changes keeping for now
[Exnya~]I'm really sorry but in it's current state I don't want to bubble your map, but I also don't want to force changes on you, maybe you can find someone else.
- 00:07:170 (2) - this should be a hit circle not a slider, the song only "asks" for a hit circle fine imo
- 00:10:128 (1,2) - why use higher distance? it doesn't make sense i've had multiple complaints about when i had the tail of 1 touch 2, so i figured leaving a space would signify that 1 is a kick slider
- 00:10:973 (1,2,3,4) - these jumps are too big, I understand if you want to put jumps but I think reducing them would be better since the music is similar at these parts reduced
- 00:12:241 (3,4) - why is the spacing different here than 00:12:452 (4,1) - ? it should be the same fixed, made them not touch
- 00:21:114 (1) - this should end on a blue tick fixed
- 00:27:029 (1) - 2,00 for SV might be too big and the shape is ugly, we can't tell how long the slider is, and that's very important when you use a slider velocity change, here 00:28:508 (1) - you did it fine because we can at least tell how long the slider is fixed?
- 00:31:255 (1) - this slidershape is unacceptable in my opinion well i've made my case, so idk what else to say. i reeeaaally want to keep this.
- 00:44:565 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think these doesn't ask for a jump reduced ds
- 00:45:832 (2,3) - here again unreasonable jump, the music is too soft to have a jump! ^
- 00:46:043 (3,4) - and then here again different spacing, you could just use the same that you did here 00:46:255 (4,5) - fixed in above?
- 00:46:888 (3,1) - this jump looks unfitting because the music is too soft and "nya" ends on 00:46:994 - so just what are you trying to emphasize with that jump? fixed
- 00:54:917 (5,6,7,1) - those are some very big jumps, and I don't mind you putting jumps in the extra, but make them reasonable, the music is soft here so smaller jumps would be better reduced slightly
- 00:55:550 (1,2) - this one is also kind of big since you used a slider velocity change too it is surprising imo fine imo
- 01:01:677 (1) - this should end on the blue tick 01:01:994 - it's unreasonable to end this slider on an 1/8 note fixed
- 00:58:297 (1,2,3,4) - unreasonable SV change fixed
- 01:04:001 (1,2) - I'm sorry but I can't approve of this either and the slider velocity change is also too high in my opinion, it's really surprising ok, changed to kick slider, but kept 2x sv.
- 01:14:565 (1,2) - unreasonable spacing unreasonable? it's a kick slider into a triplet, it's fine imo
- 01:19:212 (1,2,1,2) - also these kind of 1/4 jumps throughout the whole difficulty, they're too big it's a feature imo
- 01:25:339 (1,1,1,1) - too many slider velocity changes fine imo ;n;
- 01:27:452 (2) - this slidershape doesn't look nice either moreover people can't even tell that it's going to be a slowdown nc'd and slanted (i find that makes it look slightly better :S)