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Edward Maya feat. Vika Jigulina - Stereo Love

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p3n
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940 posts
Joined June 2009
p3n
Hey there! M4M time.

Wrong timings and plain mapping errors are marked as RED


[General]
- Metronome is 1/1 late. Use offset 55 to fix that. Timing and note placement will not change.
- Many (green) timing points are not snapped. This is not a big problem unless it's KIAI or wrong hitsound changes though.

[Normal]
Generally you should only map what you can hear. Especially in Easy/Normal placing random beats will confuse beginners. I suggest mapping the vocals in the earlier parts of the song (most dominant and therefore best choice in this diff).

00:00:527 (1) - maybe start this earlier @00:00:055 and extend to 00:03:598 to end it just where it ended before to match the song
00:05:247 (2,3,4) - wrong timing. Move all 3 back 1/2 ((2) to red tick): http://puu.sh/3mtR Adjust spacing afterwards.
00:07:377 (1) - move back 1/2 (red tick) and extend by 1/1 (end on 00:11:157 red tick)
00:12:810 (2,3,4,5) - wrong timing, move back 1/2 to 00:12:574 (red tick): http://puu.sh/3mub Adjust spacing afterwards.
00:20:369 (3,4,5,6) - again wrong timing, move back 1/2 to the red tick again. Adjust spacing afterwards.
00:22:732 (1) - move back 1/2 (to red tick) and keep ending on 00:25:094
00:34:070 (1,2,3,4) - don't start mapping the background beats only (1,2,3) and suddenly switch to mapping melody only (4) inside the same combo! I suggest mapping the dominant parts here: move (2) 1/4 back to 00:34:425 (blue tick), move (3) back 1/2 to 00:34:779 (red tick). As this is a pretty tough pattern for beginners in the first play, you could use a 1x repeat slider here instead of the 3 circles: http://puu.sh/3mvw
00:36:432 (1,2) - move (1) back 1/4 to blue tick and (2) back 1/2 to red tick: http://puu.sh/3mvD Adjust spacing afterwards.
00:38:322 (1,2,3,4) - the switch in focus might be easier if you turn (1,2) and (3,4) into sliders each so players can pick up the background beat
00:50:606 (3,4) - plays weird and might be too tough for beginners. Maybe use something like this: http://puu.sh/3mxE
00:51:787 (1) - clap on ending?
00:54:385 (3,4) - maybe use a slider like 00:56:275 (3) here to make it more difficulty appropriate
00:57:929 (3,4,5) - Maybe replace the 3 circles with a 1x repeat slider
01:09:267 (1,2) - don't stack this in a beginners diff
01:14:228 (1,2,3) - maybe replace with 1x repeat slider
01:19:897 (1,2,3,1) - wrong timing, replace (1,2) with slider, move (3,1) back 1/2 to red tick (adjust spacing) and snap the green timing section to 01:21:078: http://puu.sh/3mya
01:27:456 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - wrong timing again, you can move (2) back 1/2 to red tick (adjust spacing) and rearrange the circles on red ticks each: http://puu.sh/3myo
01:35:960 (3) - timing is wrong here for the vocal-docus but mapping the background beat feels and plays still OK-ish here so maybe just leave it as is (or if you want use the 2/1 - 3/1 - 5/2 - 7/2 pattern from before)
01:43:755 (3) - too short, extend to 01:44:700 and maybe use the same 0,5x SV from 01:41:866 (3)
02:24:621 (2) - Maybe replace this with a slider and start it on the earlier red tick to match the song: http://puu.sh/3myS
02:31:236 (1) - this circle is too off-center so close after the spinner in a beginner-difficulty. Move closer to center.
02:37:850 (1) - maybe replace with slider and start 1/2 earlier on red tick to match the song and the same part @02:41:393 (1,2): http://puu.sh/3mzh

[LoliFlan's Hard]
00:00:528 (1) - maybe start this 1/1 earlier on 00:00:055
00:06:905 (6) - there is nothing to map on 00:07:142 so I suggest turning this into a single circle @00:06:905
00:15:173 (1) - silence ending?
01:11:630 (5) - remove 1 repeat and add stacked circle @01:12:339 (also start the next combo on this circle) to fix the cheap 1-1-1-2 repeat
01:37:142 (6,7) - sounds and plays weird. Maybe remove (6), move (7) where (6) was before and bring turning point + ending on the other red ticks: http://puu.sh/3mCf
02:27:693 (1) - should end 1/1 earlier on 02:30:528 (red tick)

Maybe "fix" those other 2x repeat sliders as they often come unexpected. This is "only" a Hard map so you should be concerned with readability and overall play-flow.

[Insane]
00:20:724 (X) - add circle
00:21:197 (X) - ^
00:21:669 (4) - remove
01:06:787 (4) - maybe remove as it is quite overmapped
01:10:567 (4) - ^
01:14:346 (4) - ^

Gererally you could try to use less overmapped streams and more jumps and hard (+symmetrical?) patterns (kinda like some of ztrots insane maps).


Pretty good hard and even if it is slightly overmapped I liked the insane. The Easy/Normal can be fixed.

~star
sirjuyt
172 posts
Joined October 2010
sirjuyt
heyy M4M here :D

[Normal]
00:11:866 (1) - Maybe too high , the slider?
00:26:275 (3) - sudden slow the slider would be hard for newbies
00:28:165 (3) - ^
00:30:055 (4) - ~ 00:32:180 ( ) - make a spinner?
00:34:070 (1,2) - part them because they might confuse players
00:39:031 (3) - like the front , make a slider or add circle at 00:41:393 ?
00:42:810 (4) - ^
00:45:881 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - clap sound weird , maybe (1) , (3) , (1) , (3) clap ...
00:51:787 (1) - like mod 00:26:275 (3)
01:12:338 (1) - not be covered? a bit far form (4) to (1)
01:14:228 (1) - move to 01:13:992 and add circle at 01:14:936 ?
01:16:117 (1) - there should be a break time
01:36:432 (4) - http://puu.sh/3o7e like this?
01:45:173 (1) - remove NC?
02:02:417 (1,2,3) - clap at begin and remove clap at end?
02:20:369 (1) - overlap 02:19:425 (3) - , make it beautiful ?
02:31:944 (1) - remove NC ?
02:33:125 (6,1) - swap NC ?
02:37:377 (x) - add a circle?
02:52:968 (4) - NC?
02:54:858 (7) - ^

[LoliFlan's Hard]
00:52:259 (x) - add a circle?
02:05:015 (x) - ^
02:39:267 (x) - ^
01:44:228 (x) - ^
01:53:440 (8) - ^ , and add finish?
02:33:126 (7,1) - swap NC ?
02:43:047 (5) - NC?
02:58:165 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (nazi@ @)make them more like pentagon

[Insane]
00:21:669 (x) - add a circle?
00:32:417 (2) - move to 00:32:535
00:34:306 (2) - ^
00:40:921 (1) - remove NC?
00:51:787 (2) - sudden whistle > < turn down the volume
01:01:944 (x) - add a circle?
01:09:268 (4) - volume > <
01:11:275 (x) - add a circle?
01:28:638 (7) - NC?
02:06:078 (x) - add a circle?
02:07:142 (7) - NC?
*btw - (I think more triplet can be more fun in the Insane diff ^ ^ just up to you )
02:33:126 (11) - NC?
02:33:835 (1) - remove NC
02:37:141 (x) , 02:37:377 (x) - add circle?
*btw 2 - (use NC frequently , more than 10 combo I think it's terrible :P)

[song setup]
No Source?
No Tag !? add loliflan lolicore flandre in Normal and Insane

yeah ~ nice song :D starrr---
Linn
57 posts
Joined April 2010
Linn
here some suggestions :D

[Normal]
00:58:401[1]: remove new combo
01:09:267[1]: ^
01:35:015[1,2,3,4]: change so it looks like this:


02:12:810[1]: Add clap
02:13:283[2]: Remove Clap
02:15:645[1] Add Clap
02:20:369[1] ^
01:22:259[2] ^
02:27:929[1] ^
02:28:873[1] ^
02:38:322[2] ^
02:43:047[1] ^
02:50:060[5] ^
02:51:078[1] Remove Clap
02:51:551[2] Add Clap

[LoliFlan's Hard]
00:41:393[1,2,3,4,5] Spacing issues

[Insane]
00:59:346[1]: Remove New Combo
____
that's all i guess!
really nice map, star! :D
narakucrimson
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1,713 posts
Joined March 2010
narakucrimson
Hi there! Sorry for the delay!

[General]
  1. Why do all the difficulties have different combo colours? you should consider using the same colours in every difficulty, it gives the mapset consistency.
[Normal]
  1. HP Drain Rate: 2 should work fine, I think.
  2. 00:34:070 (1,2,3) - Mmmm... I don't think this is too easy to read for a new player, since they are 3/4s apart... I would suggest a slider with a repetition, it will be easier to play:
    SPOILER
    The main objective for this is that an unexperienced player understands how the following patterns will be, so that he/she doesn't confuse while trying to hit the object (circle, slider) on the correct time.
  3. 00:36:314 (1,2) - And here, also, I think that you can make the distance snapping a little lower. Like, those nazi things people tend to say: "Move (1) one grid right, and (2) one grid down".
    But I mean it, do it - it makes the pattern more noob-friendly. :D
  4. 00:49:661 (1) - Why is this so far from the end of (3)? I mean, why is there such a big jump? Try using the correct distance snapping from the yellow (3). You might have to move the following (2).
    Oh and also, add a clap, it sounds good :D
  5. Just a side note here: Try to keep the distance snapping correct. This is a basic advice you should always take into consideration, EVEN MORE if you're mapping and easier (Easy, Normal) difficulty.
    Check your difficulties back in search of these issues, and fix them by yourself, so that you get practice at it :D
  6. 01:09:740 (4) - This isn't properly stacked under (3). Howeever, I think it would be better if you don't stack it under (3), Believe me, it's quiet confusing for new players.
  7. 02:09:267 (1) - I don't know, this sudden stop in the one-beat-apart circles kinda breaks the flow. Maybe you could try a slider that starts at 02:08:558 (5) and ends here. Like this:
    SPOILER
    It will play much, much better. Of course, you can make that slider in any shape you want :D
  8. 02:14:228 (1) - Ok, I know that since you changed the velocity, the spacing is reduced, but this is really confusing. Please place this as if you hadn't changed the slider velocity:
    SPOILER
    I mean, I would say that this is almost an order xD
  9. 02:31:236 (1) - You should delete this and end the previous slider here. I haven't said anything about objects too close from the previous spinners, but I have to mention this one. It doesn't quiet fit here as it is now, and it's way too soon after the spinner.
[LoliFlan's Hard]
  1. 00:35:724 (1) - Well, actually I saw some things before this that were a little hard to predict, but I'm flexible today :) But this here, I'd recommed you to use the normal spacing, and not this shrinked spacing (aka small spacing). I don't think it fits.
  2. 00:52:732 (3) - DON'T fully stack a slider. This isn't very playable. I wouldn't say it's unrankable, but it looks horrible. Seriously. Place it in some other way.
  3. 00:53:913 (3) - This clap sounds weeeird, it should go on 00:53:440 (1) instead of here.
  4. 00:54:385 (5,6) - Please place this in some other way, because: 1. (5) isn't at the right distance from (4) (and I know you're using jumps, but this one just doesn't look good), 2. Stacking (5) and (6) here doesn't look good and 3. It doesn't flow well, in my opinion. Try something more open, like this:
    SPOILER
    Or something similar.
  5. 02:07:850 (4,5) - Can you please move these to the left so that they aren't almost fully overlapped by (2) and (3)? It doesn't look so good :/
  6. 02:32:417 (5,6) - Stacking this just doesn't work here, since (7) is too close from (6). Try this:
    SPOILER
    Also...
  7. 02:33:125 (7) - Add a new combo, and then remove the new combo from 02:33:834 (1).
  8. 02:37:259 (6,7) - These two should be placed further from where they are now. Maybe you can place them above those two sliders, so that the overlap doesn't look like shit. Or I don't know.
  9. 02:58:637 (3,4) - If you want to make a good-looking star pattern, then move these two (3 and 4) 3 grids up.
[Insane]
  1. 00:48:007 (2) - WTFwhy the heck did you use this jump?? It doesn't fit with the music at all °-° PLEASE place this using normal DS o.o
  2. 00:51:314 (1) - Seriously, I see no reason for using such a big jump. Please re place this in some other way without the jump.
  3. 01:10:921 (5) - I think this would work better not stacked, and you should have the new combo here, and not it the next circle. Also, you can use a jump here if you want to, but don't overdo it -.-
  4. I guess the rest is fine~
That's all! Have a star
CXu
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Joined March 2009
CXu
[Normal]
00:42:338 (3,4) - Just thinking you should move these to the right so they line up with (1)
00:50:133 (2,3) - This too, line it up with (1)
01:00:999 (1) - A bit short time after spinner and it's not a really long spinner either, so I think you could have this more in the center of the map?
01:35:015 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not really important but since we're at it, move this to the right so it's in the middle? :p
02:04:306 (3) - Up 1 grid, right 2 grids, lvl 3

Well, not much more I want to say, and nothing really broke me when I was playing, so I won't go much into spacing or whatever. Still I find stuff like 00:38:204 (1,2,3) - kinda hard to read for less skilled players. But that's just my belief, and I have no idea if that's right :p

[Hard]
01:05:134 (2) - Add a repeat on this slider?
01:11:630 (5) - This felt a bit awkward to me. Reduce repeat by 1 and add a note instead?
01:12:693 (2) - Same as 01:05:134 (2) I guess
01:13:756 (1,2) - Idk, why not have them in the center so they're symmetrical?
02:31:945 (3,4,5,6) - This felt weird and I think it didn't fit as much with the mapping style.
02:37:260 (6,7) - Stacking :<
02:39:150 (2,3) - ^
02:56:039 (9,10,11) - ^

Not much more to say. Nothing really tripped me up here either.

[Insane]
00:13:047 (1,2,3,4) - this jump is biiig
00:21:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - feels kinda out of place imo
00:29:583 (4) - Newcombo
00:30:764 (2,3) - Again biiiig jump
00:55:803 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This gets kinda covered by the combo before and looks kinda ugly this way. move it somewhere else?
01:01:709 (2,3) - yeah :<
01:06:196 - I miss a note here
01:10:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the spacing is weird here
01:28:992 (8,9,10,11) - unnecessary streams imo
01:43:283 (4) - newcombo
02:03:597 (1,2) - weird jump compared to the rest of this part :<
02:05:961 (5,6,7) - spacing?
02:09:504 (4) - line it up
02:56:512 (1,2,3,4,5) - Looks kinda weird imo

Generally there are so many slider slowdowns and streams :< The slowdowns are kinda fine since they did make kinda sense, but I don't really like all the streams. anyhow, that ends this modpost.
theMikeAG
308 posts
Joined September 2010
theMikeAG
Stereo Love means that the Love comes from 2 directions.

After looking over all of your maps, here's what I found.

~LoliFlan Hard~
01:13:756 (1,2) - Center these two notes.
01:15:173 (6) - Make this slider symmetrical with (3).

Here, have a star.
Zhanger_old
Zhanger_old
nice :D the song is catchy ><



hope it gets ranked, have a star
Flanster
5,938 posts
Joined August 2010
Flanster
Heres the heart shaped sprite i told you about,it looks like this hope you like it
PREVIEW
SPOILER


i think ill need that kudos now that the starring system is changed :o

Hellzero
687 posts
Joined April 2010
Hellzero
General
OK~

Insane
00:35:842 (7,1) - i see it not snapped purposely, but in game it look ugly i suggest span it 0.2x (like this 00:38:205 (1,2) ) or just stack
00:31:472 (4) - make slirers more symmetry. first point 1 grid up. http://puu.sh/4zLq
00:33:362 (6) - ^ ect
00:40:921 (1,1) - little overlap
00:48:953 (4) - again more symmetry http://puu.sh/4zM3
00:55:803 (1,2,3,4,5) - use snap 0.2x (cuz 0.1x too little imo)
01:13:283 (6,7,8) - ^ ect
01:21:078 (5,6,7) - really confuse, snap them
01:13:283 (6,7,8) - so little spacing confuse use snap 0.2x or 0.0x (ect)
01:54:150 (2) - ctrl+h and snap with (6)
02:01:709 (5) - ^
02:11:630 (12) - ctrl+r?
02:17:535 (8) - hm... make other form?
02:25:567 (1,2,3,4) - make more beautiful? for example http://puu.sh/4zNq
02:33:126 (10) - more symmetry

Hard
00:43:165 (1) - start at 00:43:283
02:51:787 (7,1) - too close
02:59:346 (6) - new combo

Normal
AR+2
00:05:488 (3,4) - more symmetry
Not recommend use slider velocity multiplier in easy/normal diffs

Good Luck!
Ijah_old
Ijah_old 
Normal:
01:47:771 (1) - this looks ugly, try making it more symmetrical

Insane:
01:55:566 (1) - Add a spinner here that reaches to 02:00:763
02:24:976 - Add a note here? (OPTIONAL)
02:03:243 - Same as above
02:56:039 - add a triple hit stream here http://puu.sh/4Aw3

Nice map, couldn't find many problems at all.
GL~
Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura
First of all, dont kudosu IRC mods unless you provide proof of what was changed, also split mod posts dont need to be kudosu'd twice.

[General]
Dont use Pure White combo colour, it's blinding during kiai.
Why is "Flandre" in the tags? and if that's the name of the guest mapper then why is "Lolicore" in the tags? aditionally, you forgot to add the tags to all diffs, specially to Normal.
Kiai is unsnapped on all difficulties, also the green timing sections are unsnapepd on [Insane] and [Normal]

[Insane]
01:13:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern would look nicer if it was centered.
02:56:512 (1,2,3,4,5) - This star shape looks really flattened, can you make it better?

[LoliFlan's Hard]
Why this diff doesnt have letterbox in breaks?
00:54:150 (4,5) - This isnt a good place to put a jump and it's very noticeable the spacing problem here during gameplay
01:36:905 (5) - Better be safe and put a NC here.

[Normal]
Please dont use blue ticks here unless extremely necessary those 3/4 time spacing can be quite hard to catch for new players
Dont use slider speed changes on the easiest diff please.
00:36:314 (1,2,3) - Spacing is hard to read =/
00:38:204 (1,2,3) - ^
00:56:275 (3,1) - This is a really bad anti jump, more importantly will be hard for new players to see a note below a slider.
01:11:629 (4,1) - This stacking is really misleading because the player was already hitting at 1/1s then a sudden stack of 3/2 will throw them off.
02:27:929 (1) - Remove NC.
02:52:968 (4,7) - New combo, it's not good to have such a high combo on the easiest difficulty.
TicClick
Global Moderator
4,466 posts
Joined February 2011
TicClick
А вброшу-ка я тебе звёздочку, раз ты так стараешься для своей карты. И похуй, что ты меня не поймёшь.
Barney Stinson
298 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Barney Stinson
I have fixed all the things that were wrote on the mod. Thanks!
Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura
Rechecking~
[General]
Tags havent been fixed yet!
Also i'd recommend slider tick rate 2

[Insane]
02:56:512 (1,2,3,4,5) - This star shape still looks flat =(
02:59:110 (1) - Why is this spinner longer in this diff than on the other diffs?
02:00:999 - Resnap kiai start

[LoliFlan's Hard]
Countdown is still disabled on this diff while enabled on the others!
00:07:378 (1) - Spinner combo bug, Spinner's missing the new combo.
01:43:283 (1,2,3) - I cant ever seem to hit this compressed stream at the correct speed orz
02:33:126 (1) - This anti-jump is not intuitive at all.

[Normal]
00:59:346 (1) - Spinner too short for the easiest difficulty of the mapset.
02:29:346 (1) - This spinner is too short too
02:00:999 - Resnap kiai start
MathiasXII
335 posts
Joined January 2009
MathiasXII
Hehe nice map! I got a proposition for you.

All of this map seems a lot inspired by osuplayer111's one... so to make it different a little, I've edited the MP3 so the end of is the actual ending of the full length song... and I also made it 192kbps for maximum quality.

.... (leaked mp3 omg)

If you decide to take this mp3 instead, make sure all difficulties are offseted to 95 and to resnap all inherit sections by +40.

If you need help with all of this, just PM me :).


ONLY give a Kudosu if I've been helfpul with my new MP3 and offset. If not, just discard :)
Barney Stinson
298 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Barney Stinson
All Fixed for Mat's Re-check. Hope that now will be better :P
MathiasXII
335 posts
Joined January 2009
MathiasXII
Umm rechecked the timing with my friend Charles and it sounds a lot better at 85.

So , offset 85 , and move all inherit sections by -10. If there's any problems, PM me again XD.

NO KUDOSUS FOR THIS POST SINCE YOU ALREADY GAVE ME ONE !!!
Flanster
5,938 posts
Joined August 2010
Flanster
<Sony ACID Music Studio 7.0 huh ;3>
Wow this mp3 sounds much better but my mediainfo detects that the mp3 is 256kbps not 192,perhaps make it 192?

and timing seems to be fine.

also i noticed that the BG image is a bit bad on quality so i found it and made a clear high quality version


here is evidence : the left part is the NEW image,the right part is the OLD image
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
Countdown is still disabled on this diff while enabled on the others!
It actually need to be disabled, because the countdown don't even start

[LoliFlandre's Hard]
01:08:363 (1) - You didn't remember to add the Clap maybe...

Did sent scalone a good star at the end :3

No Kudosu as I don't feel it is that large as a modpost
MathiasXII
335 posts
Joined January 2009
MathiasXII

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

<Sony ACID Music Studio 7.0 huh ;3>
Wow this mp3 sounds much better but my mediainfo detects that the mp3 is 256kbps not 192,perhaps make it 192?

And timing seems to be fine.
I CANNOT LIVE WITHOUT THAT PROGRAM ANYMORE !!!! Seriously !

Oh FFS ! Sorry scalone... here dude : made all the offset and mp3 changes : Just download and copy everything to your song folder then full submit

And for the timing, I double checked with Charles and really, it's 85, not 95 lol (made changes in every difficulty in the .zip file above).
Flanster
5,938 posts
Joined August 2010
Flanster
There is a "normal-hitclap (2).wav" in the song folder which im sure wont be used and is just taking space.Please remove it
Azure_Kite
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3,217 posts
Joined February 2009
Azure_Kite
Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Normal]

00:05:518 (3) - You can round out the curve in this slider by moving the 2nd that 4th Slider points outwards by one grid http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135577
00:14:022 (5) - Again, you can reduce jagged edges by moving the second slider point to the left two grids
00:20:636 (4) - Maybe follow this slider point layout to reduce the jaggedness? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135579
00:35:281 (2) - Maybe follow this slider point layout to reduce the jaggedness? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135581
01:03:628 (3) - Maybe follow this slider point layout to reduce the jaggedness? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135585
01:46:384 (2,3,4) - Move (2) Left one grid, (3) Down one grid, and (4) Left one grid
01:52:998 (4) - The break here feels a little weird. I would suggest removing this note, as ending the break at (3) sounds little better for me.
02:09:533 (2) - Shift-Align this with the end of the Slider, so that it's Level with the Slider please. Alternatively, try positioning (2), (3) and (1) Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135591
02:20:399 (1) - I suggest moving the middle sliderpoint out like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135592
02:32:210 (2,4) - Move both of these circles Right one grid level; it makes the combo symmetrical

Other than these suggestions, nothing wrong here.

[LoliFlan's Hard]

00:17:329 (1) - I don't recommend placing a Spinner 1/4 after a spinner or other note. Please move this forward to the next red tick, and Shorten to realign it with the correct time to end.
01:00:557 (4) - This totally calls for a finish hitsound
02:31:739 (2) - I don't recommend placing notes under sliders, as there are much more interesting places they could go to. Why not continue the flow of the slider by placing the note in it's general direction? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135602
02:33:628 (2) - Same here. And if you don't agree, at least snap the note under the slider end correctly.


~

[Insane]

00:31:502 (4) - Please move the first Red Sliderpoint down one grid please, so it's level with the rest. It looks strange like this ;^^
00:47:092 (5) - These whistles sound bad, no offense. Please change them to the soft whistles. The same applies to the other whistles in this section of the song =3
01:21:699 (6,7) - Maybe position (6) like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135605
02:06:227 (6) - This volume increase here is quite noticeable and distracting. It would have a better effect if you gradually increased the volume (say, 3-5% every quarter/half-beat)
02:22:762 (1) - Why a new combo here and not for the other 2 or so repeats of the same melody before hand? Either take new combo off here, or apply a new combo to the other sections before, at 02:07:172 (7) and 02:14:731 (7). I'd also recommend starting the new combo here at the note before, which is currently (9).
02:24:416 (5) - This looks a bit cleaner to me http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135607



Love the song; there are a few things that can be cleaned up, but it's definitely looking good!
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
o/

[General]
-Snap timing points

[Normal]
-01:41:187 delete timining point.

NO kudo, thx.

Looks a little better from last time, but feels like random mapping :<
MathiasXII
335 posts
Joined January 2009
MathiasXII

Astom wrote:

o/

[General]
-Snap timing points
Aren't they already snapped? I checked AIMod and there's no warning about unsnapped timing o.O.
Flanster
5,938 posts
Joined August 2010
Flanster

Astom wrote:

feels like random mapping :<
I've enjoyed mapping this song slowly one step at a time.No randomness involved i can assure you that.Even scalone is really serious about this map.
Barney Stinson
298 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Barney Stinson

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

Astom wrote:

feels like random mapping :<
I've enjoyed mapping this song slowly one step at a time.No randomness involved i can assure you that.Even scalone is really serious about this map.
Well. Map took me 5 months. I haven't surely randomly did it. Maybe u don't like my mapping style, but no. It isn't random. Anyway, thanks for modding
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
vivere
Hi scalone :>

Here is the SB

I hope you like it ^^'/
Flanster
5,938 posts
Joined August 2010
Flanster
We've worked hard and got here.BAT request now!

(Your message is too short.NOT!)
RandomJibberish
osu! Alumni
1,833 posts
Joined August 2009
RandomJibberish
General
Set tick 2 on all difficulties
Kiai section seems kinda randomly placed: the ending is arguably just as intense as where you put the kiai. IMO this song doesn't really fit using kiai at all, but please at least make sure it is in all of the most intense sections of the song if you use it all.
You need an easy, as Normal uses a lot of confusing offbeat patterns.

Insane
Pretty much every speed change in the map was a terrible idea. Setting tick rate 2 makes it at least rankable as you can see the ticks, but I'd like you to either remove or ensure the intuitivity of each speed change before I'd even think about bubbling. Avoid using speed changes outside the range of 0.75x to 1.5x, and ensure each one reflects a change in music intensity. Also make sure that spacing is roughly equal to slider speed (around 1.0x DS)

00:21:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this matches up with nothing in the music
01:49:219 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:10:715 (4,5,6,7,8) - change in spacing is completely random and does not reflect a change in the music
I won't go through the map and point out all of these, since there are far too many, but I'll say this: There are plenty of places in the song where 1/4 makes a degree of sense, but you haven't utilised them and seem to just be placing it randomly. The same applies to jumps.
Please keep in mind that there is a song that you're basing your mapping on and you should be listening to it.

Loliflan's Hard
Hitsounds get a bit overpowering in the middle section from 00:45:439 up to 01:15:675. Decrease the volume a bit?
01:58:667 (1) - Move back by 1/2

Normal
Too much 1/2 for the easiest diff of the set I'd say, but if you get an easy made it'd be fine.
Barney Stinson
298 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Barney Stinson
Thanks to mod. I hate slider tick 2, sorry. I fixed all for the rest.
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
[SB] suggestion

Make L6.png, L9.png and L12.png like L3.png and L15.png ( i'm saying to make them red )
Use some sfx on the -pulses jpg's to make them like http://puu.sh/4VYZ, i simply used a "Vibrance" Adjustment level in this case.
Split L16.png, L28.png, L32.png, L34.png in parts like you done some tuimes in the last part of your SBs for example: " I can fix all those lies" to " I ", "can fix", "all those", "lies".
Make some of the Lyrics at the last part red so they have the same effect as the start.

[Kiai]
Allunga il kiai alla fine fino a 02:59:140, è meglio ed inoltre è proprio quella alla fine la parte con più enfasi ... ( lo dice anche l'SB )
aston_old
aston_old
guest diff that you asked for yesterday is done o/
here it is.

will take suggestions to improve/change it now.

tell me if you need the new osz.

Download: Edward Maya Ft. Vika Jigulina - Stereo Love (scalone) [aston's Easy].osu
abalee
osu! Alumni
1,994 posts
Joined June 2008
abalee
seems It need to do a storyboard load reduce...
for sure you could find another one to do it coz I have job and it could more days later :/

oh... just notice that the diff. spread doesn't looks good..
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom

MathiasXII wrote:

Astom wrote:

o/

[General]
-Snap timing points
Aren't they already snapped? I checked AIMod and there's no warning about unsnapped timing o.O.
AIMod don't show unsnapped TIMING POINTS, not circles or sliders, read well please.

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

Astom wrote:

feels like random mapping :<
I've enjoyed mapping this song slowly one step at a time.No randomness involved i can assure you that.Even scalone is really serious about this map.
I was refering about scalone's diff, compresed streams + noncompresed feels random to me, but is just that "a feeling" also I think than RandomJibberish made things more clear? also time don't matter when you are mapping, probably my way of say things wasn't totally right, I apologise for that, but was my impression back then and probably I'm not going to be the last.

Well in another matter, try this fix for your SB.
http://puu.sh/5dl3
Log of things changed/fixed:
-Rescaled imgs (not all, but most of all).
-Deleted some unused imgs.
-Reduced SB load.
-Retimed some effects (not all of them).
Original SBder need do a check for this to be sure I didn't mess with something for accident.
Probably that is enough to be ranked but can be more reduced =P, but that is up to your SBder.

btw good luck~
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
Less Haevy SB... was REALLY easy to find a solution.
I removed transparency from lightleft.png and lightright.png and changed their docking point from Center to TopLeft and TopRight respectively.

Download: SB.rar
Barney Stinson
298 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Barney Stinson
Sei un genio Haku :Q


NOPE, MESSAGE IS NOT TOO SHORT. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPE
nimi
978 posts
Joined April 2010
nimi
Heya~

Did some IRC modding (part of the chat)
aand well.. since vivere was the one who made the SB, I'm gonna post some stuff about it here:

  • - Plants.png file has some parts that were bad cut (aka this http://puu.sh/5mnm). I've tried to fix it.. but the plant on the right still looks quite odd ><
    Image
    - Some of the Lyrics files have a lot of transparent space on it - they all should be like L3.png - soo yeah >_<
    - Something else that I forgot to mention before.. Epilepsy warning should be displayed, since it's a pretty flashy SB
And well, that's all. Good luck on ranks o/
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
i got only a few thing to point out because this map has been modded by bat
really nothing need to be written in Source?
some guys(arien666Azure_Kyte) told me never use a bg which contains a panties ( maybe a half-opened swimming costume too?). so i'm thinking ( just laughing at those stupid mats never mind ;)

Normal

[02:23:693] spacing

LoliFlan's Hard

fine

Insane

good

you are skilled enough to make rankable and playable maps so far
but still a great many thing you need to learn, before you become an elite mapper
i mean, make maps with more imagination and dynamic
spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3
[General]
remove letterbox during break
Let kiai time identical

[Normal]
00:07:644 (1) - I think you have start at 00:07:407 - is better :3
00:22:762 (1) - ^ at 00:22:525 - is better :3
00:39:061 (3,1) - spacing~ (I think it's easiest diff for your map)
00:43:549 (1,1) - too far spacing and to close timing for easiest diff~~
01:46:384 (2) - remove whistle
01:48:273 (2) - ^
02:08:588 (1,2) - stack

[LoliFlan's Hard]
00:29:140 (4,2) - stack~
00:33:628 (6) - remove this rhytem~
00:47:802 (1,1) - stack~ and I think you need move 00:48:983 (5) -
01:22:998 - this way don't put rhythm [IMO]
01:43:550 (4) - down 1 grid (size 4 )
02:17:565 (7,2) - stack
02:24:180 (3,4,1) - uneven spacing
02:50:872 (3,1) - why don't regular those :P

[Insane]
00:35:281 (6,7,1) - too close. really
00:55:243 (7) - newcombo(NC)
01:03:628 (5) - whistle
01:11:187 (6) - whistle
01:29:258 (8,9) - too close... and uneven spacing
01:45:676 (4,5,6) - too close...
01:52:998 (6,3) - stack (If you stack it. you need regular those 01:53:943 (1,3,5,7) - ~)
02:07:644 (3,4,5) - too close...
02:16:384 (2,3,4) - ^
02:26:542 (11,12,13) - right 1 grid (size 4 )
02:33:156 (10) - up 1 grid (size 4 )


LKs wrote:

you are skilled enough to make rankable and playable maps so far
but still a great many thing you need to learn, before you become an elite mapper
i mean, make maps with more imagination and dynamic
LKs say's right :(
your skill really enough to make rankable ...
you can consult for osuplayer111'sEdward Maya Ft. Vika Jigulina - Stereo Love
HellDawn
1,035 posts
Joined April 2010
HellDawn
Here as requested, Easy Diff
I hope you will like it
weird hitsounds u.u

Download: Edward Maya Ft. Vika Jigulina - Stereo Love (scalone) [HellDawn's Easy].osu
abalee
osu! Alumni
1,994 posts
Joined June 2008
abalee
insane:
I'd say most "jump" in my eyes are strange, so I skipped...
00:08:116 (4,5,6) - ,etc: almost silenced notes aren't a good idea especially they don't follow the music in my opinion.
00:36:345 (2,3) - 00:38:235 (1,2) - : they have same rhythm, suggest to have the same patten.

Hard:
01:45:676 (3,1) - Spacing?
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
Alleggerito
Ho dovuto fare modifiche un pò più grosse del normale...
Cancella "Girl-L.png" che non viene utilizzato mai
http://puu.sh/5LfC
Barney Stinson
298 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Barney Stinson
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAH. Te voglio bene Ale \o/
Non è troppo corto il messaggio, non è CORTO
Flanster
5,938 posts
Joined August 2010
Flanster
Now lets bubble this =w= Your message is too short.
Barney Stinson
298 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Barney Stinson
Lolicore Flandre, I don't think it will happen without a MAT or BAT who could mod my map more <3
ririco
6,402 posts
Joined February 2011
ririco
here the taiko bg i think you must delete the SB from the taiko diff in anyway that will be better \o\

Barney Stinson
298 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Barney Stinson
Yay! Thanks -Sekai-!
excaliburlegend
1 post
Joined September 2008
excaliburlegend
You should approve this one, is far more better than the ranked version :)
Backfire
3,208 posts
Joined February 2010
Backfire
Neo's Taiko - Your slider velocity is 1.2. It should be 1.4. Then fix your sliders and stuff.

Thats all I can say. It looks really good. Plays well. Though, Im not a fan of all these streams, but its cool.
Shiirn
2,896 posts
Joined August 2010
Shiirn
IRC MODS AHOY AHAHAHAHAHAHA i suck


log for normal/insane
SPOILER
10:12 <scalone> : hi
10:12 <Shiirn> : ...hi
10:13 <scalone> : sorry if I hurt u. could u mod my map please?
10:13 <Shiirn> : link
10:13 <Shiirn> : maybe.
10:13 *scalone is listening to (Edward Maya Ft. Vika Jigulina - Stereo Love)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/29553]
10:13 <Shiirn> : dling
10:14 <scalone> : ?
10:14 <Shiirn> : downloading
10:14 <scalone> : oh
10:14 <scalone> : thank u :3
10:14 <Shiirn> : MAYBE
10:14 <Shiirn> : i'll mod, we'll see
10:14 <Shiirn> : xD
10:15 <scalone> : \D:/
10:16 <scalone> : hope that u will
10:16 <scalone> : u know xD
10:19 <Shiirn> : bg is a bit....
10:19 <Shiirn> : suggestive
10:19 <scalone> : It has a SB
10:20 <Shiirn> : that...doesn't matter
10:20 <Shiirn> : lol
10:20 <Shiirn> : the swimsuit is kind of bad
10:20 <Shiirn> : the kiai is nice
10:20 <Shiirn> : even if it's also pretty suggestive
10:20 <scalone> : everybody told me that it's all rankable
10:20 <Shiirn> : kiai is too long
10:20 <Shiirn> : yeah but i find it distasteful
10:21 <scalone> : u are talking about
10:21 <scalone> : BGs
10:21 <scalone> : or kiai?
10:21 <Shiirn> : bgs
10:21 <Shiirn> : kiai being too long is
10:21 <Shiirn> : ehhh
10:21 <Shiirn> : whatever
10:21 <Shiirn> : the sb is very distracting
10:21 <Shiirn> : i suggest tick rate 2 as well
10:21 <Shiirn> : wait, no
10:21 <Shiirn> : 1 works better
10:22 <scalone> : just was sayin'
10:22 <scalone> : xd
10:22 <Shiirn> : "it's rankable" doesn't mean "it's good"
10:22 <Shiirn> : 00:30:321 (1,2) - put new combo on 2, remove from 1
10:22 <Shiirn> : new combo on a triple feels strange
10:22 <Shiirn> : 00:34:101 (1,2) - ^
10:23 <Shiirn> : 00:35:990 (1,2) - ^
10:23 <Shiirn> : 00:55:361 (1,2) - ^
10:24 <Shiirn> : don't get discouraged from anything i say, it's a pretty nice map xD
10:24 <Shiirn> : 01:36:699 (1) - this speed is awkward considering the slowdowns you usually use
10:25 <scalone> : I put slowsection?
10:25 <Shiirn> : for first half you use 0.5x
10:25 <Shiirn> : it fits very well
10:25 <Shiirn> : but that slider is 1.00
10:25 <Shiirn> : twice as fast
10:26 <Shiirn> : For insane
10:26 <scalone> : so
10:26 <Shiirn> : >3<
10:26 <scalone> : I scale slider
10:26 <Shiirn> : so change that slider to 0.5
10:26 <Shiirn> : yes
10:26 <Shiirn> : that'd work
10:26 <Shiirn> : just fix that slider and the notes after it and you'll be golden
10:26 <Shiirn> : 02:27:486 (5) - put a clap? i think it sound cool
10:28 <Shiirn> : that's it for your insane
10:28 <scalone> : ok
10:28 <Shiirn> : now for your normal
10:29 <scalone> : ready
10:30 <Shiirn> : 01:28:195 (2) - aesthetic suggestion - flip horizontally (ctrl+h) and move back to the same position
10:30 <Shiirn> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156850 like that
10:30 <scalone> : got it
10:31 <Shiirn> : 01:36:226 (4) - select and remove whistles, and select each individual point of the slider and add whistle
10:31 <Shiirn> : right now it has the soft-whistleslide
10:32 <scalone> : ok
10:32 <Shiirn> : 01:52:053 (2) - same here
10:32 <Shiirn> : the previous ones were nice
10:33 <Shiirn> : 02:29:376 (1) - put a timing point to stop kiai at the start and restart it at the end, kiai during sliders is something i dislike, and since the second
10:33 <Shiirn> : chorus starts, a new fountain fits
10:34 <scalone> : waitwaitwait
10:34 <scalone> : didn't get it
10:34 <Shiirn> : 02:29:376 (1) - put a timing point to stop kiai at the start and restart it at the end, kiai during sliders is something i dislike, and since the second
10:34 <Shiirn> : chorus starts, a new fountain fits
10:34 <Shiirn> : of the spinner
10:34 <Shiirn> : SPINNER*
10:34 <Shiirn> : my bad lol
10:34 <scalone> : ok
10:34 <scalone> : remove kiai at the start of spinner
10:35 <scalone> : and add at end of that
10:35 <Shiirn> : right
10:36 <scalone> : done
10:36 <scalone> : anything else?
10:36 <Shiirn> : still looking
10:36 <scalone> : k
10:37 <Shiirn> : nothing else
10:37 <Shiirn> : will post stuff and log for other diffs


HellDawn
SPOILER
10:40 <HellDawn> : *-*
10:40 *Shiirn is editing (Edward Maya Ft. Vika Jigulina - Stereo Love)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/29553]
10:40 <Shiirn> : modding
10:40 <HellDawn> : okey
10:41 <Shiirn> : 00:26:541 (1) - rawr, mirror the last node and move the red point up 1 grid4
10:41 <Shiirn> : *2
10:41 <Shiirn> : 00:28:903 (3) - ^ except down
10:42 <Shiirn> : 00:38:352 (2,3) - call me crazy but this was hard to read even for me
10:42 <Shiirn> : might want to move 2 down, and try to get 3 a bit further away
10:42 <Shiirn> : even if it breaks distance snap
10:42 <HellDawn> : you have a point
10:42 <Shiirn> : 00:42:840 (1) - same here
10:42 <Shiirn> : even if distance snap says they're the right distance, a little further won't kill anyone and makes it more readable
10:43 <Shiirn> : clever tick hitsounds
10:46 <Shiirn> : still there?
10:47 <Shiirn> : 01:27:486 (1) - remove whistle, and add whistles individually to each segment - you have soft-whistleslide right now, it sounds strange
10:48 <Shiirn> : well, i'll continue anyway lol
10:48 <HellDawn> : yea please
10:49 <Shiirn> : 02:56:777 (4) - hahahahawhat
10:49 <Shiirn> : works well just funny
10:49 <Shiirn> : xD
10:49 <HellDawn> : xD
10:49 <Shiirn> : ok that's it

lolicore
SPOILER
10:48 <Lolicore Flandre> : zooooooooom
10:48 *Shiirn is editing (Edward Maya Ft. Vika Jigulina - Stereo Love)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/29553]
10:48 <Shiirn> : modding soong
10:48 <Lolicore Flandre> : oh
10:49 <Shiirn> : ok let's do this
10:49 <Shiirn> : you ok?
10:50 <Lolicore Flandre> : why wouldt i be ._.
10:50 <Shiirn> : might need to go do something or something
10:50 <Shiirn> : idk~
10:50 <Lolicore Flandre> : nope
10:50 <Lolicore Flandre> : im set
10:51 <Shiirn> : this feels more like a blood insane than insane
10:51 <Shiirn> : xD
10:51 <Shiirn> : more flowy
10:51 <Shiirn> : 01:29:613 (5) - remove whistle from this slider and select the start and end individually to put whistle back on
10:51 <Shiirn> : right now you have soft-whistleslide which sounds strange
10:52 <Lolicore Flandre> : fixed
10:53 <Shiirn> : 02:27:723 (1) - remove kiai on the 9, and re-start it at 02:31:266 (1) -
10:53 <Shiirn> : i dislike kiai during spinners, and since the second chorus starts there, another fountain works well
10:54 <Lolicore Flandre> : le poot my mouse sucks
10:54 <Lolicore Flandre> : now from the beginning =3=
10:55 <Shiirn> : x_x
10:55 <Shiirn> : what?
10:55 <Shiirn> : did you dc?
10:55 <Shiirn> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156863
10:55 <Lolicore Flandre> : no mouse clicked twice and it went
10:55 <Lolicore Flandre> : boo]
10:55 <Shiirn> : and that's it actually


Neo's Taiko
remove the sb (this will require moving everything in the .osb to each individual .osu and leaving this diff's .osu without the sb, deleting the osb to avoid double-sb)
shouldn't you use 1.4 sv? poot you bakafire
Crimmi
1,947 posts
Joined June 2009
Crimmi
Modding,CrimmiStyle!!

[HellDawn's Easy]

00:52:998 (3) - New combo?
00:54:888 (1) - ^
01:10:006 (2,3) - It should be like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156891
01:51:581 (x) - Add a note here?

[Normal]

01:45:203 (4) - I don't like how it's overlapping (1).

[Neo's Taiko]

Nothing~

[LoliFlan's Hard]

00:06:463 (5,6) - Align with (3).

[Insane]

Nothing~

This might beat Andrea's version by a long shot, hope to see this ranked.
OzzyOzrock
5,185 posts
Joined August 2010
OzzyOzrock
[HellDawn's Easy]
00:05:281 (3) - Simple tip, when you want to make a symmetric slider, flip it around until the points don't move. Helps.
00:07:644 (1) - Especially when making a really nice slider like this.
00:11:896 (1) - Try not to do table arcs, they look bad lol.

Eh, any other comments would be about symmetry, and how some sliders aren't perfect. But I'm sure you were really aiming for perfection.
Some of the patterns you make circles in look blocky. This is because you used that accursed 0.8 distance snap. Oh well.
[Normal]
02:23:707 (1) - Not distanced right (lol)

Hrrrr... there's nothing really WRONG in the diff, hence why I couldn't find much, but it doesn't feel like it meets up to the standards set by other maps created nowadays.

But maybe I'm crazy.
[Neo's Taiko]
- Make the volume at least 70%
- Probably shouldn't use the 1.50 stuff. Just keep the map at 1.00. It's fine.

00:04:691 (3) - remove
00:12:250 (3) - remove
00:15:203 (12) - You can extend this to 00:16:856
00:17:092 (13) - Then make this a spinner.
00:19:573 (2) - remove
00:19:809 (4) - remove
00:25:951 (2) - remove
00:26:305 (4) - Map through this slider
00:27:840 (6) - remove
00:28:313 (8,9,10) - remove
00:28:785 (9) - remove
Basically that part is sort of overmapped and whatnot lol.

00:30:911 (3,4) - dk, not kd. Plays a lot better
Do this with all of them, as kd kd doesn't even really fit + it plays bad.

Actually, a lot of this map is overmapped, against the song, and plays bad. ;_;
Don't use so many 1/4 patterns, the map almost never calls for it.

This isn't meant to be a hard song, so please don't try to add difficulty.
Also, a tip, try not to use so much dkd and kdk stuff. It's ugly and plays bad.

Not only that, but:
01:41:896 (32) - Unsnapped end
01:43:785 (36) - Also unsnapped
02:36:699 (30) - Same with this
02:51:817 (31) - This as well

Sorry, but orz.
[LoliFlan's Hard]
- Pretty sure that the stacking leniency used here is unrankable.

02:38:825 (1) - Make this not so close to the last notes.
02:52:408 (2,3) - Noo stack these under or something.

Try to anti-jump less, but nice diff.
[Insane]
00:09:651 (2) - The slider that ends above this sort of covers this.
00:56:187 (7) - Remove this and put the note after somewhere else.

Diff is fine. Some stuff is weird, but it's fine, lol. Good luck.
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
[LoliFlan's Hard]
- Pretty sure that the stacking leniency used here is unrankable.
Unrankable Stack Leniencies can't actually even be setted. As the unrankable stack leniencies are 0 and 0.1 (they need to be set by editing the .osu file)
0.2 or more is rankable
OzzyOzrock
5,185 posts
Joined August 2010
OzzyOzrock
Hadn't realized that was added, yay. It's still sort of silly though.
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
Too the fact it's really difficulty to have no stacking in an hard even with 0.2
Barney Stinson
298 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Barney Stinson
Damn, everytime I see that there's a new post there's always a discussion about stacks. xD
DoKito
600 posts
Joined October 2010
DoKito
  • [HellDawn's Easy]

    Resnap All Notes!

    Inherited Points:
  1. 01:01:226 ; 01:02:220 ; 01:34:573 ; 01:41:187 ; 02:29:848 are waste
  2. 01:38:352 should be louder... 25-30%~ It's nearly silenced D:
    _____________

  3. 00:04:336 (1) - Comes too fast after that spinner. Hard for beginners to react.
  4. 00:11:423 (2) - ^
  5. 00:19:455 (1) - ^
  6. 00:28:903 (3) - Insert Break time after that slider maybe?
  7. 00:56:777 (3) - Whistle sounds awful o,o'
  8. 01:19:927 (1) - Too fast after spinner
  9. 01:27:486 (1) - ^
  10. 01:35:045 (1) - ^
  11. 02:01:502 (1) - ^

    [Normal]

    Resnap All Notes!

    Inherited Points:
  12. 01:34:573 ; 01:41:187 are waste
  13. 00:17:919 ; 00:18:982 ; 00:25478 ; 00:27:250 ; 01:42:840 > delete them. Silent sliderreverse is unrankable (yea it's almost silent) and silent sliderend doesn't fit to the music
    _____________

  14. 00:26:069 (2) - Covered by 00:24:651 (3) (sliderend). Isn't that good in a Normal-Diff ;3
  15. 00:30:085 (5) - Insert Break Time after it.

    [LoliFlan's Hard]

    Resnap All Notes!

    Inherited Points:
  16. 00:11:305 ; 01:00:675 are waste
  17. Damn. I'm tired of writing all those timing points! Just fix all these volume < 20% inherited points notably 00:18:864 (it's unrankable)
    _____________

  18. 00:09:533 (5) - Spacing?
  19. 00:15:911 (3,4) - Same spacing than the other beats, but you have to click faster. That's kinda confusing.
  20. 00:17:801 (2,3) - ^
  21. 00:25:360 (3) - Spacing?
  22. 00:25:596 (4) - Remove. Makes no sense to me.
  23. 02:05:163 (1) - 1 tick left would fit more to the music
  24. 02:12:722 (1) - ^

    [Insane]

    Resnap All Notes!

    Inherited Points:
  25. 00:45:911 ; 01:46:384 are waste
  26. Just fix all these volume < 20% inherited points
    _____________

  27. 00:05:991 (2) - 2 grids down
  28. 00:06:462 (3) - 2 grids left
  29. 00:34:101 (8,1) - Switch combos
  30. 00:35:990 (7,1) - ^
  31. 00:36:935 (1,2) - ^
  32. 00:37:880 (4,1) - ^
  33. 00:56:306 (7) - 4 grids~ down, so it's better readable

    Some of your speedups/downs doesn't make any sense to me, but nevermind D:
I'm always scared with that very low volume D: Maybe some of them are rankable, but i just wanna let you know, that some of them aren't. (Blue Night got popped because of one ;<)

I hope i could help. I'm a terrible modder D:
NeoRainier
508 posts
Joined April 2010
NeoRainier

Backfire wrote:

Neo's Taiko - Your slider velocity is 1.2. It should be 1.4. Then fix your sliders and stuff.

Thats all I can say. It looks really good. Plays well. Though, Im not a fan of all these streams, but its cool.
I'm such a derp, generally putting SV to 1.4 is the first thing i do...here it is the fix'd .osu:

Download: Edward Maya Ft. Vika Jigulina - Stereo Love (scalone) [Neo's Taiko].osu
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
DerekMcD
Hello.

~HellDawn's Easy~

00:34:100 (1): That slider bugs me somtimes... Could you replace with few sliders and few notes? So I can fit to the flash. Also, make sure you'll add finish AT the flash...
00:07:644 (1): Fix this slide like this on this pic, look at the differences very carefully.
SPOILER
01:01:029 (1): Move this 8th point (x: 248 y: 276) one grid up.

~LoliFlan's Hard~

01:33:628 (3): Like this one?
SPOILER

Aww....:( You used whistle instwad of finish? Replease Whistle with Finish like all the diffs are...

00:33:392 (5): Add finish...
00:35:281 (6): Add finish at the end of the slider.
00:37:171 (6): Add Finish.
00:39:061 (5): ^
00:40:951 (6): ^
00:42:840 (5): ^

~Insane~

00:11:896 (1): Move one grid left? Because it's better...
00:12:604 (4): ^


That's it.
Thank you and good luck.

Shiro
Global Moderator
4,984 posts
Joined May 2009
Shiro
So, I heard I was supposed to mod this map, but I don't remember promising it at all. Someone bugged the hell out of me into doing it so here.
However, for some reason, when I download the map, I get only two difficulties and they were submitted by scalone (your previous nick).
You might want to check your difficulties and their uploader, then full submit.

Drop me a forum PM (or in-game if I'm online then) when it's fixed so I can actually mod it.
It's fixed ! Here's the promised mod then:

General
  1. You need a background for your maps (should you disable it later for the SB).
  2. Talking about the SB, those white flashes are quite eyeraping, although they don't occur often. I'd suggest to soften them ?
HellDawn's Easy
  1. 00:43:549 (3,4) - It is the first time in the diff this rhythm has occured, and it's quite complicated compared to the other rhythms used in the diff. I'd suggest to unstack these to make the rhythm a bit less hard to play.
  2. 00:57:250 (1) - Claps are on the wrong beat (big white tick and third white tick).
  3. 00:59:140 (2) - Which makes a clap miss here.
  4. 01:01:029 (1) - That's nazi of me, but this slider isn't symmetrical. It makes the first and fourth tick overlap in a ugly way. ><
  5. 01:00:557 (5,1) - To stay consistent in your comboing and with your hitsounding, swap the new combos.
  6. 01:01:029 (1,2,1) - I don't think the "normal-clap-clap" works well here. You only use it twice, and it causes 01:04:336 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this to sound extremely weird (because clap-whistle-normal then normal-whistle-clap which is extremely inconsistent)
  7. 01:10:478 (2,3) - To stay consistent in your hitsounding, reverse the claps.
  8. 02:25:596 (4) - I am concerned about this slider. First, it overlaps itself, which is supposed to be unrankable, but the overlap isn't big and is prefectly playable. I'd have accepted that in a Hard, but this is an Easy, and I'm pretty sure many new players will be thrown off by this slider. You're free to change it or not - I think it'd be better to change, though.
  9. 02:35:518 (2) - Missing clap ?
Normal
  1. 00:24:651 (3) - Do not silence sliderends like that, especially not in a Normal. It's unrankable and extremely confusing.
  2. 00:26:305 (3) - Same.
  3. 00:34:100 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - I think this part could be better, both gameplay-wise and combo-wise. 3/4 rhythms are pretty confusing imo, so I really avdvice to use repeat sliders for them. Combo-wise, it makes more sense with the music to have a new combo every time a 3/4 rhythm starts.
  4. 00:45:911 (1) - This appears too soon after the spinner and is too far from the center of the screen.
LoliFlan's Hard
  1. This is too hard for a Hard, mainly because of the big spacing (and jumps) and 1/4s (which make some rhythms confusing).
Insane
  1. Aesthetically, having 1/4s both compressed and regularly spaced in the diff is rather bad. Just choose one you'll stick to - it will look better.
  2. I'm not a fan of these slow downs at all. All of them surprised me and some even confused me for the coming notes.
Neo's Taiko
  • Looks fine. Kinda confusing to me though. ><
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
You need a background for your maps (should you disable it later for the SB).
i can see it though
00:24:651 (3) - Do not silence sliderends like that, especially not in a Normal. It's unrankable and extremely confusing.
00:26:305 (3) - Same.
Well, it can't be silenced without editing osu file, and he doesn't know how to do it, actually

(scalone, utilizza gli hitsound Normal alla fine di quegli slider, l'hitnormal è simile al suono che c'è li se diminuito)

LoliFlan's Hard

This is too hard for a Hard, mainly because of the big spacing (and jumps) and 1/4s (which make some rhythms confusing).
The only bad jumps is 00:25:360 (3,4) -, other are fine and following music, actually

Insane

Aesthetically, having 1/4s both compressed and regularly spaced in the diff is rather bad. Just choose one you'll stick to - it will look better.
I'm not a fan of these slow downs at all. All of them surprised me and some even confused me for the coming notes.
Well, Aestethically, mixing compressed and normal streams is better if used in a good manner, just too say.
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Louis Cyphre
IRC mod.
SPOILER
01:29 <Barney Stinson> : oh, hi
01:29 <Louis_Cyphre> : hello
01:30 <Barney Stinson> : sorry if I disturb. do u have the chance to mod my map?
01:30 <Louis_Cyphre> : i can do only general modding via irc right now
01:30 <Louis_Cyphre> : if it is okey for, then send me a map
01:31 <Barney Stinson> : yeah, it's ok for me
01:31 *Barney Stinson is listening to (Edward Maya Ft. Vika Jigulina - Stereo Love)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/29553]
01:31 <Barney Stinson> : here is map
01:31 <Barney Stinson> : here you*
01:31 *Louis_Cyphre is listening to (Edward Maya Ft. Vika Jigulina - Stereo Love)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/29553]
01:31 <Louis_Cyphre> : i hate it
01:31 <Louis_Cyphre> : have*
01:31 <Louis_Cyphre> : dX
01:33 <Louis_Cyphre> : Edward Maya Ft. Vika Jigulina --> Edwayd Maya feat. Vika Jigulina
01:33 <Louis_Cyphre> : artist
01:33 <Barney Stinson> : oh
01:33 <Barney Stinson> : ok
01:34 <Louis_Cyphre> : tags
01:34 <Louis_Cyphre> : neo rainier --> neorainier
01:34 <Louis_Cyphre> : http://osu.ppy.sh/u/neorainier
01:35 <Louis_Cyphre> : why you use same images with different names. bg2 and bg2-pulse
01:36 <Barney Stinson> : how do I rename them?
01:36 <Louis_Cyphre> : they are same
01:36 <Louis_Cyphre> : one of them should be useless
01:36 <Louis_Cyphre> : "Thumbs" file
01:36 <Louis_Cyphre> : what is it
01:36 <Louis_Cyphre> : you have 2 similar white images
01:36 <Barney Stinson> : I delete bg2, thumbs and white images?
01:37 <Louis_Cyphre> : wait
01:37 <Louis_Cyphre> : who made SB
01:37 <Barney Stinson> : vivere
01:37 <Louis_Cyphre> : tell vivere that he used same images for SB
01:37 <Louis_Cyphre> : he will fix that
01:37 <Louis_Cyphre> : don't touch anything by yourself
01:38 <Barney Stinson> : okok
01:38 <Louis_Cyphre> : remove "Lolicore" from tags
01:38 <Louis_Cyphre> : lol
01:38 <Barney Stinson> : why?
01:38 <Barney Stinson> : o
01:38 <Barney Stinson> : oh
01:38 <Barney Stinson> : yah
01:38 <Louis_Cyphre> : because it's not lolicore
01:38 <Barney Stinson> : it's lolicore flandre
01:39 <Louis_Cyphre> : and remove flandre too
01:39 <Barney Stinson> : but he made guest diff...
01:39 <Louis_Cyphre> : ah
01:39 <Louis_Cyphre> : then sorry
01:39 <Barney Stinson> : np
01:39 <Louis_Cyphre> : Previously known as SonicXPS2
01:39 <Barney Stinson> : but he made guest diff
01:39 <Louis_Cyphre> : not sure, but i think you also need to add SonicXPS2 to tags
01:40 <Barney Stinson> : when he changed name
01:40 <Louis_Cyphre> : keep him in tags
01:40 <Barney Stinson> : k
01:43 <Louis_Cyphre> : set audio lead in to 2 seconds
01:43 <Louis_Cyphre> : better to 2.5
01:44 <Louis_Cyphre> : general modding done
01:44 <Louis_Cyphre> : i looked through the map
01:44 <Louis_Cyphre> : it needs more moddings
01:44 <Louis_Cyphre> : so ask more persons
01:44 <Louis_Cyphre> : let me post log in the thread
yzhbxiang
71 posts
Joined January 2011
yzhbxiang
Hard:

01:22:998; I think a circle missed here.

01:53:825; How about add this silder?


02:17:447; It's more natural after delete this circle.

02:05:045; Move this circle to 02:05:163 sounds better.

02:12:604; Move this circle to 02:12:722.

02:14:494; Move to 02:14:612.


Insane:

00:07:407; May add a circle here.

01:30:793; The spinner could be divided into two parts, sounds better. One from 01:30:793 to 01:32:447, the other from 01:32:683 to 01:34:573


star~ :)
DarkRingSystem
DarkRingSystem
:)
nice song
little mod~

[Timing]
-10ms I Think

[HellDawn's Easy]
00:44:730 (4) - Do not overcap in EZ diff I suggest
02:27:014 (2) - ^

[Normal]
Fine I think

[LoliFlan's Hard]
Good diff I think it is not hard at all
If you feel still hard try AR-1

[Insane]
If you want map a symmetrical style just try sv 2.56
I just want to say
02:01:029 ~ 02:28:903 make me dizziness X.X

Good luck~ star!!
NeoRainier
508 posts
Joined April 2010
NeoRainier
Oh shi-....i just noticed ozzy's mod, i'll do somethin tomorrow
NeoRainier
508 posts
Joined April 2010
NeoRainier
Legend:
Green = accepted
Orange = considered
Red = not considered

OzzyOzrock wrote:


[b][Neo's Taiko]
- Make the volume at least 70% -> slow parts at 45%, al the rest at 80%
- Probably shouldn't use the 1.50 stuff. Just keep the map at 1.00. It's fine. -> changed x1.50 with x1.25

00:04:691 (3) - remove -> done
00:12:250 (3) - remove -> done
00:15:203 (12) - You can extend this to 00:16:856 -> done
00:17:092 (13) - Then make this a spinner. -> nope
00:19:573 (2) - remove -> done
00:19:809 (4) - remove -> done
00:25:951 (2) - remove -> done
00:26:305 (4) - Map through this slider -> done
00:27:840 (6) - remove -> done
00:28:313 (8,9,10) - remove -> i wanna keep a sort of symmetry with the previous combo (now that it's changed)
00:28:785 (9) - remove -> ^same

00:30:911 (3,4) - dk, not kd. Plays a lot better
Do this with all of them, as kd kd doesn't even really fit + it plays bad. -> edited alternating dk and kd patterns

Actually, a lot of this map is overmapped, against the song, and plays bad. ;_;
Don't use so many 1/4 patterns, the map almost never calls for it. -> i considered this opinion and did a fast check to erase overmapped 3combos

This isn't meant to be a hard song, so please don't try to add difficulty. -> i keep my standards
Also, a tip, try not to use so much dkd and kdk stuff. It's ugly and plays bad. -> i revised a bit, but i left as it was on that starts here 02:01:029 (1) - and ends here 02:27:486 (24) - ; there's always a 3combo which calls the stream
Download: Edward Maya Ft. Vika Jigulina - Stereo Love (scalone) [Neo's Taiko].osu
Hellzero
687 posts
Joined April 2010
Hellzero
Insane
00:31:502 (3) - About sliders like this. You can make them better if start and end be at the same level.
00:39:061 (5) - the same ^
00:27:722 (1,2,3) - can you just to mirror this pattern > 00:25:833 (1,2,3) ?
00:32:210 (1) - You have NC on white tick but then 00:34:336 (1) - red tick. Fix it. (recommend put NC on white ticks)
00:36:935 (1) - remove NC
01:01:266 - remove clap, add whistle
01:02:210 (3) - whistle
01:03:155 (4,8) - ^
01:08:825 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the same ^
01:47:801 (7) - finish?
01:49:691 (7) - ^ 01:51:581 (6) - ^ 01:53:470 (9) -^ 01:55:360 (7) - ^
02:59:376 (6) - NC

LoliFlan's Hard
02:27:014 (7) - NC?
02:59:376 (6) - NC

Normal
00:53:470 (1) - spacing
00:24:651 (3,2) - overlap :< can you avoid this?
01:52:289 - whistle, right?

HellDawn's Easy
00:38:352 (2,3,4,1) - move them to center?
SapphireGhost
osu! Alumni
2,618 posts
Joined June 2010
SapphireGhost
Surprise. It's me.

[General]
- AIBat says that these image files are unused. Either make sure they're being used or delete them and Full Submit. Before you Full Submit, make sure you also delete the two .osb files that are not in use.
- Difficulties should have consistent Audio Lead-In. Set them all to 2000, or possibly 1500, or maybe even 1750. Just make them all the same.
- Disable letterboxing during breaks for [Neo's Taiko].
- It's very highly recommended to use Tick Rate 2 on all difficulties other than [HellDawn's Easy]. Setting Tick Rate 2 on [Easy] causes some ticks to disappear and we don't want that. Anyway, for the other difficulties this will help make the velocity changes more sightreadable, and the sliders are a bit empty at Tick Rate 1. Sliderticks also have the added appeal of recovering some HP during sliders.

[Insane]
00:51:817 (2,3) - Currently, (3) is placed directly under the end of (2), which makes it virtually impossible to see with the Hidden mod. Other than that there aren't really any other noticeable errors here, so good job.

[LoliFlan's Hard]
- The stack leniency is too low on this difficulty. Patterns like 01:11:659 (5,6,1) and 01:14:258 (3,4) don't stack, but they should to make the map more possible to read on Hidden. Either raise the stack leniency to a point where patterns like this stack or manually stack those objects, but you have to do one.
- Also, there are a lot of little overlaps in this difficulty that I could point out but they aren't really that important, so oh well.

[Normal]
00:07:644 (1) - This should probably start 1/2 earlier, where the vocals would imply it starts.
00:30:321 - Small thing, but you should drag the break (on the timeline) to here, as shown in this screenshot. This way, it starts right where the new measure begins which is very somewhat cool.
00:54:415 (3) - There's a slight overlap with the HP bar here that looks sort of ugly, so try to rearrange the pattern a bit.
01:53:470 - I was going to suggest dragging the break to here as well, but it would actually make more sense to just map up to this point, as that's where the measure is and stuff.
02:31:974 (1) - Due to some glitch this note does not have a new combo, so you have to manually apply one.

[HellDawn's Easy]
00:05:281 (3,4,1) - Could you possibly not make (3) and (1) overlap somehow, because currently it looks really odd.
00:11:896 (1) - The slidertick makes this sort of noticeably asymmetrical, and it might look a little prettier if it was perfect.
00:39:770 (1) - This goes into the HP bar quite a bit which is rather non-pretty. So, try to avoid that.
02:06:699 (2) - There's a slight possibility here that a new player might not see the second repeat coming, so perhaps you could change it to two sliders or something along those lines to ease this.
02:12:368 (5) - It makes me a bit sad that the end overlaps with the start slightly, but other than that, this is a good heart. Almost a My Moment heart. <3

Forum PM me for a recheck after all this stuff is fixed and stuff and I'll be able to bubble this assuming nothing goes horribly wrong.
You can do it.

EDIT: After almost two hours of IRC fixes, this is now ready for a bubble. Good job.
Bubbled!
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Normal]

01:28:195 (2,3) - Spacing. That's waaay too close.

[LoliFlan's Hard]

02:36:462 (5,6,7) - I find this pretty confusing. Changing the spacing of (6) and (7) would make it much easier to read.

Here you go.

EDIT: I know you will love me forever for this =P

Ranked~
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
DerekMcD
Congratz!!!! I knew my mod post along with them worked.
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Tenshi-nyan
Clever guys always put the SB in the diffs so that nobody can delete them.

Especially annoying when they're all flashy n shit. Like here.
SapphireGhost
osu! Alumni
2,618 posts
Joined June 2010
SapphireGhost
The storyboarding is difficulty-specific so it doesn't display on the taiko.
It's also possible to delete the images used in the storyboard if you hate it that much.
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
DerekMcD

SapphireGhost wrote:

The storyboarding is difficulty-specific so it doesn't display on the taiko.
It's also possible to delete the images used in the storyboard if you hate it that much.
Wait... We can all delete the pictures from SB if we don't like them?
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
2,858 posts
Joined February 2010
-kevincela-

SapphireGhost wrote:

The storyboarding is difficulty-specific so it doesn't display on the taiko.
It's also possible to delete the images used in the storyboard if you hate it that much.
This.
Also,gratz Barney! :D
Flanster
5,938 posts
Joined August 2010
Flanster
Gratz ;)
Leader
osu! Alumni
1,849 posts
Joined January 2011
Leader
Gratz \:D/
OnosakiHito
osu!taiko Paragon
6,865 posts
Joined March 2010
OnosakiHito
I like the Taiko diff..
But because of SV 1.50 it's invisible in HD-Play.

Anyway, congratulation!
NeoRainier
508 posts
Joined April 2010
NeoRainier
There was a problem with the taikodiff, as the last one (that i attached in my last post) wasn't added due to the mapper's nick change lol....still it isn't bad also the previous version, but as ono said it's un'HDable (and kinda hard to HR)
Mercurial
Mercurial
I'm waiting this map get rank about 6 months ago.

Really Congratz! ♥
Blaziken
611 posts
Joined June 2011
Blaziken
In love with the SB on this map. Good Job ^_^
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