First of all, dont kudosu IRC mods unless you provide proof of what was changed, also split mod posts dont need to be kudosu'd twice.
[General]
Dont use Pure White combo colour, it's blinding during kiai.
Why is "Flandre" in the tags? and if that's the name of the guest mapper then why is "Lolicore" in the tags? aditionally, you forgot to add the tags to all diffs, specially to Normal.
Kiai is unsnapped on all difficulties, also the green timing sections are unsnapepd on [Insane] and [Normal]
[Insane]
01:13:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern would look nicer if it was centered.
02:56:512 (1,2,3,4,5) - This star shape looks really flattened, can you make it better?
[LoliFlan's Hard]
Why this diff doesnt have letterbox in breaks?
00:54:150 (4,5) - This isnt a good place to put a jump and it's very noticeable the spacing problem here during gameplay
01:36:905 (5) - Better be safe and put a NC here.
[Normal]
Please dont use blue ticks here unless extremely necessary those 3/4 time spacing can be quite hard to catch for new players
Dont use slider speed changes on the easiest diff please.
00:36:314 (1,2,3) - Spacing is hard to read =/
00:38:204 (1,2,3) - ^
00:56:275 (3,1) - This is a really bad anti jump, more importantly will be hard for new players to see a note below a slider.
01:11:629 (4,1) - This stacking is really misleading because the player was already hitting at 1/1s then a sudden stack of 3/2 will throw them off.
02:27:929 (1) - Remove NC.
02:52:968 (4,7) - New combo, it's not good to have such a high combo on the easiest difficulty.
[General]
Dont use Pure White combo colour, it's blinding during kiai.
Why is "Flandre" in the tags? and if that's the name of the guest mapper then why is "Lolicore" in the tags? aditionally, you forgot to add the tags to all diffs, specially to Normal.
Kiai is unsnapped on all difficulties, also the green timing sections are unsnapepd on [Insane] and [Normal]
[Insane]
01:13:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern would look nicer if it was centered.
02:56:512 (1,2,3,4,5) - This star shape looks really flattened, can you make it better?
[LoliFlan's Hard]
Why this diff doesnt have letterbox in breaks?
00:54:150 (4,5) - This isnt a good place to put a jump and it's very noticeable the spacing problem here during gameplay
01:36:905 (5) - Better be safe and put a NC here.
[Normal]
Please dont use blue ticks here unless extremely necessary those 3/4 time spacing can be quite hard to catch for new players
Dont use slider speed changes on the easiest diff please.
00:36:314 (1,2,3) - Spacing is hard to read =/
00:38:204 (1,2,3) - ^
00:56:275 (3,1) - This is a really bad anti jump, more importantly will be hard for new players to see a note below a slider.
01:11:629 (4,1) - This stacking is really misleading because the player was already hitting at 1/1s then a sudden stack of 3/2 will throw them off.
02:27:929 (1) - Remove NC.
02:52:968 (4,7) - New combo, it's not good to have such a high combo on the easiest difficulty.