[General]
remove letterbox during break
Let kiai time identical
[Normal]
00:07:644 (1) - I think you have start at 00:07:407 - is better :3
00:22:762 (1) - ^ at 00:22:525 - is better :3
00:39:061 (3,1) - spacing~ (I think it's easiest diff for your map)
00:43:549 (1,1) - too far spacing and to close timing for easiest diff~~
01:46:384 (2) - remove whistle
01:48:273 (2) - ^
02:08:588 (1,2) - stack
[LoliFlan's Hard]
00:29:140 (4,2) - stack~
00:33:628 (6) - remove this rhytem~
00:47:802 (1,1) - stack~ and I think you need move 00:48:983 (5) -
01:22:998 - this way don't put rhythm [IMO]
01:43:550 (4) - down 1 grid (size 4 )
02:17:565 (7,2) - stack
02:24:180 (3,4,1) - uneven spacing
02:50:872 (3,1) - why don't regular those
[Insane]
00:35:281 (6,7,1) - too close. really
00:55:243 (7) - newcombo(NC)
01:03:628 (5) - whistle
01:11:187 (6) - whistle
01:29:258 (8,9) - too close... and uneven spacing
01:45:676 (4,5,6) - too close...
01:52:998 (6,3) - stack (If you stack it. you need regular those 01:53:943 (1,3,5,7) - ~)
02:07:644 (3,4,5) - too close...
02:16:384 (2,3,4) - ^
02:26:542 (11,12,13) - right 1 grid (size 4 )
02:33:156 (10) - up 1 grid (size 4 )
LKs wrote:
you are skilled enough to make rankable and playable maps so far
but still a great many thing you need to learn, before you become an elite mapper
i mean, make maps with more imagination and dynamic
LKs say's right
your skill really enough to make rankable ...
you can consult for osuplayer111's
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